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Strangely I noticed that post a few weeks ago too, when the board had all those trouble and Patric posted there, when he had the new servers up.

I wondered whether I applied to the AARs as well, especially things like this one and LD's novellas. I don't have my own AAR yet so I kind of forgot, but what kind of "release" did you get and if it is general, could you perhaps get it up in the AARtifacts, so that it covers all our AARs? You probably need to talk to Partic about it first, but that would be a nice thing to know.


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Just catching up, Chris. Good to see you in action again. How you slipped a post by me I'll never know. (Probably due to my inattention on the board of late.) And I am waiting for the graphic sex scene... err, I mean the next installment. :)

BTW, I second a motion to post something in a more conspicuous location regarding the rights to AAR stuff.

PPS What does your Kurfurst think of all this, anyway?
 
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SM/Vald: I'll approach Patric about this once he's settled back in after their holidays. At this juncture, however, it is certainly safe to procede with any writing.

Speaking of which...instalment coming up as soon as I've done one last bit of tweaking to this latest one that has been slightly harder to get into exactly the right form that I have in mind. Ironically, SM, I was already addressing your PS question with this instalment, so I'm glad that the timing worked out so nicely. Being a SEcret Master, I wonder if you somehow had already sneakily planted the idea in my brain already?
 

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March 3rd, in the year of our Lord 1439 – Heidelberg Castle, the Pfalz

The still afternoon air was chilling rapidly, and yet there was an underlying whisper of the coming spring that felt almost like a tickling in his nostrils. A gentle scent of rotting leaves and damp straw permeated the palace gardens, rising from where they had been laid over the flowerbeds by the gardeners to protect the fragile plants from the icy depths of winter, and Ludwig von Wittelsbach found himself moved to draw deep breaths to fill his senses with its musty promise - even though the combination of cold air and other aromas made his nose run. Soon – within weeks – his breath would no longer rise in a small cloud with each exhalation, and he would no longer need the heavy fur-lined cloak that he wrapped closely to his body to keep himself warm.

The morning’s court had been frustrating to say the least, with a group of farmers begging an audience to complain about the coming planting. Where, they wanted to know, would they find the able-bodied men necessary to ensure that the soil was turned and the crops were sown in time? With so many men already sent away to war, and a new conscription edict having just been announced, there were few - other than women, children and old men – remaining to ensure that the year’s crops would be in the ground in time. If it was done too late, they went to great lengths to tell him, then the grains might not be ready to reap come harvest time and they all might starve.

Next it had been the woodsmen, all in a furor that nearly half of their oxen had been appropriated for the armies’ supply trains. How were they to bring their precious wood to market, they demanded, if they lacked the beasts to haul the fallen timbers out of the forest? This was, of course, followed by their urgent plea that some of his personal estates near the river be given over to them so that they might float them to market on the eddying currents of the Neckar instead.

Why, he wondered, had they all waited until the day after his uncle’s departure? Johann, certainly, would have known how to advise him in this matter. And then it had occurred to him precisely why they had waited. They hoped, of course, to pressure their young Kurfürst into making unwise concessions that they could never have wrested from him had his uncle been there to advise him. Revelling quietly in this secret knowledge that he had divined their intent, he had calmly and patiently told them that he would consider their request and inform them of his decision shortly…certainly before the ground had thawed and the Easter Mass had been sung. Protesting, although not too loudly, they had gone on their way and left him to ponder a solution.

It did present a problem, he decided, for although their claims might be fuelled by at least some degree of ulterior motive, they did also have a legitimate concern with regards to their claims. Worse, the grain would be needed to feed the armies if they remained in the field beyond October, and wood as well for their cooking fires. His people, he realised, could quickly find themselves starving and cold - both in the villages and as they marched deeper and deeper into France. Why, he wondered, had his uncles not forewarned him of this and given him some advice as to what to do?

Having pondered it over a luncheon taken sullenly by himself in his study, Ludwig realised that he had neither the experience nor an established tradition to fall back upon. It had been may years since the Pfalz had mustered its armies and sent them off to war, and so he had no basis of experience or observation of his father’s actions to draw upon, nor had his uncles seen fit to leave him any instructions. Was this a test or an oversight?

