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Radomir cuts an impressive figure (stat-wise, I am unfamiliar with traits). The murder seems to be a mythic story explaining the non-usage of sugar in fruits and candies. Where is Radomir in the succession line? Thank you

Radomír has a diligent, content and patient personality, has a scholarly theologian education, and has the inherited herculean (from his amazonian mother Viera) and quick (from both his parents) traits. He is the murdered Spitihnev's eldest brother, though his sister Karolína is older than he is. Stats-wise he isn't bad at all, even without the inheritables!

Prisnec is next in line for the throne, and Radomír is next in line after him, so he's third in the line of succession.

Cheers for the comment!
 
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Radomír has a diligent, content and patient personality, has a scholarly theologian education, and has the inherited herculean (from his amazonian mother Viera) and quick (from both his parents) traits. He is the murdered Spitihnev's eldest brother, though his sister Karolína is older than he is. Stats-wise he isn't bad at all, even without the inheritables!

Prisnec is next in line for the throne, and Radomír is next in line after him, so he's third in the line of succession.

Cheers for the comment!
This does bring up the issue that a family tree would be useful to keep track of everybody.
 
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Pettiness leading to murder. Against his own family. Bohodar really needs a war to take his mind off things.

Staying in a place that only screams infidelity to him won't do him any good, even if Radomír's marriage seems to be off to a good start.
 
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Rychnovský Genealogical Table (as of 1123)
This does bring up the issue that a family tree would be useful to keep track of everybody.

@jmberry - Excellent suggestion! Particularly since we are dealing with two Spitihnevs now...

At any rate, here it is: the full Rychnovský genealogical table as of 1123, all 12 generations of it!

I am using the Meurgey de Tupigny system to keep track of the members of the dynasty. Bastards are not shown; legitimised bastards are indicated with (single parentheses). Female characters, and male characters in matrilineal unions, who have extant lines of descent are indicated with an ellipsis [...]. I tried to format the code but it doesn't look like it's taking.

My player characters so far are:

I. Bohodar
III-5. Bohodar 1.
IV-6. Pravoslav
V-11. Radomír 1.
VI-19. Jakub
VII-15. Eustach
VIII-11. Tomáš 1.
IX-22. Bohodar 2.


The characters who are in the main line of succession are:

X-26. Prisnec 1.
XI-28. Radomír 2.
XII-8. Bohodar 3.
(has not appeared in the story yet)


Code:
I.    Bohodar ‘slovoľubec’ Rychnovský => Mechthild of Stuttgart
    II-1.    Viera Rychnovská => Tihomír Moisusți
        III-1.    Ľubica Rychnovská => Drahoslav z Nitrava
        III-2.    Miloš Rychnovský
        III-3.    Ostromír Rychnovský => Theodosia Kamateros
            IV-1.    Dobromil Rychnovský
                V-1.    Dobroslav Rychnovský
                    VI-1.    Miloš Rychnovský
                        VII-1.    Ostromír Rychnovský
                            VIII-1.    Viera Rychnovská => Siegel ben Yitzhaq Šammaš
                                IX-1.    Viera Rychnovská => X-26. Prisnec Rychnovský (see X-26. for descendants)
                    VI-2.    Theodosia Rychnovská... 
                    VI-3.    Viera Rychnovská
            IV-2.    Zaslava Rychnovská                 
        III-4.    Slávka Rychnovská => Tomislav Bijelahrvatskić
            IV-3.    Dubravka Bijelahrvatskića...
    II-2.    Radomír Rychnovský => Æþelhild ‘Hilda’ Cenrædsdohtor Hæstinga
        III-5.    Bohodar 1. ‘mladší’ Rychnovský => II-5. Blažena Rychnovská
            IV-4.    Blahomíra Rychnovská => Mihail Chrysos
                V-2.    Blahomír Rychnovský => Mascarose Gellones
                    VI-4.    Živana Rychnovská...
                    VI-5.    Rædwald Blahomírson Rychnovský
                    VI-6.    Eadhild Blahomírdohtor Rychnovská
                V-3.    Slavomíra Rychnovská
                => Apollonios Kourkouas
                V-4.    Vitemír Rychnovský
                    VI-7.    Ludovít Rychnovský
                        VII-2.    Slavomíra Rychnovská...
                        VII-3.    Raslav Rychnovský
                        VII-4.    Vratislava Rychnovská...
                    VI-8.    Lada Rychnovská => V-14. Vratislav Rychnovský
                        VII-2.    Slávka Rychnovská => VI-27.Zdravoslav Rychnovský-Kluczbork (see VI-27. for descendants)
                    VI-9.    Jarmila Rychnovská...
            IV-5.    Zbislava Rychnovská => Gauronas iš Kulmas
                V-5.    Zdravomil Rychnovský => Dagas iš Kulmas
                    VI-10.    Kostislava Rychnovská => V-17. Slavomír Rychnovský
                        VII-5.    Anna Rychnovská
                    VI-11.    Blahomír Rychnovský => Çilen Srednogorski
                        VII-6.    Dušan Rychnovský => Richeza Abovská
                            VIII-2.    Jaroslava Rychnovská => IX-14. Ján Rychnovský
                                IX-2.    Berta Rychnovská...
                                IX-3.    Hanna Rychnovská...
                                IX-4.    Mstivoj Rychnovský => Anna Viss
                                    X-1.    Marcelina Rychnovská...
                                    X-2.    Ján Rychnovský-Lehnice => Kostislava Mojmírová-Hont
                                        XI-1.    Krzysztof Rychnovský-Lehnice => XI-16. Maria Rychnovská-Žič (see XI-16. for descendants)
                                        XI-2.    Dobroslav Rychnovský
                                        XI-3.    Anastazja Rychnovská-Lehnice
                                        XI-4.    Gniewosz Rychnovský-Lehnice
                                        XI-5.    Eugenie Rychnovská-Lehnice
                                IX-5.    Czcibór Rychnovský => Irena Harrach
                                    X-3.    Maja Rychnovská...
                                    X-4.    Zdeněk Rychnovský
                            VIII-3.    Blahomír Rychnovský => VIII-13. Držislava Rychnovská-Kluczbork
                                IX-6.    Bohumila Rychnovská => VIII-19.    Zelimír Rychnovský-Kluczbork (see VIII-19. for descendants)
                                IX-7.    Živana Rychnovská...
                                IX-8.    Dalibor Rychnovský
                            VIII-4.    Bohuslav Rychnovský => VII-25. Blažena Rychnovská-Kluczbork
                                IX-9.    Drahoslav Rychnovský => Bożena Přemyslovcá-Boleslav
                                    X-5.    Spitihnev Rychnovský
                                    X-6.    Bratromila Rychnovská
                                    X-7.    Lesana Rychnovská
                                IX-10.    Jaroslava Rychnovská...
                                IX-11.    Boleslav Rychnovský => Jaroslava Mojmírová-Hont
                                    X-8.    Bohuslav Rychnovský => Horislava Mojmírová-Hont
                                        XI-6.    Vratislava Rychnovská
                                        XI-7.    Vlastimila Rychnovská
                                        XI-8.    Jaromíra Rychnovská
                                        XI-9.    Helene Rychnovská
                                    X-9.    Václav Rychnovský => Ctislava Kopčianská
                                        XI-10.    Ctislava Rychnovská
                                    X-10.    Zdravomil Rychnovský
                    VI-12.    Miroslava Rychnovská...
                V-6.    Ivan Rychnovský => Bohumila Přemyslovcá-Boleslav
                    VI-13.    Svatoslava Rychnovská...
                V-7.    Živana Rychnovská
                V-8.    Tichomil Rychnovský
            IV-6.    Pravoslav Rychnovský => Maria Kobilića
                V-9.    Mislava Rychnovská => Bogori Srednogorski
                    VI-14.    Kostislava Rychnovská...
                    VI-15.    Horislava Rychnovská...
                    VI-16.    Vladan Rychnovský => Eirēnē Maurokatakalos
                        VII-7. Ján Rychnovský => Adleta Potocká
                            VIII-5.    Braslav Rychnovský => Pravomila Aqhazar
                                IX-12.    Maja Rychnovská...
                                IX-13.    Mihail Rychnovský-Žič => VII-26. Alda Rychnovská-Kluczbork
                                    X-11.    Dragomira Rychnovská-Žič...
                                    X-12.    Drosuk Rychnovský-Žič => Ylva Karinsdotter av Agder
                                        XI-11.    Mihail Rychnovský-Žič => Vyšemíra Aqhazar
                                            XII-1.    Danuta Rychnovská-Žič...
                                            XII-2.    Krystyna Rychnovská-Žič...
                                        XI-12.    Zbigniew Rychnovský-Žič => Zlata Bijelahrvatskića
                                            XII-3.    Jolanta Rychnovská-Žič...
                                            XII-4.    Drosuk Rychnovský-Žič
                                        XI-13.    Wizlaw Rychnovský-Žič => X-15. Maria Rychnovská-Žič (see X-15. for descendants)
                                    X-13.    Pechna Rychnovská-Žič... 
                                    X-14.    Dobroslava Rychnovská-Žič...
                                    => Eunikē Opos
                                    X-15.    Maria Rychnovská-Žič => XI-13. Wizlaw Rychnovský-Žič
                                        XI-14.    Martyna Rychnovská-Žič...
                                        XI-15.    Stefana Rychnovská-Žič
                                        XI-16.    Maria Rychnovská-Žič => XI-1. Krzysztof Rychnovský-Lehnice
                                            XII-5.    Wolisława Rychnovská-Lehnice
                                            XII-6.    Świętosława Rychnovská-Lehnice
                                IX-14.    Ján Rychnovský => VIII-2. Jaroslava Rychnovská (see VIII-2. for descendants)
                                IX-15.    Lala Rychnovská...
                                IX-16.    Kornelia Rychnovská
                                IX-17.    Marian Rychnovský
                            VIII-6.    Borislava Rychnovská
                            VIII-7.    Penka Rychnovská...
                            VIII-8.    Desislava Rychnovská...
                    VI-17.    Pravoslav Rychnovský =>
                        VII-8. Stojanka Rychnovská
                V-10.    Svatoslava Rychnovská...
                V-11.    Radomír 1. ‘hrozný’ Rychnovský => Raina Srednogorski
                    VI-18.    Dobromila Rychnovská =>
                        VII-9.    Jarmila Rychnovská
                        VII-10.    Zelimír Rychnovský...
                        VII-11.    Ladomír Rychnovský
                    VI-19.    Jakub Rychnovský => Eirēnē Drougouvitissa
                        VII-12.    Josif Rychnovský
                        VII-13.    Bratromila Rychnovská...
                        VII-14.    Alžbeta Rychnovská...
                        VII-15.    Eustach ‘staviteľ chramu’ Rychnovský => Dolz de Tourraine
                            VIII-9. Theodosie Rychnovská => Ioakim 2. Balgarsko
                                IX-18. (Ctiboh Rychnovský) => Dana Brodnica
                                    X-16.    Blahoslav Rychnovský
                                        XI-17.    Rodana Rychnovská...
                                        XI-18.    Blahomíra Rychnovská...
                                        XI-19.    Pravoslav Rychnovský
                                            XII-7.    Svorad Rychnovský
                                    X-17.    Mislava Rychnovská...
                                    X-18.    Mstislav Rychnovský => Vasilka Balgarsko-Tarnovgrad
                                        XI-20.    Lada Rychnovská
                                        XI-21.    Ludomil Rychnovský
                                        XI-22.    Ctiboh Rychnovský
                                        XI-23.    Lesana Rychnovská
                                        XI-24.    Svatoboj Rychnovský
                                        XI-25.    Kostislava Rychnovská
                                    X-19.    Miroslava Rychnovská...
                                    X-20.    Ostromír Rychnovský
                                        XI-26.    Dobrohneva Rychnovská...
                                ...
                            VIII-10. Anna Rychnovská => Nikola Struma
                                IX-19.    Bohumila Rychnovská
                                IX-20.    Dušana Rychnovská => Kisa
                                    X-21.    Puyantay Rychnovská
                                    ...
                            VIII-11.    Tomáš 1. Rychnovský => Ricciarda da Castro Arquato
                                IX-21.    Almodis Rychnovská => Heinrich
                                    X-22.    Živana Rychnovská
                                    X-23.    Dobrohneva Rychnovská
                                IX-22.    Bohodar 2. Rychnovský => Alitz Mihajlian Hrabar
                                    X-24.    Miloslav Rychnovský
                                    X-25.    Kostislava Rychnovská...
                                    X-26.    Prisnec 1. Rychnovský => IX-1. Viera Rychnovská
                                        XI-27.    Karolína Rychnovská => Harold
                                        XI-28.    Radomír 2. Rychnovský => Æþelswiþ ‘Alswit’ Wulfgifusdohtor
                                            XII-8. Bohodar 3. Rychnovský
                                        XI-19.    Spitihnev Rychnovský
                                        XI-20.    Miloboj Rychnovský
                                        XI-21.    Jaroslav Rychnovský
                                    X-27.    Alžbeta Maria Rychnovská...
                                    X-28.    (Tomáš Rychnovský)
                                IX-23.    Winefride Rychnovská
                                IX-24.    Maria Rychnovská => Daniil Lukinič
                                    X-29.    Horislava Rychnovská
                                    X-30.    Sokol Rychnovský
                                    X-31.    Blažena Rychnovská
                                    X-32.    Slávka Rychnovská
                                    X-33.    Chvalimír Rychnovský
                                IX-25.    Ivan Rychnovský
                                IX-26.    Biela Rychnovská...
                            VIII-12.    Jakub Rychnovský
                        VII-16.    Rebeka Rychnovská...
                        VII-17.    Rachel Rychnovská
                    VI-20.    Milomíra Rychnovská...
                    VI-21.    Radoslav Rychnovský
                    VI-22.    Pravoslav Rychnovský
            IV-7.    Miroslava Rychnovská
            IV-8.    Ladina Rychnovská
            IV-9.    Radomír Rychnovský
            IV-10.    Slavena Rychnovská
        III-6.    Prokop Rychnovský => Gyþa Oswealddohtor of Derby
            IV-11.    Kostislava Rychnovská => Waltheof of Chester
                V-12.    Hereberht of Chester
            IV-12.    Slavoj Rychnovský 
    II-3.    Vlasta Rychnovská => Tüzniq
        III-7.    Miroslav Rychnovský => Richenza von Arnstein
            IV-13.    Lada ‘erínysa’ Rychnovská => III-8. Jaroslav Rychnovský (see III-8. for descendants)
        III-8.    Jaroslav Rychnovský => IV-13. Lada ‘erínysa’ Rychnovská
            IV-14.    Raslav Rychnovský => Domaslava Donína
                V-13.    Nitrabor Rychnovský-Kluczbork => Alda Welf
                    VI-23.    Múdroslav Rychnovský-Kluczbork => Svetluša Kopčianská
                        VII-18.    Bohumila Rychnovská-Kluczbork...
                        VII-19.    Dalibor Rychnovský-Kluczbork => Pravdomila Aqhazar
                            VIII-13.    Držislava Rychnovská-Kluczbork => VIII-3. Blahomír Rychnovský (see VIII-3. for descendants)
                                => Ludovít Budinský
                                ...
                            VIII-14.    Dobrohneva Rychnovská-Kluczbork...
                            VIII-15.    Jaroslav Rychnovský-Kluczbork
                            => Bohunka Abovská
                            VIII-16.    Svatoslava Rychnovská-Kluczbork...
                            VIII-17.    Chvalimír Rychnovský-Kluczbork => Jaroslava Gwyr
                                IX-27.    Stanislav Rychnovský-Kluczbork => Živoslava Kopčianská
                                    X-34.    Miloslava Rychnovská-Kluczbork
                                IX-28.    Dalibor Rychnovský-Kluczbork => X-37. Ladina Rychnovská-Nisa
                                    X-35.    Jaromil Rychnovský-Kluczbork
                        => Brunilde Bonifazi
                        VII-20.    Bohuše Rychnovský-Kluczbork
                    VI-24.    Liudfredo Rychnovský-Kluczbork => Margarethe Welf
                        VII-21. Ladina Rychnovská-Kluczbork...
                        VII-22. Kveta Rychnovská-Kluczbork => VII-27. Nitrabor Rychnovský-Kluczbork
                            VIII-18.    Pravomila Rychnovská-Kluczbork...
                    VI-25.    Sokol Rychnovský-Kluczbork =>
                        VII-23.    Stastko Rychnovský-Kluczbork
                        VII-24.    Jaroslava Rychnovská-Kluczbork...
                        VII-25.    Blažena Rychnovská-Kluczbork => VIII-4. Bohuslav Rychnovský (see VIII-4. for descendants)
                    VI-26.    Berenice Rychnovská-Kluczbork...
                    VI-27.    Zdravoslav Rychnovský-Kluczbork => VII-2. Slávka Rychnovská
                        VII-26. Alda Rychnovská-Kluczbork => IX-13. Mihail Rychnovský-Žič (see IX-13. for descendants)
                        VII-27.    Nitrabor Rychnovský-Kluczbork => VII-22. Kveta Rychnovská-Kluczbork (see VII-22. for descendants)
                        VII-28. Igor Rychnovský-Kluczbork => Lesana Árpád
                            VIII-19.    Zelimír Rychnovský-Kluczbork => IX-6. Bohumila Rychnovská
                                IX-29.    Ladina Rychnovská-Nisa => Bratislav Aqhazar
                                    X-36.    Vratislav Rychnovsk‎ý-Nisa => Alžbeta Abovská-Boleslav
                                        XI-29.    Svatopluk Rychnovsk‎ý-Nisa
                                        XI-30.    Jaroslav Rychnovsk‎ý-Nisa
                                        XI-31.    Blažena Rychnovská-Nisa
                                        XI-32.    Bohdana Rychnovská-Nisa
                                    X-37.    Ladina Rychnovská-Nisa => IX-28. Dalibor Rychnovský-Kluczbork (see IX-28. for descendants)
                                    X-38.    Bratromila Rychnovská-Nisa
                            VIII-20.    Vyšemíra Rychnovská-Kluczbork...
                            VIII-21.    Zlata Rychnovská-Kluczbork...
                        => Slavena Budinská
                        VII-29. Zdravoslav Rychnovský-Kluczbork
                        VII-30. Zelimír Rychnovský-Kluczbork => Ivanka Barsa-Shumen
                            VIII-20.    Blahomíra Rychnovská-Kluczbork
                        VII-31. Vladimír Rychnovský-Kluczbork
                V-14.    Vratislav Rychnovský => VI-8. Lada Rychnovská (see VI-8. for descendants)
                V-15.    Jaroslav Rychnovský
            IV-15.    Velemír Rychnovský => Gülçiçäk Aqhazar
                V-16.    Krásnoroda Rychnovská...
                V-17.    Slavomír Rychnovský => VI-10. Kostislava Rychnovská (see VI-10. for descendants)
            IV-16.    Miroslav Rychnovský
            IV-17.    Kveta Rychnovská...
    II-4.    Krásnoroda Rychnovská => Horislav Divinský
        III-9. Velemír Divinský...
        III-10. Bohumila Divinský
    II-5.    Blažena Rychnovská => III-2. Bohodar ‘mladší’ Rychnovsk‎ý (see III-2. for descendants)
    II-6.    Slavomíra Rychnovská => Philotheos Aplakes
        III-11. Konstantia Aplakes...
        III-12. Zenobios Aplakes


