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Let’s hope Moka gets through this… the Morbuzkah is a good friend for saving her and Cali no matter what, though.
Honestly, at this point, Moka deserves a long relaxing break. Maybe a vacation on a distant resort world or something.


The Empire is attacking the old local government. Quick! Take advantage of this opportunity to defeat both forces!
That would be a bad idea - never interrupt an enemy while they are making a mistake.
Honestly, the events involving the Wagner PMC last week were such a huge shock that I seriously considered re-writing Chapter 40 (which you'll see later today.) Suffice to say, I no longer know the correct answer for dealing with sudden civil wars in the enemy side.
 
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Chapter 40: Paradise Found
Welcome to the penultimate chapter of Year of Hell.



Chapter 40: Paradise Found
Year of Hell, Day 365

Cali D’Kara
Alari Armed Forces
The Citadel, Persepolis City
Stardate 2257.03.01, 15:30hours



Moka was still alive when the medics wheeled her into an Alari field hospital at the Citadel. Cali wanted to follow her into surgery, but she was caught by a Commissar and sent to find her husband instead.

When Cali got to Dak’s command center, she found the place as busy as a beehive. INTO soldiers from across five species were trying to make sense of a very confusing situation. Dak was standing in front of a holocommunicatior, where the holographic image of an immensely beautiful woman nodded along as Dak explained the situation. Cali immediately recognized this person as Vas the Gilded, a renowned diplomat and staunch supporter of the INTO Alliance. The last time Cali heard news about her, Vas was on the Imperial Throneworld, trying to negotiate an end to the war.

“I understand now.” Said Vas the Gilded. “The situation is moving faster than I could have predicted. Keep the faith, Commodore J’Bassim. I will communicate with INTO Alliance Parliament immediately to seek new instructions. Also… as much as I revile violence, I must advise you to consider offensive action on the battlefield.”

“Honored delegate, those are serious words.” Dak replied. “You’ve reminded us plenty of times that you hate violence. How would a renewed offensive help in this situation?”

“Our enemies have begun to war amongst each other.” Vas replied. “We must exploit this situation to create a favorable peace, one that will restructure the Galactic order to prevent future conflicts like this. I am very confident that I can pull one or two vassals away from the Galactic Empress using the events playing out on Arcadia now. The Necromages of Tufsin waver in their loyalty, while I hear mutinous mutterings among the Faleen. One more push may cause the Galactic Empress to stumble on the diplomatic stage… and this is all I need. Keep the faith, Commodore. Glory to Alaria.”

The hologram faded and Vas was gone.

A tactical officer grabbed Cali by the arm.

“Have you been debriefed?” The TO asked.

Cali nodded.

“Okay, Dak is going to address all unit commanders in the next few moments. Please hold anything you need to say until after the briefing.”

Dak moved toward a large conference table in the middle of the room. A three-dimensional map of the Indus Peninsula was projected onto it from lights in the ceiling. Dak called out for attention. Alari, Hazbuzi, Andarian, Kel-Azaan, and Kobarian officers gathered around. A team of Iribot droids joined the briefing as well.

“Here is the situation as it stands.” Dak began. “SDF and Imperial forces are now hostile to each other. They are attacking each other at all points along the front line. Furthermore, the Imperial Starfleet is bombarding SDF positions from orbit. In response, SDF is turning their ground-to-space cannons against the Imperials in orbit. Several enemy cruisers and battleships have already been destroyed.

“Elsewhere on the battlefield, the Faleen have withdrawn from combat. I’m talking about an Imperial Vassal-State here, not the Imperials themselves. Faleen units have disengaged from the front line and are withdrawing to the south. They seem to have no interest in fighting anyone at the moment.

“Finally, we’ve received a communication from Scyldari Star Command.” Dak concluded. “Scyldaria is saying they’ve lost contact with a Special Forces team that was on a black bag mission near Fort Saragarhi. They claim this to be the same team who worked alongside Captain D’Kara and Corporal J’Bassim before our counter-invasion started. Those are all of the recent updates. Does anyone have late-coming information they need to add to the briefing?”

