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Fb-fb:

Being given a first command can be very daunting. Even if it is in a relatively simple matter.

I liked how it was Beorhtmær, rather than this children, that picked up anything was wrong with Eadræd. The obliviousness of youth and all that.
No doubt about it and as it was one of the few chances I have really had to utilize Eadræd, I wanted it to be a moment of doubt in his bravery. He does serve the King well and has made a fine husband to Eadward's first born daughter. I rather liked this idea that he was neither seen nor heard from both in story and perhaps even in Eadward's eye until this moment.

Quick pop in to give my belated respects to our late Bold King. I have been following along in the shadows since my last comment (As far back as Book the Second if my memory serves.), reading the chapters in batches every few weeks. Always a treat when I have the time to catch up.

Ever since Eadward's ascension, each chapter gives me the impression that England is simply teetering on the edge on a terrible cliff. I do not doubt the his corination was right for the moment, but I'm not sure it was enough to save England from a collapse.

The ghostly chorus really exemplifies my anxiety for the Kingdom, Eadward has had to many plates spinning (and shattering) in too many places for so long. And its a poignant reminder that he took the throne by largely by tricks and daggers, and ot very secret ones at that, and that's a dangerous presedent to set when there are so many potential tricksters and cut-throats about.

If Eadward can simply assert he is King, what's to stop Beorthmar, or Thurfrith, or Eadwald... or Oscyetl... or Eadgar... and the list goes on. He may have saved this decade from chaos, but I'm just not sure about the next.
Our late Bold King thanks you as do I! Great to see you still reading and thank you very much for the comment! :)

As to your concerns, I cannot dispel them other than to say Eadward gains us more than just a decade. Overall, however, you may not be wrong. I have not yet figured on the exact way to end this but your thoughts are very much to my mind. I really cannot say too much for fear of spoilers for what happens in the future for you readers, but your suggestion may very well be apt and certainly the implication remains true. I suppose it will be how well Eadward holds onto the reins of power such to give his son a chance for a peaceful succession. It was never so before and even here, there remained this latest gambit by his own nephew.

Great comment!


To all - I had hoped for more than a couple of comments since Saturday but I imagine you all remain well busy. Hey...it happens. ;) I will post the next scene tomorrow (likely early because I finally have a day off) and it is a tough one both to write and for you to read perhaps. I mentioned that 1138 was full of that and I did not lie. The one after that is a harsh one too.

I am nearly finished with 1139 in the writing and as always, I am excited to move forward. I thank you all for your steadfast readership, your excellent comments and basically for sticking with me for so long and all of the words written up to this point. When you have such a long work as this, it is rather difficult to get new readers to check it out so I rather depend on those there from the beginning. I may have lost a few down the line ( :( ) but I have gained a few as well ( :D ) so I guess it is a wash. I don't really care about number of replies or views, I just want to share the story with you and enjoy what you think of it, warts and all. Truly, thanks! :)
 

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I have been writing, responding and reading for a couple of days (juggling three AARs at once keeps you busy! But it’s my own fault :rolleyes: ). Have caught up again. Eadraed is getting a bit of a run - perhaps he will become another familiar character? Would be interested to see a screen of him to check out his abilities and characteristics in due course.

So, the Cur runs from hiding place to hiding place - disgraceful! Hopefully he will soon be brought to heel - like the mangy mongrel he is! :mad:;) Now, back to my own grindstone. :)
 

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Was having surgery. Some lovely new scars for the collection.

The military is growing in size...or the old guard is dead and needs replacing with these new blood commanders. Curious how the benefit of fewer civil wars in the last few decades meant that when one actually arrived there were few who were still around to lead armies in them! Still, when Edward does manage to build a solid army again, he can use it in Ireland as well as against Scotland and France if the need arises (and it probably will for at least one of those three).
 

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Was having surgery. Some lovely new scars for the collection.
You too! I guessed you must have been alluding to that. Seems to be the season for it, with Jabber as well. Thank [insert your deity or choice, if you support one, or the marvels of human progress if not] for the medical practices of the early 21st century - and not the techniques of CK2 court physicians! :eek::)
 

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Fb-fb:

I have been writing, responding and reading for a couple of days (juggling three AARs at once keeps you busy! But it’s my own fault :rolleyes: ). Have caught up again. Eadraed is getting a bit of a run - perhaps he will become another familiar character? Would be interested to see a screen of him to check out his abilities and characteristics in due course.

So, the Cur runs from hiding place to hiding place - disgraceful! Hopefully he will soon be brought to heel - like the mangy mongrel he is! :mad:;) Now, back to my own grindstone. :)
Ah, the joys of productivity. I know them well. ;) Only so many hours in the day and something has to give. Just don't let it be my AAR, sir. :p When I lack your comments I begin to wonder if I am doing something wrong. :eek:

As for Eadræd, look to the last screenshot of the above post. I don't know that he will become a regular character, but I thought it time to flesh him out a bit more as I have hopes of doing with his wife and the King's daughter Wynnflæd (she is actually far more interesting than he is.)

Was having surgery. Some lovely new scars for the collection.

