Lord Telcius said:Hmmmm, good writing and I don't mean to take away from it but I would have had the boys ask him if his parents allowed him to fight in the Civil War. But that's what I would of done. Can't wait until the next update.
Your right, that would have made it better. Im not so good at doing these kind of parts of a story, I may add a second intervention scene where Jonney tries to stop them.