Pettiness leading to murder. Against his own family. Bohodar really needs a war to take his mind off things.

Staying in a place that only screams infidelity to him won't do him any good, even if Radomír's marriage seems to be off to a good start.

Yeah, Bohodar isn't exactly at his best here. A war may be exactly what he's getting, though, and soon...
 
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Book Four Chapter Five
FIVE
Brave
22 July 1121 – 11 December 1125

There was only the dim flicker of candlelight in the pitch-black chamber, as the midwife gently encouraged Alswit to bear down—with blankets, pail, cauter and shears all ready for quick use. The light caught Alswit’s bare skin, gleaming with the perspiration and tears of the excruciating effort of birthing. Alswit Wulfgifusdohtor had been in labour all evening and all night. And Alswit had to confess, somewhere in the back of her mind amidst the contractions, that she was a trifle annoyed with this child of hers for having overstayed its welcome. Alswit was, after all, a slender, petite woman. Birthing was, to put it mildly, not a simple matter for someone of her build. But what matter had shorted her, she made up for with the stiff upper lip she’d inherited from her lowborn Mercian forebears.

Head-first, the baby emerged, and the midwife below her was ready to receive it. The head and the shoulders were clearly the most difficult, though it couldn’t be said that the rest was in any way ‘easy’. Still, twenty minutes later, the little one was out—it was a boy—and the midwife had snipped, sealed, cleaned up and dried with admirable efficiency. She handed the boy off to his mother.

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Alswit looked down at her newborn. Again, it was with a slight trace of annoyance that he’d taken this long in coming into the world, but that soon melted away when she saw his ruddy round cheeks and clever eyes. This cherub she was looking down at was disarming in many ways. Alswit could already see a great deal of his father in him—the chubby roundness and regularity of his face, the straight, cogitative nose. The thin wisps of hair on his head were brown and unruly… no doubt they would darken with age into a hue similar to his father’s. And yet—there was also more than a bit of his Mercian grandmother in him as well, particularly in his complexion!

‘Should I show him to his father?’ asked the midwife.

Alswit was still admiring her newborn son, and was reluctant to give him up. Still—yes, his father should have a look at him. The new mother handed over the child to the midwife, who beckoned Radomír into the room. Alswit found herself beaming up at her husband as Radomír was clearly taken aback by the resemblance of the little one in his arms to himself.

‘What should we name him?’ asked Radomír. ‘How about Krasislav?’

Alswit, exhausted though she was, shook her head emphatically. ‘He’s pretty, I agree, but no such great beauty as that. I’ll confess that I’d always been partial to the name Eadmund…’

Radomír made a noise which effectively communicated his disapproval.

‘No? Hm,’ Alswit smiled weakly. ‘Well then, there’s always the tried-and-true.’

‘Bohodar he is,’ Radomír agreed.

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‘That’s a name I always did like. I’m calling him Botta, though, as a nickname. It’s a little odd for a youngster like him to have the same name as his great-grandfather, still living.’

‘Botta, eh?’ Radomír considered. ‘Sounds a bit Saxon, but I suppose I can live with that.’

The little Botta began to hiccough, and then to cry weakly. Radomír handed the youngest Bohodar—the fourth of the name in the family, and in line to become the third king of that name—back to his wife to feed. Alswit accepted him, and then dragged Radomír’s cheek down toward her for her to kiss. ‘He is beautiful, though,’ she murmured to him.

‘Get some rest,’ Radomír whispered back. ‘You’ve had a long day of it, and a wet-nurse can handle Botta for now. You need your sleep.’

