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I've done the tutorial (or at least part of the tutorial) a few times now. While doing it, I noticed quite a few grammatical errors. I spent some time editing the first Introduction portion of the tutorial. I've attached those edits to this post. Hopefully, they are of value to the Team.

I can do the same for the rest of the tutorial if the devs find the edits of value. Let me know.
 

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Welcome to the forum and to the game.
I hope you'll have loads fo fun with it :)

Your effort, though, is really appreciated but don't expect too much. The last real patch for the game was some 4 years ago...

The forum/community around this game is still very active, mind you!
 
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Welcome to the forum and to the game.
I hope you'll have loads fo fun with it :)

Your effort, though, is really appreciated but don't expect too much. The last real patch for the game was some 4 years ago...

The forum/community around this game is still very active, mind you!
Thank you! I've certainly been on the forums for years; I've just never participated.

Follow my logic on this though. It's not uncommon for studios to release a surprise patch for an older game before announcing a new version. Right? An overhaul of the tutorial and some other features might really stoke the hype-train.
 
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