There was a great rustling sound as everybody in the room turned to face the nearest Morbuzakh plant. Cali had to withhold the urge to laugh. Of course, this action made sense. The hive-minded plantoid was now widespread over most of the region, turning itself into a kind of naturally occurring spy network. A few moments went by, then the Morbuzakh plant opened its flytrap and raised a vine for attention.

“Tell the Scyldari we found some of their men.” The plant said. “After a brief search of the Indus Peninsula spanning the past thirty seconds, our saplings discovered the bodies of four Scyldari, one Alari, and one Android.”

“Android!?” Cali raised her voice in alarm. “Was it Pixal?”

The flytrap lowered itself in a grim nod.

“The dismantled android does appear to be the Typhon android known as Pixal.” The Morbuzakh replied. “We have also confirmed the identities of the five dead SF Operators: Scyldari troops Raldrim den Subir, Goridrig den Harak, Virpim den Sukar, and Kunrig den Boknar. One Alari wearing a Scyldari uniform was also found dead. He is Vir B’Scul. These are indeed the same Special Forces operators we encountered earlier in the conflict. They appear to have been killed by Imperial weapons, and we found their bodies within visual range of an Imperial base. This suggests your decision to designate them hostile may have been ill-informed, Commodore.”

Dak winced.

Cali felt herself deflate.

“If Pixal’s dead, and Iridar’s team got killed, then that means General Sun got away with the Vultaum artifact.”

Dak nodded grimly.

“We’ll have to let that one go and focus on the bigger crisis.” Dak told Cali. Then he projected his voice across the room to address all of the officers. “Here are my new orders! The end of the war is clearly imminent. We must put our alliance in the strongest position possible when Vas restarts her negotiations with the enemy. I want the Galactic Empress to feel cornered. Order our fleet to fire long-range weapons against the Imperial warships! Simultaneously, I want our armored columns positioned on the enemy’s flanks to advance. Make the SDF think we’re trying to encircle their strongholds, and tell the tank commanders to complete the encirclement if practical! Someone call Lieutenant Y’Pana and the Grenadier unit. Order them to capture Hill 499 at all costs. It has to be today!”

The command center became busy again. Dak broke away from his advisors for just a moment to grab Cali and hug her.

“I’m so sorry.” He said. “I never should have sent you out there.”

“Moka’s alive.” Cali told him. “It’ll be a while before the doctors let us see her. What about the war? When will we know?”

“Everything’s happening really fast.” Dak said. “Enemy forces are collapsing on all fronts. The Faleen are retreating faster than we can chase them, the Imperial navy up there is getting shredded. I really think this thing is going to be over before my orders can be carried out. I’m just hoping that if word gets back to the enemy that I’ve ordered an offensive, it’ll spook them into making peace. That’s the hope, anyway.”



… Just like that, Cali D’Kara’s role in this conflict was over. There was no way for her to reach any of the combat zones in time, and even if there was, she was too badly injured to do much beyond walking. She walked upstairs to the roof the Citadel, determined to watch the ending of the conflict from a place with a decent view.

Atop the pentagon-shaped structure, Cali could see the distant flashes of light that denoted the front line so many miles away. Looking up, Cali could see white streaks racing from the Stellaris toward some distant point over the horizon. The flagship was shooting over the curvature of the planet to hit the Imperial fleet.

At some point, a flustered-looking nurse found Cali on the rooftop and insisted on giving Cali her next dose of anti-cancer medication. Cali reluctantly obliged, sitting down on an air conditioning unit to watch the show above.

Sometime around sunset, the final battle began. The pulses of light and rumble of thunder on the southern horizon became constant. Stellaris and her escort fleet began to move across the sky, spitting overwhelming volleys of fire at a foe Cali could not see.

The symphony of fire and death erupting on the horizon became so dense that Cali’s eyes slid out of focus. She saw light reflecting on the undersides of clouds, a deep rumble like an oncoming hovercraft that refused to stop.

