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January 17th, in the year of our Lord 1439

Late afternoon, Heidelberg Castle


Without knocking, Stefan pushed the heavy oak door to the study open.

“I have returned,” he said as he entered the room.

He stopped almost immediately for the first thing he saw, sitting in a large chair near the fireplace, was a surprisingly hale-looking Ludwig who turned with remarkable speed at the unexpected intrusion and half arose from his position.

“But…the servants…they said you were…” Stefan ground to a halt in his confusion. “I…”

“Aye, Stefan. A ruse,” said Otto, rising from a chair opposite the Kurfürst. “We felt that if we spread the rumour that Ludwig was at death’s doorstep then our increased troop activities would either go largely ignored, or would be interpreted as simply a heightened alert in case any should wish to test our mettle. I assure you that he is doing quite well. Now, Ludwig, let me help get you comfortable again, and let us hear my brother’s news.”

As Otto fussed with the Kurfürst, settling him back into the chair, Stefan drew a stool up close to the fire and began warming his hands. As he did so, he noticed that Johann was also in the room, seated behind the Kurfürst’s desk amidst a sea of scrolls, maps and reports. He had barely moved as Stefan entered, merely pausing mid sentence in whatever he had been writing. Now, placing the quill in its holder, he rose and joined the others near the fireplace.

“Yes Stefan. I too am eager to hear your news. We received word from Ruprecht that von Mörs has agreed to use the resources of Köln to support us and will move on their position in Kleves. At that time, The Butcher was reportedly still encamped at Düsseldorf, but that is now intelligence that is more than three weeks old. Otto, however, feels it unlikely that he would wish to move his men before the worst of the weather has passed so he should be caught flat-footed and poorly supplied. It will take him days to get ready to move, and by then von Mörs’ army will already be at full strength and prepared.”

“What will he do?

“He had not yet decided, apparently, whether to hold their position and see what Richemont does; or whether to attack him in force while they are still unprepared. We expect word within the next few days as to which tactic he favours.”

“How many men does Richemont have?”

“Perhaps fifteen or sixteen thousand, and most of them foot - although, as I said, the report was old and the details were sketchy at best. Ruprecht wrote that the Archbishop seemed confident that he can attack with nearly double the enemy’s strength; and of course the Archbishop retains rather a large number of Ritter.”

Stefan glanced over to Otto. The general shrugged. “Aye, they could hold the Butcher if he seeks to cross the Rhine into Köln, but fear they will be sorely tested if he chooses to cross the river instead and engage him directly in Kleves. I would never discount the danger of that man. He is, by all accounts, a wily leader and brilliant tactician. Even outnumbered, I would not wish to bet against him.”

“Speaking of betting,” Stefan asked, turning back to Johann. “What was von Brunn’s response to your overture?”

“It seems that the good Archbishop has some reservations on the matter. He told me that he cannot strip Würzburg bare of its defences, but that he would honour our alliance by supporting our actions. He will pray for the souls of our men…”

At this, Otto snorted. “Aye, and he will ‘posture’ with his army, but he will not send them to ‘die in the fields’ of France. The man lacks a spine, just like his champions.”

“He did assure me, however, that if the French break through our lines, or circle around them, he will ride to help defend our lands. I know that it is less than we had hoped for, but at least he will not abandon the alliance altogether.” Seeking to forestall another outburst from his youngest brother, Otto quickly continued. “But come Stefan. You are warmer now – I can tell because your face is almost red - and you have news that we must hear. Tell us, what did our northern allies had to say?”

“I have both good and bad. Which would you hear first?”

(OOC: well folks...what will it be? :D)
 

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Good News Good News always first, it preps ya for the worst of it:D come on now, have at it;)

Just a quick comment, I love how you penned this part

"As he did so, he noticed that Johann was also in the room, seated behind the Kurfürst’s desk amidst a sea of scrolls, maps and reports. He had barely moved as Stefan entered, merely pausing mid sentence in whatever he had been writing. Now, placing the quill in its holder, he rose and joined the others near the fireplace."

