*claps and whistles*
Poor Mold, not even after the case is closed does he get a break...
Quality stuff Norg!
Poor Mold, not even after the case is closed does he get a break...
Quality stuff Norg!
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!Now, rewrite it from the major's POV, like in Boomtown!
Absolutely excellent. Seriously. You should join the 2010 story, we need you.
. Excellent. 8 out of 5 stars. Best AAR ever. And i don't like them that much.
Dan Cook: Yeah, it's over for now. I will return, tho'.
thames:Why don't you write a HoI AAR? I loved your Orleans AAR. I admit that this AAR is a bit too short. I just ran out of ideas.
Valdermar: I wanted this to be a bit like "Gorky Park", "Fatherland" and those novels where everything starts out quite normal, then detoriates into hell on Earth. And, I don't like happy endings.
Storey: But of course the re-writes you forced me to improved the overall quality of the story.
Thank you for reading!
stnylan: I wish I could compete with your Muscowy/Russia EU II AAR, but the quality of your writing is quite deterring for me as a non-native speaker! Thanks for reading, though. I have a Word format version ready to be uploaded, so I may post a link somewhere.
Renton: Thanks! If you're related to the character in "Trainspotting", I'd have to say great story too.
JaJ: *bows* I feel a bit sorry for old Jon as well. What an anti-hero!
hughbartlett: The 2010 story? Personally, I'd give this AAR 3/5. It could do with a bit of fleshing out and a tighter plotline. But thank you for all the praise!
thames:Why don't you write a HoI AAR? I loved your Orleans AAR.
I admit that this AAR is a bit too short. I just ran out of ideas.Valdermar: I wanted this to be a bit like "Gorky Park", "Fatherland" and those novels where everything starts out quite normal, then detoriates into hell on Earth. And, I don't like happy endings.
Storey: But of course the re-writes you forced me to improved the overall quality of the story.
Thank you for reading!
stnylan: I wish I could compete with your Muscowy/Russia EU II AAR, but the quality of your writing is quite deterring for me as a non-native speaker! Thanks for reading, though.
I have a Word format version ready to be uploaded, so I may post a link somewhere.Renton: Thanks! If you're related to the character in "Trainspotting", I'd have to say great story too.
JaJ: *bows* I feel a bit sorry for old Jon as well. What an anti-hero!
hughbartlett: The 2010 story? Personally, I'd give this AAR 3/5. It could do with a bit of fleshing out and a tighter plotline. But thank you for all the praise!
Awe
Tomas, what can I say? Your writing has evolved from funny and interesting into something that is just an edit away from being pro.
" One of the local boozehounds entered, his face had a blueish red complexion that you?d never see anywhere else. His body odour was also, fortunately, rather rare."
Nice.
I missed all the cliffhangers, mostly thanks to Nextgentel for screwing up my adsl delivery by some 6 weeks. At least something good came out of it
But seriously, you must be considering going pro now, right?
Cheers.
HJ
Tomas, what can I say? Your writing has evolved from funny and interesting into something that is just an edit away from being pro.
" One of the local boozehounds entered, his face had a blueish red complexion that you?d never see anywhere else. His body odour was also, fortunately, rather rare."
Nice.
I missed all the cliffhangers, mostly thanks to Nextgentel for screwing up my adsl delivery by some 6 weeks. At least something good came out of it
But seriously, you must be considering going pro now, right?
Cheers.
HJ
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Hey, man! Good to see you back here!
You've been missed!
I suppose you're all set in a new den and with the 'net up and running, there might even be a possibility that you'd be posting here again?
I've considered trying to go into writing full-time again, yes. The current outlook in the economy scares me, though. So I won't quit my day job, but you can be sure that I'm working on something on the side.
Tomas
You've been missed!
I suppose you're all set in a new den and with the 'net up and running, there might even be a possibility that you'd be posting here again?
I've considered trying to go into writing full-time again, yes. The current outlook in the economy scares me, though. So I won't quit my day job, but you can be sure that I'm working on something on the side.
Tomas
*blush*
Now, Norg, although I appreciate the compliment I wish I could write a narrative like this.
Pretty please?
Den is up
Tomas:
All settled into my new place, complete with 5 other people to make the house feel slightly smaller. The LAN is up and at it, but still waiting for a new MB and some disks. My current mainboard is nearly 3 months old fer crying out.
HoI finally broke my horrible EU2 drug like habit, and plenty of time goes into finding just the right country to play. Norway sucks. Nationalist Spain has something going for it, as long as you edit in the leaders from Spain.
If you ever need someone to give a second (or third or fourth or whatever) opinion on your writing, I'd be honoured to do so
And one day we really need to get some mp action in. Is 2005 a good year for you? *grin*
Tomas:
All settled into my new place, complete with 5 other people to make the house feel slightly smaller. The LAN is up and at it, but still waiting for a new MB and some disks. My current mainboard is nearly 3 months old fer crying out.
HoI finally broke my horrible EU2 drug like habit, and plenty of time goes into finding just the right country to play. Norway sucks. Nationalist Spain has something going for it, as long as you edit in the leaders from Spain.
If you ever need someone to give a second (or third or fourth or whatever) opinion on your writing, I'd be honoured to do so
And one day we really need to get some mp action in. Is 2005 a good year for you? *grin*
2005 seems like a good year.
No, seriously, I can do that long before.
Good to hear you settling in nicely.
Anyway, that's the end of this long wait. Thank you all for reading and giving me such great feedback.
I may even return to a HoI AAR at some point. But not for a while.
No, seriously, I can do that long before.
Good to hear you settling in nicely.
Anyway, that's the end of this long wait. Thank you all for reading and giving me such great feedback.
I may even return to a HoI AAR at some point. But not for a while.
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GREAT story,...thanks for giving me something to kill and hour or so at work...
GREAT story,...thanks for giving me something to kill and hour or so at work...
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Thanks!
Glad you enjoyed it!
Originally posted by Shade25
GREAT story,...thanks for giving me something to kill and hour or so at work...
Thanks!
Glad you enjoyed it!
Great stuff, Norg! Just as Mimir, I really enjoyed the language of the story. This was much more then an AAR, of course.
I have never actually made myself to play HoI - even after reading this maybe I should now.
Hope you'll now come back to EU-2 aars?
Sasha.
I have never actually made myself to play HoI - even after reading this
maybe I should now.Hope you'll now come back to EU-2 aars?
Sasha.
Thanks for a great read, it started my Monday off well. I read it from start to finish and enjoyed every word
India 51A said:Thanks for a great read, it started my Monday off well. I read it from start to finish and enjoyed every word
Thank you very much! Glad it helped passing the time!
:rofl: hes been spying on us. or still subscribed.
I like how india's post is exactly a year after Norgs second to last post here......suspicious
I like how india's post is exactly a year after Norgs second to last post here......suspicious
Mr.G 24 said:
o Guilty as charged. Still... now that it's reviewed and all, I just feel all proud and that, you know.