The military is growing in size...or the old guard is dead and needs replacing with these new blood commanders. Curious how the benefit of fewer civil wars in the last few decades meant that when one actually arrived there were few who were still around to lead armies in them! Still, when Edward does manage to build a solid army again, he can use it in Ireland as well as against Scotland and France if the need arises (and it probably will for at least one of those three).
My goodness - we are having a spate of medical emergencies. Glad to hear that it is only scars and no thing else you have collected. (By the way, I am most proud of the one I got when they operated on my lung some 17 years ago. A real beauty. :D)

As for the operational, I seem to recall that I was doing a bit of roleplaying at the time. I decided to keep Beo with his sons and so had need of a northern commander. Eadræd seemed a good fit and I did not wish to give Robert of Flanders too much credit. Believe it or not, I actually have more than enough capable leaders at this time. Beo and sons is a veritable industry in and of itself. ;)

You too! I guessed you must have been alluding to that. Seems to be the season for it, with Jabber as well. Thank [insert your deity or choice, if you support one, or the marvels of human progress if not] for the medical practices of the early 21st century - and not the techniques of CK2 court physicians! :eek::)
I know! I just saw that @JabberJock14 had himself some issue a day or so ago and now Butterfly?! We both had best be careful lest we fall under the knife!


To all - the next scene follows and we return to Lancaster. A brief respite from the war, but it all flows into each other. Reason in my madness to be sure. And thank you again for your great comments!

And stay healthy! All of you!! ;)
 

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The Heavy Crown


Lancaster, England - November 1138


The Duchess of Lancaster sat in her raised chair in the great hall and looked down to her two advisers with concern. Her ire was especially aimed at her chancellor, the Earl of Derby. The Lady Ada was not known for her anger, very unlike her mother Wulfrun, but this day she wondered why he did not explain himself so readily when she allowed her soldiers called up to assist the King’s war.

“My Lord Eadberht here did suggest that it might be a longer campaign than considered, sir,” Ada kept a stern eye to Earl Oscytel, “You did tell me that such was not true. Why then do I hear that my men are being soldiered now to the north and into Northumberland?”

Earl Eadberht of Gwent tried to stifle his brief smile having no love for the Earl of Derby yet Oscytel of Rose ignored it and bowed his head to his Duchess, “His Grace does wish to press his issue, my Lady, and the quickest way to do so is to invest these lands that have caused this struggle in the first place.”

Ada offered him a skewed eye, “It would seem to me that the King’s nephew did cause this struggle when he would not relent to His Grace over the matter of the Duchy...not the county, my Lord.”

“Loathe that I may be to agree with the Earl of Derby, my Lady...” Eadberht attempted to play nice, “...he is not wrong to suggest that the taking of these lands to the north would surely silence our Lord of Bedford.”

“As you are my marshal, my Lord Eadberht, I would trust your martial mind on such matters,” Ada smiled to him before offering more scorn towards Oscytel of Rose, “And yet I ask again...mine own levies are called out for this venture as are my little cousin’s to York. It would seem that the outcome may be no better for York in the end should the King win his struggle and I know not how it betters Lancaster. Mayhap you might enlighten me, my Lord Earl?”

The chancellor bowed his head once more, “My Lady...I would serve you and no other. Yet what does better His Grace the King does better Lancaster and York at the same time. It was no good thing for this southern Lord to hold these lands to the north for he might threaten the family of your Princely father. The ducal title of Northumberland will remain under York with a victory and this southern brat will be put very low indeed.”

“And it would seem that your brother Eadræd does very well in the venture,” Earl Eadberht could not help but add.

Oscytel shot him a glare, “My brother was selected by the King to lead this northern army.”

“Well on him,” Eadberht was quick to respond with a grin, “Glad to see him finally earn his spurs.”

“My Lady...” the Earl of Derby looked back to his Duchess with a plea in his eyes, “...I do promise you. This will be over soon. I am told that the King’s brother Prince Beorhtmaer does well to invest Wareham at the now as he and his sons have pushed a lightening campaign against Lord Eadweald. There is no man from Cornwall to Dorset ready to fight against them. This latest to the north is no thing other than a final attempt to push the peace.”

Eadberht looked also to his Duchess with a nod, “Once again, the Lord of Derby seems correct, my Lady. I am told that the King’s army under Eadræd of Rose holds not just the Lord of Flanders in his train, but so too the young Lord of Kent.”

“He is very young, is he not?” Ada questioned with a raised brow.

“Lord Eadric of Kent is at that, my Lady...naught but sixteen summers,” Eadberht allowed with a smile, “Yet so too was your late Lord husband His Grace King Uhtræd when he began his martial career.”

Not to be outdone, Oscytel stepped forward, “And the Lord Chancellor does send word from King Eadward...much praise for the young man in his zeal, my Lady.”

So concerned were the two advisers to please their Lady, they did not notice when Prince Godfrey had slipped into the hall but he made his presence known to them both, “Mayhap my daughter would need some time to think, my Lords.”

“Yes,” Ada gave nod to them both before looking to Godfrey, “Thank you, father.”

Earl Eadberht was deferential as he gave nod to the Prince of Scotland before turning to bow to his Duchess. The Earl of Derby was less so as he also bowed to Lady Ada but passed quickly by the Prince with a slight word, “You would talk up this new Lord. She must be married.”

Prince Godfrey watched them both leave and then turned to his daughter with a smile, “Dear girl...why does this latest venture bother you so?”

“I think to receive poor counsel,” Ada answered quickly as she stiffened her back.

“Truly?” Godfrey moved to her and took the few steps to stand by her side, “Is that it?”

“Of course,” she looked away with certainty, “While I do love His Grace the King, I also think mayhap...he takes some few liberties. Mama always did warn.”

Prince Godfrey looked to her with a sharp eye, “And yet you did show no issue with matching His Grace with your sister Margaret. Did you not think that some liberty?”

Ada stood and stepped away from her father, “She must be matched. When she comes of age, she will be Queen.”