That put many images in me head and I love it, superb writing that belongs in a best seller making you millions man, keep it up:)
 

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Give us the good news first... looks like Friedrich already got his bad news. :D

And a very effective ruse, too...
 

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It'S always the bad news first. It belongs that way. :D

And MrT, you are aware that I'm from Würzburg? So you could say I'm a champion of Würzburg, too... ;) :)
 

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Well, in my short break from the forum I managed to miss this entirely....soooo, I sat down and read it in a single sitting, all I can say is thankfully I'm a speed reader:cool:.

MrT, as always you amaze and astound, this is the sort of thing I'm still working up the balls to do, even if no one ever reads it. Your characters are superb, your storytelling flavor suits the story perfectly, and to top it off, this is all coming from a computer game, rather mind-boggling.

Oh, and bad news first :D.

RJ
 

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Bad news is always invariably more interesting....

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Cool! It's nice to know that even though I neglected this badly for a bit, there is still some interest. :cool:

Warspite: Thanks, man. Very high praise indeed. *blushes*

Carligula: Guess more people than just the Stefan and the French bought it, eh? :)

Ko9's: That makes it 2-1 so far. I wonder if one can draw up a psychological profile from the order people would prefer it. :D

RJ: Thank you for taking the time - probably hours at this rate - to plow your way through it and thank you even more for...well... everything you said. It's deeply satisfying to know that this rather frightening undertaking is being well received. It means a lot. *blushes again*

Kasperus: Thanks. I hope I can continue to keep it that way. :)

Rhodz: Good man. Always look for the third horn of a dichotemy. ;) You'd better get used to the cliffhangers, though. I'd hate to finish an instalment and not leave you begging for more. :)

Bismarck: And your vote makes it 3-good, 4-bad, and a 1-any. That clinches it. ;)

And so, how about some news?...
 

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Late afternoon, Heidelberg Castle


“I have both good news and bad,” Stefan said. “Which would you hear first?”*

“The bad,” replied his brothers at the same time, though the voice of Ludwig countered with “the good”.

Stefan smiled wryly. “Then in deference to the Kurfürst’s wishes, I’ll begin with the good. Though I tried for two days, I couldn’t arrange an audience with oh-so-busy Archbishop; so I left it to my son to tackle von Mörs and traveled back along the south bank of the river. There were frequent but small French patrols all along the north shore - though their attentions seemed entirely focussed on preventing any refugees from escaping the country, rather than paying any interest to who was traveling the road on my side. The bridges at Caub and Lerch were closed altogether; and with the river so swift and wide through that stretch, the first opportunity to cross wasn’t until I arrived back in Bingen that night. As I’m sure you already know, the French had ‘their’ end of the North Bridge very heavily guarded and were allowing almost no traffic to cross into or out of our city. The delay for the caravans trying to head north must have been hours, if not days.”

“Yes” Johann affirmed. “A delegation from the merchants’ guild was here the other day and I was forced to meet with them for several interminable hours to listen to their complaints and demands. They’re understandably incensed that all cross-border traffic has been effectively halted. Their caravans – few though they be at this time of year…although to hear them speak of it you’d think that there’s a veritable crusade of them – are now forced to travel considerably out of their way in order to get to the markets in the northwest. Their only alternative, so they told me, is to purchase some sort of special ‘writ of leave to travel’ from the newly instated French ‘provincial governor of Kleves’. As you can imagine, those doesn’t come at a very affordable price; and even then they are subject to search and seizure at the whim of the Butcher’s soldiers. ‘All of their profits have gone up in smoke’, so they told me…at very great length and in excruciating detail.”

“What did you tell them?”

