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The Rightful King


Cambridge, England - February 1091


Prince Uhtræd looked out over the field and watched as Yorkist forces gathered in the distance. He did not need to see him to know that his father’s old friend was out there somewhere. No one but that old veteran Beorhtmaer could willingly move an army so fast. The Yorkist horse and shield men seemed to outnumber Lord Skuli’s forces by double the figure. And while there were archers and spearmen aplenty, the Prince knew that Beorhtmaer would not waste the day on trickery. He would come straight forward as any good Saxon mind might.

It was only seven days since the Prince arrived in camp once more and was greeted kindly by the Lord Marshal. Skuli offered some misgivings about his presence but was clearly well met by Uhtræd as indeed, his wounds had yet to heal and he barked mightily about his leg every time he put pressure to it. While the Prince had made note to visit the siege as often as he might while his new child grew daily in strength, on the day of this past visit, he came bearing poor news. A note had arrived at the keep informing the Queen that Beorhtmaer’s Yorkist force was on the move and heading straight down the old road leading to London from the north.


Duke Skuli was apoplectic at the news and knowing the strength of his force was brittle, made orders that day to begin a move of their own to the south. He had said to the Prince that Uhtræd should return home at the now, but the young royal would not hear of it.

“Then you shall stay behind the line, my Prince. I would not have your blood on my hands!” the Marshal had shouted.

Looking out towards the men arrayed before him on this day, he began to wonder if he might have taken the Duke’s advice. At this late hour, however, he was not leaving Lord Skuli to such a grim fate if he had any way to help it.

To the credit of the Marshal, Skuli realized that battle was at hand and wasted little time in putting his men in order. Before even the first strike of arrow passed overhead, the Duke had his flanks arranged such that what horse he had left would be able to close as soon as both sides were met. Uhtræd marveled at the glorious sight of those wooden killers as they rained down before him and even more at the proficiency of the King’s own archers as they replied in kind.

Prince Uhtræd had correctly guessed at Beorhtmaer tactic as soon after the initial volley of archers, the old veteran sent in his strength. Horse from the right and shields from the left poured onto the field and were met with everything Skuli had. Even the Marshal himself was suited up and at the ready and spurred his own horse into the great melee in the center. Uhtræd watched on with a wince at every move the Duke made knowing how painful it must be for the man but Skuli fought with valor and no thought of his own misfortune.


It was at that moment that Prince Uhtræd caught the banner of the Duke of York himself running to the field. His great friend from childhood moved from the ranks and rode out into the middle of the crush surrounded by a great many of his own guard. Uhtræd could see that his standard was moving towards the position of Duke Skuli and could contain himself no more. He began to rush the field himself until he was stopped by Lord Mayor Eanberht.

“My Prince…you may not be a part of this battle!” the Lord Mayor cried out.

Prince Uhtræd barely heard the words. He was already suited for his safety and with his sword drawn; he made his way into the mix. He made quick work of the first two or three men he met but was challenged by the next as a young man at arms moved to him calling out for spears to follow. Uhtræd met his attacker readily, cutting at his legs as he turned to ward off two such spearmen that tried to take him out. He ducked one and spun to slice at the second. With only one man left, he turned with a ferocious glare and caused the man to back up into the waiting sword of another.

Uhtræd looked up and saw that Duke Eadgar was moving closer to Skuli’s position so he moved to find any horse that might be had. Luck favored him as he turned to spy one of Beorhtmaer’s cavalry rushing to greet him with malice. The Prince was able to duck and roll and was up with a slash to the man’s back taking him from his mount. The horse continued to run but in the din, it had little place to go. As it struggled fiercely, Uhtræd was able to take the beast and began a push towards the Duke of York.

Slicing down at every turn, he took out spears and swords alike in his push until he was in between the two Dukes. For his part, Duke Eadgar seemed to have a look of shock upon his face as he spied his old friend. Uhtræd returned the gaze with a grim stare.

The Duke of York shouted as he pulled on his mount to bypass the Prince, “You should not be here! Move aside!”

Uhtræd showed no fear and jumped from his own to confront the young Duke, “Neither should you!”

The battle seemed to move in slow motion as the two young nobles stood their ground. Many times during their childhood they had played at war games and the Prince knew exactly what the young Duke might do. He had always been easy to guess with no forethought in his actions. And so, when Duke Eadgar reined his mount to rush at Uhtræd, the Prince did as he always did…he took the blow and returned it twice as hard.

The young Duke’s horse nearly trampled Uhtræd, but he was able to slice down and take out the legs of the beast such that Eadgar fell to the ground right over its head. He lay sprawling and looked up with yet one more look of shock. His eyes seemed to plead as Uhtræd stood over him and the Prince looked down with great sorrow. He hesitated only long enough to see Eadgar look to his right and Uhtræd turned to take out one of the Duke’s retainers.

