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Greetings interstellar warlords!

I am Macavity116, author of the Stormbreaker Universe. For the second time this year, I want to share a story based on one highly specific aspect of Stellaris.

Planetary battles get very little attention in-game. They last for months, if not years. There are no event chains tied to them. The army types are limited and sometimes seem like little more than flavor text. Aside from the sudden demise of a General, not much in the way of memorable action actually happens in-game when armies are fighting on the surface.

This AAR will focus on planetary combat, with particular emphasis on the flashpoint of war. A flashpoint is a place where, due to ongoing tensions, a large-scale war is very likely to break out. We will follow the actions of two soldiers who were at the flashpoint during the very moment all hell breaks loose.

In true Macavity116 fashion, I will lean heavily on real military history to create the events of this story. Any parallels or implied reference to real-world events you may find in this story are most likely intentional. I will also be relying on my own military experience as well, along with that of soldiers I've served with.

Welcome to the sequel to Grand Theft Stellaris... To the events prophesied in Cali D'Kara's backstory... Welcome to:

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Background: The Protagonists
This story will follow two protagonists.

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Name: Cali D’Kara

Service/Rank: Interstellar Security Assistance Force/Captain

Age: 25 Galactic Standard Years

Sex/Gender: F/F

Height: 1.61 meters

Weight: 68.9 kilograms
Hair: Black (Dyed Purple)Eyes: Hazel
Date of Birth: Stardate 2233.06.30Birthplace: Rattia, Alaria
Mother: Aris D’KaraFather: Rin D’Kara
Home on Record: Persepolis, ArcadiaOccupation: Peacekeeper
Work experience: Ship’s engineer, Imperial Navy (2 years)Military Career: Joined Imperial Navy at age 18, participated in the theft of the Flagship Stellaris. Joined AAF and was assigned to the ISAF peacekeeping force in 2257. Currently stationed on Concorde.
Education: Completed primary and secondary education in accordance with Holy Fevarian Empire standards. Tertiary education completed at the Imperial Military Academy on the Throneworld.Specialty: Cyberwarfare specialist, remote hacker, drone operator
Known Hobbies: shipbreaking, electronic music, programming, flying drones, akilini (Alari outdoor sport)Criminal Record: Wanted for treason in the Galactic Imperium. Arrest warrents have been issued by the Imperium and are totally ignored by both the State of Alaria and INTO.
Additional Remarks: Married to Dak J’Bassim, communications officer currently stationed at ISAF Headquarters on Concorde. Her body is modified with nanotech, granting her the ability to interface with computers via mental thoughts. Cali is also able to command and control nanobots outside of her own body at short distances.



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Name: Moka J’Bassim

Service/Rank: Alari Armed Forces/Private First Class

Age: 20 Galactic Standard Years

Sex/Gender: F/F

Height: 1.58 meters

Weight: 59.8 kilograms
Hair: Brown (Dyed Silver)Eyes: Green
Date of Birth: Stardate 2238.09.11Birthplace: Varnala, Alaria
Mother: Irun J’BassimFather: Far J’Bassim
Home on Record: Varnala, AlariaOccupation: Peacekeeper
Work experience: Alari Presidium (3 weeks)Military Career: Joined Alari Armed Forces while underage (parental waiver) assigned to peacekeeping mission at personal request
Education: Completed primary and secondary education in accordance with Holy Fevarian Empire standards. Tertiary education completed at AAF Basic Combat Training.Specialty: Military Police
Known Hobbies: dance parties, electronic music, hairstyling, akilini, (Alari outdoor sport)Criminal Record: no known record
Additional Remarks: Very briefly served as a member of the Alari Presidium during the Manifesti Revolution. This makes Moka a former ruler of the State of Alaria. She is known to be under some level of observation by the post-revolutionary government.
 
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Prologue #1: F.N.G.
What's this? A multi-part prologue? Yes, dear readers. The prologue ended up being so long it had to be broken into multiple parts. This story requires a lot of setup.

Welcome to the story. Gather your popcorn. The war will begin once the prologue is concluded.



Prologue #1: F.N.G.