“As once you were,” Godfrey held a hand to her vacant chair, “Did you not wish it once more? I did never understand as I was under the impression His Grace did desire you.”

“I have no wish to be part of that ever again,” Ada kept her gaze away and moved to a large window newly placed in the hall, “As I know it I have never been Queen and have no desire for it now.”

Her father stepped around her chair and stood tall with a curious eye, “So it is ill counsel and no thing other?”

“It is,” Ada briefly looked back before turning once more.

“Then I should think you to worry not,” Godfrey replied quickly, “My father King Andrew of Scotland does write to say that he be pleased that this southern Duke should be placed aside in Northumberland and congratulates our King in his efforts.”

Ada turned back to him and gave nod, “Yes...His Grace has done well.”

“Indeed,” her father grinned, “It is told to me that the capture of the Saxon Band captain was a short lived thing and that His Grace did find his justice for that poor move by the Lord of Bedford. Died in the dungeons of Bath did that mercenary and our Lord Eadweald should hope that he does not share a similar fate.”

“You do not think it wrong of me to show my support so willingly to His Grace?” Ada questioned, “Would mama have been so helpful?”

Godfrey took a step to gently hold her hand, “Your mother was a very shrewd woman, dear girl. She might have extracted something for herself in the bargain. And yet...you are trusting and it be one of your better traits. I do love you for it.”

“You do not think that I trust too much?” Ada continued in second guessing herself, “Might that turn harmful for me in the end?”

“As I see it, my sweet Lady, the only thing harmful to you at the now is that you remain unmarried,” Godfrey showed a sharp brow with his smile, “You are now past twenty summers in age and it is well nigh time for you to find your match. You must have an heir, if no thing else. And...I would wish you happy.”

Ada pulled her hand away to turn back to the window, “This again. Why must all of you pressure me so? What if I said to you that I am happy now? What if I wished my time spent ruling in Lancaster rather than in the birthing bed?”

“You would be hard pressed to do the former if you cannot do the latter,” Godfrey looked to her as his smile dropped, “It is expected and required should you wish Lancaster sound.”

When she did not answer to him, he stepped up behind her, “There are many eligible suitors should you wish them, dear girl. I am told one of these petty Lords of Ireland has lost his wife and requires another...”

“Is that what I am to be?” Ada spun on him with irritation to her face, “A widow for a widower always?!”

Godfrey tried to smile once more, “If you did not wish His Grace the King nor some other man having lost his wife, then mayhap consider one younger. The Lord Eadric of Kent does march north with the King’s army and I am told he is an impressive figure.”

“He is barely of age!” Ada shifted past her father and moved back to her chair, “I doubt he has ever had a randy dream.”

Her father folded his arms and looked to her with concern, “And why should that matter? I am certain that he has what is required...and you two may learn together.”

“Hmm!” Ada snorted as she averted her gaze.

Godfrey stepped to her and looked on with scorn, “It is true then...is it not? I did not wish to believe such idle gossip about my sweet daughter but apparently your mother and I have raised a harlot!”

“You would not speak to me so!” Ada stood and placed her hands to her hips.

“Dear girl, I have seen you from nappy to nave of the church when invested with your ducal title...” Godfrey kept his stern gaze, “...and I would know all about you until now. It is a wonder that your mother does not rise from her sweet rest to haunt you if this is what you have become!”

Ada felt a tear form in her eye as her father spoke to her but she remained indignant, “I need not your scorn! I give enough to mine own mind! Yet I am the Lady of these lands and I would do as I please!”

“As the whore of Lancaster?!” Godfrey stepped back and folded his arms once more, “The King is not good enough for you because you would rather corrupt the Lord Chancellor, is that it?”

“I corrupt no one...” she answered with the tears now flowing, “...and I be not corrupt myself. I...merely...”

“Do not say you love him!” Godfrey was quick to stand over her, “The Lord Chancellor is a married man as you should be a married woman. Have you any idea of what may come should this come to light?! It would be your utter ruin and I think not that His Grace the King would treat you any better than a common gutter slut should he find witness to this!”

“Father...” Ada could not help but rush to his arms and embraced Godfrey with a pleading voice, “...please!”

Godfrey held her away and looked sternly in her eye, “Do not beg of me, girl. I would see to your worth as you seem unable to do so yourself. I am deeply disappointed but that matters not at the now. You have done your damage. I may only help you cleanse yourself and there is but one way to do that.”

“But father...” she tried to argue but Godfrey would have none of it.

“It should be clear to you that you shall never be alone in the presence of the Lord of Gloucester ever again,” Godfrey moved her to sit in her chair and stood over her as he detailed what would happen, “You will have this Lord of Kent to Lancaster and meet with him. You will be charming and show him all of your worth, such as it is. You will be sweet and kind and loving, and then...you will marry him.”

Ada pushed away from her father’s glare and stood to turn away, “What if I do not wish to marry him? I do not know him. He does not know me! What if he should wish to marry another?!”

“You must marry him!” Godfrey stepped forward and turned his daughter back to look him in the face, “There is no other choice at the now. Kent is a valued land in this realm and holds great faith with the King. If you put aside this other...cease it at the now...then perchance there is a path to regain what you have thrown away. We will end these rumors and you shall marry a fine Lord and have many children with him. Lancaster will be stronger with the addition and you shall bring no shame to this House...your mother’s legacy.”

The Duchess slumped to the floor in shame and disgrace and sat amongst her rumpled dress as her father looked down upon her, “You would cease your tears, daughter. You have brought this on yourself. God help me should my father find this out...or King Eadward!”

