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AmbassadeBelgie

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I agree, it's a great story and if it is stopped I shall be very, very angry :p
No, really, continue...
Maybe you could meet a spy from the Duchy of Liège (which was independent from everybody including the Spanish until Napoleon crushed us!), both with the same aim; bringing down the French government...
I know the Duchy of Liège is not featured in EUII (damned shame, they exist from before 1400 till Napoleon) but characters coming from that region couldn't do any harm, could it?

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You lot have inspired me on!!! The next installment...

Escape from the Tower

The next day, Soldiers were pouring over Kingsley's suburban house in London. Flames were still licking away at the timber framework, and billowing smoke poured into the street. The house was a wreck.

But we were running. Running away from the chaos, the insanity of what had happened. And I was avenged. My parents murderer was dead, in one big boom.

We turned down an alleyway, running like hell towards Marie's hideout in Kensington. It ran between houses very close together, and gave the impression that we were running through a valley. But being it was the decaying streets of London, it seemed more like a valley of doom.

But our exit was soon blocked. Two soldiers came round the corner, taking us by surprise.

"You cannot pas through!" said one soldier.
"We are going to have to search you!" said the other.

Approaching us, the soldiers ripped my coat off, to find my musket, my sword and my dagger.

"Hey mate", said the first guard, "this coat smells of gunpowder!"
"Where have you just come from?" asked the other.
I said nothing. Marie nudged me, and when I looked, the pursed lips and threatening eyes were not needed. I would not squeal.
One of the soldiers poked me with his own musket.
"You're coming with us, you are."

And so, at gun-point, we marched, towards maybe, a certain doom.

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But it was not the Tower of London, as I was expecting, but a castle on the south bank. Forward we marched, over the drawbridge, and into the courtyard.

The residence was no longer used as a castle though. It was the home, to obviously a very rich baron. In the courtyard, we entered through a small door, that went up one of the many towers that jutted into the sky. Up a winding staircase, and into the top room of it. But the room was not a room of comfort, or even of simple residence, but a cell. A cell designed to keep the most determined of prisoners with no way of escaping.

We were pushed rather hardly into the cell. The soldiers laughed at us, and then walked off.

But after they walked off, I could hear another person approaching up the stairs.

Round the corner the person came, managing to see him through the flap in the cell door. It was my parents murderer.
He walked up to the door, and coughed.

"Good day, my young gentlemen and young lady."
"You!" I cried. Who are you!?"
"I am glad you asked!" he said. "My name is John. I shall not reveal my last name to you, because I do not trust you...yet."
He carried on.
"I've come to speak to you John. I managed to catch you thankfully. It was not very 'wise' to try and kill me. I am afraid, I am going to have to kill you. At dawn, you will be hanged, along with your...'pretty' friend."
In pure utter rage, I banged on the door.
"You should control that nasty temper of yours", laughed John the murderer, "the hangman will not be pleased at all!"
And with a swift turn, he walked back down the stairway.

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It was time for action again. Rolling up a trouser leg revealed a rope I always hid there. In my shoe, I found my trusty lock pick. It was now or never.

Slowly, with the lock pick, I managed to undo the lock to the window. Once, unlocked, it swung open, with an aganising grunt. Quickly, I attached the rope to a bed in the corner, and threw the rope out the window. Looking out the window, I saw it was a long way down, but at least was on the freedom side of the castle walls.

Marie watched in a mesmorised trance.
"John, you are incredible."
"No time", I said. "revenge is to long in coming!" At this, a grin spread across, as I grabbed hold of the rope.

We abseiled down the rope without a hitch. Luckily, the tower was not as tall as the first impression seemed to impress, so there was enough rope.

"Time to get my weapons back." I said.

Next time...Which John will die?
 

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Gosh! I really thought they were finished now! Great update, keep 'em comin'!!!!!!
btw, John didn't have any brothers or sisters now, did he? ;)

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Which John Will die?

Revenge would be mine. I would really kill this John, who for 12 to 13 years, I had sought to destroy.

Up to the castle drawbridge I approached, under the shroud of darkness. Lights shone from the key hole shaped windows, which illmunated the fortress style effect. Over the drawbeidge I crept, and up to the gate, which was surprisingly open.

Through the gate, into the courtyard, where half a dozen horses which were tied up, turned round to look at me. One of the horses neighed at seeing me.
"Quiet!" I said in a muffuled shout, as I tapped that horses head with my hand. Obeying my instruction, it dared not utter another word.

I looked up at the many turrets, and decided that my enemies residence was probably in the tallest tower. So up this I crept, careful not to utter a sound.

