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So Sigfrið's end fast approaches. But in one swoop, Eilif has basically crushed the initial opposition he would seemingly face and for all intents and purposes, seized power. Not a bad set of moves from the prince (though perhaps not surprising based on his fairly balanced stats).

Yes time grows short for Sigfrið. In the game basically what happened was once Sigfrið was declared incapable Emma became regent. Then a few days later Borkvard replaced her. Then Eilif replaced him after a couple of months. No explanations were given. After Eilif became regent I noticed that Borkvard, Waltheof, and Haraldr were gone from Council. I had to devise a way to explain all that.

This is the fun part of writing the AAR. The game does something with no explanation and as the writer you have to devise a coherent story or reason to explain the gameplay. Sometimes doing so can be frustrating and result in a bunch of rewrites. I am again at that point as I compose some of the future chapters.

Another thing that I have learned is that I have to plan the story out better. With Knut I was developing the story chapter by chapter. With Sigfrið I planned out the story several years ahead. In the next group I will most likely outline the character's entire rule. Then brainstorm the chapters and review them for consistency. Rewrite and rewrite. I hope the story reflects these efforts. I feel I had some success with Sigfrið.

But I get ahead of myself. Sigfrið may be down but not out yet. There is still some story to come.
 
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This is the fun part of writing the AAR. The game does something with no explanation and as the writer you have to devise a coherent story or reason to explain the gameplay.
I heartily concur with this sentiment.

I rather like what we get to see of Eilif here.
 
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Eilif continues to clear out any threats to him, which is skillfully done by framing it as threats against his father and mother. He seems to have quite a bit of grandfather in him. And perhaps his father, given the way Sigfrið started dealing with threats by the middle part of his reign.

This is the fun part of writing the AAR. The game does something with no explanation and as the writer you have to devise a coherent story or reason to explain the gameplay. Sometimes doing so can be frustrating and result in a bunch of rewrites. I am again at that point as I compose some of the future chapters.

I hear that. There's often a good amount which makes little sense from a real life standpoint and trying to devise a way it could happen is a fun little challenge. And it can be a little less more daunting in some ways than when you write yourself into a corner - from my own experience, there you feel like you messed up. If the game does something crazy or nonsensical, you can at least say "well, not my fault CK2's mechanics just work that way!"
 
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I rather like what we get to see of Eilif here.

I think he won't disappoint for the time being.

The king not dead and plays already made for power.

Isn't that the medieval way? The king had many enemies and they were just waiting for the opportunity. If Eilif wants to be king he has to grab it and protect it.

Eilif continues to clear out any threats to him, which is skillfully done by framing it as threats against his father and mother. He seems to have quite a bit of grandfather in him. And perhaps his father, given the way Sigfrið started dealing with threats by the middle part of his reign.

In the beginning Eilif is very aggressive and sure of himself. As time goes on we will have to see if he is more his grandfather or his father.
 
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Chapter 5.24.2 November 983 Hereford
10 November 983 Hereford

Eilif stood in the nave of the small village church as the cold rain pounded down the roof. With him stood Count Siweard of Lincoln and King Cynwrig. Eilif noticed that no one represented the Scottish. Their performance in the war had been abysmal. They were routed at every battle they fought and the one time they fought with Count Siweard they fled from the field before the battle was done.

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Once Eilif and his Jorvikian armies entered the war the tide turned against Guichard. Eilif retook Marthraf in May. Llangollen was recaptured in August. Guichard foolishly retreated into Gloucester. Eilif trapped Guichard and his army near Gloucester and destroyed it on October 15th.


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Guichard again retreated this time into County Hereford. Eilif followed closely, Count Siweard maneuvered eastward from County Powys. Between the two Guichard was trapped close to this village near Hereford.

Guichard walked into the nave. Despite being defeated the man was proud and demanded respect. There would be no kneeling from this man. Cynwrig was about to order the guards to force Guichard to kneel when Eilif spoke, “Lord Guichard.”

Guichard replied respectfully, “Prince Eilif.”

Cynwrig glared at both Eilif and Guichard.

Eilif asked, “Do you agree to the terms?”

Guichard replied, “I do.”

