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I just remembered this is supposed to be based upon the possibilities whihc are provided by the CK game engine... So, perhaps Fulk has just been given a county... are you aiming at having him conque Navarra and proclaim himself King of Navarra? :D

And methinks "Queen" and "Child" can be very easily interchanged... :p specially in this case

Eleanor is slighly pushing Fulk closer to an appropriate level to marry - then she frames Trempy for some sort of embezzlement or something, and gets to marry Fulk instead.

Perhaps... but did she really have even the remotest inkling HOW her father would react when he awas presented with Fulk? I think she is too unfamiliar with the dealings of court to have known that the King would grant a manor to one of his retainers.

Simon does sound a bit clumsy, but considering how his master died, i suppose it could be expected

Yes indeed. :D Clumsy of his master too... going of and drowning in his own vomit. ^^() (does this happen to people if they sleep face up? I know its entirely possible. *remembers incidents at class trips*)
 

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*thinks*

*hurts to think*

French rebellion threatens the King and Anne. King rewards Fulk with Duchy in France from the rebel Duke as he is such a nice boy who just saved his life. Anne pressures her family into giving some Scottish fiefs or even a Duchy to Fulk as well for saving her. IIRC at that time the French and the Scots where pretty thick with one another against England...

So the end result could be Fulk having two Duke titles... hence outranking Trempy.

At which point the very corny duel between the two ensues... I think that the trial of God was vigent in England still.
 

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So much has happened, and while we're at it three cheers for William, Long Live the King!

good work, and Kaiser, your idea seems inseresting. I like it, but I don't really like Fulk to much.


Is it just me or does Hugo seem like a robot? In the posts with him in it trying to purge his emotions, I see a Les Mis Javert Style suicide in his future. Heck his name is even like the writter of that book which is most likely were the crazy idea came into my head from.
 

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Hmm. In my book, given how "good" Trempy is as a Spy Master, the Queen Anne - Fulk meeting had too many people. At least one of the "chorus girls" – to (partly) borrow li2co3’s expression – is bound to be in Trempy’s pay. The one with the English accent say – or is that too obvious?
 

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“He has done what?” exclaimed Jocelyn in disbelief.

“Lord Yves has declared his independence to the world at large,” repeated Renaud.

Jocelyn kneaded his temples; he felt a headache coming on. “How can a man so stupid still be alive? Really – how? I fail to see it.”

Richildis said, “Please, Renaud, won’t you come inside and accept our hospitality?”

Jocelyn grudgingly admitted his wife had a point; the courtyard of their castle was not the place for business, or for receiving the man who had trained you up to knighthood. “Yes, come inside, we’ll get you something to wash the dust out of your throat.”


Renaud beamed. “Most kind, most kind. It has been a very long ride; I set off early.”

Jocelyn took the hint, not that it was unexpected. Ever since he’d lost his right hand in battle Renaud had taken up a lifestyle more suited to a lazy merchant than a knight, one revolving around food, wine, and other fleeting pleasures. He was usually an expensive guest. “And some food, of course.”

“My boy, you’re truly an excellent host.”

The three walked inside the main hall of the castle, Richildis and Renaud exchanging polite, tedious formalities while Jocelyn delved into the impact Yves’ latest folly would have on the situation. He was rudely awakened from his schemes by Renaud clouting him on the shoulder and boomed admiringly, “Still an impressive sight, my boy.”

Jocelyn pasted a smile on his face and hopped his attention back into the world. Richildis had disappeared off to the other side of the hall to organise the servants, leaving him alone with his old mentor. “What is?”

“Your delectable wife. If you ever get tired of her send her over to me!” He laughed loudly at his own joke.

From the way Richildis’ shoulders stiffed Jocelyn knew she had heard. Hell, the whole damn castle had probably heard. He ushered the other man towards the nearest seating, the bench at one of the lower tables, and encouraged him to sit. “Tell me about Yves.”

“Ah, Yves.” Renaud looked hopefully about for his promised sustenance.

Choking on his swallowed impatience Jocelyn prompted again, “Yes, Yves.”

“Well, the man has announced that he is now the independent count of Tourraine, bowing knee to no one but God.”

“But what is he doing? Except sending messages and inviting his death? I’ve not been summoned to bring my men to muster yet.”

“Not many have. Not me … no, not me.” He smiled shakily, rubbing the unnatural ending of his right wrist. “No, never again me. But I still listen, even if I can’t fight. He has not summoned more than half his men, and some of those he has called upon have refused his call to arms. Damned fool’s more likely to fall to civil war with his own before the king of England gets here to have his revenge. He is pondering about hiring a few mercenaries, pondering – faffing, talking, posturing, in short doing nothing much there either.”

“Does he truly think he can stand alone? Here, on the border between England and France?”

“I’ve no idea, my boy. He’s not had much use for me since I lost my hand fighting to keep his miserable little arse on his father’s seat. Gratitude.” Richildis delivered a jug of wine and a pair of goblets. With a smile that made Jocelyn’s hackles rise Renaud accepted his cup and waited as she poured for him. “Why thank you, my dear.”

Jocelyn recalled his guest’s wandering attention, and eyes, yet again. “Yves. So any ideas when he will summon me to arms?” Richildis filled the second cup and gave it to her husband before demonstrating her good manners, or perhaps his dislike of their guest, and vanishing.

“When he remembers, and that’ll probably be in the night of the night so he’ll delay until tomorrow. Tomorrow he’ll forget. Then when his enemies are at his gates he’ll throw up his hands and curse you for not being there, just as he’ll curse the rest he forgot to send for.” Renaud drained his cup in one go. “The man is a complete tosspot.”

Jocelyn choked out a brief burst of laughter. “Exactly right!”






Fulk’s aim was off; the tip of his lance caught the quintain off-centre and the sandbag whipped around and ploughed into his shield. He reeled and fought to keep his seat. Fortunately for the sake of his already tender pride he managed to do so, but the laughter coming from the few people watching him did nothing to soothe his severely ruffled feathers. As he turned his borrowed horse about for yet another go he saw Simon had returned from the errands he had been sent on. The boy looked devastated, watching with a kind of horror. He must think he had been stuck with a lack-skilled master; somehow Fulk found it hard to contest that based on today’s efforts. Well, so far he had only tilted at the quintain; he’d soon show a considerably more advantageous side when he took to foot combat.

Fulk reined in near the boy and pulled off his bucket like helm. “Did you order my new shield?”

“Yes, my lord. They are painting your arms on a prepared blank shield; it will be ready tomorrow.” As ever the boy was polite, softly spoken and faintly hostile in a defensive way. Fulk felt certain his last master had not been too kind to the boy. He hadn’t managed to find much out about the deceased Sir Godfrey, he’d had very little time to talk to his fellow men, but what kind of man got so drunk he drowned in his own vomit while passed out?

“And the badge maker?”

“Yes, my lord. The badges will be done by Thursday.”

Fulk had chosen a standing wolf as his own badge to go with a green and white livery. He hadn’t actually put much thought into choosing the scheme; it was the one he had decided on as a young boy and he had not had the motivation or reason to change it to something more suited to his current frame of mind and status. His men, when he actually had some, would wear his livery while he wore whatever he wanted with the king’s badge on it somewhere. His new status as baron protected him for being permanently stuck in livery, for which he was very glad. He had been so proud to wear Eleanor’s livery, but William’s? He needed to wear the lion badge and he had a fancy to wear his own badge next to it as was occasionally the fashion, proclaiming himself a lord as well as a king’s man. It also served as a way to separate himself out from a man whom he had absolutely no kind feelings for. At present the only other person needing a wolf badge was Simon; squires seldom wore their lord’s colours. Good news for Fulk’s purse.

“Good lad.” Fulk put his helmet back on again and spurred his horse back towards the quintain. He was so badly out of practise he found it hard to believe he had ever been good at tilting. Since he lost his own in the battle which killed his father he had had very little access to warhorses until recently, and at Woburn there had not been the facilities to practise with a lance. He had managed to get in the very occasional few hours of practise on a borrowed horse with lent equipment while in France but he had not been expected to fight in imitation of a knight and so Aidney had not allowed him to keep his skills in best condition, claiming it a waste of money and time. Only a knight or aspiring knight should fight as a knight, he had proclaimed loftily, and Fulk had been neither.

He lined up for another run and paused to prepare for his latest run. He played his tongue over his dry lips and stared through the narrow eye slits of the great helm, focusing on his target. He brought his shield back in close to his body and levelled his lance. A light touch of his spurs started his horse at a trot, then a canter. The target with its simple red ring of a bulls eye began to close rapidly. Fulk aimed carefully, his breathing seeming loud in the confines of his helmet. Yes, this was all as he remembered; the flowing speed, the smooth gait of the horse, the echoing private world so far away from the real one, the sense of rightness as he knew his aim was spot on.

The lance point gouged a scar into the red paint and the sandbag delivered another buffet to his aching left side. So close! At least this time he didn’t need to battle to keep his seat in the war saddle. The hooting and hilarity of the crowd came rushing to him and Fulk swore under his breath. “I used to be good at this!” he grumbled to himself. He turned back for another go.

He did even worse; he let his anger cloud his judgement and his aim was so badly off he only clipped the edge of the target. He could hear laughter, more laughter away from the audience of idlers. This laughter came from his imagination, a certain dark haired princess laughing herself silly at his clumsiness. Despite himself Fulk smiled.

Another run; another failure, but not nearly so severe this time. He might not be having any success but Fulk knew he was doing better now than in his first runs at the start of the morning. As long as he kept a calm, clear head and kept on trying he would meet success eventually, and from there he would steadily improve back to his old level. Another hour or so and he’d try some foot combat; it had been a while since he had faced competent training partners but he knew his skills there had not waned much at all.

His contract might demand four hours practise on five days each week but Fulk had no intention of dropping to that level until he was back in peak condition, and maybe not even then. The activity kept his mind busy, away from Eleanor and away from the queen and her dangerous meddling. Absently Fulk turned his horse back for another run. Yes, the queen and her determination to use Eleanor and himself as characters in some romantic story. She was a child reducing them to her toys, playing with them as younger girls might make two of their dolls fall in love. Except unlike those dolls it mattered a very great deal if things went wrong, and unlike dolls people had feelings and ideas of their own.

Anne was so eager to help she was dangerous, so naive she was deadly, just getting a real inkling of her powers but not yet able to use them to any reliable effect or even fully aware of how harmful they could be. Most hazardous of all she managed to bring that frantic element of Fulk to the fore, the side of him who would gladly ride off right now to Woburn, kill Trempwick and run away with Eleanor and the devil take the consequences.

The sandbag bashed into his borrowed shield again; another failed run. Fulk’s entire left torso and arm ached fiercely now, muscles working in ways they were no longer accustomed to and taking blow after blow for their pains. Fulk decided it was justice, in a way. No one could handily beat some sense into him so the quintain was doing it. When the queen demands you talk you talk, but never again would he allow himself to become so abjectly desperate that he would speak freely before an unsafe audience. He didn’t need to be happy out here, and he could not stop loving Eleanor, but there was one thing he could do in this painful exile. He could do everything in his power to protect Eleanor. That he was familiar with and it was a goal he could put his heart into. He was still her knight, in his heart, and he could still serve her in some small way.

