Whew! I just read this AAR from the start over the last week. Thoroughly enjoyed it. As many have said, your attention to historical detail and cultural flavour is out of this world. I know little about Czech/Slovak culture myself, so I can't verify most of what you've done, but your approach is so meticulous that I can only imagine I'm in good hands. (Almost ten years ago, reading Bloodsnake and Battlewolf was a major driver of my taking an interest in Norse history and culture.)
Your writing has some truly fantastic moments. My favourite is perhaps when you wrote from the perspective of a wolf without telling us at first. Some of your characters really do stick in the mind - Radko most of all - which is a serious feat when you're trying both to give a real sense of personality and to cover long centuries without leaving any big gaps. It helps that pretty much all your kings have been blessed with fairly long lives - or is life expectancy in CK3 a bit longer than in 2?
I'm looking forward in particular to seeing how Bohodar III and Czenzi turn out. Also a big fan of all the history seminar segments. The bit with Živana and the priest was nice, as it gave a tiny taste of where sexual mores stand in later Moravian society, though I don't know if that's what you meant to do
One thing: could we possibly see a religious map of Europe sometime soon? I see that Orthodoxy has made some headway to the north, and I remember you saying that a variety of heresies take root there in time, but it'd be nice to have a clearer picture!
Needless to say, keep up the phenomenal work!
Thank you for the kind words, and happy to have you on board, @Knud_den_Store! I'm also quite gratified that you enjoyed Bloodsnake and Battlewolf.
Also glad you're enjoying the history seminar segments. That bit was part of an experiment where I was attempting to get out of the classroom setting and into the 'real world', though it can be a bit difficult to arrange 'encounters with history' that don't seem too artificial or forced.
Re: the life expectancy of my kings... honestly I think I just got lucky in those early years. I don't think CK3 is any more forgiving than CK2 with regard to life expectancy (with some exceptions, like the fecund trait). Not all of my kings are this long-lived, as shall be seen.
Religious maps, eh? Those will be forthcoming! (Particularly when the religious landscape of Eastern Europe starts to get... interesting.)
For nice rulers, there have been a lot of rebellions. Which rebels will lose their heads as the day of reckoning approaches? Thank you for another glimpse of the Moravian court.
Which rebels will lose their heads, you ask? I don't think I'm spoiling too much by saying: at least one.
I'm trying to handle the transition between Slavic antiquity and high medieval culture with a certain degree of realism; I'm borrowing primarily from Russian, Polish, Bohemian and Bulgarian experiences in my attempt to reconstruct what a Moravian high medieval court would have looked like.
TEN
A Peacemaker in Wartime
5 July 1139 – 23 July 1139
I.
A Peacemaker in Wartime
5 July 1139 – 23 July 1139
I.
Botta cantered on his horse along the narrow path that wound its way east, leading downwards between the Maramoroš Mountains to the north and the long ridge of the Rodna Mountains to the south. He had already passed without incident through Prešov, Užhorod, Mukačevo and Volovec, and had just left Čern. The young rider kept his head concealed beneath a simple grey cowl and his tall broad body beneath a cotte and hose of the same colour. The only thing which could identify him to a stranger as the grandson of Přisnec King of Moravia the Great was the gold signet ring with a lion rampant on its face, which he kept on a leather strand around his neck and beneath his cotte.
Thankfully, he’d been able to breathe free and easy as he passed through the lands governed by Jaropolk Pavelkov. Botta was pleasantly surprised: he had always thought that Jaropolk had hated his father and grandfather. However, the Ruthenian had treated him with every hospitality and courtesy, and had been most genuine about it. Evidently Prisnec had come to an agreement with Jaropolk which had left him quite happy.
But travelling alone like this, through territory held by rebelling vassals and a vicious enemy, was a dangerous business. If either the Bijelahrvatskići or the Mojmírovci got wind of his errand, in all likelihood he would be used as a counter in brokering a peace unfavourable to his grandfather. The same fate would await him if he was captured by Velyky Knedz Pavel of the Červen Cities. Although they had embraced Christ, the Červeny still seemed never to miss an opportunity to weaken and undermine Moravia, if it was within their power.
But reflecting on these things did not daunt him; indeed, they exhilarated him. Having passed through Maramoroš, Bohodar was riding through hostile territory. All the same: ‘You’re on a mission of peace,’ his grandfather told him, ‘that is every bit as important as the war that is happening here.’ A mission of peace. And the olive branch that Botta would be offering… was himself.
He rode at a brisk clip through the forests of spruce and beech and juniper. Although the summer air was cool in comparison with that of Olomouc, it was nonetheless dappled with shafts of warmth from the bright blue July sky above. The sharp, fresh smell of the coniferous resins in the summer air gave Bohodar’s spirits a welcome lift, and caused him to slow his horse to enjoy the uninhabited road. This gave the young teenager some time to think.
The last time he had seen Árpád-Hotin Czenzi, he had been five years old, and she nine. He remembered the visit vividly. He blushed when he thought about how he’d behaved then, riled to childish anger by her splashing him harmlessly in the river, and he anxiously wished she wouldn’t hold it against him. His hand went to his scrip, and he fingered the well-burnished half mussel shell she’d given him… and then his hand went to the rougher surface of its mate—or something as close to it as he could find. Would Czenzi still find him childish if he gave her this?
In his memory, she still loomed over him—a tall, leggy, gangling, somewhat snub-nosed tomboy with tawny skin. He could still remember her sharp jawline and long mouth, and a pair of startling amber eyes. That was the image of her that he had continued to hold throughout his childhood. And ‘súhlas’—that had been his assessment. Botta left the Prut valley and made his way east toward the Dneister.
