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Chapter 9: Dermot

Despite miscarriages and deaths in the courts and all, Dermot thought that, overall, it was a very good year so far.

In February of 289 AL, ravens came from the Citadel informing all of Westoros that winter was coming to an end. This meant very good news to maester: it meant that it would no longer be cold up in his rookery; it meant he could wear less garments under his maester's robes; it also meant that the women of the castle would be going to their usual spot to sunbathe and wash...which was very good news to him. He had missed them all this time. One of them had even taken to shaking her heart-shaped rump at him whenever she bathed...or at the very least, in his direction. He wasn't quite sure if she was doing it on purpose. He hoped she was. Either way, he greatly appreciated what she was doing. He had even touched himself all night thinking about it. He did it until he passed out.

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The debt that Lorys had inflicted upon Herston Hall with his journey to get the Valyrian sword was still being paid off, even after all this time. The council found themselves still ninety dragons owed, and many expected it to be quite a few years before it was fully done. Ravella, who looked amazingly like the woman at the bathing spot (especially from behind), had managed to collect a special tithe to pay off a good chunk of the original amount. Dermot would have gladly given the rest of his life's income in exchange for one night with her.

The knight-turned-lord seemed to be unaffected by the debt, and had turned his mind to other things. It was not without good reason. For one, his wife was pregnant again. This made many in the council feel at ease, as this meant there was another chance to have an heir. This was important to the lord, but Lorys had something else on his plate. Namely, he was concerned about achieving a higher position within the Red Watch: the master at arms.

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The current master at arms Ser Balon Swann, second son of Lord Gulian and commander of the troops in Stonehelm. He was of great strength, great bravery, and astounding fighting ability. In other words, he was a perfect candidate to be master at arms for anyone, and it was going to be difficult to get rid of him, or convince Lord Swann that he should seek a master at arms elsewhere.

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Author's Note: This image is from a screenshot taken in 284 – he's actually in his 30's now, and married. The stats are the same, however.

By the beginning of 290 AL, things had begun to become a little more calm in the kingdom. Then one fine day a raven flew into Dermot's rookery, missed the landing post, and flew right into the wall. It let out an audible "owe" as it fell to the ground, making a little plopping sound as it landed. It stood up on its feet, shook its little head, and then started to bang itself repeated against the stone, repeating "owe" over and over again.

"Ah, a message from Storm's End," Dermot whispered to himself, walking over and slipping the small slip of paper tied to the raven's leg. As he unrolled it and read it, a smile broadened on his lips. "Yes, from Storm's End indeed..."

He went to find Lorys, who was training in the yard with some of his fellow soldiers. He motioned for him to join him a moment, which the lord did after dismissing his peers. As he walked up to the maester, taking off his helm in the process, Dermot began:

"M'lord, how familiar are you with the Starks?"

"The what?"

Dermot stroked his beard a little, "The Starks. You know, the noble house up north. Their banner has the direwolf on it. They worship trees that said direwolves urinate on."

"Oh, the House Stark," Lorys said, stroking his much more trimmed beard, "yes, I know of them. I saw a few of them when I fought against the mad king. Why do you ask?"

"Well, do you know that phrase of theirs? That one they use all the time in an annoying fashion? Even when it isn't related to anything they were talking about?"

"Ah, you mean Winter is coming. Yes, they do say that a lot, don't they? Even when it's not autumn. I had never thought on that before..."

"Yes, that is their motto," Dermot affirmed. He was slightly annoyed that it took so long for him to get to the punchline, but he was ready for it nonetheless. With a smile curling on his lips, he held up a rolled up sheet of paper he had taken from a raven not too long ago. "Well, I have something new to say: War is coming."

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"Oh, the House Stark," Lorys said, stroking his much more trimmed beard, "yes, I know of them. I saw a few of them when I fought against the mad king. Why do you ask?"

"Well, do you know that phrase of theirs? That one they use all the time in an annoying fashion? Even when it isn't related to anything they were talking about?"

"Ah, you mean Winter is coming. Yes, they do say that a lot, don't they? Even when it's not autumn. I had never thought on that before..."

I knew there was a reason I'd kept this image on my hard drive for so long:

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Looks like Stannis and Renly are jumping the gun a bit; their dearly beloved brother King Robert is still alive, after all! I wonder what side he'll end up on, or if he'll just wash his hands of his brothers' foolishness entirely.
 

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I knew there was a reason I'd kept this image on my hard drive for so long:

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Awesome. :cool:

Looks like Stannis and Renly are jumping the gun a bit; their dearly beloved brother King Robert is still alive, after all! I wonder what side he'll end up on, or if he'll just wash his hands of his brothers' foolishness entirely.

You know what Clausewitz said: "War is an extension of sibling rivalry through other means."

