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You say this section has been revised, and re-revised, etc...and it shows!
In my exceedingly humble opinion it flows very nicely.
I almost feel I've got to know Constance better in the last 8 pages than in the preceding 1200, and a most interesting character she is, too.
I also loved the playing of games inherent in Fulk's placement in the procession. Honouring him just enough, but no more - the tournament permitting him to regain the prestige lost from his being given the place of a boy...yes, very nice. Nuanced, is I believe the (/an) appropriate word.
Well done Froggy, take as long as you need if the remaining bit comes out this well.
 

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I do have to ask, did you read the moment of horror entries of guess the author? ;)


For the rest, most excellent pieces of writing. I just thought Constance was going crazy and then she explained everything. Quite an interesting twist in it all, even if Anne is not overly necessary :)
 

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Hugh crossed himself and genuflected to the altar, and knelt on the cushion placed in readiness for his vigil. Hands clasped before his breast he closed his eyes, cleared his mind and began to pray.

Once he had completed the prescribed prayers Hugh opened his eyes and let his thoughts empty, waiting to see what would emerge of its own accord. Thus as a youth he had kept his vigil on the eve of knighthood and so thus would he pass his vigil on the eve of his coronation. Attempting to guide his contemplation to specific subjects had felt wrong back then, and would feel wrong now.

A thought formed, more of a concept and a recognition than words, something grander and deeper than could be captured with a label for communication. It was … posterity, legacy, history, what he would seek to shape with the divine rights granted to him. As if someone not in this room, not in this mundane world, asked him what he had it in him to be. What end would he use his authority for.

It was on his lips to utter the ambition he had clung to for much of his life, and say righteous. The prayer did not form, and Hugh realised that his soul did not resound with it. Not this time. Not for a while now.

What else might he seek to attain above all else if granted the honour of kingship? Strength. Wisdom. Intelligence. Cunning. Success. Conquest. Wealth. Piety. These words and more passed through his mind, and he knew all came from his own speculation of what kings before him had mediated on being. They were not him.

He waited.

After a time he saw that there was something else, something as large and solid as a vein of granite within the earth. Strong like the stone, and like the stone a bedrock which gave foundation for all built above.

“Blessed Lord,” he prayed, lips moving silently, “Help me to be just. Guide me to bring justice to all under my hand. Aid me to destroy injustice in all its forms within my lands, and to stand against wrongdoers everywhere. Lend me your strength that I might be tireless in the pursuit of justice, and the wisdom that I might judge well and fairly in all matters for all people whenever I am called on. Clear my eyes so I might see inequity and corruption, and stand with me as I strive to purge them from my rule and reform for the good of all. Grant me the courage to stand by what is right always, in the darkest hour and in the most difficult case.”

Hugh bowed to the altar, so deeply his forehead touched the flagstones. “That is the virtue I would guide my rule by, Lord. It is what I understand to be the cardinal obligation of a king. From justice comes peace, and from peace prosperity. Justice brings forth the best in we sinful men: compassion, wisdom, fairness, discipline. It drives back our weaknesses and checks our excesses.”

He straightened to sit on his heels. There was no feeling of answer, only of complete peace. Tears pricked at the corners of Hugh’s eyes and he bowed his head in gratitude; peace was blessing enough for a man who had felt none in weeks.






The doorway of Westminster loomed before Hugh like a mouth eager to swallow him. As he advanced to the abbey door he lowered his eyes to the red cloth which formed a lengthy pathway from his chambers to the stage where the throne awaited.

Crossing the threshold a sensation of sheer panic struck Hugh, and it was all he could do to continue his stately pace as though his mind was filled with the serenity of God’s own chosen. The entrance lay several paces behind now, and one more with each heartbeat. Close, and as unreachable as the sun. Hugh knew the man he was would never leave this place; each measured step took him closer to the end.

A choir sang, beautiful enough to break the heart. They sang for God and for him – a mere mortal placed close to the Almighty! Hugh’s heart pounded fit to shatter his ribs; he continued to advance with majesty to the fate which awaited him.