He did his best to keep to the forested areas, and well away from the large towns under Pavel’s sway. That wasn’t easy as he skirted Čern, though he managed to pick his way through that stretch without incident – sometimes staying with peasants, or sometimes fending for himself in abandoned byres or shepherd’s huts in the countryside. He reached the Dniester’s right bank without incident, and followed its snaking winds closely. However, Botta got careless. The steppe through which the Dniester wound was not entirely forested, and he thought he could get away with riding across the grassy plain between two of the river’s bends. That’s where he was spotted.
The two riders wore long blonde moustaches, were clad in mail, and bore upon their heads the conical helmets of the Eastern Slavs. Their teardrop-shaped shields bore the sky-blue field with a golden lion rampant, which signified their fealty to the Velyky Knedz. Botta’s heart froze. If they captured him here, his whole journey would be for nought. Still, he kept his calm and did his best to ride by them.
‘Hej, palomnyk!’ one of the Červeny called with a laugh. ‘Kudy zbyraeš? Yakyj pospikh?’
Bohodar had spurred his horse subtly to a trot as the Červen called to him. The two riders exchanged looks, and then began to ride after him. Bohodar heard the clop of hooves behind him, and spurred his horse on further. Soon he was head down over his mount, riding at a desperate gallop away from the two Červeny, and the two of them were riding hot on his tail.
Out on the open steppe like this, Bohodar knew that he wouldn’t be able to make a dash of it for long. The ground here was open, level and firm, and the two men behind him were the more experienced riders, weighted down though they were with arms and armour. Their horses were also bred and trained for the steppe, while the mare beneath his legs had never tasted of war or the hunt until now. The two Červeny knew this as well as Bohodar did, and they gave laughing, mocking shouts as they corralled him in toward the river.
Botta closed his eyes. Soon this would all be over, and he would be at the mercy of Pavel Daniilovič, to fetch back a hefty bounty from his grandfather.
But then he heard the unmistakeable whistle of an arrow flying past him, followed by a thunk behind. Botta pulled his horse up to a halt, and behind him his two pursuers did the same. Daring to turn his head, Botta saw the shaft of an arrow emerging from the blue-and-gold shield of one of the Červen riders. The fletching was red and grey.
‘Červeny,’ called a high, gruff voice from across the plain, speaking in an East Slavic dialect. ‘You are trespassing upon Csángóföld, the rightful riding of Nagyfejedelem Balassi Vilmos! Explain this outrage.’
‘We meant no trespass,’ called back one of the yellow-moustached riders. ‘But we lay claim to this person before you. He crossed our marches without identifying himself!’
‘Oh?’ asked the voice. Bohodar, listening to its mezzo-alto pitch, felt it must belong to either a very young man, or else a woman. ‘He bears no colours, and he bears no armament. What threat is he to your borders? Yet you come upon us in arms.’
‘He would give us no answer,’ the Červen persisted. ‘He must be a spy!’
‘Be that as it may,’ came the reply, ‘he is now upon Magyar land, and by Magyars he must be judged. Leave this place, now. Or I shall send your Pavel Daniilovič a gift of two fools’ heads in a basket.’
Not gladly, but with grumbling, the two Červeny turned their mounts and departed back, west along the Dniester. Who knew how many other Magyars were out here, apart from this one young marksman? Also, they knew too well that Velyky Knedz Pavel Daniilovič wouldn’t thank them for sparking a war between Csángóföld and the Červen Cities.
The Magyar marksman approached Bohodar. In fact, now he could plainly see that she was a markswoman. As they brought their horses up close to each other, they regarded each other with wary interest. The sharp, sparkling amber eyes which now looked him over from beneath a pair of slim sable brows struck a spot within Bohodar’s memory, with the same force that her arrow had struck the Červen shield. It couldn’t be—Czenzi herself? What were the odds—?
It was Árpád Czenzi—and yet it wasn’t. The rather gawky tomboy he remembered from a decade ago was gone. In her place was an apparition of arresting handsomeness and perilous grace. The high, tawny cheekbones were the same, but the sharp jawline he remembered had smoothed into a gentle poise, atop a long, well-formed neck. The mobile lips that Bohodar had once thought too thin and too long for her face, had filled into a dignified elegance—enough to give her mouth a hint of humour, and a subtler allure which was harder to define. The angular shoulders he remembered from their roughhousing in the water those ten years ago had smoothed and filled with a subtle curvature. The same refined curve and mild taper graced the folds of her skirts. And Bohodar’s teenage male eyes could not help but drift down over the shapely, protrusive pectoral attestations of her young-womanhood.
Czenzi addressed the spellbound youth. ‘Welcome to Csángóföld, sir,’ she told him. Although her spoken Moravian was flawless, there was still a lilt and a slight trill to her speech that made it somehow more attractive to him. ‘You’ve been expected.’
Only with effort did Bohodar find the use of his tongue. ‘Hálás köszönöm szépen a segítségét, hölgyem.’
Czenzi’s lips parted broadly, in a heart-melting smile. ‘Nagyon szívesen!’ she answered gaily. To Bohodar in her native Magyar, her voice sounded like song. ’But between us two, Bohodar—there isn’t a need to be so formal, is there?’
Bohodar was stricken at once with a sudden wistful yearning and pricking of the flesh, and also with his own lack of deserving. The one, the true, the elemental she, had transmuted so much, it seemed—and he so little. She had recognised him at once. ’I... suppose not.’
’Please, ride with me back to Szarka,’ Czenzi requested. ’I am sure you would agree that there are some important matters for us to discuss.’
Bohodar nodded. At that moment, he would have gone to the gates of hell if Czenzi had asked it of him.
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