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A deft and intimate scene. The boy should listen to his uncle...but he probably won’t judging by the end of the scene. The folly and sensitivity of youth eh? You capture his petulance well as well as Beo’s gentle patience with the lad.

I do think people are reading but when the pace and updates are so quick you may find their commentary becomes rather halting. That’s certainly the case for me

An excellent chapter

Have just read the following one and it’s full of the heavy cost of kingship. We would call it stress now but the hard decisions, the realpolitik, the onerous burden it places. All taking a mos5 heavy toll on Eadward. You have written it well indeed.
 
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A deft and intimate scene. The boy should listen to his uncle...but he probably won’t judging by the end of the scene. The folly and sensitivity of youth eh? You capture his petulance well as well as Beo’s gentle patience with the lad.

I do think people are reading but when the pace and updates are so quick you may find their commentary becomes rather halting. That’s certainly the case for me

An excellent chapter
And I've gone and added another while you were posting. ;) Don't miss that one as it contains some vital information. :D

As for the previous one between Beo and Eadweald, I did try to toe a thin line between Beo's martial instinct and the familial attachment. I am pleased that Eadweald's petulance came across well as I laid it on rather thick, but I felt I had to in order to show how frayed he has become with all of this.
 

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And I've gone and added another while you were posting. ;) Don't miss that one as it contains some vital information. :D

As for the previous one between Beo and Eadweald, I did try to toe a thin line between Beo's martial instinct and the familial attachment. I am pleased that Eadweald's petulance came across well as I laid it on rather thick, but I felt I had to in order to show how frayed he has become with all of this.
Have edited my response lol
 

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So the grand old master of spying is dying. That will leave the king vulnerable, I imagine.
 

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Ahh, the men of the House of Wessex do show a remarkable degree of naïvete when it comes to the Crown. About the necessities required for maintaining it. The world corrupts.
 

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A heavy weight atop his head that crown is. It will be even heavier if Harold’s betrayal is discovered - and makes it back to the King’s ears. He was angry enough when the marriage fell through - what would he think if the worst is revealed? A real trust breaker, in a narrative if not a game sense.
 

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Wulfnoth is dying now. All the great characters we had in the previous parts are slowly leaving us. :(
I must say I hope Harold's play with Ada will be discovered. I hate when trust and loyalty are broken. And, I must say I'm not fond of those young dukes, to me they are not close to their great predecessors.


And this comment mark the day when I'm now up to date again. Given I had around 2 or 3 months late (if I'm not wrong), I'm glad I'm here for the grand finale.
Just a note to say that your work is still a masterpiece, really. :)
 

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Fb-fb:

Have just read the following one and it’s full of the heavy cost of kingship. We would call it stress now but the hard decisions, the realpolitik, the onerous burden it places. All taking a mos5 heavy toll on Eadward. You have written it well indeed.
All that and age too. Let us not forget that Eadward was the oldest of the men of Wessex when he was crowned, thus I felt I had to include that question about vanity. It is not as though he was not suspicious as Chancellor, but I believe that he has grown more so as King.

So the grand old master of spying is dying. That will leave the king vulnerable, I imagine.
Indeed, it seemed past time for Wulfnoth (as he likely died in game many years ago.) However, Eadward does have Berold who is showing himself rather adept at the role if he can be trusted. I'm not sure he is as loyal as Wulfnoth was, nor that he could speak to the King in a manner required when things get rough.

Ahh, the men of the House of Wessex do show a remarkable degree of naïvete when it comes to the Crown. About the necessities required for maintaining it. The world corrupts.
Well, Eadward is less so than his brother or father but in his age, he might be slipping a little.

A heavy weight atop his head that crown is. It will be even heavier if Harold’s betrayal is discovered - and makes it back to the King’s ears. He was angry enough when the marriage fell through - what would he think if the worst is revealed? A real trust breaker, in a narrative if not a game sense.
Oh, indeed! I've got something cooked up there so wait for it. It's a good thing that Ada's father stepped in when he did or the rumors might have grown worse.

Wulfnoth is dying now. All the great characters we had in the previous parts are slowly leaving us. :(
I must say I hope Harold's play with Ada will be discovered. I hate when trust and loyalty are broken. And, I must say I'm not fond of those young dukes, to me they are not close to their great predecessors.


