Clear Jewel on a Leaf-point Trembles: Drip! A River Starts

[Storey]

Originally posted by Crimson King
Hmm ... I'll bet that's the first time the word "sods" was ever used in a haiku.

Especially the Chinese being called sods.

Joe

 

[Commandante]

Japanese spreading
Like rings on water surface
No teppu-jutsu

 

[Gytis]

Gaijin has probably
Baned a sepuku
So japans are spreading

 

[Gytis]

When when when
Will he come,
The next instalement?

 

[Gaijin de Moscu]

The story's brewing
The muse is like good sake
Can not be hurried

 

[Commandante]

Tale interrupted
By Lenape warriors
Europe made Pagan

 

[redwolf]

Read this story
Just I did
Only thing that
I can say
Gaijin, great story!!!
Keep it up!!!

Ok, lousy attempt i know but anyway, i will be following this aar closely...

 

[Gaijin de Moscu]

Thank you for reading!
In the heat of Kansai's June
An update's being born.

I somehow managed to delete last 4 years, so I had to replay with different results... I am so sorry, so sorry, readers-sama *bows to the screen, looking mightlily embarassed*

 

[Gaijin de Moscu]

1438 - 1483

Enough of warring:
each samurai is a world.
Countless worlds are dead.

Gifts go to China;
Japanese girls go make love
to Kings of Asia.

Enthralled, Kings submit:
Dai Viet, Manchu, Korea
vassalised by us.

Sad: sword is lesser
in achieving submission
than charms of women.

Girls are effective
in expanding the borders:
Kings're romantics, too.

While revolts rage on
let us paint the Earth bright red:
autumn leaves' colour.

Small annexing spree:
Dai Viet, Manchu, Korea
join the Empire.

More revolts abroad?
And at home? I lie awake
admiring crisp stars.

Souls of the rebels
must be up there, reflecting
on how much they've lost.

Japan in 1483, after the first annexations:

 

[Commandante]

From Siberia
To Mekong Delta in south
Japanese rulers

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Nice progress and good writing, Sasha!

I especially liked this one:

More revolts abroad?
And at home? I lie awake
admiring crisp stars.

 

[unmerged(14338)]

oho. Good aar, nice to se Feudal japan with the WW2 borders...

 

[LordLeto]

I was looking at
the map, and it seems Russian
for Shanghai is Y?

Elighten Gajin
this ignorant Texan man
I no more Hiku.

 

[Gytis]

Great turmoil is happening
In another AAR
Gaijin is writting.

But no words in here,
No words from Japan,
Why are you silent?

 

[Commandante]

Originally posted by Gytis
Great turmoil is happening
In another AAR
Gaijin is writting.

But no words in here,
No words from Japan,
Why are you silent?

Why? I think you just said it yourself, man.

 

[unmerged(14268)]

We're about to start a battle that will make the Clash of the Titans (no not, CraigAshley's AAR) look like a fantasy movie, and you want GdM to write haiku's?

 

[Eldin]

*pokes dead AAR thread with a stick*

Haiku in English:
creaking chalk, great sacrilege
still very nice though

Wandering alone
the streets, empty, forests waning
a stray autmn wind

Pebble disturbs pool
waves of thought reach a sad soul
is this.. abandoned?

 

[saskganesh]

the river bed is hardpan.
no blossoms will grow there.
somewhere a faint sigh.

 

[Gaijin de Moscu]

Haulted the conquest:
Through many e-provinces
My dreams wander on.

Autumn... a lonely mapple
Looks abandoned, but it knows
It'll recover soon.

 

[Judge]

Good to hear you are going to update again Sasha and this is a really artistic AAR indeed, what about the “Mat of the eagle” is it dead or

 

[unmerged(17337)]

Finaly read it all
The Sun Goddess cries, with Joy
The Sun waits to set