comagoosie said:I sense that you packed a couple AARs into a few paragraphs
Great going!
Amric said:That's rather ambitious, RW.....I've never even considered doing that with Amric....It's seems rather....daunting....
Enewald said:This is madness!
Evil politicians.
Hmm... so they all live in Ancona?
Always sunny.
Qorten said:How come the Ming emperor is with the army? I thought the Eunuch WangZhen was commanding it and the emperor just stayed behind in the capital. No word on the emperor being with the army in your first Tumu Fortress scene.
It's also hard to believe 50 000 soldiers + horses + equipment fit into a regular border fortress. Must a HUGE fortress then.
Just some thoughts.
Good writing though, I like it.