Turning back to his old friend, he saw the sword come at him and wasted no time on making his parry. Eadgar struggled to try again and it would be for naught. Prince Uhtræd ran him through. He would never forget that day but the continued commotion occurring around him caused that thought to wait for the now.


Time sped up again for him and he turned to see Skuli doing his best to care for his men but with a great limp. The Prince fought his way towards the Marshal and took his arm over the shoulder.

“We must get you from this field, my Lord!”

Skuli nearly threw a blow at the young Prince until he realized who it was and answered with a mix of horror and anger, “I would not!”

“I care not of your feelings!” Uhtræd yelled as he pulled Skuli from the battle and watched over his shoulder as Duke Eadgar’s banner men seemed to pause knowing that their liege was struck down.

In truth, a great settling was caused by the untimely death of Eadgar of Hwicce, he not but of nineteen summers in age. The Yorkist enemy began to disengage and both sides moved off the field and took stock of their ground. In the manner of the time, soon the gathering of the dead began and when before both sides were trying to kill one another, suddenly they were working together to expose the dead and the living side by side. Uhtræd sat off on a slight rise watching it all as he cradled the Marshal in his lap.

“You should not be here,” Skuli said as he winced at movement of his leg.

The Prince stared down at the Duke with a blank face, “I have heard that already this day, Lord Skuli. This truce will not last as I know my father’s friend well. Beorhtmaer will push sooner rather than later knowing we are already bested.”

The Prince was not wrong. Even as the day began to wane, shouts and jeers could be heard across the field of battle as they beat their shields to make a great noise. It was clear to all of the King’s men that this meeting was not yet done. By now, Uhtræd and Skuli were at the edge of the field and the Prince made a move.

“I will lead these men, Lord Skuli. You are in no shape.”

Duke Skuli stood with great difficulty but looked to Uhtræd with fierce eyes, “You will not do any such thing! You have already risked your blood!”

“I would be fine, my Lord,” Uhtræd returned the gaze.

Skuli wiped a hand at the young Prince’s head, “There be a cut right there. I will not lose both this battle and my Prince on the same day. You will take what force you can and move from this place at the now!”

Out of respect, Uhtræd gave nod but he seethed. He felt no anger towards Skuli. He was angry at the day. As well he might have been as soon after, Beorhtmaer sent everything he had towards the King’s side and most able bodied men still fighting for King Eadgar were cut down. The response from the Yorkist force was a massacre.


Prince Uhtræd did as commanded, however; and a few days later the Marshal limped into the camp of what meager forces were salvaged from the battle at Cambridge. Those few men were gathered around as he made his way into the middle and found Uhtræd. The two embraced and cheers were heard from them all at the return of their fearless leader.

Duke Skuli turned to his men and held up the Prince’s hand, “You all know of this man’s bravery! I need not recount them for you. He has saved you from a death that far too many have suffered! I would hear you all cheer for the Prince of England!”

Great cries of ‘For the Prince’ and ‘God save the King’ rang out among the soldiers.

Skuli kept them all in his gaze as he looked out over the assembly, “We have seen great loss and great victory. You men know full well the trials that we have weathered…our great suffering. One man is here to say that you need not find sorrow at our losses. He is here to tell you all that you fight for a wondrous King and a grand Kingdom if you would have it!”

More cheers rang out as Uhtræd looked to the Duke with apprehension.

“Men…” Skuli continued, “…I would ask you why you fight this war? I would tell you that it is for country! It is for the King! It is for God himself!”

As the men began to strike their shields in excitement, Skuli grabbed Uhtræd’s hand once more and held it high, “We shall never see a defeat as terrible as that which has befallen us just now. I will tell you why! Look to your Prince!”

Uhtræd was uncomfortable as he whispered to the Duke, “I have done nothing, my Lord.”

Duke Skuli yelled over the great din of noise ignoring Uhtræd’s modesty, “He has struck down our great enemy! He has traveled you all to safety! And some day, God willing, he will be your King!”

The ragged troops were all in a fit of excitement and all began to shout, “For the Prince! For the Prince!! For the Prince!!!”

The Marshal continued to hold Uhtræd’s hand high for a time as the soldiers cheered before finally leading him off to speak privately. “That…my Prince…is how you keep spirits up after a great loss.”


Prince Uhtræd had few words to say, “I have done little to none…”

“No, my Prince,” Skuli answered with a serious face, “You have done more than you know. You give them something to fight for.”

“I would think your own bravery enough for them to follow you onto any field, my Lord Marshal,” the Prince suggested.