And this comment mark the day when I'm now up to date again. Given I had around 2 or 3 months late (if I'm not wrong), I'm glad I'm here for the grand finale.
Just a note to say that your work is still a masterpiece, really. :)
Great to see that you have caught up! We are far from the finale but closer every day.

And I can't keep the great ones around forever. At least the long bout of assassinations is over. ;) As for the young Dukes, they are a bit of a double edged sword - seemingly more loyal servants but all born with sure nobility might blind them to hardships past characters understood and fought to counteract. Perhaps more flagrant with their misdeeds thinking they should get away with it as it is their due.

And many thanks for your great compliment! I do appreciate it.


To all - the next scene will arrive tomorrow and finally some good news to blend in with some of this harshness and questioning! I think you will be pleased. I was rather touched when I finished it. Thank you as always for your great readership and excellent comments. It is what makes writing this work such a true joy. :)
 

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Eadward's cursing of the crown - what did he expect? These problems are almost mundane in comparison with what his father dealt with! That said, for someone who complains, he certainly has no problem carrying out what is necessary.

I did have a thought - Berold seemed to pick up the importance Wulfnoth had with Eadward. One wonders if he could use that to his advantage, and say the old man suggested something, suspecting the king will then grant it. A powerful tool that would be, so long as Wulfnoth lived.
 

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Eadward's cursing of the crown - what did he expect? These problems are almost mundane in comparison with what his father dealt with! That said, for someone who complains, he certainly has no problem carrying out what is necessary.

I did have a thought - Berold seemed to pick up the importance Wulfnoth had with Eadward. One wonders if he could use that to his advantage, and say the old man suggested something, suspecting the king will then grant it. A powerful tool that would be, so long as Wulfnoth lived.
Indeed, Eadward is more forceful than his father and brother, but he also does inherit the Wessex trait of complaining about it all. :D

And I have tried to subtly reference Berold learning some training under Wulfnoth, yet I would not suspect that he has divulged much in the way of true secrets. He did make Eadward a promise.
 

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The Heavy Crown


Wareham, England - February 1139


Beorhtmaer took great strides through the camp as the snow crunched under his boots. It was clear that he was unhappy and none dared trouble him as he was focused upon the tent separated from all others. Several paces indeed and two guards stood outside with heavy scarves over their faces. As the Prince approached, they moved to bar his entry.

“At the risk of your lives you would move away from me!” Beorhtmaer shouted at them.

Hearing a commotion outside, the physician ducked his head under the flap and suddenly stood tall before the Prince, “My Lord...I cannot allow you the risk. It is too grave. There is a fever that grows within the camp and we must not allow it to spread, especially to you, my Lord Prince.”

Beorhtmaer grabbed the physician’s collar and shook him, “You do realize that it is mine own son that resides inside of that tent?!”

“A great sadness indeed, my Lord...” the physician stammered, “...yet I fear your son to be highly contagious at the now and take all risk onto myself so that I might treat him as best as possible. But you...you must not take such a risk. I beg of you, my Lord Prince!”

“I am a feared of no man nor devil, sir, so you would stand aside for I will see to my son this day!” Beorhtmaer pushed the man away and the two guards did not try to stop him as he entered the tent.

Inside, he found his eldest son Thurfrith shivering on a cot. He was covered in furs and yet his head was dripping with sweat. A great rash covered his face and his breathing was labored but once he saw his father, Thurfrith did his best to smile.

“Father...always the brave one.”

Beorhtmaer quickly moved to his side and sat to the edge of the cot, “No, my son...you are the brave one. The moment that you noticed the first signs of this camp sickness, you did well to put aside those that seemed to suffer.”

“And now I am one of them,” Thurfrith answered with humor even though he began to cough.

His father was quick to find a cold cloth to press to his son’s head, “Do not tax yourself, son. Stay to rest and all will be well. I would throttle this physician otherwise and he does know it so you receive the very best of treatment.”

Thurfrith finally found his cough subside and he looked to his father with concern, “As do the others? We must not see this spread...not at the now. Wareham is nearly ours.”