Lt. Cali D’Kara
Interstellar Security Assistance Force
Fort Shiroyama, Arcadia
Stardate 2257.09.30, 06:30hours (Six months before the Year of Hell)



Cali D’Kara had been serving as a peacekeeper longer than anyone else. She was passionate about her work because she was passionate about Arcadia. When she was younger, she spent time here. She got to see this world when it was peaceful and happy, and she desperately wanted to help Arcadia get back to those days. So, at the first opportunity, Cali joined the Alari Armed Forces, demanding that she be transferred to the peacekeeping mission.

Four years later, Cali was a Lieutenant in the AAF and one of the more respected Peacekeepers, doing her best for the planet she loved. This morning, Cali was standing at a firing range on a Human military base, waiting for her students to arrive. Two more Alari soldiers were nearby. Pol T’Talok and Vir B’Scul were young Alari men who often helped Cali run these classes. Pol was setting up the rifle range, making sure the pop-up targets were functioning as intended. Vir was in the tower, watching everything.

A beeping noise caused Cali to reach for her digital phone.

“Lieutenant D’Kara here.” Cali answered.

“Good morning to you.” Said a familiar voice. “I just arrived in Tianjin.”

This voice belonged to Cali’s husband, Dak J’Bassim. He too was a peacekeeper.

“Listen, Cali. I need you to do me a favor.” Dak said over the phone. “There’s a new girl joining your team today. HQ just told me.”

“Should I be worried?” Cali asked.

“Well… that’s the thing.” Dak said. “Listen, the new girl joining your team is… she’s my younger sister. Moka. Do you remember her?”

Cali froze up.

“I do.” She replied. “Moka showed up at, like, the tail end of that adventure we had years ago, right? Isn’t she a kid?”

“She joined the AAF as soon as she was old enough to get my parents to sign the waiver.” Dak said. “I’m really sorry for not telling you. I didn’t think it was going to come to this. I tried to talk her out of it… but… here we are. Moka really wants to be a peacekeeper. She idolizes you, Cali.”

“I remember that.” Cali said, starting to sweat. “I was flattered, but this might be going too far.”

“My thoughts exactly.” Dak replied. “Could you talk to her? See if you can get Moka to quit the military and go home. I don’t want her to be here, and I think you feel the same. If you can’t talk her out of this, then scare her straight, alright?”

“You’re right, we do agree.” Cali said. “I’ll see if I can put the fear of war in her.”



About half an hour later, a convoy of military trucks arrived at the firing range. Ten Humans, dressed in powered exoskeletons and carrying rifles, dismounted and moved to the range. An Alari woman jumped out of the truck and made a beeline for Cali.

Moka J’Bassim was five years younger than Cali. She looked not a day over twenty, the age where Alari become adults. Short and scrawny, Moka could have been mistaken for an underweight boy if she let her hair down. Two details made Moka stand apart from the Humans: Her hair was dyed silver, as nearly all Alari women preferred to dye their hair. Additionally, Moka, and all Alari for that matter, had sharply pointed ears that Humans affectionately referred to as “elf ears.” Most Alari did not appreciate being compared to mythological creatures, and some had gotten into the habit of wearing headgear that covered their ears while on Arcadia. Moka was not doing this.

“Aunt Cali!” Moka greeted Cali cheerfully! “I’m so happy to see you!”

“I’m not your aunt, I’m your sister-in-law.” Cali admonished her. “And comport yourself, you’re a…”

Cali quickly leaned in to look at the rank insignia pinned to Moka’s chest. Then she resumed:

“You’re a Private First Class in the AAF now, and I’m your superior officer. Behave!”

Moka snapped to attention.

“Listen, you and I are going to have a conversation later.” Cali said to her. “I’m not too sure how I feel about you joining up and my husband, your brother, feels the same. Right now, you’re going to help me run this class. Pay attention and do as I say, understood?”

“Yes ma’am!” Moka said. “And thanks for letting me take the opportunity. I’ve always wanted to be part of something like this.”

Cali ordered Moka to collect a rifle and some ammunition from the tower. Meanwhile, she beckoned the Human soldiers to approach.

“Alright, good morning everyone.” Cali said. “My name is Lieutenant D’Kara, Interstellar Security Assistance Force. The Corporal to my right is T’Talok and the Corporal in the tower is B’Scul. The F.N.G. scurrying around behind you is J’Bassim. If you’re here right now, it means you can’t shoot a brick wall at ten yards! Welcome to the ‘guns for dummies’ class. Sit down. You’re gonna be here all day.”