Siweard then spoke, “You will pay King Cynwrig 300 gold, and King Eilif 200 gold. You will then march to Gloucester and board your ships. Your ships will then be escorted to the coast of Brittany.”

Guichard nodded. He saluted Eilif and then left the church.

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King Cynwrig turned to Eilif and angrily said, “How dare you bargain and accept a surrender for me?”

Eilif looked at the Gynweddian king, “You forget whose soil you stand on. If it had not been for my father’s armies your cities would still be held by Guichard and he would eventually depose you.”

Cynwrig said, “Your father had a obligation to defend us.”

Eilif said, “ you are correct. Perhaps we should have answered the call and camped on our side of the border and watch your armies being crushed and you lead naked through the streets in chains.”

Cynwrig snorted and spun around. He then stormed out of the church.

Siweard said, “You were hard on him.”

Eilif replied, “I will not waste another drop of Jorvikian blood on that lunatic. The Great Pox eats away at his mind and all he understands now is needless violence and cruelty. He also needed to be reminded of his place and who is the true power in Wales.”

Siweard nodded.

Eilif continued, “Make sure Guichard and what's left of his army makes it to Gloucester without any problems from Cynwrig. Also have General Najib shadow King Cynwrig and his army on their way back to Gwynedd.”

Siweard answered, “Yes milord.”

As Siweard was walking out of the nave Eilif said to him, “When we return to Richmond we must discuss the Scottish and what we should do about them.”
 
Chapter 5.24.3 January 984 Richmond
25 January 984 Richmond

Eilif reined the galloping horse almost to halt. Before the horse came to a full stop Eilif swung around in the saddle and lept from the back of the horse. As he landed he threw the reins to a surprised guard. Eilif quickly flew up the stairs and into the palace. He navigated the hallways at break neck speed.

By the time he reached his father’s chamber he was out of breath. At the door to the room he was meet by Court Physician Bengt. Bengt looked tired and exhausted. His shoulders sagged and there were bags under his eyes. He reached out and stopped Eilif.

Eilif was angry the physician blocked his way. One look into Bengt’s eyes and the tension in Eilif drained and was replaced by dread.

Bengt said to him, “Sire, you father has passed.”

All the strength and energy seemed to drain from Eilif.

Bengt said, “He stopped breathing about a half an hour ago. Your mother was with him and his passing was peaceful.”

Eilif head lowered and tears welled up in eyes. Bengt opened the door to chamber. Eilif gradually walked into the chamber. Sigfrið looked like he was sleeping. Eilif walked toward the bed. He then realized that someone was sitting in the chair next to the bed. Slowly the person’s head turned. His mother, Emma, rose from the chair. Tears rolled down her cheeks. Eilif stepped toward her. She hugged him and cried heavily into his chest.

Emma let Eilif go. She turned and reached for something on the table beside the bed. She picked up the item and handed it to Eilif. It was the king’s scepter.

Emma said to Eilif, “It is yours now, You are now the king.”

Her words hung heavy in the air as Eilif stared at her.

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So time for Eilif to stand on his own two feet - the signs so far are remarkably good
 
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I have more confident in Eilif than I did his father - but I was wrong about his father. Still he seems to be quickly identifying threats and breaking them, which is essential.
 
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So time for Eilif to stand on his own two feet - the signs so far are remarkably good

Eilif is off to a good start. Now we will see how long it lasts.

Eilif is showing steel. Good. He'll need it.

At these times a strong leader is needed. England is not the weak mess that it was during Sigfrið's reign. Over in Ireland Connachta is becoming a power. Lastly King Cynwrig of Gwynedd is going to a problem. Epidemics are coming also.

I have more confident in Eilif than I did his father - but I was wrong about his father. Still he seems to be quickly identifying threats and breaking them, which is essential.

Eilif is definitely a stronger ruler from the beginning. He was groomed to perfection and quickly earns the Respected Ruler Bonus. He does have some malcontents but he controls such a large swath of Jorvik unless he does something stupid factions will be just an annoyance.

Out of all the successions including ones coming after Eilif; Eilif's transition to king is one the easiest I have ever had. In some ways it is hard to write about because not much happened in the game.

