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The Perla Negra kept her course for the Dane. Pelleggi’s command of navigation and seamanship was keeping her directly on a course to collide with the weakest spot on the Dane’s hull. For her part, the Dane lazily maneuvered to ram them, but was quite unaware of where to properly point her bow. It was obvious the Danish captain figured that any collision would sink the Castilian vessel.

In one sense, he was right. Clearly, the mass of the Dane would make long term survival impossible. However, Miguel found himself praying less for victory and more for extra precious seconds above the waves. Victory could be assured if they remained above the water, on fire, and ready to explode, for an extended period.

The first cracks of musket fire could be heard as Scalia’s marines opened fire. Their discipline ensured that the firepower of their muskets was not wasted. No, it was sapping the strength of the Danish crew surprisingly well, considering the dampness in the air. Even when Miguel heard the telling “click” of a failed report, the marines discipline did not allow them to curse. Instead, their frustration moved them to reload faster and more efficiently.

That’s it, Scalia! Good man, pouring on that fire. Even misses will keep the Danes heads down. And for every sailor hit by a musket ball, that’s one less pair of arms to put out a fire or untangle rigging. And what are you doing, Pelleggi? Oh, I see. Compensating for the Dane’s slight turn by pointing our bow a bit to starboard. That’s the spot you said you wanted to hit, and it looks like we will. Wait, I better grab a hold…

At first, the noise was little more than a scraping lurch. It was only after a moment that a truly hideous grinding sound came from the wood of both ship’s hulls. Everyone on board the Perla Negra, true sailors to a man, winced upon hearing it. No ship should ever make that sound. And, as many began to guess, the Perla Negra would never be witness to it again.

Some of the crew had fallen down, but Scalia’s yell got the attention of everyone as he charged, rapier in hand, to the Danish ship. It could only be described as a charge, though no cavalry were involved. While slower than the charge of a Castilian line of cavalry, it was a charge that deftly avoided ropes, powder, sails, and a few Danish gunners. He had not bothered to give any orders to follow, but his marines went with their trained instincts and followed him. In their wake, confusion swept across the Dane’s decks.

Must get up… Damn, my head hurts. What did I hit it on? Oh, never mind. What’s going on? Excellent. You truly have the upper hand, Scalia. And if nothing else, those gunners will never fire upon a Castilian ship again. But what of the damage? What of the damage?...

Miguel moved to see where contact with the Dane had been made. He spied a small hole, well above the water line, where their bow had rammed the Dane. For her part, the Perla Negra had no bow left in the traditional sense. Only a crumpled, wooden stump remained of the forecastle. And water could be seen trickling through the gaps in the wood.

No! Too much on us, and not enough on them. We’ll sink too fast…

A blast of heat and flame caused him to recoil. After a few moments, he moved in a position to look.

How… how did that happen? Wait, is that what I think it is? Praise the Lord, it is…

Tar and pitch had been lit and apparently mixed with a bit of powder to give it some extra incentive to burn in the moist air. But what drew Miguel’s attention was the burning tar, pouring through the small hole in the Dane’s hull. Castilian fire was spreading onto the lower decks of the Dane.

And with Scalia’s marines on their decks, they’ll never put it out in time. And what is this? Damn Pelleggi, you have managed to foul us horribly with the Dane. Were this in any other circumstances, I would have you flogged for such a fouling of our rigging and theirs. But if I’m right, we won’t need anything except our own sails and rope to bind us to them. No, she’s not getting away. Not this time.

The whistle and impact of shot around his ship caused Miguel to turn around. The Carro del Sol was firing at both of their ships, as per her orders. Damage was being given out equally to Dane and Castilian alike.

Getting closer, are you? Why would you be doing that? Unless… Yes, you are aren’t you? Going to give the Dane a dose of double shot. Well, it certainly can’t hurt. Just don’t fire at the rigging, whatever you do. Jesus, and could you stop firing all your guns at once? You’re hitting us too much.

There was no way to use the signal flags to communicate this in any detail, and so the almirante just stood silently, trying to avoid the fire of his own fleet.

And it’s only now that they get a chance to shoot at me without any punishment. Irony, gentlemen. A pity you are too busy to appreciate it.

Still, the fire was spreading slowly on the Danish ship. Very slowly.
 

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Secret Master said:
And it’s only now that they get a chance to shoot at me without any punishment. Irony, gentlemen. A pity you are too busy to appreciate it.

:cool: Now is it time for the fog to roll back in? A last struggle in the fog would create a memorable ending. I still think he might live through this but I'm having my doubts. :(

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Flames. Clouds. Smoke. Blood. Burned flesh. A hint of vomit. Salt. All of these sensations, and more besides, assaulted Miguel. It was grotesque. It was insane.

