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The Song of Wessex

* * *

Cupar, Scotland – August 1335

When he entered the solar, Queen Maud rushed to embrace her son such was her excitement. Then she held him at a distance with a concerned eye, “Should you not be to Lancaster?”

“In truth, mama...I’ve just been to France,” the Prince answered her with a grin.

She formed a frown, “To see...him.”

“I know you like him not, but he is my grandpapa,” the young Arthur answered, “And I think he bought our idea about Matilda in Lancaster.”

“Appearances are not what they seem, my son,” Maud counseled with a sharp eye.

Arthur kissed her cheek before shifting to pour them both some wine, “He’s an old man, mama. Down in his gait and slower in mind than he used to be. The war...and papa...I believe it took more out of him than we considered.”

Maud held a firm eye to her son, “You trust him at your peril, young man. All about him, he sees death and destruction. And never once does he stop. Sixty and five with a treasonous wife and only one child left. What else does he have to lose?”


“You almost sound sorry for him, mama,” young Arthur turned to hand her a goblet with a grin, “Yet he has forever doted upon me and does so still. I remind him of papa.”

Maud held her wine in one hand and reached out her other to brush the hair from her son’s face, “You remind many of your father. And if I am forced to admit it...your grandpapa the King...he lives a very sad life. If you were in France, then surely you heard that his eldest sister passed. Like him, the Princess of France held only a grandson at her death. And I am told this Amaury is an imbecile of the first order. Not quite the legend this King’s father envisioned so many years ago.”

“I met him to Melun,” the young Prince answered as he led his mother to a settle, “Charming in his way...and simple in his pursuits. I think not to have trouble in France with the likes him of. And besides...I am given great gift.”

The Queen kept her concern as she sat, “As ever...the English King steals when he bestows. What is it now?”

“The spoils of his war, mama,” the Prince replied with a smile, “All of Champagne. I am now named Duke and great Lord. Other than Baudouin in Bourbon, I am paramount in France. Orleans...Burgundy...ruled by women. Berry still holds a child. For all of the ill effects of the war...he accomplished his feat.”

Maud once more held to his face, “Do not be so cavalier, sir. We both lost much...he and I. You and I. Your poor sister...she rests in a cold grave with only a daughter to call her own. My husband did not even have chance to say his goodbye. And he lost his sister...in front of his face. Long before he ever rushed...to that field...”

When she teared up, young Arthur held to her hand, “You cannot keep reliving the moment, mama. Papa is gone from us and we are what is left.”

“Tell me not what I can and cannot do!” she pushed his hand away, “I am Queen and no man’s vassal. I am your mother...and shall always hold forth! And I have lost so much in these past years. Your father...my husband. Now my daughter to Maine. All because of that man’s single pursuit!”

Young Arthur took his chiding and tried to help his mother, “I had chance to go to Le Mans before I returned home, mama. I saw little Anne. I think she favors you...and Ava. Her husband was ever so sorry...especially as the rebellion made the birth so difficult. Yet I am told papa tried to intervene before the Normans put it down. By then it was too late. I know you miss her.”

“Of course I miss her!” Maud allowed herself the cry, “And my Arthur! My sweetest friend!”

The Prince held to his mother’s hand, “Then we shall find way to bring the babe to Cupar. Mayhap Matilda too. See both of your granddaughters...and perhaps feel a bit better.”

“I think to never feel better,” Maud showed a sad eye, “As I have lost before...I am now losing again. You will be back to Lancaster...or now to Champagne. My uncle is in ill health...fifty and two and no longer finds his feet. Put abed and will likely be gone in a fortnight. I have no good counsel. All I have left is you three...and this kingdom.”

“I am sorry to hear about Lord uncle Duncan,” the Prince held more tightly, “I did not know that he was put low. Yet I do bring you reason for cheer. When I met with grandpapa, I was able to convince him to begin a new campaign. Back to Moray it is...and he’ll likely be to here soon to meet with these highlanders.”

Maud sighed before she leaned forward to kiss her son, “That is good for you, Arthur. Never for me. If I ever see that man again...I am like to kill him with mine own hands.”