This had lead to the unhappy conclusion that he must consult some of the old scrolls that were housed in the palace’s library, hoping that perhaps some record might be found in the tightly-rolled parchments and heavy-bound books that lined the small dark room’s walls. Climbing the stairs of the tower and finding it growing colder by the step, he had beaten a hasty retreat and sent a servant to kindle a fire for him. Only later, when he had been assured that the little-used chamber was as warm as it could be, did he mount the spiral stairs once more to begin his search.

Several fruitless hours later, hindered by the seemingly haphazard arrangement of the castle records, Ludwig had realised that he had neither the patience nor temperament to pursue this task any longer...and that he was freezing cold once more. Even though the windows were shuttered and the hearth was lit, this was not a room intended to be used in the winter months, and so he descended once more to the his study to think, and to revitalize himself with some sweet mulled wine.

He could, he supposed, send to the local cathedral for a scribe and assign the task to him, but he hesitated to do so for it would reveal a weakness that he was uncertain would be wise to do under the circumstances. While he had absolutely no doubts as the allegiance of the nobility, he recalled many warnings from his father as to the dangers of involving the church in too many affairs of state.

“Always beware of them, son,” his father had often said. “Bishops and priests do not owe their allegiance to the Pfalz, and often only nominally do they do so to the Pope. Many are the younger scions of noble families, and they are as like as not to pass on information to their fathers that they think might benefit others of their blood. Say little to them if possible; and if you must, then speak to them only of matters of faith. In that they may be trusted, but not in matters of state.”

Whom else could he turn to until Johann’s return? It would be at least several fortnights until then, and he could not possibly delay his decision that long. He could send a fast rider to his uncle Otto who would now have resumed command of the siege of Nancy, but he quickly discarded that idea. It wasn’t that he feared exposing his naiveté, but rather that he distrusted the suggestions he might receive. Well…not distrust, precisely. If occurred to him that his uncle was unlikely to be at all sympathetic to needs that ran at all contrary to those of the army, and that his advice would be as likely to incite further discontent as it would be to solve it.

Stefan – perhaps his favourite uncle - would be ideal, except he was no more reachable than the venerable Johann…less so, in fact, for Ludwig didn’t even know precisely where he was. Leading his mounted forces to scout somewhere ahead along the provincial borders to both safeguard against a French counterattack and to prepare for the planned spring offensive, no doubt. No. No help would be forthcoming from that quarter. Where then?

It had been then that an idea had come into his mind and suddenly, like a bolt of lightening, he knew with perfect clarity what he should do. It had taken little time to find a servant who could answer his query, and then grabbing his furs and wrapping them about him he had gone out to the garden. Now, walking along the winding path, he saw a cloaked and hooded form seated on one of the stone benches and lengthened his stride to approach. As he neared, the figure looked up quickly and he saw, with great surprise, tears streaming down raw red cheeks before they were hidden once more by the hood.

Ludwig reached the bench and stood awkwardly for a moment, not knowing quite how to begin under the circumstances. This was the last thing he had expected, and the words he had prepared as he walked fled from his mind. “My lady?” he said uncertainly.

When she neither moved nor responded, he fought down his rising confusion and tried again. “My lady, are you well?”

This time she did look up, a delicate leather-gloved hand trying to brush away the evidence of her distress. Then she made as though to rise in courtesy, but he waved her to remain seated. His own questions, he decided would have to wait. Instead, he sat down beside her and spoke once more. “My lady, you know that I would do anything I can to comfort you. Please tell me how…tell me what ails you.”

She sighed then. “I’m sorry, herr Kurfürst. It is nothing you need be concerned about.”

He didn’t believe her for a moment, and instead had another brief burst of inspiration. Taking a chance, he took her hands in his own and gently turned her to face him. “It is your husband,” he said with certainty.

At this, the Lady Anna von der Simmern began to weep once more and leaned forward to burry her head against his shoulder. Silently, he cradled his aunt in his arms and waited for the shuddering sobs that wracked her body to cease.
 

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A wonderful installment. I like how you fleshed out an often neglected issue - the lack of men/beasts at the home front when an army is fielded.

The insecurity that comes when having to make decisions and almost no one to turn to for advice is also handled well.

And you leave us with a double mystery - what's the idea he has, and what is it about his uncle that makes his aunt weep?