It was war.

And as he bore silent witness to all of it, he betrayed no fear or concern. His visage was carved out of dignified and unemotional marble.

I’ll not give the Dane the satisfaction of a grimace. Nor will I dampen the men’s spirits with a look of concern. I can see them looking at me, wondering whether we are winning. Therefore, I’ll show them we are. My aloof and impassive look will contrast well with Scalia’s frenzied demonstrations and Pelleggi’s domineering behavior. If we weren’t winning, none of the three of us would be acting as we are, now would we?

It was clear that the Danes had been spurred into action. The initial confusion on their deck scattered them and confused them, but now they were starting to organize. Scalia and a few of his Marines were slowly being surrounded by the Danish crew. Yet, they fought on, seemingly oblivious to their danger. Pelleggi had rallied the sailors and gunners, inciting them to fight alongside the Marines. Now there were Castilians all over the decks and rigging of both ships. Miguel noted with a smile that someone had sealed a hatch shut on the Danish ship, limiting access to the top deck. The gunners below decks were having a hard time either fighting the fire or helping with the boarding action.

Still, more and more Castilian blood was being shed and it was not clear to what extent the fire had spread.

If only I could see whether the fire was too far advanced on the Dane. If it was, we could order the crew to abandon ship and then detonate the powder magazine. There’s no need for all of us to go down with the ship…

Pelleggi was keeping an eye on the deck of his own ship. The last thing he wanted was a group of Danes running around behind him as he pressed forward to the Dane’s central mast with a group of gunners. His vigilance was rewarded when he spied a few Danish marines jumping from the rigging to the Perla Negra’s deck. He then noted with some anxiety that they were heading for the almirante.

“Protect the almirante! Get back to the ship. Kill those men…”

Hmmm, I wonder why Pelleggi is making all those gestures. What is he trying to tell me? Wait, are those…

Miguel drew his rapier just in time. The Danes were upon him with some swiftness. It was four opponents versus Miguel alone.

I wonder what my father would have done in this situation. Wait, didn’t he have a fight like this in his youth?

Swing. Thrust. Dodge. Chop. Parry.

Yes, I think he did. How did he win it? What was the key?

Tumble. Kick. Thrust. Recover blade. Retreat from corpse.

You know, for once I wish I had listened to those boring old stories that the Prince of Granada would tell.

Parry. Parry. Parry. Swing. Thrust.

Dammit, I will remember! What was it he did?

Chop. Chop. Parry. Dodge. Chop. Dodge newest corpse. Retreat. Wipe blood from brow.

It was against Neapolitans. Yes, it was while on campaign against Naples.

Dodge. Tumble. Jump. Roll. Pivot. Plant feet. Parry.

Something about him on foot against knights, wasn’t it?

Thrust. Recover blade. Retreat from corpse.

Well, damn. I can’t remember.

Chop. Parry. Parry. Dodge. Thrust. Recover blade. Step aside from corpse.

I don’t suppose it matters now. It’s not like these Danes are on horseback. So much for making father proud by using his old strategies.

He took a long breath as he let the weariness drain from his arms. He noted that his blade was coated in thick, viscous blood.

It was only then that he turned to see Pelleggi and a few gunners standing bear him, blinking as they stared.

“Well, Pelleggi, is there something you need?”

“I, err, well I was going to…”

“Going to what? Are there other Danes on our decks? Never mind that now. What’s our status?”

“Sir, we are, err, maintaining our attack on their deck. Still no sign as to the damage the fire is causing.”

“Very well. You may continue the boarding action.”

“Of course, sir.”

The almirante climbed back to his previous position and resumed looking stern and important.

“Umm, sir? You still want us to guard the almirante?”

Pelleggi looked at his gunners.

“Err, no. That won’t be necessary. Follow me, lads.”

I wish they would stop gawking. It's not like I did anything that spectacular. Didn't the Prince of Granada mention that he and my father managed to fight off thirty or forty mounted knights together? If we're going to defeat the Danes, it'll take more than a few victories like mine to accomplish it.
 
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Thanks for the high praise. A pleasure to have you aboard, as it were.

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Well, don't feel too sorry for the Danes. In the game, the event that inspired this whole little episode was a single Danish ship who caused my entire fleet to retreat twice. Not bad. Not bad at all.

Ben Music

Thanks. Oh, and I'm wondering, are you going to do a CK AAR? I might once this project is finished (or even earlier, if I can do a short one).

