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The wheels continue to turn. I do have to say that I share Inwær's concerns just a little; Morcar might well see the wisdom in the move, but it could just as easily be taken as Eadgar using the opportunity to hedge his bets by playing the brothers' rivalry to his own ends -- both sides against the middle.

Also looking forward to seeing the coming confrontation with the Danes. Hopefully Prince Knudsen will get a thrashing to make him hate God and himself.
 

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England's going to be bankrupt by the end of the wars. All those mercenaries and destroyed infrastructure...not good for anyone.
 

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Ugh, got some catching up to do. Shouldn't've spent all weekend playing Stardew Valley with the wife...
No worries, C. Hope you enjoyed getting the power station operational. I have been having fun so, yes...there is quite a bit to read through now. :D

The wheels continue to turn. I do have to say that I share Inwær's concerns just a little; Morcar might well see the wisdom in the move, but it could just as easily be taken as Eadgar using the opportunity to hedge his bets by playing the brothers' rivalry to his own ends -- both sides against the middle.

Also looking forward to seeing the coming confrontation with the Danes. Hopefully Prince Knudsen will get a thrashing to make him hate God and himself.
Not a bad thought. Even if he is acting in good faith, Morcar might not think so. In fact, your comment gave me a good idea for the next update. I think you will like it. ;)

England's going to be bankrupt by the end of the wars. All those mercenaries and destroyed infrastructure...not good for anyone.
Indeed, if I ever do get control of the kingdom, who knows what I will inherit? We are into year 5 at this point (with the end no where near in sight.)

Eadgar had best be careful to balance his duties with keeping track of his wider goals.
Agreed. Learning on the job, and all that. Good thing he has some good traits. Otherwise, this could be a quick crash and burn.


To all - actually did get some writing done today and am far more pleased with the next update than the one I just posted. Don't know why, but something just never seemed to click with that last one even though I enjoyed writing for Thoræd. Perhaps I miss Beorhtmaer as much as Specialist. ;) Look forward to it tomorrow. Thanks for reading and your always excellent comments. Keep them up!
 

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These foreign vermin seem to have no end! I can't see how this will end well whilst you have 2 Foreign powers vying for supremacy on the sainted isle
 

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Rouge mercenary companies, almost certain interference with continental powers far above England's strength and a crippling financial situation? Not forgetting the civil war of course.
What a kingdom to want to rule, eh?
 

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These foreign vermin seem to have no end! I can't see how this will end well whilst you have 2 Foreign powers vying for supremacy on the sainted isle
They do not. They treat it as some play thing. Well, hopefully someday I will be able to put a stop to it. Working on it, at least.

Rouge mercenary companies, almost certain interference with continental powers far above England's strength and a crippling financial situation? Not forgetting the civil war of course.
What a kingdom to want to rule, eh?
Indeed, though it is his birthright as he sees it. ;)

You saw the pics. Our "power station" is a good 5-10F hotter than the rooms around it.
Heh. Then it is fully operational.


To all - the next update follows after a typo pass. I had some fun with it. Hopefully it shows in the writing. And I seemed on a role, so I have already pumped out the scene to follow this next post. It got a bit darker. ;) Still needs some time for editing so I'll get that one up tomorrow. Thanks for following along and offering such great comments!
 

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The Rightful King


Chester, England - January 1071


The Marshal of York pulled the fur around his neck as he looked down from a hill overlooking Chester. Below men of the North harried the routed Danes all over the battlefield. He had not been involved personally, but he could not help himself come see the victory. It had been proclaimed all across the North once word had come from Derby at the end of the previous month. The combined forces of Eadwin’s English Army and the Yorkist forces aided by The Saxon Band had soundly defeated the enemy and chased Knud’s Danes clear across the countryside. He wished to see this in all its glory.

It would not be good to be seen on the field of battle, he knew. But Duke Morcar was far to the south and he was in no harm. Certainly not once he spied the vanquished cowardly retreating any way they could. As he allowed a fine smile grace his face, his mount was spooked and he contained her as he turned to spy the Duke of Mercia and Lancaster ride up to meet him.

“Good Eadgar of Wessex! It is fine to see you here this cold day. Allow me to introduce myself. I am Duke Eadwin of Hwicce and I must say it is my pleasure to finally greet you personally. I have heard much and more of you these last long months!”

The Duke slowed his horse to stop next to Eadgar’s and they both turned back to watch the route below.

