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No apologies needed for lots of posts. It's not a bad problem to have!

Richard really does seem to ultimately value only himself and to a degree his lineage.

I think since he came to the throne a foreigner essentially and a off-shoot of the old house he was seen much like Henry VII as a usurper.......his sons grant him security and conifidence
 

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She is beautiful and quite fertile - that's all Richard seems to care about. I had thought him capable of valuing her more based on Maior, but perhaps he didn't really value the non young, fertile aspects of her either. If I were being generous, I'd say he has never gotten over her loss and subsequently devalues his later wives as a result, but I don't know I wish to be that generous. ;)
 

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She is beautiful and quite fertile - that's all Richard seems to care about. I had thought him capable of valuing her more based on Maior, but perhaps he didn't really value the non young, fertile aspects of her either. If I were being generous, I'd say he has never gotten over her loss and subsequently devalues his later wives as a result, but I don't know I wish to be that generous. ;)

There is a I suppose and aspect of that....she is young, I think it is not so much he doesn't value her so much as he only really values himself, his name and his dynasty but then I have tried to right it in a fashion that suggest he does care about his family, he loves Margaret.
 

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Chapter 45: A tale of many turns

Queen Wynnflaed- Evening, The Great Hall, Westminster 15th January 1083

The lyre and lute players Richard had hired together with the mimes and acrobats really were the very best the money could buy and despite the marvel of the Christmas festivities she found this feast far surpassed any that had been held in recent months. Yet again her vitality and health were quick to return after the labours of childbirth and it was with some gladness that she was recovered enough to attend this feast though Richard had counselled caution.

Having spent however, almost the entire day being pestered by her three-year-old son, Prince Richard who by now was into everything he could find and could not be stopped from rushing about in every direction or chattering incessantly she was glad of the distraction. She was glad to see her friends again and be address as Queen or Highness after days of constantly being referred to as “mama”. She loved her children immensely and Eadburh, her new daughter was no exception, but it was nice to be a woman and not just a mother.

She smiled at Richard as he struggled to catch the hot, boar fat dripping down his chin, raising her own napkin to catch it for him and wipe his face. He cupped her hand smiling, kissing her and as he pulled away she saw that glint in his eye, that sparkle that said despite the fact her body was now criss-crossed with lines and her breasts, having filled now three times with un-suckled milk, were not as pert as a maid untouched, he stilled desired her and she was still beautiful, young and in fine figure, she still very much desired him, despite the creeping lines around his eyes.

Screams suddenly burst out and in as little time as it had taken to create, the tenderness was gone. Richard and Wynnflaed both shot to their feet at the sound of falling plate. Emma, Countess of Hereford was screaming, at her feet a body was twitching on the floor, blood pouring from an open wound in the servant’s neck. Beside her, Bishop Silvester was patting at his cassock, a dagger in hand trying to apologise to her for the mess. Scarborough, Beaumont and Mayor Odo of Ilchester where also on their feet weapons drawn as all eyes fell on the blood-soaked Bishop.

Richards mouth hung open like many others and the Bishop seeing the commotion he had caused looked quite dumbfounded “The bastard spilt wine on me my Lord, I apologise for the mess really I do.” Wynnflaed could not believe the callousness of the mans remark, her eyes fixed on the body spasming on the floor.

Still Richard said nothing, as the Baron of Beaumont and the Mayor of Scarborough moved toward the Bishop. The Countess had stopped screaming being moved away by her enraged looking husband. Something must be done, the Bishop himself went to sit down looking with confusion at the two-armed men moving toward him. Wynnflaed suddenly noticed Gunhilda nudging her and she turned to see the aging courtier urging her to act.

“Lord Marshal” she called to the Mayor of Ilchester surrounded now as he was by guardsmen, she pointed at the Bishop ‘Arrest that man immediately.’ They moved without hesitation and Wynnflaed looked to Richard who had slumped back into his seat, he flicked his wrist indicating that he gave his consent to the Queens command.

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Earl Robert of Maine- Noon, The Lord Stewards Office, Westminster 22nd January 1083

“I must say my Lord Steward you are much more organised than the Bishop” Robert glanced about at the neatly stacked papers and the perfectly balanced scales on the desk. Robert looked about him, clocking the pricked ears of the Stewards clerks ‘Do you mind if we get rid of the hangers on for a moment.’

Asher looked uneasy for but a moment and then with a wave of his hands dismissed the clerks, who filed from the room via various doors. They waited as the room cleared “I assume you have something interesting to discuss?” the Jew raised his eyebrow, his eyes probing the Earl for a giveaway.

The Earl smiled to himself, looking through his clasped fingers ‘Interesting is not the first word I would use but for you perhaps, it may be profitable at least and for a Jew that is all that matters surely.’

‘I am listening my Lord, but I am a busy man so please try to be brief, I know you are given to delaying.’ The insolence of this man, irked Robert slightly. As if a Jew had the temerity to rush him but nevertheless he would be brief, for it would be the one and only time he would make his coming bargain.

‘You have risen quickly my friend, thanks to the Queens beneficence all can see that, and you seem a good man, but have you considered what should happen if the Queen were to favour another?’ Robert tried to gage Ashers’ response but his face remained unmoved. ‘It is never wise to attach oneself completely to one master and one source of safety.’

Asher smiled, the corners of his mouth twitching upward ‘Hence why you court the favour of many masters then?’

Robert would not allow himself to be baited and, so he continued ‘I offer you the hand of friendship and the possibility of an accord between the two of us that would allow us both to feel more secure in our position.’


‘I am listening’ He noted the change in Asher’s face, curiosity and concern in equal measure. He had obviously not thought so far ahead as a day when Wynnflaed might abandon him and the Earl was pleased to continue.

‘I come with an offer of marriage and advancement, something a little more solid than your present circumstance’ the Lord Stewards silence told him he could continue without fear ‘My sister Adela needs a husband and the Barony of Tottenham currently in the Kings keeping is in need of a new Lord, I can ensure that both find themselves into your keeping.’

The Jew did not need to ask how either thing could be done as he obviously understood the power possessed by the Earl on his own and its wider reach when tied with the entire Normandie family and so he made a somewhat unexpected reply, though pleasing since it indicated he understood the game ‘And in return for your generosity, what do I have to offer you?’

Robert struck out not wishing to waist the moment ‘You have the Queens ear, she in turn has the Kings. Urge her to save Bishop Silvester from the headman’s axe and I will give you what I had suggested without hesitation.’

‘Such a small fee for your sisters’ hand? I thought you would ask much more for such a handsome gift?’ It was not a refusal which was really all that matter and Robert new already he had won for himself a new tool.

‘My sister is not what you are paying for, the Barony of Tottenham is what Silvester’s life will get you. Adela is just a sweetener.’

Queen Wynnflaed- Mid-morning, The Great Hall, Westminster 29th January 1083


Wynnflaed steeled herself for what was to come, gripping the arm of her throne and drawing deep on her reserves, it would take a lot to perform the task that she now must. Having during her regency removed the Bishop of Abingdon from his office in place of Asher and then striking the Bishop of St Pauls from his See, the Queen was aware she had unsettled the clergy and sharp glances were cast toward her from their benches, in direct contrast to the reassuring smiles that come from the nobility.

Asher had brought her letters and gossip from among the courtiers of Bishops speaking against her, priests claimed that she would not be happy until she had a Bishops head on a spike and so together they had contrived this little performance to sooth their fears. She turned and smiled at Richard, who was stroking her hand discreetly, his face fixed in firm resolve for the justice he must soon deliver.

Whilst they sat there on their thrones and the clergy, the nobles and a few prominent members of the merchant class gathered on the pews on either side of the Great Hall, Bishop Silvester knelt before them in chains, stripped of his vestments. She understood Asher had played her, she knew also that he had formed a secret marriage alliance with the Normandie family, but it was off little concern at present, since it made sense to offer a gesture of goodwill to the Church.

The Earl of Essex, currently acting as Lord Chamberlain stepped forward draped in a long robe. He raised his hands calling for silence before directing the eyes of the government to the King. Richard rose from his chair, a slight cough to clear his throat “My Lords Assembled, we have heard the evidence” Wynflaed had to smother a smile at the remark for there had been no need to re-recite what they had all witnessed ‘And so now it comes for me as the font of justice within the realm to issue the verdict and thereby the consequence on the charge of murder.’ She readied herself, smoothing her skirt, her eyes scanning along the Bishops benches for Chancellor Rolland and Ethelbald of Canterbury to be sure they watched.