Fulk made another run at the quintain. The crack of his lance on the wooden target was followed by a notable lack of a sandbag hitting him. The small knot of watchers was quiet, then a few called encouragement while others demanded he do it again to prove his success hadn’t been a fluke. Grimly Fulk turned for another run; he had his stride back now, and his confidence. A few more weeks of this and he’d been reliably good again. He only hoped the same could be said of his equally rusty mounted hand to hand combat skills.


Eleanor stood on her little hill looking down at the distant village. If she had possessed a dramatic streak she might have found some bittersweet pleasure in the way this must look. Instead she found only mild irritation. Here she was, a princess, standing alone with her neat clothes and long, loose hair being played with by the breeze, watching other people live their lives from a safe distance. She hadn’t done this for … years. It was pitiable that she was doing it now.

Trempwick had no time for her today and without Fulk she had no company at all. Exactly as it had been before she had brought Fulk here, exactly as it had been most of her life. She didn’t even have her horse anymore, thanks to Gerbert. She had only her feet, her own room in the manor, the ramparts on top of the tower, and several square miles of countryside minus the bits where there were people. She was not allowed to mingle with anyone not from the manor building itself; Trempwick had been very clear right from her very first day at Woburn he would kill any peasant he found in speaking distance to her. It was to preserve her secret and keep her safe, or so he said.

Fulk’s persistence in keeping her company had driven her half mad at first, as had his tendency to poke his nose in where it was not wanted. So strange how one got used to little irritations, then grew to like them, and love them, and missed them so badly when they finally stopped.

Trempwick had promised her a trip into Saint Albans sometime, shopping. Shopping. Not something Eleanor had ever really done; a few trips to tone her cover personalities so they could cope with market places, bargaining and the like, but nothing else. Trempwick always had other people do much of the buying or, if his or Eleanor’s presence was required, had a trusted trader brought over to Woburn.

Shopping; a nice little treat handed out to a child who looked set to cry. Commiseration; no time for her now but in the future this little trip will make up for his neglect. No time for her today, or tomorrow, or the day after, and probably not the day after, or after that, or after that, and then it would be another month and that too would be the same, and the month after, and so on until the year had fled, and then the years would pass and nothing would change. Nights, some evenings, and whenever else he felt like her company. No more. He would see her when it was convenient for him.

Nights and some evenings would have to be enough; it was all she had. Work with what you have. The set of Eleanor’s face eased at that but she did not manage even a minute smile. She would be mad to expect him to drop his life because he was marrying her; indeed he had promised her this. “Nothing would change,” he had vowed and he was keeping that pledge. It had been what she had wanted all that time ago.

Shopping; she almost managed a smile. It had damned well better be with Trempwick’s money because she had given every single coin she possessed to Fulk. Every single penny of the compensation Trempwick had wrung out of the man who had been fool enough to accost her on her father’s wedding night, every single penny she had stolen from mission funds and hidden over the years. Her entire fortune; all that was left was her small demesne of land, her two rings, her pair of knives and her necklace – the immovable or easily missable stuff. Her clothes didn’t belong to her, nor did anything else she had. Until she received some of the revenue from her lands she was once again completely reliant on Trempwick’s largesse. She had heard several times how much fun it was to spend your husband’s money and if she was honest the idea of dragging a spymaster around stall after stall, making him carry her purchases and hold out lengths of cloth and so on did have a certain … appeal.

Down in the village smoke from the cooking fires plumed up into the sky. A woman came out of her house to shout at some children. A few people walked about on errands. Life; simple, pure life. People talking, spending time with their loved ones, children playing, folk going about their everyday business.

Unwilling to watch any longer Eleanor slowly wandered back down the small hill. She had come out here for two reasons: to stretch out her very stiff, painful muscles and to think. She would do just that.





“Oh shut up your God damned whining!” bellowed Jocelyn.

“Whining?” Richildis planted her fists on her hips. “You are intent on destroying this family and you call my objection whining!?”

“I keep telling you, if you will pack up your screeching and listen, that I have a plan!”

“A plan based on a reality far better than the one we have, you cretinous oaf!”

“Blah, blah, blah!” Jocelyn flapped one hand about in the imitation of a mouth. “That’s all you ever do – blah, blah, blah. Talk endlessly about a load of crap and expect me to listen to it – shut up!”

“Oh yes, I like that! I put forth an intelligent objection and what do I get? Puppet shows!”

“Puppets shows are all you understand, woman!”

“Maybe if you spoke langue d’oil like the rest of us instead of gibberish you’d do better!”

“I’m your husband – you owe me respect!”

“Respect is earned, not shouted into existence. I thought you might have learned that from your odious mentor; he taught you how to be a mannerless pig sure enough!”

Jocelyn felt his blood boil over; he hurled himself across the room. He easily blocked her attempts to punch him, almost casually captured her wrists and bundled them together in one hand, and entirely effortlessly cuffed her across the ear. “I don’t think that’s shouting, do you?” Her answer was an oath so blistering it even shocked Jocelyn. She began to struggle, kicking at him and wrenching her hands in an effort to free them. He held on to her easily but collected a series of bruises for his pains. “Damn it, woman, stop it before I actually hurt you!”

Her struggles subsided very resentfully and she said scathingly, “Oh, so now you’re concerned with niceties? That’s a first in all these years I’ve been lumbered with you!”

With exaggerated patience he stated, “I’m leaving tomorrow. I’m taking my soldiers. You’re minding the castle. I’m fighting for Yves. I have a plan. You will stop whining. That’s how things are going to be, so shut the hell up!” He let go of her, pushing her away and taking a long stride back to put space between them. Richildis staggered then headed for the door like a ship in full sail, her dishevelled dress billowing out behind her. “Where do you think you’re going?”

“I’m not staying here with you tonight; I’d sooner sleep in the hall like our lowest servant than stay here!”

“Oh no you don’t.” Jocelyn intercepted her and pushed her back towards the bed. “I’m leaving.”

“Oh, nice! Your ego at work again – I can’t be seen to leave you but it’s fine for the whole castle to see you leave me! Same as bloody usual!”

“Oh, shut up!” snapped Jocelyn snidely. He marched out the bedroom and slammed the door behind himself so hard it bounced back open and hit him on the rear. With a vicious oath he kicked it shut and stormed off, heedless of the frightened, embarrassed glances the maids in the solar sent at him.

He got halfway down the stairs towards the hall before he halted. “Christ on the bloody cross and a whole set of apostles shitting on chamber pots – I don’t have God damned time for this!” He turned and ascended the stairs with the same furious energy he had descended them with. Once again he blasted past the maids in the solar, setting them twittering like a bunch of starlings. He barged back into the bedchamber and roared at the maid helping Richildis. “Out!” With a frightened squeak the girl fled.

Jocelyn booted the door shut yet again, furiously noticing all this kicking doors had left his toes feeling broken. He grabbed his wife in a rough embrace and kissed her with a mix of pent up passion and aggression. “Well, I’m leaving tomorrow so we’d better hurry up on the making up,” he explained as calmly as he could manage.

“Lout.” She tried to jam her knee into his groin but he held her so close she couldn’t manage it.

“You’re not getting rid of me, Tildis, at least not until tomorrow.”

“Morning can’t come soon enough. And for some reason,” she glared at him and gingerly put a hand to her bruised ear, “I have a headache.”

Once again he pushed her away and took a good long step back. “Well, if that’s your attitude I’m leaving again. I’ll go say goodbye to someone more … cheerful.”

“One of my maids, you mean. Again.”

Jocelyn’s voice rose again. “Oh let me guess – more recriminations about Eremberga?”

“And why not? I liked her, damn you! I suppose you will be expecting to foist her and your bastard brat off on me while you go play soldiers?”

“Actually, yes. And I don’t play soldiers, woman!” He took a few steps closer to the door. “I’m leaving.”

“Go on then,” she challenged him.

“I will; I’m just giving you chance to change your mind.”

“Why would I? It’d mean putting up with you instead of sleeping soundly.”

“That makes you the only female in the whole castle - no the whole fief – who thinks that way!”

“Then go take your charging bull at a gate act to them!”

Jocelyn poised on the verge of flinging back another loud insult. “Actually,” he said fairly normally, “I’d rather not. You look rather stunning when you’re angry.”

She gaped at him. “Something suspiciously like a compliment? From you!?”

“Well, you did say chivalrous milksop. I’ll overlook the fact you laughed at my previous attempts so long as you promise not to do that again. It has a rather …”

“Deflating,” she supplied quickly with unrestrained glee.

He scowled, remembering how she had laughed at his predicament as well as his attempt at a change in attitude. “Effect on me,” he finished shortly.

Amazingly she smiled. “You are a strange man sometimes, Jocelyn. You come in here, scream blue murder at me, hit me, tell me you are leaving on some fool’s errand because you have a plan you will barely explain, foist your bastard and her slut of a mother on me, and then try to charm me.”

Jocelyn shrugged. “Well, they say variety is the spice of life.” Suddenly she was laughing and so was he. When he got his breath back he said almost sadly, “This is about the happiest we’ve been in each other’s company for … months.”

“I suppose seeing how I am not going to be rid of you tonight I may as well resign myself to your existence. I shall get to sleep sooner.”

Jocelyn pulled a face and said plaintively, “That is so welcoming.”

“If you don’t like it you can leave.”

“Oh, shut up!” groaned Jocelyn. “Don’t start that again.”








A queen Anne fanclub? She'd be delighted, as long as all members join SPE.

There is very, very little Eleanor can do to make Fulk suitable. He has common blood and lowly roots; it would take an enormous amount of power, wealth, prestige and future potential to balance that out. He very literally needs to go from 0.2 on the power scale to 8.5. Trempy himself is just hanging on at 8.5, and he only recently reached those heady heights because of his new duchy.

Lol @ Judas. This reminds me of that silly comedy I wrote before Christmas.

King, you just made Anne very happy. She enquires about your purchasing as SPE badge …

Someone should have told Anne that, igaworker. Alas, the trusting heart of a naive 13 year old with a romantic story fixation.

Thanks, the_hdk. Fulk needs all the support he can get right now, poor chap.

If this were a book you would be about 2/3 of the way through with a hefty pile of pages yet to come. It's at a very difficult and dangerous stage, one I can't talk about too much. I am really afraid of haemorrhaging readers at this point; the story must look rather directionless, dull and stagnant now. It isn't; have faith and bear with me.