“I must say that I am well met, my Lord Duke. I too have heard of your exploits of late and my congratulations are certainly in order.”

“That and still,” Eadwin remained watching the flight of Danes, “It would not be proper if I did not warn you that your presence, as much as it is to my liking, may not be welcomed by others.”

Eadgar looked at him sideways with some reticence, “Do you mean Duke Morcar, my Lord Duke? I can assure you…”

“I would not be so quick at your assurance, my young would be King.”

The voice came from behind as the very figure of Duke Morcar slowly trotted his mount to stand on the other side of Eadgar.

“My Lord Duke…” Eadgar attempted an explanation but Morcar simply held up a hand.

“Be still, my Lord…I be not angry with you. After all, you can say you have brought about this great peace.”

“Peace, My Lord Duke?” Eadgar questioned.

“He means between the Lord Duke and myself, young Eadgar,” Duke Eadwin answered him.

“I did not think to find myself here, Lord Marshal, but yet here I am. And though he be a louse, he be my louse I suppose.” Morcar stifled a slight grin. Eadwin did not seem amused.

“You do treat me still with no thanks and little regard. But for the now, I shall forgive such words.”

“Forgive them as you wish, my Lord. But the truth sticks hard when it is accurate, I find.” Morcar did not seem in the mood to let up so Eadgar attempted to break in.

“My Lords…I am pleased to see this meeting more than you may know. After all, if there is to be true peace in the realm, we must all work together.”

“The boy speaks true, Morcar,” Eadwin smiled as he looked to his brother.

Duke Morcar did not find it as amusing as he returned the gaze, “Since you seem to have the favor of the fool Godwine and I, at present, do not; I am not sure who has the better of it. I’ll not bark so loudly for the now. Perhaps, good brother, you may tell young Eadgar why we have come so I can go back to hating you. It feels far better, of that you can be sure.”

Duke Eadwin caught Eadgar’s questioning look as he spoke, “As my brother suggests, there is reason we have travelled here. It is not coincidence that we are all so well met on this road. Prince-Bishop Æthelwine did let us know you would be here. You should do better with his kind should you wish to keep secrets.”

“It is no secret, my Lord Duke,” Eadgar stood tall in his saddle.

“Whether it is or no, my brother did seek me out once he had heard of the happenings of late. And while I in no way seek to reproach you of your clear thinking and sure assistance at Chesterfield in Derby, I can think of no reason why the troops of York should be out and about on this battlefield when we have it quite under control.”

Eadgar looked back to Duke Morcar, “My Lord Duke? There is much fighting left to be done and we have seen great success…”

“It is quite as he says, my young Lord. My brother will return and continue rooting out the Norsemen as needs be, though very few remain on the Isle and Prince Knudsen does run like a dog with his tail between his legs. The Irish Band is to the west wasting time in Somerset. And the Bastard and his Flemish allies seem to be living the high life in London with little thought of leaving such comforts. Should I need my men fighting, you may be sure I will call them out and they will be at the ready. You have done fine work here, but it is time to send the men home. I have need of you there.”

“My Lords…” Eadgar attempted to argue but Duke Eadwin cut him off.

“He speaks true as much as he is able. Your Prince-Bishop has had quite a hard time of it these days.” Eadwin could not help but offer some slight joy at these words as he laughed and Morcar was quick to continue in anger.

“The fool has angered a priest in Tottenham last he was south to bring me word. And then I am told that Thorold of Bolingbroke who currently rules as Earl of Wessex is seeking to see my title as Duke of Northumberland granted to someone else!”

“And I thought him to be a man of value, my Lord…” Eadwin allowed the words to sting as he meant them.

Morcar followed as he attempted to stifle his anger, “And I hear tell of a dangerous new scourge developing among the soldiers. Boils developing, I am told? It is no place for the brightest of men, my Lord Marshal. It may perhaps be for the likes of him, but certainly not for you.”

Eadwin did not respond, but it was clear there was concern from the look on his face.

“There are still many keeps between here and the south, my Lords…under the yoke of our enemies…surely there is need…” Eadgar still tried to counsel but Morcar would not hear it.

“My brother is capable enough as commander, my young Lord. Leave this business to him. I shall not ask again.”

Eadgar of Wessex did all he could to control his emotions, and finally acquiesced, “Then I will be to home. If you can forgive my brashness, my Lord Duke, I would be most thankful.”