I like the way the Ravella's comment about Dermot was mirrored in his own chapter.

Ah good, my readers are paying attention...now take very good notes because there'll be a test at the end of the semester...
 

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Chapter 10: Lorys

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Through some strange game of successions and appointments, the province of Rainwood had passed over to the Kinglands, specifically under the command of Lord Stannis Baratheon of Dragonstone. This placed a chunk of the Kingslands within the Stormlands, upsetting travelers and mapmakers alike. The territory was in the de jure domain of the Stormlands, and so it was only inevitible that, at some point, Storm's End would demand Dragonstone hand the county over.

The lord of Rainwood was Ser Davos Seaworth, the so-called "Onion Knight," a nicknamed he had earned after smuggling a shipment of onions into Storm's End during the rebellion. He was a close friend of Stannis, even if the latter had cut off the top of his fingers from one hand to atone for his smuggling, and he had been honored with the territory. Lorys had briefly met him after the war, and some had commented that the two looked eerily alike, and may have been long lost brothers. None of it was true, of course, but Lorys knew you couldn't stop chatterers when they began to talk any more than you could stop wildfire when it began to burn.

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The conflict was quite literally brother versus brother: Lord Stannis Baratheon, versus Lord Renly Baratheon. By this time, the young Renly was twelve-years old, and was actually quite handsome for his age. He was just as prideful as both his brothers were, and just as ambitious, but was already far better at capturing the hearts of men with his speech than either Stannis or Robert could. He was showing promise as a diplomat, though the court at Storm's End was attempting to train him to be a knight. Either way, he had the respect of most of his subjects, and Lorys felt quite confident that he would grow into a fine young monarch.

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King Robert, for his part, remained silent about the war, and no ravens flew from King's Landing demanding an end to hostilities, as some expected to swiftly happen. Knowing his personality, Lorys imagined he was probably looking at the conflict from afar with glee, and was already making bets about which one of his brothers was to win the war. Chances were, Robert was placing his bets on the youngest sibling.

Lorys had hoped to join the war, but Renly and his court had quickly mustered the host of the Stormlands against Dragonstone. In May of 290 AL, a force of 8,000 Stormlanders marched into Rainwood and defeated a Dragonstone host barely a tenth that size. In June, Stannis landed a force of 3,000 men on the coast across from Tarth, then moved south, reaching Storm's End in November of that year. Now 9500 strong, the Stormlanders turned up and defeated the Dragonstone host outside the castle walls in January of 291 AL. Renly's army had been commanded by Ronald Connington, Lord of Griffin's Roost, who had been estimated by some as only a capable commander, but had amazed most by defeating Dragonstone's forces within a year: that same month that the siege of Storm's End was lifted, Stannis sued for peace, handing Rainwood over to the Stormlands. Lorys had been unable to participate in the conflict – but he vowed he would take up the sword in the next one that came up.

Lorys was not surprised by Lord Ronald's capabilities. One of his ancestors – Alyn Connington, or "the Pale Griffin" – had served on the Kingsguard, and was considered one of the best Lord Commanders the Kingsguard had ever seen. Ronald's cousin, Jon, had served as the Hand of Mad King Aerys, where he fought hard at the famous Battle of the Bells, wounding Lord Hoster Tully and killing Ser Denys Arrys. The battle was a loss, and King Aerys exiled Jon and gave Griffin's Roost to Ronald, who now served as the lord. After the rebellion, the Conningtons had been permitted to keep Griffin's Roost, but much of their land was passed out to those lords who had served more faithfully to Robert during the war. Now, where his cousin had failed against the Usurper, Ronald had now scored victory after victory against the Usurper's brother, winning prestige back for his house.

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While the war was waged, Lorys tended to matters at home. His wife, once again, pregnant, had found it more difficult to move as her belly swelled and became larger and larger, to the point where she would find it difficult to do something as simple as stand up out of a chair. Truth be told, both pregnancies had become a source of annoyance for Lorys. The woman would stir in bed all through the night, and would often throw the sheets back and declare, "I feel so hot!" What's more, every tiny little thing set her off emotionally. She had always been emotional, whether he was humping her in bed or telling her to leave him alone, but now every tiny little thing set her off. He didn't even have to try to depress her – he simply spoke, and she found something from his words to cry about.

As the belly weighed her down, she took to reading. That was not entirely bad in and of itself, but she took to reading romantic poems and sagas. She would lay in bed during the evenings and read them, and make audible gasps and hums at specific parts. Sometimes it would get so bad Lorys would threaten to burn her entire collection. Several months into the pregnancy, she had managed to read everything romantic in all of Herston Hall...and yet she desired more. She begged Lorys to acquire more, but he told her no. He really wasn't interested in giving her more fuel to read about silly knights and their ladies, and he didn't want to stay up all night listening to her coo and sigh while reading by candlelight. He told her frankly that if she wanted romantic poems, she would have to buy them herself. Instead, Lorys' wife took to becoming more religious, and prayed for the save delivery of the baby.