Storey

He lives for today, at any rate. And yes, I think the fog should be rolling back in right about now. Of course, I have other plans for the fog that go beyond tension and drama. This fog has been planned for a very long time. ;)
 

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Valdemar said:
Hehe he seems a bit dumbwitted your Almirante, or lets say unawares of his own capabilities :)

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Hmm, your post got me thinking that this last scene didn't quite do what I wanted it to do. Time for a rewrite, I think. He's not supposed to look stupid. He's supposed to look like someone who is unaware that he actually really good and would make his father proud, even if he doesn't do things like dad would.

Hmmm....

EDIT: I figured out what was wrong. I rewrote Miguel's parting thoughts at the end of the post. I won't bother copying and pasting it again, as its just a small change and its right up there on this page.
 
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Well I think you can chalk part of it down to my lack of proper wording.. it should not be that I think him dull, but unawares of his own abilities, and the effect it has on his surroundings..

Instead of dumb but in blind.. one thing is not to know his won abilities (as i already stated in the first post) another is to be unable to read the effects of ones actions in the responses of the rest.

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Valdemar said:
Well I think you can chalk part of it down to my lack of proper wording.. it should not be that I think him dull, but unawares of his own abilities, and the effect it has on his surroundings..

Instead of dumb but in blind.. one thing is not to know his won abilities (as i already stated in the first post) another is to be unable to read the effects of ones actions in the responses of the rest.

V
Well, you're previous statements sort of helped me figure out what I didn't like about the original wording even as I was doing the original post. Even if you don't think of him as an imbecile, I still like the new words better. Now it is much more "daddy" focused than "officer and crew" focused.

I want him to appear "grown-up" in his military behavior, but I still want him to have daddy issues. (Something resolves those later)
 

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Secret Master, I have only read through the first 5th of this wonderful story, but I can already tell that the rest of my reading will be very much enjoyed. Isabella has proven to be quite the tyrant and the fate of Torquemada (sp?) was quite surprising. Some of the ahistorical twists you have taken have proven to be quite interesting and lend a brilliant freshness to this tale. I am only saddened that I was not able to be around as each new update came about. As it is, I am enjoying it in it's (almost) entirety. Good to know you are continuing and I will touch base again once I have completed it. Thus far - outstanding!!
 
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Secret Master said:
Ben Music

Thanks. Oh, and I'm wondering, are you going to do a CK AAR? I might once this project is finished (or even earlier, if I can do a short one).
Gosh I wish I had the time! In fact my CK days (and anything related to computer gaming) have been dramatically cut, due to a dedicate re-commitment to married life.

Luckily, I still have time, during lunch, to follow this wonderful story! :)
 

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Coz: Glad to have you aboard. And I am complimented by your willingness to wade through the entirety of the work. It might take you a few days. Glad you're having a good time with it. :)

Ben Music: Ah, married life. I can see that taking up some of your time (though it will be time well spent, no doubt :) ). Interestingly enough, my beloved was playing CK with me just this afternoon, and gave me a number of dirty looks when I became Papal Controller and started looking lustfully at her Portugal. Needless to say, I avoided relationship strife and didn't excommunicate her. :D
 

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The fog had finally arrived. It’s grey shroud had descended upon the Perla Negra. The field of vision had narrowed to the point that only the decks of the two ships could be seen as the Danes and Sicilians fought and died together. Their cries of agony and triumph were muted as the mists flowed about them.

The Carro del Sol has slowed her firing. Dammit, man, just fire blindly into the mists! Oh, what am I saying, his gunners are probably having a hard time properly manning the cannons. Hell, I can barely see across to the Dane. I hate Scandinavian weather. I am never fighting here again. If I ever have the choice, that is…

Danes were starting to crawl along the decks and rigging of the Perla Negra. The Sicilian sailors, gunners, and marines were starting to lose ground to Danish numerical superiority. Furthermore, the Sicilians were cut off from one another. Scalia and his chosen were encircled and fighting for their lives atop the aft decks of the Dane. Pelleggi and his men were trapped by the forward most portside cannons of the Perla Negra. A few disorganized sailors found themselves standing by their almirante. They looked at him, waiting for instructions and a glimmer of hope.

What shall I say to them? How shall I give them hope? How indeed…

“Gentlemen, you have fought and died for your captain. Now, I ask for the honor of you fighting and dying beside me. There is no other way I would prefer to meet our Creator.”

Miguel lifted his rapier, and, without looking at their response, he plunged into the fighting upon the decks. The men followed him without hesitation.