“What could I tell them? ‘Don’t worry? We’re going to declare war on the French in another week or so and that will fix it?’ I doubt they’d have been very impressed. No. I just assured them that we’d take whatever ‘diplomatic steps’ we could, as quickly as we could, and that we’d ‘normalize’ trade again as soon as possible. They wanted more promises and details, of course, but I refused to give them any.”

Stefan chuckled. “I suspect that their next delegation is going to tell you, in no uncertain terms, just how distinctly unimpressed they are with our ‘diplomatic’ solution to their problem.”

They pondered that for a moment in silence.

“If that’s your good news, uncle, I dread to think what your bad will be.”

“Your pardon, Ludwig. That news is really neither one nor the other. I merely mention it so you will know that, about two weeks ago, the border with Kleves was still tightly sealed and guarded - both with Köln and with ourselves. I’m sure that you have more recent intelligence on the matter.”

Ludwig accepted the apology with a vague wave of his hand. “We do. Please continue.”

“Of course, Herr Kurfürst. I stayed overnight in Bingen, and then on the morrow I had the great misfortune of traveling through a blizzard – that was the day, you may recall, of the last big snow storm – so it took me much of the day just to get back to Mainz.”

“You rode through that!

“Yes, Otto, I did; and through the bitter cold of the following two days. Time was pressing heavily on my shoulders and I didn’t think I could risk any further delays. Of course the road to Mainz was virtually impassable, but I did eventually make it – although in retrospect it could just as easily have been the death of me. The next morning I crossed the Rhine and headed north to Kassel. The roads were still badly covered with snow drifts, my blood was practically freezing in my arteries, and it took me another four days – instead of two - to get there.”

“That God you weren’t killed. That would have been a disaster!”

“Frankly, Herr Kurfürst, the Lord had very little part in my last two weeks, save for being largely in absentia. It has been the very devil himself, rather, who has decided to reek havoc on my mission; for I arrived in Kassel only to be told that Duke Ludwig was visiting the Graf von Frankfurt; so I could have avoided all of that travel and cut at least half a week off my trials and tribulations.”

Otto laughed mirthlessly. “And so after all that you ended up only a day’s ride from where you had originally started.”

“Exactly…and thank you so much for your heart-felt sympathies. Fortunately the Duke had decided to extend his stay in Frankfurt – because of the terrible weather, of course –so I was able to see him almost immediately. By this time I was suffering from a rather bad cold, thus my audience was not exactly an occasion of great moment or decorum - though I managed to sniffle and cough my way through my embassy without collapsing.”

“And…?”

“Hessen will stand with us; though Ludwig’s enthusiasm was about on the level you describe of von Brunn’s. He will not soon commit himself militarily, for he confided to me that he has maintained only a small standing army and that it will take some time for him to assemble a force large enough to risk having it leave his borders.”

“Damnation! I suppose it’s better than nothing, though. How many did he say he had?”

“Eleven thousand, and only a fifth of it mounted.”

“That’s all? Damn the man for his spend-thrift ways. It will take him the better part of a year to put something together…longer, in fact, since he’s a notorious man for wanting the odds very heavily stacked in his favour before he’ll commit. What of Duke Friedrich? And please spare us every agonizing step of your journey to Dresden.”

“Very well. I won’t tell you how I rode all the way to bloody Dresden only to find that the Elector has taken a sudden and inexplicable preference to wintering in Dessau. Perhaps one of you gentlemen neglect to tell me about that if you knew it? No? I also won’t tell you about the day of driving winds and rain out of the west as I retraced my path; and I won’t tell you of the burning fever that I suffered through along the way.”

“Why didn’t you stop and enquire along the way?”

“Because I was too sick to think of it and I was under the impression that my mission involved a certain important degree of secrecy! For Christ’s sake, Otto! Stop your damn LAUGHING!” He halted and broke into a prolonged coughing fit.

