Well, it is not bad, not at all
This is a damn good story. You should get somebody to publish it and sell it.
This is a damn good story. You should get somebody to publish it and sell it.
Originally posted by Peter Ebbesen
WAAR of the Worlds
Lincoln, June 1689
HAVE YOU RESOLVED THE POLITICAL CRISIS, INSPECTOR-GENERAL SNARQUE?
Yes, indeed, Supreme Fieldmarshal! It turns out that the dastardly traitors were led by one Deaghaidh, an early convert to the Demonic cause and the rites of Satan, and the leaders of the pagan rituals in England. After the Demons were humbled and England conquered, he withdrew embittered into the great forest, from which he raided the countryside with his God-forsaken band of murderers, cutthroats, bards, scarlet dandys, unfrocked friars, and whores and other camp followers, engaging in acts of such utter lewdness that only the protection of Lucifer himself can explain his continued existence.
...Deaghaidh himself, waving a tattered Zorthon battle standard, rallied the surviving battlespawn (except for those that had converted), and charged the eighty thousand strong mobile defense army of middle England.
NOT A SMART CAREER MOVE FROM THIS SPAWN OF HELL, WAS IT SNARQUE?
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The alternatives wereOriginally posted by Sorcerer
Although I found that diplo-annexing the demons was a bit too easy. Clever, but too easy...
Forget simplistic labels of good and evil, and focus on intentions. And from just about any examination of intentions, the Lord of Bones is an admirable character, yesOriginally posted by Serene_Revival
The ending is rather weird to me.. I've always thought of the Lord of Bones just as (funnily) evil as the aliens.
Originally posted by Peter Ebbesen
While I'll admit that 4) had a certain charm, I thought 3) would be more surprising.
Originally posted by Peter Ebbesen
Anyway, Prufrock gets to write the ending... So watch out!
Now, I am very curious.Originally posted by Peter Ebbesen
WAAR of the Worlds
Mysterious Wall of the Sahara, August 21th, 1703
THAT WAS VERY QUICK, YKNIB MY STALLION OF IRON.
...to be continued....
Right. Reread the early parts of the AAR to see what happens when Battlespawn and the wall interact.Originally posted by Blackmamuth
the "shahara wall" is terra incognita; right?
Some people are gluttons for punishment...
I really like Peter protagonists; especially the chief scientist and the TRANSCENDANT ONE; any hope too get a cameo in your AAR?? *Maniacal laugh....*
Originally posted by Peter Ebbesen
(My favourite remains Chief Scientist)
Originally posted by Wyvern
Well guys what can I say, I've followed it all the way and thoroughly enjoyed it, but Prufrock, that was a rather cruel ending .
I seldom get tired of matematics.Originally posted by Sam Vimes
Impressive guys. A great AAR again and told in a magnificent way.
I was just wondering Peter, do you still have any fun playing the game, isn?t it to boring to do all these maths and have millions troups built?
ThanksOriginally written by Cat Lord
As long as he is not bored writing AARs, all is fine for his readers