Before Richard had the chance to go on the Queen rose from her throne, taking a brief, few steps forward and then descended into a deep, bow with her eyes to the floor taking her husbands hand, he looked slightly confused. ‘My Lord King and beloved husband’ she glanced up briefly to check he was looking at her ‘I beg you most humbly, this man we know is guilty of the charges laid against him, but it is with a love of god and a love of mercy that I beseech you now’ there was a murmur from the watching court as the Earls and Bishops collectively watched in astonished surprise Wynnflaeds boldness. She breathed deeply, almost choking on the words for she did not truly wish to speak them ‘Spare this man’ she pointed at the Bishop ‘Show your mercy and allow him to live, this man has acted in gross error and deserves to be punished but that will come through God’s grace.’

More murmurs followed before and people fidgeted for a moment before Richard held up his hands for silence. He looked down at her with hard eyes and she looked up at him, both trying to read the other before the King returned to his seat. She knelt there still as her husband closed his eyes, thinking hard. ‘Very well’ he waved toward the Bishop ‘I shall be merciful’ he pointed to Silvester ‘You shall be fined your Grace and sent from court, but you shall have you life by the Queens request.’

Dowager-Countess Gunhilda- Midday, The Queens Royal Barge, The Thames, London 18th July 1083

She glanced down into the murky water, her reflection broken and shimmering as the afternoon sun danced across the surface. Oars bit down sharply into the river, driving the Queens barge forward, they were heading to Greenwich one of the Kings London homes, which had recently been expanded. Looking behind her, Gunhilda smiled to see Wynnflaed once again in the full bloom of pregnancy after falling with child somewhere in late February perhaps around the Feast Day of St Valentine.

But all was not well between his Highness and the Queen at present, for despite the fact they had shared a bed and conceived yet another child together, Richard had not yet forgiven Wynnflaed intercession on behalf of Bishop Silvester, which he had for some bizarre notion taken as a betrayal, which of course it wasn’t. Gunhilda had urged the Queen to discuss her plan to beg pardon with the King first but she had not taken the advice and so here they were, the King of Scotland had come to London on a state visit and the Queen and Gunhilda had been sent into a banishment of sorts, where they were to ever linger in Richards shadow.

King Malcolm III had been in London for over a week already at the invitation of the King and Richard had not waisted a single opportunity to remind Wynnflaed that she was Queen purely and completely at his behest; she rode now in her barge, behind him whilst he and Malcolm laughed and drank together on the Kings barge, when going into dinner she had been made to walk behind them both with the Scottish Ambassador and on more than one occasion she had been essentially banished to the nursery so that Richard and Malcolm could spend time discussing “state business” privately.

Gunhilda moved carefully back toward her seat, settling down onto the velvet cushions for despite Richards apparent coolness of large the royal barge had been refitted as a reward to the Queens delivery of the Princess Eadburh whose new born beauty and obvious future connections had already attracted the attentions of a number of suitors. Wynnflaed smiled at her reluctantly, glancing around the barges guests, whom were noticeably fewer of late since the De Normandie family had once again moved onto the ascendant, forcing the Dowager-Countess to search for some words of comfort ‘Fear not my Lady, you know what Richard is like he blows hot and cold, he is ever conscious of his dignity, but he will come round.’

The Queen stroked the steadily growing bump beneath her cream corset and smiled at her friend ‘I am not afraid Countess’ she indicated toward her belly ‘The King of England will one day be my son. And the Kings and Queens of Europe will be my children, even if Richard were displeased with me for overstepping my position I am not afraid.’ Gunhilda couldn’t help but smile and see the sense of her mistresses’ argument, for nothing Richard could say or do would now take from the fact she had already provided with remarkable reliability for the future of Europe’s monarchies.

‘What do you suppose they have to discuss?’ the reason behind the Scottish Kings visit was unclear to almost everyone for with his nephews betrothal to the Princess Mary, who already resided in Scotland, the visit seemed to serve little real purpose.

Wynnflaed looked out over the water, her eyes somewhat vacant as she peered to the cheering crowds on the bank ‘I suspect they have a lot to discuss, all is not well in Scotland it seems and if my sources are right civil war looms. No doubt Malcolm wishes to guarantee that Richard has his back if it comes to a fight.’ She took deep breath, smiling again at Gunhilda with a little reluctance ‘Then there is the fact that the Scottish King wishes to undo Henry’s betrothal to the Manx Queen, so he can better pursue his designs in Wales.’

Her face shifted and Gunhilda’s interest was pricked ‘What claim does Scotland have on Wales? Surely Richard would not cost his son a throne for Malcolms friendship?’ It seemed ludicrous.

‘I have come to conclude’ she sighed again ‘it is best not to try second guess my husband or the twisted logic of those whom advise him. Perhaps he will see Henry set aside, though I doubt it. He will I am sure formalise the alliance between England and Scotland, but even if Malcolm wishes to push his designs on Gwynedd I hope the King will see that then our alliance with the Kingdom of Mann will be more vital than ever.’ Their barge was slowly coming to a stop, gliding quietly over the waves as the oars were banked and Gunhilda had to admire the young Queen, as she watched Wynnflaed collect herself together ‘Now let us not worry ourselves with unseen futures, we shall smile and be merry, when Richards mind is made up we will now how best to proceed.’


King Malcolm III- Evening, The Feast Hall of Greenwich, London 22nd July 1083

His visit was ending and though Malcolm adored his homeland, there was a slight pang of regret that he must soon leave this summer time court of merrymaking and feasting, for the wild hills of the Highlands and the uncouth men of Edinburgh. To see the King of England dancing cheerfully, careless amid his courtiers made it all the more poignant that he himself must return to a Kingdom on the brink of civil war.

But there was no time for fantasy, Richard had not yet sworn that he would ride to the Kings aid despite the betrothal of the mad Princess to his nephew, despite the dangers posed by the rebellious factions too Northumbria and Westmorland still the lions of England had refused to roar. That was why Malcolm had declined to dance and why now he sat, eyeing the beautiful, fairy Queen at England’s heart. “May I be blunt my Lady?”

The Queens eyes looked around the assembled court and she sipped her wine, glancing sidelong at Malcolm, god she was pretty “You may my Lord, but have a care. The walls have ears.”

‘You know why I have come here, your spies and mine have crossed roads more than once, it is well known that whilst Richard may act all powerful it is you in fact that the Kings men look to for guidance.’ She laughed at that, melodically her voice light ‘I know he has tried to put you in your place, but then I understand his logic and I suspect when you have your labour and deliver to him another child all will be well.’

‘I hope so too my Lord, but I fear you are dancing around the issue. Speak what you mean, and I shall say what I can?’ Malcolm smiled to himself, inwardly trying not to let his face show his amusement for she was incredibly sharp.

‘Very well lady…Richard is fond of meddling in the affairs of others, he has toppled two Kings already as suits is own design and yet when Wales crumbled through his own action I might add, he did nothing.’ She nodded slightly, no doubt she had seen letters written by foreign envoys naming her husband as a meddler and farmer of chaos ‘One suspects Richard enjoys seeing his friends and enemies weakened, perhaps he see’s profit in it, if the Welsh are divided, if other monarchs are dependent upon him he has their loyalty, but I assure you he will find no advantage in a disquiet Scotland.’

‘And so what ever good will I may earn from my next child’s birth, you would have me spend urging Richard to ride to your aid?’ She had hit the nail, as he knew she would, very cleanly on the head. She turned to look at him, their eyes meeting with deep understanding ‘You will stop your attempts to undo my son Henry’s betrothal, he will be King of Mann one day and you will publicly support it, that is my price and if that is met, I will do all I can for you when the time comes.’

It was no small thing she asked, for Mann provided a vital link in Malcolms designs for Scotland uniting with Wales to entrap England but for the time being it would suffice ‘Agreed Lady, before I leave I shall acknowledge Henry as King of Mann and we shall be good friends thereafter.’

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Wynnflaed shows herself to be a decisive, and perhaps worthy, Queen here in more ways than one.