The Prince of Scotland stormed from the hall in disgust leaving Ada to hold at herself in her tears. She looked after her father for a moment and that only caused her to cry further. Great heavy sobs pushed her to lay upon the stone floor and she curled inward to hold at her knees. She would stay like that for near to an hour feeling accursed and ashamed. At that very moment she felt as though she was not her mother’s daughter and that just made Ada cry even more.

 

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Well now, happy families is not a game they really do, is it. Ada needs to grow up. She is mightier than her father.
 

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Only so many hours in the day and something has to give. Just don't let it be my AAR, sir. :p When I lack your comments I begin to wonder if I am doing something wrong. :eek:
Fear not, it will just be a delay. And on that, I need to post my Roman update now then turn in - comments on the latest chapter tomorrow (my time)!
As for Eadræd, look to the last screenshot of the above post.
Ah, somehow missed that when flicking through on my phone. He is a fine general and well into his middle age (and brave to boot). He should be far more confident in himself. I hesitate to suggest he should dry his eyes and harden up ... and yet o_O;)
 

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Ok so caught up again! This is happening a lot lately- as you say only so many hours in the day. Sadly when I miss a week with you I come back to find 4 or 5 new chapters and so must perforce play catch up again :p

Ok so some great chapters and I feel the pace has picked up again-it seemed a little pedestrian before to me. I loved where the king found out about the rebellion and the interplay between he and his younger brother. That continued into the battle scene (after the very strange scene with Eadwards women...) and again the flight from Bath well told.

I like the cut of this Eadred's jib-you have crafted a fine and believable character there and worked well with that pesky craven trait-bravo! How else to detail how someone might have it whilst possessing otherwise excellent martial traits. Oh and on that score I loved this line:
As you are my marshal, my Lord Eadberht, I would trust your martial mind on such matters
A very good example of how you use language so well-not something all of the WritAARs on here do (I see a lot of confusing of this and Councillors and Counsellors which drives me crazy haha)

As for the final scene I was wondering why a 20 year old would talk so dismissively of someone only 4 years her junior as so:
He is barely of age!” Ada shifted past her father and moved back to her chair, “I doubt he has ever had a randy dream.”

And then you did the big ta da which was her father realising what she had been up to-suddenly the rumour and conjecture was made flesh and ructions followed. A very well played scene as much with the hopelessness of the Duchess's love as with the imperious fatherly edict-well done again!

I will try and keep up but selling our flat, this training thing I am doing and other matters are taking up a lot of my spare time-my own AAR has suffered greatly as a result in terms of posts. KUTGW though-yours is but one of a few that I am still following
 

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A moment of silence for the poor Captain Osmund.

Ada's lecture from her father is harsh, but deserved. She's been rather naive since her mother's assassination on matters of the realm and now her own life. She would suffer greatly should the affair be discovered and unlike her mother, is ill-equipped to handle it.
 

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That will teach the Saxon Band to go into the employ of ne’er-do-well rebels and Curs! Sure, it is a free mercenary market, but Osmund took a sip of the wrong grail. He chose ... poorly!

Does anyone other than Ada’s father know her dirty little secret? Or is this some delivery of home truths centred around (and rationalising) an AI-wrought affair break-off and marriage, one wonders? Either way, we’ll rendered sir!
 

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Fb-fb:

Well now, happy families is not a game they really do, is it. Ada needs to grow up. She is mightier than her father.
I truly did hesitate to have her father hold such sway over her given her title but I needed him to say the line "You must marry him" and the rest simply flowed from that. I felt rather poorly for her after that scene but it was required, I think.

Fear not, it will just be a delay. And on that, I need to post my Roman update now then turn in - comments on the latest chapter tomorrow (my time)!
Ah, somehow missed that when flicking through on my phone. He is a fine general and well into his middle age (and brave to boot). He should be far more confident in himself. I hesitate to suggest he should dry his eyes and harden up ... and yet o_O;)
A decent martial score but he does have more a priestly/scholarly bent, though his score there is not so terrific (though not horrible.)

Ok so caught up again! This is happening a lot lately- as you say only so many hours in the day. Sadly when I miss a week with you I come back to find 4 or 5 new chapters and so must perforce play catch up again :p

Ok so some great chapters and I feel the pace has picked up again-it seemed a little pedestrian before to me. I loved where the king found out about the rebellion and the interplay between he and his younger brother. That continued into the battle scene (after the very strange scene with Eadwards women...) and again the flight from Bath well told.

I like the cut of this Eadred's jib-you have crafted a fine and believable character there and worked well with that pesky craven trait-bravo! How else to detail how someone might have it whilst possessing otherwise excellent martial traits. Oh and on that score I loved this line: A very good example of how you use language so well-not something all of the WritAARs on here do (I see a lot of confusing of this and Councillors and Counsellors which drives me crazy haha)

As for the final scene I was wondering why a 20 year old would talk so dismissively of someone only 4 years her junior as so:

And then you did the big ta da which was her father realising what she had been up to-suddenly the rumour and conjecture was made flesh and ructions followed. A very well played scene as much with the hopelessness of the Duchess's love as with the imperious fatherly edict-well done again!

I will try and keep up but selling our flat, this training thing I am doing and other matters are taking up a lot of my spare time-my own AAR has suffered greatly as a result in terms of posts. KUTGW though-yours is but one of a few that I am still following
It has been fun putting Beo back into the work after a little while missing. And I am pleased that the flight from Bath worked. I was excited writing that scene.