“Yet it is great to take advantage,” Prince Arthur suggested with a caring eye, “Fergus of Moray places too much help to the Breton rebellion...and every bit that is taken from him...it helps grandpapa. It helps me. It helps you.”

“Then do me the simple favor, Arthur,” Maud held a close eye to her son, “Never see the English King to this keep. It is your future and not mine. All of me is left in the past...with my husband. I can never look at the King of all Albion in the same way.”

The Prince kissed her cheek, “You need not, mama. I will be sure of that. And I will look in on Lord uncle Duncan before I depart.”

“He will like that,” she finally offered a smile, “May have some few words of wisdom for you as he has had for me over the years. If you wish to take advantage...that is where it is held.”

“I’ve always been studious, mama,” young Arthur grinned, “I know to take the lesson.”

Maud held both of her hands to her son’s face with great care, “Then be sure! Make no mistake! Your life depends upon it!”


* * *

Aileach, Ireland – December 1335

“Your Grace...I thought you right and proper,” Lord Jordan suggested, “Your treatment of the Lothian brothers...in truth, you may have been too kind.”

The King absentmindedly flipped through his maps, “You’ve been with me for some time, my Lord. I am arbitrary for a purpose.”

“I was actually quite astonished, sire,” the Lord Marshal suggested, “Lord Stephen had taken his brother’s wife as hostage…”

King Arthur looked up with a plain eye, “And I don’t care. Adam is tasked as my Lord Steward...and where is he? Fighting his older brother when more important things are at hand. I will allow the two of them to sort it out, but it is clear that the two of them...they care not for the realm in full. Started when still at war with the Empire...holds on even now? Great Lords, my Lord Jordan...ungrateful.”

“Not all of us, Your Grace,” the Duke countered, “And I remain wishing that you would allow me to return to Northumberland. I am told a great force of highlanders is there, for they wish not to seek out Lord Mayor Eric in the north.”

“I cannot spare you,” Arthur looked back to his maps with an empty eye, “Over three years of war on the continent...every bit of blood and treasure spent there...I will take this place, but my heart is not in it. I need you.”

“Sire...” Jordan pulled a stool to the table to sit, “...you are wounded. There is no taking back of our losses...your losses...but you are known as not only just...but bold.”

The King sighed as he looked up, “My Lord of Kent...you have served me well. The chronicles speak to your lineage and you have no reason to feel shame in their shadow. Dover is a marvel and the forces you put to field in the Empire...nonpareil. It seems that I have few to trust these days and you are one of the last...even as young as you are.”

“I am not that young, sire,” Jordan grinned.

“You are younger than me, sir...” Arthur went back to flipping maps, “...younger than my son. An education you received to Europe...just as my cousin of Norfolk found. I held a grand goal...and with all I needed to see it through...but now? I am left bereft and with only some few sources. You remain one of them.”

With a respectful nod, the Lord Marshal put a hand to the table, “You still hold your grandson, Your Grace. I’m told he refuses to leave from Lancaster to Champagne until this matter is over.”

“And went to visit his mother...” King Arthur answered as he slapped a map down, “...whom I fear likes me not. In truth, my Lord...I don’t blame her.”

Lord Jordan tried to smile, “You have both lost so much, sire. You a son...she a husband. Yet there remains the Prince. He is young and strong...has a child of his own. Reveres you, as he should. Lothian may be a headache...and this place, a pain. But the realm is sound, Your Grace. And you prove it.”

“You speak kind words, Jordy,” King Arthur turned to him with a forlorn face, “Yet I think too much that these Lords hate each other...hate too much. Mayhap even hate me for what I have put them through. When my son died...well...I don’t know that I can blame them.”

Lord Jordan stood and flipped the map back over before the King, “You are too hard on yourself, Your Grace. Too many tragedies...it may have the effect. Yet you remain the greatest King that anyone has seen in a lifetime. Unstoppable...and with all your loss...an heir that is worth it. The living image of your son...and true.”

“For a young man...” the King looked up with a slim smile, “...you hold wise words.”