Alswit shook her head. ‘No, I won’t rob him of his mother so soon. Don’t worry about me.’

~~~​

‘So, did you get to see him at least?’ asked Sokol Rychnovský of his cousin, a couple of months later.

‘Sure,’ answered Prisnec. ‘Good-looking youngster.’

‘They usually are at that age,’ Sokol reflected mildly. The slender blond man was sharpening the blade of a spear on a whetstone in the middle of their camp at Rychnovek field just outside Jaroměř—a broad, wide-open green space dotted only sparsely throughout with linden. ‘God grant it that more peaceful times than these attend your Botta. Damn this farce of an uprising.’

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‘I wonder… are the sins of the fathers always visited on the children? I know what Ezekiel says. Just… you wouldn’t know it to look at what’s happening now.’

‘God only knows,’ Sokol crossed himself. ‘But who’d have thought that Vojmil and Jaropolk would be such stubborn blockheads as to mount the same rebellion that their fathers had failed to achieve? Or that Miroslav Přemyslovec would be so brainless as to join it again?’

‘Maybe they thought, with Heník Abovský gone—and the Brotherhood off fighting in Kiev—they might succeed where their fathers failed,’ Prisnec remarked.

‘Ah,’ Sokol waved the haft of the spear at his cousin. ‘But they weren’t counting on your father! We got these hirelings cheap. Didn’t you hear about the incident down in the alehouse in Olomouc?’

‘Heard of it,’ Prisnec winced eloquently. ‘Dealt with the aftermath.’

‘… All of the aftermath?’ Sokol smirked. ‘Evidently the hirelings were impressed enough with Bohodar’s prowess and gumption, that their Captain Bystrík sought out a private arrangement with him. Thanks to that little brawl, we’re getting these guys for nearly a third less than their wonted ask! They’ve even taken to calling him Bohodar odvážny—Bohodar the Brave!’

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Prisnec looked appreciatively over as two of the said mercenaries walked by them, bearing their shields and polearms with a practised composure. They had been striking their tents and preparing to move out, southward toward Znojmo with the rest of the army. ‘Hope it’s enough.’

The Moravian army, after having successfully put down the armies of Boleslav at Jaroměř, moved off southward in that direction without any delay, to forefend a thrust up through the Morava valley by the forces of the new knieža of Nitra, Vojmil Mikulčický. Prisnec took the forward position, as his father had been complaining about a growth on the skin of his inner thigh that had grown painful and ulcerous, such that he could not ride at speed on horseback. Spitihnev Rychnovský had insisted that he ride to Znojmo on a litter until he could examine it further.

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The reason a quick advance was needed, was because Dame Theodelinda of Austria had decided to throw in her lot with Knieža Vojmil—very likely in the hope of snapping up some stray lands that fell out of Bohodar’s grasp. Vojmil and Theodelinda together were laying siege to the southern town, with a force eight thousand strong, by the time Bohodar’s five and a half thousand showed up to challenge them.

The clash of arms that occurred outside Znojmo was a messy one, and although the Moravians pressed the Austrians hard, they could not gain the upper hand. The numbers were on the Austrians’s side. As a result, the company of Austrian knights was too well-defended, and their light skirmishers gave them an extra edge that they would not otherwise have had against the Moravian zbrojnošov.

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However, it was not long into the afternoon before the main force of Bystrík’s mercenaries showed up. Bystrík, who commanded a force including bowmen and a detachment of light skirmishers, could not have been timelier in his arrival. The mercenaries’ presence gave new heart to the Moravian defenders of Znojmo—the bowmen in particular pinned down the Austrian flanks so they could no longer pick off the Moravians from the sides. Prisnec pressed his advantage amid the changing tide, and pressed forward on the Austrians’ right flank. Scanning the tangle of pole-arms and shield-rims from his vantage-point, he saw the black banner of the knight he sought, and plunged toward it with his sword drawn. Amid the struggle he found himself face-to-face with the senior Austrian knight Luder.

The two of them fought several passes with each other. Luder had wiles and experience on his side, but Prisnec had youth and patience both. Luder made several feints with his blade that Prisnec saw through only at the last split-second, but he carefully examined the Austrian’s stance for weaknesses all the same. His patience won out in the end—Luder overstepped, and Prisnec plunged forward with deadly intent. Luder collapsed, but two of his men came to fetch him back before Prisnec could finish him off.

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In the end, Znojmo was saved, and the men marched eastward to Hodonín to fend off the Carpatho-Russian assault on that town, before turning again to the north to make another stand against the Bohemian rebels at Kladsko.

At Kladsko, it was Radomír Rychnovský who had the opportunity to distinguish himself in battle. Chvalimír Rychnovský-Kluczbork had sent his son Stanislav forward on a brave sally to meet the Moravians in an attempt to misdirect their centre. However, watching this, Bohodar understood the nature of the feint, and sent his grandson against Stanislav and his riders. Radomír launched forward against his kinsmen from the west, and fought twenty passes against Stanislav. But: one blow from Radomír’s spear to Stanislav’s neck and it was all over. The elder son of the hrabě of Doudleby fell from his horse, and did not rise.

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Of course, Radomír had good incentive to fight hard. He had a newborn son waiting for him at home, and not only that, but the fond farewell he had bidden his wife prior to going on campaign had borne fruit. Alswit was once again pregnant. By the time Radomír came back, Botta would already have a younger sibling.

The elder Bohodar, however, had only grown worse. The ulcerous tumour on the inside of his leg had swollen and grown angrier. The king was brought into a tent where the blind giant doctor awaited him. Bohodar consented to be put to sleep while the blind man set to work with his fingers and blades to remove the tumour once and for all.

Spitihnev was over-zealous in his ministrations. He found too late in his biopsy that he had cut the king’s leg far too deeply, such that the entire leg would have to be removed cleanly. But even as he was cauterising the wound, Spitihnev had felt the evil signs. The tumour’s tendrils within the king’s body had spread, and the cancer was present throughout his body. Spitihnev had failed, utterly, to save the king’s life. Bohodar odvážny never awakened, and it was left to Prisnec to complete this campaign against the rebels.

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Book Four Chapter Six
The Reign of Prisnec 1., Kráľ of Veľká Morava

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(I wasn't lying when I said he was a short drink of water...)


SIX
Love Is Blind
24 March 1126 – 21 May 1127


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The naked hillside, white with exposed gneiss and quartz, reflected the brilliance of the sun as well as the gleams of the helms and spears and shield-rims of the Moravian Army as they drew up lines just outside the Hory Kutné mining complex at Čáslav. Facing them, across the field that bordered the mine entrance on one side, were the combined armies of the rebelling Bohemians, Nitrans and Rusins, with Miroslav Přemyslovec at their head. Prisnec Rychnovský, who after his father’s death had all of the duties of a king and a commander in battle yet none of the honours as yet, rode forward on his horse and called out to Miroslav.

‘Plzen, Žatec and Litoměřice have fallen,’ Prisnec said. ‘You’ve got no way back. Surrender now, and I’ll show mercy.’

Miroslav Přemyslovec, across the field, declaimed, ‘We have more riders and zbrojnošov than you have! And from the latest tidings, your father is dead of a tumour. God, having taken him, has already decided against you, and our cause has been proven just. You are the one who should yield yourself, Prisnec.’

There was little else for it but to fight it out. Prisnec grimly refused to let the crown lands of Čáslav out of his grasp, particularly not for the likes of these stubborn rebels. True, his father’s death had been ominous, but surely they had to know that this would be their last chance? Prisnec rode back to his line and gave the signal to attack.

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The two lines met each other with an almighty clash. Although it was true that Prisnec had fewer personal retainers than the rebels did, and that he had no riders and only a handful of zbrojnošov, the Moravian loyalists nathless did have a slight advantage in numbers, and Prisnec ensured that the best use was made of them. Keeping his zbrojnošov front and centre, and his bowmen on the rocky hill-slopes to his left, he sent his cousin and aide-de-camp, the half-Rusin Sokol Rychnovský, to spread the mass levies wide and surround the enemy on the plain ground.

Sokol managed a fine showing. Knowing his enemy as well as he did, he was easily able to take advantage of the ordinary linemen with their axes and billhooks, as well as the light skirmisher detachment of which he had command, and met the Bohemian burgomaster Miloboj as he tried to fight his way out of the envelopment. The half-Rusin dealt the burgomaster a heavy blow with his shield and sent him reeling to earth.

The battle of Čáslav was won by patient attrition. Prisnec knew he could afford to wait his opponents out, trapping them against the rocky hillside and slowly grinding them down. When the surrender finally came, it was absolute. The rebellion was over. Vojmil Mikulčický, Jaropolk Pavelkov, Chvalimír Rychnovský-Kluczbork and the rest surrendered themselves, and were brought back to Olomouc in shackles, while their surviving troops were permitted to return home.

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Prisnec returned first, not to Olomouc but to Velehrad, where the solemnities of his coronation were observed. When he got to Olomouc, it was already late in the evening, and when he retired to his chamber he found Viera already fast asleep in their bed. Prisnec smiled as he traced her olive cheek, and then removed from the breast of his cotte a folded piece of vellum which he slid deftly underneath her pillow. The queen stirred, but did not wake. There would be time enough for her to read soon enough.

The letter contained every private thought Prisnec had sought to write down and confide in her while he was out on campaign. It also contained such ardent expressions of a husband’s affection that it would be scandal if seen by anyone else. But, if there was ever to be an opportunity for him to pour out his heart to her… it would have to be now. The duties of kingship awaited him, and he didn’t know when he would get another such chance.

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Prisnec reflected that he’d been incredibly lucky in his marriage. She’d given him a daughter and several fine sons (though it was a shame what had happened to Spitihnev). And now they had a new granddaughter by Radomír and Alswit, Katarína, to go along with their grandson Bohodar.

Beautiful as Viera was—dusky, leggy, statuesque—it truly had been her temperament that had won him over. Though her strength was formidable and her swarthy beauty somewhat forbidding, in the end no husband could ask for a more understanding, sweeter or more mild-tempered wife. Everything about her was loveable: her graceful step, the meek tilt of her head, the rich mellow contralto of her voice. Viera was exquisite, and Prisnec was determined not to neglect her or be shy of expressing it to her, even while he had a kingdom to run.

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The loving husband did not have long to wait for a reply. Viera sent him back a letter which left him in no doubt of her own affections and where they lay. It sparked off a spirited written correspondence between the two, which somehow felt just as intimate as pillow-talk.

With most of his Bohemian lords in prison, Prisnec found he would have to rely on outsiders to keep the peace along the western border. The most promising of these were a group of mountain-dwelling Silesians. A delegation from these Silesians arrived in Olomouc in late May of 1126. A grim, grizzled, one-eyed fellow with broad shoulders was the one to meet the king. Although this formidable Silesian veritably towered over the trimly-built king, Prisnec greeted him amicably. Prisnec was not a man easily intimidated, a fact best demonstrated with a single gesture rather than by pressing the point. The Silesian reached out a respectful hand, which Prisnec shook.

‘And why have you summoned us here? What would you have of my folk, O Kráľ?’ said the man.

‘Ward off the Franks and the Austrians from my Western march,’ Prisnec spoke directly, ‘and you’ll earn your keep.’

The grizzled Silesian nodded appreciatively, approving of this king’s laconic directness. ‘Not lightly do the Chodové tread,’ he told the king. ‘Once we are there, we intend to stay.’

‘I have no problems,’ Prisnec told him mildly. ‘And those who might are safe in my fonsels.’

The Chod threw his head back and let out a long, booming laugh. ‘In that case, I’m happy to agree.’

