Wow ... author #1's story is one of great mystery and good storytelling. I enjoyed it very much, especially the scene-setting at the beginning. This literary style is not economical or sparse by any means, but at the same time did not waste any sentences, and told the story simply and effectively. Or, rather, told part of the story: we are left to wonder for ourselves what happens to Albrecht and if his attempt is successful. Actually, a good deal of thinking goes into this reading, and I much enjoyed the polished, excellent objective style.
The third word of entry #2 should be lower-cased, but after that the story settles down into a nest of intrigue. Honestly my head started swimming in all the name-dropping and geopolitics - I haven't played a Paradox game in months! - but I managed to keep it above water enough to see that this tale has quite a bit of excitement, and the Duke of Saxony is a character with depth (though maybe not lovable) - in fact, his entire persona is effectively presented in his first spoken line, a remarkable bit of characterization. Interesting!
My attention was certainly grabbed by author #3 in expletivacious style. I am also intrigued, though, by the idea of a re-election of an Emperor. (WHY do I keep spelling intrigue with a q instead of a g???? ) Whoa, now I'm a little miffed. A dead guy running for Emperor? He could defeat John Ashcroft. I love the line about how Wittelsbach will be haunted by his sons. However, I really am unsure what to think about the conclusion to this story. What on Earth??? Wish there had been more rhyming.
Author #4 presents an interesting story with a delicious (for Conrad) little twist, although I feel compelled in some cases to sign on with previous comments regarding proofreading. You did a good job, though, and the first and last few paragraphs especially were strong.
Another great month for GTA; I only remembered the topic during entry #2 and I enjoyed reading all the stories! Hope the authors will continue to join us ... and I look forward to reading more from them. Apologies I didn't post here sooner; life has been very stressful recently (as readers of my AAR will have heard a wee bit about).
Good job everyone! You have something to cheer about.
The third word of entry #2 should be lower-cased, but after that the story settles down into a nest of intrigue. Honestly my head started swimming in all the name-dropping and geopolitics - I haven't played a Paradox game in months! - but I managed to keep it above water enough to see that this tale has quite a bit of excitement, and the Duke of Saxony is a character with depth (though maybe not lovable) - in fact, his entire persona is effectively presented in his first spoken line, a remarkable bit of characterization. Interesting!
My attention was certainly grabbed by author #3 in expletivacious style. I am also intrigued, though, by the idea of a re-election of an Emperor. (WHY do I keep spelling intrigue with a q instead of a g???? ) Whoa, now I'm a little miffed. A dead guy running for Emperor? He could defeat John Ashcroft. I love the line about how Wittelsbach will be haunted by his sons. However, I really am unsure what to think about the conclusion to this story. What on Earth??? Wish there had been more rhyming.
Author #4 presents an interesting story with a delicious (for Conrad) little twist, although I feel compelled in some cases to sign on with previous comments regarding proofreading. You did a good job, though, and the first and last few paragraphs especially were strong.
Another great month for GTA; I only remembered the topic during entry #2 and I enjoyed reading all the stories! Hope the authors will continue to join us ... and I look forward to reading more from them. Apologies I didn't post here sooner; life has been very stressful recently (as readers of my AAR will have heard a wee bit about).
Good job everyone! You have something to cheer about.