Actually, Kaiser, you can forget about CK. This story has only the most tenuous of connections to the game but ssssh! Don't tell the mods that or they might move the thread! :lives in terror like a fugitive from the law:

Fulk has just been given a single fief (manor, pretty much interchangeable in this story). That is not nearly the same as a county; it puts him at the lowest rung of the land owning nobles. Nell herself only has two manors, absolutely pitiful for a princess. Compare this to Trempy; he has the titles Duke of Northumberland and Earl and Kent, and something like 20 fiefs scattered about England and France, many of them sub-let to his vassals but some in his own demesne. I have never exactly done a breakdown of how much land he has, partly because I don’t know roughly how much he should have outside of ‘loads’. Some fiefs are far richer than others, so numbers aren't everything. A single rich fief is better than many poor ones. Nell and Fulk both have rather average fiefs. Trempy has a mixture between great and lousy.

Yes, trial by battle was still around at this time, but I think regarded in a rather quaint way.

Welcome back, Zeno :)

Is it too obvious, thames? :D
 

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Hmm, could joscelyn at least tell US his plans, even if he won't tell his wife? :rolleyes:

And Fulk's being rather busy, it seems ;)
 

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Oh, why not? In for a penny, in for a pound, eh? I'll have it painted right next to the "9" on my shield.
 

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The fight scene was priceless, especially the door bit. reminds me of a number of the more childish fights in my life - lots of slamming of the same door over and over again. Tend to take the whole "statement" out of the initial slamming. ;)

And Eleanor ought to go live with Richildis. She could learn a thing or two about how to deal with a husband and Richildis seems to have it down. I am curious what the plan is though.

And the scene of Eleanor on the hill was a nice juxtaposition with Fulk and the laughter in his head - almost as if she really was watching him. I think she is reconsidering her choice. Guess we have to wait and see if that's true. Great as usual, eggy!
 

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“You had a good day, darling Nell?” asked Trempwick as he climbed into bed. He was late up; Eleanor had been waiting for him for so long she had gone to sleep.

“Yes.” She didn’t budge from the nice spot she had warmed in the middle of the feather mattress. Trempwick worked his way across the large bed and joined her in the middle; he caught her up and pulled her against his side, prompting an outraged squeak of, “Jesú! Your feet are freezing!”

“Sorry, adored Nell. I must say you are lovely and warm, toasty even.” He gave her an appreciative kiss. “So what did you do today?”

“Same as I always did when not training; walked, wandered, thought.”

“You were not entirely happy,” guessed the spymaster shrewdly.

After a pause she confessed, “No.”

“I had a lot of work to do; I am beginning to hear some fascinating whispers coming from France. No matter how much I might wish to spend my days with you it simply is not possible. It never has been, and I did warn you of this”

“I know.” A long pause. She spoke resentfully into his shoulder, “I did not even see you for dinner. I have not seen you since we got up.”

“These whispers from France are important; the slightest hint of potential treason.” He turned his head on the pillow but she kept her face angled downwards, towards his shoulder. Trempwick gently placed two fingers under her cheek and encouraged her to look at him. “Nell?”

“It rankles, coming clear second to my beloved regal ancestor.”

“Oh Nell! Not second, not in my heart. I have to do my job; it lends me power and trust and in turn that keeps you safe. The more useful I am to him the more likely the king is to listen to me.”

“So our trip to Saint Albans is cancelled?”

“Yes. I am sorry, dear Nell.” Eleanor dropped her head back onto his shoulder. Her mouth curved downwards in a miserable arc and she looked utterly dejected. Trempwick pulled her into a tighter, two armed embrace and said consolingly, “You can still have your new horse; you need one rather urgently. I will not have my princess riding about on a borrowed nag. I can get someone to bring up some suitable animals for you to look over; I could spare a half day to help you choose.”

“Thank you,” she said despondently.

“I shall send a message to my usual stud tomorrow; they can have a selection of their best mounts here for the end of the week.”

There was a long pause. Eleanor timidly placed her right hand on Trempwick’s stomach and began picking at the finely woven linen of his shirt with one fingernail. “We are going to have a big wedding, right?”

“I am afraid it is unavoidable, beloved Nell.”

“It is going to be Anne’s wedding all over again, except this time we will be the target.”

“Sadly true; I shall do all I can to avoid the worst nonsense and excesses.” Trempwick captured her hand and moved it over so she had her arm flung lazily over his chest, then his own hand returned to stroking her spine.

Eleanor shuffled her head a bit, moving so it rested more comfortably in the hollow below the shoulder joint, and so her mouth was clear and she was not mumbling into his ribs. “That was not entirely what I was thinking of. We will be set slightly apart from everyone else again, at our own wedding. We will be sober, alert, listening and watching, sensible - agents through and through. There will be no one else like us there. This time we will be at the centre instead of just next to it, and yet we will still be … lonely.”

“Before I trained you, sweet Nell, I was entirely alone. My agents only know what I wish them to, and that is only ever precisely what they need to know. The better quality ones share some traits with us, such as the remaining sober, but they never see the whole picture in the same way we do.”

“They do not look along the tables at the guests and quantify them as ‘idiot, manipulated by his steward, ambitious, reliable, ambitious, dangerous, adulterous wife, ambitious, ambitious …’”

“Yes; that is our preserve and ours alone. My agents will view but a handful of people in that way: their targets. It is the worst part of it all, really. No one is just a person; they are always quantified according to what threat they could be to us and to our king.” Trempwick ceased running his fingers along her spine and began to twine them in her hair instead. “I am told by Edward my attempt to style your hair self destructed after just a few hours. I shall keep trying; an old spymaster can learn new tricks and I am still quite young.”

“I wonder what they see when they look at my father? And my brother?” said Eleanor thoughtfully.

“That depends greatly on the person doing the looking, darling Nell.”

“Of course, but I doubt they will see ‘Explosive tempered cruel man with ambition. Is proud and stubborn, aging and slowing down but still strong and fit, easy to provoke into losing his temper if you apply the correct stimulus. A murderer many times over, a kin slayer who shows no mercy when it comes to removing anything and anyone he views as a threat. His attributes help him hold the realm together and make him a good king but by the same token a horrible man and father.’ Hugh certainly will not come up as ‘Outwardly an honourable and chivalrous man but inside a festering copy of his father; treacherous, murderous, cruel, will do anything to hold and expand his power. Smiles to your face and knifes you from behind, then blames someone else and pretends he never did a thing to harm you. Stolid and staid, lacking in imagination, and it is this which truly holds him back currently. Treat with extreme caution.’”

“No, they would not see much, if any, of that. Their opinions would be as mundane as their view of you.” He kissed the top of her head.

Eleanor sighed and asked forlornly, “How are we going to manage?”

“Nell?”

“At our wedding. Hugh will be publicly congratulatory, pretending he is delighted while we will know he sent a bunch of thugs after me. We shall have to smile and play along. I am not sure I can.”

“You managed when he was here a couple of days ago. I was proud of you then, beloved Nell.”

“I do not think I can do it again, not with both of them at once. They will be there, one pretending he never tried to prevent our wedding while the other smirks and tells me he was right to force me to this.”

“You will cope, I know you will. I will do my best to keep them away from you, and you know I do not plan on remaining at the feast for long.”

“Everyone will laugh,” said Eleanor desolately. “And I know my family will blame me for the breach in protocol.”

“Nell, if I pick you up and drag you off you can hardly be blamed.”

“I always get blamed whether it is my fault or not; I thought you knew that by now. But I do not care about that … much.” Trempwick gave her time to broach whatever was on her mind, and eventually she did so. “Which one of them killed John? Who placed his neck on the block? My father with his anger or my brother with his ambition? Why couldn’t you save him?”

“Nell …” sighed Trempwick.

Eleanor propped herself up on one elbow and starred earnestly at him. “Tell me. I want – need to know; I cannot have this uncertainty added to the feelings I must conceal. Tell me how my brother died, all of it. I know next to nothing.”

“And for good reason! Nell, it was terrible-”

“Yes – I heard he died a coward and somehow managed to fix things so I urgently needed publicly dumping on some suitable man or other, but no one would tell me how or why. Tell me; which one of them killed him, and how did he manage to twist my life like this.”

Hurt, he said, “I thought you were happy with our betrothal.”

“I am, but none the less I want to know why I am in this position. Tell me.”

Trempwick’s resistance collapsed reluctantly. “Your father knew what he felt he had to do but your brother pushed him to it with plenty of talk about upholding the law and applying justice equally. He effectively countered my insistence we could handle John being left alive. Every point I put forward he smashed with his talk of justice. If he had not been there I would have been able to talk your father around; I was very nearly successful.”

Eleanor said sadly, “I do not think Hugh ever liked John.”

“Perhaps when they were boys he did?”

“I think not. He has turned against his family, first John and now me …” She dropped back down and pulled the blankets back up to her chin, settling back into Trempwick’s arms.

“Power can warp people, it corrupts. Some withstand it but many do not. Hugh may be corrupt now but that does not mean he was always so.”

“What did John do to get me married? The arse in the crown has been content enough to leave me single all these years, well not exactly content … you know what I mean.”

“Nell …” sighed Trempwick again.

“Tell me,” she demanded evenly.

“I do not want you to get the wrong idea.”

“Tell me.”

“He reminded the nobles that you were single and being kept in a state very similar to imprisonment because your father dislikes you. He said any man wanting the throne only needed you to put in a valid claim to rival Hugh’s. Nell, that is not my motive.” He said the words distinctly. “It is not my motive. I have grown fond of you; for years I wished I could marry you but knew I could not, and then I was given that chance, ordered into it by the king in a way that nearly destroyed everything I hoped to gain. It is you I want, no one and nothing else. That is not something I will say often.”

“Why? Why me?”

Trempwick laughed. “Nell, it is late and you were asleep when I came in. You lie there interrogating me and plotting politics, and accuse me of being a liar! Who else would do any of that, especially just after waking up?” He scrutinised her. “Who would ever have thought you of all people wanted to hear a lot of sentimental stuff? I always thought you scorned it. Very well, the world may consider you plain at best, beloved Nell, but I find a much more favourable verdict. I do not want some cowering cretin of a wife; I want someone to sharpen my wits and give me the odd battle now and then – I like your wilfulness, so long as it is kept within appropriate limits. I know I can trust you to play the dual role of spymaster’s wife and duchess, and play it well. Money I care little for, and I have more than enough power. Look at what we were saying earlier, about how we are two of a kind and lonely. Now we have each other, and I at least am much less lonely now.” She lay back down at his side. He kissed her on the forehead and joked, “Dearest Nell, at this rate I might even believe you want to hear me say I love you.”

“Go on then.”

“I never thought you needed telling.” She let an expectant silence speak for itself. “Nell, I love you.”

“Very nice.” Eleanor snuggled down in the crook of his arm and closed her eyes. She had nearly dozed off when Trempwick spoke again.

“Hugh’s wife is pregnant; there is great hope, although I admit I am not entirely convinced this time will be different to any other. He will perhaps turn his attention from you now; I have made it subtly clear I am guarding you closely and he has a potential heir to secure his position.”

“And if it is not enough to turn his attention?”