Suddenly Morcar allowed his smile to return, “There is nothing to forgive. Praise be on you for this good work and I hope you may find more to do as you get back to York. We are in need of such at this time. I will be along soon myself before returning south. Give thanks for these victories, for they are well received by us both.”

“Then I shall tell the men and see you once more and soon, my Lord Duke,” Eadgar turned his mount quickly in hopes of keeping in the Duke’s graces. He spurred his horse with perhaps more anger than he intended but was soon on his way.

Morcar shifted his mount to move next to Eadwin. Looking out over the field of Danes fleeing his Yorkist forces and The Saxon Band, he smiled. “Best gold I ever spent.”

Duke Eadwin seemed slightly touched and offered to his brother, “Thank you, Morcar.”

Morcar moved to turn his horse in the direction of York but not before looking back to his brother with a toothy grin, “I wasn’t talking about hiring the Saxons, you great fool. But play at your thanks all you wish. My investment remains sound.”


"It was the Dukes..." - Eadgar's Forces Return Home
 
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Slight point of order: 'under the yolk of our enemies' I'm pretty sure you meant yoke :p

Good update though I'm slightly confused as to what's actually happening. Did the Atheling engineer the reunion of the brothers Morcar and Eadwin? 2 who will stand as allies when time comes to topple the Godwine?

Incidentally I like how Godwine is a shadowy figure kept well in the background. I wonder if he's really as bad as everyone's making out...
 

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Slight point of order: 'under the yolk of our enemies' I'm pretty sure you meant yoke :p

Good update though I'm slightly confused as to what's actually happening. Did the Atheling engineer the reunion of the brothers Morcar and Eadwin? 2 who will stand as allies when time comes to topple the Godwine?

Incidentally I like how Godwine is a shadowy figure kept well in the background. I wonder if he's really as bad as everyone's making out...

Entirely possible he's the most competent person in the kingdom and the reason why everything hasn't gone completely to hell yet. That he is a good man wrongly maligned by his jealous and greedy countrymen (also possibly by history). Would be a twist.
Which we just ruined :D
 

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Slight point of order: 'under the yolk of our enemies' I'm pretty sure you meant yoke :p

Good update though I'm slightly confused as to what's actually happening. Did the Atheling engineer the reunion of the brothers Morcar and Eadwin? 2 who will stand as allies when time comes to topple the Godwine?

Incidentally I like how Godwine is a shadowy figure kept well in the background. I wonder if he's really as bad as everyone's making out...
Blast and tarnation! You have the right of it there, Asantahene. Corrected and thank you. That's what I get for adding one more little bit to a scene I tinkered with many times over. I would blame spell checker, but...no, I will blame spell checker. ;)

As for the scene, give it one more read perhaps. I hoped to make it clear. If it is not after that, then I will absolutely look at what I did not do in that regard. I will admit I spent more time on the Dukes than I did on Eadgar in scene, thus why I was trying to add to his words as I kept tinkering. :rolleyes:

As for Godwine...

Entirely possible he's the most competent person in the kingdom and the reason why everything hasn't gone completely to hell yet. That he is a good man wrongly maligned by his jealous and greedy countrymen (also possibly by history). Would be a twist.
Which we just ruined :D
He is no good man and no friend of mine. You ruin nothing, Butterfly, as he has done well enough to ruin the realm all on his own. ;)

(That would be something, however. Were someone writing that AAR, they should use it.) :D


I answer now to correct the typo (that damn gun!) but still, such good comments! Thanks guys!
 

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What I think just happened is that, whether by design or happy accident, Eadgar has managed to maneuver the two brothers Eadwin and Morcar into a position where they can't overtly try to undermine each other without appearing to undermine the war effort as well, causing both brothers to agree to a temporary truce which they will take advantage of to take stock, consolidate their positions, and wait for the other to blink first or for the public eye to turn its gaze elsewhere. Flattering Eadgar by implying that he's done the impossible will help boost both his credibility as a future ruler and his reputation, to boot, which would make a nice bonus for Morcar's future schemes.

Of course, that's just my two cents.
 

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(That would be something, however. Were someone writing that AAR, they should use it.) :D

Well unfortunately I don't know of anyone currently writing a AAR using historical articles intentionally looking for historical biases in them...
(Both Mordred and Lancelot get this treatment).

I think that pretty soon the infighting has to be dealt with so that everyone can actually get on with the job of getting into power. That or we'll get a truly medieval situation of a very loose alliance to kill one army whilst the alliance members try to kill each other at the same time. If that happens, England really is in trouble.
 