Cali had already come up with a twofold plan. She was going to educate these Humans and also give Moka the big humiliating first day on the job nearly all professional soldiers went through. The girl looked like she was fresh out of Basic Training. If Moka was forced to embarrass herself in front of a group like this, she’d be left with a bad first impression of military life. Cali rounded on her sister-in-law.

“Private J’Bassim. Show the locals how its done. Post up on the firing line and start shooting targets.”

Pol and Vir looked up and down the rifle range, making sure it was safe to start shooting. They gave Cali a positive signal and Moka got to work. To Cali’s surprise, Moka proved to be a competent marksman. Moka grabbed one of the portable shields from the base of the tower, deployed it, and then knelt behind it, perching her rifle on top of the shield. Moka’s gauss rifle made loud snapping noises as she dropped targets at 50 meters, 100 meters, 200, and finally at 300 meters.

Shaking off her sudden onset of disbelief, Cali started to teach the class:

“Look at PFC J’Bassim’s stance. She’s posted behind cover, making it harder for the enemy to hit her. Now look at the targets. See how she’s aiming for center mass? Your enemy’s torso presents a bigger target than their head, and if you get hit in the chest by something like a gauss round or a plasma bolt, it will be equally as lethal as if you shot them in the head. Don’t get greedy, don’t try to be a movie hero. Kill the enemy quickly before they kill you.”

One of the Humans raised his hand and pointed at the targets, which were shaped like soldiers of the Galactic Imperium.

“Fevarian targets! Really!?”

“I’m so sorry.” Pol sneered. “Were you guys training to fight someone else?”

“You can’t hit anything anyway, so the Fevarians won’t mind.” Vir added, laughing.

Cali raised her voice, silencing her two subordinates.

“You Humans aren’t hitting anything because you’re not using your weapons properly. Last week, when we had that big firefight against the gangs in Persepolis, I saw a lot of you just shooting from the hip. Not even bothering to aim. You know your weapons have sights, don’t you? J’Bassim! Peg that 500-meter target in the head!”

Cali smirked a little. No fresh-faced recruit could-

The thought never finished crossing her mind. Moka pushed the portable shield aside and dropped into to the prone firing positon. Then she aimed down the sights and fired twice, striking the dummy Fevarian once in the head and once in the neck. Vir let out a low whistle.

“Hey Lieutenant, is she single?” Vir said.

Cali smacked the back of Vir’s head, and then did the same for one of the Humans, who had been staring at Moka’s rear this whole time.

“Pay attention!” Cali said. “If you could stay calm and keep your head in a crisis, then maybe you could hit targets like she does!”

Internally, Cali swore to herself. She just made Moka look good without intending to. No matter, it was a good excuse for one more lesson. Cali ordered Moka to cease fire and stand up. Cali walked back to the tower and came back with two long belts of ammunition, the type meant to be used in heavy machine guns. She draped both ammo belts over Moka’s shoulders.

“Knowing the basic fundamentals of marksmanship will get you to pass my class.” Cali said. “But it’s not enough out there in a real firefight. J’Bassim, start running laps around the tower.”

“What!?” Moka gasped. “Wearing all this extra gear?”

“RUN!” Cali barked.

Clutching tightly at her rifle and ammo belts, Moka started running around the range tower, huffing and puffing as she went.

“Real combat is nothing like this simple class.” Cali explained. “Those first few minutes after the adrenaline wears off will be the longest minutes of your life, and probably your last as well. Know yourself, know your limits.”

Moka came tearing around the tower again, running as fast as she could while weighted down.

“Look at the F.N.G.” Cali said. “She’s out of breath, practically wheezing. There’s sweat dripping into her eyes, she’s got a stitch in her side, she can’t see or run straight. She probably can’t even think right now! You know who does not care in the slightest about those things? Your enemy! J’BASSIM! HIT THE DIRT AND SHOOT THE TARGETS!”

Screaming from the exertion, Moka threw herself onto the firing line and started to open fire on the simulated Fevarians. All of her shots went wide, kicking up clods of dirt. Moka’s gun fell silent and made clicking noises.

“Reload!” Cali shouted.

