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Well the great think about jungle fighting, especially with the accuracy of the average weapon of the day is that it should be easy for someone to shoot Tibalto in the back. From his management style it doesn't sound like there will be a shortage of candidates and he doesn't sound like the type to hide in the back.

Are you hoping to take the land around Panama to take over the canal when that gets built? (Anyone know what you need to trigger the canal event?)
 

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Yeah, I wouldn';t want to be on his bad side.
 

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Dearnen- Shall I clear it up firstly for everyone that's expressed the hope, that Tibalto won't die for quite a while :D! If you don't like him, I guess that's a positive thing because I can count my attempt to make an unpleasant character out of him successful, but then again remember that a lot of what he stands for was considered a lot less outdated in 1838 than it does in 2007...

Thanks, and enjoy!

aussieboy- :rofl: Oh very nice... Poor Tibalto, he can't be that bad, can he...?

Cinéad- Again, he ain't gonna die for a while... The inheritance thing, however, does become somewhat important. And not just to Tibalto...

alex994- Young teens is about right, and I suppose you may be correct... But they are on the march, so the "official" order is not quite in place, particularly in the Panama jungle, and particularly with an important message like this one...

And I wouldn't say it's impossible that they'll end up on different sides...

Caligo- Well it would be perfectly possible for someone to get him when he ain't looking, but I don't think it's quite that far gone. Particularly in the 19th century, when standards of harshness were a little different... And remember, as with anyone who takes extreme stances, if there are plenty of people against him then there'll be plenty of people for him. He's not the only one that thinks rude teenagers should be punished, whether they were actually rude or not :D!

And I don't think it's unreasonable to hope the Road will become a Canal one day!

Jimbo- I think everyone that's got on it so far would probably agree! Though again, his good side is probably quite positive, especially in the position of power Tibalto holds...

150 others- Enjoy and keep reading!

Here comes the first of two shorter updates for tonight, as they go very much together...
 

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The Confines of Modern Warfare (Part One)

Penonome Province, Panama, April 4th 1838

The sound of an artillery shell whined nearby, and then came to an abrupt stop with a loud bang. Fortunately enough for Don Tibalto Barja’s staff meeting, the Holy Army’s cannons were firing more or less blindly in the vague direction of the Californians. The General, however, still twitched at the sound of the explosion nearby, turning involuntarily in the direction the noise had come from before he turned back to his assembled officers.

“None of you,” he continued in irritation, “can provide me with a satisfactory reason for having failed to overcome Santa Anna’s defences. None of you.”

“General,” said Major Fernando Benitez tentatively, “with respect there is no reason that we should have expected a breakthrough yet. The nature of modern warfare, Excellency-”

“Giving me another lecture, Major? Do you have no respect whatsoever for my status, Major? Which, I might add, is quite considerably higher than yours…”

“I would never intend,” replied Benitez hastily, “to insult you, Excellency. I was merely reassuring you that-”

“Well don’t trouble yourself.” Snapped Tibalto. “I am not in need of reassurance. I am, however, in need of an explanation as to why you have not yet accomplished the simple task of defeating the enemy. I have given you all the resources you need, indeed considerably more than you need. I have gone to the trouble of finding and holding down Santa Anna’s army for you to conquer. I have even brought you here at the precise moment when he was concentrating on a different enemy. What more you could possibly need I fail to see.”

“General,” repeated Benitez, “we simply should not expect such a rapid victory within the confines of modern warfare. Today’s campaigns are about attrition, deployment of resources and large-scale infantry movements. It is not about rapid advances, cavalry charges and breakthroughs.”

“No?” Snarled Tibalto. “And what about the Battle of Tijuana? I don’t believe that took very long! And I seem to recall that that particular battle had at least one cavalry charge, Major!”

Si, General, but the situation is quite different. Even Don Alejandro del Serrano himself has not achieved a breakthrough thus far, how can your Excellency hope-”

“Oh?” Tibalto stood up angrily. “Indeed? So as the great del Serrano has not yet won the battle, how could I possibly hope to have achieved anything? Is that your meaning, Major Benitez?” Benitez opened his mouth in a desperate attempt to repair the damage, but Tibalto ignored him. “I will demonstrate to you what exactly I can achieve, whether you believe in breakthroughs or not!” Benitez was silent. “Colonel Hamann?” Demanded Don Tibalto.

“Sir?” Replied Christian, with a pained look at one of the officers beside him, who apparently did not share his exasperation.