Skuli offered a half smile even though the thought caused him some sadness when he answered, “Not after this battle, my Prince. Twice now as their leader I have failed in their eyes whereas you are young and fresh and killed the leader of our northern enemy. From this day forward, they follow your father…and you.”

Uhtræd looked to the sky for a time as he attempted to keep his eyes from welling with tears over the loss of his boyhood friend but he contained it as best you could and turned back to Duke Skuli, “Is it always this difficult?”

Skuli placed a hand on the Prince’s shoulder, “Aye. Every time. Especially when your foe is well known to you. Most especially when they are well loved.”

“I simply wanted to protect your flank, my Lord…and he came at me with his sword,” Uhtræd tried to explain but Skuli shook his head.

“You need offer no words, my Prince. The death of Morcar’s son is indeed a sad day for the realm, but he was no longer the boy who shared your childhood. He was a man grown, and a slow witted one at that. He made his choice and he chose poorly. That is none of your fault.”

“Father will be sore with me,” Uhtræd shared as he looked to the distance.

“Aye…” Skuli nodded, “…but maybe not as sore as you might think. You fought with great bravery and even in my failure; your actions may have helped to bring this war to a close that much sooner. Tis true that Beorhtmaer is a studied veteran who will continue to fight as long as his liege’s men tell him to, but that Duchy is now in the hands of a child barely one summer in age. It is a blow to all of our enemies and one the King should appreciate greatly.”

“He will surely return home at the now,” the Prince added, “And he will be very disappointed that he must end his campaign in Normandy.”

Skuli offered a kind smile, “That fault lies with me, my Prince. That was none of your doing. You may hear strong words from your father when he returns, but I am certain that the King will save the harshest ones for mine own ears.”
 
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So Uhtræd has "won his spurs" as it were, and in a bloody little affair too. And yes, whilst he might attract some ire, I do think his father should reflect on what he was doing at that time.

As for Lord Eadger ... his end seems a sad demise of Morcar's hopes. There is some real sense of pain there, remembering again those early scenes. A mercy that old man did not live to see it.
 

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If William had been able to bring the Yorkist forces down to join his own at Gainsborough or Boston, he might already be king. So that's why he should have paid more attention to the strategic principle of mass. But even so, matters are now quite serious - it looks as though the Yorkists under Beorhtmaer can just about march where they want and do what they will.

I suspect in the real world the death of an important figure like the Duke of York would take some time to resolve and might even put paid to the Yorkist campaign for this season. Since it is the AI in charge I expect it to come on like Juggernaut until it is stopped. The question is whether the Royalists have enough men left to do the stopping.

So. Now's the time to see who has the money, the men and the grit to last. My money's still on Eadgar, but only because William is still in the wind. If he turns up with the Yorkist army, I might change my mind. But if Eadgar wins, Morcar's house must be rooted out of York entirely and forever.
 

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Seconding @stnylan's sentiments. If Morcar could see what his progeny have made of his inheritance... well, I won't say he'd weep openly, at any rate.

The old tragedy of "brother against brother." Perhaps Uhtræd and Eadgar weren't literal brothers, but it must have been a heart-wrenching experience for two men who grew up together and shared many memories to find one another on opposite sides of a life-or-death struggle. We see a little of what went through the Prince's mind; I wonder what it would be like to get a glimpse into the Duke's. "You should not be here!" indeed.

Speaking of glimpses into people's heads, I wonder how the elder Eadgar and Eadwin will each take the news. The son-in-law has killed the nephew; the godson lies dead at the hands of the trueborn son.
 

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A marvellous chapter and you said you were no good at battle scenes!? Pffft! Finally the young prince earns his spurs and takes command. He is, after all, a much better commander than Duke Skuli. The quesuion is what troops will he command? From what you say you hint that Eadgar will be returning hotfoot from Normandy with no strategic aims achieved there whatsoever. The war drags on...
 
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What an update! So sad to see the Prince kill his boyhood friend. But it was clear the latter had no qualms himself to try the other way around. ALthough, it was clear he didn't like it either... I think the King might have to appoint his son the marshall now, between Skuli's illness and his son's bravery.
 

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Very good battle description, coz!
Thank you, good sir!

So Uhtræd has "won his spurs" as it were, and in a bloody little affair too. And yes, whilst he might attract some ire, I do think his father should reflect on what he was doing at that time.

As for Lord Eadger ... his end seems a sad demise of Morcar's hopes. There is some real sense of pain there, remembering again those early scenes. A mercy that old man did not live to see it.
It was quite bloody indeed. I considered several ways to write it but finally decided it was best from Uhtræd's POV. It was time. And once that thought hit me, then I knew it had to be him that killed Duke Eadgar. Tragedy in the best sense.