‘Handsome animal you’ve got,’ Prisnec nodded to the attractive black-and-brown dog that was happily wagging its tail at the Chod’s side.

‘Sheepdog,’ the Chod told him. ‘She whelped not four weeks back. I still have a couple of the pups to sell, if you’re interested.’

‘I am indeed interested.’

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But it wasn’t for himself. The little chodský pes pup he ended up buying from the one-eyed Silesian was a gift. Prisnec knew that a king’s position would be demanding upon his time; it would be good for his wife to have a companion, one who would remind her pleasantly of him. When he presented the little black-and-brown sheepdog puppy to his wife, Viera at once went into raptures over it.

‘It’s adorable,’ she crooned. ‘He or she?’

‘He, I think,’ Prisnec answered her frankly.

Viera smiled sweetly. ‘I’m sure we’ll be best of friends. Come here, you!’

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All was well. However…

One day in the middle of October, Viera fell ill and had to be confined to her rooms. As the Kráľ was passing by on the way to the council chambers in the castle, he heard a blood-curdling shriek. That voice—it couldn’t be Viera’s…?

Prisnec, royal dignity and his own wonted patience cast aside, broke into a run as he hurried to his wife’s chambers. He burst into the chamber, and what he saw there would sear itself into his nightmares for the rest of his life.

Spitihnev Rychnovský stood on one side of the room, a bloody scalpel in his shaking hand, while Viera lay on the other side of the room. She was covering her face with her hands, which were red and slick with blood.

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‘Viera…’ Prisnec reached toward her.

‘Stay away! Don’t look at me!’ she wailed. Agony, fright, despair all mingled in that voice, and it broke her husband’s heart. Still Prisnec reached toward her and gripped her wrist, easing it away from her face.

The entire right side of Viera’s face had been torn open, and was unrecognisable. Her right eye, though closed, still seemed to be intact, but it appeared as though the socket all around it had been crushed. Part of her nose was gone.

‘Someone,’ Prisnec’s voice trembled, ‘get me clean rags and some strong wine. And a veil.’

‘Please…’ Viera gasped. ‘Don’t look at me…’

Prisnec stood and faced Spitihnev, who still stood dumbstruck. Icily the king said to him: ‘You… will never touch a patient again. Guard.’

‘Sire!’

‘Take him.’

‘Where, sire?’

‘Out of my sight. For good.’

The guard led the blind giant out of the room. He made no struggle. Another servant brought Prisnec some clean rags and strong wine, and the husband began ministering to the grievous wounds upon his wife’s face. That side of her face, no matter what he did now, would never heal back to any semblance of beauty. The undamaged side looked at her husband in reproach.

‘Please,’ Viera told him. ‘Leave me be. I’m hideous, I know it… You won’t want to look at me anymore.’

Prisnec caught his wife’s hand and held it tenderly.

‘Don’t you remember what I told you—the first time I said I loved you?’

Viera shook her head.

‘I told you… It’s not about how you look. It never was.’

Prisnec laid a kiss on his wife’s undamaged cheek. And she wept silently as her husband continued to tend to the damaged one.

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I now know about Bohemia Shepherds. Spitihnev is a Quack who has never heard of the Hippocratic Oath! Do no Harm. Prisnec seems like a good man. What is the difference between Bohemian and Czech? I see them used interchangeably. Thank you for the update.
 
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King Bohodar II is freed from his demons and troublesome vassals. Long live King Prisnec. I notice that you sometimes, and sometimes not, rename babies. Any rhyme or reason to your policy. Thank you for bringing King Bohodar II to my attentio.n
I now know about Bohemia Shepherds. Spitihnev is a Quack who has never heard of the Hippocratic Oath! Do no Harm. Prisnec seems like a good man. What is the difference between Bohemian and Czech? I see them used interchangeably. Thank you for the update.

Thank you for the comments, @Midnite Duke! My apologies for not having gotten to your first one before Chapter Six went up.

Re: naming babies. I don't really have a 'policy' on that score, other than the one of, do I like this name or not, and does it sound appropriately dignified for a king? With regard to Bohodar/Krasislav, it was more a matter of me wanting to get more digits behind the name.

Prisnec is a decent man, I agree! Before doing this AAR, too, I had no idea about a lot of the different Czech dog breeds either.

Is there a difference between Bohemian and Czech? Not really. They refer to the same place and the same people. I think the only difference is that one comes from German [Böhmen] and the other comes from the Czech language itself [Čechy]. Sometimes Bohemian/Czech is used in contradistinction to Moravian, which was a separate geography/dialect/regional identity throughout the early Middle Ages.
 
Book Four Chapter Seven
SEVEN
Best of Enemies
10 June 112719 April 1129


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‘How has it happened that two high-value hostages have escaped your watch?’ Prisnec asked the captain of the castle guard.

‘I—I am sorry, milord,’ the captain stammered as he stood at attention. ‘I promise you, those directly responsible for overseeing them will be dealt with.’

‘It is… unacceptable,’ Prisnec said softly. Somehow, Prisnec’s deliberate calm was more unnerving than if he had blown up in his temper. The captain of the guard gulped. ‘You will deal with the matter appropriately,’ the king added.

The captain of the guard stood at rigid attention and then gave a brisk and emphatic ‘Súhlas, pane!

Prisnec let him stew a little bit. Then he walked off at a brisk pace. Not one, but two of the rebellious lords—Vojmil Mikulčický of Nitra, and Chvalimír Rychnovský-Kluczbork of Doudleby—had somehow slipped the net and returned to their own lands. Prisnec was sure they wouldn’t try to rise in open revolt again so soon, but he certainly would need to make additionally sure of his security. At least Spitihnev hadn’t escaped… thank God for small favours.

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Spitihnev Rychnovský, having proven unfit for any kind of healing craft, of course had to be replaced. Of the candidates that his agents had brought back to Olomouc, only one of them seemed to show any promise… a leech of Trenčín named Kveta Kostolanská.

Prisnec had set before each of the candidates a basic task as a measure of their competence, and Kveta was the only one who had accomplished it satisfactorily. However, she had not been otherwise terribly prepossessing. She was very nearly as withdrawn and taciturn as Prisnec’s mother was, though that had not stopped certain amorous visitors from trying to reach her at Anna’s old house. Also…

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The Kráľ heard a shrill voice piercing the air long before he reached the outskirts of the city. Prisnec angled his walk toward where it came from and proceeded calmly there. As he approached he could make out that it was Kveta’s voice, firing off a blue streak of curses, threats and imprecations on the sexual habits of various members of someone’s family. Prisnec waited outside Kveta’s residence until the storm of emotion had subsided slightly, then knocked.

‘Yes? What? Who is it?’ came Kveta’s voice, still irate.

‘The king,’ answered Prisnec equably.

‘Oh… but I… oh, alright, come in.’

As Prisnec entered, he noticed that Kveta’s hair was dishevelled, probably from having pulled at it. Her eyes were also bleary and red-rimmed. She kept her eyes cast low in mortification at what he’d overheard, and she wrung her hands silently in front of her. Prisnec went instead to her table, where a book lay open along with some notes, which had been scattered all over the room as though someone had flung them about. (Which, probably, she had.) Prisnec examined the volume.

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De facultatibus naturalibus,’ Prisnec read, and nodded approvingly. ‘I see you know the classics.’

Kveta dared a scoff. ‘I know my Klaudios Galēnos well enough to know that whoever translated that volume is a fraud. Sire.’

Prisnec thumbed through the rest of the volume. It seemed to him at least that the Greek original had been appended to it, so if needed he might be able to help her out. ‘Would you like some help?’ asked the Kráľ. ‘Maybe a fresh pair of eyes…’

Kveta managed a nod. ‘If you could, milord… I would be most grateful!’

Prisnec left Anna’s old house and walked again into the streets of Olomouc. He took a rather longer and more roundabout path than he normally would have done to get home, and he made something of a run of it… undignified though that might seem. Prisnec found that his mind was clearer if he took things at a bit of a run; everything seemed a bit easier to manage upon his return. Besides, he wanted to see for himself how the improvements to the local glassworks and mills were coming along. Olomouc was quickly growing into a thriving town on par with some of those in East Francia, like Köln… If asked, Prisnec would modestly and with due filial reverence have told anyone that such improvements had been going on at least since Eustach’s time. However, the truth was that Prisnec had taken charge of some of these ongoing projects with a far greater zeal and force of will than his father had done, or even his grandfather Tomáš.

Prisnec noted to his satisfaction, as he rounded the corner by the glassworks and trotted along past the mill on his way back to the castle, that both of the instalments were busy and bustling, and their businesses looked to be thriving accordingly. There was, however, one other issue that needed settling before the day was out. His Hungarian guests would be arriving today.

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‘Come,’ said Prisnec gently to his grandson as he returned from his run. ‘Your betrothed is waiting.’

Dedo,’ the little five-year-old Bohodar objected. ‘Uncle Milo told me that Magyars are our enemies—they’re bad. They steal our sheep, steal our land, kill people. Why I hafta marry one of them?’

Prisnec knelt down and gripped little Bohodar by the shoulders.

‘Listen to me, Botta. Krescencie’s still a child, not much older than you. And no child’s born bad. We don’t believe that. Also: no národ are all good or all bad. When I was young, I used to think all the severané were bad. But then I met some who were good—like your mother. You understand me?’

Bohodar nodded, chastened and a bit ashamed.

‘Besides… I’ve already met Krescencie. She’s a sweet girl. I think you’ll like her!’

Bohodar pulled a long face. But he slid his hand dutifully into his grandfather’s and went to meet this Magyar girl who was to become his wife. The little five-year-old was still incensed at the idea of even having a wife. A girl, of all people, living together with him? Telling him what to do? Sleeping in the same bed? How revolting. It was not to be borne. Well… there were ways out of any scrape, though he knew that directly gainsaying his dedo was not likely to be one of them. Also, Bohodar couldn’t help wondering about this Magyar girl his grandfather was planning to marry him off to. Although Uncle Miloboj had told him the stories of their savagery, he’d also heard they were fine riders and keen archers. Curiosity won out in him over offence as he accompanied his grandfather out to the courtyard as the betrothal party fared their way through the gates.

Károly was a tall, proud Ugor, sitting high in the saddle, with a plumed helmet and lamellar armour. Bohodar had to admit that the warrior looked formidable – tall and imposing, with a fierce aspect. Although he had the round face, high cheekbones and Asiatic eyes of his people, nevertheless Bohodar noticed that his hair – kept in twin braids behind his neck-guard – was as fair as flax. So too were the moustaches and forked beard that he wore.

Behind him was riding a girl of about nine or ten. Bohodar’s wary hazel-green eyes looked her over. Her face didn’t quite fit his idea of beauty. She had the same high cheekbones as her brother, a sharp jawline, a short cogitative nose, a mouth that seemed too wide for her face, and lips too narrow. But: two amber eyes glinted perceptively beneath a pair of dark, level brows—looks-wise, those were strong points in her favour. And unlike her brother’s fair hair, her wavy hair was a silky sable-brown, bedecked with silver ornaments and covered with a silken riding-cap. She wore a riding kaftan and jacket.

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Károly lit down, and helped his sister out of her saddle. This ‘Krescencie’ now looked Bohodar over every bit as intently as he’d been looking her over. The intensity of her regard caused him to flush pink and fidget nervously.

Csinos öcsä!’ the girl tugged on her brother’s sleeve, smiling shyly and pointing to Bohodar with her whole hand. Károly put her off gently and said something back to her in the same unknown language, which Bohodar presumed was Magyar.

Ééééih? Az eljegyzésem…?’ the girl breathed wonderingly, approaching Bohodar and looking over him with new curiosity. Again Bohodar blushed, finding himself uncertain as to what to do with his hands.

Csinos öcsä,’ the girl repeated approvingly, reaching over and gently patting him on the head with one slender well-kept hand. Bohodar flinched at the touch, though her hand was smooth. ‘Bo-Ho-Dárr?’