I only hope Richard appreciates it when he returns.
 

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Richard remains his stubborn self, unable to suffer through the thoughts of his wives having any power independent of him. But it seems like Wynnflaed is much wiser to it, or at least better prepared than Ingrid was. She has advantages the last queen did not though - having given him sons and being quite fertile - and she knows Richard can discard wives, so she has better guard for it. (Though again, the best guard seems to be how easily she conceives children)
 

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Chapter 46: A Game of Thrones

Asher, Lord Steward- Noon, The Audience Room of Greenwich, London 23rd June 1083

“For your service to me, the crown and to England, I Richard Rex bequeath to you” Asher felt the sword lay lightly on his shoulder ‘the Barony of Tottenham, to be held forthwith by your house and your descendants for all time.’ Pride swelled within the Lord Steward, pride however, that was dulled by regret for to achieve this end he had been forced to break with Wynnflaed who even now glared down at him from her throne. ‘You may rise, my Lord and give thanks to your King’ Asher then stood, slowly, taking the Kings gloved hand and placed his lips gently upon the leather.

Before he had reached his full height, the Earl of Maine and his aging father, William rushed forward to embrace him for by this one act of treachery, Asher had not only broken with Wynnflaed but he had placed himself in the devils camp. Tomorrow he would wed Adela, youngest daughter of the House of Normandie and thereafter he would fall from the Queens grace.

The doors of the audience chamber without word or warning swung open, Asher recognised the man instantly as the Ambassador of Scotland, a tall, broad fellow named Robert. The man ignored the assembled guests as the court parted and he dropped instantly to his knees, Richard did not look impressed by the introduction but nevertheless indicated the man should speak. “Lord King, I have word from my master…. rebellion is afoot in the lowlands; the King is beset and has sent for aid. He wishes to know if England will answer?”

Richard did not answer immediately but turned to toward his throne, pausing for a moment to consider the eyes of his wife, Asher recognised the look. It was a tell-tale sign he had only recently noticed that said they had already discussed this matter and the issue had been decided between them. The King took his seat in silence and looked to his wife, he obviously had decided this reply would be left to her and so all eyes shifted to the beautiful glowing Queen, her belly growing ever larger from the child within and then she spoke “Ambassador it is my husbands understanding that your King despite his promises has not yet acknowledged our son’s betrothal to the Queen of Mann.” Murmurs spread through the courtiers, though Asher himself simply smiled, Wynnflaed was no fool and she had already told him of her demands to Malcolm in return for her support.

The Ambassador looked puzzled for a moment, casting around toward the collection of Earls stood to his right for clarity. He had not long to wait before the Lord Marshal, Odo stepped forward ‘As our Queen rightly points out Ambassador until the matter of the Princes betrothal is settled, the armies of England can not march.’

The kilted Scotsman moved to answer but was stalled by the Kings raised hand “You have the answer of England’s King my friend, Henrys betrothal receives the public approval of King Malcolm or he deals with this rebellion alone.” And with that the interruption was over, the ambassador dismissed, and the court moved out of the audience chamber to continue its business.

Lady Cecilia- Mid-afternoon, The Louvre Palace, Paris 5th October 1083

It was an odd affair when one thought about it, an affair that spoke of the complexity of rulership and the interconnected threads of power that held Europe in its grasp. To see Richard, her friend and her King proceeding through the great doors of the Louvre Palace flanked by the Duke of Flanders, himself wearing not the crown of England but the Ducal Crown of Normandy was indeed peculiar.

Whilst the flames of civil war spread across the heartlands of Scotland, Richard had brought himself and a few trusted courtiers to attend the coronation of Frances new King, which had itself just endured a period of civil war. Now though that war was over and Henri de Bourgogne, the second of that name had been crowned King in Notre Dame that very day.

Cecilia offered a low courtesy as the French King passed her by, accepting the homage of his court. Wynnflaed was in England, heavy with child and it was a testimony to the precariousness of a woman’s position that Henri proceeded up the central aisle of the feast hall without his wife, whom lay dead in her grave stricken by sickness in the midst of war.

Richard past her, offering a discreet smile and she could not help but offer a prayer up to god in heaven, that her King would prove to be this man’s equal for Henri was not a man to be disregarded, he was an excellent soldier and by all account not only was he hard to judge but when he judge against a man, then true cruelty could be seen. She could only hope that in time the two would strike an accord, or a balance at least.

Queen Wynnflaed- Morning, The Queens Study, Westminster 10th November 1083

Wynnflaed rested both her hands heavily on the table, trying to breath through the pains as Constance rubbed the small of her back “Highness, I think your time is upon us, come let me get you to the bed.” Another contraction came hard and the Queen tried to stifle a cry as Lady Constance helped her manoeuvre to the royal bed, her skirts wet with fluid.

“Send for Gunhilda”
Wynnflaed beckoned for one of her servants to take her arm ‘I am well attended, but I would have the Dowager-Countess with me’ she sent Constance from the room as another pain nearly took her knees from beneath her, the young serving girl helping to lower her on the bed. She tried to prop herself up slightly ‘Bring me my letters would you?’

“Highness, you are in labour you should be resting and preparing yourself” the young girl looked nervous as she gathered the papers from the desk.

‘I have done this three times already’ she winced again ‘I know what is to come’ she reached out her hands for the letters ‘There is business for me to look at regardless and, I suspect though the pains are quickening my child is in no rush to be free.’ She edged herself onto the bed glancing over the papers.

It was some time before Constance returned with the Dowager-Countess in toe and though her face was now flushed and sweat had begun to seep down her brow, Wynnflaed forced a smile as her long-time friend rushed to take her hand. “I am sorry I took so long, but I went to inform Richard that you are in labour.”

‘Any word from him?
’ she had grown used to her husband’s absence from her birthing by now and she did not expect much had changed.

‘He bids you a safe delivery and he has ordered a mass be said whilst the court awaits news.’
Gunhilda frowned at the Queen, ‘Why are you reading through papers when you are about to give birth, you silly girl.’ No one but the Dowager-Countess would ever speak to Wynnflaed in such a manner but the Queen smiled.

‘Have you seen this?’
she offered the Dowager-Countess one of her letters ‘Malcolm has finally acknowledge the betrothal of Henry, my son’s will be Kings united.’

‘He must be desperate, for he has taken long enough to do what you asked’
the Countess was right of course, she stretched over the bed taking the other letters from Wynnflaeds hands as another contraction through the Queen onto her back. ‘NOW enough! Let’s put these down and focus on the task at hand, shall we? There will be plenty of time for you to govern when Richard goes to war, but women’s work awaits us now’



King Richard- Mid-afternoon, The Kings Study, Westminster, 20th December 1083

A servant threw another log onto the fire and the flames gave a slight roar as they were fed, outside snow was thick on the ground and the wind that had swept down from the north was incredibly cold, making the likelihood of a march before the spring thaw exceptionally unlikely.

Despite the cold weather and bitter winds however, many nobles had made the long journey south to enjoy the Christmas festivities and Richard as a sign of his gratitude had decided to meet as many as he could in private audiences. There was a nock at the chamber door “Enter” and a guard strode through.

“Highness” the guardsman saluted “The Earl of Shropshire is here to see you as requested.” Richard rose from his chair, still standing behind the desk and the guard showed the Earl in at the Kings behest.


Ralph de Gael, the Earl of Shropshire was an incredibly tall man, who stood straight backed and head held high as he entered the chamber. “My Lord of Shropshire, it is good to see you” Richard offered a welcome grin, but it was not returned and he remembered instantly from his wife’s little list of notes that the Earl was given to considerable bouts of melancholy. Richard cast forth his hand ‘Please, please do sit down’ a servant stepped forward with a silver tray upon which two small goblets of mulled wine rested. The Earl took his seat and then the wine, smelling it carefully, he was a Breton by birth and no doubt prided himself on his ability to smell a good wine, though he need not worry about his beverages quality for Richard had spared little expense. ‘You are well my friend?’

The Earl nodded as he sipped lightly on his cup ‘I am your Highness and you? How is the Queen and your new son?’ it was a month now passed, but Wynnflaed had again provided England with yet another Prince, this one named Malcolm in honour of the Kings new ally.