The Lord Marshal showed a bow, “I hold the words that I require, Your Grace. Young or no, I will lead your forces wherever you demand it. Your goal is always paramount and I am no thing but your vessel. Tell me what and where...and I’ll be there.”

“Tienne...Ans...” King Arthur looked back to his maps, “...you are a good successor, Jordy.”

Lord Jordan showed a determined eye, “They are revered, Your Grace. And so are you!”

 

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There is a duality to this king. Sometimes, he rages on without a care in the world for others' plight, only his goal matters. Then, suddenly, he has this light come on and he understands why people like Maud despise him.
 

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Come on, clean up that border. Paint the islands mildly red.
 

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So there is a bit of of the dissembler in young Arthur. Is it malicious or just a bit cynical? As for Lord Jordan ... I’m sure he’s genuine, and this royal pocket-pissing is probably required to maintain his position, but he lays it on thick with the King! A trifle nauseating! :D
 

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There is a duality to this king. Sometimes, he rages on without a care in the world for others' plight, only his goal matters. Then, suddenly, he has this light come on and he understands why people like Maud despise him.
I think he always understands and mostly doesn't care. It's just a matter of admitting it to another from time to time, which happens rarely.

Come on, clean up that border. Paint the islands mildly red.
The border on the Isles is mostly clean if not complete. It's in France where it still shows some gore. However, after this last war I have to wait to go back into the HRE so it's back to getting those last areas needed for the ultimate goal.

So there is a bit of of the dissembler in young Arthur. Is it malicious or just a bit cynical? As for Lord Jordan ... I’m sure he’s genuine, and this royal pocket-pissing is probably required to maintain his position, but he lays it on thick with the King! A trifle nauseating! :D
The Lord of Kent surely will enjoy his preference (and won't care about being nauseating about it.) As for the youngest Arthur, I had to take some liberties with his stats/traits to make it a bit more interesting. I've long suggested that he was intelligent and is still very young. Now he is the heir and holds a mother who has some definite thoughts about King Arthur. I would say that half of this current chapter is based on the game and the other half completely made up. Hopefully it works. :)


To all - Look for the next scene tomorrow and the return of an older character. And of course, thanks for reading and commenting all!
 

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There is a duality to this king. Sometimes, he rages on without a care in the world for others' plight, only his goal matters. Then, suddenly, he has this light come on and he understands why people like Maud despise him.
I don't really think he actually understands why they don't like him. It is something he knows to be the case, and something he accepts is true, but I often detect a bewildered tone almost when he mentions is. After all, he is the great King Arthur. People ought to do what they are told! :D

I am also struck by just how vulnerable he is now on his grandson. There is a great need in him, for validation perhaps, for something. He is so hollow that he grasps at his family like a drowning man tries to cling to a bank slippery with mud.

In a way he reminds me actually of another King Arthur deconstruction - namely Arthas of Warcraft III (more so than of WoW).
 

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I caught up (I probably will be late in a few week again, but for now I hope I will follow your pace).
A bit shocked by the death of the Prince, even if I knew it will happen in some time. :)
 

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I hope all is well with you @coz1 , tomorrow came and went and it's been almost a week? Pray you are well.
 

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I hope all is well with you @coz1 , tomorrow came and went and it's been almost a week? Pray you are well.
I am well enough, @Nikolai and thanks for asking. I reached a point in the writing which felt like a good break (for my sanity) and it caused me to look back a bit. I've been at this for nearly 3 years and at the moment, I can barely get four to five regular readers (of those that comment.) Bit disconcerting when I put so much into something and so few seem to enjoy it. I know that I'm not a regular commenter myself these days, but I put in a lot of years here and still try to do my part. Yet the next fresh hot thing...maybe more interesting...not the time to check it out...on and on...

I'll finish the story. I've promised it and I am nearly there in the writing. But I needed a break from checking in and finding that no one had said a word after 24 hours. That's not the forum I remember. It's a bigger place...a bigger world. Lots more to do and focus on. I get it. Not like I counted on legions of fans or anything (never have had them here) but I count on the feedback to see if I'm doing right. When it is few or quick (or none at all), it is really hard to tell if I'm doing something worthy.