Moka fumbled with her weapon and a spare magazine. Cali walked over to her position.

“Reload!” Cali shouted again.

Moka tried to jam her magazine into the well and charge the gauss rifle. It made a dull clicking sound and the magazine fell out. Cali drew a plasma pistol from her holster, pointed it downrange and started shooting targets. The noise of the sudden gunfire caused Moka to jump with fright. The Human soldiers gathered around to watch.

“Faster!” Cali yelled. “The insurgents aren’t gonna wait for you to reload! Faster!”

Finally, Moka managed to get her magazine to stay in the rifle. She raised her weapon and pointed it downrange before pulling the trigger. The gauss rifle made a deep thudding sound and did not fire. Several of the Humans sniggered. Pol and Vir held their sides, trying to hold in their laughter. Cali put her pistol on the ground and knelt down next to Moka.

“So… why isn’t your gun working, Private?”

Moka suddenly became very aware of everybody staring at her. She looked down at her rifle, stared at it for a moment, and then pulled the magazine out of the well. In her haste, Moka had inserted the magazine backwards. All of the gauss slugs were facing toward herself.

“Oh…” Moka squeaked. Then she looked away, trying to hide her face.

Cali addressed the Humans.

“This class is only meant to teach you the bare basics.” She said. “When you’re faced with the real thing, real war and battle, all of your books and lectures and simulations will only get you so far. You need discipline and presence of mind to stay in control of yourself and your weapon once the situation goes off the rails… and I assure you, it will. Combat is not binary; it is not cut-and-dry. It is uncontrolled chaos from the word go and the only difference between life and death is you, your weapon, and whatever’s going on in your head.”



Finally, Cali showed some mercy on Moka. While Vir and Pol drilled the Human soldiers, Cali pulled Moka aside to talk.

“Wait, I know what you’re going to say.” Moka interrupted.

“If you knew we wouldn’t approve, then why’d you join up?” Cali said, raising an eyebrow.

Moka looked around, making sure no one else was looking. Then she hugged Cali very quickly before letting go.

“You and Dak are my heroes.” Moka said. “You get to go on these awesome adventures and do good things for people and I wanna be like you. I want that same exciting life! Please, Cali! I know this is going to be, like, rough and difficult. But please just let me have a chance! Please. Just a chance.”

Cali groaned.

“Fine, you can stay for now.” She said. “But you stay close to me at all times, got it?”

Moka raised one arm in salute.

“Yes ma’am! I won’t let you down!”
 
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Oh poor Cali, she has just unwitingly acquired a new sidequick. Though a very useful sidequick, if her marksmanship is any indication of the kind of soldier Moka'll become. Cali also seems to have fully embraced her inner drill seargent, four years on arcadia have definitely changed her.

Those human soldiers don't appear too eager to receive orders and training, nor to shoot fevarians. Cracks may be already, if only faintly, apppearing amongst Alarian peacekeepers and human soldiers.
 
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It's always great to see you starting a new story!
 
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Oh no, now I need to hurry to complete my reading of Grand Theft Stellaris! :D
 
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Oh poor Cali, she has just unwitingly acquired a new [sidekick.]
Moka's tendency to seek out adventure is going to cause quite a lot of action in this story. Hopefully she doesn't irritate Cali too much.

Cali also seems to have fully embraced her inner drill seargent, four years on arcadia have definitely changed her.
Cali had certainly left some of her youthful naiveté in the past. Helping the Humans rebuild their society over the past four years has hardened her. Especially the task of rebuilding the Arcadia Self Defense Force. As it currently stands, the ASDF is a poorly trained unprofessional force, just barely more than a militia and prone to corruption. She's got her work cut out for her.

Unfortunately, Alaria has not made her task easy. The Alari Armed Forces are suffering from the very same mistake that was made by the real-world armies of the Russian Empire and Soviet Union: The Alari Armed Forces do not have a corps of Non-Commissioned Officers. There are no Drill Sergeants, Staff Sergeants, Tech Sergeants, Gunnery Sergeants, or Master Sergeants. Alaria doesn't even have a Command Sergeant Major. AAF Officers (Lieutenants, Captains, Majors, and Colonels) are expected to handle the task of training and leading troops in the field. They are overworked and stretched thin.