I'll be waiting for the answer. :)
 

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Sytass: Thank you, sir. As SM suggested recently, it was time to get back inside the Kurfurst's head again to see how he's shaping up as a ruler.

Rhodz: You're right...and I'll be expanding on this shortly.

Vald: All good things come to those who wait. ;)

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As I just recently posted in the SolAARium, this was a somewhat tricky section to write since it is reintroducing several themes simultaneously and I'm quite affraid that some of them will have easily been forgotten by the reader...particularly since the majority of them were originally touched upon quite some time ago. once of the hazards of writing multiple subplots I suppose.

I think it might be prudent to remind everyone of a few things that have happened...and to comment on some of what I'm trying to achieve. (I mentioned a while ago that I would occasionally give you some of the "here's what I'm doing" information that would not normally be revealed when writing a book).

You may recall that in the instalment that begins in the middle of pp67 of chapter 2 (in the pdf) I spent some time writing about Stefan's remorse of the rather stormy argument that he and Anna had on the morning of his departure for war. This was again addressed in a "discussion" between the principal male characters where the Kurfurst makes his first real "stance" to exert some measure of authority. I have alluded to it several times since, and it was also intended as an unspoken undercurrent in the recent "dinner" instalment. What we haven't yet seen is Anna's side of the argument and the effects of its aftermath on her. If you'd just read the entire "book" to this point, you might be tempted to guess that her tears are possibly related to this situation...that she is under a form of house arrest, she is very likely distrusted by those in authority, and that she and her husband had a violent argument the last time they saw one another even though they had previously been shown to have a very deep, caring and loving relationship.

This is - although the reader doesn't know it yet - a recurring and developing theme that is the principal avenue I'll be using to explore a couple of the major intentions in the book (which I gave you an overview of some pages ago). This last instalment was intended to reintroduce it, and to set up the next instalment where we will actually "witness" their conversation and are given some idea of the situation from her point of view.

At the same time, these instalments are intended to act as a vehicle to give the reader some insight into the Kurfurst's mind - his thought process and his attitudes...and perhaps a few other characteristics as well.

But I also wanted it to serve several other functions...to continue the underlying theme that explores war and its effects on the populace (something that Sytass mentioned above); to remind the reader of the time of year and general conditions; to remind the reader of where some of the principal characters currently are and what they're doing (even though Otto's "mission" is still kept secret you do, at least, know that he's now left to do it); to reinforce some of the relationships between people by telling you what Ludwig thinks of them; to make an important point regarding the allegience of the clergy (something that will be a recurring issue); to give a little "advance notice" of what the army is thinking of doing; the general situation of having an inexperienced 15-year old now ruling a nation that is at war for the first time in years (the Palatinat had not been at war in Ludwig's lifetime); to reintroduce the possibility that the populace might eventually tire of war; to remind people that the recruits I raised in Mainz were now "built" and on the move from there to the Palatinat and would then be forwarded to Nancy; the game manoeuvre I did to send a tiny cavalry force ahead by one province to "scout" for any sign of a French counteroffensive; etc.

Considering the period of time that this AAR lay dormant, though, I really can't expect people to recall everything that's going on or to remember the various themes that I've been gradualy weaving into the mix...which is also something that I realise is also hindered by the very instalment process and is somewhat counter to reading something that is crafted more to be a book.

Anyway, Rhodz is correct that Ludwig came to the conclusion that the only source of advice he might be able to turn to in this situation is his aunt. It is remarkable that a lad of 15 would come rushing to get her help, and then set this all aside for the moment when confronted by the unexpected sight of this otherwise strong-willed woman (as demonstrated in the "argumetn with Stefan" and in the "dinner series") being overcome with tears. It should show some measure of his compassion and also his growing self-control...plus suggest that he has a reasonably intelligent mind that is hampered by his lack of experience.

Anyway, I hope some of this will become more apparent in the next instalment.
 

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Another excellent post, as usual!

Considering the period of time that this AAR lay dormant, though, I really can't expect people to recall everything that's going on or to remember the various themes that I've been gradualy weaving into the mix...which is also something that I realise is also hindered by the very instalment process and is somewhat counter to reading something that is crafted more to be a book.

More time has passed in real life than in the AAR! Now that's unusual.
 