‘They are both well, my son is strong, and the Queen as ever has recovered well from her labour, it was in fact her Highnesses wish that I meet with you. She tells me you have a venture that you seek my approval for?’ Richard smirked inwardly to see the Earl bristle at such a statement.

‘I wouldn’t say I am seeking your approval Highness, but a leave of absence from your service would be most appreciated?’
The King supped his mulled wine, using the cup to hide the smile that now spread along his lips, such pride, but then pride was understandable in a man as talented in warfare as the Earl was.

‘I am listening my friend, but I hope it is worth the effort we are to march on Scotland in the spring and it will require something of some value to grant you leave’ he played to the Earls sense of self-importance as the poor man’s face registered disapointment ‘too loose such a valuable asset requires great reward.’

‘Then I am sure you shall approve. You know I am sure my family via descent from they mothers father can claim descent from the former Dukes of Powys?’
Richard nodded, intrigued ‘And I am sure you are also aware it was my fathers long time ambition to make good on that claim?’ Richard nodded again, the direction now obvious. ‘I am resolved to push the claim now myself and whilst Malcolm is busy dealing with his rebellious Lords and England marches to its aid I can think of no better time than now.’

‘You have heard I am sure as I have that the Scottish King has his own designs on Wales?’
Malcolm had not openly spoke of it but Richards various collection of spy masters had made it plain that he would if he could make a play for the northern coast of Wales.

‘I have heard it mentioned my King, but then what could he do to oppose me if my liege lord his aiding him in the field and if my own standard were to be seen in the highlands fighting for his right?’ It was a solid argument and though Richard valued the Earls military skill, he had enough able commanders to withstand the loss.

‘Very well Ralph, you have my blessing in this venture’
the word blessing not seeming nearly as condescending as approval or consent ‘Play your hand and if you are victorious then I shall happily acknowledge you as Duke of Powys, now’ Richard indicated to the serving girl to refill their cups from the cauldron simmering by the fire ‘Let us drink to our efforts and pray god we are victorious.’

Baron William- Afternoon, The Great North Road, Lincolnshire, 11th January 1084

Despite the cold they were all in high spirits and it warmed the aging Baron to see the King and his son riding happily together like they did as children, when ambition and position had not got the better of them. Though Richard had planned to leave in the early spring, letters had streamed down the Great North Road despite the snow, carried by men and horses whom were half dead when they had reached London. Malcolm was desperate for aid and could he claimed not afford to delay.

And so they had set out, five hundred men buried thick in as many furs as London could provide to the cries and cheers of the cities denizens, the Baron himself was hailed by maidens from their windows as “William de Normandie, William the Conqueror.” The Council had urged against a winter march, but Richard had refused to be gainsaid, he had insisted that riders brave the winter chill to spread the word that all who were able should converge on York where they would meet and make for the Scottish borders.

On the opposite side of the country, with the King sanction the Earl of Shropshire would no doubt be readying his men to cross into Wales and though the Barons son had railed for an hour and more at the suggestion that the King would acknowledge the Earl as a Duke if he was successful, William couldn’t help but be pleased to see that finally after much arguing his Highness had decided to allow an intervention in the Welsh Princedoms.

The Baron spurred his horse forward suddenly, snow flying from it hooves as he raced along the line. It moved with incredible grace over the soft snow and with speed, passing Richard and Robert in moments, laughter peeling from his aging chest as his son and King gave hot pursuit ‘Come on my lads, to Scotland! England is coming Malcolm’ they all began to laugh ‘Do you hear? England is coming!’

Queen Wynnflaed- Mid-morning, The Royal Gardens, Greenwich, 20th January 1084

Days after the Kings departure, Wynnflaed had ordered the court to move to Greenwich, its smaller size easier to heat and its close quarters meaning courtiers had less far to walk to visit her than they did in the sprawling mess that was Westminster. With the river frozen solid, they had come by road down to the smaller house and Wynnflaed had insisted her son Richard now making five, be wrapped up in rich ermine and placed on the back of a fine, little pony so that the people could have a good look at their future King. Her second son Henry had ridden on her knee whilst Eadburh and Malcolm were tucked safe away in a fur trimmed carriage.

At present though, despite the cold she had donned a thick coat, lined with rabbit fur and a headdress that she thought looked somewhat like a nun’s habit, so that she could walk in the crisp morning air. Asher, the Lord Steward and Chancellor Rolland walking slowly instep as they discussed the business of state. Neither had looked impressed by her suggestion of a stroll in the gardens but they had not refused, for which she was immeasurably grateful; to many months trapped within the confines of the courts walls often found her stifled for air.

Wynnflaeds heart jumped into her mouth when she saw Gunhilda stood before them, forgetting her company she rushed forward in alarm “Good grief my friend what are you doing out here it is bitter cold?” the Queen whipped of her fur trim jacket and placed in on the Dowager-Countesses shoulders, age had crept up on her over the past few months, her colour had mysteriously drained from her face, her hair was lank and her once slender frame was becoming almost paper thin.

The Countess waved her away “Do not fuss about my Highness, I am fine” she held out a clutch of papers to the Queen ‘My sister Gytha writes to you’ she lowered her voice ‘It is regarding your proposal.’

Wynnflaed matched her tone ‘Need I read it? Does she consent to the match?’

‘She and her husband are of one mind and are content that with a papal dispensation Eadburh may marry my nephew and so in turn succeed my sister as Queen of Leon.’
Wynnflaed almost forgot herself in her excitement, moving to hug Gunhilda tightly before remembering the frailty of her friend and stepping back. ‘It is good news my friend, I thank you for it with all my heart.’

Rolland and Asher stood a few feet away looking puzzled by the two ladies sudden joy. Her former secretary was trying to read her face, though she could tell he struggled

No matter if you do not understand now, in time you will see who plays the better game. Politics is about patience

‘Good news Highness?’
The Chancellors gaze flicked from Wynnflaed to Gunhilda.

‘Perhaps my Lord, just perhaps.’
There was no need to let her plans for her children’s future out into the open just yet.


Margaret in Navarra, Henry in Mann, Eadburh in Leon and Malcolm, where will can I find a bride for Malcolm

Earl William of Everux- Evening, The Scottish Border, 22nd January 1084

“TIREZ EN ARRIERE! Tirez les bâtards de retour!” The Earls voice was hoarse, his throat straining as he tried in vain to get his officers to obey his orders, they looked at him with eyes that would make sheep seem bright.

Bloody Englishmen why do they not listen!

‘Déplacez l'infanterie légère à la ...’
still they looked at him dumbfounded ‘Move the light infantry up on the right you imbecile!’

Must I use their bloody dog language for everything nowadays.

The Scots were moving hard against his flanks, their left pushing his right hand, trying to turn the line. They out numbered him three to one, but with Richards army but a few hours behind and since they were on English soil, the Earl had ordered his men to give battle. He was on foot, knee deep in snow, his toes nearly numb but he felt the thud of horses’ hooves before he saw them as a rider approached from the rear, pushing men aside.

“My Lord I bring a message from King Richard” the man paused a moment only, wheeling his horse ‘You are to withdraw to the west, make for the foothills of Cumberland, the King will not be here in time to aid you!’ William looked along the line, moving further up the slope his men had claimed, the front ranks were giving ground, men fell on all sides. He needs to make a choice and fast.

His signaller gave him a gentle nudge ‘Lord, do I signal the retreat?’ The man moved the horn to his lips waiting for the command, taking in a gulp of air.

‘Put that bloody thing down and return to your post’ the man looked at him aghast ‘Je ne suis pas un lâche.’

I am de Vassy, we do not retreat

He drew his sword from its hilt, he was glad he had greased the swords length for it slid out with ease despite the cold.

Normans do not run


All those around looked upon him as he raised his sword high ‘Pour Richard et la Normandie!’



King Richard- Mid-day, The Scottish Border, 24th January 1084

The further north they had come the harder the weather had become, as if the north wind itself was trying to hold them back. Richards forces having gathered at York had made considerable speed through Northumbria toward the Scottish border, but it had not been without loss. Men had been left by the way side all along the march, sickened and weakened near death by the bighting wind and endless snow drifts that beset the sweeping moors.

He had hoped to swing west into the foothills of Cumbria but as they had shifted course fleeing men, the left overs of Earl Williams army had crossed their path and he had ordered the army to shift to a direct northerly heading once more. William and Robert still urged against it, but Richard would not be diverted.