Also pleased my language skills keep pace. I too dislike the mixing up of words though I am afraid I do it myself far too often. I try not to, however. And really pleased this last scene worked for as hard as it was to write. I do not enjoy abusive men but they do exist and some are abusive in different ways. Words hurt just as much as a fist and for Ada, having her father and only parent left seem so cruel to her (justified or no) just seemed the right way to handle it even if difficult.

A moment of silence for the poor Captain Osmund.

Ada's lecture from her father is harsh, but deserved. She's been rather naive since her mother's assassination on matters of the realm and now her own life. She would suffer greatly should the affair be discovered and unlike her mother, is ill-equipped to handle it.
Indeed, Captain Osmund...we hardly knew ye. ;)

Ada has indeed been naive but I believe now she might be growing up and into her role a bit more. Even at the beginning of the scene there were some hints of pushing back at her counselors. She holds too much power to let someone else wield it.

That will teach the Saxon Band to go into the employ of ne’er-do-well rebels and Curs! Sure, it is a free mercenary market, but Osmund took a sip of the wrong grail. He chose ... poorly!

Does anyone other than Ada’s father know her dirty little secret? Or is this some delivery of home truths centred around (and rationalising) an AI-wrought affair break-off and marriage, one wonders? Either way, we’ll rendered sir!
To her knowledge, no one else knows but it is clear rumors have begun such that Godfrey suspected. There will be a slight follow up to this scene coming up which discusses this more. And yes, shame the Saxon Band had to take up with the wrong English Saxons.


To all - The next scene follows and as mentioned, it was another harsh one to write but one that you will likely enjoy far more. ;) Thanks for your incredible comments and sticking with me every time!
 

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The Heavy Crown


Wareham, England - December 1138


Beorhtmaer warmed his hands to a brazier in his command tent as his sons sat at a table playing at dice and drinking spiced ale. He smiled as heard them bickering over the latest roll and who won the round and turned to face them offering a feigned stern eye, “The two of you would argue over who took the largest shite!”

“I had clearly called fives!” Wihtræd protested.

Thurfrith sat back and drank at his ale before answering with a grin, “And you said so as I was rolling as I claimed the deuce beforehand. Ah! See there, father? A well said pun by you!”

“Your wit escapes me, young sir,” Beorhtmaer laughed along with his two sons as he moved to the table, “Yet I will allow you the joy of it. Nothing much else to do in these long winter months at siege.”

“Indeed,” Thurfrith agreed, “The battle was much more exciting. Is it always like this?”

“You may count upon it,” Beorhtmaer sat next to them and poured himself some of the brew.

Wihtræd picked up the pair of dice and rolled them in his hands with some irritation, “I know not why our cousin would not leave the field? Surely he does know that he be bested.”

Beorhtmaer looked to his younger son with a grin, “It is never so easy as that. And thank God for it, for we might be out of work, eh?”

“There is truth to that,” Thurfrith grinned as well before looking to his brother, “Now try to throw an eight, sir. I dare you!”

The younger brother had not the time to do so as a guard entered the tent, “My Lord Prince...there is a messenger come to see you.”

Beorhtmaer stood with question, “You would send him in.”

A clearly harried youth wearing the badge of Bedford on his sleeve entered and bowed his head before looking up with a sad eye, “I come bearing news from my Lord Eadweald...my Lord...my Lord Prince.”

“Come to surrender?” Wihtræd offered in humor.

When the young soldier of Bedford kept his gaze cleanly to Beorhtmaer, the Prince stepped to him and asked in a soft voice, “What be the matter, sir?”

“It is...” the young man could barely say the words, “...it is a matter of your sister, my Lord Prince…my Lord’s mother. He has asked that we may call a truce at the now so that you may come and speak with him.”

“Mathilda?” Beorhtmaer was instantly worried, “What has happened?”

The young soldier gave bow once more, “My Lord would wish to tell you, my Lord Prince. He would give all guarantees of safe passage, I do promise.”

“This is no way to attempt a parlay!” Thurfrith stood with a sharp eye but his father held up his hand.

“You would then take me to my nephew,” Beorhtmaer moved swiftly to leave the tent.

“But father!” Wihtræd stood as well, “You should take a guard. I would go with you!”

Beorhtmaer turned back to his sons with a kind eye, “You would stay here. I am under no threat from your cousin. Yet I do fear the worst, my sons. I shall return soon. Be at the ready.”

English guards followed the Prince as they were led to the main gate to the keep at Wareham. As they approached, Beorhtmaer held up his hand to stop them and they stood by warily as the Prince stepped to the gate and it slowly opened wide. Archers stood sentry at the top but with a sharp glare, they lowered their bows. As they entered the bailey, there was a somber mood. Men shivered in the cold and he considered that they were also starving due to the siege. His own men were only slightly better fed and were as deep under the weight of the chill as these men so he found no sympathy.

Two guards of Bedford stood by the large door to the keep and when they saw the Prince move towards the steps, they crossed their spears to bar entry. The young soldier called out to them, “Our Lord of Bedford would see the Prince at the now. He comes under truce made so by the Duke himself. You would stand aside!”

With some trepidation, they did so and Beorhtmaer followed the young soldier into the keep and towards the main hall. As they entered, he found his nephew seated in his raised chair with his head held very low indeed.

“What is your meaning with this, nephew?!” Beorhtmaer barked and Eadweald was quick to rise but could hardly speak.

Beorhtmaer sighed, “You call me here for something, clearly. Your man here says it concerns your mother Mathilda. You would tell me what has happened!”