I have a very rough outline done of Eilif's regein now I am trying to flesh it out. I am trying to identify the villains and the friends, and who moves from one category to another. I am hoping this makes the story flow better and that I don't write myself into a dead end as I have done a few times. I have about 3 chapters in rough draft. I am rewriting the entire first chapter as I write this. I have gone back and changed the focus of the storyline. I felt I was wondering all over the place and I am trying to center on Eilif and maybe two or three other characters.

So as I post this I do not have a chapter ready. I usually like to have two or three chapters ready for posting when I post. That way I feel that I do not have rush writing a chapter. With the rewrites, a little case of writer's block and some things going on in my personal life it may be a few days before I begin posting Eilif's tale.

Strange as I think about the personal and health issues that my family and I have been going through over the last few months writing this AAR and reading other AAR's have been therapeutic. They have allowed me an escape from the tough days. I can immerse myself in these various worlds for a few hours and in doing so recharge to face the next bit of trauma. Sorry for the rambling but I needed to get that off my chest. Thank you for the comments and also thanks for the AAR's that many of you have written or are writing.
 
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Chapter 6.1.1 February 984 Lancaster
Chapter 6.1 Eilif

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13 February 984 Lancaster

Eilif rose from the bed and walked over to the table and poured himself some wine. He poured a second cup and walked back to the bed. He sat on the side of the bed and handed the cup to Countess Cyneswith of Bedford. He leaned over and kissed her.

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“You seem like you a hundred of miles from here,” said Eilif.

“I am sorry, my darling,” Cyneswith responded.

Eilif said, “Whatever is troubling you must be of great importance to worry a woman as strong as yourself.”

Cyneswith closed her eyes and took several measured breathes. She hesitated but finally said, “It is Count Rögnvaldr of Gloucester.”

Eilif asked, “What of Rögnvaldr?”

Cyneswith replied, “Do you remember the meeting we had in Dinefwr?”

Eilif answered, “Yes, the time when Ælfweard nearly killed Rögnvaldr?”

Cyneswith responded, “Yes. The next morning Rögnvaldr cornered me in the hallway. He told me if I left the faction or even thought to leave the faction he would kill me.”

Eilif said, “There has to be more. I have seen you laugh off threats like that.”

Cyneswith looked away from Eilif, “He reminded me how his brother Kettil died by an assassin's blade in the night, and how Jedvard was killed in an explosion. An explosion that killed those who were with him. His implication was quite clear that any near to me could die also.”

“Later in at a meeting in Ipswich he threatened my children directly. I have lived in fear of him ever since.”

Eilif sat silently listening. Anger began to burn in him like an out of control fire. “I have no direct way of punishing him. I have no claim to Gloucester. He has made no direct threat on me or the royal family. He flaunts my inability to punish him and uses it to torture both of us.”

“My father tried to prove that Rögnvaldr was behind the death of his brother and nephew. My uncle Totil was leading the investigation when he suffered an apoplexy. Some rumoured that Rögnvaldr was responsible. I know my Aunt Eadburg still does. Nothing has ever been proven against Rögnvaldr, he is too sly. One day he will make a mistake.”

Cyneswith started to sob, “I wish to tell you for a long time but I feared that you would rsent being for being part of the faction.”

Eilif smiled and said, “I knew for many years and it did not trouble me. I knew that the faction would never succeed against my father. I doubt that they will have much luck against me.”

Cyneswith looked at him crossly, “And why is that?”

Eilif replied, “It is simply about numbers, my father and now I control as many levies as the other lords combined. It makes any challenges to the king’s authority very difficult to say the least.”

Cyneswith half smiled, “But that still does not help me. I am stuck in a dark place.” She then began to cry, “I am in constant fear for my children’s life. You are king you must be able to do something ”

Eilif hugged her and said, “There is nothing I can do directly to Rögnvaldr. My father tried to prove Rögnvaldr’s involvement in the death of Count Kettil and Count Jedvard. He was not able to do so. The closest we ever came was his reaction when Ælfweard accused him back in Dinefwr.”

Cyneswith cried at him, “But you are king!”

