At the AARs - A Review of Past and Present AARs
Welcome to the long awaited debut of At the AARs with various reviewers. If you're curious as to how this whole thing got started check out Feedback Glad you're all here. Just sit back, grab some popcorn and enjoy.
Some of you may have a few questions. Allow me to address some of the more common ones.
And now a few common sense ground rules for everyone participating. Remember, our mods are watching (as they always are) and will not/should not hesitate to shut down this project if things get out of hand. Not that I think that things will get out of hand, but better safe than sorry. This forum is remarkable for its polite and civil tone (way to go LD and Warspite!). Let’s all make sure it stays that way.
Welcome to the long awaited debut of At the AARs with various reviewers. If you're curious as to how this whole thing got started check out Feedback Glad you're all here. Just sit back, grab some popcorn and enjoy.
Some of you may have a few questions. Allow me to address some of the more common ones.
- What’s the point? Why review AARs?
Several reasons, actually. Here are three of the biggest:
There are lots of wonderful AARs in the archives, and more being written every day-far more than most people can keep up with. Some readers may appreciate having the additional information a review provides as they decide what to read next. Of course, caveat emptor: a review is no substitute for first-hand examination and forming your own opinion directly!
Most authors would like to attract more readers and more feedback to their AARs. Hopefully, well-written reviews will do more than just redistribute traffic. Ideally, they will encourage people to read more and get them thinking about what they’re reading. If we’re lucky, that will translate to more readers and more detailed, insightful feedback.
Some authors are actively seeking to sharpen their writing skills. For those people, reasoned and thoughtful commentary gives more than a warm-fuzzy, it’s absolutely vital. But oftentimes, people reading an AAR give feedback on the spur of the moment, with a fairly limited range of questions and comments. For authors who are looking for more, the reviews can be a way to begin a deeper and more thorough discussion of the work.
- What kind of reviews are you doing?
At the moment there are three different levels of review, roughly corresponding to the three goals just discussed. In general, most authors will find these range in intensity between a gentle massage and an anal probe in terms of invasiveness. Just kidding.
Basic is a general overview of the AAR. The review provides a brief description and some highlights, but doesn’t go much further.
Average presents a more in-depth look at the AAR. In addition to a description/synopsis, the review would include more analytical feedback, possible comparisons to other works, and suggestions for improvement.
Advanced reviews are for authors who really want to improve their craft and are willing to undergo what may be a fairly thorough analysis/critique of their work. Many review readers may find this level of detail less useful, but they may pick up some ideas or thought-provoking comments that could help them in their own writing efforts.
Note that in all cases, the writer and reviewer will discuss in advance how thorough to make the review. We don’t want to “ambush” anyone!
Also, from time to time we will try more ambitious projects. Examples might include: taking a comprehensive look at an entire body of work by one author; compare and contrast works with a similar style/same nation/same author; reviews of the same AAR by very different reviewers, etc. Because of the much greater amount of time required from all concerned, these projects will be done on a limited basis The primary focus will be on individual reviews of single AARs.
- How do I get my AAR reviewed?
Simple, tell either myself (CraigAshley) or one of the reviewers. Our current reviewers are Morlac, shawng1, Sharur, and Secret Master. From time to time we may approach writers directly to request the opportunity to review their work or even to serve as a reviewer. If you are approached but not interested, no big deal. Just let us know, and the matter will be dropped.
- Does the AAR have to be completed?
No. If the AAR is still in progress, however, it must be of sufficient length that the reviewer has something substantial to go by. A good guideline is that three full pages on your thread will usually be enough unless you’ve been getting lots more feedback or OOC commentary than posts. If you write with a word processor, do a word count-10,000 words is great, but anything under 7,500 is probably not enough.
Also, we would like to split the reviews relatively evenly between completed and in-progress AARs. We will also strive to ensure that finished AARs cover the spectrum of time from the forum’s inception till now.
- Will the author get to respond to the criticism/suggestions?
Yes.
When the review is completed, but not yet posted, the reviewer will send it to the author and to me. While I or someone I designate may edit the review for spelling, grammar, and/or good taste, the reviewer is NOT required to change the review just because the author disagrees or doesn’t like it.
Authors have two response options:
Cancel the whole thing, in which case the review won’t be posted. Doing this may make the author ineligible for further reviews. (It takes a lot of time and effort to review a piece and we don't want to waste the time of the reviewers.)
The author may (and is encouraged to) submit a response. This is not an opportunity to bash the reviewer, but to discuss your work in the context of the review, explain your thought process, clarify ambiguities or misperceptions, etcetera.
Assuming that the author chooses not to exercise the first option, the reviewer posts his review to the thread when the author has had an opportunity to craft a response. The author then posts his response immediately after the review. When both are posted, everyone else can join in the discussion.
- So if I'm not the author or the reviewer, I can still share my thoughts?
By all means, yes, though only after the author has posted a response (or indicated that one will not be forthcoming). However, the review thread is not intended to take the place of feedback on the actual threads themselves but rather to stimulate the discussion. If possible, post your thoughts on the AAR thread itself. (Use the QUOTE function with copy-and-paste to ‘port over any relevant passages from this thread.)
And now a few common sense ground rules for everyone participating. Remember, our mods are watching (as they always are) and will not/should not hesitate to shut down this project if things get out of hand. Not that I think that things will get out of hand, but better safe than sorry. This forum is remarkable for its polite and civil tone (way to go LD and Warspite!). Let’s all make sure it stays that way.
- Keep it courteous, civil, and impersonal. This is not a vehicle for the creation or pursuit of personal vendettas. The atmosphere must be one of respect and encouragement. That’s not to say that critical comments are unwelcome, but the Golden Rule applies. If it would hurt your feelings if said to you, find a better way to say it or don’t say it at all.
- Keep it constructive and specific, not destructive or generic. Good criticism helps the person to achieve greater things down the road, it doesn’t belittle or demean, nor should it discourage someone from further efforts.
If you think an AAR is awful, there is nothing wrong with that as your overall opinion. What is wrong is posting "this AAR was awful." Try to find things that you liked or which show some promise, and spend some time discussing them. If and when you move on to discussing the elements you were less thrilled by, do so by answering both of these questions:
Why, specifically, didn’t it work as well as it could have? Too long? Too short? Unrealistic? Vague? Overly detailed?
How, specifically, could that element be improved?
Remember, just as authors put a lot of time and effort into their AARs, reviewers do the same in their reviews. So posting "this reviewer is a moron" is just as unwelcome!
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