‘Yes, I’m Bohodar,’ the boy answered. He lifted a hand back to her. ‘Krescencie?’

The girl giggled behind her hand. ‘Czenzi,’ she corrected him.

It was a little simpler to say than he’d thought: ‘Zen-zhee’, Bohodar tried. The girl gave a quirk of her head and a shrug, as if to say, ‘close enough’.

The grown-ups were busy talking shop over them. Prisnec and Károly were already busily talking about bride-price, dowry and military alliance. Krescencie-Czenzi kept looking over Bohodar. The five-year-old was a bit put out by this nine-year-old girl’s interest in him. It felt a bit unnerving, like he was a slice of fresh meat being weighed up at a flesher’s shop. But at the same time it was strangely flattering to be looked at with such interest by a girl. At length, Krescencie-Czenzi held out one of her slender hands.

Akjantahta velem jönni?’ she asked. ‘Bo-Ho-Dárr?

It was clear that she wanted Bohodar to come with her. Bohodar took her hand. It was warm. She tugged him toward her brother, and got Károly’s attention. She exchanged several words with him. Although it seemed Károly disapproved, in the end he allowed Czenzi to take Bohodar with her as long as he could talk uninterrupted with Kráľ Prisnec.

Delighted, Czenzi flashed a grin back to Bohodar and took him hand-in-hand with her out the outer gate into the town. Bohodar had never had a big sister—he was the oldest—but somehow, following her like this felt like what he imagined having a big sister would be.

She didn’t take him that far, in fact. Bohodar soon found that Czenzi only wanted to explore the Morava River by the north bridge. She took him by the hand down to the riverside, undid her jacket, kicked off her felt boots and unwrapped the leggings from her feet, and then went wading in the water. It was the middle of April, so the Morava wasn’t as frigid with recent snowmelt as it had been hitherto, but Czenzi still let out a shriek of mingled shock and delight as she dipped her toes in the still-chilly water.

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Gyakran jön ide?’ asked Czenzi when she turned around. ‘A folyóparthoz?

Bohodar shrugged noncommittally, not understanding. But Czenzi seemed satisfied, and began exploring up and down the water’s edge, turning over rocks and picking up stray bits of wood. Bohodar watched as Czenzi played for a while, and then unbooted and unwrapped his own feet to join her in the stream. Czenzi enjoyed the running water and its attendant diversions, and soon the hem of her undertunic was wet with the Morava’s spray. She didn’t mind that one bit, but kept playing in and around it.

Bohodar had waded further in and turned over a rock in the shallows to see the bottom, when he was suddenly peppered all across the face and neck and chest with a heavy spray of droplets—coming from Czenzi’s direction. He turned just in time to hear her giggle.

Áztatlak, öcsä!’ she crowed, as she bent down, cupped another handful of water and flung it at him.

Bohodar gave an enraged sputter and ran after her, flinging water after her in return. But her legs were longer than his. She could move faster. And she had longer, stronger arms. Her effective range was better. All of Bohodar’s splashes seemed to fall short, while her sprays caught him full in the face or arms or belly.

Ázott! Ázott! Ázott Bo-Ho-Dárr!’ she taunted him in singsong, laughing. ‘Megint eltaláltalak!

Bohodar took a long stride toward her, lost his footing, and fell right over, face-down in the river. He came up sputtering. When the water got out of his eyes and he could see again, he found Czenzi standing over him. She wasn’t gloating or crowing now; her amber eyes were all concern. She was reaching down a hand to help him up.

Bohodar, still riled, shot one short little leg out of the water and shoved it against her shins—hard. Czenzi lost her footing and fell face-forward on top of him. Now she was soaked, too. She came up, spurted a bit of water out of her mouth and dragged the dripping strands of sable hair away from her eyes. And then she looked at Bohodar, a slow grin spreading across her face. She let out a peal of mirth. Bohodar’s heart felt a little lighter. At least she could be a sport!

Kölyök,’ she chuckled, as she splashed him again with water.

The tension between them was gone, and they had a spirited bout of horseplay in the water as a pair of brothers might do. When they were both tired and muddy and thoroughly soaked, Czenzi and Bohodar dragged themselves up the bank and lay on the stones, side by side. The older girl was taller and leggier than Bohodar was, but she had a sense of humour, and she could play. And the five-year-old suddenly felt that maybe, despite her being a Magyar with an unknown tongue, living together with her might not be the torment he’d feared it would be after all.

Czenzi had rolled away to one side. Bohodar could tell from the way she moved her shoulders that she had picked something up that lay on the ground next to her, and that she was now examining it with mounting curiosity.

‘What you got there?’ asked Bohodar, propping himself up and craning his neck over to see.

Czenzi teased him a bit by pretending to hide what she’d found. But then she opened her arms, turned again onto her back, and sat up to show him her find. Bohodar found himself looking at an oblong mussel shell. It wasn’t large—only the size of his little palm—but it was perfectly shaped. It was in fact only a half-shell; the bivalve to which it had once belonged had either died or moved on. But the inside was wondrously pearlescent, with shiny grooves and rings of sundry and delicate pastel hues radiating out from the nadir.

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‘Pretty,’ Bohodar marvelled. ‘Pekná…’

Pekná?’ asked Czenzi, pointing to the shell.

Bohodar shook his head. ‘Shell? Lastúra.’

Lasztúr-r-ra.’ Czenzi tried it. Her tongue rolled a bit as she did so. ‘Bo-Ho-Dárr. Pekná.

Bohodar shook his head. ‘No, no! I’m a boy, not a shell – don’t call me pretty! You can say: Bohodar je bystrý.’

Bo-Ho-Dárr je bisztr-rí,’ Czenzi tried. ‘Bo-Ho-Dárr: lastúr-ra.’

Czenzi put the shell into his hand, and closed his fingers around its rough side. She looked intently at him, making her meaning as clear as possible. ‘Ez ajándék a tied. Kösz a ma.

‘Thanks,’ Bohodar told Czenzi, unknowingly echoing her. He stood up and offered her his hand again, and they traipsed up the bank onto the bridge and went back into the castle courtyard.

A sight they made for their respective caretakers! The two were bedraggled and scratched-up, with sopping clothes. Károly at once began to berate Czenzi with a tone of high authority, but Czenzi evidently knew how to get around to his good side. Soon Károly was laughing at the story she was telling.

‘I must congratulate you, little Bohodar,’ Károly told the youngster. ‘Czenzi tells me that you play a little rough with her, but it’s okay because you’re a cute little brother and she likes you.’

Bohodar felt his face get hot again. But he didn’t correct him—or her—on that point. That entire description should rather have applied to Czenzi: she was the one who’d been playing rough with him in the water. And, of course, he’d found her kind of a neat big sister, and a sport. But he didn’t want to admit that to her just yet.

Bohodar didn’t really remember much else of Czenzi’s betrothal visit. But he did remember his grandfather asking him: ‘Well? What did you think of her?’

Suhlás,’ Bohodar shrugged. But he still clutched in his hand the pearlescent mussel shell she gave him.

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Wonderful, cute little betrothal. Starting off as brother/sister at five could lead to a wonderful marriage at sixteen. An oyster shell may be cheaper than a diamond ring and have more meaning. Thank you for inviting me to the meeting.
 
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The girl giggled behind her hand. ‘Czenzi,’ she corrected him.
It is great to meet you finally, Czenzi.

If she has also pearly hairs, then there will be also the chance of a beautiful song for the story too. Álmodtam vagy igaz talán.


In that regard, have to make a slight necro-mention on the previous discussion. Sincere apologies for the disruption in advance.


This was an interesting interlude. However, I should mention that as an alternate history enthusiast, seeing people from the real world in a setting that diverged from ours 1100 years ago just kind of bugs me.

Still a good post, however.
Have to say hard disagree on the subject of what is to be included in the fiction of the writAAR. The story belongs to only and only to the writAAR, and the readAARs are only bound to the infinite limits of the imagined worlds created in that mind.

Moreover, in consideration of a criticism for the intersecting points of the fiction and the real despite a divergence in the course of the timeline; that addition -in this case the existence of Miyazaki Hayao within the world of The Lions of Olomouc, along with the actors in the animated film- is not a disruptive nor a skewed concept of space-time continuum by the entropy increase leading to the impossible-possibilities of such coincidences; no, and it can be regarded as a homage to the director by the writAAR, creating Serenade of the Magpie in this world instead of Princess Mononoke (1997).

And thus, that reference is beautiful.


And yes, moreover; on checking the image in the Interlude IX again;

The characters do not look as a fan-art found from the net or else etc. Therefore will claim that the image was created specifically for the story by the writAAR.

That is the ultimate dedication of the creatAAR for the aesthetic. Even if this claim may not be true and whether it is only an image found from any other third-source, the composition of the laserdisc cover is still remarkable.


Only one word remains to be written for @Revan86: Kudos.



(Yeah, by the way, on the graphics: The arrow shaft floats in the air rather than being held by the Czenzi character, and the antler is jumping from the air over the edge of the cliff, though. Not sure about the scabbard's position too. Sorry for highlighting the details; old habit learned from family).
 
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Wonderful, cute little betrothal. Starting off as brother/sister at five could lead to a wonderful marriage at sixteen. An oyster shell may be cheaper than a diamond ring and have more meaning. Thank you for inviting me to the meeting.

You are most welcome!

It can be difficult to write scenes for children, but here somehow the personalities of Czenzi and Bohodar suggested themselves fairly readily.

It is great to meet you finally, Czenzi.

If she has also pearly hairs, then there will be also the chance of a beautiful song for the story too. Álmodtam vagy igaz talán.

Cheers, @filcat!

(However, the pearly hair song reference is one which rather eludes me...)

In that regard, have to make a slight necro-mention on the previous discussion. Sincere apologies for the disruption in advance.

Have to say hard disagree on the subject of what is to be included in the fiction of the writAAR. The story belongs to only and only to the writAAR, and the readAARs are only bound to the infinite limits of the imagined worlds created in that mind.

Moreover, in consideration of a criticism for the intersecting points of the fiction and the real despite a divergence in the course of the timeline; that addition -in this case the existence of Miyazaki Hayao within the world of The Lions of Olomouc, along with the actors in the animated film- is not a disruptive nor a skewed concept of space-time continuum by the entropy increase leading to the impossible-possibilities of such coincidences; no, and it can be regarded as a homage to the director by the writAAR, creating Serenade of the Magpie in this world instead of Princess Mononoke (1997).

And thus, that reference is beautiful.

And yes, moreover; on checking the image in the Interlude IX again;

The characters do not look as a fan-art found from the net or else etc. Therefore will claim that the image was created specifically for the story by the writAAR.

That is the ultimate dedication of the creatAAR for the aesthetic. Even if this claim may not be true and whether it is only an image found from any other third-source, the composition of the laserdisc cover is still remarkable.

Only one word remains to be written for @Revan86: Kudos.

(Yeah, by the way, on the graphics: The arrow shaft floats in the air rather than being held by the Czenzi character, and the antler is jumping from the air over the edge of the cliff, though. Not sure about the scabbard's position too. Sorry for highlighting the details; old habit learned from family).

Again, @filcat, cheers!

I confess to being somewhat influenced by Star Trek at least in terms of how alternate histories / mirror universes can 'rhyme' with each other, even if the divergence point is located centuries in the past. The rough sketch of the LaserDisc cover art (yes, that's a @Revan86 original, flaws and all!) actually came before the text of the interlude, and I based the interlude on the sketch art.


EIGHT
Ladina
17 May 1129 – 15 February 1132


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The family of Rychnovský-Kluczbork had a reputation. Arguably, it was a reputation which went back all the way to the founder of the cadet line, Nitrabor the One-Eyed, who became the šafár for Eustach staviteľ chramu by means probably best left unexamined. But whereas the Rychnovský family in the main line had largely focussed on martial and intellectual pursuits, their cadet branch centred in the Opole region had specialised in the subtler arts of intrigue and manipulation.

