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Excuse me for this, it could be spam:
I wish to honour your AAR with my 300th post!!!!!!! YAY!
Oh, and I checked out your site. Really cool to do that, do you update it every month or something? Really cool

Oh...and I want the Entertainers! to continue...

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When I originally started writing on the Forums, I never intended to have any fan base. And it is still small. But a few people have kept me writing, and one of them is AmbassadeBelgie who constantly posts in my AAR's, with very positive reviews. I would like to thank him, and I promise that tomorrow (Sunday) some time, Chapter 8 will be out.
 

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"I thank your honours ever so gratefully, oh WriteGod" *confetti falls, touching music plays* "and I must tell you that reading your AARs has been a privilege and an enjoyable pastime. I have never seen an AAuthoR write as well as you do, and am astonished at how few people actually post (compared to what I would expect)."

"However. I must admit (being an AAuthoR myself) that pressure put by others can become a little bit much. This is why I explain here that I would wait several weeks (with impatience of course) for the next update. Don't pressurize yourself like a bottle of Coke :)

But seriously, that post really touched me.
Oh, and keep on writing :):D

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Chapter Eight

Forty years on. We were back again in my sitting room. The tale had been told up to a certain point. Mr. Grim looked satisfied so far with the story we had discussed.
“You are probably wondering what became of the plans?” said Mr. Grim.
I nodded.
“I’ll show you.”
I was expecting him to open up his coat and magically reveal a bunch of papers. Instead he got up, walked past me and towards the mantelpiece.
“What are you doing?” I asked curiously, “You haven’t hid it in the fire place?”
“No, do you think I am stupid!”
Then he took me completely by surprise by picking up the clock on the mantelpiece, and putting it on my desk.
“Have you got a device to open this?”
Nodding again, I got up, walked over to the desk, and opened the sliding door above it to reveal a host of tools, which included a screwdriver. I gave it to him.
Instantly, he started working on opening up the clock, and removing the clock face. And right behind it was a bunch of folded up papers.
“Here they are”, said Mr. Grim.
I was completely taken back.
“All these years…and you hid them in my house all along!?”
“Well, it was the least likely place to find them.”
“But you put my life at risk!”
Mr. Grim showed a concerned look on his face.
“I know Matthew, do you not think that has not haunted me these last forty years.”

We spread the plans on the desk, and for the first time ever, I saw the plans.
They showed four drawings showing the dimensions for a mean looking battleship; one from the side, one from the top, and one from the front and one from the back. In one corner was a 3-d sketch of the ship.
“And the French have been looking for this all these years?”
“Yes”, replied Mr. Grim. “They listed a 30,000 Franc bounty for the recovery of them.”
“Yes, I remember reading about it in the paper.”
I looked over the plans for a long while, and then I started to feel tired. I failed to stifle a yawn.
“I am seventy-eight years old”, I said. “I need to rest.”
“Indeed”, he said, nodding in agreement.
“Then I will see you in the morning then”, I said, but grinning at my long lost friend.

I woke up the next morning, dressed slowly and went into the sitting room. Mr. Grim was sitting in the corner, smoking a pipe. He had a puzzled look on his face, and was staring blankly into space. I coughed, disturbing him from this.
“Good morning Matthew”, he said, grinning a little.
“Good morning.”
“You ready to pay Hoggard a visit?”
“Yes!” I said, “We haven’t spoken in forty years! He never had the decency to just pack up and leave after I revealed what he was!”

Mr. Grim hit Hoggard’s door very hard. A minute later, a young face appeared at the door.
“How may I help you sirs?” he asked.
“We want to see Hoggard, if you please”, said Mr. Grim in a rather curt voice.
“He is taking no visitors this morning.”
“You sure about that?” said Mr. Grim, opening his coat slightly to reveal the handle to his pistol.
The man at the door eyes widened in horror.
“P-P-Please”, he stuttered, “I’ll show you right in.”
Constantly looking nervously at Mr. Grim, he showed us through to Hoggard’s bedroom, where he was sitting up in bed, reading the paper. He looked up and saw me, looking rather angry that I should barge in. Then he looked up at Mr. Grim, saw the scars on his cheek and cowered in his bed, in acknowledgement of his worse nightmare.
“Yes, forty years on, and I’m back”, said Mr. Grim triumphantly. “We’ve come to have a little chat haven’t we Matthew.”
Suddenly, the door opened again, and in came another person.
“Why, Mr. Grim!” I exclaimed. “It’s Colonel Jacobs!”
 

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Ooh....Can't wait to find where this leads us! Stunningly written as always, you have more plot-twists than a twisty twistathingamajigy...!!!
As always, exceeding expectations, keep it up!

Th :rofl:

P.S. Wouldn't one die before reaching his late-seventies? Just wondering...:)
 

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AmbassadeBelgie said:
Ooh....Can't wait to find where this leads us! Stunningly written as always, you have more plot-twists than a twisty twistathingamajigy...!!!
As always, exceeding expectations, keep it up!

Th :rofl:

P.S. Wouldn't one die before reaching his late-seventies? Just wondering...:)

Maybe, what is the chance of FOUR people living past their seventieth birthday? But remember, this is fiction!!!
 

