So the siblings finally have a chance to plot ... if only they had trusted each other before.
Though they are not really trusting each other here, at least they are talking!
I do hope something good happens for Agnes. She is a better daughter than Foulques deserves at this point.
She is a good daughter. I imagine her as feeling a loyalty to him over her bastard daughter but also feeling the obligation after her mother's passing. I can't say what her ending will be - but she'll have good moments in the future.
Oh my, Geoffrey seems less naive than i thought, maybe it's because Foulques is just too proud in front of his son?
Geoffrey is naive in some areas, but not all. And he is learning. That said, Geoffrey's plan isn't his own. If you remember from 10 chapters ago:
Geoffrey nodded, a smirk forming on his face before sipping some wine. “I see. You hope my father will press your claims.”
Aines smiled. “He would do me more than I deserve if he did so. No, I think he will have no need to. My brother is not popular among those within those duchies.”
“He has poor regents?” Geoffrey asked.
“Yes, and my father spoiled him,” Aines said. “So already he is whiny, selfish and gluttonous. Not becoming of a lord. In time, I have no doubt the nobility will seek another option.”
“And they would select you?” Geoffrey asked.
“I do not see why not,” Aines said. “If they seek to cast off Alberic, why would you not turn to the wife of one of the realm’s most powerful duke? I can provide them aid, should it be required.”
Geoffrey's "plan" is literally his late stepmother's. He stole it from her. I don't know that Aines could have pulled it off, given she's a woman in a Medieval world. But Geoffrey is not bound by that limitation (nor sense of shame, in this case).
Poor Alberic. Paranoid enough to fear for the kingdom, but not for his own titles. Geoffrey might turn out to pair his ambition with opportunism - unlike his father, who paired it with his martial strength.
That Alberic is Norman now doesn't help, given the Angevin history with their northern neighbours - and his vassals. Though it is better than Avar.
Alberic is... sort of fearful of his titles. There's a reason he talks so poorly of Geoffrey here. But he's also spoiled and used to getting his way, so he likely thinks somehow, these troublemakers will be put in their place. He also likely believes there's no way Foulques will turn down this union - I mean, he's a catch! - which should end Geoffrey's machinations.
Alberic's culture is a weird thing. The Norman one makes sense because of his mother, but Avar? I have no idea how he ended up with that.
In the biblical sense no doubt. He leaves people feeling uneasy having never said anything at all. I feel his vassals probably hate him.
Oh, so they do hate him. And the young man surprises me with his plan, in that it is a good one. I think Foulques might actually go for this, after a very loud argument, and might even find himself proud of his son for going after his own duchy rather than waiting for his dad to die. The Duke would also stand to gain much from this, as would the family as a whole. If they seize the entire west coast of France and control the two largest duchies...well, the King will both be unhappy and have his hands tied. He will need them then, and if he does secure their support he will stay king. Essentially, the family will be kingmakers of France for as long as they hold both duchies like that, if they succeed.
I like this plan. It's daring and really could work in CKII. Not sure about OTL but that's by the by. You have to write what happens after all.
So...Anjou, Aquitaine and possibly (as it has been for years) Brittany as well. Taking the strongest duchy in the kingdom and potentially tripling its size and prestige...well, that's pretty damn good. Especially as both father and son can benefit and keep it tied to one person through inheritance if they work together. Pride might cause them to rub and argue but I think they'll make it work. Looking forward to it.
I went back over this chapter about five times just trying to get Alberic to give off that feeling you give off here. Not mustache twirling evil, but generally smarmy and dislikable.
You have a good read on the situation in that there's plenty for Foulques to like about this plan. However, for a man who very much considers himself the master of his duchy, he also has reasons not to like it. And a large part of this plan involves Geoffrey using his father without his consent, as Agnes points out. You have already guessed how that will go over...
But those rewards you mentioned. They are very real, if they can make them come to pass. And very tempting.
interesting! snakes in the House d'Anjou! those little ungrateful bastards!
Oh yeah. I wonder who will feet more used - Foulques by his son or Alberic for the idea that his father helped the Angevins get where they are, only for this to happen!
An interesting situation where now both siblings have some chance for rule in Aquitaine. While at the end of the post, they seem to discuss joining minds on the subject, it may not stay that way. Agnes will have far more influence as Duchess, if Alberic can keep it. And Geoffrey's plan may be too bold by half.
She might. I think if she were Aines, who was ambitious, she would have and sold Geoffrey out immediately to gain favor. But Agnes is content - she likes where she is. She would not refuse to go, but I think she would certainly entertain reasons why she might stay. Of course, she may not find the reasons compelling enough.
A Geoffrey for Aquitaine faction! This could be great news for the dynasty but perhaps more problematic for Foulques in that it would create a powerful rival who stands to inherit his stuff.