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The war was still ongoing as the pregnancy continued to advance inside Eglantine's womb. Finally, in May of 290 AL, Lorys was notified that his wife had gone into labor. He was slightly nervous, worried about another stillborn. He paced about in the main hall, thinking to himself on what he would do if it was indeed another stillborn. He knew what people would say: he was a cursed man. Three dead children under his wing, no heir to his seat...people would think that the gods were punishing him. No woman would ever want to conceive with him, ever. The whole incident would prove most disastrous. If his prestige had to be maintained, it must be maintained with a successful birth.

Finally, hours and hours later, there came word from one of the midwives...and it was good news. A son had been born. He was a good, healthy child, whom Eglantine had named Andren. When Lorys went to the bedchamber and found Eglantine clutching the newborn tight, a wave of joy and relief came over him. The child was still alive, and looked incredibly healthy. He was a strapping young boy, which meant that Lorys had a male child, and hence an heir to his seat. The House of Threedrop was secure.

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In November of that same year, Lysana, Lorys, and Dermot were standing on the balcony of Dermot's tower, looking out at the nearby sea and the hills that rose up around Herston Hall. They had met to discuss some of the affairs of the county, and found the evening weather so refreshing that they took the meeting out into the open air. Lorys couldn't help but notice that Lysana "accidentally" bumped against Dermot's lens tube, turning it away from a certain section of the beach and out of focus. Dermot did not notice, and Lysana said nothing, and so Lorys decided not to say anything either.

"Received word from a King's Landing raven today," Dermot began, not realizing his perfect alignment towards the bathing spot had been ruined, "apparently King Robert – or the Greatstag as he's being called now, for whatever reason – has started another one of his odd wars against some trade state half the world away."

Lorys smirked, "Perhaps he has grown bored of staying holed up in a palace all day. He is a warrior at heart. Which nation is it now?"

"Astapor, as I recall," Dermot replied. "I believe that is where the infamous Unsullied live. An army full of eunuchs. Foolish idea, I think. Maybe the women won't fear the army when they attack, but neither will the men."

"Incidentally," Lysana said, "I spoke with Ravella, and have come up with a solution to our monetary headaches."

"At long last!" Lorys said, a hint of exasperation in his voice. "I had forgotten it was difficult to run a county without funds...what have you two come up with?"

"Quite simple, your lordship," Lysana continued, "the new Master of Lockport is quite well off; we have offered him to give us a loan, in exchange for a repayment of 25% interest. He has agreed, provided we grant him a position as castellan. In return for this favor, he will grant us seventy-five dragons, which would only leave us three dragons in debt. That should be paid off in about three months."

"That is very good news," Lorys said. "And as for the castellan position, he may have it. I think it will be very useful having the master of Lockport as castellan of Lockport as well...and especially one as good with coin as he is."

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Lysana nodded, "I thought that would please you, your lordship."

Lorys nodded back to her, and smiled. For a moment, she smiled back at him as well. As she did, a particular gust of wind came over the scene, blowing against some of the strands of Lysana's hair that stuck out from her cowl, causing them to run along her face. The knight-turned-lord was taken aback by this, but tried to put the sudden feelings away. The awkward staring they did of one another for quite a few seconds did not help matters.

But, surely it was nothing.
 

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And so King Robert sits on his hands while his brothers fight over scraps of land. Not surprising, really.

You know, it just hit me what's so different about this AAR compared to some of the other ASOIAF AARs I've been reading lately: The scope is much more limited. Rather than a heroic epic of some house or another trying to reclaim its lost glory or forging a new destiny as one of the titanic powers of Westeros, this story is a lot more like a soap opera (in a good way) where the main focus seems to be on domestic issues and intrigues. Great events are still happening, but instead of portraying the big movers and shakers directly, we see them unfold through the eyes of people who are only concerned insofar as these events affect their own little corner of the world. It's a refreshing change of pace from the norm, I think.
 

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Poor Stannis...

Even though he is by no means a likable character, I used to feel for Stannis(Up until the part where he had a demon birthed from a cultist's womb murder his brother). He does everything he's told to do to the very best of his ability, even tries to expose the Lannister's incest in service to his brother, only leaving when he realizes that he's only going to go the way of Jon Arryn if he persists, and is, despite being more than a bit of a prick, a brave, reliable fellow as far as I remember. It's like Donal Noye said - Robert is the true steel, Stannis is like iron, hard and black and brittle, and Renly is copper.

