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Hello, Hello, and welcome to my AAR, I'll be starting out with my own custom ruler. The style will be a historybooks style, with excerpts of various history books being used to give an idea of whats happening. I will warn you first that I'm not much of a writer and even less of a professional historian, so feel free to criticise (keep it constructive though). I also reserve the right to cheat if it serves the interest of continuing the story. Anyway, I'm rambling, lets get on with it.

 
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Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the Bruces

Excerpt from ‘The Reign of Malcolm III’ By Peter Brown

In May of 1066 Malcolm’s closest (physically, at least) vassal - the aging Earl of Fife - was beset with problems; he was without an heir, faced disloyalty and outright defiance from the peoples he ruled over, a disloyalty he in turn showed to Malcolm. It would be this combination of factors which allowed the mercenary captain Arthur Bruce to seize the land and title of Fife.


Before his conquest of the Earldom of Fife very little is known of Arthur Bruce, that he was a mercenary is the only solid fact we have. However, much can be guessed at with a reasonable degree of accuracy, a general consensus has formed that Arthur served many minor Scottish lords in their skirmishes with the Anglo-Saxons to the South, the Norwegians to the North, Norse lords occupying the islands to the west of Scotland as well as defending from raids by Baltic Pagans on the eastern coast. It is a sensible assumption to make that it was from serving so many lords in fights against the vast array of enemies that Scotland faced in this period that the young Arthur began to understand both the internal politics of Scotland as well as greater geopolitical situation.


The motive for Arthur’s actions, like the motives for many historical actions, is unknown (and unknowable), perhaps it was a desire to improve the dire state that Scotland was in, gain glory for himself, it has also been theorised that the Earl of Fife owed Arthur a debt for defending him from raiders and refused to pay, whether it was any of these, all of these or none, what is known is that Arthur was able to convince many of his comrades in arms to join him in attacking the Earl of Fife. In this fight he would prove himself successful and King Malcolm would find himself with de facto new vassal, one which he would recognise as the rightful ruler of Fife in late September, the King would certainly come to regret this decision.



The new Earl of Fife: Arthur Bruce


Excerpt from ‘The Failures of Feudalism: Europe in the Dark Ages’ By Lukas Smith


The theoretical protection that a king offers his vassals - that they in turn offer to their vassals, all the way down to the ‘protection’ that knights would offer to the lowliest proletariat – can sometimes be explained as being neglected due to the distances involved, a vassal may have lost his land, titles and life to another before his liege had any opportunity to intervene on his behalf, the rise of Arthur Bruce shows the folly of such an argument, for the aged and withered Earl of Fife was, in May of 1066, attacked by Arthur Bruce who led a group of mercenaries against his former employer in order to take control of the lands in Fife.


Despite the short distances (and corresponding travel times) between the Earl’s land in Cupar and King Malcolm’s in Scone nothing was done by the incompetent king to protect his vassal, although he had many months to gather forces and fulfil his feudal obligations he was content to sit by and watch his power be successfully challenged. This impotency would continue as the new Earl of Fife took the lands of Strathearn & Atholl in quick succession, with no intervention from any other notable figure in Scotland.


Excerpt from ‘Judaism in Medieval Britain’ by Isaac Berman


After establishing himself as the rightful ruler of Fife in September of 1066 Arthur Bruce sought to gain more land and more laying claim to the neighbouring Earldom of Strathearn. However claiming land is one thing, enforcing that claim is another, Arthur, a skilled battle commander and strategist, knew that he did not have the numbers to enforce his claim, mercenaries were the obvious solution, however money was always an issue, mercenaries like to be paid (as the previous Earl had learned to his cost). In order to meet the costs (both upfront and ongoing) of hiring these mercenaries Arthur sought out the Jewish businessmen of Fife and negotiated terms for a loan.


The document setting out the terms of the loan (still kept and in good condition at the Royal museum of History in Glasgow, at the time of publishing) is more hastily written than similar documents but contains many of the same clauses. One new clause that is not seen in earlier documents but that became common throughout the later medieval period was the debt inheritance clause, which ensured that any heirs of Arthur would still be liable to pay back the loan to any heirs of the Jewish merchant, although in this instance the clause was not utilised.