The family seat in Kluczbork was awash in dark whispers and murmured secrets. Nitrabor himself had been an infamous libertine as well as a blackmailer. Among his three sons, the eldest Múdroslav was stabbed to death and the second Sokol was poisoned. The family headship had thus passed on to his third and youngest son, Zdravoslav. Zdravoslav, the most cunning and ruthless of his father’s sons, had revelled in his sinister deeds. He had gleefully tortured and executed his own kinsman Blahomír Rychnovský; and in addition had been implicated in the unlawful death of Božena Kopčianská of Nitra, the only daughter of Knieža Radislav.

Zdravoslav’s descendants—most of whom suffered from various forms of deformity on account of his successive unions with two close kinswomen (Slávka Rychnovská and Slavena Budínská)—had followed gladly in the footsteps of their father and grandfather. Two of his inbred sons, also named Nitrabor and Zdravoslav, had been killed in battle against the severané shortly after their majority. Among the two surviving offspring, his one-eyed son Igor, having been raised in such a household, had developed an acute sense of paranoia, and this was understandable given that his younger brother Zelimír happened to be a criminally-violent lunatic. The bloody succession struggle between Igor and Zelimír had ended only with Zelimír being brutally impaled and eviscerated by a group of Igor’s loyalists. But that hadn’t stopped Igor, in a stroke of what might have been either malice or obdurate affection, from naming his only son and heir after his dead brother.

As such: those who crossed a Rychnovský-Kluczbork were said to suffer from strange cases of disappearance or sudden illness, and as such there were likely more than a few skeletons in more than a few of the estate’s closets. Incest was far from unknown among the Rychnovských, the affectionate union between Bohodar 1. and his aunt Blažena having been officially sanctioned (though spoken of thereafter among clergy and the pious laity with a certain degree of shame and embarrassment). However, the Rychnovských-Kluczbork line revelled in the perversion. Each and every bedroom in the Opole estate was said to have been defiled with the heat and sweat and mingled bodily fluids of mother and son, father and daughter, or brother and sister at one point or another—and that was in addition to the church-sanctioned unions between cousins of varying degrees. It is worth note that English author and 18th-century pioneer of Gothic horror, Cuthred Alderman, had stayed as a guest for about two years at the old Rychnovský-Kluczbork estate between 1780 and 1782, doing research for his novels.

The current vojvodkyňa of this storied estate, Ladina Rychnovská-Nisa, was the fruit of the union between Igor’s son—the second Zelimír—and Zelimír’s cousin Bohumila. (Bohumila, in turn, was the daughter of the aforementioned Blahomír Rychnovský, who had been tortured to death by Zelimír’s grandfather Zdravoslav, with Zdravoslav’s niece Držislava Rychnovská-Kluczbork.) She had inherited the manor and surrounding lands from Vojvod Igor upon his death in 1084. She had then been fifteen years of age.

Despite being the fruit of such a horrendously-tangled self-pollinating family tree, and despite having grown up in—and become mistress of—such a hothouse of madness, torture, murder, paranoia, intrigue and incestuous lust, Ladina Rychnovská-Nisa was a fairly well-adjusted individual. There were no visual or habitual traces of her family’s inbreeding on her. Indeed, she had a fairly pretty face, good health and a formidably-intelligent mind. More to the point: the vojvodkyňa had taken great pains to distance herself from the dark reputation of her forebears.

Firstly, she had founded her own cadet branch of Rychnovský-Nisa, symbolically distancing herself from the sinister Rychnovský-Kluczbork legacy. She took a lenient policy with the local Silesians, and also took it upon herself to be charitable to pilgrims and the homeless. However, she was cautious to a fault, and took great pains not to place herself at risk. As her consort, she had chosen Bratislav Aqhazar—a man who far preferred samelies with other men (in secret) to women, and who was as cautious and fastidious of comportment as she herself was. And if she ever used the secret compartments and passageways of her family estate at all, it was only to assure herself of an easy route of escape at need. She had never hurt any of her servants, and anyone she imprisoned was assured of a short sentence and decent treatment.

‘Are you well back there, milady?’

The driver of her carriage had looked back at the vojvodkyňa, who smiled. He needn’t have worried. Even though she was now a widow of sixty-one years, she was still healthy, and as keen of mind as ever she had been. She only wished she hadn’t put on so much girth in the years since Bratislav’s death. ‘I am quite well, thank you. How far off are we yet from Olomouc?’

‘Shouldn’t be far, milady. We passed Bělkovice a couple of miles back on the road. We should be in Olomouc within a couple of hours.’

‘It has been rather awhile since I last attended a royal feast,’ Ladina remarked, half to herself. ‘I do hope that the standards of hospitality in Olomouc haven’t degraded too far from what they were in Tomáš’s time. Now that man—he knew how to hold a feast!’

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‘I believe so, milady.’

Ladina scoffed lightly. ‘You are far too young to say that for yourself with any authority,’ she told her driver tolerantly. ‘I’ve seen two kings of Moravia before this one come and go. It will be quite informative to see how this young Prisnec has shaped up.’

When they arrived at last in Olomouc Castle, Ladina Rychnovská-Nisa was conducted graciously into the banqueting hall, and was seated together with the other vojvodovia and kniežatá in a place of high honour. Ladina saw at once she herself needn’t have worried about the standards of hospitality. Whole roast calves and pigs on spits graced the tables; there were huge amphorai of good Greek wine; rich wafts of cumin, mint, coriander and liquorice teased their way delectably into Ladina’s discerning nose; rich glazes of honey and cream gleamed appetizingly upon the egg-breads and sweets of the feast. To judge from the outlay of the food alone, this was as grand a feast as any that Ladina remembered attending in Tomáš’s day. Indeed, the table-settings, with their riotously-coloured blown Bohemian glass and burnished Hory Kutné silverware, were of Prisnec’s grandfather’s vintage.

Archbishop Slavoj came in alongside the Kráľ with, censer, bowl and aspergillum, and blessed the food and drink in the name of the Holy Trinity. When this was done, the king raised his hands to his guests.

‘Well, everyone,’ he said simply, ‘enjoy.’

The guests set to the rich repast with delight, but this unadulterated joy was rather short-lived. The high table began to creak and groan under the weight of its burden, as well as under the elbows of all the gathered guests, who were too busy with their trenchers to pay much attention to it… until there was an almighty crack. The legs of the table slid out to either side as the centre gave way, and tablecloth, silver, glass, spits, platters and all went careening inward, imploding toward the depress.

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Ladina noticed to her satisfaction that Prisnec took the disaster in stride, calmly directing the servants to clean up the mess and joining in himself in the work, before assigning the guests with their wares to different tables that were still standing.

‘What rotten luck,’ Ladina heard her kinsman Chvalimír Rychnovský-Kluczbork, the hrabě of Doudleby, grumble. ‘It figures I’d be sent to rub elbows with the riffraff.’

She noticed that the knieža of the White Croats, Vyšebor Bijelahrvatskić, acquitted himself of the situation with a much greater degree of congeniality and equanimity. The vojvodkyňa had not hitherto had a very high impression of the knieža, judging him to be a brash and simple-minded hothead, but she was quietly impressed with the social grace with which he handled his new placement. As for Ladina, she found herself seated on the left of the kráľ himself!

‘… I did read it,’ Prisnec was commenting to his son Radomír. ‘Tzoumenēs does know his minerals and herbs. His understanding of humoural flows is also subtle and profound.’

‘Are you speaking of Alexios Tzoumenēs’s Ad sanitatem?’ Ladina asked the king, interested.

Prisnec was taken aback, but he wasn’t displeased. ‘I am. Have you read it?’

‘Indeed!’ Ladina looked toward the king with interest. ‘It is a fine study, truly fine! But what do you make of Eremej Drevľevič’s critique of Ad sanitatem: that Tzoumenēs focusses too strongly upon the remedies to the yellow bilious diseases, and neglects the diseases stemming from a surfeit of phlegm?’

‘I don’t agree with Drevľevič at all,’ Prisnec answered bluntly. ‘Tzoumenēs is a responsible scholar. He lives in Mesopotamia, not Novgorod. Of course he spends more time on diseases he sees more, just like he’ll speak about the herbs and the alchemical ingredients he knows. A man ought, in judging, to look at circumstances.’

‘For example?’

Prisnec said pointedly, ‘It wouldn’t be wise for a man to judge by parentage alone. For example.’

Ladina took no offence at this comment. In fact, she grinned. ‘Particularly not in present company. Truly well put, O Kráľ.’

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Prisnec and Ladina spent nearly the entire evening talking about medicine, astronomy, grammar, rhetoric, mathematics and theology together, comparing notes and recommending each other new (and old) books to read. Prisnec was truly astonished by his female vassal’s breadth of knowledge and her curiosity. For her part, Vojvodkyňa Ladina was in turn surprised that Prisnec was neither just a dull bruiser nor a vapid carouser, but instead himself a man of fairly profound learning. Even after the high table was replaced and the feast could continue with its original settings, Prisnec Rychnovský and Ladina Rychnovská-Nisa kept fast in each other’s company.

Ladina proved to be an immensely valuable friend. Not only were her connexions and judicious use of Opole’s sub rosa connexions superlatively useful to the Moravian state. But she even managed to fill in for Kveta Kostolanská when she was out of town, and there was an injured townsman who needed care. Even just talking with her together with Viera, about various problems over a quiet glass of wine or two, calmed the king’s nerves greatly. But Ladina had not entirely eluded the furtive nature of her family’s past, as the king soon happened to discover.

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Prisnec was soon enough a frequent enough visitor at Kluczbork to see Ladina in the company of her retinue. And he was near enough in Ladina’s confidence to notice how she spoke to her suffragan bishop, Vojmil.

‘Your Grace,’ Ladina spoke to him in passing, ‘I do believe I require another confession. Could you make yourself available before Vespers tomorrow?’

‘I think I can arrange that, milady,’ Bishop Vojmil answered her mildly.

Prisnec looked from one to the other, and judging from the secret smile on Ladina’s face, he guessed (correctly) that the ‘confession’ would not be taking place in any chapel or before any altar, but instead in Ladina Rychnovská-Nisa’s boudoir, or someplace similarly secluded. Still, he said nothing about it.

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It was sometime later during that visit that Ladina invited him to sit with her in the drawing-room of the Rychnovský-Kluczbork manor. It was, she told him, a matter of some urgency and great delicacy.

‘Your Majesty, I have reason to believe that one among your vassals is plotting against your life.’

‘How so?’

Ladina drew out a rolled-up pile of vellum, and handed it to the king. The documents did indeed contain some deeply troubling communications, including contacts among Prisnec’s and Viera’s servants, maps of castle grounds and escape routes, as well as possible weapons or poisons to be used. Prisnec looked over them with concern, but did not lose his calm.

‘Who do you think is responsible?’ asked Prisnec.

‘I have no way to determine that as yet,’ Ladina answered him honestly. ‘But with this intelligence you should be able to stymie whoever is responsible for a good while yet—possibly indefinitely. Rest assured that I’ll continue working to uncover the originator.’

‘Thank you,’ said Prisnec gratefully.

‘Anything for a friend,’ Ladina answered him.

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Little Botta scrutinised the paper before him, dipped his quill in the inkwell, and began tracing out the letters in Latin uncial on the other side. ‘Jól… vagyok. Jó… estét.

Botta’s little sister Katarína came in where he was studying. ‘Whatcha doin’?’ she asked.

‘Magyar,’ replied Botta seriously. ‘Have to study.’

‘It’s always something,’ Katarína sighed. ‘I thought you were studying ‘rithmetic!’

‘I was,’ Botta explained. ‘But I wanted to study languages.’

‘All languages?’ Katarína asked, in an infuriatingly-sly voice. ‘Or just your ‘tended’s?’

Botta blushed, and folded up the vellum as his sister giggled. Why did his little sister have to be such a pest? ‘Ocko studied languages. And a lot of other things,’ he said airily. ‘I’m going to learn as much as ocko, so that when I’m king, no one will be able to fool me.’

‘Good luck,’ Katarína rolled her eyes and left the room.