“Order the Californio Division to prepare for a frontal attack. They advance at 4pm. You will lead them, Colonel. And tell my personal cavalry entourage to be ready as well- I will lead them against the enemy. You will see, Major! You will see exactly what is possible within the confines of modern warfare!” He stormed out of the tent.


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Tibalto's a fool, but at least he isn't a coward. That is, if he doesn't make sure that he is "injured" early on in the cavalry charge.

I'm reading a book on the Monte Cassino at the moment, and there are parallels between how your Major Benitez and some of Mark Clark's subordinates must have felt; finding themselves obeying a man more interested in the quest for personal glory than in the successful conclusion of the campaign.
 

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Eams- Nope, you are right to point out that that is indeed a redeeming feature of Tibalto- he's not a coward. He may have stupid ideas, but he doesn't expect other people to put them into practice for him (as this coming update will show).

As for the personal glory vs. military pragmatism conflict, I can well believe it! There are plenty of examples throughout history, not the least of which I'm sure was of course Adolf Hitler! Though that of course was megalomaniacal certainty of his own genius, not glory-hunting, so he's not really the same as Tibalto... Perhaps your example is more fitting, I must admit I'm not acquainted with it.

And on to part 2 of the update. I must say that since increasing the update speed I think it's been a good thing on balance as I'm finding it easier to keep flow. Plus the feedback level has been great! So congrats to my readers! (Without whom the whole thing would be pretty pointless, and not a little sad...)
 

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The Confines of Modern Warfare (Part Two)

Penonome Province, Panama, 4th April 1838 (around 4pm)

The blast of a trumpet somewhere behind him alerted Christian, and he straightened slowly.

“Alright, boys. Ready?” He shouted. A murmur of affirmation rose slowly from the waiting soldiers around him. “Advance!” He roared. Like grass in the wind, the Californians rose from where they had been lying or crouching in the undergrowth, and began to jog forwards. Christian drew his pistol as he ran, straining his eyes to see what was going on among Santa Anna’s soldiers up ahead at the Colombian lines.

There was a brief, few-second pause when only the sound of the Californian footsteps on the damp ground could be heard, muffled by the sound of the rain and mingled with the calls of birds, and then the quiet was torn apart by the cacophony of gunfire as the flash of rifle-barrels illuminated the Holy Army’s positions. A man to Christian’s left screamed as he fell backwards, another convulsed and twisted horribly as at least half a dozen bullets struck him before he was allowed, mercifully, to fall to the ground- silent. Christian levelled his pistol and fired aimlessly towards the direction of the rifle-fire, and in response a hail of fire screamed angrily around him. He jumped forwards, skidding behind the trunk of a fallen tree and looking back. The ground was littered with fallen men- most writhing in agony or trying, desperately, to drag themselves out of the line of fire. Corporal Max Tyndall dived down beside him.

“For Christ’s sake!” He growled breathlessly, turning to Christian as he ducked low, attempting to keep his head below the level of the tree trunk. “It’s bloody pointless! A frontal attack, in broad daylight, against entrenched rifles! Who the Hell’s bloody brilliant idea was this?”

Christian hesitated, not wishing to let on that he shared Tyndall’s anger at the ridiculousness of the idea. “That’s the General’s… Breakthrough, Max, it’s what he’s after…”

“Oh, right Of course!.” Snarled Tyndall. “And where is the great General Barja now, then?”

Christian was about to reply, but a great fanfare of trumpets behind them caught his attention, and it was followed by the thunderous, and unmistakable, sound of galloping horses. The two men turned, and on their left the Californian flag swept past, with Tibalto’s sumptuously-uniformed personal company of cavalry riding around it. Christian could have sworn he saw Don Tibalto himself, head bare and sabre raised, leading the horsemen forwards. Christian closed his mouth, and then opened it again. “I think…” he hesitated, “he’s there…”

They raised their heads cautiously over the wooden blockade, and watched as the General’s cavalry thundered towards Santa Anna’s lines. One horse twisted visibly sideways, hit by an unseen enemy’s rifle-shot, and its rider fell horribly- crushed beneath the hooves of his onrushing companions’ horses, but the company could not be hindered. The wild, inaccurate blaze of the enemy rifles was like pebbles flicked against a wave, and the horseman with the sabre that Christian believed to be General Barja still held his weapon glitteringly aloft. The two men watched as the cavalry leapt over the makeshift barricades erected by the Holy Army, and could see the horses milling around the enemy lines, their sabres glinting in the sun that penetrated through the leaves of the forest’s canopy. For a few moments they could still here the frantic gunfire of Santa Anna’s men at their beleaguered front line- completely caught unawares by the determined ferocity of the cavalry charge- then it was silenced.