I mean, again, I lost all pity for him after Renly was murdered at his command, but it is kind of messed up, the way Robert treated him.

And... Are we about to have some LorysxLysana?
 
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You know, it just hit me what's so different about this AAR compared to some of the other ASOIAF AARs I've been reading lately: The scope is much more limited. Rather than a heroic epic of some house or another trying to reclaim its lost glory or forging a new destiny as one of the titanic powers of Westeros, this story is a lot more like a soap opera (in a good way) where the main focus seems to be on domestic issues and intrigues. Great events are still happening, but instead of portraying the big movers and shakers directly, we see them unfold through the eyes of people who are only concerned insofar as these events affect their own little corner of the world. It's a refreshing change of pace from the norm, I think.

Thank you for saying that - really. I'm always worried some of my AARs aren't quite as "exciting" or "interesting" because they don't involve me taking over the world in ten moves, or showing how to do power plays to take a small county and engulf the known universe. Nothing wrong with those AARs of course, but I think the fun part of CK2 is the roleplay/court intrigue aspect of it, and how the various personalities mesh and collide, and that it's worth covering that as well in an AAR. It certainly permits more narrative AARs than the other Pdox games do.

So long as people are interested in what happens to characters, and want another update after the last one, I guess I'm OK :D

Poor Stannis...

Even though he is by no means a likable character, I used to feel for Stannis(Up until the part where he had a demon birthed from a cultist's womb murder his brother). He does everything he's told to do to the very best of his ability, even tries to expose the Lannister's incest in service to his brother, only leaving when he realizes that he's only going to go the way of Jon Arryn if he persists, and is, despite being more than a bit of a prick, a brave, reliable fellow as far as I remember. It's like Donal Noye said - Robert is the true steel, Stannis is like iron, hard and black and brittle, and Renly is copper.

I mean, again, I lost all pity for him after Renly was murdered at his command, but it is kind of messed up, the way Robert treated him.

That part ("he had a demon birthed from a cultist's womb murder his brother") ticked me off only because I loved Renly as a character; like when Joffrey was accusing Arya of hurting him and tossing his sword into the river, and Renly has to be sent out of the room because he's laughing at Joffrey so hard. I actually read Renly's murder scene three times because I was thinking to myself, "Wait...did Renly just die?! No!!" I've thought of doing a Renly AAR in the future, where he does live, and makes for the Iron Throne. I've played through as Renly in the mod before, and (so long as the murder event doesn't trigger!) I've managed to take the Iron Throne and reign as king.

Currently still reading through the third book, but I think I still appreciate Stannis as a character simply because he does show that aspect of duty and drive that the other brothers lacked, or had tarnished versions of. I guess also considering that he seems to get snubbed about everything (Storm's End by Robert, his rightful place in the succession by Renly), I would be a little ticked off and eager to get my way too.

And... Are we about to have some LorysxLysana?

Maybe...
 

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That part ("he had a demon birthed from a cultist's womb murder his brother") ticked me off only because I loved Renly as a character; like when Joffrey was accusing Arya of hurting him and tossing his sword into the river, and Renly has to be sent out of the room because he's laughing at Joffrey so hard. I actually read Renly's murder scene three times because I was thinking to myself, "Wait...did Renly just die?! No!!" I've thought of doing a Renly AAR in the future, where he does live, and makes for the Iron Throne. I've played through as Renly in the mod before, and (so long as the murder event doesn't trigger!) I've managed to take the Iron Throne and reign as king.

Currently still reading through the third book, but I think I still appreciate Stannis as a character simply because he does show that aspect of duty and drive that the other brothers lacked, or had tarnished versions of. I guess also considering that he seems to get snubbed about everything (Storm's End by Robert, his rightful place in the succession by Renly), I would be a little ticked off and eager to get my way too.


"Born amidst salt and smoke? Are you a ham?"
 

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I agree with Specialist, it's the characterization that makes this AAR so special. The little stories that a game like CK2 portrays (or inspires) so well, if you look down into the little details in the heart of the machine.

It's all very well to talk about taking the attractive young courtier as your lover when you're married and having the odd miscarriage but how would the players in the little drama react? And whether or not they take to murder, there are and should be consequences to everything we do (in and out of the specific game details), even if they don't involve redrawing the map to your advantage.
 

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"Born amidst salt and smoke? Are you a ham?"

"Perchance later you'll tell me how a nine-year-old girl the size of a wet rat managed to disarm you with a broom handle and throw your sword in the river."

I agree with Specialist, it's the characterization that makes this AAR so special. The little stories that a game like CK2 portrays (or inspires) so well, if you look down into the little details in the heart of the machine.