Despite the disapproval of the Catholic Church, Arthur took a substantial loan.​


This loan allowed Arthur to enjoy stunning success in his early conquests of the lands of Scotland; he would not forget the help the Jewish community had given him. This goodwill would help keep them safe in the turbulent times which lay ahead.
 
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Well I always like a well written Scotland AAR and I'm very much liking the style

I'm in!
 
Chapter 2 – On Every Front


Excerpt from ‘The life of Arthur Bruce’ by Alexander McDonald


Arthur’s quick and through conquests of large swathes of Scottish lands was only the first step for the young Bruce; soon he elevated himself from a ‘mere’ earl to a Duke, in a ceremony that was rumoured to cost almost twice as much his King Malcolm’s own coronation ceremony! Arthur’s new title brought him only one step below the King of Scotland on the feudal ladder, and it was a step Arthur was planning to take.


Arthur had very lofty ambitions

Arthur’s relationship with his new master was a cold one; Arthur often denounced his king’s cowardice, envy, anger, as well as Arthur’s lack of representation on his king’s council. The Pope seemed to agree with many of Arthur’s opinions as soon Malcolm found himself excommunicated from the church!


Arthur: Not Malcolm's biggest fan


Excerpt from ‘The Reign of Malcolm III’ By Peter Brown


Upon receiving news that he had been excommunicated for his ‘many sins against the laws of man and almighty God.’ Malcolm flew into a rage; writings from Malcolm’s physician indicate that the messenger who delivered this news was treated for multiple broken bones and was brought close to death by the beating he received, although he ultimately survived. The Excommunication almost destroyed what remnants of his reputation he still had within his Kingdom and totally destroyed it in rival kingdoms.

The First to strike was the newly crowned King Ætherbald Dodington of England, he had hoped to cement his status as a faithful, pious man, weaken his northern enemy, gain prestige and prove his ability to lead. In one war he would prove that the electors of England were correct to choose him as king. Once his armies were assembled they entered Scotland, where he won a few easy victories and took Stirling caste and some surrounding towns.


This declaration of war was a very serious threat to Malcolm's power

At this point ‘king’ Gudrød Crovan of the Isles also launched his own invasion of Scotland, publicly he declared he could not tolerate a heretic such as Malcolm occupying the Scottish throne, this is unlikely to be his true reasons for attacking, weakening Scotland and ravaging it’s countryside for loot were more likely the true reason, he had probably hoped that he would not even meet a single Scottish soldier, he was wrong.


This war, less so.

King Malcolm had not been idle during this period; he had gathered his armies, staffed them with competent commanders and prepared to fight. At first he adopted a Fabian strategy against the English, however once the Islanders declared war he rushed his armies to the north, meeting them outside inverness where he decimated them, only taking a few losses. Malcolm would spend a few months chasing the Islanders around Scotland, eventually completely annihilating Gudrød’s army.


King Ætherbald, eager for victory and suspecting that the Scottish army would be weakened by Gudrød’s attacks lifted his sieges and moved north to find and destroy the Scottish army. Malcolm however slipped around the English and began to besiege Stirling castle. Upon hearing this, the English turned their army south and attacked the Scots, expecting an easy victory.


However, Malcolm had positioned his armies on one side of a river, forcing the army of Ætherbald to ford it, this disadvantage allowed Malcolm to defeat the numerically superior English force, sending them fleeing south to England, where Malcolm would chase them to and defeat them. Eventually King Ætherbald, seeing that victory would cost more than it would be worth, accepted defeat and surrendered to King Malcolm.


A surprising and stunning victory

Gudrød was more stubborn, and Malcolm would be forced to spend nearly a year-and-a-half sieging and raiding in Argyll before Gudrød accepted the obvious and surrendered.


An Expected result

Through all of this though, Malcolm had been blind to a far more insidious and dangerous threat to his kingship.


Excerpt from ‘Arthur Bruce: The King of Scots’ by Stewart Kerr


It was on the 1st of June 1080 AD, in the midst of Malcolm’s two wars against England & the Islands that Arthur Bruce wrote his letters to the other vassals of King Malcolm, asking them to support him in his claim that he was legitimate King of Scotland, they all accepted.