If William had been able to bring the Yorkist forces down to join his own at Gainsborough or Boston, he might already be king. So that's why he should have paid more attention to the strategic principle of mass. But even so, matters are now quite serious - it looks as though the Yorkists under Beorhtmaer can just about march where they want and do what they will.

I suspect in the real world the death of an important figure like the Duke of York would take some time to resolve and might even put paid to the Yorkist campaign for this season. Since it is the AI in charge I expect it to come on like Juggernaut until it is stopped. The question is whether the Royalists have enough men left to do the stopping.

So. Now's the time to see who has the money, the men and the grit to last. My money's still on Eadgar, but only because William is still in the wind. If he turns up with the Yorkist army, I might change my mind. But if Eadgar wins, Morcar's house must be rooted out of York entirely and forever.
Oh thank God that Yorkist force was so far north when William landed! You are so right. I could have been destroyed. And you are correct that the game AI does not act like it might IRL. Which may also explain why it might be difficult to destroy Morcar's line root and branch. Possible spoiler alert - it may not be the last time that side of the House of Hwicce gives me some issue.

Seconding @stnylan's sentiments. If Morcar could see what his progeny have made of his inheritance... well, I won't say he'd weep openly, at any rate.

The old tragedy of "brother against brother." Perhaps Uhtræd and Eadgar weren't literal brothers, but it must have been a heart-wrenching experience for two men who grew up together and shared many memories to find one another on opposite sides of a life-or-death struggle. We see a little of what went through the Prince's mind; I wonder what it would be like to get a glimpse into the Duke's. "You should not be here!" indeed.

Speaking of glimpses into people's heads, I wonder how the elder Eadgar and Eadwin will each take the news. The son-in-law has killed the nephew; the godson lies dead at the hands of the trueborn son.
We willl definitely see the perspectives of both Eadgar and Eadwin coming soon. As for what must have been going on inside Duke Eadgar's head...well, I can only assume with great military stats and yet given the slow trait, he would just barrel on through. It was indeed quite the shock to see his old friend there. Seems he thought he could just push him aside, apparently never having learned anything from their childhood together. At least, that's how I wrote it.

A marvellous chapter and you said you were no good at battle scenes!? Pffft! Finally the young prince earns his spurs and takes command. He is, after all, a much better commander than Duke Skuli. The quesuion is what troops will he command? From what you say you hint that Eadgar will be returning hotfoot from Normandy with no strategic sims achieved there whatsoever. The war drags on...
Shoot, I am still not quite happy with the scene myself. I've read so many better ones over the years. But thank you. On Uhtræd - stay tuned. As for Eadgar, he may have something to show for it but not everything he was hoping for. Read the next update.

What an update! So sad to see the Prince kill his boyhood friend. But it was clear the latter had no qualms himself to try the other way around. ALthough, it was clear he didn't like it either... I think the King might have to appoint his son the marshall now, between Skuli's illness and his son's bravery.
Thank you, Nikolai! Indeed, I felt I had to put that little aside in there to show that Uhtræd had little choice in his action against his old friend. And you may be right about Uhtræd...keep reading.


To all - I am so pleased the last scene had the power in it I hoped for. It was quite a shock to me in-game. This is the first child (that mattered at any rate) that was born after the game started, grew to maturity and has now died. That it was Morcar's son made it even more impactful. Let us remember that when young Eadgar was born, I was playing Morcar at the time so I got to name him. I named him Eadgar as an homage thinking the game might go rather differently. That it has taken this macabre turn, well...I suppose it works for the story but it was quite sad. To make that impact more meaningful, I decided to have him die at Uhtræd's hand. This will play into matters coming up.

Further, I had originally planned on putting the next scene (or a version of it) at the tail end of the last one. When the battle scene grew too long, I decided to hold it over which may have been the wise move as it helped me flesh it out a bit more (though it does cause a slight double-Eadgar scene in that the one to follow the next update may cover some of the same ground.) The next few months are rather interesting.

The next scene will arrive in a matter of minutes so stay tuned while I check for typos once more. And as always, thank you all so much for your excellent readership!
 

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The Rightful King


Rouen, France – March 1091


The King’s secretary sat in his tent writing up the latest dispatches to send home to the Lord Chancellor of England at the spymaster’s request. Swithelm of Boston was a disciple of Lord Eadræd and had grown in much favor with both the spymaster and the King once they learned of his great intellect. The King especially appreciated the man’s scholarly approach to matters and had given Swithelm many more duties as they traveled to Normandy.