“All are being treated...” Beorhtmaer sat once more to the cot, “...and none yet have died from this disease. I think it contained.”

“And what of Wihtræd?” Thurfrith found a slight grin, “He must be a shambles without me to spar with.”

Beorhtmaer allowed a smile, “Your brother misses you very much and wishes you well. I would not allow him to come and see to you but he did desire it greatly.”

“Keep him on the line,” Thurfrith looked up, clearly in some discomfort, “He would do well there and push the hardest of us all, I do believe.”

“And yet he does need you,” Beorhtmaer answered his son, “I think the two of you push each other to greatness. You must know how proud I am to see it.”

Thurfrith gave nod as he moved to pull his arm from under the furs, “I know it true father. If you might wish some more pride...then fetch the letter just there. I think that you will find it most pleasing.”

His father noticed the further rash that had spread to his son’s arm but did as asked and moved to pick up the letter, “What does it say?”

“Read it,” Thurfrith found a grin.

Beorhtmaer opened the letter and began to read the words and suddenly a huge grin splashed across his face, “Is this true?!”

“I must trust my Eliza’s words, father,” Thurfrith smiled wide, “I would hope that she not lie about a thing like this.”

“Truly, Thurfrith?” Beorhtmaer’s face was beaming, “A son?!”

Thurfrith stifled a cough and tried to keep his smile, “I did not wish to tell you until it was certain. Yet I did receive a letter sometime soon after we moved on Ilchester where she told me that she was with child. I wished to say something then, but...”

“Indeed...” Beorhtmaer replied knowing the soldier’s life and was quick to sit by his son once more, “...and hold no blame for that, sir. One does never want to celebrate before the victory. And yet...a son!”

“I would have been pleased with either sex, to be true,” Thurfrith found some comfort in the thought, “Yet...indeed a son, father. I so wish I could be there at the now to see him.”

Beorhtmaer shifted to wet the cloth once more and dabbed at his son’s forehead, “And of course you will in short time. Worry not over that, sir. I too wish to spy the babe. I be certain that he is strong like you were when born.”

“It is a wonder, is it not?” Thurfrith asked as he closed his eyes under the comfort of his father’s care.

“A great day is what it is!” Beorhtmaer was quick to answer as he tucked the furs around his son, “There is no thing better than the birth of your first child...I assure you.”

Thurfrith opened his eyes to see his father looking down upon him with a slight tear running down his rugged face, “And to think...back in time...that I might have wished this not. It was only my good father’s wise words that pushed me to carry through.”

“Come now...” Beorhtmaer smiled, “...you did that all on your own. The King did counsel with you and you agreed to follow through with the match.”

“And we are happy now, are we not?” Thurfrith returned the smile.

Beorhtmaer allowed a laugh, “I should hope so at this glorious news!”

“I meant...” Thurfrith stifled another cough under his loving smile, “...with us...you and I and Wihtræd. So much has happened and you have lost so much...first mother, and then your brother. Now your sister. I hope that this joyous news does bring some feeling back to your aching heart.”

Beorhtmaer was ready to burst into prideful tears at his son but he held them back enough so he might touch to Thurfrith’s face with a gentle hand, “Always the caring one, were you. Your tough exterior is clear to all, but I know you better than any man alive. You would always take care for others if you might. Even as a young boy, you always stood tall for your brother or even the other little ones in training. Your mother would be so proud of you today as I am.”

His son reached out his own hand to touch at his father’s face, “As I am proud of you. Proud to call you my father. Proud to know that I am your son. I am not the man I am without you.”

The Prince dabbed at his own face, “We both grow somewhat teary eyed. Rather tender...”

“Very unlike you, father,” Thurfrith grinned.

“Well...” Beorhtmaer cleared his throat, “...you speak fine words and they do touch at me. And yes...to answer your question, we are all very happy at the now. We will be off soon once you have recovered from this ailment. We must get you to your son!”

Thurfrith found a larger grin, “And I know well what I shall name the boy when the time does come.”

“Already thinking of names, are you?” Beorhtmaer turned to wet the cloth once more.

“Indeed, father...it was agreed to months ago when I told Eliza...” Thurfrith kept a smile to his face, “...we would name him Beorhtmaer. After you.”

