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Alptraum (Nightmare)
An Alternative History Affair
By TekcoR

Flashback

Chapter 4
Orders from the Rear




I desired to open the letter after we boarded the plane, which had an insignia on the tail that I had never seen before; however I kept meeting resistance. I insisted on stopping by headquarters, but Preissner assured me everything had been arranged, and that the situation along with the calling to Berlin was of utter importance. Before I was even properly seated, I felt the plane moving down the runway, swaying ever so slightly to avoid shells that had penetrated the surface since landing. I glanced over at Rhiley, though awake he looked as if he were about to fall into a slumber. I waited a few minutes until he had fallen off into the state of sleep.

“Preissner, I know you too well, and you know this. I know there is an alternate reason for your visit. We are both trained in our fields too well to know that you were just randomly visiting Warsaw and happened to find me sitting upon the banks of the river.” I watched his face, as it tightened up, his smile becoming serious.


Colonel Erwin Daniel Preissner​

“Schnack,” he said. Though knowing each other for all our lives, it had become an instilled within the fabric of our existence to address each other this way, unless we could catch ourselves and conduct a more informal saying. “There is a certain level of secrecy that always must be taken, I am sure you are aware of the necessity of hiding ones activities,” he paused there and winked his left eye.

Except for the roaring engines, there was deafening silence that continued on for a handful of seconds. “Tristan,” he deliberately said before pausing for an excoriating three seconds. “I often wonder what kind of situation or predicament I would be in if it was not for you. There is no doubt though, that I would not be in the position, nor place for that matter, to properly repay the debt that I owe,” he finished, not by choice but his emotions forced the end of his speech.

On numerous occasions Erwin and I had discussed this very topic, often over dinner as old friends at a local restaurant, in plain view of all the other patrons. “Erwin, I…I understand and know the depth of your feelings regarding what has happened. I am greatly honored that you insist on honoring an assumed debt; but I cannot accept it. To the extent that I am concerned, none of us truly owes the other a life altering favor.” He had partially regained his emotions; though at times it was hard to distinguish if he was acting.

Preissner slowly removed his left hand from his forehead and looked dead into my eyes. “I know we have gone over the details a thousand times my friend. Every time though, one detail that has haunted me since that day I came to your rescue for the first time. We became friends; we shared stories and our deepest fears about the remainder of the war.” He continued his tremendous stare into my eyes; any unaccustomed person would have broken by now.

He carried on. “It is hard to express my brother, but I believe if our chance encounter never happened I would not be here. I am afraid I,” he paused. There was no acting, only the raw emotion of truth. “I am afraid I would have committed suicide, not only once near the end of the war, but throughout the difficult times afterwards. For that, I am forever grateful. Without all that has occurred between us, my three beautiful daughters would not breathe. For the life you have spared and brought into this world Tristan, I have sought to reward you.”

I didn’t quite know what to say. I never thought that I had radically changed my friends’ life, just provided suggestions and consultations when requested. “What kind of reward?” I ended up squeaking out.

His eyes death-grip-like stare ended, but now focused on the manila envelope he had given me earlier in the morning. “You can now open it my friend. I promise.”

I raised the envelope to be level near my stomach, above my lap. Carefully undoing the protective seal, I noticed only one piece of paper was in the entire package. I delayed, returning my eyes to Preissner who looked back into my eyes and gestured that this was not a game. With his second round of approval, I reached in and pulled out the paper.

‘To Lieutenant Colonel Tristan Schnack,’ I nodded, reading further down on the relatively scarcely filled piece of paper. ‘You are ordered to return to Berlin with haste and report directly to Generaloberst Friedrich Fromm, the commanding officer of the Reserve Army. Effective immediately you are now the Chief of Staff for Generaloberst Fromm.” I slowly placed the letter back into the envelope, all the while looking at Preissner. My face expressed the feeling that he did not have to repay me with such honors.

“Tristan, my friend, my savior; I have read your reports, they have not gone unnoticed to certain individual people and small but influential groups. I speak for one of these numerous groups,” he again delayed, for dramatic pause. “Tristan, you saved my life. Now you have a chance to save millions.”

I motioned him to stop, as he began repeating the last sentence about saving millions of lives.







 
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Reichsführer and Chieff of Staff of the Reserve Army? For this there was no need of Preissner (cute pic BTW :D ), just a small talk with Adolf...
 
Ah....so this is how Tristan obtained his initial appointment with the Reserve Army.....and I agree. The photo of Michael Caine as Preissner is priceless (one of my favorite WW2 movies, by the way....."The Eagle has Landed".... with Michael Caine as Oberst Kurt Steiner).

Looking forward to more!!
 
Reichsführer and Chieff of Staff of the Reserve Army? For this there was no need of Preissner (cute pic BTW :D ), just a small talk with Adolf...