More fb-fb later when I get to the next scene, but I did want to pop in and say I am still here, as always. :)
 

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Perhaps more of the readership is silent these days? For some of my AARs I can see there are ‘hits’ being made, but the comments can be sparse. As touched on before, I think there is also a northern summer thing and am not sure how long that lasts for. I really did pick up a slowdown in comments from July onwards.

You have my vote to keep up the good fight anyway. :) The work is clever, polished and with complex interwoven plots. Perhaps some readers are too in awe to comment. :confused:
 

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I don't really think he actually understands why they don't like him. It is something he knows to be the case, and something he accepts is true, but I often detect a bewildered tone almost when he mentions is. After all, he is the great King Arthur. People ought to do what they are told! :D

I am also struck by just how vulnerable he is now on his grandson. There is a great need in him, for validation perhaps, for something. He is so hollow that he grasps at his family like a drowning man tries to cling to a bank slippery with mud.

In a way he reminds me actually of another King Arthur deconstruction - namely Arthas of Warcraft III (more so than of WoW).
No, King Arthur does not understand. Part of his nature. Growing up as he did, given what was given and taken what has been taken...it is all to him and no other. He does need his grandson now...but that turns into an entirely different thing.

I caught up (I probably will be late in a few week again, but for now I hope I will follow your pace).
A bit shocked by the death of the Prince, even if I knew it will happen in some time. :)
Really glad that you've caught up. I do miss your comments (especially when I move into French.) It was sad to lose the Prince/Young King, but as you say - we knew it would happen eventually.

Perhaps more of the readership is silent these days? For some of my AARs I can see there are ‘hits’ being made, but the comments can be sparse. As touched on before, I think there is also a northern summer thing and am not sure how long that lasts for. I really did pick up a slowdown in comments from July onwards.

You have my vote to keep up the good fight anyway. :) The work is clever, polished and with complex interwoven plots. Perhaps some readers are too in awe to comment. :confused:
I wish I could say that was true but I see other works that are just as long or longer with plenty of readership and comments. They got on board and stayed whereas I see many dropping off (and I miss them!) There is surely a seasonal aspect to it, but I've been working on this story for some few years so I've seen that already. This latest has been quite disheartening, I don't mind saying. I appreciate your vote of confidence as well as your comments always. Yet I cannot imagine that awe is the issue. Length? Too speedy updates? Maybe uninteresting to many? Or some other...I can't say. But between my current Black Dog and this summer's lack of comments, I pulled away. I wrote. But it finally caught up.

That said...the next scene follows. Thank you to all that do read and most especially, to those that comment! :)
 

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The Song of Wessex

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Cupar, Scotland – May 1336

The Lord Bishop Ewan of St. Andrews pushed his aged legs to greet his Queen. He was no longer a young man, but his life had been full. In fact, the cane that he used carried a blade forged for him when he first met the English King. Queen Maud was to her solar and when he knocked and entered, he showed her a bow out of reverence.

“You are late, sir!” she announced with impatience.

The Bishop once more bowed his head, “I am sorry, Your Grace. Too much time have I spent to my parish and not enough in your presence.”

“You know that I distrust you,” Maud showed a stern eye.

Bishop Ewan smiled, “My good Queen...that is what you hold me for.”

“And in that, I have need of you,” she gestured.

The Bishop was slow to take a seat but looked up with a curious eye, “I imagine that this is to do with your father by law?”

“You take too many liberties, sir!” Maud held her hands close.

“And the Lord Almighty takes His, Your Grace,” Ewan replied, “What is your desire?”

Maud furrowed her brow, “Arthur of England, my Lord Bishop.”

“My Lady...my Queen...” the Bishop grinned, “I did not know that you took a fancy. I thought him hated by you.”

She folded her hands, “And so he is. What have you to say about it...even with your aged gout?”

“A most pernicious sort, Your Grace,” the Bishop answered with knowledge, “A wily member of the race of men. Terrible losses, but never loses himself. Made me an enemy many years ago and since then I have held quiet. Yet what to do?”