However, just moments later, a throaty cheer from right next to Christian replaced it.

“California!” It was Tyndall, and he was on his feet, rifle raised triumphantly in the air. He vaulted over the great log, and ran forwards. Around Christian, men were rising and running again- dashing forwards with renewed spirit.

“California!” Echoed the cry among the advancing soldiers. And another shout joined it moments later.

“Don Tibalto!” And men were joining in. Fewer men, certainly, than had called out the name of their country, but the soldiers were joining in. “Don Tibalto!”

And up ahead beyond the Colombian lines, Don Tibalto’s cavalry were already pressing into Santa Anna’s camp, through the rows of tents and among surprised and unprepared soldiers, seeking the quarters of the one man whose capture might end the campaign at a stroke. Don Tibalto Barja had made his breakthrough.


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The timely breakthrough of Don Tibalto Barja swings the Battle of Penonome in California's favour.
 

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Brief Editorial

*Just a quick note to say that, for the sake of the story, I (probably obviously) compressed the timespan of the Battle to a few days, when in reality it took until June to beat Santa Anna because mostly of the terrain effects. Not too big a leap of faith, I hope ;)...*
 

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Not sure about that I think for a short period of time it would be good for him to run the show (give him enough rope) and then when he dies in some suicidal war against Prussia or someone others can get back to the real job of building the country.

To sum it up I don't like the guy but lets be honest he's going to be a more interesting Presidente than Alvarado :D
 

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Now he's a war hero too. Great. I think the condensing is a good idea- battles in Vicky over an entire province and usually for such a long time are really more campaigns anyway I've always thought.
 

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alex994- Not that his ego needed much inflating ;), but it does give him something to base it on...

Caligo- Well it's an interesting idea, but then again I'm not sure how keen the rest of California would be on starting a war with Prussia :D! I don't think California has either the manpower or the resources to give him even close to enough "rope"... But he certainly does have a lot more adventures in him, which I hope won't be disappointing...

Jimbo- Well a war hero to a certain extent, I don't think Penonome is on quite the scale of Tijuana, but still... And I think on balance condensing the battles is better- it makes them easier to write about for one thing, and by the 1830s it really was still the age of Napoleonic one-day battles, not WW1-esque month-long offensives, particularly in the fairly small-scale arena of Latin America...

300 others- Enjoy, and of course comments always welcome!
 

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Penonome Province, Panama, 4th April 1838

Major Fernando Benitez came hastily to attention as the group of horsemen clattered noisily into the paved parade-ground of the Holy Army’s jungle camp. Don Alejandro leapt from his horse as he reined it in to an abrupt halt, landing in front of the still-saluting Benitez and rapidly returning his greeting.

“Why, Benitez?” He demanded. “Why did you let him do it?”

“Excellency, I…” stuttered the Major in an attempt to reply.

“I told you, Benitez, the very day you left from San Francisco- not to let Tibalto do anything rash! My messenger this very morning told you to ensure he advanced gradually on the eastern side of Santa Anna’s defences. Do you call this gradually, Major Benitez? Do you?”

“Excellency, with respect, we won the battle. The war is practically over…”

“That,” snarled Alejandro, his voice flaring up unexpectedly, “is immaterial. You let him risk the lives of an entire division in a frontal attack?”

“Let me?” Came a self-satisfied voice from behind Benitez. Both looked around as Tibalto swaggered into the courtyard. “Why, our good Major practically begged me not to win the battle! Honestly, Alejandro, it was pathetic…” He smiled maliciously at Benitez, who bowed his head deferentially, his face reddening.

“Tibalto.” Said Alejandro curtly with a nod to his brother-to-be.

“Welcome, Alejandro, to Santa Anna’s encampment. I see you’ve decided to join us,” he smiled, “if a little late…”

“And what, exactly, are you doing here?” Demanded Alejandro. “If you command like this you put the all of your men, and our campaign, in jeopardy! Supposing you had been shot down in the first moments? Your men would have been leaderless, without cavalry and marching at a line of rifles! Do you have any idea how reckless this was?”

Tibalto looked at him with amusement. “Are you my mother, Alejandro? You are certainly complaining like an old woman, even Benitez here has the good grace to admit that my bold strategy won for us in one afternoon what you had not expected for at least a fortnight. Can’t you at least recognise that?”

“Tibalto,” replied Alejandro, breathing deeply to prevent his annoyance from erupting into anger, “you have had a lucky escape, but you're not Bonaparte! You won firstly because Santa Anna’s forces were largely concentrating their efforts against our army in the west, secondly because the rain soaked Santa Anna’s reserve artillery, which he could therefore not use against you in the east, and thirdly because the Holy Army has been sitting in the jungle for three months, so they were too tired and too demoralised to face a cavalry charge. Not quite as romantic as I’m sure it would be pleasant to imagine, and I hear you can’t find Santa Anna!”