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Actually I’m surprised at how much I still remember of the convoluted story. Might have something to do with how well it’s written. ;)

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Chris, I admit that I missed some of the re-introduced themes, and I think it's a problem with the medium that is this forum. If you have a book, you can - if you like - read through it in one piece, so certain motif or themes stick in the readers' heads. Here on the forum, a chapter may drag out for quite some time, and a reader might remember the plot, and how it started but much less any subtleties that were introduced. And with the massive amount of material to read here, few readers are willing to re-read the past installments when a new one is up.
 

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Originally posted by Sytass
Chris, I admit that I missed some of the re-introduced themes, and I think it's a problem with the medium that is this forum. If you have a book, you can - if you like - read through it in one piece, so certain motif or themes stick in the readers' heads. Here on the forum, a chapter may drag out for quite some time, and a reader might remember the plot, and how it started but much less any subtleties that were introduced. And with the massive amount of material to read here, few readers are willing to re-read the past installments when a new one is up.

I agree with you 100% and I certainly don't want you to think I was criticising you for having forgotten. Heck...I even forgot half the stuff myself. :) That's partly why I posted the comments/explanation I did, and also why I just brought the subject up again in the SolAARium.

Joe: Now I'm really blushing. Thanks!

JM: If I can keep dragging the writing process out for another 4 years or so I'll have a new record firmly established as having written the only AAR that described a time period shorter than the actual length of time it took to write it. :p So far I'm miles ahead of the race since I've managed to write for a whole 63 days of elapsed time and it's taken me almost 6 months to do it. Sadly, we'll be skipping ahead in time a bit at the end of this chapter so it may end up evening out.
 

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This is why those .pdfs and supplemental materials (do any other AARs have supplemental materials?) are so helpful.

Though, in the spirit (whoops, wrong story! :D) of full disclosure, I still haven't made my way through the entire story, I do find going back and forth among the Adobe pages easier than flipping through the pages of the thread.
 

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Originally posted by MrT
I agree with you 100% and I certainly don't want you to think I was criticising you for having forgotten. Heck...I even forgot half the stuff myself. :) That's partly why I posted the comments/explanation I did, and also why I just brought the subject up again in the SolAARium.

Don't worry, you didn't come across that way. Nevertheless, I pre-order here and now a signed copy of the finished product (whenever it's finished or published). ;) :D
 

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The Kurfurst is a clever lad. His aunt would make a good ally in doing some of the things he wants to take care of.

I do have a question, though. How much of the economic "damage" being claimed by the farmers and woodsmen is real? Are they just being difficult as peasants are wont to do, or are you strapped for manpower?
 

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heagarty: I had to print out a copy of the pdf myself since I find myself continualy refering back to those older sections too :eek: and I have a very large collection of maps and other background material that pretty much fill a 3" binder. The amount of time I spent doing the research realy helps when it comes time to write this stuff. I'm currently kicking myself for having decided to remain as historically accurate as I did, since there are just too many characters who share names (multiple Fridrichs, Ludwigs, etc.). I should have made a departure from RL and given them different names...and I've even been contemplating going back and doing that now since in some of the coming sections that I've already begun working on it becomes a serious nightmare! :eek:

Sytass: Sold! :)

SM: Wouldn't she, though.

In game terms at this point the March 1st recruitments I bought exhausted my manpower pool. I had also raised war taxes so my stab was only at +2 and I had the additional +1RR as well, of course. I was certainly under no threat of revolt since the war was only 2 months old. I did want to further a couple themes, though, and set up a little undercurrent of popular dissent. I intend to explore the effects of war on a nation's population, the burdens and sacrifices is forces both on the leadership and the common peasant, and the effects of extending it over longer periods of time. You will (or at least you may) recall that France had already been at war for quite a long time when I declared war on them - in fact, that was one of the reasons that I dared to do it since I was a puny 2-province German minor challenging a fairly large 12-province France. While I had allies, so did France...and it's always a crap shoot as to how helpful the AI is going to be. At any rate, we will soon be seeing some of the effects of France's long condition of war and rather than having it come out of the blue I figured that this would be a good time to at least broach the general subject (although, again, I've already refered to it in passing in two earlier instalments).

This plotting and planning stuff is hard work!

I've almost finished the next instalment but forgot to e-mail it to myself at the office to put the finishing touches on it so I'll have to wait until I get home this evening to do it. With any luck I'll have it posted by the end of the day.