“We should stick to our plan, sweep west into Cumberland, burn the bastards out and then hit the heart of these bloody rebels with all we have, it will be over in weeks.” The Baron would not let it drop ‘What is to be gained from visiting a pile of frozen corpses?’ A guide was leading them on, to were they said the Earl of Evreux body would be found. ‘We should be hunting the swine into the wild lands Richard mark my words, hunt them down and smash them.’

All your skill and still you do not see clearly, why would I wish to solve Malcolm’s worries for him.

“My friend I have told you, it would look ill with the people if I were to just leave their loved ones to the carrion”
he did not turn to look at the Baron or to his son who was coming alongside ‘Besides Evreux was our friend, I would see him laid to rest.’

And I would give these rebels a little more breathing space.


“My father is right Richard” the King tried to smother his irritation, Robert took far to many liberties with their friendship ‘De Vassy is on ice, he will wait a while the rebels will not.’

I dare say you are right, but that is not the point

‘Our friend is dead Robert, cut down in his prime for the sin of pride perhaps but do not be so callous it could all to easily have been you or I.’
The thought of the Earls off hand remark chilled Richards blood a little.

If only it had been you I would have saved myself no end of grief

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There is a warning for Richard there at the end. I wonder if he will heed it.
 

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Do you find the little asides I tried to add work ok? x
I think so. Was going to wait for a few more updates to allow you to get a bit more comfortable before passing comment.
 

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Wynnflaed tending to business while having a child - pretty impressive that one. The king does not deserve a queen like her.

Messing around in Scotland tends to be something that can easily go awry for English kings. We'll see if Richard's fate there is better than his real-life counterparts.

One note about the asides - I would suggest avoid italicizing your quotes if you're going to use asides. I know you've italicized quotes from jump but you need something to separate the internal thought to actual speech - otherwise it requires extra reading to see which is which.

The reason why I'd drop the italics on the quote is because the quotation marks themselves already give away that it's being spoken. Just be careful, in that case, not to bury a one line quote from a character in the middle of a paragraph.

Just my two cents though. Others may feel differently.
 

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Wynnflaed tending to business while having a child - pretty impressive that one. The king does not deserve a queen like her.

Messing around in Scotland tends to be something that can easily go awry for English kings. We'll see if Richard's fate there is better than his real-life counterparts.

One note about the asides - I would suggest avoid italicizing your quotes if you're going to use asides. I know you've italicized quotes from jump but you need something to separate the internal thought to actual speech - otherwise it requires extra reading to see which is which.

The reason why I'd drop the italics on the quote is because the quotation marks themselves already give away that it's being spoken. Just be careful, in that case, not to bury a one line quote from a character in the middle of a paragraph.

Just my two cents though. Others may feel differently.

Two cents appreciated as I wasn't sure, I had the same feeling but was uncertain which seemed to be the best for the reader.

Wynnflaed is a very talented young woman, hopefully the next few chapters will show that stronger still. Trying my best really to match her character with the cracking stats she came with
 

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Chapter 47: The Wolves and the She-Wolf

Earl Gilbert of Suffolk-Noon, The Suffolk Coast, South of Ipswich, 29th February 1084

Smoke billowed up in plumes dotted across the horizon, not the gentle greyish white smoke, of fish huts usually found along this areas coast line, but the pitch-black smoke of burning thatch. The young Earl and his retinue had set out two days previously, riding south along the coast road following the signs of fire, before finally they had arrived here.

He directed his horse slowly past a group of his men who were sifting through the scorched ashes of what he presumed had been a fisherman’s hovel “Any joy Eric?”



What chance does anyone have amid such devastation

The young man turned his face up to his master, smudges of ash covering his cheeks “Nay my Lord, there is no telling if anyone survived or indeed how many have died.”

Heathens

Gilbert looked all about him, ruined hovels and fish hut still burning hours after they had been set alight, his heart ached and his stomach wrenched slightly ‘I did not think the Northmen would ever return to our shores.’

God grant these poor children of Christ entry into paradise and curse the pagans.

‘Do what you can my friend, I suspect little can be saved here. We shall leave within the hour.’ He steered his horse away from the smouldering pyre toward the small hamlets boundary, unwilling to look any longer on the hellish scene.


Another guard rode alongside him, one of his fathers’ men, stocky and thick set with a black beard speckled grey. He leaned over in his saddle, his voice low “We should send a rider my Lord to the King or too London surely? I have already sent scouts along the coast to find their ships.”


Heaven forbid these beasts still prowl the coast, Father I beseech thee send them home.

‘A worthy suggestion my friend, we shall if we can do both. Send your fastest riders to London so that they may warn the council and when we are safely home I shall provision a ship to take word north to the King, it will not be an easy journey in the winter time by road.’ Richard was far to the north though one could only hope he was still south of the Scottish border. May angels speed them on their way.


Queen Wynnflaed-Late morning, Westminster, London, 7th March 1084

Despite the chill Wynnflaed sat on a cedar chair underneath the makeshift veranda, melting snow and drops of sparkling water looking like a curtain of crystals before her. Baroness Mathilde with walking stick in hand, for she was aged much now sat to her left, the Dowager-Countess still struggling with her health sat to the right. The Queen and Gunhilda applauded as Prince Richard swept the Earl of Maines’ sons leg from under him, knocking the poor boy into a puddle, kicking his wooden sword from his hand as he fell.

Bravo my little King. She sensed Mathildes irritation at the sight of her bested grandson. Worry not Baroness it is just a game.

“They are both gift swordsmen are they not Baroness?” the question sounded amicable enough and she tried to appear generous with her praise. But the Baroness was clearly irritated.

“Get up boy, you are not beaten until you are dead!” such words spoken to a child seemed harsh but then Wynnflaed did not rebuke her, it was not her place.

If that is only lesson you have Baroness, I see why your son is as persistent as he is. The Queens head spun around as Gunhilda winced slightly, trying to adjust her position and Wynnflaed silently offered her the chance to speak. “I remember as a girl, when we lived with King Gwain, watching the King and the Earl play like this at just about the same age, but I confess Richard showed not nearly as much skill with a sword as Robert did.”

‘My son still is the better swordsman and the better commander’ Mathilde’s back straightened as pride filled her a little, taking a handful of years from her face though she tried to quell the Queens concern unusually ‘Fear not Highness, with my son and husband in Scotland at Richards side, he is well protected in the bosom of his family’ But they are not his family Baroness, I am and my children are, your basket of serpents only pretend to be so inclined. Wynnflaed smiled nodding slightly to the side as she fixed her eyes on the two boys, who were once more with their tutor’s instruction squaring up to one another, any solace Mathilde had given was however, quickly snatched awaythough from what I hear there is little chance of Richard even seeing battle’

Alright Baroness, I will bite though I suspect I know most of it. “Exactly what have you heard my friend? Heaven knows I am poorly informed, Richard writes so rarely?’ It mattered little however, that the King did not write often for Wynnflaed had sent him north with near fifteen of her best spies planted throughout the army, though regrettably two had fallen been silent for the past few weeks and she suspected the weather had seen them off.

The Baroness made no attempt to hide her smile, the Queen turning her gaze back to the two young boys now trading blows once more ‘My son says Richard has no stomach for a fight, he says they have ridden all the way to Scotland for next to nothing and that one would think the King has no desire to see this rebellion quashed quickly.’

Well Baroness, you are partially right though it is a pity you are not the only one your son says those things too.

‘Shall I give you a brief lesson Lady Beaumont on my husband’s intent? You could if you wish pass it along to your son and his friends so that they perhaps may have a little more faith?’ she glared over her shoulder at the Baroness whose eyes were fixed dead ahead on the two young boys as they were being guided through their steps and swings. The Queen took her silence as consent to continue, dismissing the two servants nearby before she continued; one of them was after all Malcolm’s spy. ‘Richard has aided Malcolm purely and simply for England’s benefit not that of the Scottish King. If the rebel leader was a better option I am sure Richard would have supported him instead.’

‘Why on earth, then has the King marched at all? If either option is favourable surely it would have been best to just sit it out?’ For such a gifted courtier and one so long lived you really do not see things clearly at all do you. Wynnflaed smiled at the Baronesses puzzlement.