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Entirely possible he's the most competent person in the kingdom and the reason why everything hasn't gone completely to hell yet. That he is a good man wrongly maligned by his jealous and greedy countrymen (also possibly by history). Would be a twist.
Which we just ruined :D
Hahaha-exactly my friend exactly ;)

What I think just happened is that, whether by design or happy accident, Eadgar has managed to maneuver the two brothers Eadwin and Morcar into a position where they can't overtly try to undermine each other without appearing to undermine the war effort as well, causing both brothers to agree to a temporary truce which they will take advantage of to take stock, consolidate their positions, and wait for the other to blink first or for the public eye to turn its gaze elsewhere. Flattering Eadgar by implying that he's done the impossible will help boost both his credibility as a future ruler and his reputation, to boot, which would make a nice bonus for Morcar's future schemes.

Of course, that's just my two cents.
Thanks Specialist. I actually started to get that on 2nd reading but what you've said adds further clarity
Not to malign coz1's writing because its excellent but the last chapter felt a little opaque to me is all
 
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What I think just happened is that, whether by design or happy accident, Eadgar has managed to maneuver the two brothers Eadwin and Morcar into a position where they can't overtly try to undermine each other without appearing to undermine the war effort as well, causing both brothers to agree to a temporary truce which they will take advantage of to take stock, consolidate their positions, and wait for the other to blink first or for the public eye to turn its gaze elsewhere. Flattering Eadgar by implying that he's done the impossible will help boost both his credibility as a future ruler and his reputation, to boot, which would make a nice bonus for Morcar's future schemes.

Of course, that's just my two cents.
That's an excellent thought, Specialist. Indeed, there is some gamesmanship going on there. Of all the people involved, poor Eadgar was the least interested in such things. These brothers do not like each other, but they know when to settle down a bit for their own ends, which was part of my goal. Read my response to Asantahene below for a bit more on this.

Caught up, and glad I have. Fantastic as always, though I have a certain bias toward Morcar especially. ;)
Awesome. I am hoping to get into your first true post of your new AAR today. Really looking forward to it, Mr. C. :)

Well unfortunately I don't know of anyone currently writing a AAR using historical articles intentionally looking for historical biases in them...
(Both Mordred and Lancelot get this treatment).

I think that pretty soon the infighting has to be dealt with so that everyone can actually get on with the job of getting into power. That or we'll get a truly medieval situation of a very loose alliance to kill one army whilst the alliance members try to kill each other at the same time. If that happens, England really is in trouble.
Very sneaky, sir. ;) And indeed, there is that and I did enjoy how you looked at Mordred especially in your own work.

As for your supposition, I could not agree more. Unfortunately for the game, I have noticed in previous play-throughs of this scenario, that infighting continues for many a year after the 1066 start date. Part of my goal was stipulated that I might find a way through that morass to get Eadgar his crown. I've seen it happen...once, and not at my hand. But I also assumed that one of Harald or William would win early or both would die trying early. Instead, I got a lot of war for many years with a weak leader on top at the end. I know who wins, but it gives nothing away to suggest that at this time.

Hahaha-exactly my friend exactly ;)


Thanks Specialist. I actually started to get that on 2nd reading but what you've said adds further clarity
Not to malign coz1's writing because its excellent but the last chapter felt a little opaque to me is all
Thank you very much for giving it a second read, sir. And I certainly take no offense at all at your suggestion because I believe you are entirely correct. As I suggested, I started the scene focusing on the Dukes and then realized I had really not given Eadgar much urgency at all. He was, once again, a weak little puppy. Both through my wording of the Duke's passive aggressive arguing and attempts to put some more and/or better words in Eadgar's mouth I complicated a scene that I had clearly in my head but obviously did not come out entirely in the writing.

