- Dec 13, 2003
I do enjoy the narrative bits you wrote. I almost feel, since you wrote them as kind of "summary" or "conclusion" scenes, that they should have been placed at the end of the post, rather than the beginning. When they were placed at the beginning, it was almost like a spoiler for the legitimate action report that followed. Probably a picayune point, but I just thought I'd throw it out there.Any suggestions on improvements for my next one would be welcome.