If one such officer is killed or wounded in the field, entire units of Alari troops can be rendered combat ineffective.

Those human soldiers don't appear too eager to receive orders and training, nor to shoot fevarians. Cracks may be already, if only faintly, apppearing amongst Alarian peacekeepers and human soldiers.
As you'll see in a future chapter, the unprofessional ASDF has a very serious problem regarding internal discipline. Abuse of power is a very serious problem. And yes, you caught that little detail. ASDF troops are already starting to show, just a little, their positive attitudes toward the Galactic Imperium.

It's always great to see you starting a new story!
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Welcome aboard! I hope you enjoy!

Oh no, now I need to hurry to complete my reading of Grand Theft Stellaris! :D
Lucky for you GTS is not that long, although the ending is kinda trippy.
 
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Cali's plan backfired spectacularly, and it was great.

It's always nice to see a new @Macavity116 AAR!
 
Prologue #2: First Impressions
We are still doing setup for the main story, so if you've got questions, now is the time.


Prologue #2: First Impressions

PFC Moka J’Bassim
Alari Armed Forces
Fort Shiroyama, Arcadia
Stardate 2257.12.30, 08:00hours (Three months before the Year of Hell)


A day without adventure, excitement, or action was a day wasted. This thought passed through Moka J’Bassim’s mind frequently. Each morning, when she woke up in the barracks, Moka double-checked her notebook, looking at the list of “military life experiences” she wanted to have. The list included action movie tropes like:

  • Kill someone in battle
  • Get into a running gunfight while chasing someone
  • Be dropped into a war zone via hovercraft (happened on Stardate 2257.10.14)
  • Be extracted from a war zone via starship
  • Shoot the head off a battle droid
  • Cut a door open with a plasma sword
  • Breach and storm a building with explosives
  • Assassinate an enemy officer with a sniper rifle
  • Ambush the enemy with an explosive booby trap
  • Destroy a building with a rocket-propelled grenade
  • Destroy a tank with a rocket-propelled grenade
  • Rappel down a wall and smash through a window
Moka’s to-do list consisted of more than desires for violence and fighting. She wanted to do just about anything that would make her heart race. Doubly so if her fight-or-flight response was triggered. So a few other items on her list included:
  • Drive one of the armored cars over 300 kilometers per hour
  • Sleep with someone from another species
  • Fly a hovercraft or gunship just over the ground at high speed
  • Climb the tallest mountain on Arcadia
  • Jetpack off the tallest mountain on Arcadia
  • Full contact sparring with a Lithoid
  • Walk on one of the Nemmas off the coast
  • Participate in one of the local holiday festivals (Halloween rules!)
  • Participate in one of the local sporting events
After three months on Arcadia, Moka had only checked off two of the items on her long list. She felt an overwhelming fear of “missing out.” All of the interesting parts of the Arcadia conflict seem to have happened long before she got there.

Moka dressed in her fatigues and departed the Alari barracks. The base had six barracks, one for each species participating in the peacekeeping mission. From the Alari building, Moka walked to HQ, making sure to pass by the Scyldari building. There were some very handsome soldiers living there, and Moka always made a point of saying hello if she saw them.



Moka entered the HQ building and reported for duty. Her aunt Cali D’Kara, an officer, was here. Cali was responsible for training and advising the Human military, and Moka was her administrative assistant.

“Good morning ma’am.” Moka said, greeting Cali respectfully. “What’s on the agenda today?”

“A surprise visit.” Cali complained from her office. “I just got word that a Scyldari Commander is on his way here. He says he wants to observe our next field mission.”

“Well, he’d better settle in.” Moka joked. “We don’t get to choose when those missions happen. We only roll out if the Humans need help with something.”

“Precisely.” Cali said. “Keep your gear close, anyway. If he gets pushy, I’ll have to invent a field mission for us to go on just to show off.”

“In that case… why don’t we double-check the bridge that just got rebuilt?” Moka offered. “The one near Persepolis?”

Persepolis is a bustling metropolis that serves as the new seat of Arcadia’s government. Fort Shiroyama is located about fifty kilometers away from the Human Capitol.

Cali furrowed her brow in thought.

“You know what? That’s a good idea. I did see reports of anti-government insurgents operating around there.”