I would say there is not so much a peace between the Dukes, or that Eadgar had much overt hand in that other than causing them to come together. In game, I was simply sending my army home as my levies were still too high and I had accomplished the goal of knocking Harald from Appleby. I needed a reason for that so considered that perhaps both of the Dukes were happy with the result, but not perhaps with how it happened. I supposed what if they did not want Eadgar to get too high on himself and this is what came out. Opaque? Yes, I believe that is a good word for it. Thanks again for giving it another read through. I knew if you weren't getting it, it was something wrong on my end and not yours, to be sure! ;)

By the power invested in me: I nominate this AAR for the weekly AAR showcase! :D

I have just started reading this AAR and have been enjoying it and look forward to seeing if Edgar can take the throne. :)
Well thanks for joining in, vyshan and...well thanks for throwing me the showcase! I never imagined I would be nominated again for any of the weeklies, though I appreciate them each and every time. I am glad you are enjoying it and really...just thanks! This made my day! :)


To all - I had planned on taking a break from writing today since I have two updates "in the can" as it were, but now with vyshan's kind recognition, I may need to adjust that schedule. ;) The next update, however, will follow once I have given it a typo pass (and no more damn tinkering at the last minute!) and I will go ahead and say that is a bit darker and plays a bit fast and lose with RL history. Part of that was lack of information as I researched, part of that was trying to be a bit playful in the writing (especially given the scene) and part of that was simply wanting to forge my own history without being beholden to RL since this is a game, after all. I've left it open enough that it is certainly plausible, I hope.

And another announcement - I have continued to play through the game and must say...it has thrown me for a loop. I can make it work, to be sure. But it was unexpected, to say the least. I am wracking my brain trying to make sense on how to make it make sense to you guys. Interesting and somewhat enjoyable, yes. Fodder for good stories? Yes. What I was trying to plan out with admittedly limited play time thus far in game? Absolutely not. :eek:

You will know it when we get there and that likely won't be for a while. But oof! I'm gonna have to go back to the drawing board with some of these characters now. But I suppose that is all part of the fun. :D Thanks for reading and always for your great comments!!
 

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Spontinaity is a British trait of course. Unexpected things happen all the time, so you have to make sure you have something witty to say afterwards.

As to your gameplay issues, well I can only speculate because this game can throw some odd things in that utterly change the powers that be ingame. Once France (all of it) turned heretical and thus I could holy war it to death a piece at a time (this happened in 982AD so England was a monster by the end of the 11th C).
 

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The Rightful King


York, England – May 1071


It was dark in the Duke’s inner chamber but as Eadgar held forth the candle, he soon spied Duke Morcar as he sat silent at the large oak table. What once was a fresh soup now sat cold and uneaten as the pallid figure of Morcar looked up to spy his Marshal. He did not speak, but did give over some slight smile as much as he was able. Eadgar moved closer and pulled a chair to sit as he held out the candle to see his full face.

There was a large bulbous wound at his neck that oozed pus, yellow sickness that stood in stark contrast with his pale face. The sweat seemed to pour from his skin and he had little strength as witnessed by his poor attempt at a greeting. Reaching forward to grasp at Eadgar’s hand, his own stopped midway and landed with a thud on the table.

“I am sorry Atheling. I am to waste.”

“Come now, my Lord Duke,” Eadgar attempted some soothing words to keep his spirits lifted. “You will be better in a fortnight. It has hardly been but one moon since your sickness and yet you still live with us. All others have succumbed in quick time. You will live, sir.”

Morcar tried to smile, but it was clear the attempt was painful. “You do speak softly and well…my would be King. Would that your words were true. I know them always to be, but I fear…”

When he spit up some blood, he could no longer finish and Eadgar went to bring him some ale. He pulled the goblet to the Duke’s lips and allowed him to drink at it slowly. Once or twice, he seemed to choke, but it was clear that Morcar wished for such and so Eadgar helped him finish the drought.

“You are no fool, and that I know.” Morcar finally lifted his head and looked upon his Marshal.

“And you are a great Duke, and more…my father as much as I may know one.”

Morcar smiled and lifted a hand to reach out again and this time felt at Eadgar’s face. He allowed it to linger and though it was full of sweat, Eadgar did not try and stop him.

“See…we are all of the living. Though many be dead, we live, my Lord Duke. You will become better. This I know.”

As Eadgar cradled the Duke’s hand in his own, Morcar moved to lean back and yet again smiled. It was clear he was in some delirium, but he seemed to have a calm look upon his face and looked clearly into the Marshal’s eyes.

“What know you of your family?” he asked with a slight cough.

Eadgar simply smiled, “Not much. And that is the truth. My father was a weak man that left me when I was young. His father, a strong one that I never knew. Why, my Lord?”

Morcar beckoned Eadgar to come closer as he pulled himself to the table as best he could, “One was King…one was not…what of the other?”

“The other, my Lord?” Eadgar asked, as he felt at the Duke’s head and found it burning hot.

“Æthelred…what know you of he?”