Arthur had the support of all of Malcolm's direct vassals

That is something of a lie, to say they accepted to support Arthur’s claim to the Kingdom of Scotland would be overstating it somewhat; they accepted that Arthur had a claim to the Kingdom of Scotland but they would not – and it is unknown if Arthur knew this vital fact - support him in enforcing his claim.


The nobles of Scotland were not willing to give Arthur direct support
 
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Hmmmm now that you have +100 plot power you as leader of the faction can trigger the war and expect all those backing you to support with troops. The way you've written that last paragraph suggests this isn't what happens?

Good update. Will look forward to the next one. Arthur seems like a thoroughly reprehensible character and I also wonder if he had anything to do with the king's excommunication?
 
Enjoying it so far, so I'll be following. Sad thing to see a capable Malcolm III so close to being ousted from power though.:(
 
Chapter 3 – The Usurper


Excerpt from ‘Arthur Bruce: The King of Scots’ by Stewart Kerr


Upon Malcolm’s victories in the Excommunication wars Arthur declared before the whole Kingdom that it was evident that God had judged that Malcolm and his heirs were not fit to rule, he demanded that Malcolm renounce his kingship and allow Arthur to take the crown. Malcolm - predictably – refused; he had fought off the armies of England and The Isles to keep his crown, this upstart duke would not dethrone him.


Malcolm would be forced to fight for crown a third time.

Immediately after Malcolm’s refusal to step down Arthur called up his levies, he also hired more mercenaries to bolster his armies as even those who had supported his claim would not support him in this war. Very little is known about this very crucial war, no records of what battles occurred or where they happened have survived – although archaeologists have discovered some very promising artefacts which point to a major battle occurring outside of Cupar castle, and smaller skirmishes outside of Scone.


Excerpt from ‘The life of Arthur Bruce’ by Alexander McDonald


It is during this time when Arthur lost his hand, the stories as to how it happened vary wildly, some say that he lost it an accident involving an accident with a misfiring trebuchet, some accounts have it that the hand was cut off by a blind wizard! What it probably happened is that the hand was lost in a battle against Malcolm’s forces, likely a raid by the garrison of Scone castle during Arthur’s siege.


Conall the Blind's treatment of Arthur

Arthur’s previously speedy campaign had to be halted while he recovered, a process which took several months, however once he did recover his army quickly took the castle of Scone, signalling to the rest of the realm that soon Arthur would be King.


Arthur fully recovered from his treatment, minus a hand.


Excerpt from ‘Medieval Medicine’ by Doctor Lucy Frame


The account of Arthur’s personal physician on the 1st April 1083 reports that his left hand had several ‘lumps in the skin, reportedly mostly a white-ish colour, with some smaller ones being of an angry red. They presented themselves at the back of the wrist and on the palm, they were quite firm to the touch and caused some pain on being pressed.’ The physician diagnosed the lumps as cancerous tumours and recommended removal of the hand.


Conall diagnosed Arthur with Cancer

Reading the report by Arthur’s physician it is unlikely, based on the symptoms described; that Arthur was suffering from Cancer, more likely these lumps were simply Ganglion cysts, thus the removal of Arthur’s hand was an unnecessary and dangerous procedure which was harmful to the health of the patient.


Blind doctors, good idea?

Excerpt from ‘The Reign of Malcolm III’ By Peter Brown


After the loss of his castle and family home of Scone it was clear to Malcolm that his options were limited, attempts to recruit veterans of his previous wars to his side did have some limited success, but most veterans of these wars had either already been recruited or were in areas under siege by the young pretender’s army, rendering them useless to him. Mercenaries were considered too unreliable and too expensive to be hired for this war.

A spot of hope came for Malcolm when he heard of Arthur’s illness; the pretender’s death would certainly end the war as Arthur’s son was far too young to try and press his father’s claim to Malcolm’s crown. Unfortunately this hope was also quashed; Arthur’s recovery would mark the beginning of the end to the war, Malcolm would surrender himself and his title to Arthur only eight months later. The reign of King Malcolm Dunkeld the Third of Scotland ended on the 22nd of January 1084, lasting 25 years, 8 months and 28 days.