Eilif replied, “Yes I am but I must abide by certain laws and traditions otherwise no one would trust or follow me.”

Cyneswith put her head in her hands and cried, “Then there is no hope.”

Eilif hugged her and said, “You could plot his death but that would take too long and there is much uncertainty with it.”

Cyneswith buried her face into his chest and cried harder.

Eilif said, “There is one thing but I hesitate unless you feel there is no other way. It should remove you from Rögnvaldr’s attention.”

Cyneswith looked up with hope in her eyes, “Yes what is it?”

Eilif replied, “As you are aware that many in the kingdom felt I had too many titles so I appointed some new vassals.”

Cyneswith said, “Yes you made Anlaufr Jarl of Powys, Cytelbearn who is the son of Count Siweard of Lincoln Count of Mann, and Ingólfr Count of Leicester. But how will that help me?”

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Eilif replied, “I could transfer your vassalage to Jarl Anlaufr of Powys.”

Cyneswith asked, “And what would that accomplish expect make me subject to another?”

Eilif said, “You would no longer be a direct vassal to me. Your levies could not be raised against me unless Anlaufr ordered it and even then you could rebel against him. You would no longer fit into any of Rögnvaldr’s schemes. The reason to threaten you would be gone.”

Cyneswith sighed and then said, “In order to save my children’s lives it looks like I have no other choice.”

Eilif smiled, “Just because I am no longer your direct liege doesn’t mean that we have to stop our occasionally meetings.”

Cyneswith looked at him, “You have only one thing on your mind.” She then smiled and kissed him. Eilif returned her kiss and they slipped under the covers.

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Becoming King can cause so many troubles :D
 
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Interesting. Anlaufr may find it to be a curse to have the countess when she can muster more troops than he can.

I notice the countess is also pregnant. Wonder if it's her husband's or the new king's... and if that might play a role later.
 
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Becoming King can cause so many troubles :D

And the troubles will keep coming.

Interesting. Anlaufr may find it to be a curse to havmodifiers aree the countess when she can muster more troops than he can.

I notice the countess is also pregnant. Wonder if it's her husband's or the new king's... and if that might play a role later.

Time will tell how Cyneswith and Anlaufr relationship plays out. Cyneswith also owes a debt to Eilif for getting her out from under Rögnvaldr’s schemes.

The save game that I used to grab the image of Cyneswith is about 6 months later than the date of the chapter. As a result sometimes traits, and other modifiers are out of sync. I did a poor job with my save games at times. I need to be more careful in future playing.
 
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The save game that I used to grab the image of Cyneswith is about 6 months later than the date of the chapter. As a result sometimes traits, and other modifiers are out of sync. I did a poor job with my save games at times. I need to be more careful in future playing.

Eh, sometimes there's no way around that. I've had to do it too in my story. But, honestly the time of it is irrelevant. Unless they are no longer going to be having their affair, it's still a potential issue for down the road.
 
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But, honestly the time of it is irrelevant. Unless they are no longer going to be having their affair, it's still a potential issue for down the road.

I didn't notice it until you mentioned it.:eek: However,I did pick up on it and it is mentioned in another subchapter.

I will say the affair continues and it will have consequences down the road. This child is not Eilif's. There will other chances, however.:D
 
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Chapter 6.1.2 July 984 Richmond
4 July 984 Richmond

King Eilif left the Queen Mother Emma’s chambers quietly. He gently closed the door as not to wake her. Bishop Snorri of St Davids, the Court Physician and Court Chaplin was waiting for him in the corridor.

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Eilif said, “She slips away a little more each day. In the six months since my father’s passing she had declined rapidly. She was once a strong woman now she cannot get out of bed or feed herself. And when she does feed herself it is usually with wine.”

Snorri responded, “There is little we can do. Her love for your father was great. Now that he is gone there is only emptiness. I fear that she has lost the will to live. She suffers greatly from a broken heart.”

Eilif said, “I wish Sigurðr was older. Teaching him how to be king would give her purpose.”

Snorri said, “We will pray that one day she undertakes such an endeavor.”

The two men quietly walked in silence down the corridor. They descended the staircase and entered the empty throne room. They walked across the room and entered the Council Chambers.