Beorhtmaer was unable to turn back at first as he felt a great well flowing from his eyes. The emotion was so much within him that he tried to hide it with a cough of his own. Finally pulling a meaty hand to his face to brush away the wetness, he looked back with great teary eyes and gave nod, “A fine name. It has served me well.”

“It has served us all well, father,” Thurfrith agreed, “May it continue to do so.”

 

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Well let us hope that young Beorhtmær is not yet made an orphan.

I doubt old Beorhtmær would deal well with that either. But then what if old Beo is the one who will die? I doubt that Eadward would deal well with that.

All in all it is clearly best that no one dies :D
 

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And yet it is so.
 

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Thurfrith better survive this, not only for his son. Otherwise, Beo will probably blame Eadward for sending his son into a plague zone, or something.

Sorry, can't forget Beo's animosity toward Eadward over the death of his wife... ;)
 

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Measles: can be quite nasty in real life, no doubt worse without modern treatments (indeed probably made worse by medieval treatments). I hope it isn’t too destructive in CK2 - more incapacitating?
 

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I was fearing the screenshot would show a death from disease. This is much nicer to see.
 

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Fb-fb:

Well let us hope that young Beorhtmær is not yet made an orphan.

I doubt old Beorhtmær would deal well with that either. But then what if old Beo is the one who will die? I doubt that Eadward would deal well with that.

All in all it is clearly best that no one dies :D
Indeed, that would be best. Thankfully, your fears are unfounded and neither Beo nor Eadward will have to deal with it at this time.

And yet it is so.
It is indeed something. ;)

Thurfrith better survive this, not only for his son. Otherwise, Beo will probably blame Eadward for sending his son into a plague zone, or something.

Sorry, can't forget Beo's animosity toward Eadward over the death of his wife... ;)
No doubt a good bet, but as mentioned - Thurfrith survives thankfully.

Measles: can be quite nasty in real life, no doubt worse without modern treatments (indeed probably made worse by medieval treatments). I hope it isn’t too destructive in CK2 - more incapacitating?
I was not quite sure how to handle the measles, actually. I felt it better to introduce it somewhat like camp fever but it was really more of a hook to have Thurfrith down for the count, as it were, and yet still have this fantastic news about his son and now father's namesake. Got me teary eyed at the end myself, it did.

I was fearing the screenshot would show a death from disease. This is much nicer to see.
I should think so. At the risk of spoilers, Thurfrith does live a nice long life (and yes, I am still dealing with him later long after Eadward himself dies.)


To all - I cannot tell you how pleased I was when Thurfrith had the boy and then named him Beorhtmaer. Obviously nothing to do with me as I have no naming rights to his son, but I really enjoy how the name continues on in the work. I did have some slight hand in that when I chose to name Eadgar's last son after his old friend and thus..it lives on! :D

As for the measles, I do not think that it is a terribly destructive disease at least in vanilla CK2. I have seen two characters now contract it and neither case was fatal. Not sure how later iterations handle it but from some hearing, later versions are much more likely to kill off characters. Glad that did not happen here, to be sure!

Still, death does seem to follow quite often these days what with so many characters being old (and other shenanigans) so the next scene will unfortunately add to that. It will arrive tomorrow and holds some other juicy bits. But look to the one coming on Friday as it will be longer and I included two scenes together as they needed to flow as one. I do hope that you enjoy both and I continually thank you for your excellent comments and steadfast readership! In the writing, I have finished scenes from May 1139 to May 1140 and there is still so much more to go. This will likely be the longest work of the three and I would never have accomplished this without your constant support. :)
 

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Measles: can be quite nasty in real life, no doubt worse without modern treatments (indeed probably made worse by medieval treatments). I hope it isn’t too destructive in CK2 - more incapacitating?
Is is measles or Typhus (camp fever)?
 

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Is is measles or Typhus (camp fever)?
I believe our authAAR confirmed it was indeed measles, but had at first portrayed it a little like camp fever. :)
 

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A most moving chapter, my good @coz1 ! I just hope old Beo doesn’t get the same sickness now. He’s not 16 anymore, although I still picture him so. ;)