Malcolm's loss is Arthur's gain

Malcolm is usually remembered – if he is remembered at all – as an incompetent king, or someone who was merely an obstacle for the first of the Bruces to test himself against, the last king of the old times, before the Bruces would usher in a new era of Scottish glory. This view is simultaneous both unfair and true, while Malcolm was by no means a great man, he was dedicated to his ‘job’ of ruling Scotland, showing moments of occasional brilliance such as during the Excommunication Wars. But it must be admitted that those who would come after him were far more influential, both domestically and abroad.


Excerpt from ‘The life of Arthur Bruce’ by Alexander McDonald


There was a new King, and he would alter the course of history.



King Arthur.
 
Arthur really got a lot stronger in that campaign. Impressive, though I can't help feeling sorry for Malcolm.
 
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Interesting AAR. Following this.
 
Another good excerpt. A friendly hint from an old hand at AAR writing-communicating with your readers and acknowledging their comments is likely to keep them tied in and loyal ;)
 
Looks excellent.

Thank you :)

Arthur is quite the character. Battered, maimed, victorious.

He's turned out quite nicely, was a little worried that his stats were too good starting, but I needed the traits to help write the story, and then he just kept getting himself more good traits.

Arthur really got a lot stronger in that campaign. Impressive, though I can't help feeling sorry for Malcolm.

It's a bit sad yeah, I was quite impressed by his victory against England.

Interesting AAR. Following this.

Thanks

Another good excerpt. A friendly hint from an old hand at AAR writing-communicating with your readers and acknowledging their comments is likely to keep them tied in and loyal ;)

Disloyal Vassals Readers!? Can't have that! Thanks for the kind words and support.

After the next chapter I'm not sure when the next one will be due to a combination combination of IRL factors and well, quite a lot happens at once and I'll need to figure out how to separate it.
 
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Chapter 4 – Round 2


Excerpt from ‘The Kingdom of England’ by David Godwinson


Ætherbald had certainly been humiliated (and impoverished, having to pay some 400 gold to King Malcolm) by his failure during the Excommunication wars against Scotland. The ascension of this new Scottish King provided an opportunity to win a victory against Scotland, one where they could regain land that should rightfully belong to him as the King of England, as well as avenging his previous loss against the Scots and bolstering his reputation. Scotland must have been ravaged by the civil war and her armies decimated. Now would be the perfect time to strike. Assuming the Scots were weak was the greatest mistake of Ætherbald’s reign so far, and it was one he was making for a second time.


Excerpt from ‘The Correspondence of Kings: Part VII’ by William Gates


The following letter is from King Ætherbald of England to his Son. It was sent on the 31st of January 1084. It was (re)discovered in Manchester archives in the early 1970’s. As with previous letters it has been ‘translated’ to make understandable to modern readers, an unaltered copy is found on the next page.


Dear Son


I do not know if you have heard the good news, that heretic that has for too long offended man and God by occupying the throne of Scotland has been removed! Overthrown by that up jumped cutthroat Arthur Bruce, he’s got Malcolm in his dungeons, from what I hear that sadist will do all sorts of unspeakable things, doubt Malcolm will walk out alive, I’m sure retribution it’s for his heresy, but still an unpleasant business.


This new king brings new opportunities for us to reclaim lands that rightfully belong to me. I want you to start gathering men for an upcoming campaign and then start moving north, I’ll be gathering my own men and send word out for everyone to do likewise, once you’ve gathered up the men move them to York and we’ll combine our armies, no need to march them too quickly, we’ll need them rested for the fight.


This is it, we’ll get our revenge, we have been mocked too long for our failures last time, soon they shall admit their mistake.