The office door opened and another soldier came in. He declared in a bombastic voice:

“No way, no freakin’ way! Did I just hear Cali D’Kara agree with Moka J’Bassim about something?”

It was an Alari man named Mak B’Than. He was a Political Warfare Officer. Unique to the AAF, Political Officers were charged with two specific duties: ensure Alari soldiers upheld political ideology of the Post-Revolutionary Government, and conduct Psychological Warfare against enemy forces. Humans would refer to soldiers like him with the term “commissar.”

Mak knew that Moka was (very briefly) a big player in the Manifesti Revolution years ago and kept an eye on her because of it. He raised an eyebrow at the two women.

“D’Kara, I thought you were trying to get rid of this girl.”

“She is.” Moka replied casually.

“I am.” Cali replied casually.

“So why is she still here?” Said the Commissar. “You’re a Lieutenant, D’Kara. Heck, it looks like you'll be a Captain soon. Can’t you just file the paperwork to get her thrown out of the military?”

“Can’t.” Cali and Moka said together.

“J’Bassim is competent.” Cali grumbled. “She does her duties, gets all of her work done, and passes every training event on the first try. She’s a team player, too. Fact is, she’s a good soldier, and the AAF is a meritocracy. Every rule and regulation says I should be rewarding her, not drumming her out. The only thing I can do is the occasional counseling for her immature attitude.”

“Well, maybe if you stopped calling me a kid…” Moka said in a singsong voice.

“You are a kid!” Cali snapped. “You’re not even old enough to drink or vote!”

“I’ll be old enough to do both next year!” Moka protested. “Besides, I already do lots of adult things. I paid taxes for the first time last year.”

Moka and Cali tried to glare at one another, but slowly they started to smile; the same kind of smile family members give after mild teasing. Commissar B’Than rolled his eyes.

“Well, just make sure she stays on her best behavior.” He said. “I heard some more info about our visitor. His name is Commander Sarim den Iridar, from SOC Group 15.”

Cali swore. Moka looked at her.

“Scyldari Special Operations.” Cali explained. “Real black ops bullshit. Deniable missions, top secret work the public never hears about.”

“Iridar wants to recruit a soldier from the Peacekeeping team for some special mission.” B’Than said. “He’s got his eye on some hotshot kid in second squad.”

Moka’s heart rate quickened.

“Just the one soldier? No one else?” Moka asked hopefully.

“He’s not interested in you, Private.” B’Than said. “I doubt you even know the full extent of our own mission.”

“No! Stop!” Cali groaned, but it was too late.

Rising to the challenge, Moka puffed out her chest and started to speak:

“Authorized by INTO Parliament resolution 2257-8-37, the Interstellar Security Assistance Force is charged with training the Arcadia Self-Defense Force, to assist Human authorities in the reconstruction of their planet, and provide both combat and non-combat support in ASDF missions against armed insurgency.”

The Commissar let out a low whistle.

“Okay, she does know her stuff.” He admitted.

Moka folded her arms and smiled, feeling very warm.

In Cali’s office, a high-pitched alarm sounded. Cali fumbled around her desk, moving aside a map of the Indus Peninsula to pick up a handheld radio. A Human voice, talking with a thick Hindi accent, came through the speaker:

“Alari. This is Ashtikar. There has been an incident. Please respond, over.”

Cali answered the call while Moka and the Commissar looked on.

“This is D’Kara. Send your traffic.” She said.

“My team has encountered a difficult situation and requires assistance.” Said the voice of Ashtikar. “Please send a Quick Reaction Force to the old mansion just west of Persepolis.”

“The old mansion?” Moka said, raising her eyebrow. “I thought we cleared that place. Maybe the insurgents moved back in?”

Cali nodded.

“Stay where you are, Ashtikar.” Cali said. “We’re coming to you.”

Then Cali turned to Moka.

“Go to the Alari barracks. Tell first and second squads to suit up and assemble at the QRF staging area.” Cali said.

“Right away!” Moka responded.

She turned to leave the building. Moka opened the door to step outside and she accidentally walked headlong into a pair of Scyldari standing on the other side of the door.

Scyldari are large, fur-covered mammalians. They stood almost two heads taller than Moka and outweighed her by over forty-five kilograms, due in part to their muscle-bound legs and heavy tails. They had small black eyes, wide floppy ears, and a big wet nose.