“GENTLEMEN! Gentlemen. This benefits us not at all, and you’re upsetting the Kurfürst. Otto, desist. Stefan, stop shouting, calm down, take smaller breaths and collect yourself or you’ll just make yourself worse. Now, when you’re ready, pray tell us what Friedrich has said.”

“He said two things. The first is that he will support us, and almost without reserve. He will bring the full armed might of Saxony to bear on the enemy, save only for a small home guard to defend his eastern border. You should be content with that news, Otto, as he commands some twenty thousand foot and another seven thousand horse.”

“Good news indeed, and my apologies for laughing. I just couldn’t help but envision your mood at the time.”

“DO NOT get him started again, Otto. If I were any younger I’d put you over my knee like our father used to…all too frequently as I recall it. You said ‘two things,’ Stefan. What was the other?”

“The other is the bad news. Does the name ‘Gilles de Rais’ mean anything to either of you?”

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*Note…For the sake of clarity I’m taking the liberty of making slight adjustments in my “get you back up to speed” opening sentences but, when I later assemble them in the pdf “book” format (see sig.) I’ll be blending them into a continuous chapter. Stefan actually said: “I have both good and bad. Which would you hear first?”
 

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Originally posted by MrT

“I have both good news and bad,” Stefan said. “Which would you hear first?”*

“The bad,” replied his brothers at the same time, though the voice of Ludwig countered with “the good”.

Stefan smiled wryly. “Then in deference to the Kurfürst’s wishes, I’ll begin with the good.

Cheater. ;)

Looks like the allies will have a tough fight. I hope Stefan gets better soon...
 

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Originally posted by Sorcerer


Cheater. ;)

Looks like the allies will have a tough fight. I hope Stefan gets better soon...

Curses!!!! :eek:

Super-huge-giganticly-big-collosal-apology owed to you, Sorcerer, for neglecting to acknowledge your post up above. :eek:

I had meant to reply to your "were you aware I'm from Würzburg" comment and then plum forgot. Now it'd sound really snotty if I gave you my original intended reply which was "If you're the commander of Würzburg, would you please talk to von Brunn about his lacidazical response to Johann's embassy!" but of course I can't say that now since I'm lower than the lowest earthworm for forgetting to do so. :D

Instead, my apologies and thanks for the well wishes. I'll pass them along to Stefan. :)
 

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Originally posted by MrT


Curses!!!! :eek:

Super-huge-giganticly-big-collosal-apology owed to you, Sorcerer, for neglecting to acknowledge your post up above. :eek:

I had meant to reply to your "were you aware I'm from Würzburg" comment and then plum forgot. Now it'd sound really snotty if I gave you my original intended reply which was "If you're the commander of Würzburg, would you please talk to von Brunn about his lacidazical response to Johann's embassy!" but of course I can't say that now since I'm lower than the lowest earthworm for forgetting to do so. :D

Instead, my apologies and thanks for the well wishes. I'll pass them along to Stefan. :)

No problem. :)

I'll see what I can do about von Brunn, though... :D
 

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Aargh! I can't take anymore cliffhangers! I want more! Anyway, excellent work again MrT. Very nice little ruse you pulled back there, but I still think Freidrich will cause many problems in the future.

Originally postred by RD

And Friedrich von Simmern has just become my favorite character in this tale ... it takes ambitious men to unite mankind, pity none of them have succeeded yet.

Our little Feddy doesn't care for mankind, only himself. There's no way this little twerp will unite the lands. . . tear them apart, maybe.:p
 

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I wonder how much faith the brothers should have in any of their allies? :eek:

"Gilles de Rais" Ah I sense something interesting approaching. Well done as always MrT.

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Sorry folks. No update today. I'm about 3/4 finished the next instalment but I'm cutting out to play MP with some fellow Canucks, so it'll have to wait until tomorrow.

