Howdy, folks. This is my new AAR. It's different from the last few I've done, and I hope y'all like it. It's nice to see new faces that I don't recognize from my previous efforts, and I hope you are all soon joined by old fans.
Nethros, thanks for the wildly excited welcome. I will sign any part of you fit for public consumption.
applerunner, a narrative. I know comedy is how I'm seen, and hope this is well received nonetheless. I want that future to remain bright!
Qorten, my opposition to the vile villain canonized is reserved for sweeps week. . . in any case, my writing is not particularly terrific yet, and I don't presume to dethrone anyone other than myself! The thumbs up are appreciated.
EnragedKiwi, the object is a girl sitting crosslegged and naked, with an arm extended and a hand held slightly limp. I love your name, but that is because I love all New Zealanders as a matter of principle.
Enewald, you pegged it almost exactly. Think you can get it more specific?
Lord Durham, thanks for the cited paragraph. I dug it, and was pretty pleased with being able to segue from the description to the impact in a way that was fairly seamless. Thanks for saying nice things about the dialogue as well. It's something I struggle with.
coz1, thank you, sir! Tenseness (and sparseness) is my thing. I don't like wasted words, and am prone to brevity when I write. My hope is that my instincts aren't short-changing the story.
Thank you, everybody. Now for the next update!