“My mother...” Eadweald tried to reply but remained reticent, “...your sister, my Lord Prince...she is...dead.”

“What do you say to me?!” Beorhtmaer asked in shock.

Eadweald was clearly grieving and held a hand to his eye at first before answering, “She suddenly took ill just last night...and by the morn...she was no more. I know no else.”

“She is not yet fifty in age!” the Prince remained confused, “I knew her to be in fine health. Have you locked her away or some such, sir?!”

“Of course not, uncle!” Eadweald finally moved down the steps, “I loved dearly my mother. I would do no such thing!”

Beorhtmaer questioned with a raised brow, “I know not what you are capable of, young man. Not after what you have done these past many months.”

“My physician tells me that she passed of a natural death,” Eadweald maintained a sad eye, “He thinks mayhap her heart did give way.”

“Likely sad with a broken heart over your actions I should think,” Beorhtmaer did not mince words.

Eadweald looked up with a pained face, “That is very cruel, uncle.”

“I am not given to be kind when told of the death of my sister by the very kin that goes against his own family!” Beorhtmaer stood firm in his anger.

“And yet I do call truce at the now so I may give you this news plainly and as soon as possible for I know your sure grief,” Eadweald pleaded, “I would do so for the King as well even though he also treats me cruelly.”

“If you think I should find some sympathy over your loss, I do not,” Beorhtmaer replied sternly, “Yet I do grieve myself and grudgingly say a thank you for the swift telling. Mayhap we turn this truce into something more lasting...in the name of your good mother, my sister.”

Eadweald looked into his uncle’s eyes for a few moments and nearly teared up before finally answering, “You know that I cannot do that.”

“Too proud, eh?” the Prince found only a disgusted grin, “And yet craven nonetheless. You besmirch your mother’s memory in your actions and I think you did never deserve the great love that she had for you.”

“There is that cruelty again!” Eadweald lashed out in grieving anger, “You brothers of Wessex! I did hear my Lord father discuss it even though I was young. How you treated him! Never with respect any more than you have treated me! Though I did blindly follow your brother as he stole the crown from Oscytel of Wessex...I did bend the knee at the first, sir! And how was I to be repaid? Cast out! Away from the family love and support! After that, what was I to do? I looked to what was mine own!”

Beorhtmaer stepped to him, “You gained and more, sir. Northumberland was fairly yours and His Grace content to let you have it but you grew wide eyes at the meal before you and bit off more than you could chew. Even when offered a chance to maintain your worth, you did spit in the eye of the King and now you will suffer because of it!”

“My mother would still be alive if her brothers were not so cruel!” Eadweald shouted at him.

“You would calm yourself nephew...” Beorhtmaer remained still and confident, “...lest you follow your mother to the grave.”

Eadweald remained red in the face, “You would like that would you not?!”

“Sadly no,” Beorhtmaer replied, “For you do remain my nephew and family still. So I put it to you plainly...you will not win. As we speak, the King has sent a force just as large as the one outside your keep to the north. I have received word that they have cast aside whatever paltry force you had to hold Northumberland and now put Bamburgh to siege. It is only a matter of time before it falls and my sons do sit without just waiting to enter. You still have a choice, nephew.”


Seeming to calm down, Eadweald moved away from his uncle and went to pour a cup of ale. He did not finish pouring and instead threw the cup aside as he turned once more in a stubborn tantrum, “You do not know! Were I to surrender now, the King would have my head...nephew or no! He is not like to give me any worth at the now, if he ever has been. I cannot stand down. I have wasted too much already! I would lose any respect held for me by any man and more, lose everything built by my father and his great forebears! By God...I am the direct descendant of Godwin!”

“I would not put too much stock into that, sir,” Beorhtmaer sighed.

Eadweald found a haughty smile, “Of course not. You are of Wessex. You think that my ancestors stole it from yours. A misconception easily held by ones that have lived in exile.”

“My Lord...” the Prince signed once more, “...you are so young. Too young to truly know the way of things. You do think that you know, but you do not. It is a matter long since remedied and no one but you may wish to hold onto it. None of your cousins...not even your father before his early death. Your mother...my sainted sister did always want your full due but always of mind of where your place was within the realm. As a great Lord and no thing other. You do squander it at the now.”

“I would never see advancement...” Eadweald stepped to his uncle, “...never find any love from the King. What have I squandered? At least your older brother held some attachment to me. Not this one. And all I asked for was what was rightfully mine.”

Beorhtmaer too stepped forward to tower over his nephew, “It was never yours, sir. The Duchy of Northumberland is titled to the Lady Cynethryth of York who is betrothed to the King’s own son and Crown Prince of this realm. You must have known it was folly. And yet...you tried it anyway. Well...you have failed. Even there, I do believe that my brother the King might find it in his heart to forgive...because you are family. King Eadward is not hateful, sir...but you do try his patience.”

“As he has tried mine,” Eadweald turned away from his uncle’s glare.

Beorhtmaer reached out to put a gentle hand to his nephew’s turned shoulder, “I am sorry over Mathilda...your mother. I do know the grief felt to lose ones parents. I thank you again for this brief truce so that you might let me know. As for the rest of it, nephew...my Lord...we shall continue to argue on the field of battle. Though we shall win in due time...I do wish you luck.”

Lord Eadweald turned quickly only to spy his uncle walking with alacrity from the great hall. Another tear formed in his eye and he did not know what to think. Anger welled up within but so too sadness. He was wistful for a time gone by with this family of Wessex and yet bitter at how he had felt cast aside. Now that the bond with them was gone...his sweet mother…

The Duke pushed the thoughts from his mind and moved to pour another cup of ale. This time he did not throw it away. He drank of it fully and then poured another. Whether it was grief or some other, suddenly Eadweald felt a determination. He was alone now and only he might see his future out. No one else would do so. It was entirely up to him.