It's all very well to talk about taking the attractive young courtier as your lover when you're married and having the odd miscarriage but how would the players in the little drama react? And whether or not they take to murder, there are and should be consequences to everything we do (in and out of the specific game details), even if they don't involve redrawing the map to your advantage.

Thanks for the kind words. I guess I'll just keep up what I've been doing with this AAR, until my readers think otherwise :D And yeah, that's what I love about CK2: even a casual game, because of the roleplay-like elements in the personalities seems to tell such an amazing story.
 

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Chapter 11: Lysana

When February came around, Lysana was a very happy woman. Why? It was because the debt from Lord Lorys' personal quest to obtain a Valyrian sword had finally been paid off. One could have sworn, by the attitude change that came over the councilmen, that a plague had just been lifted from Lockport, and the people's health had returned to normal. Ravella, the foul mouthed Master of Coins, was most happy, as was Lord Lorys himself, since that meant that outside businesses would be interested in investing the Lockport infrastructure again. It also meant he could invest in side projects that would better his domain, and no longer had to fear drawing his treasurer further and further into the red.

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Lysana had kept to herself most of the meeting that day. It was mostly Ravella who spoke, explaining finances and how Herston Hall could expand this and that after coins had been saved up, and how she intended to improve trade and business. Dermot had arrived late, and seemed especially irritated, which wasn't his usual self. Lysana overheard him telling Lorys that he had spent a good portion of his afternoon trying to get his lens tube back the way it was, as "someone" had knocked it out of its place. Lysana did not have the religious conviction to tell Dermot it had been her; she was simply happy that, for a few weeks after that balcony meeting, she had been able to bathe at a spot closer to the hall.

As Lysana got up and left, she turned to take one last look towards Lord Lorys. She wasn't sure why – it was a strange thing for her to do. Something inside her told her to turn and look, as if she wanted to glance at him one more time. As she did, it was as if Lorys were quietly reading her mind, for he turned at about the exact same t ime, and glanced towards her. Their eyes met, and Lysana felt an uncomfortable, awkward stare develop between the two of them. It greatly unsettled her, and after about two very slow seconds, she finally broke away and headed down the hall.

The Master of Whisperers for Herston Hall always considered herself a rational woman. It was what drove her insane about Eglantine: the lady had permitted her femininity to define her personality; Eglantine was always emotional, and had recently become motherly to a great extreme with the birth of Andren, Lorys' heir. Of course Lysana had feelings, and she was not in any way a sociopath, but she would not permit those feelings which many considered to come along with being a woman guide who she was. She was the Master of Whisperers, and that was that. She functioned within the court as a clog in the machine – it just so happened she knew quite well how the machine worked.

The summer had returned, and it had become hot in her chambers. She wore her loose fitting night gown and laid on her bed, sighing. She knew what was going on in her body...changes were happening, preparing for the moment when she would have a flowering, and childbearing would not, for a few weeks or so, be a possibility. For now, she was becoming like an animal, and she hated it. She tried to shrug it off, to think about other things, but she could not. Her body was starting to scream, begging for satisfaction. She groaned and gripped her sheets, grinding her teeth together.

What is wrong with me? she thought to herself angrily. What a curse it was to be born a woman!

A knock on the door.

With slow movements and light steps, she raised herself from the bed and walked towards the door. She opened it a crack and peeked out, tightening the top of her dress against her neck. Outside was Lord Lorys, grinning to her.

"You looked at me rather oddly, Lys," he said, suddenly using a nickname he had never called her before, "are you alright?"

She pulled him into her room. What came over her, she was not certain. She had spurned his advances before, but now, she welcomed it all. For that brief moment, she no longer cared about the game of whispers, or how the court worked, or what her role was. Suddenly, she had feelings, she had emotions, and she had needs...and she wanted them all satisfied. And Lorys satisfied them all for her...

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The two never spoke of that moment in the weeks that followed. Lysana returned to her usual self, and Lorys never bothered her again. There were other things to be concerned about, any way: in March, Maester Dermot had received a raven from the Citadel, informing Herston Hall that winter was coming yet again. It had been a short summer – barely a spring – and already it was set to grow cold again. Lysana was grateful she was no longer regent, and had to worry about predicting for an approaching winter. She could worry about other things, which were for the most part involved which nobleman was visiting which prostitute. It was a simple job enough.

Then came the morning when Lysana awoke...and immediately vomited.

She told Lorys about what had happened. He seemed nervous for Eglantine to find out, and seemed anxious to know whether or not Lysana would take the moon tea. No! she wanted to say. Where had that thought come from? She wasn't sure. It was the only sensible thing to do. She was not to have a bastard child, and it would not be proper for her to have children. To have a child was to distract her from her work as the Master of Whisperers. Her task here was to be ruthless and to dwell in the shadows – that was what a Master of Whisperers did. To command death and deception and then turn around and coddle a child would be inconsistent, and would cause her to have divided loyalties and morals. It was the only sensible thing, surely? It was only the right thing to do. It was precisely what every Master of Whisperers she had ever known had done. It was the most prudent thing to do...

