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Chapter Six
Ruthenia

After lunch had been devoured wholeheartedly, Zdado picked up the story right where he left off. "As I sat down in my pew, I felt a hand grab my shoulder. I turned towards the perpatrator of the action and saw that it was Miksa Fenyő. He smiled, with tears in his eyes, and told me, 'We can do this, Janko, we really can.' To which I smiled and nodded, for I was also too overcome by the possibility of success to keep a straight face. As Janoušek stood at the podium, ready to speak again, several men entered the church. Everyone turned to face them, when one of them spoke. He said, 'I heard there was a revolution, and that the Ruthenians would be able to help.' At this, the whole chapel stood and cheered."

"The Ruthenian part of Czechoslovakia had been left out of many of the descions regarding the revolution, because of their general dislike and distrust between us Slovaks and the Ruthenians. But, when they came in he chapel, it was like they were saying that if there was a revolution, then we would be in it together. The Ruthenians promised supplies, but could only afford to give us 3,000 men. The 3,000 men had turned out to be farmers, so there would be an even number of Cavalry after all. With the many supplies, we could now support all 40,000 troops for five months."

"The leader of the Ruthenian group walked up to the pulpit and began to speak. He could only speak in his Carpathio-Rusyn dialect, called Pryashiv Rusyn, but he had an assisstant translate for him. In essence, he said that, although Slovaks and Rusyns are different people, we can and will be united by communism. At this, many people clapped including myself. After the small Ruthenian delegation were seated, Janoušek walked back to the pulpit and the meeting continued. Janoušek said that Hungary had their troops readied and would, as promised, invade on May 1, 1919."

"Also at the meeting, we set up a military time-table for preparedness. Five days after the invasion, all the soliders were to recieve their orders to report to Kosice for training. By June 1, basic training would be over and the 40,000 men would be ready to fight. Not long after that discussion, Janoušek ended the meeting by making everyone agree to meet in St. Michael's again on April 30, the day before the invasion., and to stay here and start to work towards the actual formation of the government. After he finished, everybody left for home, including me."

"Once I got home, I started to prepare for the mission ahead. Before I left the Czechoslovak army, I stole many battle maps left over from the great war and I spent the next few days going over them, in addition to collecting more supplies. I guessed that once the Hungarians had left around mid-June that the Czechs would first look to take back Bratislava and the surrounding lowlands. This, unfortunately, was just beyond the range of the aircraft from Gelnica, so the battle there would have to be fought without air support. The good thing about the battle for Bratislava was that if we lost, we could live with that, because the rest of Slovakia would be under our control, and most of it was mountainous and exremely hard to attack."

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The aircraft in question, a 1916 Albatross.

"Once we had made it as far as Nitra, the airpower could come into play and the tides could be turned more handily. After 13 days of waiting, the day finally came and I boarded the train to Kosice. The meeting was held at 11:00 PM at night. The inside of St. Michael's was illumenated by lightbulbs and hundreds of candles. I arrived a little late, at 11:06, but Janoušek didn't mind. Inside, the pews had been moved so that there would be different sections devoted to different departments, with all five comissars having their own desk in a seperate part of the chapel, with Janoušek's desk in the middle. Shortly after my arrival, Janoušek escorted me to my desk, which already had a nameplate on it. I can still se the faux gold-leaf embossed lettering, which read: Lt. Gen. Janko Tuca, Military Commisar. I sat down, and immediately a young man walked over to me. He said 'Hello, I'm Stanislav Mriksa, your new assisstant."

"I recognized the lad's face quite well, for he had served directly under me in the Czechoslovak Army. I inquired as to how he came to be working for the revolution, and he exlplained that he had been booted by the Czechoslovak army for being a communist only last week. He had heard rumors about the revolution, so he came out here and asked about it. He was given Janoušek's telephone and called him. After mentioning me, Janoušek readily signed Stanislav on as my assistant. After Stanislav finished his story, I promoted him to Maj. General, and awarded him comand of one of the yet-to-be formed divisions. He readily accepted and agreed to help me train the troops."

"As for the other three heads of the Divisons, I kept personal command of the Cavalry. The second infantry divison I gave to a man that Janoušek said was actually a military officer from Russia, named Vladimir Petrovich Broudenev. The command of the third infantry divison went to a Jewish man recommended by Janoušek whose name was Avram Goldstein. Avram was an excellent field commander and had served with distinction in the Balkan war and in WWI. In order, there was Lt. General Tuca, that's me, followed by Maj. Generals Mriksa, Broudenev, and Goldstein. We probably looked like a colorful lot, meeting for he first time in St. Michael's, because we were so physically different from each other. I had my dark hair and eyes, Stanislav was blonde and had very deep blue eyes, Vladimir had very light, almost white, blonde hair and grey eyes. Finally, we get to Avram who, with his dark, tan features and enormous black beard, was set apart from the rest of us in the extreme."