 
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Oh the poor little fool. One cannot help feel some sympathy for the lordling, alone in his hall, bereft of family.
 

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Oh the poor little fool. One cannot help feel some sympathy for the lordling, alone in his hall, bereft of family.
I've no sympathy for him, but I do need to give him his due. It was a very sad thing for me when Mathilda died and I felt I needed to make it more than just a one off thing. That is now two of Eadgar's six children to die. God knows where Sifflæd is (I lost track...but I think somewhere in Ireland) but the other three still alive we know well.

Yes...Eadweald is a little fool though not so little anymore. Harsh truths are coming quickly to him.


To all - Next scene arrives tomorrow for those that wish to read it. I hope some do. :)
 
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Well, I do, for one.
 

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Just getting up to date again. The Cur is beaten, knows it, but continues to cower under the table, hiding from his betters and the King’s Justice. Mathilda’s death is untimely and sad, but Beo’s comments about a broken heart are apposite. No sympathy for traitors! To the headsman for this one! :mad:

OOC: silly boy. Another of the Wessex siblings gone - not a key player or character in the kingdom perhaps, but one of long standing. Vale! :(
 

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I have a slight bit of sympathy for Eadweald given he didn't really try to take anything that he didn't have a claim to here, but he needed to know when to retreat and when to back down. Even here he keeps clinging to some small hope of survival. And he'll get nothing but a life in a dungeon for Eadward is not as forgiving as his brother.
 

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Well, I do, for one.
And thankful am I that you do, sir! :) Just seemed odd to me that I only received one reply after 24 hours. I do sometimes wonder if some readers are running out of steam with the story. Surely not. :D

Just getting up to date again. The Cur is beaten, knows it, but continues to cower under the table, hiding from his betters and the King’s Justice. Mathilda’s death is untimely and sad, but Beo’s comments about a broken heart are apposite. No sympathy for traitors! To the headsman for this one! :mad:

OOC: silly boy. Another of the Wessex siblings gone - not a key player or character in the kingdom perhaps, but one of long standing. Vale! :(
Indeed, Mathilda's was a hard one even if she was not a major character. It certainly worked that it happened while this war was going on and Beo has never been one to suffer Eadweald gladly. I was pleased to be able to revisit slightly his line about having the discussion some other way.

I have a slight bit of sympathy for Eadweald given he didn't really try to take anything that he didn't have a claim to here, but he needed to know when to retreat and when to back down. Even here he keeps clinging to some small hope of survival. And he'll get nothing but a life in a dungeon for Eadward is not as forgiving as his brother.
Well, he held claim to Northumberland itself but not the Duchy. As Beo says, Eadward was content to let him hold the Earldom but not this larger play. And now Eadweald is too far into it to let go. However, you may be surprised at Eadward's eventual punishment when it comes. ;)


To all - the next scene arrives in just a moment. And very many thanks for the comments! I do get a little worried sometimes. ;)
 

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The Heavy Crown


Bath, England - January 1139


Lord Berold gave a knock to the council chamber door and heard the familiar ring of his King’s voice call out from within. Eadward stood at the window looking down below with a cup of ale to hand. He did not turn to greet his master of spies even though Berold did offer a deep bow immediately upon entering. Waiting for the King to speak, the young Lord held at his position until he heard Eadward clear his throat.

“I believe the chill is deeper this year, my Lord,” Eadward suggested as he maintained his look outside.

Berold stood and offered a smile, “I think that you are right, Your Grace. My Lady Hextilda tells me that even in Rouen there is a heavy frost to the ground.”

“How does she in Normandy, sir?” Eadward finally turned with a pleasant face.

“Very content, Your Grace,” Berold gave nod, “She does wonders to help my Earl run the works, as it were.”

Eadward shifted to take his seat at the head of the large council table, “Still no children? My late wife the Queen did so wish it for both Hextilda and our daughter Hereswith.”

“I am afraid that I have not had much chance to return to my darling bride in many moons, Your Grace,” Berold grinned.

The King allowed a laugh, “Yes...that might cause a slight difficulty, I imagine.”

“Indeed it would, Your Grace,” Berold followed the King’s inviting hand to take his seat, “And as there is a war on, we have none of us the time to make it home to our sweethearts. I be certain that the Princess Hereswith will come due in short time. Our Lord Harold is a genius, don’t you know.”

Eadward kept a smile and yet tapped at a parchment to the table with his finger. Small rhythmic taps as he kept his eyes to his master of spies, the King finally slid the parchment over the table towards him, “That he may be. Yet what do you make of this?”


Berold read the first few words and looked up to the King, “It would seem yet more success with the Lady Ada, Your Grace. He has done wonders to see that Lancaster remains a strong ally and faithful to your person.”

“Keep reading,” Eadward answered as he stood to refill his cup.

“It says that Lancaster is unseasonably cold as well this year...” Berold suggested as he read, “...and that fine word comes from Bamburgh in the north where your son by law Eadræd of Rose does find a strong siege set about that place...”

Eadward poured slowly as he waited for his Duke of Normandy to reach the point in the letter and did not turn to face him when he heard Berold finally finish, “...and that...that the Lady Ada does marry...finally.”

“Passing strange that, do you not think?” Eadward kept his back turned as he found a small sip.