That's what she continued to tell herself over and over again in her mind as she lifted the cup to her lips and drank the tea down...

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The year progressed on. King Robert had won his war against Astapor, and had turned his attention towards the Free Cities: specifically the city-state of Norvos, in northwest Essos. Norvos was at this time led by High Magister Moredo Nyelossos, a brave and dashing Norvoshi who had led a successful rebellion against his predecessor, the corrupt and greatly unloved Gyloro II. The Nyelossos banner was similar to the banner of Threedrop: three brown water drops, against a blue background. Lysana heard through the rumors of travelers that King Robert had apparently met his match here: the Iron Throne's allies on Essos had already been defeated in a few pitched battles by Nyelossos, who was not like the lackluster slave traders of Astapor. Nyelossos was a warrior to match Robert, and he was clearly ready to meet the Iron Throne's army once it attempted to make landfall.

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As the year went on, Lysana's belly grew, as if the child wanted to defy the tea. In November of 291 AL, the child finally came out of the womb...and it was born a stillborn. Lorys was visibly relieved. Lysana was relieved as well...at least, that's what she told herself. Septon Clifford had been adament about giving the child a proper burial, and had hounded Lysana for a name. Finally, the Mistress of Whisperers relented, and gave the boy one from her head: Titus. It was the first name to spring forth from her tongue, but the septon seemed to be placated by it.

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Lysana expected that to be the end of the affair...but it wasn't. It continued to haunt her for the next few months. She thought of how the child look after it had been taken from her womb, and she could only think about how it had some of her in it. It had been a mixture of her and Lorys, in that bond of lovemaking they had committed not so long ago. This child had been formed in her, had grown in her, and come from her.

This boy was hers...she was his mother...and she had killed him...

She began to pace the hallways at night, finding that she couldn't sleep. One particular night, she paced about the grounds in her white evening dress, tugging at a handkerchief in her hands, and thinking about what had happened. Why did this fill her with such guilt? Were those maternal instincts coming to her? No, no it cannot be. She was rational. She knew how a court worked. She knew how mothers and daughters could betray one another. She had no feelings towards such relationships. They only caused more grief than was expected. So why, then, did she grieve so badly for a child she had lost, whom she had never wanted?

Then she remembered...her own mother had tried to kill her in the womb. Somehow, the moon tea had failed to do it. She had lived. Yes, yes, it was all coming back to her. Someone had told her that as a child. It had caused her to weep, because she knew it couldn't be true! Not her mother! She had gone to her mother and begged for the truth, and her mother, in a fit of rage brought about by the drinking she had committed that night, told her everything: it was true. She had never wanted Lysana born. She had hoped Lysana would die in the womb, with the tea doing its work. Sometimes, she still wished Lysana had died. All those words, Lysana's mother had told her.

How she had tried to suppress those memories over the years. Now they all came flooding back to her, and she realized one thing: she had become as terrible as her mother. No, in fact, she was worse than her mother...because her child had actually died.

She began to weep. It was the hardest crying she had experienced in a long time. It was harder than all the times she had cried as a child, even that day when she had heard about what her mother had done. She climbed up the steps of some rampart, not even thinking. She was no longer aware of her surroundings. She wanted to walk, she wanted to walk away from everything. She was a terrible woman. She was a horrible mother. She had killed a young child that was hers. It was a boy she could have raised to be just as clever as she was in court, and who could have served Andren when he finally came of age. She could have done so many things with the child. She could have been as much a mother as Eglantine was proving to be.

I am a terrible woman, she thought over and over again, a terrible, terrible woman!

She was so overcome with grief that she did not see what was ahead of her, and did not notice when she took a step forward, over the edge of the rampart...

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Poor Lysana, she was just trying to make a way in the world.
 

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Aw man, Lysana was one of the better ones. Such a shame.

Yeah, it was disappointing to see that pop up in my game. To quote the South Park episode spoofing Game of Thrones: "I'm sick of becoming emotionally involved with characters and then watching them die!"

Ouch! I'm sure Lorys won't take the news he'll be getting the next morning well.

On the plus side, there's room for advancement in the council...

Poor Lysana, she was just trying to make a way in the world.

A slightly amoral way, but a way nonetheless.
 

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I'm always worried some of my AARs aren't quite as "exciting" or "interesting" because they don't involve me taking over the world in ten moves, or showing how to do power plays to take a small county and engulf the known universe.