“Then I will do everything in my power to protect you, you know that.”

“I only hope it is enough.”

“So do I, beloved Nell. So do I.”






The Tuesday horse fair was a sizeable gathering with several different traders from local studs bringing strings of horses to sell. All kinds of animals could be found, from exceptional destriers to sturdy little pack ponies. Despite the king’s saying the fair was held on Tuesdays, implying it was a weekly affair, it was actually a monthly market. The huge markets held on Saint’s fair days may offer far more variety and choice by dint of drawing traders from further afield but the monthly royal market was nothing to dismiss as unimpressive or limited.

The market was held a short walk outside the settlement, in one of the empty patches of clear land. Lines of horses had been picketed for buyers to walk along while the sellers extolled their wares’ virtues, charmed, haggled, and used every trick they knew to make sales. Clear space behind the pickets allowed prospective buyers to try out any horse which caught their eye, and those traders with warhorses had set up rough quintains to prove their mounts had the correct training to deliver a man and his lance point smoothly to his target. Simon trailed around after Fulk, carrying his new riding saddle; Fulk himself carried his equally brand new war saddle. It was a rare horse merchant who kept saddles for his customers to try his mounts with, and thanks to Trempwick Fulk had lost his old pair of saddles. More expense, and more discomfort too – saddles needed breaking in before they provided a truly comfortable seat and he’d only really got the last two nicely worn.

Fulk found himself a nice dun palfrey for a reasonable price without too much trouble, but finding a suitable warhorse was taking much longer. While a saddle horse only needed a nice temperament, a smooth gait, good form, sound health, and stamina a warhorse needed all that in addition to the correct training, the right kind of controlled aggression, strength and size. Any decent saddle horse would do for a good horseman; a warhorse needed to suit its rider to the point where the man trusted the animal with his life in battle.

Fulk had tried several likely looking animals only to find small faults. One had been too wilful for his tastes, another had possessed a hard mouth so it required a heavy hand, still another had just not felt right somehow. He hadn’t counted the horses he’d looked at and turned down without even taking them for a trial ride. Courser or destrier; he was not picky so long as it was a sound creature and reasonably priced. There was something uncomfortable on an unconscious level about buying a horse while considering how badly its death would hurt you financially but scrimping was equally disquieting. Scrimping weighed your own life up against your purse.

He wandered along the lines of the final trader. He gave several warhorses a cursory inspection but there was only the one which really drew his attention; a blood bay destrier. Scenting a potential sale the merchant hurried over to his side. “Sir, an excellent choice. This animal’s got some Arab blood; his grandsire was an Arab by the name of Asan, meaning ‘beautiful’ in the heathen tongue, and truly he was well named. You’ll see much of the Arab breeding showing in this grandson.”

“Spare me the sales pitch,” ordered Fulk, absorbed in his inspection of the horse. Intelligent eyes, good lines, healthy, temperament was pleasant; all in all quite promising.

“Blood red’s a good colour for a warhorse, shows class too. You’d be the envy of all on your own side and strike fear into your enemies’ hearts riding into battle on this beauty.”

“I don’t care about colour; it only inflates the price.” Fulk broke away from his inspection. “I’ll try him.”

The merchant waited for Fulk to put his new saddle on the horse, then unhitched the reins and led both knight and animal around to the space of empty ground reserved for customers trying his horses. There Fulk put the animal through its basic paces, riding about in a lazy loop at steadily increasing speeds until he was galloping. Next he tried the battle exercises, checking the animal knew all the prompts and their associated movements. Despite its earlier docile attitude the animal had no qualms at all when required to rear up and kick out, or bite. The stallion was agile too, able to twist and turn about at the lightest touch. So far so very promising.

Finally Fulk shouted to the merchant to get him the lance he kept for customers wanting to try tilting with their prospective purchases. All his practise the previous day had left him tired, stiff, and peppered with bruises but at least he did not need to fear making a complete fool out of himself today. As long as he didn’t show off. His run went smoothly; man and horse in tune and competent. A few repeats made sure of it; this was the horse for him.

A long session of hard haggling later and Fulk was the proud owner of one destrier for the princely sum of forty-one shillings. The palfrey had only cost twenty shillings. He mentally excused the extravagance by telling himself that the king demanded only the best of his knights and he could hardly use a second rate animal, and with his new lands both animals could easily be paid for within the year.

Together with Simon he collected his other horse and led the two animals back towards the palace stables. Fulk considered various names for his new horse. The palfrey he’d dubbed Tace, meaning ‘silent’ in Latin. Tace he could explain easily away; no one but him would know the horse was a four legged oat eating reminder of his vow not to gab away like an old woman at a fish market. “Sueta, I think.”

“Sueta?” asked Simon. “From the Latin for sweetheart?” So the boy did speak Latin, and he was quite disgusted.

Fulk flashed a grin. “Yes. Something brave and battle worthy might be traditional but I find this suits. He’s a damn fine horse, it’s a nice sounding word, and I like the irony. Sueta here will bite a man’s face off. Hell has no fury like my sweetheart.”






Eleanor crumpled Matilda’s letter and tossed it onto the solar floor. “Bitch.”

“Is something the matter, beloved Nell?” inquired Trempwick, looking up from his simple breakfast of yesterday’s bread and a bit of cold meat.

Eleanor’s mouth set into a thin line. “You know what is wrong - you read the letter before giving it to me, same as usual.”

“Nell, it is for -”

“I am quite familiar with your excuses, thank you.” She shoved away from the table and began to stomp up and down the room, scowling furiously. “Marrying below my station and disgracing the entire family indeed – as if I had any choice! This after years of her snidely suggesting I should grab the first person dumb enough to offer for me because I can do no better.”

“Calm down, dearest Nell. We both know the truth of our situation; what does your sister’s opinion matter?”

“It matters because -” Eleanor caught herself just in time; she had nearly let a very large piece of her inner self go. It mattered because she had been compared to Matilda and found lacking in all respects for as long as she could remember. She could never be as good as her eldest sister at anything and so she had decided early on to be completely different, to use her own traits and embrace them rather than trying to tamp them down and become another perfect noble lady. Matilda was the first person to really tell her exactly what she was instead of dressing it up and lying to insist she would one day be every bit as pretty and regal as her sisters. Matilda and her scathing verdict on her lamentable youngest sister; the original and the first in a very long line. An honest truth that had only strengthened her resolve to avoid a life she was clearly not suited to. Eleanor barely missed a beat, “Because she is a bitch and I refuse to lose in our little on-going spat. She would never let me forget it, never.”

Trempwick got up and put a stop to her restive pacing by capturing her in a loose hug. “I am willing to bet she will be much more upset if her letter received either no response or a cool one which leaves no space to continue the battle. She wants to beat you, darling Nell, and she can only do that if you continue to fight.”

Eleanor grinned up at him. “Or on the other hand I could send back a letter gushing about how madly in love we are, making it plain I am disgracing my family and having the time of my life too.” When Trempwick would have spoken she laid one finger across his lips and said softly, “I can include a part of your suggestion. I can make it plain that you are my family now, and I am done with the rest of them.”

“Nell-”

“It is true – a brother who wants me dead, a bitch of a sister, a deceased brother who plotted to use me as some kind of dog treat and then invited all and sundry to grab me when he was about to die, an imprisoned sister who does not even have the mettle to try and dig herself out of her own grave, a dead mother I barely knew, and a father who is nothing more than an inhuman monster. The only one I liked died years ago, and I am now not entirely sure he would have been any better if he had lived to adulthood. I am done with them; they have made it exceptionally clear they do not care about me and now I no longer care about them.”

“When will you write it?”

“After the wedding; I think obnoxious newlywed bliss will only make it all the better and it gives me more material to use. As soon as we are married I have no family but you.”







Jocelyn did tell readers his plans, right back in his second scene. I'll recap very roughly for those who have forgotten. He is going to prove is loyalty and follow Yves, knowing he will soon screw up. Once Yves is out of the picture Jocelyn can go running to William on bended knee (don't ask about how that is physically possible) and surrender, claiming that is only took part in the rebellion because he is sooooo loyal. Also Yves has Jocelyn's eldest son in his household and he can claim the boy was a hostage top ensure he fought for Yves. Ahem, it all works much better when he explains it himself (post 351).

Anne is overjoyed, King. She has really been very enthusiastic about SPE. Humph; children.

I would say Eleanor should learn from Anne; that little girl has William under surprisingly good control. Richildis loses more than she wins, even in that last scene where she comes off with some dignity.

I do love the way they squabble over who gets to walk out on whom. :D
 

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Well, being as he suddenly is being a bit over-loyal, I thought he was changing plans. He wasn't even summoned :wacko:

And Trempwick suddenly trying to be nice again, I must say he's quite good at it if he tries ;)
 

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I'm still not totaly believing Eleanor and her "wedded bliss." She must have something up her sleeve other than knives. However, I must give Trempy some credit in thathe seems to be trying very hard to make this work.

Loved the scene with Fulk and the purchasing of the horse. Especially the salesman. So true. And nice name for what sounds like a great horse. Nice choice, Fulk.
 

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Her last order, and he had disobeyed it. Fulk sat on his stool alone in his room with his arms folded on the tabletop and his chin resting on top of them, staring at the fat leather purse Eleanor had given him. He had used the few loose coins he had and there was no prospect of him getting any more for a good long while; to pay for a messenger to his mother he would have to break into Eleanor’s purse. He had been too tired after his trip, then too disoriented, then too busy buying his horses and other new bits and pieces, then too busy training. Now it was eight days since she had issued that order and his conscience was most definitely pricking at him.

It was not as if he wanted to ignore his mother, not at all. He just did not know what to say. She believed he was dead; how could he explain why he had not contacted her before? Much of what he needed to say he did not wish to speak of; his father’s death, how he had ruined Maude’s life, his deluding himself like a craven because he refused to look at what he was and work towards becoming what he wished to be. Much of what he wanted to say he couldn’t; he could never tell his mother about the woman he loved and had lost.

Without lifting his head Fulk extended one hand and caressed the purse, running one thumb over the bulges of the coins inside. It seemed like sacrilege to open this purse, sealed by Eleanor’s own hand and filled with her own money. Untying those knots and emptying out the contents would destroy her work, and spending any of the contents would part him from something that had been touched by her. This, the hairpin, his removed and hidden gooseberry badge – it was all he had left except his memories. Sheer, black misery welled up inside him.

He could work all day, training until both he and his horse were exhausted. He could while away his evenings talking and wasting time with the other knights. He could not stop missing her. He could not stop sensing the parts of his make up he had left behind with her, sensing them like amputees sometimes claimed to feel missing limbs. He still dreamed of her, and each night they were together as they always had been, but now she was never there when he woke up. He was now viewing only might-have-beens; before good parts of it had been reality. What had once comforted now only mocked and twisted the knife thrust deep in his heart. He had stopped playing chess with the other knights in the evening after just one game; the memories of those many games played with Eleanor were all much too vivid.