‘Because dear friend, the King firstly wishes to support the betrothal of Mary to the Kings nephew, the fall of the House of Dunkeld would spell Marys fall too. Second because our intervention sends a clear message across these islands. England and her King are the masters of it all and it is by my husbands will that lesser men can call themselves Sovereign Lords.’ Surely both were obvious reasons, though Wynnflaed was primarily focused on keeping Mary in the north, away from her children and out of the succession, safe in her solitary madness.

Before she could continue educating the Baroness, Wynnflaed was stopped by an unfamiliar sound; bells. Starting far off at first, she thought that she had imagined them but then the noise had grown closer, getting louder, ever louder as if there was a plague amongst the bell towers of London that set the bronzes ringing. The noise continued to spread until even the small bells before the palace gates were being rung, the watchmen striking them hard.

Fire Perhaps? A Tidal surge? Worse? Was Richard dead and no one had though to tell her?

The three ladies looked to one another, the Dowager-Countess despite her failing health already on her feet directing Prince Richard and Robert de Normandie inside the safety of the palace. The Baroness too, hoisted up by the Scottish spy posing as her man servant hobbled inward, Wynnflaed waited a moment for the young son of Commander Drogo, Balthere as he picked up the wooden staves that they had been using ‘Come on little knight, let us go see what the commotion is!’

Lord if you are listening, be merciful.


Queen Wynnflaed-Noon, Westminster, London 7th March 1084

Wynnflaed moved at pace down the corridor, quickly out striding Gunhilda and the boys, casting a glance over her shoulder “Take the children to the nursery Countess, see they stay where they are.” She gripped her heavy skirts at the knee hoisting them from the floor, so she could walk faster, flying around the nearest corner.

One of the kitchens herb gardens opened to her right and the Queen noticed on the opposite side the Bishop of Burton rushing at speed in the same direction, his mitre being carried by a poor brother monk who was struggling to keep the pace, the Bishop trying to do up his robe as he strode.

Foots-steps converged from the left corridor and she swapped a sharp glance with Asher, his deep frown lines showing he too was puzzled by the bizarre cacophony that now rang out throughout the palace. Servants and courtiers were all converging on the throne room and many jumped aside to allow her passage, the doors already thrown open and a mud-soaked rider was standing at the rooms centre.

She ignored the man for a moment, taking the steps to the dais in one move, sweeping her skirts round as she glided down into her seat, grace and power personified. Waiting a moment, she allowed the other courtiers and councillors to get into the chamber, racing for the best positions. With a gentle wave of her wrist, she indicated without need for words that despite their difference Bishop Rolland should, as Lord Chancellor join her on the dais. I am certain I will need you in the moments to come. She ignored the assembling court and looked hard at the besmirched rider “Speak? Where are you from and what news do you bring?”

Let it not be Richard, say he is not dead.

Highness I have come on behalf of Earl Gilbert with grave tidings” out with it man, speak plain ‘We are beset my Queen, the Northmen have returned to England, they have burned six villages in my Lords lands and our scouts say they are making their way south, enough ships to carry near a thousand men.’

Thank you Lord. Praised be that Richard is safe.

She was not sure what to say but there was little need for the Chancellor was ahead of her for a change “You are certain of this? Northmen have not come this far west for near a decade and they certainly have not been seen a thousand strong for many a year”

Ever a pragmatist, welcome for a change.

I saw their ships with my own eyes Chancellor, I am certain of it. Thirteen ships, enough to carry a thousand warriors and they have given their sails to the north wind, it drives them south, they shall be at the mouth of the Thames in days.’ The poor man looked exhausted, he must have ridden near day and night by the look of him. ‘If the ringing of the bells tells me anything Lord Bishop, it is that the watch towers along the coast have seen the dragon prows themselves.’

Now we must act then and quickly if the bells do speak true.

Wynnflaed gestured for the man to withdraw ‘See he is fed and given a bed’ she looked about her council, many of those before her looked utterly puzzled for it had been near a generation passed since the Vikings had come to England, with Norway and Danmark in Christian hands it had been thought they would never return. Ingrid must be having difficulties. Asher, her go to advisor still, was buried in the press of bodies and the Chancellor was looking at his feet obviously lost in thought, she beckoned to the Earl of Surrey who by design or destiny had been pushed to the front. ‘My Lord of Surrey, I know you are no soldier, but I have need of you now since the Marshal is abroad’ the aging Earl nodded sternly, his beard stained by his interrupted breakfast. ‘Find out how many men we have in the city, I must know what forces we have to resist these invaders.’

The Chancellor spun on the spot, astonishment on his face ‘We must send to the King at once Highness, there is no time to delay, we must recall the army and defend London at all cost.’ She heard the panic in his voice, usually she would enjoy his distress but this morning she shared it, though she fought hard to hide the fact.

Be calm Chancellor, we must be united and steadfast in times of crisis.

She offered a very faint but reassuring smile and she saw on his face the brief flicker of regret at speaking in haste ‘It will be a week nearly two, of hard riding to reach the border, a week further perhaps longer to find the Kings army and then two more at the least for the army to march south. Even by sea we shall need time.’ She turned from the Chancellor as he in turn pivoted to the crowded room, obviously conceding defeat. She smiled at Earl William and crooked her head to the head of the palace guard to move closer ‘Close the landside gates, place eyes on every road in all directions, I want men on the walls before the day ends. My Lord of Surrey there is little time, fetch me a roll call of the garrison immediately’ the Queen crooked a finger to the Lord Chamberlain, the position currently filled by the Earl of Norfolk ‘Bring maps of the city, we must look to our defences’ he nodded without question and moved from the chamber. Wynnflaed rose to her feet, the Chancellor offering her a bow as she pushed her skirts aside ‘The news is not good my friends, but be about your business for calm is essential.’ She made a point of locking eyes with the councillors who had remained in London ‘Gentlemen, I think we had best meet again before dusk, now if you will excuse me my son’s need their mother.’

Queen Wynnflaed-Dusk, The Walls of London, South London 12th March 1084

Torch lights had begun to flicker into life across the sweeping fields before her, camp fires blazed in defiance of the gentle spring rain, raging flames that sought to keep the evening chill at bay. The sprawling shanty towns that usually spread before Londons walls were now gone, either fled to the country or else the residents had moved within the city proper. Wynnflaed stood proudly on the gatehouse, her hair teased by the wind, Prince Richard was trying desperately to peer over the walls ledge after having insisted he be allowed to come.

William, Earl of Surrey stood beside her looking down at the burning ruins of the shanty towns, scorched in fire that morning as the Northmen arrived. A shadow had descended over London.

I am not a religious woman Lord, but if you hear me then speed Richards return to us. I need him now.

She turned and glanced over the southern stretch of the Thames, blocked now by five ships stocked with pitch and joined together by chains and ropes designed to keep the dragon ships from entering the city via the river. “You are to be commended William, you have done a grand job with little in the way of time.”

I only wish we had enough men to ride out and chase them away

“I thank you Highness, but you know as well as I that the city will sleep safe tonight thanks only to you and your actions not my own.” He was a decent man, fair and just if a little somewhat cowardly and she smiled at his praise, though it would remain between the two of them that the Queen had played any part in the cities defence.

‘Well, we have both played a part maybe’ she gave her son Richard, still struggling to see over the wall, a boost ‘Nevertheless my friend, when the King returns you will be rewarded for your support I promise.’ He smiled at her, his brow creasing as he accepted her words. IF we are victorious, if those bloody messengers can track Richard down and bring him home.

He reached out and patted her hand gently ‘Fear not my Queen, you have done well so far and I will help were I can. But I am sure the King will send aid soon.’ I hope so my friend, really I do. I can keep this up forever. ‘Nonetheless there are five hundred men in the city itself, all is not lost. We have men to defend us.’

She went to answer but the little Prince spun on his bottom to face his mother, throwing his arms around her as she grabbed him tightly ‘You have me mama, I will get a good sharp sword and a shield from the armoury and I shall protect you from them.’ Herself and the Earl laughed at his bravery and she offered him a gentle kiss on the cheek. If only such innocence could last forever my darling. ‘They are not so scary these men, the stories say they are giants who breath fire, but they look like any body else to me.’ They may look like normal men my son, but inside their hearts they are nothing short of beasts, savage and brutual.