“Little and less, my Lord Duke. What import has this for today? You need sleep. These tales of years gone by can wait.”

“They cannot!” The Duke suddenly stood tall in his chair and pulled the empty goblet close for another drink. Not finding any, he slammed it down again. “And that is why!”

“You do speak strangely, my Lord…I am sorry to have disturbed you on this night.”

Eadgar attempted to rise but the Duke’s weak hand stopped him, “Do not leave me, my King. I will be fine. But you must…hear this.”

As Morcar slumped back in his chair, Eadgar rose to assist him and was battled by the Duke.

“I will be fine!” he roared with a strength either knew he possessed at that moment.

“Then speak, my Lord…tell me what you wish to say.”

Eadgar helped him to gently sit again and Morcar beckoned for another goblet of ale. As he drank, he sat back softly in his seat and began to tell Eadgar of a tale.

“There was once a noble squire. He found a love that was far beyond him in life, and she had a great beauty. He was the envy of every man, and she their desire. In due time, this woman brought many great men around her and the squire was not unhappy for it brought him great wealth and prestige in tow. As long as he did not grow unhappy. And happy, he was. And would remain. Though she lay with other men…and did speak unkindly of this squire many times…and cared not for the realm or people…she did find favor with the King. And the squire was happy still. And when that King found trouble in his life, he did go to this woman and ask for her advice and her advice was none to help the realm. It was always about herself.”

Duke Morcar began to cough and so Eadgar went to retrieve another drought but was stopped, “No…hear this Eadgar.”

As he sat again, the Duke continued, “Where was I? Ah yes…the wench and her paramour…but it was not she that was unready. Nor her squire husband who had also found favor with the King. And due to her great beauty, this squire was able to say many unwise things to this King such that he be unwise himself. He would eventually lose his crown because of this ill counsel. All because of the beauty of a woman.”

“You do speak in dreams, my Lord Duke,” Eadgar once more attempted to calm Morcar but it would be no good as the Duke screamed out.

“This is reality, boy! This is truth! This is history that you should well know!”

Eadgar sat back in his chair, unsure of what next to do to help the Duke. He finally asked, “And the moral, sir? The moral of the tale?”

“The moral? This is your question? The moral is that Æthelred was a perfectly ready king. He did not give over the Danegeld because he wished to lose his crown…except he knew not what was right. He was…ill-counseled. Unræd!”

“So you speak this story of my great grandfather…” Eadgar attempted to soothe the Duke.

“No sir! It is mine own blood! That is the ill counsel!”

Morcar moved to stand and fell by his chair causing Eagar to help him back up. Morcar held tightly to the Marshal and pulled his face in close, “My! Own! Blood!”

Eadgar helped the Duke to sit once more as he pulled a rag to his face and wiped away the sweat. “You are unwell, my Lord Duke. You speak of strange things that you would not otherwise say. I will not remind you of this because you would not like it. You need sleep!”

“I need…” Morcar lifted his head to look into the man’s face, “…you to hear me. I give you no ill counsel. Especially now.”

“Move with me, my Lord…sleep will do you well,” Eadgar attempted to help the Duke once more to a nearby bed.

“You do not understand, my King…”

Eadgar moved Duke Morcar to lie down and pulled some covers over him that the Duke threw off immediately. “It is too hot!”

“Morcar!! You must rest!”

“You fool…” Morcar lay back on the bedding and smiled with his eyes closed. “YOU will need your rest. We are with child.”

The Duke began to laugh uncontrollably and Eadgar paid it little mind for a few moments before he realized what had been said. “My Lord?”

“I speak true. While you have been so busy upgrading the city walls of Boston, it comes to me that your wife is with child.”

The Duke was moving to get comfortable with the bedding around him and Eadgar was forced to try and pull him back to lucidity, “What say you, my Lord?”

“I said you are going to have a child, Eadgar…and so am I.”

“A child, my Lord Duke? This is but one of your dreams brought on by sickness.”

“Aye…but it’s not.” Morcar was nearly asleep at this point, but still opened his eyes enough to look at Eadgar, “The Danes land foolishly on the Irish in the south, but what is our care? Hextilda is with child. And that child will receive no ill counsel.”

Eadgar of Wessex knew not what to say as he pulled the little bit of cover he could towards the Duke’s chin. Morcar seemed to drift off to sleep with a smile and a few last words, “Nor mine…Atheling. Nor mine.”
 
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