Maud narrowed her brow, “Your job, my Lord Bishop. For Queen or Christ, at least one of us may be served!”

“I’m afraid that I do not understand, my Lady Queen,” Bishop Ewan questioned.

“Then understand this!” the Queen stood and crossed her arms in anger, “I lost my uncle to this man! Pulled from his sickbed...placed into service in Northumbria...nearly dead already but never left the field alive!”


The Bishop adjusted his miter as he smiled once more, “It was my understanding that Prince Duncan took that choice on his own. A terrible loss, to be sure...but it is war, Your Grace. And he went out as a proud man. God will save him.”

“Yet will He save you?” Maud questioned quickly.

The Bishop lowered his head, “Only if I do my worth.”

“Then do so now!” she demanded.

Ewan raised his head with a clear eye, “I cannot fight the King of England. Neither can you. Greater sorts have tried...and no offense, my Lady...but stronger realms are no match for his tenacity.”

“You offend me, my Lord Bishop...whether you mean to or not!” she declared.

He stood, “And I mean not. Yet he is a force that Scotland does not have. His Lords fight one another and he does not care. He does not need to. If it goes poor...he has every ability to join and end it in his favor. He is weakened by the loss of his son...your King...but he holds too much strength.”

“And Lothian is done!” Maud turned in a huff.

The Bishop straightened his tunic, “Indeed it is, my Lady Queen. One brother against the other? One wins and...”

“The other is right out,” she nodded with irritation.


“Quite so, Your Grace,” Bishop Ewan replied, “I am even told that one will replace the other on his council. No care for their worth...only their ability.”

Maud turned with a sharp eye, “And what is yours?”

“Knowledge...” the Bishop answered quickly, “...service. Whatever is required, my Lady.”

“And yet you hold to St. Andrews when so much happens!” she replied in anger.

The Bishop once more found a smile, “I still do my work, Your Grace. I am old...and was used to handling your Lord uncle...but I have kept my ear to England. Their King likes me not, so it is not easy, but I am aware. His King is gone and he has naught left to him. His Chancellor likes him not and the feeling is reciprocated. I’m told that there was an altercation...another one...in which the man was dressed down. I believe the words were...you are no thing but a bastard. A fitz of no worth. And it is true that the Earl of Vexin holds that shame...but the English King has kept him up and will not be rid of him. He finds no choice.”


Maud turned to him with irritation, “Then why are you not to me daily telling me of these things?!”

“Because I hold a parish…and he has warned me,” Ewan answered directly, “I’ll not be protected by the Holy Father and I have seen what has happened to your own and his brother. Brothers. I remain a man of God, Your Grace...and I mean to serve you. But as old as I am...I wish to live.”

“As I imagine your whore does?” she replied with spite.

“A troubled lady,” Bishop Ewan answered, “In need of God’s word.”

The Queen moved back to her settle as she folded her hands and looked to her lap, “You’ve spent quite a long time to St. Andrews, my Lord Bishop. I imagine many there are in need. So is Scotland...and so am I.”

“I would produce, my Lady Queen...” Ewan answered, “...if I am told the production.”

She raised her head to look at the fire before she answered, “Arthur of England...of course.”

“I would work for you...as I always have...” the Bishop tried to answer, “...yet you know him far batter that I.”

Maud kept a firm gaze to the flames, “Then we shall remedy that.”

Bishop Ewan of St. Andrews gave nod and then answer, “I’ve held my time, my Lady...my Queen...Your Grace...but to serve this purpose...could bring me no greater satisfaction.”

“I hope it so, my Lord Bishop,” Maud replied quickly, “For someone will surely die. God rest their soul.”

 

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That is not entirely an illuminating conversation. Maud is angry yes, and is taking a bit of that anger out on the good bishop (or not so good, he does deserve a certain measure of spite after all). But I don't know, she almost appears less than she has been here. I wonder if this is part of an act, an act she knows that the bishop will faithfully report to the King of England. In other words, this is an impression she wishes Arthur to have, to manipulate him.

Because when you get down to it, because of various facets of his personality, Arthur is quite easy to manipulate if you know him well.
 