He finished off his last letter telling Duke Eadwin of the trials of this last month. It included both the great famish and starvation within the walls of the keep at Rouen as well as a late raid of their camp by the defenders and the sure disease that always accompanied a siege. As he began to fold the note, a page moved inside the tent to give him a letter from home.

The seal was from the Lord Chancellor himself and as Swithelm read the words, a great pall fell upon his face. He did not even finish the letter before rising and rushing from his tent. Weaving through the camp past many busy soldiers, he found the tent of his master, Lord Eadræd.

“You must see this!” he announced as he entered.

Eadræd was pouring over his own notes but quickly rose to take the letter in hand and once he spied the words, he grabbed at Swithelm’s arm and dragged him from the tent to go and find the King. They found Eadgar standing at the top of a newly built wooden tower overlooking the stone walls of the keep at Rouen. He was perched at the edge with his hands gripping at the side and seemed to find a shock at the visit of his men.

The spymaster made a deep bow and Swithelm followed him. Eadræd then stood with a terrible fear on his face, “Your Grace, a great tragedy has occurred in England.”

“What news is this?” King Eadgar asked as he took a step forward.

Eadræd could barely speak the words but pushed himself to tell his King, “The Lord Marshal has met a great defeat at the hands of Lord Mayor Beorhtmaer. His force was nearly destroyed at Cambridge and that Yorkist commander followed to Waltham and left our Marshal with naught but a hundred men at best.”


The King was shocked, “How could this be possible? I had thought Beorhtmaer to be in Scotland.”

Swithelm took the chance to speak up, “He was, Your Grace…but we received news that the Lord Mayor was to move south just a few days ago. There was no thinking that he would make such quick work of his travel to meet our Marshal.”

Eadgar sighed, “Well there is where you have the wrong of it, sir. Had you brought me this note, I might have told you that he was capable of such actions.”

Eadræd bowed, “It is to my blame that you should direct your ire, Your Grace. With all you have in mind at the now, it did not seem of import as we know Lord Skuli to be a very competent general.”

“That he is,” the King scowled, “But this latest news is more than terrible. Is our Lord Skuli even still with us?”

“Oh yes…he was able to save many of the wounded and brought those other able bodied soldiers to a safe place far away from the enemy, Your Grace,” Eadræd attempted to assuage the King’s worry.

King Eadgar sensed that something was amiss in the telling, “Do you have the note, my Lord?”

Eadræd saw the withering glare from the King and handed it over with reticence, “I do, Your Grace. It will tell you what I have, though there is more that you may not like to see.”

Eadgar took the letter and read. His spymaster and Swithelm both watched the King’s eyes grow wider and wider at every line. Finally, Eadgar looked up in great sadness, “This is more than just a poor note, sirs. The words speak of other than just the loss of an army. This letter reads all the way to a loss in the House of Hwicce and what is more, a potential for mine own son to suffer that same fate!”

The spymaster lowered his head, “It was a great sadness to learn of the death of Duke Eadgar of York, Your Grace. I know you were close to him at one time.”

“I was close to him and his father…as was my son! And now I read that one has killed the other in a battle to which I strictly forbade the Prince to join?!”

“Your Grace…” Swithelm attempted to cool his King’s temper, “…we all know well your good and right reasoning for keeping Prince Uhtræd from the field, but youth is hard to corral. As you have read, the Lord Chancellor tells us of his great bravery all in the name of saving the Lord Marshal. It is a great sadness to see such a young man struck down as Duke Eadgar, but our Lord Eadwin suggests that the Prince had little choice.”

“He was NOT supposed to be there!” Eadgar yelled loud enough for the Normans to hear him.

Eadræd tried to offer some soothing words, “Our Lord Skuli may have been cut down in his stead, Your Grace. That he was not is entirely due to your son’s great actions it seems. It is a miracle, is it not?”

The King calmed his anger but kept a firm tone as he looked to the two men, “It is a miracle that we have not yet lost this war. I read in this note that those few Normans left on the Isle have now joined with Beorhtmaer and as well that Lord Eadmund once more raises a force to try and take back Winchester. How am I to take this keep and…”

As Eadgar trailed off lost in a world of thought, Swithelm tried to give him some wise considerations, “It may be stepping further than my role, Your Grace…and we all surely understand your great frustration…but this keep is nearly fallen. You have starved them out and it is like to surrender at any day now. This will surely be a great blow to the Duke of Normandy. You will have bested him on the field and taken his home. He could do neither.”

“Indeed…” Eadræd continued, “…To end this campaign in Normandy at the now is no loss at all. You will have accomplished your task as the Bastard never did. We may see this siege through and then return to England and best whatever our enemy has to offer. Your force is larger and you have done it time and time again. It is no great cause for worry, Your Grace.”