To the sides of the vast abbey hundreds – many hundreds – of people filed into place. Lords, ladies, notables, near-nobodies, shoulder to shoulder and in their finest and with their eyes fixed upon him. Upon his every move. Expectant. Hungry, almost.

Abruptly Hugh remembered a section from one of the histories he had read as a youth. Certain pagan tribes had ritually sacrificed their kings. Crowned them, robed them, cherished them, and slaughtered them. Was that so different to what was to be done to him? A hysterical laugh bubbled in the back of his throat; Hugh sank his teeth into the soft inside of his lip and let the jolt of pain wash the madness away.

All too soon the procession reached the foot of the stage. Those ahead of Hugh split to the left and right to clear his path, and stood holding their glittering burdens in readiness for the ceremony.

Then the stairs were behind him, and Hugh stood before the throne. With a sweep of his arm he swung his mantle to the side and seated himself in a manoeuvre he had practiced rigorously, careful that the fabric fell across his knees in such a way that it formed pleasing folds with his robe.

The Archbishop of Canterbury moved to stand at Hugh’s right side. He voice rang out clearly, addressing the gathering to the right. “Is it your will that this man, Hugh, son of William, who was our former lord, be consecrated as our king? Do you give this man your consent?”

Hugh stood and faced the people the Archbishop had spoken to, letting them scrutinize him and see that he was sound of body and indeed the man they knew and not a substitute.

Hundreds of voices called, “So be it!” and “God bless King Hugh!”

As one Hugh and the Archbishop turned to the left and repeated the process, and again Hugh was acclaimed. Hugh moved to stand behind the throne, facing the half of the crowd that had been forced to stand behind the stage due to the lack of space. Once more the Archbishop’s ritual query rang through the building; Hugh realised that the fear was gone. In its place was acceptance. Part of him would die here, today. The sacrifice was necessary. He would not flinch from his obligation.

The firmetur manus tua filled the building, soaring to heaven on the pure voices of the choir. As the hymn concluded the bishops of Durham and Bath took Hugh’s arms and guided him down from the stage, through the abbey to the high altar for his blessing and a sermon.






Hugh knelt before the altar, one hand on the bible and the other on a relic of Saint Edward the Confessor. He took a deep breath and prayed his voice would come without catch or tremble. “I, Hugh, swear by these relics and by my immortal soul that I will keep peace, honour and duty towards God and the holy church and all her customs, all the days of my life. I swear by those same powers to exercise fair justice and equality amongst all the people of the realm, all the days of my life. I swear by those same powers to abolish any evil laws and customs that have been introduced to this realm, and to make good laws, and to keep those laws without fraud or evil intent, all the days of my life.”

Now it was time. He regained his feet and allowed himself to be stripped to his shirt and breeches. The fear had returned. His noble attendants seized the collar of his shirt, one on either side, and tore the linen so it fell from his body in rags. Hugh paid little attention. Just a man, just an ordinary man, nothing more and nothing less, now and never again, not in this life and not in the next. Minutes left. Only minutes, slipping by like sand rushing through the gaps in his fingers. Would the world be the same afterwards? Would he be the same? His life would not – could not be. Shoes covered in gold work decoration were placed on his feet and time ran out.

Hugh swallowed hard, took a slow breath and knelt beneath the canopy set up close to the altar. Waiting was agony; like the condemned prisoner wishing the axe would never fall and wishing it would so the wait was over. Oh God, was he worthy?! How could he possibly be worthy!? Hugh’s stomach clenched, and the prayers still murmured on.

Then he felt warmth on his scalp and perfume filled the air about him. The chrism trickled down his forehead; Hugh clenched his eyes shut to keep from being blinded. It was done. He was no longer simply human: he was more, and ever would be. One of God’s chosen on earth, selected to rule over men and lands, elevated by God through mortal hands, closer to the Lord than any save the highest of the church.

Hugh risked opening his eyes; the oil had spread sufficiently that it no longer threatened to drip from his brow. The Archbishop drew a cross with the chrism on Hugh’s breast, and on each of his biceps. The linen cap which Suffolk had borne in the procession was placed on Hugh’s head lest anything remove the holy oil before seven days had passed.