Then… something incredible happened.

Cali spotted movement on the horizon. For a moment, she felt her stomach lurch with fear. She worried that the enemy had launched a final barrage of nuclear missiles to wipe out all INTO forces on the planet. But the points of light stayed in the heavens. As the sun set and stars winked into the night sky, Cali adjusted her optical implants, telescoping her vision.

It was the Imperial star fleet.

The warships were battered and damaged, and as far as Cali could tell, they were moving away from Arcadia! The Imperial ships grew smaller and smaller in Cali’s field of view. INTO vessels appeared moments later, giving chase, but it was too late. One by one, each Imperial ship vanished into Hyperspace with a faith pop of light. After just a few moments, the armada of the Galactic Imperium was gone.

Cali let out a low whistle.

“What now?” She asked herself.

The answer came a few moments later.

A loud, shrill screech came from somewhere down below as a public address system was activated. Cali winced, but paid attention as Dak’s voice blared out across the Citadel. Presumably, his message was also being retransmitted to every INTO soldier with access to a radio.

“Attention all INTO units. This is Commodore Dak J’Bassim.” Dak’s voice boomed across the Citadel. “Cease all hostilities. I say again: Cease all hostilities. The Arcadia Self Defense Forces have announced their unconditional surrender. This comes from General Sun Xishan himself. Message repeats: All enemy forces have surrendered by order of General Sun Xishan. SDF units are standing down. All INTO units are ordered to cease hostilities and prepare to take prisoners.”

Cali let out the biggest sigh of relief in her life.

Unconcerned about who might see her, she lay flat on her back, looking up from the rooftop at the starfield above. She relaxed.

The Year of Hell was over.
 
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General Sun survives with the Vultaum artifact? Please tell me that it will be covered in honey and staked in the desert above a fire ant hill or at least in a kudzu grove while he awaits the guilty verdict from the war crimes tribunal. Thanks
 
And now to negotiate the peace…

Cali survived, and I imagine that she‘ll be telling this story for a while.

That being said, the artifact is still an issue. It needs to be taken from the SDF and neutralizer. Given what it can apparently do…
 
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Chapter 41: Let Us Go Forward Together
General Sun survives with the Vultaum artifact? Please tell me that it will be covered in honey and staked in the desert above a fire ant hill or at least in a kudzu grove while he awaits the guilty verdict from the war crimes tribunal. Thanks
Considering the sudden departure of the Imperial fleet in the previous chapter, it is very safe to assume the Vultaum Reality Perforator was taken away from General Sun by force. Once the Imperials had the device, they staged a hasty exit, leaving General Sun and the SDF to face INTO alone.




Dear readers, I am proud to present the final chapter.





Chapter 41: Let Us Go Forward Together


“The war is over. The Galactic Imperium has been driven out of our space. Our borders, Gateways, wormholes, and Hyperlanes are secure. Against all odds, our alliance stood against the largest military force the galaxy has ever known and lived to tell the tale. Many of the great cities on our core worlds are devastated, and we may never know the true number of friends and comrades who paid the ultimate price for our freedom.

“This victory belongs to all of us, to each member-species of the Interstellar Treaty Organization: Scyldari, Kel-Azaan, Alari, Kobarian, Morbuzakh, Baterra, Andarian, Tobari, Orbis, Voor, Hazbuzi, Glebsig, Chinoor, Iribot, and Blorg.

“Now we begin the great challenge of securing our future. We will rebuild everything that was destroyed. Our cities, our ships and stations. We will care for our people, the wounded and displaced. Our vanquished foe will do none of this.


“As I speak the Galactic Imperium is in disarray. The specter of defeatism hangs over the Throneworld, where no one ever imagined the possibility that one day the Empress of the Galaxy could be forced to sign a peace agreement. Each of her vassal-states will very soon make the choice between freedom or tyranny. The INTO Alliance shall offer association status to any who apply.