Well, where we left off before the "Flashback Installments", Tristan is the Reichsführer and his brother, Josef is commander of the Reserve Army. Right now, in the "Flashback Installments", Tristan is just becoming Chief of Staff of the Reserve Army.

Ah....so this is how Tristan obtained his initial appointment with the Reserve Army.....and I agree. The photo of Michael Caine as Preissner is priceless (one of my favorite WW2 movies, by the way....."The Eagle has Landed".... with Michael Caine as Oberst Kurt Steiner).

Looking forward to more!!

I actually talked to the real life Preissner (a good friend who is currently deployed to Afghanistan) and asked him what actor he would like to portray him. Michael Caine was the first choice.

Elaborating on Preissner, he will be an interesting character later once the non-"Flashback Installments" resume. Thus he got the buildup he deserved - though his entire store has not been shared.
 
and pretty soon, he will get an introduction into treason, no doubt.
 
and pretty soon, he will get an introduction into treason, no doubt.

We shall see about that! :D

As a tease my friends, since I just love doing so.

 

Who thinks I spend too much time creating images instead of writing?

Hint: Answer that question wisely.

Hint #2: Anybody care to tell me the symbolism of the colors?

What does the blue stand for?

What does the red stand for?

What does the yellow/gold stand for?

What is missing from this censored version?
 
obviously a reference to Spain. the blue stands for the US, I think.
I can't even read the word, so I have no clue what's missing. remind me, did Franco win the civil war?
the middle picture is Hitler in Berlin. lots of German blood spilled?
I have no clue about the yellow colour. The gold of Spain? Gibraltar?
 
Here are the answers:

What does the blue stand for?

The Declaration of United Nations, it exists in this timeline as it did in our timeline.

What does the red stand for?

Everything that the Nazis and Hitler touched turned to 'blood'.

What does the yellow/gold stand for?

"Liberal" or "Democratic" modern Germany.

What is missing from this censored version?

A Swastika to complete the flag.
 
Who thinks I spend too much time creating images instead of writing?
Not me! I think you're doing a fantastic job of maintaining a super high level of writing quality with just the right amount of graphic accents to accompany everything. It's probably no mystery that I'm a sucker for graphics...but please, don't cave to those telling that you should only write. Keep it just the way you're going. I like it a lot TekcoR.
 
Not me! I think you're doing a fantastic job of maintaining a super high level of writing quality with just the right amount of graphic accents to accompany everything. It's probably no mystery that I'm a sucker for graphics...but please, don't cave to those telling that you should only write. Keep it just the way you're going. I like it a lot TekcoR.

Thanks.

The next installment will eventually come out; been working through a lack of motivation and time consuming rehab exercises. Also I can add in a hint:

DOC I'D NEVER PER PI DAN
 
I may have worked through my writer's bloc - I have ended up writing seven sentences today; which is better than the zero words I averaged past two days, and just sentence or two days before that.

Plus there may be a new character introduced:

Lieutenant Frank Ethereal von Wren

And an additional hint, that may or may not be related:

A Divorced Dinner Pep.
 
Ethereal? A lighty name, methinks.
 
Alptraum (Nightmare)
An Alternative History Affair
By TekcoR

Flashback

Chapter 4
An Ordered Affair




I had departed the plane twenty minutes prior, and was slowly being escorted by vehicle through the surprising crowded streets of Berlin. Rhiley sat to my right, amazed by the structure and layout of the city; though handfuls of buildings down each street were damaged. Sections of streets were deemed impassable because of the numerous amounts of debris or craters that riddled them. From the sides of the buildings, whether damaged or not, hung massive banners displaying the flag of the Third Reich. At the street corners pictures of the oddly missing Adolf Hitler were erected with an amusing motto: “He will protect us.”

Eerily I remembered my last visit to the capital and it appeared that the propaganda machine had not decreased; rather increased nearly tenfold. I was hesitant to ask the driver if the rumors were true, that the Führer still remained secluded within his bunker. With all buildings prominently displaying flags, and every other lamppost diligently holding two banners of a well dressed, proud looking Führer, the doubts I had been holding in the abyss began to resurface. Any right-minded person can only withstand so much disappointment and abuse before they realize the source of the problem. The thoughts of the Führer, who I felt partially responsible for the debacle occurring, could be saved. He had saved us before, and a part of me; however remote believed that with the right measures, he could himself be saved.


The driver occasionally darted around the debris and roaming patrols of soldiers as he sped us towards our final destination of Zossen. I had never been to the suburb city of the capital; which housed both the Oberkommando der Wehrmacht and Oberkommando des Heeres. Rumors had radiated from my destination that both the High Command and the Army Command lacked cooperation, and there was no clear subordination; and a lack of coordination between the two. I had witnessed such disorganization a day after arriving at Warsaw. The divisional command structure had gathered and we debated which order to follow. Keitel from OKW wished for us to prepare for offensive immediately; while Halder from OKW urged us to stand fast and wait for reinforcements.