Tibalto’s mouth curled into the familiar snarl, his eyes narrowing, but for perhaps the first time Alejandro could remember, his rage did not get the better of him. “Well, Alejandro,” he hissed, “I don’t seem to recall that you managed to capture Santa Anna at Tijuana- and they called you ‘hero’ for that!” Alejandro wanted to shout at Tibalto, rage at him, explain to him the quite obvious differences between the situations at Tijuana and Penonome, but Tibalto was going on, and his voice had regained its control, a self-satisfied, dangerous edge to it. “What is it, Alejandro, that so angers you about today? We won a battle, didn’t we? We have come a step closer to the final victory, haven’t we? One step closer to returning to Elena, are we not?” There was a glittering hint of malice in his smile. “Or perhaps that is what makes you angry- what you fear? That this time, I will be the one to tell her the enchanting story, and you will realise just how it feels to sit in the background, unnoticed, as she gazes at someone else…” He raised his eyebrows at Alejandro in mock curiosity, sneering gleefully. “Can it possibly be that which makes you angry, brother?” The last word hung, venomously, in the air, before Tibalto continued. “Not… jealous of me, are you, brother?”

Alejandro exploded. “Oh, shut up, Tibalto!” He roared. “You are really so full of-”

“Alejandro, please.” Tibalto cut across him. “Lower your voice, you are causing a scene.”

Alejandro drew in his breath sharply, and then breathed out slowly, trying to calm himself. He turned to his horse, and swung himself lightly up into the saddle. “Adios, Tibalto.” He said through gritted teeth. “Enjoy your victory, brother.” He looked at Benitez, whose expression was one of extreme awkwardness. “Major.” He said curtly, and saluted, before directing his horse around. “Caballeros,” he shouted to his men, “we are returning to camp. Vamanos!” The small group of horsemen turned and galloped out of the courtyard. Tibalto and Benitez were left standing in the centre.

Tibalto smiled smugly at his unhappy-looking officer. “I believe I touched a nerve, don’t you, Major?”
 

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He's briging Elena in? Quite the manipulative sort isn't he? I just hope that Alejandro keeps his cool.
 

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As to Elena, it would be nice with a post concerning how she works. I'm sort of hoping that she actually cares greatly for Alejandro, somewhere under her bossy/cool exterior. Something to make her a bit more human.
And yes, I realize that requesting some insight into the psyche of your leading female character while there's a war on might nominate me to the great big sissy of your merry group of readers...

Regarding leaps of faith, I haven't seen anyone complain over the fact that the californians have multiple-shot weapons in 1836, so I don't see why anyone would whine about you compressing a battle into a period over a few days.
 

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Jimbo- Well I suppose it's fairly obvious to him what's most important to Alejandro :D! It is a pretty quick way to piss him off...

Mettermrck- Great to have you along! Thanks, and enjoy!

Eams- There will, of course, be much more to come on Elena. So far I've tried most of all to portray her through Alejandro's eyes, as that's the perspective that's been most important and I wanted to establish it. She will become, as you say, a bit more human...

And regarding the guns- shhhh they're trying to suspend their disbelief :D! To be honest, I'm not an expert on military history so I assumed they'd have pistols that could fire more than once by now. Ah well, just assume I'm cutting over the reloading part!

alex994 - Well, fortunately enough it's not all plain sailing for Tibalto from now on, something that will indeed start when they get back to California. But it's not exactly Alejandro who'll do the pedestal-knocking...

200 others- Hope you're enjoying it!

Here comes another update in the quicker-updating-program. Oh, and to Eams- not exactly what you asked for, but it is someone's insight on Elena's character/relationships...
 
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The Peace Treaty and the Stable Door

Fort Montero, Panama Province, Panama, August 16th 1838

“That is our offer, and that is as much as my government will give you, caballeros. You may discuss it for as long as you wish, but I assure you we will not augment our offer.” Finished the Colombian diplomat, making as if to leave the room.

“One moment, señor.” Said Alejandro before he could turn to go. “What about Santa Anna?”

“What about him, General del Serrano?” Replied the Colombian. “The Santander government has fallen, they were the only ones to authorise Santa Anna’s actions. As far as we are concerned, he is a rogue general. What is more, he is a repressive and a tyrant, an autocrat. He may have managed to disappear, but we, certainly, do not care where he has gone- and consider it good riddance. I will be in my quarters when you have an answer to return to Bogota.”