Berold was wide eyed but did not show it in his voice, “You did wish her to find a match, Your Grace.”

“Indeed I did...” Eadward turned with a sharp eye, “...and to me.”

“I...” Berold searched for the right words, “...I was told that it was a matter of affinity, Your Grace. Having already married your brother the King...”

Eadward waved a hand, “Yes, yes...I know all that. I found it a foolish concern but would accept her judgment to the matter.”

“And you did readily find her younger sister a fine match, did you not?” Berold asked hoping for a positive reply.

“She would do,” Eadward stood firm and kept a questioning gaze, “And yet...I am troubled.”

Berold sat forward with concern, “Troubled, Your Grace? May I ask by what?”

Eadward turned from him to look back out the window, “I have tasked my young charges in many ways. You to Dorset...Lord Harold to Lancaster...even my son by law to Northumberland. I know that I do ask much and in turn each of you has delivered...well. Until this. We both know of Lord Harold’s charm...that is why I chose him for his role. And yet? He does seem to have failed to pull in this fish and so she does find a much younger man...one of my great Lords as well.”

“Your Grace...” Berold stood slowly, “...sire...it is not vanity, is it?”

“You would think your King a vain man, my Lord?” Eadward turned his head only slightly before looking back to the grounds below.

Berold held up a hand, “Not at all, Your Grace. Yet you do mention the age. I be certain that it is nothing more than Lady Ada finding a fine match with a young Lord fully come into his own. I am told he does well to the siege at Bamburgh in support of Eadræd. And the letter does say that it was a marriage by proxy for the Lord Eadric would not leave his post for such as this. He would travel to Lancaster only after the thing is done.”

“That too seems odd,” Eadward finally turned to face his Duke, “How does she even know the boy? She would marry the Lord sight unseen? When could she have done such? And why does Lord Harold not say?”

“I could not answer, Your Grace,” Berold raised a brow, “Yet would you wish for me to look into it? I would do as you desire.”

Eadward moved to return to his seat, “Passing strange, as I say. Yes...I think an inquiry needed. And how does old Wulfnoth at the now? I am sad that I have been unable to go and see to him.”

“Very poor indeed, Your Grace,” Berold held his head low, “I look in on him as best as I may, but I am away so often. I have hired a girl to look after him for he has no one else. It is a very deep pain within his gullet, Your Grace...he has been abed for months and looks the worst every time I do see him.”

“That is unfortunate,” Eadward shifted and pulled another parchment to him, “He was the very best at what he did.”

“Indeed, Your Grace...” Berold moved to sit once more, “...he did teach me many skills of which I put to your service at the now.”

Eadward offered a sad eye, “You would look to Lord Bishop Cearl...tell him that I have some wish for a nunnery to Normandy or some such...let him know that I wish he release some funds. You would take these and care for Wulfnoth. He has earned it.”

“He works for you still, Your Grace,” Berold grinned, “I did look in on him as I returned to Bath and he suggested a fine way to put our Lord Eadweald even lower in his peoples eyes.”

“Truly?” Eadward was shocked but found his own grin, “That old bastard. What does he cook up at the now?”

Berold hesitated but placed his hands to the table, “It is rather tawdry. Uncivilized. Yet I did hear notion of a baron to Dorset that...kept not to his wife.”

“Catch as catch can, sir...” Eadward replied with a wink.

“He does catch...Your Grace...” Berold tread lightly, “...yet not to some wench. It would seem that this baron does prefer the company of his friends...his male friends.”


Eadward skewed his face into a frown, “I like that not. Tawdry indeed! Yet why should I care what illicit activities occur in that place for I wish not to know them. Put the priest to him and be done with it.”

“Ahhh...” Berold held up a finger, “...there is where your good man Wulfnoth does come into play. He would suggest that you spread these rumors...and not about this baron...but against our Lord Eadweald himself.”

“He is my nephew!” Eadward slammed a hand to the table.

Berold sat forward, “And your combatant, Your Grace. As Wulfnoth does say...every single avenue must be traveled. Eadweald would appear poor in the eyes of those that look upon him should such a thing as this come out.”

“He is married...has children!” Eadward still found a distaste of the plan.

“Your Grace, you are a man of the world...” Berold suggested, “...a man who has lived and come across all kinds. You would know that this be no barrier to such...”

“Do not speak it!” Eadward held up his hand to stop his master of spies.

Berold gave nod, “It is merely a suggestion, Your Grace. I may do nothing with the knowledge, but as I have it...we may use it. No one would be the wiser.”

The King held to his cup of ale for some few moments before finally drinking it down and looking to the ceiling, “Wulfnoth, you old scoundrel!”

“Is it worth the play, Your Grace?” Berold asked.

Eadward finally turned to him with a nod, “Do as you must, my Lord. I like it not, but when have I ever doubted my man? He knows me well. And look into this other.”

The Duke stood and gave a bow as he moved to leave the room leaving Eadward to feel at the other parchment on the table once more. It was opened. He knew what it said. And yet, he wished to read it again. It was from his brother Beorhtmaer and it spoke of the worst. As he unfolded the letter and began to see the words once more, he felt a great tear come to his eye. First Uhtræd. Then Judith. And now...Mathilda. Before all of it there was Madrun...

And so many more.

This damned bloody accursed crown! What was the worth of it that his father so desired? Why had he tried so hard to convince his brother to take it up? Eadward thought often that it had finally killed Uhtræd. And it had brought himself nothing but grief everlasting. Haunted the thing was, and yet that heavy burden sat atop his own head. There was naught any other to feel it.
 
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