As he pushed himself up from the cushion where he’d knelt Hugh thought a brief prayer for the part of his being which did not rise with him; the ordinary man he had been lay, in his imagination, sprawled like a corpse at his feet. But … he was anointed. Anointed! He had not been struck dead by God for daring to take what was not his. He was King of England and it was heaven’s will. King, and no earthly power could undo it.











Only one scene left to write now. The noise and interruptions continue unabated, and have in fact grown worse. Hurray for idiots doing noisy DIY, road works, thunder storms, and sundry other loud nuisances. And here I am, trying to write a nice touching funeral bit and touch up a few other scenes. Is it evil to hope that certain offenders drill through a live power cable?

You may recall me mentioning sitting an exam as part of a job interview. I was successful and got the job. Now I have to wait goodness knows how long for them to complete background checks so I can start. Froggy: civil servant for the Department of Work and Pensions. From bookshop manager to this – talk about going down in prestige ;) Ok, it’s far better pay, hours and benefits, and realistically is far better in every way except for the sad lack of books and the fact that bookshop manager is a far sight cooler

I’ve been fascinated by the human implications of the medieval theory of sacred kingship since I discovered it last century (sounds neater than saying “when I was very young” :D). A drop of perfumed oil which took a normal person and turned them into a +1 human, to steal an RPG convention for the purposes of short illustration. Different personalities would react to that upgrade in different ways. The average personality would produce a fairly dull reaction, the pious one a little more interesting, the megalomaniac a far better one, and the one with self worth issues has the most potential of all. The same principle can be seen at work in some sci-fi. That cybernetic eyeball is one man’s cool upgrade and another’s loss of some tiny fragment of humanity.

For those wondering why we get to see the anointing but not the crowning, the oil made the king, not the crown and not the rest of the fancy ornaments. The anointing elevated you, the rest reminded the world you had been elevated.

Hugh entered this story proclaiming he wished to be a righteous king. Now the day has come he finds he would rather be a just king. That’s a good change; righteousness is at its heart of hearts a very selfish thing.



Incognitia, thanks. You wait until you see what he does in that tournament; makes me grin like a crazy frog. Though it might be more wince inducing for readers with sympathetic anatomy to his opponent :D

Avernite, no I hadn’t. I don’t get to read much on this site due to time issues. I had a quick browse of the recent posts in that topic but it’s a very busy thread with a tonne of posts, so I didn’t find that section before I had to leave. If you give me a post number to head to then I shall head over.
 

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"For God, Hugh and Justice!"
A little clumsy, but I can see it. Unless you're aiming for an all-encompassing 'the Great', it's hard to see a better target to point yourself towards than justice.
So well done to Hugh, God's anointed. The many times that we thought it was all over for him, and here he is, and a better man for the experience.
Mixed feelings about the next part - I want it but I don't want it to all be over :confused:
 

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nevermind froggy, I just thought it was funny you used the same sentence construct to start your update as a story of the GtA ;)


As to the update: very deep, and very Hugh. But Hugh the Just does sound a bit weird to my Dutch ears ;)
 

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Oh, my... I come back and this is still here. Quite a pleasant surprise, actually, that just means there's that much more of it to read! Which I'll be sure to get on... not that there aren't others I need to catch up on too...
 

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Congratulations to the job, Froggy! To be a civil servant is not bad, for a few years at least. Just to do what you are told. Not much faster than those other people, who already have made the same things for almost all their life. And then forget all of it after work hours. Not very froggish, of course, but for a few years an experience.
 

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Whew, after reading all from where I left off, way back with Trempy being captured, this story's writing is even better than before. I love what Hugh's become. I never knew back when I first started reading this all that time ago that it'd be something like this! If you ever do get a book published (hopefully!) I'll be looking to get a copy as quick as I can.

More pertinent to what you've most recently showed us, I'm thinking of the old adage "power corrupts". The more accurate thing to say, though, would be that "power changes". Here we have Hugh worried about being a completely different person once he becomes king, and he's right. But that means he can be a better one, and if he sticks with what he determined beforehand, he most likely will be.