“Gracias.” Said Alejandro as the man left the room. “Well, caballeros,” he said, turning to the other occupants of the office, “I don’t think this need take so long. They’re offering us everything we want up front, and all our objectives have been completed. What’s more I’m sure President Alvarado will be delighted to see us negotiating with a democratic government, no?”

General Patrick Selway nodded. “Agreed, Don Alejandro. This is precisely what we hoped for. I think we’ve reached a deal.” A murmur of approval ran around the table, the Californian generals nodding.

“Are you all mad?” Came one incredulous, dissenting voice as Tibalto rose to his feet. “The road is clear to the capital! The Colombian government collapsed two weeks ago, their only army is destroyed and their only general beaten! This is the moment to press the attack, and this is the moment you want to make peace? We can have the entire country in our grip, and then we will dictate terms to their ‘government’ ourselves, instead of just taking what they are willing to give us!”

“Don Tibalto, that-” Selway began.

“No, General Selway, this moment cannot be lost! Who will march with me to Bogota? For California!”

There was a silence. A few men looked awkwardly at each other. Selway cleared his throat and tried to speak again, but Tibalto carried on, ignoring him.

“Alejandro,” he said, staring intently at his brother-in-law, “think of it! Hero of California, conqueror of Colombia! The glory, the celebration, the honour! Can you resist it, brother? Such an opportunity?”

“I think so, Tibalto.” Answered Alejandro dryly. “Haven’t you had enough glory for one year?”

Tibalto’s expression soured. “Oh, no? Afraid, Alejandro? Afraid to be outshone, perhaps?”

“Don’t be naïve, brother.” Snapped Alejandro. “You want to waste the rest of your year and another thousand lives chasing your own legend then so be it, I want to go home, and the army wants to go home. We all want to go home but you, Tibalto.”

“Even by throwing away our advantage?”

“What advantage? It will take months to get through the jungle to Bogota, and months to secure control of the country, and yet more months to force them to accept our demands, when we already have what we wanted when we came here! They are giving us Panama, and really, I am not interested in anything else.”

“You want to go home, do you Alejandro? I wonder what it is you are thinking of?” He smiled maliciously. “Could I be right?”

Alejandro could feel that he wanted to hit Tibalto, to draw his sabre and thrash him with it, but he kept hold of himself. “Si, Tibalto, I want to marry my fiancée. Something wrong with that?”

“I wonder, Alejandro… Now the glitter of Tijuana has worn off, now we have other heroes and other battles, I wonder if she will still be interested in your wedding. I know my sister, Alejandro. She doesn’t love you- she loves what you will bring her. She loves your fame and your honour, Alejandro, and your status. I’m terribly sorry,” his smile widened, “to have to tell you this. Or perhaps you already know, hmmm? Perhaps it’s because you know that you’re in such a rush to get back- to shut the stable door before the horse can bolt… brother?”

Alejandro leapt from his seat, lunging forwards, and punched Tibalto across the face. His would-be brother-in-law staggered back, propping himself up against the table, as Alejandro stepped forwards and raised his fist again. “Shut up, Tibalto!” He snarled. “Shut up, I have had enough of your talking and your smirking and your posing!”

Selway grabbed hold of Alejandro’s arm and dragged him backwards. “Enough, gentlemen! This is entirely unseemly!”

Tibalto leapt up, but Major Benitez and Colonel Hamann got in his way, holding him back. “You ill-bred, upstart vermin!” Spat Tibalto. “You are lucky you are marrying my sister or I would run you through right now myself!”

Alejandro smiled scornfully. “Lucky me.” Tibalto spat at him.

“That will do!” Thundered Selway. “We have won a war, and you two cannot sort out your pathetic family bickering! I suggest you make your plans to go home separately or I doubt both of you will make it. This is ridiculous, and it will quite suffice.” He stared at each of them in turn, Alejandro panting, his face red; Tibalto’s face twisted in rage, his lip bleeding quietly. “Learn to control yourselves in future.” He turned abruptly, and opened the door of the office to talk to the soldier waiting outside. “Please tell Señor Garcia, the Colombian ambassador, that we accept his offer, and the Colombian government may consider themselves at peace with California. Now, gentlemen, I suggest you return to your troops and prepare them for the return home. I hope this little display does not mar an excellently-run campaign.” He sighed deeply. “See you at home.” He turned, indicating that Alejandro should come with him and not remain in the room with Tibalto, and walked out of the door.

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He could get himself in trouble with the powers that be, or be the Colombian Napoleon.