Confusion began to reign as Miguel took the fight back to the Danes. Sounds mixed with smells which in turn mixed with vision to produce a blur of sensation. The blur only clarified when Dane would be vulnerable to a killing strike. Once the rapier was removed from the man’s viscera, the blur would return. It was grotesque, horrific work that showed no signs of abatement.

That smell… It’s sickening. What is it? Sea foam… mixed with blood… and burned flesh. I’m glad I haven’t eaten in awhile. Still, I haven’t reached Pelleggi yet. He keeps getting pushed further and further towards the decks of the Dane. We’ve got to get linked together. Being separated will have us lose the fight too quickly. And where the hell is Scalia? Wait, is that him atop the central mast of the Dane? What the Hell is he doing up there?

Miguel’s group seemed to press closer to Pelleggi’s group, but the success was only apparent. Pelleggi was creeping closer to the Dane’s decks with every second in the battle. At first, it seemed as if he was intentionally doing so; however, it soon became apparent that he wanted to retire to the center of the Perla Negra’s decks. He kept urging his men back towards the center, only to be repulsed by the innumerable Danes taking up positions there.

Wait, now we’re cut off from largest portion of our own decks. Dammit, the Danes are starting to scour the lower portions of the ship. They’ll reach the powder magazine! Scalia, where are you? We have to blow the powder now, before its too late.

Scalia was nowhere to be seen. Danes now controlled most of the decks of both ships. There were few Sicilians left, though they were all fighting in good form.

We’re not going to be able to detonate the magazine. We should never have tried so hard to attack their ship. Now what are we going to do? Fight? Yes, we will keep fighting for as long as possible. Wait, what is that I see over there? What could be making such an orange glow on the Dane? The fire? The fire has reached the uppermost decks? It must be out of control, then! We may have done it. Just a little longer. There goes the Carro del Sol firing again. I wonder where they hit us…

And then, the entire world exploded.
 

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Phew!!! That would be my first reaction to catching up to present. It's quite a read!

Wow!!! That would be my immediate second reaction as I marvel at the immense amount of incredible material you were and still are able to concieve here! There are so many great moments, it's hard to single any one out - though the deaths of both Isabella and Juanita are extremely powerful! They tend to stand out the most in my mind. I also note a certain parallel between the young Isabella and the current monarch, Enrique. Let us hope he does not follow in her path completely. :eek:

A testament to how truly outstanding this work is? The fact that my least favorite sub-story, that of Kurtz, I found to be the most well written! The images and path that you took him on were so good that even though my eyes wanted to skim through it, the literary part of my mind was held captive by the prose. Truly remarkable! :cool:

Now to present. The transition back into the writing has ben seamless, and I was most pleased to see that the major themes are still in your mind. It is rather ironic that Miguel had such a hard time remembering Carlos' story considering how many times it's been embellished. ;) Still, he seems to be well on his way to proving himself as a man outside of his father.

And what of our intrepid Inquisitor? And Carlos and Toledo? I have been hearing of this "death scene" for so many posts, and though I dread the moment, I cannot wait to see what you are able to do with it.

And finally - as has been said many times, but bears repeating...

All Hail Him!! :D
 

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A confused melee in a thick fog on the deck of a ship slippery with blood. :eek: Nice job capturing the claustrophobic feel of having to fight under those conditions. Now did our hero survive? My guess is…No. :(

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Okay SM... I have reading this exclusively for the last week or so (would have been quicker but work always seemed to intrude, bloody work :mad: ), and have to say that I am quite glad you came back from the real world to finish this quite entertaining AAR! (My boss would disagree, but who really ever cares what the boss says so long as he/she keeps signing the paycheck ;) )

Please tell me a miracle occurs in the mists of the Sund and Miguel! I won't hold my breath ( :( ) but as the saying goes, miracles do happen, eh?

Oh, and when does the death scene of Carlos & Toledo come about?
 

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Draco:It's good to have you aboard, Draco. And don't worry about bosses too much. Many pages of this were written while at work, though I had the luxury of not having much to do at the time.

Ahh, the death scene of Carlos and Toledo. First, it will not happen until the next war. They must still do some adivising for the young Enrique. So, it won't be for awhile yet. I keep thinking that I will wrap up this war quickly, but circumstances dictated otherwise.

As for miracles in the Sund, you'll just have to wait. I think its time to take a look at our Inquisidtion duo. :cool:

coz: All I can say is thank you. :)

Storey: Fog is a wonderful device, isn't it? As for Miguel, well, I think I might have already indicated, by accident, whether or not he survives. But since no one caught the oblique reference in a previous non-story post, I'll let everyone simmer for a day or two. We have a dynamic duo to look in on.