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Maybe uninteresting to many?

Hmm. A little, but it's quite unavoidable I think with a ckii narrative AAR like this, if they go on long enough. History book? Clear progression, end point, topic changes, etc. Comedy? Ends when game stops being funny/when writer runs out of jokes.

Narrative AAR based around a dynasty? Fiendish to pull off in a long haul. After all, drama in adversity, and ckii is designed in such a way that, if you've managed to have a game with three AARs worth of material (3 rulers or more) then unless you are clawing your way through an impossible challenge as well (minor power in path of Mongol invasion. Survive without moving capital from start etc), everyone just kind of wants to skip to the end map, summary and credits after a bit.

This is why you either have to switch genres/writing styles with every new ruler (as Knud Knitling did so well) or contrast the rulers in a very interesting way (Before Plantagent springs to mind). However the latter option is more limited than the former, since once you've done a father-son feud/relationship of differing methods, what then? Do it again? Ckii demands male heirs for the most part and their preferred stats remain the same. Short of sabotaging the game by changing religion or being a commited homosexual, what variety can you add after 100 or 200 years?

In this specific case, as is the case of all games started on the islands, once the game of conquering them all is over...the game is won. It is very, very difficult to be threatened after that. It's a similar problem you'd face in an AAR narrative about stabilising Byzantium with the aim of restoring the roman empire at some point in the future. The interest is really in the former bit, with lots of challange and intrigue. When you have successfully held the empire together and properly begin pushing outwards, the interest is lost. Of course you are going to win. The interest of the challange of the game, reflected in the narrative of the first few rulers, now has to be replaced by your own personal creations of why these characters matter and are interesting.
 

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It can be hard as an AAR continues, to keep an audience and to keep motivated.

For what it's worth, even though I have less and less time to read, I always enjoy catching up. But I always have been bad at regular commenting. Sorry for that.
 

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I just wanted to drop in and say, that even though I do not comment, I enjoy your writing very much and am sorry that it is not bringing as much joy to you right now, as it brings to me. I don't presume to speak for any other lurkers on this thread, but I hope they agree.
 

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I will raise my hand as someone who hasn't quite kept up, and thus hasn't commented. I did a binge in the early summer that caught me about three-quarters point (at the time), but other things meant I've fallen much further behind again. It isn't just you in that regard - it happened with all of the AARs I was reading (and even with mine, I took a break posting it for most of the summer, even if I did writing on the side).

In some ways your prolific output is daunting. When one misses a few chapters, it can be quite hard to catch up! Many will in time (I expect to), but that does nothing for your comments now. Perhaps it might be best to drop a mention of something where I am, even I'm a good 20 chapters behind at that point.

That said, posting fewer chapters per week may not be the worst thing in the world. More times for comments to accrue (I post chapters on a weekly basis now, and sometimes I'll get two or three comments toward the end of that weekly cycle) and it's time intensive to post, so more time for other things, so less chance of burn out. It's helped me out quite a bit (along with my break).

But keep up the good work! The writing remains excellent, even the comments are fewer.
 

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@coz1 , my friend, I get your despair. It's been a long road with this story. You update fast and with meat to the bone. I know only too well how hard it is to get back into a story when there's X long updates to the last page. And aaarland is a different beast than before, in many ways more divided.

But I tell you this, few stories have been told better on these forums. It's among the best made. I think, if you made a book of it, it could sell. It's that good.
 

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Really glad that you've caught up. I do miss your comments (especially when I move into French.) It was sad to lose the Prince/Young King, but as you say - we knew it would happen eventually.

Be assured I'm really sorry. It's not easy for me to be as active as I was. Your story is quite good so it's always a pleasure to come here and read it (I had to give up on some pretty good AARs :( ).

As for the pace, maybe you can lower a bit. It could be easier for others to read and comment if there is a bit less update per week. I don't know if it's the right solution though.
 

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Just popping in because a couple of folks have been asking me how coz1 is doing.

He's doing ok. He's just taking an extended break, watching the Braves, the Dawgs, and playing a non-PDS computer game for a change. :)