The two fur-covered Mammalians narrowed their eyes, peering down their snouts at Moka, who stepped back and apologized for running into them. She quickly noticed that each Scyldari had a patch on his uniform emblazoned with the insignia of the Scyldari Special Forces.

“Move along, Alari.” Said one of the Scyldari. “The Human troops near Persepolis are in need of immediate assistance and you do them a disservice by idling here.”

Moka took off at a sprint, looking back once to see the Scyldari operatives stepping into the HQ building.



About five minutes later, twenty Alari soldiers climbed into a waiting hovercraft. At Cali’s order, the hovercraft took flight and sped off toward the gleaming skyline of Persepolis. Cali and Moka sat next to each other, both women clad in power armor and wielding rifles. On Moka’s right, two young Alari men could not take their eyes off her. They were muttering to each other about Moka’s body and how attractive they found her. Moka realized she had met these two a few times before, but never held a full conversation with them.

“Hey, fellas. The legs you’re staring at are attached to a person named Moka.” She said. “Moka J’Bassim.”

“Oh… uh. Sorry. I’m Pol T’Talok.” Said the skinny man. “I remember you from the shooting range.”

“Vir B’Scul.” Said the muscular man. He did not apologize.

Moka felt hot under the collar when she realized Vir was still eyeing her up after refusing to apologize.

“Maybe you shouldn’t be so blatant about that when the girl has a gun?” She said.

“Never stopped me.” Vir said bluntly.

Moka felt her heart skip a beat. She always had a little bit of a weakness for the archetypal “bad boy.” Rouges, scoundrels, and strong silent types were all very interesting to her. They held her attention.

If Moka really had to do a field mission with this guy, then she was going to have some trouble keeping her mind on task…
 
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Probably not as much difficulty as Vir is though. Simultaneously demonstrating the reason for and the reason against mixed gender operations probably isn't such a good idea.
Some slight thievery of ideas happened here. The Vir/Moka interactions in Prologues 1 and 2 were both stolen from last year's US Army Sexual Harrassment/Assault Prevention class. I considered some of the more risqué scenarios, but opted to save them just in case an opportunity arises later on in the story.
 
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Moka is a real adrenaline junkie. Certainly seems a good and committed soldier though.

All of the interesting parts of the Arcadia conflict seem to have happened long before she got there.
This is one of those blatant cases of be careful what you wish for. She'll have all the adrenaline she craves later on...

Political Officers were charged with two specific duties: ensure Alari soldiers upheld political ideology of the Post-Revolutionary Government
I see the spirit of the Manifesti is long gone. Political commissars... Generally not a good omen for civilian-military relations I believe.
 
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Some slight thievery of ideas happened here. The Vir/Moka interactions in Prologues 1 and 2 were both stolen from last year's US Army Sexual Harrassment/Assault Prevention class. I considered some of the more risqué scenarios, but opted to save them just in case an opportunity arises later on in the story.

If Vir was sensible, he would learn from the Alari equivalent of them now, before Cali (possibly Moka, but more likely Cali) makes him learn the hard way.
 
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Moka is a real adrenaline junkie... This is one of those blatant cases of be careful what you wish for. She'll have all the adrenaline she craves later on...
I'm still trying to figure out how much this desire for action is going to blow up in Moka's face. I like putting my characters through hell, but I only get to destroy this poor girl once, and I want to do it right.

I see the spirit of the Manifesti is long gone. Political commissars... Generally not a good omen for civilian-military relations I believe.
The Manifesti are fully out-of-power, yes. But their influence on Alaria is too wide-reaching to sweep under the rug. The Post-Revolutionary Government has just adapted itself to function with the system left behind.

You can compare the ethics and civics of the two Alari governments below

Alaria as seen in Grand Theft Stellaris
(5 years ago, Pre-Revolution)​
Alaria as seen in Year of Hell
(present day, Post-Revolution)​
  • Democratic Authority
  • Fanatic Pacifist
  • Egalitarian
  • Agrarian Idyll
  • Environmentalist
  • Parliamentary System (midgame civic slot)
  • Democratic Authority
  • Pacifist
  • Fanatic Egalitarian
  • Meritocracy
  • Shared Burdens
  • Beacon of Liberty (midgame civic slot)

If Vir was sensible, he would learn from the Alari equivalent of [SHARP classes] now, before Cali (possibly Moka, but more likely Cali) makes him learn the hard way.
Cali.