I think it does not bode well for Queen Ingrid’ William randomly had decided to voice the very thing that had been playing on Wynnflaed mind these past few days ‘These men must have come far from the east of Norway, that suggests they must have landed on the coast of Danmark or Norway at some point and they would not have done so quietly, yet the ambassador says nothing?’

‘I fear my friend the ambassador has not been entirely honest with us about the strength of Ingrids reign.’ Indeed he had been far honest, having read the mans letter she had uncovered a conspiracy against her former mistress that would have her toppled from the throne and a new dynasty installed. Civil war had not yet erupted but there were outbreaks of rebellion and resistance blooming across the land that promised only to worsen.

‘Perhaps mama, father should send Mary to Norway? Make her Queen of Norway like Margaret is in Navarra and then two of my sisters will have thrones that will flank England when I am King.’ She looked at him quizzically, in the one hand he clearly did not realise that Princess Mary would never be a Queen of anywhere, not so long as sense remained in the world. Curious that you say flanked, do you see what I hope for you my son? Are you wise enough yet to see how your sisters and brother will aid you in the future. Or is it just childish fantasy? I read to much into it perhaps.
 

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Wynnflaed's internal musings are showing the essential fragility of her place and situation.
 

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Good chapter underlying the uncertainty over the raiders and the fear that would accompany that with the royal forces far away. And I wondered if there would be an Ingrid callback, and was glad there was.

I think your formatting was good here. It was easier on the eye to read.
 

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Good chapter underlying the uncertainty over the raiders and the fear that would accompany that with the royal forces far away. And I wondered if there would be an Ingrid callback, and was glad there was.

I think your formatting was good here. It was easier on the eye to read.
I am not quiet finished with Ingrid just yet.......it seems wrong to not in away finish off her story or at least take it a wee bit further
 

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Chapter 48: Enemies on the run

Queen Wynnflaed-Dawn, The Queens Chambers, Westminster, London 28th March 1084

“My Queen, my Queen you must wake up you are needed.” She could feel herself being pushed gently, her eyes flickering open ‘Highness the Baron of Beaumont is outside.’ What did they say, Baron of Beaumont…..she did say that, THE BARON!! Her eyes shot open and Wynnflaed realised at once she had fallen asleep in an armchair by the fire, still wearing yesterday’s cloths, her hair slightly unkept. I hardly imagine I look queenly today.

Gesturing toward the door, the Queen signalled to the smiling maid to show in her unexpected but most welcome guest. Striding through without hesitation came William de Normandie and it surprised her just a little that the Earl of Surrey was with him. She tried to force a smile, patting and smoothing down her crumpled skirts “Gentlemen, I apologise for my unwelcome state’ she gestured to the chair, showing why she appear dishevelled ‘I am afraid I must have…’ what am I doing ha, why am I explaining myself. “My Lord William, it is good to see you got my message at last but….” He moved to interrupt her, offering a bow.

‘The Earl of Norfolk sent word to us at the same time as he sent to you my Queen, fortunately we met your riders on the return march.’ He smiled at her but as he did she noticed something she had missed in her sleep addled daze. Where is Richard? Why are you here Baron? He must have read her mind for he answered near immediately ‘The King is still in Scotland Highness, he sent me back to you with near four thousand men and, he sends his regards but for the moment he is otherwise occupied.’

So occupied he couldn’t not come to his own wife and childrens aid? So occupied he sent his lacky? She lurched back to the chair suddenly, feeling almost bereft that he had not returned to her. ‘My husband is well I hope?’

‘He is Highness and he sends warmest regard, to you and your children’ warmest regards indeed ‘The Northmen it seems have begun retreating toward the coast, I will billet my men in the city until they leave and then I am afraid I will have to return to the Kings side.’

Return to the King indeed, what sad creatures you are. She couldn’t help feeling incredibly hurt that this man had been sent to defend her when her husband should have come himself. Does he feel so very little for me? He loves me I know he does. ‘You may billet yourself in your rooms Baron and visit your wife and children at your leisure, but I have need of your men before they return north.’ She did not bother to look at him though she felt his presence shift from one of ambivalence to irritation.

‘My Queen? What do you need with an army?’ Don’t worry William, it is nothing stupid.

These men cannot simply besiege the walls of our capital and then be allowed to just leave!’ She knew how it would look to the Earls at home and the Kings abroad ‘The Earl of Surrey shall ride at your army’s head and purse them to the coast’ she smiled gently at her friend, knowing he was no great warrior ‘Four thousand men is more than enough my Lord of Surrey, kill them if you can or else chase them and their dragon ships into the see.’ She caught the Barons grimace from the sides, he offered little protest. You know it makes sense, perhaps if you were not so eager to return to Scotland you might have be London’s saviour.


William, Baron of Beaumont-Noon, Vange, Middlesex 15th April 1084


The stench of stale water clawed at Williams nostrils and when the coppery sent of blood mingled with it even for a man as accustomed to battle as himself his stomach wrenched. Looking down from his charger, the Baron couldn’t help but feel slightly repulsed by the scene before him for it was like a living re-enactment of the Earl of Gloucesters former butchery.

Men screamed to their gods, begging mercy and release, the sound of hammer strokes followed by the crunch of bone singing to the highest heavens of the pagan halls. They had fought hard since dawn, ensnaring the Northmen against the banks of the Thames, forcing them over the morning into the murky brown waters of the Vange and now with the battle over, the Earl of Surrey was making a name for himself crucifying men who had surrendered.

William looked upon the blood-soaked Earl with some curiosity, his face was besmirched and his hands trembled, but his eyes were fixed on the rising crucifixes. What is it about the title of Earl that drives men to excess. He heard another wrist bone crack beneath the hammer blow and nudge his horse forward, intruding into the Earls private space “Is this not a little excessive Lord? Do we really need to do this?”

The Earl snapped from his reverie, peering up at the Baron wide eyed “They must learn to fear us my Lord Baron…..” both paused at the strike of another blow, followed by a scream that would have given a banshee pause ‘they must learn to fear us and this is the way.’

He looked from the Earl to the rising, twitching body of the poor young Northman, these men learn nothing from defeat except the hunger for revenge. ‘This is the best way you can think to teach them that lesson? The battle was not enough?’ Would Christian mercy not be quieter at least?

Turning his horse away from the grizzly crucifixion of the pagans the Baron looked dead ahead, blocking out the screams as he planned how to make the best of his time in London.

King Richard-Mid-morning, Lanark, The Banks of the Clyde, Scotland 25th June 1084

Would you I wonder be so free with your loyalty if I had not three sons already in my keeping? Richard eyed Edgar Eadwardsson carefully. Last of the Royal House of Wessex he was seen by some, only in remote circles apparently, as a potential claimant to England’s throne, but now here he was fighting as Richards commander.

He spied down through the thin line of trees to the gently sloping valley below, pike-men belonging to the rebel army were stood knee deep in the Clyde’s chilly waters. The King looked to Edgar sat to his side, the red-bearded man was in the blossom of life, healthy and well fed, his eyes fixed sharply on the men pinned in the river. Impress me, show me what use you have to me alive and not with your head on block.

“Send three ranks of heavy foot forward, gut the swine in the river” the King caught just the tiniest sparkle of green in his commander’s eyes, admiring them for but a moment as he heard the orders relayed from officer to signaller. Richards mount pawed at the gravelled earth of the slope, eager itself to join the fray.

Men moved forward, slowly stepping down the slope being careful in their footing. As the pike-men realised the threat their rear ranks began to step back, trying to manoeuvre themselves up the bank behind them. King Richard glanced to the left, seeing the enemy respond to the sight of more infantry moving on their comrades; men with swords and axes, some in mail, some with helmets or with iron bound shields, men dressed to meet their match. “They are reacting Commander, over on the left.”

Richard cast his eyes carefully to the side, checking for hesitation in the commanders’ face, there was none, and he responded with speed. ‘We have the high ground, find me some horse and set them loose. Fifty, sixty light cavalry no more. Throw them back.’

Cautious. A wise move perhaps or else are you to cautious. You can tell a lot about a man I find by the way he responds to a manoeuvre.