It's a shame you couldn't continue with this story for another thousand pages to see just where Hugh goes with it, but the last thing we'd need to do is bleed you dry in the attempt. Sad as it is to think there'll be no more of this (and no more Trempy - I still have David Warner's voice in my mind when I read his dialogue), it seems we're at as good a place to stop as any.


...Great, I'm rambling. I suppose that's what a year and a half away will do to you.
 

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This is an excellent piece of work whose quality improves with every page!:)
Have you ever thought of writing a story set in a Renaissance setting ( ie In EUIII AAR rather than CK), around similar starting lines but with a different plot?
Perhaps this time based on the Continent:D
 

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The unbelievable has happened. My computer's primary hard drive failed on Tuesday evening. I've lost everything. Everything. Unless somehow I can access the data on a drive which the computer doesn't recognise any more, it's all gone. All of my writing, everything. The backups I had on my memory stick have vanished. I'd hoped to post the final part yesterday.

I can still finish the story - I'll have to reconstruct the last scenes in a new word document. But ... it's all gone. The two work in progress short stories, the notes, my manuscript, all of my other writing, everything. Years of work, gone. Backups, gone. Everything, from my hand-made background to my music.

I've installed a new hard drive and am searching for a way to dredge files from my old drive. I don't know if there's any hope or not; it's beyond my tech know-how.

Damn it! It was a Western Digital server grade hard disc with well over half of its stupidly long expected lifespan left! It should not have failed! I'd done drive maintenance on it mere hours beforehand! And my backups shouldn't have vanished either!

I don't know when I'll be writing again. Right now I still want to cry. The priority is trying to get that data salvaged.

I just can't believe it. :(
 

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Oh no! That's a catastrophe...

Computers, eh? Their pound of flesh for giving us speed and convenience is to occasionally frag themselves and cause immense inconvenience.

I wish you all the best with piecing together the shards of your hard drive, and we will be patient until you can begin to recover from this setback.
 

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Yikes. That's pretty close to a worst-case scenario.

There are a few options and possibilities, depending on how your drive biffed it. Option one is to slap it into another computer as a slave drive, on the off chance that it's just some trashed boot sectors preventing it from booting up. Then you can pull all the files off to the good drive and archive them in three difference places, up to and including Google Documents, which you should use anyway. ;) It looks like you've already got a new drive in your computer - have you had any luck adding your broken drive, or is it still not recognized?

Computers being the finnicky things they are, you might try the stupid trick of just rebooting until it works. I've had some drives not be recognized 9 times in a row, and work on the 10th try.

Option two is to spend a couple hundred bucks or so to get some data recovery experts to do some magic on it. That's not entirely reliable, so I'd try it as the last option after you potter around a bit.

Of course, the whole story is archived here as well, so that will let you rebuild your manuscript.

Good luck, and my deepest sympathy for your catastrophe.
 

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I'm still in the process of setting up my new install. Got most of the core stuff there now, just a case of downloading and installing the less important stuff and rebuilding my firebox bookmark library. Gives me more time than usual to read stuff on the net; that's either a silver lining or a waste of time that could be spent on something else. Can't decide which :D

Phargle, the failure was sudden and slightly odd. Got to admit I'm rather suspicious about it. I was reading a news page when my cursor turned into the busy hourglass. I gave the PC a while to do whatever it was doing, thinking is quite suspicious that it was using so many resources when I hadn't asked it to do anything. I tried to minimalise firefox; no dice. I tried task manager; it wouldn't appear. The PC just acted like something was running and hogging most of the processor power. Several minutes later and I manually reset the PC.

It began to boot up and sat there with the message "Intel boot agent GC 1.2.36 client MAC addr" followed by some numbers. Never seen or heard of that before. After 30 seconds it proclaimed it couldn't load the driver and exited, leaving the PC suspending midway through bootup. Reset, same thing. Reset, same again.

So I turned the PC off entirely, checked the internal wiring to make sure none of the connections had come loose, and tried again. This time it acted as though there were no formatted hard drives present; it asked for a boot CD. Reset, try again. Same thing.