The other Council members were already present. There was Hjalmar Haraldrsson, the Chancellor of Jorvik. Hjalmar’s father, Haraldr, had fled from the Jarldom of Kurland to escape the cruelty of his father Jarl Hjalmar the Bewitched. Haraldr became Steward under King Sigfrið. Unfortunately lunacy brought on by the Great Pox caused Haraldr to be removed as Steward. During the Regency of Bishop Borkvard Haraldr was appointed Chancellor. Haraldr quickly resigned when Eilif became regent. When Borkvard seized the regency Hjalmar fled to Eilif. There his shrewd mind aided with the planning of the coup. He was instrumental in obtaining backing for Eilif from many lords. Eilif rewarded his service with appointing him Chancellor.

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Also present was Anlaufr Hrolfrsson Hvitserk, the Marshal of Jorvik. Anlaufr’s father was Count Hrolfr of Westmoreland. Hroldr died in battle during his rebellion against Eilif’s uncle Prince Totil, Jarl of Lancaster. Anlaufr’s grandfather was the infamous Count Ragnarr the Seducer of Westmoreland. Anlaufr and Eilif are 2nd cousins 3 times removed. Anlaufr served Eilif as Marshal when he was Jarl of Lancaster. When Eilif became king he brought his trusted Marshal with him and appointed him Jarl of Powys and Count of Shrewsbury.

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The Steward of Jorvik was Ingólfr Holmgersson Yngling legitimized bastard son of King Holmger of Noregr. When Ingólfr’s father died Sörkver was elected king. Sörkver would go on to earn the title the Terrible. Ingólfr fled Noregr to escape from the horrors of Sörkver’s regien. Eventually Sörkver was removed and replaced with Einarr, Ingólfr’s younger half brother. Ingólfr wondered about Lotharingia and East Francia before landing in Dyfed. Once in Dyfed he joined Eilif’s levy. He was not much of a solider but showed a knack for making money. He quickly found himself Steward of Deheubarth and eventually Lancaster. As with Anlaufr Eilif appointed his counselor from Lancaster to the same role in the kingdom. He also made Ingólfr Count of Leicester.

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Bishop Snorri of St Davids rose from a simple parish priest in a small village in Dyfed. With his ken mind and understanding of Scriptures Snorri was noticed by the church hierarchy and he rose quickly within the church. A couple of years before Eilif became Jarl of Deheubarth and Count of Dyfed Snorri was appointed Bishop of St Davids. There he continued his studies and his interpretations of Scriptures bordered on heresy. Once Eilif was Jarl of Deheubarth he appointed Snorri Court Chaplain and Court Physician, Again Eilif unwaveringly appointed Snorri as Court Chaplain and when Bengt died Court Physician.

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Lastly there was Count Siweard of Lincoln, Spymaster of Jorvik. Siweard was the only holdover from King Sigfrið’s Council. Siweard’s unyielding support of King Sigfrið and Queen Emma during the regency crisis earned him that privilege. It also earned Siweard’s son Cytelbearn the title Count of Mann.

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When Eilif entered the chamber the Councilors all stood. Snorri walked over to his chair at the table. Eilif proceeded to the head of the table and sat down. Once he did so the other Councilors returned to their seats except Snorri. Eilif nodded at Snorri.

Snorri bowed his head. The king and the Counselors followed suit. The Snorri spoke in Latin, “In the Name of the Father and of the Son and the Holy Ghost we pray. Almighty God we humbly ask you to guide our thoughts and decisions at this meeting so that we may be wise and just and do the work of your Holy Church and the Kingdom of Jorvik. We now pray as your Son taught us…” The Councilors and king then recited the Lord's Prayer. At the conclusion Snorri replied, “Amen.” He concluded the prayer with the Sign of the Cross. Once the prayer was done he took his seat.

Eilif then said, “We shall start the meeting discussing how certain lords of the kingdom feel that I am a bad king who cannot be allowed to act in the best interest of the kingdom.”

This brought a chuckle from all those present.

Siweard spoke, “I shall start with a personal embarrassment. That being my foolish son, Cytelbearn, who the king graciously granted the County of Mann now thinks he should be independent.”