“To the many peoples of the INTO Alliance, we have secured our future. Let us go forward together and claim a tomorrow that is bright and full of wonders.”


Cali D’Kara
Alari Armed Forces
Aboard the Flagship “Stellaris”
Stardate 2257.03.05, 10:15hours (Five days after the Year of Hell)



Cali rested her head in her hands, watching the planet Arcadia and its moon Concorde slowly recede. The flagship and a small escort were returning home to Alaria. Most of the INTO armada and soldiers would remain on Arcadia, under a new commander, to make sure peace held. This seemed likely, as the SDF had surrendered while Imperial forces fled the system, taking the Vultaum Reality Perforator to the Throneworld and abandoning their now-former allies.

The door to her cabin opened and Moka hobbled into the room. She was using a crutch to walk. Cali waved Moka to another seat by the window.

“So… I just saw Sun Xishan being moved to the other brig.” Moka announced. “Was he always missing an eye? I really don’t remember.”

“Yingyue did it.” Cali replied. “I know what you mean about memory. I’ve been struggling to remember so many people lately.”

Cali pointed to the computer on the far side of her cabin.

“I’ve been writing letters to the families of soldiers who got killed.” Cali explained. “Turns out, A.J. and Ayumi had distant relatives living on some colony in Alari space, so I’ve got to notify them about both Ayumi’s death and A.J.’s arrest. Bitter pills to swallow. The Scyldari gave me Vir’s body to send back to his folks, and I also have to write a statement to the Varnala Gendarmes.”

“Huh? Why?” Moka asked.

“Right before we started the trip home, Pol turned himself in.” Cali replied. “He’s on the Stellaris, apparently. Said he wants to face a court and asked me to write a statement for him, even gave me a few notes to work with. So I added Pol’s issue to my to-do list. What about you? How are you doing?”

Moka rocked her head from side to side, flexing her neck.

“Thanks for letting me keep the nanobots.” Moka replied. “I’m going in for surgery again as soon as we finish our Hyperspace jump.”

“Have you already picked out what cybernetic augments you’re gonna get?” Cali inquired. “Remember, I’m gonna get upset if you chose the exact same ones as me. New tech is always coming out, and it’s usually better than the old.”

“Definitely getting a brain implant.” Moka said, gently caressing the spot where her skull was cracked open during the final fight. “But mine is gonna focus on coordination and motor control, nothing like yours.”

“Yeah, mine augments the five senses.” Cali admitted. “If you get a brain implant with a motor control module, tell’em to make sure it has a direct connection to your corpus callosum and the uppermost part of your brain stem. It’ll reduce latency between the implant and your cerebellum.”

Moka raised an eyebrow and pointed a playful finger at Cali.

“That is an aftermarket modification you did yourself.” Moka accused Cali.

“Power of nanobots.” Cali replied, leaning back in her chair. “And it works.”

Moka sat down next to Cali. As a side effect of the brain damage she had suffered during that chaotic truck crash, Moka was unable to hold still. She was twitchy and seemed to shake continuously.

“Where’s Dak?” Moka said.

“Up on the bridge. He just gave a speech to INTO Parliament. I think he’s just gonna send a written statement to the Alari National Congress.” Cali replied.

Moka looked out the window. Arcadia was just a dot in the starfield now.

“I’m sorry about Ayumi.” Moka finally said. “I know you were friends with both her and A.J. before all this happened… and…”

Moka began to cry. Cali moved to hung her.

“I’m so sorry.” She repeated herself. “Ayumi only went up in the turret ‘cause I hesitated. I didn’t mean for…”

Cali squeezed Moka.

“It’s okay. It’s not your fault.” Cali said. “The enemy did that. Not you.”

The two woman sat in thoughtful silence for a while.

“Were you serious about the whole ‘spend time on the family ranch’ thing?” Moka asked.

“Yeah, I was.” Cali replied. “I kinda figured you needed a mental health break after all this.”

“I think I do.” Moka replied. “I can hardly sleep anymore, and when I do I get these… night terrors. I can’t think, I can hardly focus… but I did want to say something to you about it.”