Up to the top of the stairs I got, and up to the door. I took a deep breath. "This is it", I said to myself.
On the door was a sign comfirming that this was indeed the right room. I tried the door, and it was indeed unlocked.

Suddenly, the door swung open by its own cause. But now, I was feeling suspicious. The gate was opened, there were no guards anywhere, and the door to my enemies room was unlocked.

As if to answer my question, a voice came from the back of the room - "I have been expecting you."

Somebody came from out of the darkness of the far side of the room. It was indeed my enemy.

"I prefer it this way, to kill you!" he said. "Just one on one. One of us will die, and I am quite sure, it will be you."
"Not if I have my way!" I shouted, as I drew my sword with all swiftness from my cloak.

We rushed at each other, and our swords clang with each other, the shere force sending us both to the ground. We both quickly got to our feet, and then the fight started for real.
For many minutes, our swords were blurred in the air, as each of us blocked each others jabs and blows. But we were starting to tire, and it was then that one swipe by my enemy slashed my cheek. The suddeness of this caught me off balance, and for a moment, the tide was against me.

"Hah!" he mocked. "I have you now!"
And then he raised his sword in the air. The sword would come down on me. It would soon be over. A life time of misery shall come to an end.

But a shocked look suddenly came on my enemies face. Looking up, I saw an arrow sticking out of his back. Looking behind him, I saw Marie, with a crossbow in her hands.

My enemy, now suffocating, fell to the floor. He looked up at me, with wide, terrified eyes.

"You will not kill me now!" he managed to choke.
"No" I said, "I will watch you die. Like you watched my parents die."
"What is that you say?" he said. "You are mistaken. You do not know the true facts."
"I saw you over my parents bodies!" I shouted. "How could you murder my mother, she was to innocent. I'm sure she would have given you all the money she had, instead of pillaging her dead body!!!"
Tears of anger were rolling down my cheeks. My quivering hand was now gripping my dagger. End it now. End it all. Revenge.
"Your mother was a bitch!", he said suddenly, but this sounded like his last breath. Then he loked calm.
"There is some information you need to know. When I die, which I will do soon, look in my left pocket. You will find a note, which I meant to give to you one day."
His eyes flickered, then he died.

Looking in his left pocket as he said, I pulled out a crumpled note. Then I read it.

"Dear John,

I had meant to tell you one day much that you needed to know. Questions that may have bugged you for so long about why you have no parents. How you have always seen me as a murderer and a thief. And I have seen how what I have done has turned you into what I am. Dishonest, deceitful and uncaring.

But what I have to say may shock you.

I am your father.

And it was I who murdered your mother. Your mother who secretly loved another man. When I caught them, I got angry - and I killed them. Nobody can take my wife. If they do, their life is over, as well as my wifes.

When I had killed them, you probably saw me crouching over them. That was because I was trying to make the dead mans face look like mine. I had changed my appearance to make myself look like some stranger.

Why did I not kill you? Well, you were innocent, I could not murder a five year old child. And I needed some sort of witness to a stranger.

Do not be angry son, I have loved you always, even if it did not seem so.

Your father, John, whom you are named after."


Next time...The war is over
 

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DAMN!! I KNEW IT!!!! I KNEW John would be his father several lines before I finally saw them words:D "I am your father". Made me think of Austin Powers:D

Perfect twist I am readin this one for sure!!!

Th :rofl:
P.S. Screenies N/A, right? Probably, but how IS the war with France going? And maybe pictures (not screenies but just pictures, you know) could help:D Seriously, now! This is GREAT STUFF!!!
 

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AmbassadeBelgie said:
DAMN!! I KNEW IT!!!! I KNEW John would be his father several lines before I finally saw them words:D "I am your father". Made me think of Austin Powers:D

Perfect twist I am readin this one for sure!!!

Th :rofl:
P.S. Screenies N/A, right? Probably, but how IS the war with France going? And maybe pictures (not screenies but just pictures, you know) could help:D Seriously, now! This is GREAT STUFF!!!

I'm sorry, but I don't have screenshots. Not much happened in the war, apart from one huge sea battle in the "Pas de Calais", where some 60 ships of mine wiped out a French fleet of about 45.

I simply didn't have enough troops or support amount to take on the French in their homeland.
 