Within moments the trumpet rang out and the thudding of hooves suddenly followed. The King looked to his left as the sound of breaking branches ripped through the air, pinions snapped in the sudden rush as the cavalrymen charged down the slope. He turned, looking down at the moving infantry, their advances immediately halted, their shields raised within moments as their commanding officers noted the coming stroke.

Such a different flavour from Robert, he is much more dramatic than this.


Scottish Heavy Infantryman -Lanark, The Banks of the Clyde, Scotland 25th June 1084

Magnus swung out with his club, the metal points he had hammered into it the night before gauging, a great whelp down the Englishman’s face. He spun on his heel, water splashing high as the return swipe skimmed the surface taking the man in the gut and nocking him onto his back. He vanished beneath the glassy surface, taken by the waters shallow depth.

He stepped forward, gripping the poor boys shield forcing it down as he slammed his club down hard from a high blow into the lad’s skull. It crumpled under his weight and the boy’s knees gave way, death taking him in a sharp painful moment.

“FOR SCOTLAND MY BROTHERS, KILL THE BUGGERS!” he lashed out again, his blow going wide but sending his next foe sprawling to the side, desperate to escape the blow of his bludgeon. Magnus looked ahead, over the shoulders of the enemy who had ceased to advance as his own men rushed forward to take the momentum. Horse men, there were horsemen coming down the slope at break-neck speed heading straight for his position. The enemy infantry were pulling back from the waters edge and their lines parting to allow the horses through. ‘HOLD GOD’DAMN YA!’ the waters of the Clyde had hampered his men’s advance before but now its waters could break the impact of the enemy charge if only his clansmen had the good sense to keep off the bank.

Faster the came on, the slope giving way to the gravel bed of the Clyde and they picked up pace as the earth run flat. ‘PULL BACK YA SCROATS, GET YE ARSES BACK TO THE WATER!’ he looked to the right, seeing his second in command, Kaelin calling to their men, his voice hoarse with strain.

ITS TO LATE! GOD HELP US, PULL BACK YOU…….

The spear head bitt deep into his shoulder, he had just seen three of his men skewered by horsemen and the surprise had taken him of his guard but the clarity that came with the biting pain of the rider now carrying him backward was divine. Never had the Clyde looked so beautiful, never had the cold waters of its surface been as unwelcome as the moment they swallowed his body, searing his face with their chill waters and pouring down into his mouth stealing the air from his lungs as they turned deep red.

Scottish Light Infantryman -Lanark, The Banks of the Clyde, Scotland 25th June 1084

The bodies of the McGraffin clansmen lay some fifty foot down the slope peppered with arrows, they lay their still twitching on the shale bed as the English infantry advanced, offering mercy to the wounded. Boeithan looked about him, searching for an escape route by which to lead his men.

Arrows were flying at them from behind though most imbedded themselves in the trees or moss-covered earth, above him he could hear the beating hooves of the English cavalry. They had seized the high slopes of the Clyde valley and were even now racing to cut of what remained of the Scottish army. Think, think, THINK! Where can we go? His companion tugged at his tunic dragging him forwarded as he tried to gather his thoughts. They are coming for us, there is no time you idiot.

A voice called out from up ahead “The infantry they are keeping pace, we must move and move NOW!” Commander Boeithian could not fault the argument, but with his men in utter disarray and retreating en mass down the Clyde’s course, where could they go? He glanced up the slopes, watching the silhouettes of horsemen passing along the ridgeline. That makes sense I suppose, we must go upward.

“Find me a signaller! A SIGNALLER!” He was roaring desperately, searching the faces of his men and then glancing at their hands for any with an instrument, or flag if possiable. A man beside him looked dumbstruck, gawping blankly, desperate for salvation. “The Highlands, we will regroup and head into the Highlands we will find safety there and come back in the New Year with an army of savages.”

Boeithan was a man born in the lowlands of Scotland, accustomed to a soft life along the coast of the Irish Sea, but north, if they headed north and moved into the hills he could raise the clans of the high hills on the pretence that the English were invading and with them he could come back south and save his masters cause.

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King Richard-Noon-morning, Lanark, The Banks of the Clyde, Scotland 25th June 1084

Well done, I must say. That was impressive. The Scottish rebels were in full retreat, their soldiers scattered across the Valley in all directions with little sense of order. “He is to be applauded is he not Robert?” Obviously you do not agree. The Earl of Maines face gave little away, but it was not in his nature to praise others freely and certainly not ones whom he had argued against.

“It was interesting my King, interesting” the Earl nodded to Commander Edgar, though he did not smile. Your father has provided for me yet again, though I don’t imagine he thought this far ahead. ‘This is but a glancing wound however, they shall regroup and come again make no mistake.’

Edgar smiled to himself, Richard noticed his poor attempt at hiding it. A wise move, he does not like to be wrong.

‘And when they do Robert, you shall be ready for them my brother’ Richard leaned over in his saddle, patting him on the shoulder and he returned the gesture with a warm smile. Almost sincere, almost.

‘Be certain of it my King, my friend has proven himself to have some skill no doubt but, when they come again I will make sure they do not see the days end. Pride, tut, ever has your hubris held you back, we shall see though how long it lasts.

You will join me on the road to London Edgar?’ Richard turned his horse ignoring the sudden change in Earl Roberts face ‘You have proven your loyalty today and I would have you ride south with me and enjoy the summer in peace and quite.’

‘There is a war to be won Richard?’ Address me thus again and it will not be you who wins it ‘We must advance on the enemy without delay.’

‘And you shall Robert, your King commands it.’ And with that Richard kicked his horse hard, riding swiftly up the slope leaving Edgar and Robert glaring at one another.

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William, Baron of Beaumont-Late afternoon, the Barons Private Rooms, London 3rd July 1084

“You can both stop pretending that you haven’t be listening now” William turned with a smile to his wife, Mathilde and their eldest daughter Cecilia. They had been paying very close attention to a difficult stitch in their needle work on the surface of it, but as Captain Inwear left the room the need for discretion vanished. You probably remember more of that than I do.

Cecilia, ever his darling moved quickly from her chair and placed her hand gently on the Barons shoulder. The Baroness was on her feet, her advancing years hadn’t sapped any of her energy “Must she literally have everything? Is there no one she will not make a play for?”

I am not her enemy but I fear I underestimated this one. She is not Ingrid by far.

Cecilia smiled at him over his shoulder, pressing her cheek against his creased face “Do not worry father, she is just proving a point.”, his wife was still ranting and their daughter shot her an irritated glance ‘Mother do be quiet, your anger does nothing except hurt my ears.’

‘You have always been an insolent child, I should have had you whipped more’ Mathilde rounded on her and for such a dainty Lady her presence boomed out across the room. If you had have had her whipped my dear, I would have whipped you myself.

William glared at his wife, moving her to silence. He tapped the desk hard, this was the sixth time at least in a month that he had found men he had promoted or spies he had employed switching sides to join the Queen ‘I think marrying Adela to the Lord Steward may have been a miscalculation.’ A miscalculation of epic proportion, perhaps leaving Edgar into Richards keeping will earn us some leverage.

‘The King loves you father there is no need to doubt that, perhaps speak with Wynnflaed? Assure her that we mean no harm. She is not the same as Ingrid, she has none of the former Queens cruelty. Make overtures to her and show her that we can be allies if not friends.’ A worthy suggestion my darling, but we are someway passed that point I fear.

OVERTURES? OVERTURES we brought that bloody common little tart up in our own home’ Mathildes arms were flailing wildly ‘we fed her from our own table, clothed her and cared for her and this is how she repays us?’ She was not wrong of course, but then William couldn’t help but remember that they had tried to place their own daughter Constance before her. ‘At every single turn Richard denies our son his just reward, he allows my daughters to go unmarried or wed to lowly estate at best and for what? What crime have we committed other than loyalty to an idiotic man.’ LOYALTY, that’s a good joke my love, think you Richard doesn’t now of Roberts sins or of his constant intrigues, foolish.

He cupped his head in the palm of his hands, rubbing his brow as Cecilia rubbed his shoulders tenderly ‘No I think we are beyond mere overtures’ he ignored Mathilde who was still chattering obscenities out to the darkening sky through the window ‘I was England’s spymaster once and its foremost commander, yet I fear those positions together with my youth have departed and others have usurped me.’