Eadgar looked to them both as he kept a steady temper, “I have many causes for worry. I worry about my Kingdom. I worry about my son. I worry for the now even younger Duke of York and what that means for my Kingdom. I worry that we have still not sighted William of Normandy in all of England. I worry that this keep will not fall. And I worry over my people that have seen near constant warfare for these past twenty five years. This realm cannot stand with such great betrayal. So I will indeed return home once this fortress is handed to us. And when this great struggle has ended, we will all have a great reckoning.”

The King’s servants bowed at his words and backed away leaving Eadgar to stew in his anger and frustration. He turned to look back at the keep and could see that it was soon to fall. And suddenly, he thought of Morcar. Was this his eternal vengeance from beyond the grave over actions made years ago? Eadgar knew that betrayal was not paid in full by further acts in the same vein. His old benefactor was now joined by both of his eldest sons and the line continued on with a small babe. Eadgar sighed as he thought of his own son and the peril that Uhtræd so longed for and now had achieved. He did not wish that, but he knew war to be a terrible thing. He could shield the Prince no longer.

Within a week, the castle at Rouen would fall to Eadgar’s forces and he took ship for a return to England immediately. The King readied himself as there were to be many meetings ahead, none of which he desired but he had little choice. In each, a part of him would change. Old ties broken. New rifts opened. And still, the war would not end.


Eadgar Returns to England
 
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Yep: Pappy is not happy.

Let's hope Beorhtmaer and the Yorkists don't accomplish anything of note before Eadgar can get his army home. Let's hope the defenders of Rouen don't get the news and decide to hold on until Eadgar has to quit the siege. And let's hope that William turns up somewhere innocuous... he might be old, may be wounded and is now smeared with defeat in battle and the failure of his campaign - but he is still William the Conqueror.

I intend to call him William the Unstoppable from now on, or just Juggernaut. No matter what his losses, he just - keeps - coming - back.
 

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Oh for gods sake, just die already Normans! Or someside anyways. Seriously, this war is starting to become something akin to what we would see in wars of the roses (not even the he Stephen/Matilda one had this many people die, including really powerful and important nobles). This wars needs to be over yesterday. The only consolation is that with Normandy completely taken, it is certinaky going to end soon. It's all back to England again now. No one has anywhere else left to go.
 

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I think Eadger is going to have to learn that Uhtræd is not a cipher, but very much his own man.

There comes a time for every child when they realise their parents are just as human as they are. Likewise, for every parent there comes a time when their child is not just a child any more. I do think that Eadger is discovering that just now.
 

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Being the King isn't all it's made out to be. At least from the second to last paragraph it seems he has internally reconciled with the fact his son is now a more or less grown man, and won't be too harsh on him. With all these problems, a deeply troubled father-son relationship isn't what Eadgar needs right now.
 

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I certainly hope Eadgar is mild in his treatment of his disobedient son. He needs him more than ever.
 

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There comes a time for every child when they realise their parents are just as human as they are. Likewise, for every parent there comes a time when their child is not just a child any more. I do think that Eadger is discovering that just now.

Couldn't agree more with what @stnylan says here! The king's frustrations indeed mirror the readers in that this war drags on and on but methinks the end is in sight. Well written and a good glimpse into the fears playing at Eadgar's mind. Just don't alienate your son! If you love someone you must let them free-looking forward to the next chapter and whether the king will take that advice on board :p

Oh and congrats for the award by the way (2nd time in 3 months?) Fully deserved
 

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Yep: Pappy is not happy.

Let's hope Beorhtmaer and the Yorkists don't accomplish anything of note before Eadgar can get his army home. Let's hope the defenders of Rouen don't get the news and decide to hold on until Eadgar has to quit the siege. And let's hope that William turns up somewhere innocuous... he might be old, may be wounded and is now smeared with defeat in battle and the failure of his campaign - but he is still William the Conqueror.

I intend to call him William the Unstoppable from now on, or just Juggernaut. No matter what his losses, he just - keeps - coming - back.
No, pappy is not. Especially with the unstoppable William still at large.

Oh for gods sake, just die already Normans! Or someside anyways. Seriously, this war is starting to become something akin to what we would see in wars of the roses (not even the he Stephen/Matilda one had this many people die, including really powerful and important nobles). This wars needs to be over yesterday. The only consolation is that with Normandy completely taken, it is certinaky going to end soon. It's all back to England again now. No one has anywhere else left to go.
Well, Normandy is not completely taken, only Rouen. But it will be that much harder to raise levies for William if he attempts. And I agree...just die already, Normans!

I think Eadger is going to have to learn that Uhtræd is not a cipher, but very much his own man.

