Well, I knew this would provoke some comments.
Let me address a few of them:
The Gonzo said:
Except for Decebalus being good, man that's a shocker. I thought Decebalus was the Red-eyed man, you know.
I wouldn't go so far as to call Decebalus "good" - he did slaughter an entire village, after all, and had no problem killing Lázárus when he thought it was necessary. Though compared to Red-Eyes and the so-far unseen "It", Decebalus is a good guy. It's the old utilitarian argument, one of my favorite moral quandries: Is it permissible to kill a thousand innocent people if it prevents the deaths of millions? What about if you only had to kill a dozen? Or only one? The Catholic church has come down firmly against utilitarian thinking - a sinful act is no less sinful even if it prevents a greater evil. Decebalus would argue the contrary, and in fact did so in the last chapter. One can imagine the arguments he'll have with the ghost of Lázárus until it's time for the priest's next incarnation.
J. Passepartout said:
Attila isn't going to give up that book without fighting, I think that the payment he will require is to be taught to read the book.
For someone who was originally going to be a minor character, Attila certainly has grown. But I like him too much, so I just can't help writing things from his point of view. Of course, the rule of horror - indeed, any good drama - is that you must do the most terrible things to your favorite characters. How will this play out? Even I don't know yet.
Pirate Z said:
Interesting... a Pecheneg god with some kind of prophet/quartermaster and evil designs to boot. I'm not sure -- do I want It to say in or come out?
And Lázárus being Cornelius... I can't believe it took me this long plus your explanation just to realize it
And here I thought that I was giving too much away by naming him "Lázárus". Doesn't
anyone read the Bible any more?
As for "It" - I haven't decided how I'm going to end all of this yet. If I go for the big apocalyptic world-destroying ending, you may actually get a good look at "It".
Thanks for reading! Next chapter should come early next week - I'm on the road today, driving to some tiny town south of Fayetteville, NC for a gig tonight, so won't be able to write anything. (It won't stop me from thinking evil thoughts about the next chapter, though...)