I'd kindly disagree - if a narrative AAR ends with character conquering vast amounts of territory, blobbing like hell with use of some absolutely gamey tactics badly handwaved in text - it's not a good piece of art. This kind of approach stretches the suspension of disbelief too thin, and, in fact, is very disappointing. Narrative type should be more up and down story with characters actually getting in trouble, being imprisoned, in debt, sick or even having some worse fate - to make it more real. Obscure-count-to-king uplift in fifteen years or something without any real opposition whatsoever is downright ridicolous. And too common in AARs here to be actually interesting.

Of course my point only applies to narrative AARs, not gameplay - I'm cool with players conquering the world in ten years, subjugating provs in alphabetical order or reinstating Israel starting with some ruler-designed Jewish guy in Finland. As long as they don't try to insert any story there other than comedy.

But that's only my opinion, of course. Keep your good work here and cheers. :)
 

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I'd kindly disagree - if a narrative AAR ends with character conquering vast amounts of territory, blobbing like hell with use of some absolutely gamey tactics badly handwaved in text - it's not a good piece of art. This kind of approach stretches the suspension of disbelief too thin, and, in fact, is very disappointing. Narrative type should be more up and down story with characters actually getting in trouble, being imprisoned, in debt, sick or even having some worse fate - to make it more real. Obscure-count-to-king uplift in fifteen years or something without any real opposition whatsoever is downright ridicolous. And too common in AARs here to be actually interesting.

Of course my point only applies to narrative AARs, not gameplay - I'm cool with players conquering the world in ten years, subjugating provs in alphabetical order or reinstating Israel starting with some ruler-designed Jewish guy in Finland. As long as they don't try to insert any story there other than comedy.

But that's only my opinion, of course. Keep your good work here and cheers. :)

Thanks for your post.

If a person is going for a more narrative or historical AAR, I think having those faults or setbacks makes it more realistic, like you said. Stuff like that happens in real life, in any war or any nation's history. Plus, it sets up suspense as to what is about to happen, and how the person is going to get out of this.

I wouldn't mind being gamey in a narrative RP if a person set up the narrative as a comedy, with characters commenting on it and breaking the fourth wall, etc.
 

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Chapter 12: Lorys

The death of Lysana had sent shockwaves through the court. She had been seen as an expert Master of Whisperers, a capable leader while Lorys was gone, and many at Lockport had expected her to advance quickly through the Stormlands itself, if not all the Seven Kingdoms. Lorys especially was hit hard by her loss: he didn't lose a wink over their brief moment of lovemaking, nor the child she had done away with by the moon tea...but by the gods had she been a great Master of Whisperers! If a stranger did a whore a certain way, he knew about it. If a servant spoke a little too freely with another servant about private court matters, he knew about it. If there was a possible threat to his life, he knew about it. Lysana had planted eyes and ears everywhere – surely the only safer place in the Seven Kingdoms than Lockport was King's Landing, with that eunuch Varys and his amazing ability to know what was happening in the city and Red Keep, regardless of how private someone attempted to make their plans be.

Lysana was replaced by Sarra, a lowborn woman from the Westerlands who had been part of Lorys' great marriage sweep among his courtiers, in an effort to bring in more talented courtiers. She had been wed shortly after Lysana and the others had arrived, and was meant as something of a reserve, should anything happen to Lysana. Lorys had planned ahead for such a thing...he just never imagined he would have to do it so soon. As a Master of Whisperers, Sarra certainly had potential: she was almost as skillful as Lysana, and had a knack for knowing the ins and outs of court intrigue. However, she was slightly more conniving than Lysana, who Lorys could trust to function merely within her role, and not with ambitions of her own. It also didn't help that Sarra was immensely fat and hardly a sight for Lorys' eyes during council meetings – that, too, Lysana had been quite helpful with.

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Foremost on Lorys' mind was to obtain that position as Master at Arms for the Lord Swann. He attempted to win over the support of Master Harwood of Swannport, the coastal city in Stonehelm, but this did little to sway events in Lord Swann's court. Then, in December of 292 AL, Lord Gulian Swann died sickly and bed ridden, having passed away at the age of sixty years. Control of Stonehelm and the Lordship of Red Watch went to Gulian's eldest son, Donnel Swann. In his middle thirties, Donnel had matured quite a bit since Lorys had watched him get married nearly a decade ago. Lorys and Donnel had fairly cordial relations with one another: Donnel appreciated the fact that Lorys had served his father faithfully over the years; Lorys appreciated Donnel's fighting capabilities, even if the man had a more diplomatic side that carried a stronger desire to take out a quill before he took out a sword. However the two men may have perceived each other, however, Donnel did not trust Lorys' fighting abilities enough to ask him to take the position of Master at Arms – that position was still held by his younger brother, Ser Balon Swann.