Amid this mess of broken dreams, missing pieces, longing, desperation and need there still remained a spark of the solid, honourable reliance he had found for, and because of, Eleanor. She had ordered him to contact his mother and so he would. He had promised her he would, and he always kept his word. He picked up the purse and cradled it lovingly in one hand. Well, as far as she went he was a man of honour and bound by his oath. No one else was worth that; no one else could inspire it. A selective man of honour then, able to admit and find pride in it.

For a moment he savoured the feeling of contact to her the purse gave him then he slowly, with exquisite care, untied the draw strings. There, it was done. A sense of loss swept through him. “Love makes fools of us all,” he told himself at a whisper, not sure if he was pardoning his sentimental foolishness or encouraging it. He stiffened his resolve and upended the purse on the table, pouring out the contents onto the stained wood. Mixed in with the coins, somewhere from the middle of the pouch, was another, smaller purse.

Elation; complete euphoria – she had a plan! This was all a charade; she hadn’t really dumped him so she could concentrate on Trempwick! Feverishly Fulk snatched up the little purse and examined it. A bit of parchment cut from a larger sheet was tucked securely in the precise bow of the tied draw strings. A message, for him. No doubt it would go some way to explaining her plan. Perhaps the contents of the pouch would tell him more. He’d put himself through hell because he had disobeyed her; if he’d done as she asked he would have found this on his first night at the palace. He prayed it was not already too late. His hands shook with his eagerness as he gently pulled the note free and unfolded it.

His eyes reported the message and his mind decoded it, but surely there must be some mistake here? He read it again, then a third time. “A gift for Anne. See that she gets it.” Such a terse message, written in Eleanor’s neat, plain handwriting. Fulk read it again slowly, anger replacing euphoria. “See that she gets it.” An order, not even a please. She just assumed he would do as she wanted, even after all this. “A gift for Anne.” Why Anne? Why Anne?! Was Anne Eleanor’s supposed love sent away to moulder in exile so she could be happy with the spymaster? No!

No more dancing about this – Eleanor had claimed to love him, then broken his heart, ground the pieces underfoot, reordered his life without even consulting him and sent him packing with a cheery wave while she turned her attention, and affection, to Trempwick. She had manipulated him into guarding this purse, knowing he would need the money and so would open it instead of casting it aside or preserving it as a relic, and then she had the audacity, the sheer barefaced cheek to give him orders! Fulk screwed the tiny note up and hurled it into the small fire burning in his room’s hearth. Not even a please – that showed a lot; it showed how she really viewed him. He was nothing, some base born bastard she had amused herself with, someone she could order around without even the smallest thought he might refuse her. She was royal enough to expect it done and to take it as her due, not a favour.

Fulk ground the heels of his palms into his closed eyes until he saw flashes of colour springing up against the perfect darkness. He couldn’t believe it; this was not the Eleanor he knew. It was what she had done. He must be missing something; she was not like this, she was nice, and brave, loyal … spirited enough to hack her own path, and innocent, and … and so … Eleanorish. She was not a manipulative, cold hearted bitch to use others and discard them, and she did not know how to play with men’s hearts.

Fulk groaned and dropped his hands to the table. She didn’t know how to play with men’s hearts and she was too innocent to effectively fake affection; she needed plenty more experience or someone to teach her and she had neither. But she had been doing a convincing enough show of shy, growing affection with Trempwick. She was falling for the spymaster; why he could not say. The man was no good; he might have changed his tune a little recently but how could his petty little gifts and his cloying affection make up for years of coldness? The man had murdered her beloved Stephan for Christ’s sake!

Just one part of this riddle, one tiny part, summed it all up. Trempwick had hit Eleanor; not a significant thing in itself, just another inextricable part of the world they lived in, but two things put a spin on it he’d expect to make her loathe the spymaster completely. Firstly they were not even married yet, making it assault, not a husband’s right. Secondly Eleanor being Eleanor Fulk had always believed anyone but her father laying so much as a finger on her would wind up missing a few teeth as they faced the full force of an irate gooseberry. But no, she’d only fawned all over Trempwick all the more. For all her good sides Eleanor was rash enough, and in possession of that explosive temper, to belt Trempwick back if she objected, prudent or not. Fulk snorted in disgust; maybe she liked it. Or maybe, suggested his most reasonable side, she felt so threatened she could not object? He snorted again; if she was living in fear she wouldn’t be fawning on Trempwick. She’d be enduring grimly just as she had in the days after the betrothal. If she didn’t want to be close to someone it showed, no matter how she tried to hide it.

Go over what had happened: She had arranged a sword fight knowing it would upset Trempwick. She had carefully taken extracted an oath from him so he wouldn’t interfere and harm her plan. She’d provoked Trempwick so much he’d hit her, something they both insisted he’d never done before. From that he’d been sent away, and she had claimed that choice as hers both before the spymaster and in private. She’d been very careful to tell him she loved him and did not want him to go, just as she had been careful to explain this was what she wanted, contrasting ideal and reality. Fulk came to the same conclusion he had arrived at many times; she had set it all up, planned it before hand and executed it with precision and skill. She loved him and she believed they could build separate lives and be happy.

It was time to accept the truth instead of flinching away from it and trying to find another interpretation; she might love him but she was falling for Trempwick. However much she might love him it would do no good because he could never be worthy of her. She had no choice but to marry the spymaster now, now that she had thrown away her only chance at an escape and isolated herself from her sole ally, and she did not want to be living the rest of her life comparing what she had to what she could not and finding it lacking. She did not think he wanted to see her living as Trempwick’s wife, and she was right.

He picked up the tiny pouch she wanted taken to Anne. But why all this to send a gift to Anne? Surely she could have been more overt about it? Perhaps she had been; he had no way of knowing what she had said to the spymaster. Anne had ‘given’ Eleanor her necklace a return present was undoubtedly very polite and to be expected and Fulk was the first person to make the trip from Woburn to Waltham while Eleanor was at home. For that matter Eleanor had nothing to give unless she begged for aid from Trempwick. What possible reason could Eleanor have for sending anything covert, no matter what it was, to Anne? Fulk could see none. She had probably been unsure of his loyalty and thought this the best way to get him to cooperate.

This was pathetic. Truly. No more of this – no more trying to do the impossible, flinching away from the truth, or hoping for miracles. It was over. Time to move on.





Jocelyn rode along at the head of a column of Yves’s infantrymen, leading them into an attack on Hugues de Ardon’s lands and castle. His was one of three such groups, converging to surround the castle and block roads as they marched. Hugues had refused to answer his liege’s call to arms and was now paying the price. Advance parties of skirmishers had always gone ahead to scout and soon the sleepy castle town would be put to the sword to demoralise the castle’s defenders, many of whom had kin in the settlement. Then the army would settle down for a siege.

Jocelyn sourly spat on the ground. He’d argued against this loudly, frequently and publicly. “These people are our people,” he had proclaimed, “and their lord is the problem. Why harm our own? Why destroy a part of our own land? Where’s the point in smashing up our economy? The castle’s all we need, and the peasants will run like cowards if we give them chance. They’ll be grateful for our mercy and we’ll benefit from it later.” He’d been ignored by a gung ho Yves, of course, but it was well known he’d wanted a precise attack to remove the problem with as little damage as possible. That would come in very handy later; he was a loyal man but one who had tried to stem his lord’s excesses and preserve Tourraine for its rightful lord, the English king.

The sooner the English king turned up the better; Jocelyn had been sorely tempted to strangle Yves with his bare hands within seconds of his arrival. The bloody moron had whinged Jocelyn had been expected days ago and had accused him of being slow to answer the summons delivered by Renaud. Then, after all his blathering about the need for speed, he’d kept Jocelyn and the lion’s share of the other soldiers sat about on their arses doing nothing for days. Tosspot? Jocelyn was beginning to think of far nastier words to apply to his liege. He sighed and tried to let his frustration bleed out with his breath; once the king arrived this farce could end in days, if that.

The first screams of the peasants began to make their way to the approaching army on the wind; the army had been spotted. Jocelyn caught up his helm and donned it, hiding his triumphant smile behind the face plate. He had given up hope of the castle’s idle sentries spotting them and sounding the alarm in time for the peasants to flee. Collateral damage was so wasteful. Damned sentries must have the keen eyesight of a mole to have let the approaching force go unseen this far. More God damned incompetence – under Yves Tourraine had gone as rotten as a worm eaten apple.

He turned in his saddle and shouted, “Looks like the game’s starting early; pick your bloody feet up and get moving!” The foot soldiers began to jog. The commander of the group, a pasty faced streak of piss who just happened to be Yves nephew, glared and furiously snapped a rebuke at Jocelyn’s usurping his command. The youth’s voice didn’t carry far and Jocelyn ignored him, pretending his helmet had blocked his hearing. See, thing was he was a loyal man. Yves wanted this place burned and so it would be, with all the attendant violence and mess. It wasn’t his fault their approach was so clumsy it had been spotted and so idle it dawdled instead of swooping in. He was only picking up the pieces to turn Pasty’s disaster into something a bit better.

Jocelyn spurred his horse and advanced at an easy canter, followed by his squire, Alain, the only other man of his in this group. His eleven men at arms had been put in the scouting group, a deliberate insult. The screams and shouting grew louder, still faint but unquestionably more urgent, and now Jocelyn could see a line of refugees running with whatever they had managed to grab at such short notice towards the castle. Others more sensibly took to the fields. The other two groups of Yves’ men were not in view, not even as dust clouds on the horizon - they were late! Jocelyn spat an oath; a cock up in a helmet, this.

Sixty yards from the village outskirts he spurred his horse again; the animal burst into top attack speed, stretching its neck out and seemingly to fly without its hooves touching the ground. Jocelyn couched his lance and swung his shield tight in to his body. Despite the unworthy target of his charge elation and adrenaline surged through him and his lips peeled back in a frenzied grin; knights were born and trained for this, to thunder down on their enemies with lance and shield in a charge that every infantryman alive feared more than the devil himself. Filling his lungs he raised his battle cry at the top of his voice, “De Ardentes!”

A few village men were fool, or desperate, enough to stand and fight with whatever came to hand. Jocelyn skewered one man through the chest with his lance, releasing the weapon before it could pull him about in the saddle and drawing his sword in a smooth, practised movement. He slowed his horse, turned about and cut down a few more men as easily as if he were in the training yard and facing straw dummies. Seeing how speedily he cut through the first few the other men flung down their ‘weapons’ and took to their heels. Jocelyn dug his spurs in and chased after them, felling a couple more with slashing blows to the space between neck and shoulders before breaking off and letting the pitiful survivors go.

The infantry had entered the fray now. Jocelyn ignored them, not caring to watch men at arms scurrying about starting fires and killing; soon they would begin stealing whatever they could set hands on and raping. He’d seen it enough times before, and he had no intention of taking part. Stealing a farmer’s set of wooden spoons was not a knight’s work. He wiped the gore off his sword on his blood spattered surcoat and put the weapon away. He began to ride back the way he had come, wanting to be away from this pitiful, noisy waste of resources. Alain took up station at his side; his begrimed cream coloured gambeson now sporting crimson splash marks as proof of his fighting, but the youth was entirely unharmed.