"Us four sat down together and started to discuss how best to train the troops. We had been talking for a while when we were called over to Janoušek's desk. All the place was gathering around him. I noticed he was on the phone, and I asked he person next to me who he was on the phone with. The person said that he was talking with Gen. Aurel Bloomfeld, and that the invasion was to begin very soon. Not too long after he finished telling me this, Janoušek got off the phone. He looked upon the clock on the wall, then spoke. He said that it was 11:57 right now, and when that clock strikes midnight, the invasion would begin."

Everyone returned to their desks and duties, but were keeping one eye on the clock. Suddenly, the chimes started and all of St. Michael's erupted in cheering. At the same time, 12 and a half miles to the south, Gen. Bloomfeld ordered his troops to march and our invasion was finally on."

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Hungarian invasion routes.
 
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One can almost feel the tense atmosphere of those last moments before the invasion :). Well-written.
Very convenient for the commies to get the support of the Ruthenians - another month's worth of supplies was surely something very useful.

Two small nitpicks of sorts - I hope you don't mind if I state them openly: 1) don's use the term bolshevism in this context - it was, as far as I know, a solely Russian Leninist movement, which didn't equal communism itself, being separate from the 'mainstream' communism since 1903, I believe; 2) the 'otchestvo', or paternal name of the Russian guy, 'Pskovich' - please, think about something better, be it Petrovich, Porfirionovich or Pavlovich - there's no Russian name from which this 'Pskovich' could be derived, and 'Pskovich' means literally 'a citizen of (the city of) Pskov (in Russia)', therefore being quite inaccurate, despite sounding OK to someone who doesn't know Russian language :).
 
robou- You'll have to wait and see! :D

Emperor_krk- Thank you, and I will get right on those requested changes! I don't mind you or anybody nitpicking in the open. Actually, I'd encourage it! The reason I used Pskovich was that in my first narrative AAR attempt, I had a character named Pskovich, which for the time, did make sense. Thanks for correcting me on both counts!

Cinéad IV- Thank you and double thank you! :)
 
They say the proof of the pudding is in the eating, and it is time to test these revolutionary waters.
 
stnylan- That's a great line, and a reference to chapter two, so its doubly good! :D

ALL- I update the first post (The chapter and title post) with a shiny new graphic! Go check it out and post what you think of it! This graphic has been generously donated by our resident graphic expert, Emperor_krk!
 
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Chapter Seven
Budget Cuts

Zdado stopped telling about the invasion to sneeze several times, and then struck up the story again. "The Hungarians advanced in five columns. In total, there were seven cities they needed to capture before they could fully occupy the country, the two most importent of which were Bratislava and Kosice. After the midnight declaration of war, the Hungarians moved very quickly. By 1:30 AM, Gen. Bloomfeld arrived in Kosice, where he was recieved into St. Michael's by Janoušek and the rest of us. In a private room of the chapel, the five commisars, Janoušek, and Gen. Bloomfeld all discussed the timetable. Gen. Bloomfeld was pretty confident that the occupation of Slovakia and Ruthenia could be accomplished by May 10th. The only insurmountable obstacle he forsaw was if the Entente descided to intervene on Czecoslovakia's behalf."

"Naturally, we had all though about that, but the simple fact that Hungary had not been tampered with, that the Entente wouldn't bother too badly with Czechoslovakia as well. I asked Bloomfeld one last question before he was to leave. I asked how long would Hungary maintain a military presence in Slovakia. To that, he gave the cryptic answer, 'As long as it is needed.' Bloomfeld left shortly thereafter and resumed the march. Before the chapel emptied out , Janoušek called one final discussion in the center of St. Michael's. After we had all gathered, he announced that we would be moving our offices tommorow to the Semsey Manor House in the Šaca part of South-Western Kosice. The inside of the house has been formatted from its original design to suit our needs. He expected everybody to be at work for regular office hours from 8:00 AM to 4:00 PM. Since it is 3 AM then, he made an exception for the next day so that people could get more sleep."

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The Semsey Manor House's new floor plan.