I inserted my windows XP set up disc and tried to run a repair install. It didn't go to the repair screen; it launched to a DOS screen which said "Type EXIT to exit this program", and did absolutely nothing at all. The program had no problems loading all of the temporary driver files etc before set up proper launched, it just couldn't do anything after that. I didn't try entering the reformat/reinstall page of windows set up in case the cursed machine took it upon itself to reformat my precious drive - it wasn't behaving in any normal way and even a 1% chance of losing whatever was left on my drive was too much.

At that point I decided a new hard drive was the way to go; I had no way to make a fresh windows install without wiping data I need, and without windows and internet access I had no hope of solving anything. So here I am, one shiny new 74GB "Wow, prices have dropped!" Raptor drive and clean install.

I run a dual hard drive set up, independant not RAID. One disc for windows and core programs, the other for games and frippery. Important data is copied onto both HDs and word files get a third copy onto my USB memory stick. Both hard drives were SATA western digital caviar drives, server class with a lifetime of 1.5 million hours. They're 2 years and 4 months old, and won't have seen more than 800,000 hours use at my most excessive estimate. I had run a defrag and maintenance on both drives earlier in the day with no problems at all.

All of the data on my USB stick has vanished. I don't know why or how. My secondary hard drive is currently disconnected and will stay that way until I know it's safe to reconnect it. The backups on there will be very out of date and incomplete, assuming they survived at all, as I was in the midst of a general clear out and reorganisation of my important stuff. My up to date writing was on the USB stick so it shouldn't have mattered that the copies on F: were old. Ha blooming ha.

My old primary drive is sat in the packaging of my new drive. Until I know why it failed I don't want to hook it up, just in case it was hit by something malicious. So far I haven't managed to find any information on that Intel boot agent text.

I've seen hard drive failure before. There's always been signs: slower access, more noise, data corruption, bad kernals, and so on. That was years ago, with drives that aren't designed to withstand a nuke.

I've never had to do data recovery before and I know nothing about how to. It's not going to be as simple as hooking the drive up as a secondary and copying stuff off it via 'my computer'.
 

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That is really bad news. There really is someone who doesn't want this story to end.

Somehow you got a copy of a MAC driver on your machine and all drives hard and attached got reformatted iwith the MAC OS in full or in part. Didn't think that was possible. If you have a friend who runs MAC, maybe they'll be able to read that hard drive and USB.

Intel boot agent GC 1.2.36 - I entered this and searched. It appears to be a program that describes the effects you are seeing. It started to download something - so I pulled the plug - literrally.

There are some decent data recovery programs. The one I used came on disk from a computer magazine. As long as you're not trying to oot your machine from the old primary drive and you've a fresh install of windows xp along with the hours downloading the programs that you were running at the versions stc .. you ought to be able to read what's on your old secondary drive.

Good luck!
 

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Some good news. I hooked up my old C: drive this afternoon and, while there's damaged data and missing files, my writing has survived. I've transferred it over to the new drive, and am in the process of opening each document up to check everything's as it should be. Most of my other important stuff looks intact too.

It will take me a while to transfer everything to safety, check it all over, and get it put in the correct locations on my new setup. Plus I start my new job tomorrow. I'm hoping to get the final part of Eleanor posted at the end of this week.



Is your PC still ok, Chief? The dratted thing didn't give me any warning before it trashed my system. I suspect it might have had a time delay built into it as I hadn't installed or downloaded anything for several days. If it wasn't on a time delay then someone hacked my system through multiple layers of security and planted it as I read.



I shall return and field the story related comments later, now the panic is over.
 

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Hmm, I come here to read a crisis, but luckily it's resolved. We had something similar happen in our lab, but we could just send it to the ICT guys and get it fixed...

Anyway, good to hear it's back :)
 

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Some good news. I hooked up my old C: drive this afternoon and, while there's damaged data and missing files, my writing has survived. I've transferred it over to the new drive, and am in the process of opening each document up to check everything's as it should be. Most of my other important stuff looks intact too.

Sometimes, it really is that easy!