Cali took Moka’s hand in her own and looked her in the eyes.

“Okay, I’m listening.”

“So… The Morbuzakh…” Moka began. “Remember how I kinda made friends with it?”

“Yup.” Cali replied. “I said you had no idea how much of a good thing that was.”

A weak smile appeared on Moka’s face.

“Well, the Morbuzakh was serious about inviting me to the Tree of Life.” She said. “It says it can use Psionics to… uh… fix my mind? I don’t know the right words.”

Cali felt a kind of warmth rising in her chest. She had always had a positive impression of the Morbuzakh, now she was feeling validated.

“Have you talked to the Morbuzakh recently?” Cali asked. “Won’t a brain implant be a problem?”

“It says it can work around the implant.” Moka explained. “On the Morbuzakh homeworld, it’s commonplace a lot of the bigger, older plants to be enhanced with technology.”

Cali considered this for a moment, then she replied.

“Alright. If you want to go to the Tree of Life, I’ll talk to Dak and we’ll see if we help you get there, okay?” Cali said. “There’s a Morbuzakh cruiser in the escort fleet. See? Right over there, below that blue star.”

Cali pointed out the window and Moka smiled as she spotted the plantoid ship.

“So… I owe you an apology as well.” Cali said. “I feel like I let you down… so many times. It’s my fault… my fault that all of this happened to you. Dak wanted me to scare you into quitting the military. I feel like I should have tried harder. I’m so sorry.”

Cali started to cry. Now Moka embraced her with quaking hands.

“You never forgot about me out there.” Moka told her. “You always came for me, and you chose to save my life. Thank you, Aunt Cali. I love you.”

“And you, Moka.” Cali replied. “I love you too.”




Cali D’Kara, Honored Delegate of the City of Rattia
Alari National Congress
Varnala, Alaria
Stardate 2257.07.20, 08:59hours (4 months after the Year of Hell)



Making her way through the crowded hall, Cali said:

“You know I’ll get you back for this, right?”

On her right, Ruto B’Torak flashed Cali a mischievous smile.

“I’m sure you will. I know you all too well.”


Ruto was an Alari woman who abandoned her old loyalty to the Galactic Empress during the Manifesti Revolution. (and also helped steal the Stellaris six years ago) She looked very pleased with the results of the political campaign she had waged during the war. Ever since Cali and Moka’s survival was a reported on the news, Ruto had been aggressively campaigning for Cali to be elected to the Alari National Congress as a war hero. When asked why, Ruto said:

“I remembered how much you loved Arcadia and the Humans before all this happened. I figured if you were part of the ANC, then you could have a louder voice in the post-war reconstruction process. Everyone on Alaria knows you and Moka as ‘the Heroes of Arcadia’ now. If you have something to say about rebuilding Arcadia or saving Humans… people are gonna pay attention. Even more if you’ve got the word ‘Delegate’ in front of your name.”

“Damn, Ruto. That’s all I’ve got to say.” Cali confessed.

Once Cali reached her new assigned seat in the Hall of Congress, Cali spotted a second name placard next to her own.

“Hold on… When did you get elected to Congress?” Cali asked.

“Same time as you.” Ruto replied. “Don’t ask me how I ran two campaigns at once. It was awful… like… a whole Year of Hell.”

Cali laughed.

She looked up. The sacred hall of the ANC was a two-story indoor amphitheater, with balcony seating reserved for citizen spectators. Cali spotted Moka and allowed a big genuine smile to appear on her face.

Moka looked rejuvenated after spending a month on the Morbuzakh Homeworld. She wore an outfit decorated by leafy vines and beautiful flowers. Looking down at the ANC, Moka returned Cali’s smile. She was no longer shaking, and held herself with newfound strength, both physical and mental. On either side of Moka were two Morbuzakh shrubs, keeping themselves low to avoid obstructing someone else’s view.