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*Didn't see your other post:)*
I only wish the Book wouldn't be finished yet!
Please PM me when you do the 2nd, in case I miss:)

Th :rofl:
 

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HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!! [-6 days ;)]
Either way, I shall be there when you continue!!! :p (unless I get banned or something :()
 

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AmbassadeBelgie, it says in your sig that "The Order" is your second AAR, so what was your first?

The FLAAR [I used the FLA tag, as with The ORDER, FLA+AAR = FLAAR].
Also based in Belgium, but a capital city in Antwerp. A tale of liberation from the tratior Philippe III Le Bon [The Good]. Even more extremist anti-Burgundy than The ORDER, which is less focused on the French.

It was not finished, because when I moved from Hannover, Germany (1 March 2004), the savegame was somehow misplaced or I don't remember what hapenned... Either way, it was good for me to "let go" of it, because it gave me a fresh start with AA(w)Riting, and gave me the opportunity to better plan the next AAR. Kinda like you and The Man Who Cried War (but then in newbie style :p).
I also used a 'bit' more colour than in the Order, which ended up looking nice, but being too much effort, and too confusing. :) You will see the differences that I have undergone since I abandoned it by reading The FLAAR itself: I'll put a link in my sig after posting this :)

TO THE ADMINISTRATOR(S):
Oh, btw, this is NOT spam :D [sry 'bout this, gotta live administrative-wise]. The author asked for this post :) END OF ADMINISTRATOR'S MESSAGE.

Either way, am counting the days to your birthday, to see some more masterpieces from you :p "and long live the Ord...euhh...Long live the Entertainers!" ;)

Th :rofl:
 

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And yet, we unpatiently await Book II!!!!!!
 

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AmbassadeBelgie, I see your back on the forums at last! Well, I'm sorry, but I'm busy wrting a new AAR called the Greek Adventures (see sig.)
 

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I'm bored with playing Crusader Kings - I've decided to carry on writing this story...in fact the first chapter is already written and will be posted on Saturday.
 

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YAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
POSTITNOWPLEEEZ/D/D/DPOSTITNOWORTOMORROWPLEEZASAPITWOULDBEGREAT


i m s o h a p p y t h a t u r c o n t i n u i n g !!!!!!

Th :DYAY:D
 

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Book II

Chapter One

1800 was not a good year. Britain was at with France, and now every man was expected to do his duty.
I remember that when the war broke out, Mr. Grim was sitting with me, at a dank little pub in Nottingham.
“It is most annoying Matthew. Every time someone from the Yeomanry stops me, they get all suspicious of my French accent.”
I had sympathy for him, at least. His friends, Pole and Smith had gone off to Spain to fight against the French invasion force.
“It isn’t good at the moment. London is in a state of chaos. The threat of invasion has really got to the populace. Paris is buzzing…well at least that is what I’ve heard.”
Mr. Grim indeed was grim now. He was much more slouched; his quite tall and impressive figure drooped somewhat. He had taken to drinking much more powerful drink…whiskey.
“We french like our beer, but there is something so reassuring about an Englishmen’s whiskey.”
The conversation was about the war again.
“I don’t think it can be avoided”, I said to Mr. Grim. “I am going to have to fight in the English army.”
Mr. Grim was again saddened.
“To lose another friend”, he sulked. “Very well.”
We made our farewells.

“Private Shepperd!”
The general was bellowing out a list of names. On hearing mine, I stepped forward.
“Take your bayonet and pack, and board the ship on starboard side.”
“Yes sir.”
I was standing with other recruits at Plymouth docks. The Duchy of Cornwall was forming a regiment to fight in the Caribbean. I was following other recruits onto the ship. I was startled to see that a lot of them were mere boys, not much older than sixteen. Many looked scared, having never been much further than ten miles from home. The prospect of being thousands of miles away in a war zone frightened the life out of them.
The objective, so the general told us, was to recapture the island of Jamaica from the French. A French force, some ten thousand strong had captured the island, and had built strong fortifications on the beaches.

Once on the ship, I knew it would not be a comfortable ride. Each ship had some five hundred soldiers on, which I knew was only designed to capacitate for one hundred and fifty. Many on the ship looked half starved…and many I saw would be dead before we got there…dead from malnutrition, disease…and some because they blew their brains out.

Several weeks passed. All we saw was endless sea. The Atlantic was not a friendly sea. It constantly rocked the boat. I had to bear the constant reek of puke, as many soldiers felt seasick.
Sometimes it passed well. In the evenings, sailors and soldiers would meet up to make bets. It could be a card game, or a game of chess. The most popular was boxing. The soldiers and the sailors would select someone from among themselves, and usually, a riot would start out afterwards, because the results were always debateable.
After a month though, we came within sight of land.
Jamaica was in sight.
The armada approached the island. Already, we were boarding onto our landing boats. I could hear a distant rumble…the rumble of cannon. The French were waiting for us.
 

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Back from holidays and overjoyed to see this! Excellent stuff, and as usual, I await the next update with enormous patience (it is running out ;))

Overjoyed!