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Ian Fleming eat your heart out! This story is so over-the-top it's a blast! :D The thing that really tickled me though was the rope up John's trousers and the lock-pick in his shoe - even if he did proceed to abseil out of the tower "without a hitch" ( :eek: don't know much about abseiling but that sounds a bit risky :p )
 

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YAY!!! Another person saw this AAR, It IS great isn't it, Farquharson?! I think this is a AA(w)Riting Legend in the making:D

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Right, here it comes, the last last installement. Maybe the AAR wasn't as long as it should have been, but it has been good to write, and I am encouraged by some of the feedback. I'm not sure what I am going to move onto next, but I promise, it'll be better!!!

The War is over

Down to Paris I travelled, to try to make sense of the past months. Or at least to bring sense to others.

"The War is over!" I shouted many times. And I would laugh. But not a laugh of goodwill, or a laugh of humour. It was a laugh of hatred, a laugh of insanity and how I was ridiculign everything I was.

There was a pain deep inside. Not because I was parentless, but because the new truth was too much to take. The new truth hurt so much, it blinded my heart. End it all, end it all. But not to end another persons life, but my own.

Then Marie would appear, reasoning with me, telling me that it would all be Okay, and that she would care for me, and protect me. Protect me from what? Myself? That was probably the most dangerous thing to me.

And then my Father would appear. How bad I had been. "End it all!", he would cry, "your going to hell anyway!!!"

Into the enourmous corridors of power the King of France lived in. Jeering walls, the constant drone of "end it all" surrounding me. Up to the throne. The King looked down at me. Peered down. I was sweating out of pure madness. Haha, it is the King. Shouldn't he have a royal potty. Haha.

The King is looking into my eyes. Eyes shouldn't look like the eyes of a dragon. Haha. I raise the dagger.

"The war is over!". I laughed, I cried. I slit my throat. I fell. And the image faded, as the world faded. Into the blackness.

The End.
 

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Well, not quite a Fleming style ending.

This was a great story, though I agree it ended much too soon! As for new ideas..hm...

The Napoleonic Era isn't bad. (1795 scenario) English or French.
The American War of Independence (1773 scenario) American or English, possibly French
The partitions of Poland (1773 scenario) - Prussian, Austrian, Russian
Scandinavia, Poland and Russia constantly danced leading to a war in the (1700 scenario.)
Perhaps hop back to 1492? Spain's discovered America, Portugal's working their way down the African coast, and England's hired you to steal their maps so they can explore too?
Or even 1419 - France and England are in the middle of a hundred year grudge match.
 

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Over already? :eek: Still it was fun, even if the ending was a little tragic. Isn't John meant to drift off into the sunset with Marie in a rowing boat or something? CatKnight certainly has plenty of ideas! I'll add another, if you want to continue the James Bond theme - how about an England-Scotland spy story? There was certainly plenty of intrigue going on between the two countries during 1419-1703.
 

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I've got an Idea already brewing up!

This story should hopefully be better yet. It will involve a group of travelling entertainers. You know, entertainers who earn money by playing instruments, and reading poetry, and doing acrobatic stuff and plays. But this is their cover for their "deeper" purpose!

There will be action, heartbreak, gore, romance and deep, deep dark secrets. I plan to set it in one of the later periods, either the revolution scenario, or the Napleonic one. I will play the game first, and then I will write the story in context to what happens in the game, similar to the AAR I just wrote.

One question. What does anybody know about entertainers of this era?

I promise you espionage!!!
 

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I know nothing about the entertainers, but must write two things:
a) ENDED WAY TOO SOON!!!!!b NOOOOOOOOOO!!!! But was a great read, all hail you!!
b) It's not the quality you should promise on now, it is perfect! It is the LENGTH!!! Longer than this one at least :D

It was great, look forward to your next one, and PM me when yiou start it, in case I miss it :)

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I'm decided on my next AAR. It will be based in England again, but using the Napoleonic Scenario.

The scenario will be called "The Entertainers!" I will be starting it in the next few days, as soon as I have finished playing out the game!
 

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YAY!!!!! Looking forward to it!!!

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I am thinking of rewriting this AAR. I've recently been playing an England Grand campaign (EU2, but not the EEP-AGC thingie), and was thinking of setting a new storyline, with our hero John in it still. Write to tell me what you think?
 

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Continue thisone and start the other onesimultaneously!!! Unless that´s too big a strain on your time... The choice, ultimately, is still yours, but as long as u keep writing its ok

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On second thought, I am puttiong too much stress on here. But let´s give the starting AAR a good funeral, though the writer better not die!

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The Entertainers better not end prematurely! :p
But seriously, you should definitely keep on writing, I love it!
And I just refreshed my memory by reading the end of the story on this page, and wished again he hadn't died, but found again that your skills in writing are amazingly high and that you shall not stop writing (or is that something I am telling myself to calm my troubled spirit ;))

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