Cali returned her attention to the stage as an Alari man approached the podium. A voice projected from speakers on either side of the stage:

“Citizens, please welcome the President of the Alari National Congress.”

A polite applause echoed around the Hall of Congress for a few moments before the President raised his hand.

“I am pleased to declare this new session of the ANC open.” The President began. “Our first order of business is to administer the oath of office to all of the new Delegates who won their seats in last month’s election.”

Cali adjusted her dress one last time and stood up. To her great surprise, more than half of the five hundred legislators in the room also rose.

“Ruto, what the hell have you gotten me into?” Cali asked Ruto.

“Only your next adventure.” Ruto replied with a grin. “Except this one has less violence and death, lots more talking. Hope you can handle it.”

“Please place your hands over your hearts, Delegates. You will now take the Oath of Office.” The President ordered.

“Bring it on.” Cali whispered to Ruto.

She took the oath.






THE END.
 
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Cali survived, and I imagine that she‘ll be telling this story for a while.
Dak, Gar, and the rest of the J'Bassim family will no doubt have their ears talked off. By both Cali and Moka.

That being said, the artifact is still an issue. It needs to be taken from the SDF and neutralizer. Given what it can apparently do…
Now that the war is over, the Imperium will have plenty of time to unlock the secrets of the Reality Perforator. But with their military currently reeling from having its teeth kicked in, it will be quite some time before the Galactic Empress proves herself a threat to anyone.
 
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I‘m worried about the Imperials having the Reality Perforator. Maybe that‘ll be relevant in a sequel?

Ah, Cali being stuck as part of the government… at least the war’s over. Now she enters a different war - one of words!

The psionic therapy that the Morbuzkah gave Moka seems to be working, which is good.
 
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I‘m worried about the Imperials having the Reality Perforator. Maybe that‘ll be relevant in a sequel?

Ah, Cali being stuck as part of the government… at least the war’s over. Now she enters a different war - one of words!

The psionic therapy that the Morbuzkah gave Moka seems to be working, which is good.
Yes, the war is finally over. Cali will be immersing herself in the reconstruction of Arcadia from her new place in the ANC. (I seriously considered having Cali elevated to a seat on the Alari Presidium, but I figured that would be going too far)

Moka is on the path to recovery, yes. I imagine she would spend a lot of time at the Tree of Life going forward. She's developed a more personal relationship with a hive mind than anyone before her.

The Imperium did get away with the Reality Perforator. This will open the door to possible conflicts in the future... but for Cali D'Kara... the story is over. Unlike my previous works, Year of Hell concludes with a much more open ending. (or should I say it has two open-ended finales ;) )
 
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Having now read both, I prefer this one. But I am a sucker for happy endings.
 
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Amazing story as always! And a brighter future is on the horizon for both the galaxy at large and the ravaged human society, now that General Sun is safely locked away and the vultaumn relics have been extracted.

Wonderful storytelling as is usual, and you got me to feel really attachment to the characters, it was wonderful to see Moka seemingly happy and at peace after the amount of horror she was put through.

I regret not having been able to follow Year of Hell in real time and am sure to try and follow whatever new story you'll try your hand at next! Keep up the amazing writing please!
 
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Amazing story as always! And a brighter future is on the horizon for both the galaxy at large and the ravaged human society, now that General Sun is safely locked away and the vultaumn relics have been extracted.

Wonderful storytelling as is usual, and you got me to feel really attachment to the characters, it was wonderful to see Moka seemingly happy and at peace after the amount of horror she was put through.

I regret not having been able to follow Year of Hell in real time and am sure to try and follow whatever new story you'll try your hand at next! Keep up the amazing writing please!
Thanks for reading! I'm glad to know you enjoyed!

It may be some time before my next project Song of the Solitaire is ready to see the light of day. I do have a couple of minor projects that may hold you over in the meantime:
 
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It's that time of year again folks! The Q3 ACA's are now live and accepting your ballots! Head on over to the thread started by @Nikolai to show some support for your favorite WritAARs! :)


 
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