“War’s so glorious, right lad?” said Jocelyn. He had to raise his voice to be heard over the din of the dying settlement.

“No, my lord,” he replied.

Jocelyn had to turn his head right around to see his squire through the helm’s narrow eye slits. The youth looked a bit ill. Well, he was only fifteen and he’d never been one for killing. “Tell that to the chronicle keepers and song writers, damned morons the lot of them. I just led the charge and near single-handedly captured this dung pile; that’s glorious, or so they’d insist. A pox on it. Get a real battle and fight on the victor’s side, now that’s glorious. This is just pig sticking.”

“It’s a damned waste, my lord.”

“Watch your mouth! You’re a noble, not some gutter scraping.” Alain rolled his eyes at the poacher turning gamekeeper but neither of them said more.

Alan’s keen young eyesight, and his open faced helmet, allowed him to spot something Jocelyn had overlooked. He flung an arm our towards the tiny stone church. “Look!”

Jocelyn’s head snapped around and reflexively his hand flew to the hilt of his sword. He saw a group of soldiers dragging a nun out of the building, along with a girl in expensive clothing. The nun was putting up a tremendous fight but the girl seemed paralysed by fear; she looked to be only about fourteen or fifteen. One of the soldiers wrapped a fist in her hair and pulled her head back then kissed her, his other hand pawing at her breasts. The nun began making even more of a fuss. Someone slapped her hard enough to send her reeling even though she was held up with her arms pinioned.

Jocelyn ripped his sword out and spurred his horse over towards them. “Put them down!” he shouted, putting every ounce of authority he possessed into his voice. The men didn’t even look up. Behind him Jocelyn knew without even looking Alain was following him, ready to fight if need be. Jocelyn halted his horse close to the group and got the animal to rear up and lash out with its front legs. “Put them down, damn you!” This time they heard; the small struggle stopped and everyone turned top look at the new arrivals. Jocelyn angled his shield forward so his coat of arms was on full display. “I am Sir Jocelyn de Ardentes and you will put them down or I’ll chop your bloody heads off!”

“Fair game,” muttered one man, uneasy about taking on a knight but drawing confidence from his friends. “The place was given over to looting.”

Jocelyn nudged his horse forward a few paces and thrust his sword into the man’s belly before he knew what was happening. To the rest he said, “She’s a God damned nun! You want to court your soul’s damnation? I’ll take the girl too – she’s noble. Now piss off before I lose my temper.” The moment hung; no one moved. Jocelyn raised his sword ready to strike again. “I said piss off!” The men dumped the two captives and fled, seeking easier prey.

Jocelyn cleaned his sword yet again and slammed the weapon back in the sheath. He snapped to Alain, “Get the girl.” To the two he said, “Come on, unless you want to hang about for the next lot?” He thrust his hand out to the nun to help her up. She didn’t move. “Damn it! You think I have nothing better to do than keep killing my own side? You want her to see this place die?” Her nodded at the girl, his helmet masking the movement.

With a combination of disarming confidence and gentle words Alain had coaxed the girl up behind him and now she sat clinging on with her arms flung about his waist. The nun finally took Jocelyn’s hand and climbed awkwardly up to ride pillion behind him. She disdained a secure grip, placing both hands about Jocelyn’s sword belt and trying to have as little contact with the knight as possible. He sighed gustily, the sound echoing about inside his helmet. “For Christ’s sake! Hold on properly unless you want to topple off!” The nun cautiously began to wrap her arms around his waist; Jocelyn speeded things up by roughly grabbing one hand and dumping it in front of him, then the other and ramming them together to encourage her to interlace her fingers.

Passengers secured they made their way out of the village and away from the doomed castle. The girl buried her face in Alain’s back, trying to blot out the death of her home. The nun looked about, cataloguing and watching it all. “They don’t deserve this,” she commented stiffly.

“Way of the world, sister.”

“I know; I was out in it for more than thirty years. This is why I left it. Can’t you do something?”

“No,” replied Jocelyn curtly. He encouraged his horse to speed up; a woman’s insistent, high pitched endless screaming match by a child’s wailing came from one of the houses and it was getting to him.

“For pity’s sake-”

“I have children! I have a wife, and I love. I tried, but now fishing out the two of you is all I can do.” The child’s cries ended abruptly on a choking gurgle. Jocelyn swore and gouged his horse’s flanks until they were bloody and he was riding away with more haste than his heavily burdened destrier could stand for long. Well, he reasoned to himself, he had to get his two prisoners away safely before some fool who had no idea what he’d found tried to ruin their value.

A mile out from the dying settlement and the noise was limited to snatches blown over when the wind picked up. Both horses were labouring for breath, overburdened and already wearied by the day’s travel and fighting. Jocelyn reined in at the roadside. He pulled off his helm and looked back. A thick plume of inky black smoke poured up into the sky and some of the largest fires could just be made out. Mercifully that was all; the human aspect was hidden. This could so easily be his own castle and lands, his own family.

“Rest the horses,” he ordered Alain. “Everybody down.” The nun shot over to her charge as soon as her feet touched the ground. The girl numbly shook her off and stood watching the clouds of smoke pouring into the air. The squire led both horses to a patch of grass and tied their reins about their front legs, hobbling them. He then cautiously joined the two women, not saying anything but oozing caring sympathy in that way he’d always had. The boy had always been good at soothing the scared and at easing anguish; Jocelyn was happy to leave him to it.

Jocelyn untied his mail ventail and pushed his coif off his head, then tugged off his padded arming cap. Cool air on his sweat soaked hair felt blissful. He wiped the back of his left hand across his forehead. He unslung his shield from his back and placed it on the ground, leaning it up against a rock so the painted leather facing did not get damp.

He nearly jumped out of his skin when the nun’s voice said from behind him, “I shall thank God you are not prey to the same lusts as the rest of your mob.”

Jocelyn laughed harshly and tossed his damp cap to the ground next to his shield. He combed his damp hair with his fingers to encourage it to dry. Her calm assumption that she had his measure based on a few brief comments in a dying village and his saving them really bugged him. Derisively he told her, “Sister, I’ve got several bastards, I fornicate, I commit adultery, I pay for whores, and I do it in unnatural positions and on holy days. I only keep my clothes on if I’m in a rush. I’ve used force to get what I want too, but mostly that was my wife so it doesn’t count. I enjoy it, profusely – it’s the whole damned point, and I take exception to anyone who doesn’t enjoy my efforts because it’s a matter of pride to me that I’m good at this. You know the main reason I hate my wife? Because she lies there like a damned corpse and is the only one I don’t have squealing with delight. The only church ruling I keep to is the one about doing it in the dark, but that’s only occasionally and if there’s no handy light source. There’s no damned difference between those men I saved you from and me, not really.”

“You saved us; there is the difference.”

Damned ironic – tell a woman that you’re as chaste as a lamb and she never believes it; tell the truth and again they refuse to believe. “As I said before, you’re a nun and she’s noble; by the rules of war you’re supposed to be safe. I like the rules of war being obeyed; they’re the same blessed rules that get me kept alive for ransom instead of stuck like a pig and left to die.” He aimed another shot to shatter her irritating calm. “Besides, it’s dammed hard to bed a woman when you’re wearing some fifty pounds of armour, even more so if she’s trying to claw your eyes out and escape. Willing women are generally more fun and less effort anyway.”

“And that matters how? So far you are only agreeing with me; you are the same but acting differently, and therefore different.”

“Are you calling me a liar?”

“Not at all; I don’t doubt you’re telling me the honest truth but you’re running from my point.”

“I’m a warrior; I don’t mess about with philosophy.”

She tilted her head in what could be an acknowledgement of a point scored. “I came to thank you, and to see what you intend to do with us now.”

“She’s de Ardon’s daughter; she’d be worth a bit to Yves.” The nun drew breath to speak but Jocelyn didn’t give her chance. “But he’d only waste her somehow, trying to wheedle an early surrender from her family by … maltreating her, taking his revenge on her instead of her father, or similar. I don’t like waste. You, my dear sister, are noble too, I think. Not just any nun would end up as her keeper. You speak nicely too, educated, and you’ve got the bearing.” She regarded him impassively, giving nothing away. “Way I see things you’re both mine to do with as I see fit. I’m loyal but not insane; I won’t give Yves what he doesn’t ask for to curry favour.”

“And if he asks?”

Jocelyn examined his right hand; his mail hauberk ended at the wrist and left his hands bare. The skin was caked in drying blood, spidering in the cracks of his skin, clotting in tiny rivers down the sides of his finger nails, pooling darkly under the short nails. He took a flask of water down from his saddle and swilled some over his hand and began scrubbing to remove the worst of the filth. He spoke as he worked, lending an uncaring air to his words that pleased him. “We don’t always get what we ask for. I hate waste, but I’m a loyal man. Pity I can’t give what I haven’t got; I’ll give you over to my wife’s keeping. Damned woman’s a miserable, contrary bitch and it’ll be hard to pry you away from her if I don’t go and shout at her until she finally gets it into her thick skull that Yves wants you. Plus all that message sending takes time.”

He wandered away from the nun to check his horse over for injuries. The girl was the only daughter of a traitor, but a traitor to Yves who had remained loyal to the English king. That made her useful, and William would be glad to get her back safe and unharmed. A tame nun to tell tales of how he’d rescued them from rape and murder, well that was nearly as good. Truly God did smile upon him to give such bounty into his hands so easily. Jocelyn drew his sword and stabbed it into the ground to form a crude cross. He knelt before it and said a devote, private prayer of thanks. As he stood he saw the nun watching him. “For the dead,” he lied.

He went to check on his squire and the girl, Elianora de Ardon. The girl stood watching, silent and white as a sheet. After a long time she said bleakly, “Everyone is dead. Some still walk and breathe but they are dead too, living on borrowed time until the castle falls. Everyone I knew. My entire family. Everyone.”

Jocelyn cursed mentally; reassurance was not something he was good at and now he was trapped. “If they hold out for long enough help might arrive to lift the siege.”

“No one will come. I have no dowry and my family is dead; no one will marry me now. I have no life, so in a way I am dead too. My betrothed is in the castle. I don’t like him; he has bad breath.” She burst into tears. Jocelyn sighed. Females; crack-brained hysterical lunatics the lot of them, except his beloved Mahaut. His little daughter would never become an annoyingly typical female; she’d keep some common sense and grit.

Alain put a hand on her arm and began murmuring more comforting stuff Jocelyn couldn’t hear. It seemed to work; after a bit Elianora collapsed into the youth’s arms and allowed him to gently lead her away, still crying. Jocelyn watched them with a calculating eye. He didn’t really need to worry about Alain; he was a good lad. Problem was Jocelyn knew exactly how he’d thought when he’d been that age and that was bloody terrifying. No, Alain had a good grasp and respect for social rules and niceties; the girl was safe with him. Tomorrow he’d send the pair of prisoners back to his castle under the protection of Alain and five of his most trusted men. There they would be safely stored for when he needed them.