Anlaufr said, “Since he has only one vassal and a levy of less than 500 we can attribute his misplaced passion to his youthfulness.”

Eilif said, “When reality sets in he will lose enthusiasm for being on his own. Being surrounded by the Scottish, Irish, and Swedes will convince him Jorvikian protection is best for him.”

Siweard said, “There is the matter of Count Þorgil of Gwent who fancies he can overthrow the king.”

Hjalmar said, “I still do not understand how Þorgil thinks that he can overthrow the king by himself.”

Snorri replied, “He is a dreamer and thinks that he is more powerful than he truly is.”

Siweard said, “There is that faction we have been dealing with for decades. That being the misguided group that feels that this council needs more power. “

Snorri said, “They seemed to forget that the Council’s purpose is to advise the king not overrule him or order him about.”

All in the Council nodded their agreement.

Siweard continued, “Jarl Waltheof of East Anglia is their leader. Count Þorgil of Gwent and Count Padern of Glamorgan are his current followers. Even now as we meet they meet in Thetford.”

Ingólfr said, “It seems Waltheof still has not forgiven you for his removal as Steward.”

Siweard said, “Without some other lords there is little hope for their faction to become any kind of threat.”

Hjalmar said, “They will gain strength during the coming war.”

Eilif said, “We must be prepared for that occurrence. A few lords may join with them. However, if we remain committed they should be of little concern to us.”

Snorri asked, “Speaking of war is the intended target still Scotland?”

Eilif responded, “It is what my father wanted. We shall make King Alpin III of Scotland tributary to us.”

Anlaufr said, “Given their performance in Gwynedd during the war against Guichard the war should not be a long one.”

Eilif said, “We shall disrupt the council power faction.”

Ingólfr asked, “How will we do that?”

Siweard answered, “Padern has a claim on the County of Powys.”

Snorri asked, “What is important about that?”

Eilif said, “We will declare a war for Padern’s claim for Powys against King Cynwrig of Gwynedd.”

Ingólfr asked, “Two wars at once?”

Anlaufr responded, “Cynwrig is very weak. Any war with him will not last long.”

Hjalmar said, “There is one more matter we need to discuss. Count Eadgar of Northampton.”

Ingólfr said, “Yes, he grows more and more hostile toward the crown. I fear he will join with the council power faction.”

Eilif said, “Perhaps I should transfer his vassalage to someone else.”

Anlaufr spoke, “I do not want him.”

Eilif smiled, “No I was thinking Jarl Waltheof.”

Snorri asked, “Won’t that make the council power faction stronger.”

Eilif said, “I doubt it. Waltheof considers Eadgar a traitor since Eadgar opposed Borkvard. Eadgar regards Waltheof a traitor because he supported Borkvard. It will be an interesting pairing. Waltheof will be too busy dealing with Eadgar to have any time to get into any mischief.”

Several of the Counselors smiled and chuckled.

Eilif then said, “If there is no other business then I declare this meeting finished.”

The counselors began to leave but Siweard delayed. Once all the other counselors departed Siweard approached the king.

Eilif said, “Count Siweard?”

Siweard replied, “Milord I am fearful of the plan. If things go wrong there could be major repercussions.”

Eilif responded, “I understand but as we discussed it must go forward for the good of the kingdom. You are the one who faces the real danger.”

Siweard replied, “I am and always will be your servant, milord.”
 
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The poor queen. She and Sigfrið were the first king and queen to have a long-lasting relationship - because they were the first to actually both live for a long time. It's sad to see her lose the will to live as she has though.

Siweard spoke, “I shall start with a personal embarrassment. That being my foolish son, Cytelbearn, who the king graciously granted the County of Mann now thinks he should be independent.”

Anlaufr said, “Since he has only one vassal and a levy of less than 500 we can attribute his misplaced passion to his youthfulness.”

Your writing in this chapter was pretty snappy and on point. I thought that was the best though - the comfort level of the council and Eilif really showed through there. I know it will not be smooth sailing forever, but it certainly set the mood of a council that likes the king and a king who is in control. And it was a witty line. :)
 
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