There comes a time for every child when they realise their parents are just as human as they are. Likewise, for every parent there comes a time when their child is not just a child any more. I do think that Eadger is discovering that just now.
I believe that is very correct and Eadgar is just now starting to see it. He had hoped it might come at a later date, but he no longer has that luxury.

Being the King isn't all it's made out to be. At least from the second to last paragraph it seems he has internally reconciled with the fact his son is now a more or less grown man, and won't be too harsh on him. With all these problems, a deeply troubled father-son relationship isn't what Eadgar needs right now.
I agree but cannot promise things will go entirely well. Keep reading.

I certainly hope Eadgar is mild in his treatment of his disobedient son. He needs him more than ever.
Very much so!

Hey! been enjoying reading this in the background, and I've nominated you for WritAAR of the Week ... Congrats :)

https://forum.paradoxplaza.com/foru...ritaar-of-the-week-redtemplar.166110/page-397
Hey - thank you, RedTemplar!! That was quite unexpected and very much appreciated! I'll head over the the thread and say something in a bit but this made my day!

Couldn't agree more with what @stnylan says here! The king's frustrations indeed mirror the readers in that this war drags on and on but methinks the end is in sight. Well written and a good glimpse into the fears playing at Eadgar's mind. Just don't alienate your son! If you love someone you must let them free-looking forward to the next chapter and whether the king will take that advice on board :p

Oh and congrats for the award by the way (2nd time in 3 months?) Fully deserved
I can say the war is closer to the end now than it is to the beginning, if that helps. And indeed, Eadgar does not wish to alienate his son, but perhaps protect him. I think Uhtræd is too old for that now, and too much in the thick of it for it to work. There may also be a wild card coming that trips up this whole thing. ;)


To all - the next update follows after a typo pass. It may cover some of the same ground as the above passage but Eadgar has had some time to think and now speak with the one man he truly wants to answer some questions (and also the one that may be able to give him the best advice.) Thanks, as always, for your great readership and excellent comments and thanks again to @RedTemplar for the very kind nod!
 

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The Rightful King


Essex, England - April 1091


“Where is my son?!” King Eadgar bellowed to his Chancellor as Duke Eadwin kept his bow.

“Your Grace,” Eadwin finally stood and looked with apprehension to the King, “He has traveled Lord Skuli to his home in Norfolk. The Lord Marshal would need a proper place for his recovery and his men have been released.”

Eadgar stared at the Chancellor, “As there were so few of them from my understanding, it would seem a great favor to their families.”

“Quite so, Your Grace,” Eadwin lowered his head.

“I may ask of you, Lord Eadwin…” Eadgar took a step forward, “…Why was my son anywhere near this terrible battle? Did I not give you instruction enough?”

Eadwin looked to the King directly, “Prince Uhtræd is a strong willed man, Your Grace. I gave him no leave to join with Lord Skuli, but there was naught I could do to stop him.”

“Why would he leave his wife and child to lose his life in this manner?!” Eadgar asked with pleading eyes.

“That is just it, Your Grace,” Eadwin answered with a firm nod, “He did not lose his life. In truth, he saved one and more. The Prince acted with great bravery and fortitude. You should be very proud of your son.”

Eadgar turned to find some ale as he responded, “Of course I am proud of my son. I always have been. But I left strict orders that have been ignored. I know not who to blame and have not the time to consider it at the now as that old veteran tries my patience.”

The Duke nodded his head, “His victories of late are a grievous loss to us, and there can be no doubt. But Eadgar…look to your son as a salvation.”

The King turned to Eadwin with an angry brow that soon softened, “I know not what liberties you take, my Lord. I have warned you against them in the past and will do so again. But you speak true. We have not the forces we need for a speedy resolution to this struggle and we require more than one army to exact such an ending.”

Eadwin offered a brief smile, “Again I say, look to the Prince. Even in their great loss, Skuli’s men revered him for his actions. He has a great military mind surely inherited from you. His bravery is undoubted and his youth is a thing for which the men take great pride. They love his promise, Your Grace. As should you.”

Eadgar turned with a quizzical eye, “My God…do I even have a Kingdom at the now or has my son usurped it?”

The Duke frowned, “Jealousy does not become you, Your Grace.”

“Tis not jealousy, my Lord Eadwin…it is pride wrapped in disappointment. Uhtræd would have his chance, surely. But not in this struggle. I did not wish it! And yet, he disobeys and leads me to no end of worry.”

Duke Eadwin nodded his head with appreciation, “It is well understood the care you take for your family, and especially your heir. But I have told you that he is a man to put forward. He makes your reign stronger. He may help you win this war if he has not already. You cannot keep the Prince locked away, especially not at the now.”