We arrived at a well camouflaged complex; that from the air I was told by the driver resembled a village. On the ground it was no ordinary village, as it was surrounded by guard posts, and varying degrees of perimeter protection. A quick glance at my orders along with a look at my identification sped us through the gates and on towards one of the buildings; there were twelve within the complex interlinked to a centralized bunker. I had been advised earlier by Preissner, that I would be able to meet with the appropriate parties at Maybach 1; which housed OKH.

We arrived to little fanfare, nobody waiting at the door to greet us. The driver unceremoniously got out of the vehicle and opened the door for Rhiley and myself, and stated that he would park the car, and return once called for. We casually walked up the bland few concrete steps to the entrance of the building; which was no more than a heavy wooden door. As we entered the building, I was humbled by the equally bland walls, there hung a flag of the state, but everything else was being packed. Dozens of soldiers equal to Rhiley’s rank were carrying documents, paintings and other furniture, waiting for trucks to arrive. Sadly it looked like the headquarters was preparing a retreat that it had forbade units under it from committing.

I casually asked one of the soldiers where General Fromm’s headquarters was located and was pointed to the direction down the immediate hall to our left. Rhiley and I walked the three dozen and a half steps to the door of his office. When we arrived I saw a through the half opened door a man in his late middle ages sifting through papers in the drawers of the desk. I stood by the door, uncomfortable to move in unless cleared to enter his temporary chamber.

“Ah,” said the man’s voice in a deep but startling tone. “I see the young Colonel I have requested has arrived. Please, come in Colonel.”

I motioned for Rhiley to remain at the door. He nodded that he understood his assignment. With my right hand I gently pushed the door the remaining way open. As I cleared the door’s angle, Fromm motioned with his hand to close the door; which I promptly executed. I walked towards his desk, bringing myself to a halt a foot and a half before it.

“Relax, relax,” he said, looking over me. I had grown accustomed to being addressed by senior officers over the numerous years of service. However, this situation was quite different. There was no training for being plucked from the warzone and thrown behind the lines. Then about to find one’s self in the midst of having control of hundreds of thousands, to millions of others. It did not ease my nerves, even though I strained to relax them, that Fromm began pacing from edge to edge of his desk.

“We both know why you are here Colonel. With that known, I am going to cut to the chase. I am in desperate need for a man who bucks the trend, and will not make friends with the other generals under both commands,” he came to a pause before picking back up four seconds later. “Colonel, Germany needs more officers like you. As I was looking over thousands of candidates to become my new Chief of Staff, none of them had repeatedly lodged inquires and suggestions to the degree you have. Under normal circumstances, a person of your character and border-line insubordination would not be given this chance. However, we both know that these are not normal circumstances. Is that right Colonel?”

“You are correct general,” I said briefly as possible, trying to hide the fact that I nearly swallowed my Adams apple during part of his speech.

Fromm came to a complete stop, behind his desk in vertical line with me. “I am be granting you nearly absolute control of the Reserve Army,” my eyes lit up with that revelation. “However,” he said at last, there always had to be some sort of catch. “I have chosen your adjutant; he is a young Oberleutnant by the name of Frank Ethereal von Wren. Go ahead and step out Wren,” he said. As if on queue, my new adjutant stepped out from a room to the side of Fromm’s office.







 
Jsut a but. Our boy is still the Reichsführer. I don't think that Fromm would dare to talk to him in suc ha familiar way, so to speak.
 
Jsut a but. Our boy is still the Reichsführer. I don't think that Fromm would dare to talk to him in suc ha familiar way, so to speak.

Right now he is not "Reichsfuhrer" these are "flashback installments", they are pre-1944.
 
Nice job capturing the tension of that moment. I can think of no other place i'd rather NOT be than Berlin in these circumstances and enjoyed your descriptions of the city. Interesting stuff TekcoR....I'm curious where you'll take us with this new "Ethereal" character.
 
Nice job capturing the tension of that moment. I can think of no other place i'd rather NOT be than Berlin in these circumstances and enjoyed your descriptions of the city. Interesting stuff TekcoR....I'm curious where you'll take us with this new "Ethereal" character.

There are some plans for the anagram that is Frank Ethereal von Wren. Anybody care to study the anagram and come back with his real life character name?
 
well I tried...I thought Konstantin von Neurath might fit (but it didn't). I even cheated and tried using an online anagram analyser but came up empty....which of course only makes me want to know who it is ever MORE now....haha
 
well I tried...I thought Konstantin von Neurath might fit (but it didn't). I even cheated and tried using an online anagram analyser but came up empty....which of course only makes me want to know who it is ever MORE now....haha

That would work, close but no cigar though!