"After that, everybody left for the places they were staying. Since I had none, I checked into a local hotel and spent the night. The next morning, I awoke at 9:00 AM and proceeded to the office, which was a fifteen minute walk away. Once I arrived, there was only a few grogy people starting to do their work. Janoušek was there as well. I walked into his office and found him reading a paper. He motioned me in and, pointing to the headline, smiled. On the front cover of the New York Times, it said 'Communist Hungary invades Czechoslovakia.' I couldn't help but smile too. After talking with Janoušek for a few moments, I went to the war department office, which consisted of my desk, two bookshelves, a table and six chairs, and 3 filing cabinets. Also, it had several maps of Czechoslovakia lain on my desk in addition to several notebooks and pencils."

"Shortly after I sat down to prepare for the day, Maj. Gens. Broudenev and Mriksa walked in. Apparently, they were staying two rooms apart in the same hotel. I invited them to sit at the table to discuss how and when we would transport the materials that had been stockpiled to Kosice for distribution. After I had finished describing the problem, Maj. Gen. Goldstein walked in and joined us. The easiest way to complete the transferral of money and goods was to requisition supply trains to carry the materials. It was decided that on May 4, seven trains with thirty boxcars attached would go around the country and pick up the supplies. All the trains would be painted wih the SSR's flag, so people would know it was the right train."

"After deciding this, a knock sounded on my door. 'Enter' I called out. Then, Miksa Fenyő walked in. He said that, as finance minister, it was his duty to provide a feasible budget and as such I was given a stricter budget. The estimated total people had donated would have to cover all five departments, and as such the military would only have enough resources to supply their troops for three months. I immediately protested, but Miksa said that once the SSR has been formally declared a nation, there would be taxes and therefore a more sustainable form of income. I shrugged and told Miksa that we could survive on the restrained budget, after which he left the room."

"Once Miksa closed the door behind him, I turned to look at the three others. They were shaking their heads as well, but in the end their goods spirits returned once we started to talk about the Hungarian advance. They had already captured Prešov and most of Ruthenia, and they were racing the Czechs toward Bratislava."

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Routes of the two forces after only 9 hours of combat.

"I predicted that the defensive line would end up looking like this, which it did the next day."

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The line of battle where the invasion ground to a halt.

"Many diferent nations had different opinions about the invasion. Lenin gave a speech in Red square that day praising both us and Hungary alike. Meanwhile, in London, Rome, Paris, and Washington, the leaders of the Entente rejected the notion of Slovak independence by way of communist revolution."

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The Entente enemies. From left to right, David Lloyd George of Britain, Vittorio Emanuele Orlando of Italy, Georges Clemenceau of France, and Woodrow Wilson of the United States.
 
robou said:
however, is there anything the Entente can acctually do?
Probably not - thankfully.

3 months' worth of supply in the end isn't much. Especially if we take into account the month-long (if I remember correctly) training of the Slovakian recruits. The army should be able to replace the Hungarians as soon as possible - if possible at all.
What was the number of the Hungarian invasion troops again?

robou - thanks. :p
 
I think it is becoming plain that the Hungarians will, sooner or later, become the devils of this piece.
 
robou- You'll see!

Emperor_krk- Your right, those budget cuts really hurt. The Hungarains total about 70,000 men, all are technologically modern for 1919.

stnylan-Maybe... :D

ALL- I'm away on vacation until the 22nd, so probably no updates for that long. Until then.... Long live the revolution! :rofl:
 
Enjoy your holiday :)
 
All- I'm baaaa-aaack!

stnylan- Thanks!

Emperor_krk- Yup! I went to Washington D.C. for a little R & R, not a big Vacation, but long enought to unwind a little.

Jaspume- I will most certainly do both! :D
 
Chapter Eight​
The Fightin' Fitz​

"Fortunately for the revolution," continued Zdado, "most of the Entente powers wee too busy to do any active work on behalf of the Czechs, especially with American President Woodrow Wilson having a stroke right around then. British Prime Minister David Lloyd George did speak in parliament that day, denouncing the revolution, but that was all any of the Entente could muster."

"By the end of the day May first, the battle lines between Hungary and the Czechs had been drawn, exactly as I had predicted, with the cities of Nitra and Trencin being the focal points of the Slovak campaign."

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I told you so...

"After discussing more topics with Mriksa, Broudenev, and Goldstein, we sat down to do our actual work, which mostly consisted of a crushing amount of paperwork. We had to draw up a roster so that every solider would be placed in their proper slot, which involved placing each one individually. What we would do is draw up people from a pile of names provided by the union leaders, then build each of our own divisions from the ground up."