Eadgar made a deep sigh as he answered, “I know it. I had simply hoped to shield him from such horrors for a little longer. But now? That hope dies along with poor young Eadgar.”

“It could not be helped, Your Grace. Had it not happened at the Prince’s hand, it surely would have followed by some other grim reaper,” Eadwin answered with a solemn face.

“I remember the day of his birth, Eadwin…” Eadgar looked to his old friend with sadness.

The Duke nodded, “Though I was not there for that joyous occasion, I do as well. Morcar was so proud and it seemed to pull him from his great sickness. He and I were not close at the time, but I still recall the great pleasure it brought to him and his wife.”

“And now the boy is gone,” Eadgar answered as he found a stool to sit. “He was named for me, you know? Regardless of his actions, that was a great kindness by Morcar. And to have two boys born at the same time and grow together as brothers…and now have one die at the hand of the other? Not even you would have done such a thing.”

Eadwin could not help but offer a brief smile, “Do not presume that I would not had I the chance, Your Grace. Morcar and I were never that close. Our feud began the day he himself was birthed from our mother.”

Eadgar looked up with tears in his eyes, “I know it well. But the boy…”

“A foolish child, it is sad to say,” Eadwin was quick to respond.

“You speak of truth once more, my Lord,” Eadgar stood again and moved to his Chancellor, “He was a witless child and even more so as an adult. Yet I grieve for his father, even though he is long gone from us. Morcar did not deserve this even with his many faults. And that it came from mine own son’s hand…”

“Your Grace, you cannot take on this blame,” Eadwin tried to counsel.

Eadgar looked to him with a great sorrow, “Perhaps it is deserved after mine own actions.”

The Duke placed a hand on Eadgar’s shoulder, “I would not spend your strength on that. You have not the time for it in any ways. There may always be a moment for remembrance of the past, Your Grace, but this is not one of them. The Prince will be fine and well adjusted to his actions, I may assure you. And you must go and do what you can to best the Lord Mayor Beorhtmaer.”

The King sighed once more, “Yet another old friend…”

“The longer one lives, the more they are like to encounter such in life, Your Grace,” Eadwin was quick to respond.

Eadgar looked to Eadwin with sad eyes, “It is all too awful. I would blame William for all of this.”

“He did not meet his trust,” Eadwin answered with firmness.

“No…” Eadgar looked to his Chancellor, “…he did not. I never should have given him my trust.”

The Duke offered a slight smile, “It was not you that gave him such trust. Once more, you may place that blame on my brother.”

The King turned his back to Eadwin as he moved to fetch his cup of ale, “I would not speak of this any more at the now. I will travel to Bedford and face our enemy. And I would send you to fetch my son.”

“As you wish, Your Grace,” Eadwin bowed.

Eadgar turned again before taking down his drink, “We shall have words again, my Lord. I be not pleased at the running of this realm in my absence. I do not wish to find fault, but I am forced to search for answers.”

The Chancellor bowed once more, “Those answers will be readily given once you have defeated this foe, Your Grace.”

“By God, I hope it so,” the King answered with a great sigh.


First it was Prince Uhtræd vs. Duke Eadgar...now it is King Eadgar vs. Beorhtmaer
 
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Uneasy lies the head that wears the crown. Morcar learned it, and now so too does Eadgar, in his own way. Fortunately, despite Eadwin's misgivings, Eadgar seems to have the strength of character not to fall into habitual paranoia -- thus far.

I do have to admit to some trepidation contemplating the showdown between Eadgar and Beorhtmaer. On the one hand, it really is tragic how it's come to this; I've been a big fan of Beorhtmaer and Eadgar since they were first brought together, and seeing them fall on opposite sides of the civil war like this has been quite heart-wrenching. On the other hand, a confrontation is nigh-inevitable, given how they're essentially the linchpins of their respective sides, and I don't see either as likely to give the other quarter. The good of the realm and the defense of one's home must come first.

I do, however, want to leave you with the closing thought that if you have Eadgar kill Beorhtmaer off, I will hate both him and you forever. No pressure, right? :p (I kid, I kid.)
 

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Ahh, if there is one individual who has the courage to stand up to Eadger's rage - and who Eadger values highly enough to listen to, even when he is enraged - it is Eadwin, the wily old veteran. Who has seen so much.

It is good to see Eadger soften a little on this. Whilst I would not be surprised if there was still a little umbrage between father and son, it no longer feels so threatening. More of a spring shower than a summer storm, as it were.

Going back to Eadwin a moment - a thought has been growing in my mind that, in a very real sense, this is not Eadger's tale - though he features prominently. No, it is Eadwin's, for he too has featured prominently, but more so he has always been centre stage.