Botta chuffed. But his hand went to the drawer of his desk, and he withdrew from it the mussel half-shell that Czenzi had given him. The rough side of the back had smoothed a bit from handling, and the shiny side gleamed from polishing. It was one of Botta’s precious keepsakes. Riding around and hunting with a Magyar girl was sure to be a lot more fun than having a little sister who snooped into everything. He wondered whether Czenzi would remember him… and also, if she remembered him, whether she would remember him fondly. He opened up his Magyar lessons again. He wanted to be sure that when she saw him next, he could speak with her in her own tongue.

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Well played, O Great Troubadour. Started as response to comments. Then what appeared to be a special episode. But finally, I realize that it is the regularly scheduled program, just on a different bat-channel.
Ladina is quite a lady and a family-history to be a powerhouse spymaster. Botta and Czenzi are going to be too cute.
Thank you, teller of tall tales
 
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Well played, O Great Troubadour. Started as response to comments. Then what appeared to be a special episode. But finally, I realize that it is the regularly scheduled program, just on a different bat-channel.
Ladina is quite a lady and a family-history to be a powerhouse spymaster. Botta and Czenzi are going to be too cute.
Thank you, teller of tall tales

Much obliged, @Midnite Duke! Thank you for the high words of praise, and I'm very glad to have you along for the ride!

Ladina's quite the character, yes. And we shall see quite a bit more of her over the coming years. Maybe it's the romantic in me, but I'm looking forward to writing Botta and Czenzi when they're older.


NINE
Swords in Front, Daggers in Back
31 March 1133 – 1 January 1137

‘Your presence is desired and commanded in the king’s court,’ the guard said to Jaropolk Pavelkov-Sigetmarmoroský from the doorway.

The knieža of Podkarpatská gave an exaggerated yawn, scratched the back of his head, and strained his legs outward as he got to his feet. ‘About time the king came to his senses.’

‘Keep silence, prisoner,’ the guard ordered him gruffly. ‘It is only the king’s sufferance that keeps you out of the fonsels.’

The Rusin nobleman stiffened in offence, but he didn’t tread any further upon the patience of his gaoler. He did take, however, an easy and almost insolent stride toward the chamber where he knew the Kráľ of Moravia would be holding court. As he entered, he saw Prisnec seated before him at the other end of the hall. He was in full royal regalia, and bore the sceptre and the sphere, none too subtly reinforcing upon those present the fact that his was the God-given prerogative to pass judgement. Jaropolk almost permitted himself a smirk.

‘The Knieža of Maramoroš is commanded to come forward,’ called out a strident female voice.

It was Hraběnka Jaroslava Kopčianská who spoke: the newly-widowed mistress of Znojmo, still clad in the mourning colours. Having been in her youth a fresh-faced, plump, buxom beauty of the Bohemian type, Jaroslava now stood formidably at the front of the court as Prisnec’s šafárka. Still, Jaropolk was not intimidated. He strode forward insouciantly and stood at attention before the king.

‘Go on, Jaroslava,’ Prisnec spoke to his vassal.

Jaroslava cleared her throat. ‘O Kráľ, the Pavelkov family has, from ancient times, retained the custodial rights over the lands of Podkarpatská. This was true, of course, as Jaropolk well knows, from the time that they were subject to the kings of Hungary. But what has not been so well-known—at least not until I uncovered it—is that the Pavelkov’s claim upon that land is entirely subject to the pleasure of the reigning king… and it is revocable in the event of disloyalty.’

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Jaropolk baulked, and shot a venomous look at Jaroslava. ‘No Mojmírová has any right to lecture me about loyalty!’

‘The prisoner will be silent!’ the guard reminded him.

‘I’ve seen the documents myself,’ Prisnec spoke calmly. ‘They’re… quite clear.’

Jaropolk gulped.

‘Still,’ Prisnec went on, ‘I’m not an unreasonable man. I’d much rather the two of us came to an accord, as I’m sure Our Lord would want.’

‘What are your terms?’ asked Jaropolk through gritted teeth.

‘My terms are the same as those the Kings of Hungary demanded of your forebears,’ Prisnec told him. ‘I have no use for a disloyal vassal. However, I am allowing you and your descendants to hold that land free of the threat of retraction from generation to generation.’

In the end, Jaropolk had to admit that Prisnec’s terms were far more generous and gracious than he would have expected, even without Jaroslava’s prod in the back. He happily affixed his name to the renewed charter.

‘And with this,’ Prisnec told him, ‘you’re free to go.’

‘My liege?’ asked Jaropolk, disbelieving.

‘I’m setting you at liberty,’ Prisnec reiterated. ‘To enjoy the free air of your mountains once more.’

Jaropolk gave a deep obeisance of genuine gratitude in acknowledgement, before he took his leave of the court, once again a free man.

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‘A noble gesture,’ Ladina said to Prisnec afterward. ‘I doubt that Rus’ you just set free is aware of the similar grace bestowed upon his distant ancestor by yours, Radomír the Terrible.’

‘The question is,’ Prisnec remarked dryly, ‘are my other vassals aware of it?’

‘If I may be blunt, my young friend,’ Ladina spoke freely to him, ‘even if you intended to send that particular warning, I think this gesture of yours comes too late. Vojmil still hankers after the Mojmírovs’ lost glory, and your crown. My kinsman Chvalimír—as I think you know—is not likely to be assuaged by anything you do, not after the loss of his Stanislav.’

Prisnec’s eyes narrowed at the mention of that particular thorn in his side. Chvalimír Rychnovský-Kluczbork had made himself a particular nuisance ever since his escape from the fonsels, in ways which could only be explained by personal malice.

‘And I think,’ Ladina went on, laying a gentle hand on her friend’s, ‘you may also have trouble to fear from another corner: Užhorod.’

‘Vyšebor?’ asked Prisnec. ‘But he’s never given me any trouble!’

‘It isn’t Vyšebor who should concern you,’ Ladina told him. ‘He’s a proper and upstanding man. But he is growing feeble, even if he doesn’t allow it to show. The real power in Užhorod lies with his son and heir, Vratislav—and Vratislav Bijelahrvatskić very much takes after his namesake.’

‘Ah.’

‘And… not to put too fine a point on it, but we still haven’t uncovered the one who is trying to have you killed. It could be any among these vassals of yours, who have done nothing but chafe under the laws which have prevailed since Tomáš’s time.’

‘That’s a mystery I wouldn’t mind having cleared up,’ Prisnec noted dryly.

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‘Hey, bro,’ Katarína approached her brother. ‘Obol for your thoughts?’

Bohodar rocked back and drew up his shins where he sat. ‘Dedo and ocko don’t say much, but I can tell that they’re worried about another uprising among the nobility. And I’ve got to wonder: does God smile on all of this strife, all this quarrelling over honours and grasping after personal gain? Where does it get any of us? What if there’s a better way for us to live?’

Katarína chuckled, then quoted: ‘“He has shown you, O man, what is good. And what does the Lord require of you?”’

‘“But to do justly, and to love mercy, and to walk humbly with thy God.”’ Botta completed his younger sister’s quotation with a smile. ‘Good old Prophet Micheáš. You always did love that one.’

Katarína shrugged. ‘It’s true, though. But it can be a lot harder than it sounds, particularly if one has power… I’m not sure I’d ever want to be in that position. Can’t say I envy you, bro.’

Botta and Katarína got on together a lot better now than they had when they were younger. In part, it was because Botta had begun to exhibit the Rychnovský sang-froid; however, Botta had come to appreciate his sister’s forbearing nature, which naturally invited confidence.

‘Maybe I ought to follow in Uncle Jaroslav’s footsteps,’ Botta mused.

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‘Sorry, that won’t do,’ Katarína rebutted him. ‘You’ve got a future wife and family line to think of. I’m afraid there’s no running off to the cloister for you. Leave the monk stuff to your cousins.’

Bohodar sighed and looked off to the east. ‘That’s true.’

‘You don’t really want to get out of that responsibility, do you?’

Botta shrugged. ‘Nah, I guess not. Still, I can’t help but wonder. It’s been so long since I’ve seen Czenzi. I suppose she’ll have forgotten all about me by now.’

Katarína quirked her head. ‘Why? You remember her, don’t you?’

‘Sure.’

‘Then absolutely she remembers you. She’s older than you, and girls grow up faster than boys. Seriously: I wouldn’t worry too much. Just be yourself. Next time you see her, even if she’s forgotten you she won’t be able to forget you again.’

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Božena, the hraběnka of Litoměřice, was brought before Kráľ Prisnec in irons, and thrown unceremoniously to the floor of the king’s court, where she was forced to kneel by the guards. Vojvodkyňa Ladina stood over the dark-haired young Czech woman, and spoke:

‘Božena Přemyslovčá-Boleslav, you are accused of attempted murder, and of treason against the crown. According to the laws of this realm, which have governed both Bohemians and Moravians since time immemorial, the penalty for the crime of treason is death.’

Božena hung her head, but said nothing.

‘Let the first witness approach.’

Ladina Rychnovská-Nisa produced several of the parties to the plot against Kráľ Prisnec’s life, including one of Lady Viera’s maids and a local harrier who knew the grounds. Through meticulous questioning Ladina was able to produce the evidence that their orders had come from Litoměřice through a certain Moravian innkeeper. When Božena’s šafár was shown before the innkeeper, the look exchanged between them was enough to convince the entire court that they knew each other.

‘The evidence of Přemyslovča-Boleslav’s guilt in originating and attempting to carry out the murder of her own sovereign is clear and overwhelming,’ Ladina concluded. ‘I recommend no leniency in her sentence, and advise that the full penalty of the law be exercised upon her head.’

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Božena glared up at Ladina with a look of pure loathing, and then addressed the king directly. ‘It will profit you nothing, Prisnec. I did not act alone; many other of your vassals similarly desired this end. And they will succeed where I have failed.’

Prisnec gave his Bohemian vassal an impassive stare, and then gestured to Ladina.

‘Take her away,’ Ladina ordered.

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The hammer fell only two days after Božena’s imprisonment in Olomouc. Either Vyšebor Bijelahrvatskić, or his son Vratislav, had affixed his name first to the ultimatum and list of demands upon the king—however, it was perfectly clear even from the verbiage used within that the Mojmírov knieža of Nitra, Vojmil Mikulčický, was the one behind the missive.

Thankfully, Prisnec had not been idle. Ladina’s warnings of this revolt had given him ample time to drill and train the troops that were personally loyal to him. In addition, he had enough funds stored up to hire a sizeable band of Lecho-Danish border reivers and Varangians from Ýrdeilaborg under the command of Captain Anundr, as well as a local troop of freelancers from Velehrad. The fighting men of the Morava valley were well prepared to take the well-trodden road from Olomouc to Trenčin.

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Whew! I just read this AAR from the start over the last week. Thoroughly enjoyed it. As many have said, your attention to historical detail and cultural flavour is out of this world. I know little about Czech/Slovak culture myself, so I can't verify most of what you've done, but your approach is so meticulous that I can only imagine I'm in good hands. (Almost ten years ago, reading Bloodsnake and Battlewolf was a major driver of my taking an interest in Norse history and culture.)

Your writing has some truly fantastic moments. My favourite is perhaps when you wrote from the perspective of a wolf without telling us at first. Some of your characters really do stick in the mind - Radko most of all - which is a serious feat when you're trying both to give a real sense of personality and to cover long centuries without leaving any big gaps. It helps that pretty much all your kings have been blessed with fairly long lives - or is life expectancy in CK3 a bit longer than in 2?

I'm looking forward in particular to seeing how Bohodar III and Czenzi turn out. Also a big fan of all the history seminar segments. The bit with Živana and the priest was nice, as it gave a tiny taste of where sexual mores stand in later Moravian society, though I don't know if that's what you meant to do ;)

One thing: could we possibly see a religious map of Europe sometime soon? I see that Orthodoxy has made some headway to the north, and I remember you saying that a variety of heresies take root there in time, but it'd be nice to have a clearer picture!

Needless to say, keep up the phenomenal work!
 
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Whew! I just read this AAR from the start over the last week. Thoroughly enjoyed it. As many have said, your attention to historical detail and cultural flavour is out of this world. I know little about Czech/Slovak culture myself, so I can't verify most of what you've done, but your approach is so meticulous that I can only imagine I'm in good hands. (Almost ten years ago, reading Bloodsnake and Battlewolf was a major driver of my taking an interest in Norse history and culture.)