"After five hours of this, 4:00 came and the all of us in the War department quickly left the building, but not before asking the Commissar for the Interior, František Fehér, to requisition the needed trains for armament relocation. He said that he would have it done tomorrow. I returned to my hotel and quickly called the family in Gelnica. I reported to them all what had happened, and asked Baba and the children to come down and stay with me here. Baba agreed only if I could find more expansive living conditions. I agreed, so Baba said she would be arriving tomorrow at 7:00 AM."

"Immediately, I went around Kosice and eventually found a house in Šaca which would, for 163 koruny a month, allow me the rent of four rooms. In which were two bedrooms, a bath, and a kitchen. I moved my suitcase to the new accomidations immediatly, for I was excited to leave the hotel. As I walked the short distance to the new house, which stood on 29 Kaiserplatz, I felt a tap on the shoulder. I turned around to see who it was. Of all people, it was my father, Marion Tuca."

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The house in question.

"Father motioned me into an alley, and I followed. After we had taken a few steps in, he asked, 'Why are you doing this?' I was somewhat taken aback by his bluntness. I inquired further as to the source of his anger. He then went into a rage that was shouted in half-Slovak and half-Polish. I understood perfectly well what he was saying, that I was a stupid fool for joining the revolution. But I countered by saying that I was making 24 koruny per day, which would be the same as 168 koruny per week, and 8, 760 koruny per year. Considering the average Slovak of the time made around 2,900 koruny per year, I thought this was a reasonable argument. But, all he did was shake his head and walk away. Since then, we have spoken on three brief occasions. I actually haven't talked to him since 1944."

Pavel interrupted the story to ask a question. "Do you mean great-Zdado Marion is still alive?" To which Zdado replied, "Yes, he turned 88 last month and he is curently living in Poland." Pavel and Antonin were both extremely suprised, for neither had ever heard Zdado mention his father still being alive! Zdado started up his story again. "As I was saying, father left the ally. I watched him go, his salt-and-pepper hair blowing in the stiff spring breeze. I shook my head and continued the walk to the house. After I arrived, Mrs. Gladki, the landlady, gave me the keys to the house and my rooms. I walked into the larger of the two bedrooms and unpacked my suitcase."

"After spending an uneventful night in the house, I awoke in time to get dressed and meet Baba and the children at the station. The train arrived late, coming in at 7:33. I walked the family over to the house, introduced them to Mrs. Gladki, and hurried off to work. I arrived at the Semsy Manor House at 8:00 exactly, and walked into the War department office. All of the Maj. Gens. were already there, placing soliders into their proper slots. Before I could get settled, Janoušek, wearing an estatic expression, walked into my office and asked me to come to his. With a glance towards the other generals, I walked out and into the hallway. Once I was in Janoušek's office, I discovered that all the other Commisars were there. Janoušek cleared his throat to call attention and said that all the newspapers within the Hungarian occupied territory had been fully taken over. At this, we all applauded."

"Janoušek said that loyalists to the communist cause had been placed in the writing and editorial positions in the major papers in both Slovakia and Ruthenia. I can remember how happy we were, it was like Christmas morning. Slowly, we returned to our offices still in a great mood. Once I got back I related the news to the other generals, and they were just as happy as me. I was once again sitting down to start my work when I was again interrupted, this time by our receptionist, Miss Hasak. She said that there was a visitor who requested to see Lt. Gen. Tuca. Perplexed, I followed Miss Hasak out to her reception room. She showed me over to an American sitting by the door."

"I introduced myself, and the man said, 'Hiya sir, I'm Jack Fitzgerald, and I've heard you've got a little pilot shortage I could help with.' I was dumb-founded. I couldn't figure out how he knew about the secret weapon when only 120 people in the whole world knew about that plan. I asked Jack how he knew, and he said that his broher-in-law was the Commisar for Justice, Václav Cerny. Václav had told Jack about the problem, and, being a communist sympathiser, Jack agreed to help."

"Apparently, Jack had been an ace even before WWI. Starting at age 19 as a mercenary in the Mexican civil war in 1912, he shot down 5 planes. In 1914, he went to France where, according to legend, he shot down seven planes in his first six days.That's how he got his nickname, Fightin' Fitz. Jack had actually fought the Red Baron to a draw over Belgium in early 1917. As a superior flier with 27 confirmed kills to his name, I happily signed him on as Maj. Gen. Fitzgerald, commander of the entire airforce, which consisted of three planes. I hurridly took Maj. Gen. Fitzgerald back to the war department to take his place amongst his equals."
 
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