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Also in December of that year, Eglantine became pregnant again. However, by July of the next year, barely seven months into the pregnancy, she miscarried, and the child died. It was the second child of Eglantine's to perish, and the fourth for Lorys – he was only glad no one but a few really knew of the children of his by Jorda and Lysana, both of whom he had convinced the mothers to kill with moon tea. Eglantine, as expected, fell into another deep depression, just as she did with the first miscarriage. For quite some time, she made it a custom to make long walks during the night to where young Andren lay, checking on his breathing and weeping as she held him close. She said little to Lorys or anyone else during the day, and kept quiet during meals. Lorys knew that over time she would get over it as she had the first, and so he just let her be.

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After the miscarriage, Lorys focused again on politics within the realm. He sent Ser Jeren, his Master of Laws, to Stonehelm in an attempt to improve relations with the local nobility. The hope and desire of Lorys was to present a better image of him than Ser Balon, and win over those who would assist him in his quest to become the top knight in Red Watch. As it so happened, Ser Jeren's long absence caused his wife to have a hope and desire for a man in bed. Lorys knew this because she had approached him about it. Her name was Matrice, and she was an older woman than Eglantine was, or Jorda, or Lysana had been, but she was not unattractive.

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Matrice came to Lorys when he was alone in a remote part of the courtyard, examining his armor for any dents that would need to be fixed. She had obviously never attempted to seduce or woo a man not her husband before. She was shy and timid in her presentation, and said some of her more suggestive things in a hushed tone. It was cute, in a way, or so Lorys thought. After so many wenches in brothels who were used to speaking with unclean words or living a life of immorality, a woman who was otherwise innocent and pure was an attractive prospect. Part of him also found the idea of being the corrupting force in her life a rather exciting one. So it was that he visited her an hour later, while she was alone in her chamber. On their bed, where formerly she had only made love with her husband (a husband who happened to be Lorys' Master of Laws), the two made love. She was screaming in pleasure and begging Lorys for more, which drove him on, and made him feel quite good about himself. Eventually she started to do things even Eglantine refused to do, and by the end of it Lorys felt as refreshed as he did after a good sparring practice.

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In September of 294 AL, the Citadel declared that winter was coming to an end, which made everyone happy. The news, once again, was intercepted from the raven for Storm's End. Dermot had called Lorys up to his rookery to show the raven off: not only was he banging his head against the wall and saying "owe" repeatedly, but if you removed him from the wall, he would bang his head against your hand and say, "owie." Dermot had commented that he was glad Renly had developed the bird's vocabulary a bit.

Renly, in fact, had grown into something of a disappointment for Stormlanders. Whereas he had shown prospect in his youth, and given Lorys great hope for being under such a Lord Paramount, now, at seventeen years of age, he was a mediocre ruler at best. Dermot spoke some words with the maester at Storm's End, and relayed them to Lorys. Some dunderhead at the castle had decided to train Renly in stewardship rather than martial arts, as the young lad had desired all along – a possible knighthood was taken from him. As a result, Renly was both a poor steward and an even poorer warrior. What's more, while he showed the same kind of dashing looks that his older brother Robert had formerly displayed, he was slowly losing touch and starting to gain weight; he was becoming very much like the way his brother was now. What's more, Renly had somehow become excommunicated, though for what reason no one was certain. Rumors abounded that repeated the word "sword swallower," and Dermot told Lorys that Renly was probably doing things to men that the maester only wanted to do to Ravella.

All of this depressed Lorys, and he vowed that his son Andren would not end up as Renly had. His son would be a knight, as his father was, and carry a sword into battle, just as his father hoped to do.

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In January of 295 AL, Lorys received a raven from Lord Maric Massey, Eglantine's father and Lord of Massey's Hook. It was a call for war against Lord Guncer Bar Emmon, the Lord of Sharp Point, which Maric had a claim upon. Lord Stannis had gone to the assistance of his vassal, and thrown the weight of Dragonstone against Massey's Hook. Stannis had recovered only a little since the war against Renly, but he could still field a force to match Massey's troops. The soldiers of Lockport would be needed.

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This, of course, was sweet music to Lorys' ears. He took the note from Dermot and went to his chair in the receiving room, sitting on it and brooding over the message. This was a smaller conflict that other nobles were most likely not to get involved in. This meant that Lockport would be able to muster her armies quickly and be an effective force. This meant that someone would need to rally the levies and lead them against Sharp Point and Dragonstone. This meant, above all, that Lorys could go into battle again. How he had missed that sweet mistress. Now, he and war to bed one another as they had in the past.

Today was truly turning into a good day for him.
 
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Wow, Renly is awful. Great chapter I look forward to the next one.