Your writing has some truly fantastic moments. My favourite is perhaps when you wrote from the perspective of a wolf without telling us at first. Some of your characters really do stick in the mind - Radko most of all - which is a serious feat when you're trying both to give a real sense of personality and to cover long centuries without leaving any big gaps. It helps that pretty much all your kings have been blessed with fairly long lives - or is life expectancy in CK3 a bit longer than in 2?

I'm looking forward in particular to seeing how Bohodar III and Czenzi turn out. Also a big fan of all the history seminar segments. The bit with Živana and the priest was nice, as it gave a tiny taste of where sexual mores stand in later Moravian society, though I don't know if that's what you meant to do ;)

One thing: could we possibly see a religious map of Europe sometime soon? I see that Orthodoxy has made some headway to the north, and I remember you saying that a variety of heresies take root there in time, but it'd be nice to have a clearer picture!

Needless to say, keep up the phenomenal work!

Thank you for the kind words, and happy to have you on board, @Knud_den_Store! I'm also quite gratified that you enjoyed Bloodsnake and Battlewolf.

Also glad you're enjoying the history seminar segments. That bit was part of an experiment where I was attempting to get out of the classroom setting and into the 'real world', though it can be a bit difficult to arrange 'encounters with history' that don't seem too artificial or forced.

Re: the life expectancy of my kings... honestly I think I just got lucky in those early years. I don't think CK3 is any more forgiving than CK2 with regard to life expectancy (with some exceptions, like the fecund trait). Not all of my kings are this long-lived, as shall be seen.

Religious maps, eh? Those will be forthcoming! (Particularly when the religious landscape of Eastern Europe starts to get... interesting.)

For nice rulers, there have been a lot of rebellions. Which rebels will lose their heads as the day of reckoning approaches? Thank you for another glimpse of the Moravian court.

Which rebels will lose their heads, you ask? I don't think I'm spoiling too much by saying: at least one. :p

I'm trying to handle the transition between Slavic antiquity and high medieval culture with a certain degree of realism; I'm borrowing primarily from Russian, Polish, Bohemian and Bulgarian experiences in my attempt to reconstruct what a Moravian high medieval court would have looked like.


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A Peacemaker in Wartime
5 July 1139 – 23 July 1139


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Botta cantered on his horse along the narrow path that wound its way east, leading downwards between the Maramoroš Mountains to the north and the long ridge of the Rodna Mountains to the south. He had already passed without incident through Prešov, Užhorod, Mukačevo and Volovec, and had just left Čern. The young rider kept his head concealed beneath a simple grey cowl and his tall broad body beneath a cotte and hose of the same colour. The only thing which could identify him to a stranger as the grandson of Přisnec King of Moravia the Great was the gold signet ring with a lion rampant on its face, which he kept on a leather strand around his neck and beneath his cotte.

Thankfully, he’d been able to breathe free and easy as he passed through the lands governed by Jaropolk Pavelkov. Botta was pleasantly surprised: he had always thought that Jaropolk had hated his father and grandfather. However, the Ruthenian had treated him with every hospitality and courtesy, and had been most genuine about it. Evidently Prisnec had come to an agreement with Jaropolk which had left him quite happy.

But travelling alone like this, through territory held by rebelling vassals and a vicious enemy, was a dangerous business. If either the Bijelahrvatskići or the Mojmírovci got wind of his errand, in all likelihood he would be used as a counter in brokering a peace unfavourable to his grandfather. The same fate would await him if he was captured by Velyky Knedz Pavel of the Červen Cities. Although they had embraced Christ, the Červeny still seemed never to miss an opportunity to weaken and undermine Moravia, if it was within their power.

But reflecting on these things did not daunt him; indeed, they exhilarated him. Having passed through Maramoroš, Bohodar was riding through hostile territory. All the same: ‘You’re on a mission of peace,’ his grandfather told him, ‘that is every bit as important as the war that is happening here.’ A mission of peace. And the olive branch that Botta would be offering… was himself.

He rode at a brisk clip through the forests of spruce and beech and juniper. Although the summer air was cool in comparison with that of Olomouc, it was nonetheless dappled with shafts of warmth from the bright blue July sky above. The sharp, fresh smell of the coniferous resins in the summer air gave Bohodar’s spirits a welcome lift, and caused him to slow his horse to enjoy the uninhabited road. This gave the young teenager some time to think.

The last time he had seen Árpád-Hotin Czenzi, he had been five years old, and she nine. He remembered the visit vividly. He blushed when he thought about how he’d behaved then, riled to childish anger by her splashing him harmlessly in the river, and he anxiously wished she wouldn’t hold it against him. His hand went to his scrip, and he fingered the well-burnished half mussel shell she’d given him… and then his hand went to the rougher surface of its mate—or something as close to it as he could find. Would Czenzi still find him childish if he gave her this?

In his memory, she still loomed over him—a tall, leggy, gangling, somewhat snub-nosed tomboy with tawny skin. He could still remember her sharp jawline and long mouth, and a pair of startling amber eyes. That was the image of her that he had continued to hold throughout his childhood. And ‘súhlas’—that had been his assessment. Botta left the Prut valley and made his way east toward the Dneister.

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He did his best to keep to the forested areas, and well away from the large towns under Pavel’s sway. That wasn’t easy as he skirted Čern, though he managed to pick his way through that stretch without incident – sometimes staying with peasants, or sometimes fending for himself in abandoned byres or shepherd’s huts in the countryside. He reached the Dniester’s right bank without incident, and followed its snaking winds closely. However, Botta got careless. The steppe through which the Dniester wound was not entirely forested, and he thought he could get away with riding across the grassy plain between two of the river’s bends. That’s where he was spotted.

The two riders wore long blonde moustaches, were clad in mail, and bore upon their heads the conical helmets of the Eastern Slavs. Their teardrop-shaped shields bore the sky-blue field with a golden lion rampant, which signified their fealty to the Velyky Knedz. Botta’s heart froze. If they captured him here, his whole journey would be for nought. Still, he kept his calm and did his best to ride by them.

Hej, palomnyk!’ one of the Červeny called with a laugh. ‘Kudy zbyraeš? Yakyj pospikh?

Bohodar had spurred his horse subtly to a trot as the Červen called to him. The two riders exchanged looks, and then began to ride after him. Bohodar heard the clop of hooves behind him, and spurred his horse on further. Soon he was head down over his mount, riding at a desperate gallop away from the two Červeny, and the two of them were riding hot on his tail.

Out on the open steppe like this, Bohodar knew that he wouldn’t be able to make a dash of it for long. The ground here was open, level and firm, and the two men behind him were the more experienced riders, weighted down though they were with arms and armour. Their horses were also bred and trained for the steppe, while the mare beneath his legs had never tasted of war or the hunt until now. The two Červeny knew this as well as Bohodar did, and they gave laughing, mocking shouts as they corralled him in toward the river.

Botta closed his eyes. Soon this would all be over, and he would be at the mercy of Pavel Daniilovič, to fetch back a hefty bounty from his grandfather.

But then he heard the unmistakeable whistle of an arrow flying past him, followed by a thunk behind. Botta pulled his horse up to a halt, and behind him his two pursuers did the same. Daring to turn his head, Botta saw the shaft of an arrow emerging from the blue-and-gold shield of one of the Červen riders. The fletching was red and grey.

‘Červeny,’ called a high, gruff voice from across the plain, speaking in an East Slavic dialect. ‘You are trespassing upon Csángóföld, the rightful riding of Nagyfejedelem Balassi Vilmos! Explain this outrage.’

‘We meant no trespass,’ called back one of the yellow-moustached riders. ‘But we lay claim to this person before you. He crossed our marches without identifying himself!’

‘Oh?’ asked the voice. Bohodar, listening to its mezzo-alto pitch, felt it must belong to either a very young man, or else a woman. ‘He bears no colours, and he bears no armament. What threat is he to your borders? Yet you come upon us in arms.’

‘He would give us no answer,’ the Červen persisted. ‘He must be a spy!’

‘Be that as it may,’ came the reply, ‘he is now upon Magyar land, and by Magyars he must be judged. Leave this place, now. Or I shall send your Pavel Daniilovič a gift of two fools’ heads in a basket.’

Not gladly, but with grumbling, the two Červeny turned their mounts and departed back, west along the Dniester. Who knew how many other Magyars were out here, apart from this one young marksman? Also, they knew too well that Velyky Knedz Pavel Daniilovič wouldn’t thank them for sparking a war between Csángóföld and the Červen Cities.

The Magyar marksman approached Bohodar. In fact, now he could plainly see that she was a markswoman. As they brought their horses up close to each other, they regarded each other with wary interest. The sharp, sparkling amber eyes which now looked him over from beneath a pair of slim sable brows struck a spot within Bohodar’s memory, with the same force that her arrow had struck the Červen shield. It couldn’t be—Czenzi herself? What were the odds—?

It was Árpád Czenzi—and yet it wasn’t. The rather gawky tomboy he remembered from a decade ago was gone. In her place was an apparition of arresting handsomeness and perilous grace. The high, tawny cheekbones were the same, but the sharp jawline he remembered had smoothed into a gentle poise, atop a long, well-formed neck. The mobile lips that Bohodar had once thought too thin and too long for her face, had filled into a dignified elegance—enough to give her mouth a hint of humour, and a subtler allure which was harder to define. The angular shoulders he remembered from their roughhousing in the water those ten years ago had smoothed and filled with a subtle curvature. The same refined curve and mild taper graced the folds of her skirts. And Bohodar’s teenage male eyes could not help but drift down over the shapely, protrusive pectoral attestations of her young-womanhood.

Czenzi addressed the spellbound youth. ‘Welcome to Csángóföld, sir,’ she told him. Although her spoken Moravian was flawless, there was still a lilt and a slight trill to her speech that made it somehow more attractive to him. ‘You’ve been expected.’

Only with effort did Bohodar find the use of his tongue. ‘Hálás köszönöm szépen a segítségét, hölgyem.

Czenzi’s lips parted broadly, in a heart-melting smile. ‘Nagyon szívesen!’ she answered gaily. To Bohodar in her native Magyar, her voice sounded like song. ’But between us two, Bohodar—there isn’t a need to be so formal, is there?’

Bohodar was stricken at once with a sudden wistful yearning and pricking of the flesh, and also with his own lack of deserving. The one, the true, the elemental she, had transmuted so much, it seemed—and he so little. She had recognised him at once. ’I... suppose not.’

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’Please, ride with me back to Szarka,’ Czenzi requested. ’I am sure you would agree that there are some important matters for us to discuss.’

Bohodar nodded. At that moment, he would have gone to the gates of hell if Czenzi had asked it of him.

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The Botta-Czenzi relationship is too cute for words. Bohodar, with a 17-8-10-8-11 stat line before he acquires his final education, is going to have a formidable base. (The education level differences in CK3 seem less pronounced than in CK2 where the difference between two and three star was significant.) Czenzi looks to be a great help-mate. Her Magyer culture will probably be very useful in Moravia. Young Love is wonderful. The river valley pictures are beautiful with the final begging for added info as the two shores are so different. Thank you, kind historian.
 
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We've had plenty of interesting consorts, but Czenzi promises to take the cake! I hope she'll still be able to see her share of action outside the castle walls after she becomes queen - assuming that happens as planned.

Speaking of consorts, in my last comment I forgot to mention that the funniest moment in the AAR for me so far is when Dolz goes "Mouaf". As a Frenchie I found that bit of attention to cultural detail very gratifying! :p
 
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