Your Loving Father
Ætherbald

The English war for Cumberland


Excerpt from ‘The Reign of Malcolm III’ By Peter Brown

Although Malcolm’s reign was over, his life was not and he would still have a part to play in the future of Scotland. Malcolm was probably expecting a short life in Arthur’s dungeons, or worse, a long one. So it must’ve been a surprise when Arthur offered him his freedom for a small amount of gold (estimates range between 60 and 110 gold). Malcolm paid for his release and received it. We don’t know if Malcolm knew the reason why Arthur offered Malcolm his freedom before the offer was made: That Scotland was once again at war with England. The reason for Arthur’s offer is simple: he needed money, and fast. The troops he had available were simply not enough to defeat England’s larger armies and mercenaries were needed if Arthur was to pass his first test of kingship.


Malcolm lives another day

Arthur went even further than merely releasing Malcolm and gave him the job of Steward, and was made responsible for collecting extra taxes in Fife. The two even managed to maintain a professional, even positive relationship according to Arthur’s person physician (who also occupied the position of a ‘spiritual advisor’).


Excerpt from ‘The Correspondence of Kings: Part VII’ by William Gates


The following letter is from King Ætherbald of England to his Son. It was sent on the 10th of March 1085. It was (re)discovered in Manchester archives in the early 1970’s. As with previous letters it has been ‘translated’ to make understandable to modern readers, an unaltered copy is found on the next page.


Dear Son


You are hereby ordered to stand down your armies and return home. We’ve lost. I’ve lost.


Your King
Ætherbald​


Another loss for Ætherbald, this one would deeply affect the English King


Excerpt from ‘Judaism in Medieval Britain’ by Isaac Berman


Life for the Jewish communities in England were markedly worse following England’s loss in the Cumberland war, King Ætherbald blamed ‘Jewish gold’ for Arthur’s victory, while there is a tenuous connection between Arthur’s use of Jewish loans and his eventual victory it can hardly be said to be a major factor in the war. Even this ignores that fact that Ætherbald had himself taken out several loans from Jewish merchants in order to refill his own treasury after his failure in the Excommunication Wars bankrupted him. For the rest of his reign Ætherbald would further restrict the amount of power and wealth that Jew’s would be able to hold.


Much like the other numerous policies that were enacted in the latter half of Ætherbald’s reign it was more left to local rulers and magistrates to enforce these new laws and unlike other rulers elsewhere in the time period he could not bring himself to evict the Jews from their homes, a welcome respite for the Jews of England.
 
It's interesting to read the AAR in the style of a history book of sorts.
 
So why did the English lose? I'm liking the inclusion of Jewish money into the story
 
Interesting. These excerpts tell little of the actual war itself but of the politics and economics around it.

Originally I was just going to cover the war from a more Strategic/tactical sense, recounting battles etc. but at the end of the war I noticed that the King of England had gained the depressed trait, Ætherbald is actually quite a decent bloke, kind, diligent, honest, but seeing the fact he'd become depressed changed the angle I went for.

It's interesting to read the AAR in the style of a history book of sorts.

It's a style I 'stole' from a story on an Alternate history site.

So why did the English lose? I'm liking the inclusion of Jewish money into the story

With the mercs I hired we had about equal numbers, Ætherbald is a nice bloke but he's a terrible commander with a pitiful demesne, whereas Arthur is Arthur and he has quality commanders. As for the Jewish money stuff, Ætherbald is also Zealous so I decided that since he's zealous & depressed he might be looking for someone to blame.

As I said before I'm not sure when the next chapter will be, I'm going back to Uni next week so that'll take up most of my time.
 
Originally I was just going to cover the war from a more Strategic/tactical sense, recounting battles etc. but at the end of the war I noticed that the King of England had gained the depressed trait, Ætherbald is actually quite a decent bloke, kind, diligent, honest, but seeing the fact he'd become depressed changed the angle I went for.



It's a style I 'stole' from a story on an Alternate history site.



With the mercs I hired we had about equal numbers, Ætherbald is a nice bloke but he's a terrible commander with a pitiful demesne, whereas Arthur is Arthur and he has quality commanders. As for the Jewish money stuff, Ætherbald is also Zealous so I decided that since he's zealous & depressed he might be looking for someone to blame.

As I said before I'm not sure when the next chapter will be, I'm going back to Uni next week so that'll take up most of my time.
You just write when you can fella. We'll still be reading. Gave fun back at Uni