A bumper update; 8 1/2 pages.

Jocelyn can't look exceptionally loyal if he is left at home; he would just look forgotten and unnecessary, making him a kind of lordly spare tire.

Hehe! Disturbingly nice. I prefer writing the colder spymaster over this mushy nice one :sighs: why does mush always have to spoil my fun?

:wide eyed: Of course Eleanor has something up her sleeve aside from knives ...

...

Her arms! :p
 

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wow, I looked just the minute before you posted this, and a few minutes later I suddenly see an update :)

Joscelyn is sure trying to be good. But from Fulk's POV, it might appear there is nothing being done in England yet...
 

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Oh thank the good Lord Fulk stopped all that "thinking" - I just kept saying to him, "Get over it man!" Who knows what game Eleanor is playing, but Fulk should simply move past it and on to something else...like perhaps that nice girl that just got saved. I bet Fulk would give her a shot.
 

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Fulk looked over the letter he had written for his mother. It was only four lines long but the product of much hair pulling and agonising. He had simply noted he was alive, a baron and in royal service now. The rest he promised to explain in person if she wished to see him. Since she could not read she would have to take this to someone who could; if Fulk dreaded telling his mother about the past eight years then he certainly did not want anyone else knowing.

He carefully folded the bit of low grade parchment and blobbed some sealing wax onto it; he stamped the wax with his new seal ring, imprinting his coat of arms into the uneven lump of cooling wax. This was the first time he had used his ring, the first time he had been able to use his new status in this way. Fulk examined the sunken, backward coat of arms cut deeply into the broad front of the gold ring, checking to see no wax had stuck. None had; the ring was well crafted and he’d timed his stamp to perfection, allowing the wax to cool just enough but not too much.

Fulk sent his squire off with the letter to find a messenger, stressing to the boy it was vital to pick someone reliable who would make the trip in excellent time. He wanted a reply, and if Emma of Walton was no longer there then he wanted good word of what had happened to her. He impressed that the messenger had better get the right Emma if there was more than one; the Emma who had a son called Fulk FitzWilliam.

That was that; nothing to do now but wait nervously and see what reply he got.

He still had a few hours until dinner and his first opportunity to speak to Godit and request an audience with the queen.





Sweating heavily Fulk walked away from the training ground, back towards his rooms. He had dropped to the stipulated four hours training on five days each week now instead of working to exhaustion; the time the king demanded was more than enough to keep an elite group in peak condition. He had caught up on most of his skills, although he was no better than average at tilting and mounted combat, both individual and working in a conroi. It would take time before he got consistently excellent at those skills again, time in weeks not hours packed together.

A woman detached from the watching throng of idlers and headed towards him. “Good morning,” Godit greeted him. As she got closer she wrinkled her nose at the smell of sweat, horses and iron wafting from him. Gamely she fell into step at his side pretending he didn’t reek. “You are going to take me out; you promised at dinner last night and I’m holding you to it.”

He had done no such thing, but he had told her he needed to speak to the queen. “But-”

“I spoke to the queen and she gave her blessing; you know how she likes to play matchmaker. I shall wait out here while you transform into a nice courtly suitor.”

With Simon’s aid Fulk quickly stripped off his armour, washed in a bowl of lukewarm water, dressed in his better clothes and snatched up the purse Eleanor had told him to take to the queen. He emerged from the bottom of the tower with his hair still wet, pinning his cloak on as he went.

Godit raised her eyebrows in approval. “Much better. One should never risk one’s reputation in a way which will not make others green with envy, and you fit the bill admirably.” She caught hold of his arm and began to pull him towards the gatehouse leading to the other bailey. “The other two maids are already furious the queen did not try to pair them off with you.” She laughed at the expression on his face. “Yes! Even old Mariot! Well, she’s not that old; thirty-four is more middle age but really to young bloods like us she’s old.”

“Even old Mariot. Well, well.”

“Yes, that’s what I said. She does have more to her life than playing mother hen to our queen, you know. She had three children, but they all died as babes and then her husband followed them. So sad. They were well known as a pair of lovebirds. She never got over it; now she pours all that side of herself into our young queen. But,” she looked up at him from under her eyelashes and smiled in a way which made Fulk’s throat constrict, “you are tempting enough to bring her out of her shell, maybe?”

“Good God; I hope not!”

Godit indignantly rushed to her friend’s defence, “You needn’t be like that; she’s a nice person, you know. Quite handsome too, kept her figure and looks well despite the years.”

“No, no,” Fulk hurriedly assured her, “that was not what I meant. I don’t like the idea of being a bone fought over by several dogs.” They were passing through the gatehouse now, into the outer bailey. Godit lead him towards the second gatehouse, indicating they were leaving the castle.

Godit giggled. “Then you need to worry about Adela, the English maid. She has already hinted she might bat her eyelashes at you and try to steal you. Can’t blame her; I’d do the same if our positions were swapped.” She aimed another flirty look up at him. “I’m afraid you caused quite a stir in the solar; you’re one of the favourite topics of discussion. You don’t want Adela though; she’s quiet as a mouse and so serious. You’d think the world was about to end, really, from how cheerful she is.”

“Oh.”

“You’re not really taking much notice, are you?”

“I am,” protested Fulk.

“Poor thing,” cooed Godit, “still mourning your lost love?”

“Well …”

“Don’t tell the queen, but I think it’s hopeless. Give up, there’s nothing to be done. She won’t hear about it, of course. She’s still in that idealistic stage where true love conquers all. What you need to do is hit life running again – get out, meet people, do things, have fun, get another girl to look adoring, and as I’ve said there’s no shortage at all of those! I don’t just say this because I’m hoping to snag you myself, though I should warn you I’m a shameless flirt hoping to snare a husband and you’d do very nicely, but because you are so wasted sat about looking woeful. Mind you,” she said thoughtfully, “it does lend a certain brooding edge to your good looks and that’s quite delicious.”

Fulk went back to the most important part. “Er … husband?”

“Oh yes! That’s mostly the reason I’m here, well that and the queen liking me. I’m the third daughter of the count of Morey, all that’s left for me after my sister’s good marriages is a two hundred and fifty pound dowry and nothing else. I said I’d catch my own husband. I have to admit I’m loving the search; flirting, teasing, the odd bit of kissing …” She tugged on his arm to be sure he was paying close attention and said sternly, “Don’t think that makes me shameless or a slut; I’m not. When fishing with a small dowry and seeking someone you could love you have to kilt your skirts up a bit and go paddling in the water. That does not mean I jump in and start swimming.”

“Oh,” said Fulk weakly. They passed through the second gatehouse and out into the world at large. Godit now began to lead him in the direction of the royal garden.

“Yes. I can prove it too, but you have to marry me to get that proof. Cruel world.” Quick as a darting fish she changed the direction of the conversation. “But all this is mostly academic to you, right? Lost your heart, still in mourning, not ready to tangle with the oh so deadly female of the species again yet because you’re still recovering those love scattered faculties. She really did a number on you; I’m certain you were damned impressive in your heyday but now you’re kind of like a wilting flower. She’s a lucky woman; I do hope one day someone ends up so hopelessly in love with me.”

“I’m sure someone will.” He meant it too. From what he’d seen of her over his time at the palace he might have fallen for her himself once, not a spectacular grand passion but an agreeable little one.

“I just hope it’s the one I marry, or things could get a little tricky.” Her brow crinkled, then she shrugged and said, “You know, I never expected our dear little queen to fall for her husband, or even he for her but that’s what’s happening. Poor thing’s been so sad this past week while he’s been off on business, and she’s always saying how kind he is to her. Indulgent too, if I’m any judge. You should have seen the stir when he said he’d only take her back into his bed when she wanted to be there; she was asking questions left, right and centre because he’d phrased it carefully so she wouldn’t really understand until she was older and none of us wanted to answer! It took a lot of very careful stepping about certain topics to give her an answer without actually giving her an answer. In the end we had to plan it like a campaign! Thinking up good answers to all possible questions; it’s a good thing we’re a diverse group, let me tell you. Poor girl’s still victim of all those humiliating ideas of duty and the like rammed into her head by her nasty old grandmother, now she really was a harridan if ever there was one. But really, how many husbands would say a thing like that? Not many, and the way he came rushing back the day after their wedding to dry her tears and assure her he was very careful of her dignity when she thought he was not even the least bit interested in her, well it was really quite sweet. Love blooms in the strangest soils, and some such poetry stuff.”

“Really?”

“Ah, of course, you’re Eleanor’s ex-bodyguard.” She broke off awkwardly, her chatter dying away into something slower and more serious. “I saw the blood all over the floor, of course, I helped clean the mess up. I also heard the stories about her betrothal. I’ve also seen the king with Anne, and heard her speak of him. It’s like two different men, both in the same body. Twins, maybe, one nice and one brutal. No, that’s more some storyteller’s fancy, but truthfully the king does have two very different sides. He’s even nice to our little posy of maids; he’s polite when throwing us out so he can be alone with our queen instead of roaring away and sticking to monosyllables like some. I like that; self interest though, no one likes to feel like a dog caught chewing a pillow. I wouldn’t like to get on his wrong side though, not for love nor money!”

Fulk began to recognise the path they were taking, although the only other time he had taken it had been near Christmas. “We’re headed to the royal garden?”

She laughed, a pretty little sound. “Of course! The queen is waiting there playing gardening; we’re playing trysting lovers and we’ll loop around the back and climb over the wall, or rather you will. I don’t climb in these skirts, or at all for that matter. I’ll just stand waiting for you to get back, all forlorn and slowly getting cold. I do hope you’ll be chivalrous and get me some mulled wine to warm me up when we get back to the castle.”

“Yes, if you want.”

“See? I can be nice; I could have asked you to warm me up with a corner of your cloak and your arm. Actually that might not be so bad; in the interests of our cover story, you understand.” She winked, making it clear it was no such thing. “The other maids would positively die of envy.”

“I’m beginning to feel like a mouse being played with by a cat!”

“Oh, I do promise not to claw you,” she purred. “Anyway, why are you complaining? You are having fun; that wilting plant look is slowly receding.”

“I wasn’t complaining,” Fulk assured her.

“Well there you are then, you just sit back and relax and I’ll keep pouring water on your roots until you perk up completely. Don’t let the queen ruin all my work though, or I’ll be most displeased. No more mooning after your impossible love; get on with your life, pick yourself up and get right back on the horse and all that.”

“I plan to.”

“Good!” she said heartily. “I think all heartbroken knights need a chatty, pushy somewhat improper lady’s maid to set them back to rights. Maybe I could make a business out of it?”

“I do hope that doesn’t mean you’re going to charge me for this little pep talk,” he said so seriously it was plain he was joking.