Thanks again to everyone who's reading. :)
 

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Originally posted by MrT
heagarty: I had to print out a copy of the pdf myself since I find myself continualy refering back to those older sections too :eek: and I have a very large collection of maps and other background material that pretty much fill a 3" binder. The amount of time I spent doing the research realy helps when it comes time to write this stuff. I'm currently kicking myself for having decided to remain as historically accurate as I did, since there are just too many characters who share names (multiple Fridrichs, Ludwigs, etc.). I should have made a departure from RL and given them different names...and I've even been contemplating going back and doing that now since in some of the coming sections that I've already begun working on it becomes a serious nightmare! :eek:

Perhaps you can split the difference, preserving the historical names yet still creating a more distinct naming convention for them? I am suggesting the use of, where appropriate, more familiar names, nicknames, and other aliases by which a character may be called, in addition to his or her formal name.

That is: Christof the X, Ludwig the Y, Z-based adjective Ludwig, etc., or simply familiar nicknames used by family members, but never servants or underlings.

Just a thought. I am so far behind in the story I have not thought it appropriate to comment so far out of the context of the current story situation, but I could speak to the value of the .pdfs.
 

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Well I'm definitely trying to do that, but I don't see some of the characters using anything other than a character's given name in some instances since they and the person they're talking to would know exactly who's being refered to (just as I do as the author). The trouble is that as I've written some of those sentences I've realised that the reader might easily be confused as to who I'm talking about. In the recent "dinner conversation" I had the problem of having two young Luwigs seated at the table: Ludwig the Kurfurst and Ludwig der Schwarze. A third character in that situation would most naturally say...

"What do you think, Ludwig?"

...and then look at the appropriate Ludwig. Writing it so as to avoid confusing the reader was like pulling my own teeth. :p It would have been far easier for one of them (the lesser known minor character one) to have been named Deitmar or something. I would bet you a very large sum of money that no one would have gone and looked up the genealogical history of the D6 branch of the B1 Wittelsbach family in the mid 1400's and then come back and told me that 'Deitmar' should really be 'Ludwig'. I could have saved myself a world of trouble having realised that one back on page 1.

It's those stupid Wittelsbachs...not a creative bone in their bodies. I envision the following scene taking place rather a lot in the 15th century Palatinat:

"Congratulations, Herr Pfalzgraf, it's a boy!"

"Really? That's good news indeed!"

"And what will you call him?"

"Well, I've always been partial to the name 'Freidrich' so let him be known henceforth by that name."

"Not wishing to upset you, my lord, but mightn't another name be more suitable?"

"Why? What do you mean?"

"Well, Herr Pfalzgraf...your name is Freidrich too. So are two of your nephews, three of your first cousins, your father, your father-in-law, your grandson by your recently deceased first son Freidrich, and about half of your servants."

"What's your point? 'Freidrich' is a good German name!"

"No doubt about it, my Lord. But don't you think that it might be a trifle confusing? I mean, really, if you call out the name 'Freidrich' around here just about the entire castle responds...including your three hunting hounds Friedrich, Friedrich and Freidrich. Perhaps you might consider breaking with tradition and choosing another name?"

"Ah. Hmmmmm. I see your point. How about 'Ludwig' then?"

"Yes?"

"How about 'Ludwig', Ludwig?"

"You flatter me lord, to think of giving your son my name....and the name of the Kurfurst, and the Kurfurst's father, and his father, and his nephew and his...."
 

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Originally posted by MrT

"Ah. Hmmmmm. I see your point. How about 'Ludwig' then?"

"Yes?"

"How about 'Ludwig', Ludwig?"

"You flatter me lord, to think of giving your son my name....and the name of the Kurfurst, and the Kurfurst's father, and his father, and his nephew and his...."

I couldn't help but laugh at your problem, sorry. :D You have quite a problem but I'm sure you'll figure something out. ;) I think going back and changing the naming convention might be the best way to go with this problem. Good luck.:)

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Taling about digging a hole for yourself. :)

I was going to suggest something in the same vein as heagerty, until I realized how silly it would sound:

Ludwig "Ludde" der Schwartze", Friederich "Fridde" the sixth

and so on :rolleyes: :D

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