I'd be quite torn with the two characters being my current character and my future one. Though I did once make my rival genius heir my spymaster with the intent of hastening the succession. Foulques can't change his succession law again and can't plot to murder Geoffrey, either so I guess he has to get behind him and the ambition that he did stoke afterall.
Also - that's Peronelle as Alberic's heir presumptive, isn't it? Ineresting.
The end game to this is the most powerful man in France and possibly one of the strongest in Western Europe. But Geoffrey is a long way from end game and his path there is anything but assured. Which can make it more problematic for Foulques because not only would he have an ambitious son as his heir, he likely will have to support Geoffrey in his endeavors - and it's clear here Geoffrey knows that.
Yes, Peronelle is the heir presumptive, which is interesting because Aines' son is, by game terms, legitimate, regardless of whether Geoffrey questions him here. But he was bypassed for Peronelle. I don't know why exactly he was skipped over, but I guess since Aines is dead, he loses out. (I believe he's 4th- all three of Alberic's remaining sisters, then little Adhemar). Also of note - it's Gavelkind! So while Alberic got Aquitaine, Poitou and Gascony, the duchies would be split between Peronelle, Filipa and Patricia at the moment.
Geoffrey is proving to be very ambitious. I was thinking he was going to do something to his father. Now his sister is scheming. A very interesting family. Starting to remind me of Peter O'Toole, Katharine Hepburn, and Anthony Hopkins.
While he's not scheming to get rid of his father, he's certainly planning on using him. In a way, this plan is grander. Steal Aquitaine through others, then eventually inherit Anjou. He takes little risk and potentially gains both duchies. The trade off is less control, of course.
And this is the right family for that, even if we are 100 years early... with the wrong Philippe.
I really like how you write about the characters and not just how your realm is. In my opinion it makes this AAR much more interesting.
Thanks! Glad you enjoy it! It can be hard to balance what's going on in the realm vs. being lost in various plots of the characters (especially when Foulques is only tangentially involved). Part of the reason I liked how this chapter came out was because I thought it weaved the events of the realm and the events of these two duchies together well.
And narrative AARs are what I prefer as well. The game provides us with pretty good characters and situations already. It adds a nice base to pretty up.
My gameplay sense on vanilla is a bit foggy, would it not be possible for Folques to help the rebellion once its underway? Would be a calculated risk, but I think it might be within the realm of plausability according to his character.
Not 100 percent certain on whether you can help rebellions in all cases, but I certainly have aided some before. And Foulques will be playing a direct hand in influencing the success/failure of a few conflicts in the future with Angevin forces - but can't say which right now.
Unstated through all this, but overshadowing how it will undoubtedly unfold, is how King Philippe will respond to this if and when he finds out about Geoffrey's power play.
As I've pointed out before, with the delicate balancing act he's been playing, the King will undoubtedly see the concentration of power in the western coast in one dynasty as a grave threat to his own stability precisely for many of the reasons @TheButterflyComposer has mentioned. On top of that, for all his flaws Alberic is an avowed loyalist, while Foulques's loyalties can reasonably be called into question given his ambitions. If Philippe gets wind if what's going on -- whether Geoffrey actively colludes with his father or not -- he'd be a fool not to find some way to break this faction before it gathers too much momentum.
Philippe would be wise to do this, lest he end up in the situation his grandson in OTL ended up in with Henry II. But much like Louis VII, that may not be easy, for reasons that will become apparent in the next chapter. That said, you bring up good reasons why Foulques might be livid, rather than pleased, over his son's scheming. Geoffrey's plans do not just risk tarnishing his name, but that of the whole family.
I'm not sure Phillipe is in a position to do anything about it regardless. He's got enough trouble with his other direct vassals and there isn't much he can do about a rebellion in one of his sub-realms. If he tries to move on Geoffrey or Foulques after the fact there is little doubt that the other Dukes would not tolerate it.
Assuming the Geoffrey for Aquitane faction has the numbers it seems like a pretty solid plan to me.
*nods* I don't want to give much away due to spoilers, but you have a very good read on why Philippe is in a difficult spot in curtailing Geoffrey. Of course, there are other means to slow a potential Angevin domination of the western half of France.
A few pages in, and there is already heaps of solid characterisation and sharp dialogue, deserving of the praise this AAR has accumulated. I will most definitely finish reading the rest.
As an aside, I couldn't help but laugh out loud when I saw just whom had succeeded to the English throne in Chapter 20.
Thanks! Glad to have you on board and I'm happy you are enjoying it! Take your time - it is a lot to read!
And yes, I did enjoy the English succession. And I am enjoying it once more where I am in my game currently. I've tried to keep it sort of close to the actual history in terms of meddling with the English succession, but you may be seeing it in the future.
The next update follows tomorrow. It may be my shortest chapter in some time, but it is a big one in terms of the story anyway. Hope you all enjoy it.
As always thanks for all the comments, feedback and questions! You guys always keep me thinking, and making sure I'm approaching the story from different angles - more than I would have if I were the only one reading it!
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