Cali would definitely be the one to set Vir straight if the need arises.
 
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Normal Moka seeks trouble. Distracted Moka trouble will find her.
This has got to be the best summary of one of my characters anyone has ever written. I think you've got most of her compressed into two sentences. :D
 
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Alaria tamped down the Pacifism, it seems.

Moka and Cali's relationship is great.

What's up with the Scyldari, and how are they related to Alaria? Is it a simple alliance? Or something more? How much is galactic politics going to be a part of this story? The Galactic Imperium didn't exactly have many friends in Grand Theft Stellaris...

Is Persepolis named after the city in ancient Persia?
 
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Alaria tamped down the Pacifism, it seems.
True. The threat of war with the Galactic Imperium forced the Alari Presidium to rethink its stance on the use of military force.

Moka and Cali's relationship is great.
Thanks. I was going for the two being kind of like sisters to each other, since I've already done the "adoptive mother-daughter" angle in a previous story.

What's up with the Scyldari, and how are they related to Alaria?
The Scyldari Confederacy shown in this story is a slightly modified version of the premade version that comes with every copy of vanilla Stellaris. I swapped out their Spiritualist ethics for militarist and gave them the same Imperial Fiefdom origin as Alaria. When the Holy Fevarian Empire collapsed and reformed into the Galactic Imperium, Scyldaria and Alaria founded the Interstellar Treaty Organization, (INTO) a military alliance. Their goal is to resist any attempt by the Imperium to re-subjugate its former vassals.

Is it a simple alliance? Or something more?
Before I lost the save file for Grand Theft Stellaris, the INTO Federation was a Level 2 Martial Alliance. Hyperfocused on military affairs, INTO is a defensive alliance built with the sole purpose of protecting its member-states from the Galactic Imperium. During the events of Year of Hell, the Alliance consists of 15 member-states:
  1. Scyldari Confederacy
  2. State of Alaria
  3. Kel-Azaan Republic
  4. State of Kobaria
  5. Morbuzakh* (Bulwark under Kobaria)
  6. Baterra*
  7. Kingdom of Andaria (Vassal under Alaria)
  8. Tobari Star Empire*
  9. Orbis Customer Synergies (Tributary under Scyldaria)
  10. Voor Technocracy (Vassal under Scyldaria)
  11. Hazbuzan Syndicate (Tributary under Alaria)
  12. Glebsig Foundation
  13. Chinorr Combine
  14. Iribot Nexus (Scholarium under Scyldaria)
  15. Blorg Commonality (Vassal under Kel-Azak)
The following empires have association status with the Federation:
  • Kingdom of Yondarim (Galactic Imperium member)
  • Necromages of Tufsin (Galactic Imperium member)
  • Tyznn Empire (Galactic Imperium member)
The following empires broke their association treaty with INTO and are waiting for the truce to expire:
  • Protectorate of Arcadia and Concorde (Protectorate under Imperial Core)

Empires marked with an asterisk (*) first appeared in the Stormbreaker Universe and were added to Grand Theft Stellaris by mistake. I've simply allowed to let them stay.

How much is galactic politics going to be a part of this story? The Galactic Imperium didn't exactly have many friends in Grand Theft Stellaris...
Galactic politics will play a different role in this story, mainly because most of the political events occurring throughout the galaxy will be caused by events occurring on Arcadia. That's why I've previously described the planet as a flashpoint.

Is Persepolis named after the city in ancient Persia?
Yes it is. Persepolis became the Capitol of Arcadia and Concorde just a few years ago. After the Human Civil War, the Human Parliament decided to vacate their old building in Tianjin and relocate to Persepolis.

Also, the city names are supposed to be a sly implication about the Evacuation of Earth. Remember, it was established back in GTS that Humanity was suddenly and violently evicted from their Homeworld while they were Pre-FTL.

As the story goes on, you'll see that certain ethno-linguistic groups survived the Loss of Earth in much larger numbers than others, mostly because of how populous they were to begin with.
 
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