Craig: Thanks. We certainly haven't even begun to hear the last of Friedrich von Simmern. ;)

SM: The trial's not for a little while. I may even save them from the necessity of holding one, though not if the dynamic duo have their way. :)

Storey: There's a question-and-a-half. :eek: Indeed, something wicked this way comes.
 

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originally posted by MrT

Sorry folks. No update today. I'm about 3/4 finished the next instalment but I'm cutting out to play MP with some fellow Canucks, so it'll have to wait until tomorrow

Nooooooooooooooo!!! I need an update now!:mad: :D I've never played France so the Gilles de Rais name means nothing to me. I simply must know what is going to happen.

One thought/question occurred to me, and I'm sure it will be answered in the near future. What is Freidrich's relationship with his father like? (not too good I'd imagine, since he dreams of his father's death so he can claim the throne)

Great Work and congrats on writer of the week!:)
 

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January 17th, in the year of our Lord 1439

Late afternoon, Heidelberg Castle


“Does the name ‘Gilles de Rais’ mean anything to either of you?”

There was a very long moment of silence, and Stefan looked up from contemplating the dregs that he had been swirling around the bottom of his no-empty goblet. The Kurfürst’s expression was one of puzzlement – hardly surprising as the lad had no particular reason to recognise the name – but Johann’s face had suddenly become grim, while Otto’s was almost white.

Stirring himself, he went to the sideboard to retrieve the decanter, and returned to the hearth to refill each of the men’s vessels. It was Ludwig who broke the silence.

“Who, pray tell, is this Gilles de Rais?”

“A brilliant commander…brilliant French commander.”

“A devil! A monster!”

“Who knows for sure?”

Ludwig surveyed his uncles with surprise. “That is a rather diverse set of opinions. Uncle Otto…you say he is a ‘brilliant commander’. How so?”

“He was the marshal of France under the dauphin – King Charles’ father - some twenty years ago and led his men to stunning victory after stunning victory. He is said to be second only to Richemont the Butcher in his cunning and tenacity, and commands the unquestioned loyalty and devotion of his men. Think you on this: when the dauphin refused to heed the advice of Jeanne d’Arc and several provinces revolted in protest, it was de Rais who was given the task of restoring order and ‘dispatching’ the peasant-girl upstart. He did it all with fewer than five thousand men, and she was never heard from again.”

“And he is still the marshal?”

“No. Or, at least, he wasn’t. I fear that Stefan’s news is that he has somehow been reinstated; however he has spent the last twenty years gradually squandering away a small fortune…a large fortune really. I believe that he was probably, at one point, the wealthiest man in France.”

“Aye, he was,” interrupted the eldest brother. “When I used to travel to Paris back in the early 1420’s to engage in diplomacy with the dauphin, the court was always abuzz with the latest fête at de Rais’ estates at Machecoul. They were reported to be extravagant affairs, and he would treat his guests almost as a Roman Emperor would treat his nobles. He disappeared both from politics and from the military shortly after the coronation of Charles VII, supposedly in retirement to his various estates. I have heard far too many rumours to believe that it is as simple as that, though. Far, far too many rumours.”

“Rumours?”

“It might be best that you not know, Ludwig. There are some things that are not, and should not be spoken about. Trust me, if half of what I have heard is true, the man is at very least a debaucher, a murderer, and a devil worshipper.”

“Oh. But if he has retired…?”

“He has re-emerged, gentlemen. When I spoke with Duke Friedrich he told me that he had it on reliable authority that de Rais had commanded the army at the siege of Munster. His current whereabouts are unknown, but it would seem that he is once more campaigning in the field and has returned to favour with the monarchy. This could bode very poorly for us indeed.”

The Kurfürst turned back to Otto at that. “Does it?”

Otto sat for a few moments more in consideration. “Probably. I am a good commander, Ludwig; and if Stefan will dare to take up his sword once more and ride with me then you will have two of the best military minds in all of the Pfalz at the head of your army. But in all honesty, in a battle of equal numbers and similar dispositions, we would likely lose to either of those Frenchmen. Perhaps, if we could entice them to attack us in the forest or hills where our soldiers are experienced and his men would be uncertain…well, perhaps we could defeat one of them. Both…?”