“My first customer? Never, but I might ask you to recommend people to me. Or then again I might quit on the first knight.”

“And deprive others of your services? There’s such a big need for people like you out there.”

She slapped his shoulder lightly. “Cruel! Now I feel all obliged to hunt down these poor knights and sort them out; my life has a new mission. I wonder how much I should charge? A case by case basis, I think, on top of a base fee of nine shillings. Perhaps a shilling per half hour? Yes, that does rather sound better.”

The rest of the trip out to the garden was filled with her rapid, near ceaseless chatter about this and that, mostly palace gossip; an endless flow of names, events, scandals, plans, secrets and information. It was chats like this that had helped Fulk find his feet and put names and lives to the many new faces he was encountering here at the palace. Godit was a most competent guide to the world of the palace retainer.

At the back wall of the royal garden Fulk climbed over. The action brought back a clear memory along with a pang of sorrow mixed with wistful joy; he had only done this once before, the day he had first kissed Eleanor. Anne waited with her other two maids; the trio was walking slowly about inspecting the grounds and passing comments on what needed doing this year to make the place beautiful. When they saw Fulk they made a beeline to him, the two maids still chattering to cover the whispered conversation between queen and knight. This was one well planned and coordinated operation; not a single chance was being taken with the queen’s good name.

Fulk bowed, pulled the purse out of his belt pouch and said quietly, “Eleanor wished you to have this; I only found it yesterday. Now I shall go, with your permission?”

Anne took the purse eagerly. “Yes, and thank you.”

Fulk easily scrambled back over the wall. Godit asked as he dropped lightly to the ground, “Done?”

“Yes.”

“Now I’ll claim that mulled wine you owe me.” She linked arms with him and they began to walk back via a different route so the guards at the garden gate did not see that they had come out all this way only to turn back after a minute or so. That would be to suspicious. The maid kept on chattering and Fulk nearly drowned in the flood of frivolous information.

About halfway back Godit abruptly stopped walking. “Call me curious,” she said, suddenly almost shy. She placed one hand on either side of his face, pulled his head down and kissed him. Too stunned to do anything at first Fulk didn’t resist. As the tip of her tongue ran over his lips several months of frustrated passion boiled over, along with a desperate need for human contact and he began to kiss her back, slipping one arm around her waist and putting a hand to the back of her head, pulling her closer. Awareness of the world began to slip away and all that mattered was bringing her closer still, as if he could somehow crush their bodies into becoming one and fill that empty space in his soul.

Eventually the kiss ended, and when it did Fulk took a pace back to put distance between them while he still could. Godit staggered slightly as he released her. “Good God!” she said breathlessly. She fanned herself with one hand and struggled to get her wind back. “Curiosity more than satisfied. If that was just a spill-over of what you feel for your Eleanor she’s lucky she never went up in smoke! I don’t suppose you want to try again?” Fulk looked incredibly awkward and uncomfortable. Godit sighed. “Let me guess; you prefer to do the chasing?” She snapped her fingers. “Darn.”

“Well, no, not exactly.” His voice sounded rather constricted even to his own ears, and he sincerely hoped she hadn’t noticed his hands were trembling.

“You’re just not interested in getting embroiled in another affair of the heart?”

“No, I’m not.” It was a white lie and far kinder than saying that he still wasn’t interested in anyone but a certain princess, except as a purely physical reaction mostly born from these past five months of celibacy. Even there she was far inferior; blind passion with no greater significance or depth.

She ran the tip of her tongue over her bruised lower lip with a kind of wonder. “Ah well, a tremendous pity, and I do hope you won’t mind if from now on I have this funny tendency to sigh and go all dreamy when I think about you.”

Fulk began walking again, not offering her his arm this time; more contact would only tempt him further. She fell into place at his side, for once very quiet.





It had to be near eleven o’clock at night; late, very late. William collapsed gratefully into bed; he had been riding hard to get back to the palace today instead of tomorrow morning and he was stiff with joints and muscles because of it. A week long trip around Middlesex, hearing a few vital court cases, accepting homage from his lords, collecting the monies owed to him that his sheriff had been holding in trust, and generally showing off that he was alive, well and working hard. His party had arrived back so late only the sentries were still awake. Even worse it was raining, great sheets of water pouring down from the sky, matched by a cruel wind that always contrived to blow water into his face no matter which direction he looked.

William sneezed, clamping a hand over his nose and trying to be quiet. Anne was asleep next door; he didn’t want to wake her. He sniffled then sneezed again. He pulled the blankets tightly about himself, and wished someone had thought to keep a small fire burning in his room’s hearth. Tomorrow he would speak to the necessary people; it was sheer negligence. In the few weeks he had been stationary here his usual rulings ensuring he came home to comfort had been forgotten; heads would proverbially roll and someone was going to be demoted to kitchen runabout. He sneezed once more and nearly blew his ear drums out as he tried to stifle it. This massive bed took forever to warm up alone; every time he moved he left his warm patch and the heat disappeared off into the vast depths very rapidly.

A few moments later the door between his room and Anne’s opened. “I thought I heard movement; the sneezing gave it away,” she said cheerfully. She stood there in her shift and robe holding her night candle. She must be feeling a lot warmer than William was to stand about wearing so little.

“I was trying-” he sneezed, “not to wake you. I did not even let my squires up the stairs; I did everything myself.”

Anne skirted the pile of soaked clothing lying haphazardly in the middle of the floor and made her way to his bedside. “I do hope you are not sickening for something.” She placed one little hand on his forehead, then held the candle close to his face so she could peer into his eyes. “You don’t look ill,” she said doubtfully.

“It is nothing, just sniffles and sneezing brought on by going from cold outside to warm inside. Always the same.”

Anne scolded him seriously, “You were silly pushing on so late and in such bad weather; you should have sheltered overnight and returned tomorrow.”

“I have always done this; it does me no harm and in fact keeps me as fit and hale as a man half my age.” Another sneeze rather ruined his grandiose statement.

“You are pathetic.”

“And you have very warm blood to stand there like that, and most unfairly you are making me feel even colder.” He shuffled over in the bed and peeled part of one blanket off himself. Patting the cleared space he said, “Sit yourself down and wrap this blanket around yourself.” Anne placed her candle down safely on the little corner table and then did as he said, sitting with her knees drawn up and the blanket bundled about herself. The blanket was made to the size of the bed, and was therefore so big most of the thickly woven wool still lay completely undisturbed.

“Did you get something to eat when you came in?”

“No.”

“Oh, William!”

“I ate in the saddle; bread stuffed with meat and vegetables. A proper meal, if a little soggy from the rain.”

Her mouth remained in its tight downward curve. “That is not a hot meal and so it does not count.”

William sneezed again. This was intolerable. “It is not my fault I returned to a cold room, no food, no chance of a bath or even a wash, and a distinct lack of dry clothes laid out for me. My standing orders were ignored, and you should be grateful I am not yet wondering why my wife let matters disintegrate this far when she has a duty and responsibility to keep my household in order.”

“You had your own arrangements; there is nothing for me to do,” said Anne quietly, uncertainly.

“You can find out about my arrangements and ensure they are adhered to. A few questions, a bit of carefully displayed interest in ensuring things go as they should, and there is your job done.”

Her head sank. “I did not think you wanted me to interfere.”

“You are my wife and queen; I keep telling you I expect you to work. You have done well, until now.”

“Are you going to hit me?” she asked miserably.

“Either do what you claim to be capable of doing or admit you can’t and get help.” There was a very difficult pause. William silently began praying she was not going to start crying.

Timidly she mumbled, “I have not been completely useless, I hope. I was thinking you said two months minimum before Eleanor and Trempwick could marry, and shortly after that deadline expires Lent begins. If you want them married before the end of Lent we shall have to begin preparations soon. I think it would be best to wait.”

“Why?”

“Because she does not want to marry him-”

Harshly he stated, “I do not care what she wants.”

“It would be kind-”

“She has not earned my kindness. They will marry before Lent; I promised my friend I would not drag my feet.”

“You care more for his feelings than your daughter’s?”

William’s brows snapped together into a passionate scowl. “The brat should count herself lucky I managed to find someone willing to put up with her; there is not another person barring Trempwick who knows her and would have her. Remember, the last we heard she seemed content enough with the arrangement.”

“At least bring her here for a time before the ceremony,” she begged. “It is not right her living with her future husband as she is, and if they arrive together people will talk. She will need new clothes if you wish her to do credit to the family, and it would be a sound idea to check she knows exactly what is expected of her. She helped me before my wedding; I would repeat that favour. She is very publicly marrying someone she does not want, and that is not easy.”

“I suppose you know about that,” said William bitterly, suddenly keenly aware of both his age and his ability to make her miserable.

Anne’s voice wobbled as she said very softly, “No. I married someone I did not know; that is hard in a different way.”

“So be it, I shall order the brat to come here if it will make you happy, and I agree you have a point about ensuring she will not disgrace the family any further.” She nodded and visibly tried to pull herself together. Awkwardly William offered, “I am sorry. I am cold, tired and generally grumpy.”

“But you were right; I should have done something. I am sorry too. I will not fail you again,” she vowed. Though she kept her head down William felt certain she was crying now. “I missed you. I missed our evenings together.”

Wryly he asked, “You missed using me as a book rest?”

“I did not mean it like that.” A tear dripped down onto the blanket, followed by another.

“I was joking,” he hastily assured her. Not knowing what else to do he sat himself up and pulled her over to him. He wiped her face with the edge of the blanket and soothed, “I missed you too.” A pause, then he said glumly, “I have to leave again the day after tomorrow; heading along towards Cornwall doing much the same thing I did in Middlesex. I will be gone for at least two weeks.” Through the blanket he could feel her small body shivering. “You must be cold; you can go back to your own bed if you prefer or … you … could climb in beside me?”

She very bashfully took the latter option. William held on to her and did his best to comfort her, battling his encroaching weariness as he watched her slowly cheer up, relax, and begin to sleep herself. In the end he dozed off with her still in his arms.









Anne’s maids really meet that funny mental image I’ve had ever since I first said “gang of maids” about 100 pages ago; a kind of Charlie’s Angels in pretty medieval dresses. If harmless little Anne can do operations like this with her trio imagine what Eleanor could do with a similarly good set of maids …

The same thing seems to be happening to me but in reverse, Avernite. I post, wander off to post on the other forum, then as soon as I am back here you are.

Plot thickening? :hides box of corn flour behind her back and keeps stirring the pot: I wonder what makes you think that? :p

Let me see ... Judas wants ... Fulk to become a war hero and somehow become erm ... king of France so he can marry Eleanor in a peace treaty between the two countries? :looks oh so incredibly innocent:

But will he get to go on the day trip? Fulk might get left at home for not getting his parental permission slip signed :p

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Hmm, I took my time to reply this time ( :p )

I really wonder what was in Eleanor's purse/gift. Allthough I suppose Anne wanting to see her before the wedding has something to do with it... ;)