“It would take a miracle,” Stefan finished. “War is rarely won by miracles, Ludwig. War is won by overwhelming odds, by spirit and desire, and – very hopefully – by catching the enemy with his armour off. Speaking of which, where is my son? Shouldn’t he have reported back by now?”

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His son, as it turned out, had recently crossed the bridge over the Neckar and passed through the heavily guarded Heidelberg city gates. The sun had just set and the temperature had dropped significantly in just the past hour. But now his cousin’s castle was in plain view and Friedrich set his spurs to his horse, looking forward to his first really hot meal and warm bed in two weeks.

The streets of the city were almost empty, and so he and his squad made good time to the inner courtyard of the newly fortified edifice. Handing off his reigns to the sergeant, he made haste to enter the building and enquired of the first servant he met as to where he might find the Pfalzgraf Otto von Mosbach.

“I’ the Kurf’st’s study, Herr Edler. Tho’ me thinks he i’ not ta be disturb’d.”

“He will wish to see me, my man.”

Friedrich drew off his cloak and threw it into the man’s hastily proffered arms and then raced up the stairs, taking them two at a time to get the blood circulating through his body again. After sitting for hours and hours on a horse, it was nice to get a little exertion.

He slowed his pace as he reached the study, brushing back his unkempt hair and shrugging his riding clothes into a slightly more presentable arrangement. He paused for a moment, ear to the door, but the wood was so thick that it was impossible to hear anything other than to know that there some sort of conversation taking place – most likely the commander was debating some trifling aspect of the coming campaign with uncle Johann, he thought.

Knocking once, he took a deep breath and opened the door to walk in and deliver his good news. ‘The path was clear, they would be unopposed as they entered Lorraine.’ His commander would be impressed at his efforts and praise him for his cunning, bravery, and resourcefulness. That this would happen in front of the second most powerful man in the Pfalz could only help to gain him notice and favour, and he relished the moment, beginning to savour it even as he stepped into the room.

The dream was shattered, however, as he was greeted instead by the sight of his father who turned quickly, a decanter in hand, and frowned.

“How many times must I tell you, Friedrich, that one knocks at a door and then waits for it to be opened for you? You don’t simply barge into a room – particularly the Kurfürst’s study – uninvited. I am ashamed of you!”

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A couple of OOC comments:

First of all, the latest instalments (except for this one) have now been updated into the pdf document (linked in my sig) for anyone wanting to catch up.

Gilles de Rais is a very imfamous character in French history and I question Paradox's decision to give him a leader deathdate as late as they did, considering that he was historically tried and executed in 1440. Such is life, however, and under normal circumstances he survives in the game until 1456 - even if you take the French default historical pick in the "Trial of Gilles de Rais event. (This is due to there being no way to remove a leader from the map via an event).

Of course there is another problem here...France took the a-historical pick and chose to ignore the advice of Jean(ne) d'Arc. The "fake" history that I am adding, therefore, is that the dauphin (Charles VI) ignored her advice, that she openly opposed him and raised her own army in revolt and in an attempt to relieve the siege of Oleans. Historically, it was Marshal de Rais who, with Jeanne d'Arc, liberated Orleans. Instead, I have cast him in the role of being the one who put down her rebelion (of which there were many in the game) and "dealt" with her. For the sake of not getting a XXX rating for this AAR, I will not be describing that attrocity, or delving into the mind of this psychopathic killer and pedophile.

Those interested in reading more about Gilles de Rais might find this web site a good place to start.

Finally, you will be happy to know that the first chapter of this increasingly novel-like novella will be concluded in the next instalment and that, believe it or not, the calendar will finally turn to the next month in the subsequent post. :)

Hope you enjoy.
 
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