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This is getting better every time!

Short, but much said. All the bitterness and gloom was very well written. It's truly captivating, and it's a much more lyrical tale than I'd expected from your comments in the bAAR :D

I am loving it - hope you will not brake your update schedule over the weekend... :)
 

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Danke. I try to get into the frame of mind of an old person looking back on their life bitterly, with regrets that things happened... badly. I watched one of the last episodes of I, Claudius to get in the mood, put on some nice mournful choral music, and voila.

Tomorrow, probably an update. Saturday and Sunday are for sure update days, barring alien invasion, ebola outbreak, or the odd rogue elephant flattening me before economics.
 

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((OOC: One for the nyquil, two for the flu, three to get dizzy and four to puke... If this installment is less coherent than the others, blame illness and medication, and humor me in my addled brain. Awaayy we gooo.))

Dirt. Hot dirt, cold dirt, wet dirt, dry dirt. My life was dirt, literally and figuratively. I lived on the dirt, I worked the dirt, and I had a growing conviction that one fine day not too far from now, I'd die and be buried in the dirt.

Peasants, I have found, know much of dirt by necessity.

Time, when your entire life consists of eating, sleeping, and mindless manual labor, has a way of collapsing and expanding all at once. Had I been Rossum a day? A week? A century? I had no way of knowing, save the weekly execution of "demon rebels" by the authorities occupying Lupinstadt. So, those I counted- a tenuous lifeline to my previous life as a well fed, well housed, respected advisor of the king. The taste of dirt is regret.

While I worked, I checked and rechecked how many of the horrible executions I'd had to attend. The Moldavians took great pride in their ability to root out werewolf remnants hiding near Lupinstadt, I must say. I didn't think there were a hundred within a day's ride of Lupinstadt, but suprises abound. The Moldavians would, every week, precisely, summon every townsman to the center square. There, events took on an awful sort of inevitability after the first three times.

The werewolf was lashed to a stake, bound and gagged. Finely ground silver dust was blown up the werewolf's nose- I dare not say "he", since several times females were caught and killed in this way- and, while they writhed in undescribable agony, the pile of kindling at their feet was ignited by a torch, and the luckless werewolf died being eaten away from inside and out at once.

The Moldavians were, as I have said, very proud.

After the first time, I saw my new wife being executed in that way, and woke up screaming. After the second time, I saw my king being executed in that way, and woke up shrieking. After the third time I saw myself being executed in that way, despite being human, and remained asleep. After that, I no longer had nightmares; how could they compare to my life?

I had reached a solid count of 96 executions- nearly two years scratching seeds into dirt- when I gained some sort of hope.

I was awoken one night by a frantic pounding, pounding on my chamber door. I woke in a panic- had I been found at last? My hand slipped under a pillow and grasped the plain, unadorned dagger I'd kept. I slipped to the door and opened it, and-

-stopped in shock as a wolf limped on three good legs and one dragging one into what served as my house. I barely had the presence of mind to tuck my dagger into a belt loop and shut the door. I sat heavily on the bed, staring at the wolf. I noticed it had an arrow lodged in its leg. I got down, walked to the wolf, and pulled the arrow out. Inspected the tip.

Silver, of course; somehow I'd known.

"You'd better tell me who you are, and why you're here." Odd. I was talking to a wolf, and had every expectation of it talking back to me. Was I insane, or the world?

In response... well, I'd never seen a werewolf actually changing forms in person, up close before. I never wanted to again after that, but somehow it kept happening. Sketch a wolf, sketch a man. Sketch steps in-between the two, without using any especial imagination, but just drawing natural, equal steps between the two shapes. Now imagine them happening slowly, torturously, over the span of two minutes. Imagine sound effects; the crackling of bone as it's forced into new shapes, the slurping inwards of the fur... a nightmare process.

When it was finally done, a young man was looking me straight in the eye; I couldn't help but notice the angry inflamed wound on his left leg. Probably a souvenir of the wound incurred while in wolf form.

"Ivan Kapek, I bring word to you from King... the king." The soldier shook his head slightly, as if clearing his own thoughts. "Your wife is alive and well, and with the royal family in the west of the kingdom. The fight has not been lost yet; Transylvania still fights with Moldavia. We do not know when or where it will end, but end it must, and soon. The realm is being ruined by the Serbs in the south, and the Moldavians to the north. The king wishes you stay near Lupinstadt, in cover, until liberation." The soldier turned to leave, his message sent. I let him go, mute with so many conflicting emotions I could not keep track.

The next day, that soldier was executed before the whole town. He looked at me before the flames took him fully, looked at me in the crowd. That night the nightmares began again.

Another year passed with the dirt. Nothing much happened.

And again another year.

After another two years- could it truly have been four years, so long, since I saw Willem leave and the Moldavians come? - events came to a head. I was returning from the market for a loaf of black bread, when I stopped in shock in the middle of the road; Moldavian soldiers surrounded my home, giving wary glances to all those who passed by. I casually heeled around and walked the other way, determined to be inconspicuous. I hadn't endured four years of dirt life to die before welcoming back my king. After some thought, I began walking to the main gate. I had a good chance of slipping through a cordon there and escaping into the wilderness. Man of the city I may be, but I didn't want to die in one without trying to do my duty.

Presently, I escaped the city; the cordon of soldiers had been very lax. I could only hope that meant soldiers were in short supply, and that Transylvania was winning.

After a few hours walk due west from the city (I had to hope the soldiers' words were true and that the royal family- and my wife- had not moved in the meantime), I began hearing something which at once chilled me to the bone and warmed my heart; the baying of wolves. As I looked up, I saw the round full moon, bright as a beacon. As I saw the first werewolf behind a tree, I began laughing with incongruous glee. Fortunately, the werewolf recognized me, for he changed into a human form and exclaimed over me. I demanded to be taken to the king. The werewolf- a minor noble, I didn't remember his name- grinned, and whistled over a few others to escort me through the deep Hungarian wood to Guns, where the king's court resided in exile.

Of the long, arduous journey there, I will say little. I never ate the flesh of another human, no matter how hungry I got.

But I didn't stop my escorts from it, either. Indeed, I cheered them on after they fell upon an encamped squad of Serbs deep in the forest. Just another nightmare to jumble in with the rest.

A month later, the promised reunion occurred. Out of deference for my shaky mental state, I was taken to my wife first.

We embraced, though we'd only known for two (albeit busy) weeks of the last four years, like an couple grown old together, and there I received my first shock.

A three year old boy.

I looked up, questioning, into my wife's eyes. "He's named Willem, Ivan. You won't argue."

"I... a boy?"

She smiled, eyes crinkling up at the corners. "Yes, Ivan. Our child." She hugged me again.

From there, somber soldiers took me to the makeshift throne room. I received my second shock when I was bidden to kneel before King Georg I Beloka, younger brother of the now deceased Willem I.

What more was there to say? Georg and I cried together as family for the loss of Willem. He died of consumption shortly after fleeing the city, Lupinstadt, he had loved. I tried to get a military picture of what Georg called the Second Balkan War.

The first year had involved a fighting withdrawl on all sides of the empire before the Christian forces of Moldavia and Serbia. Fully half the army was destroyed. Then, Georg- by his own telling one of the most brilliant generals this region had ever seen- took personal command of the army. Things turned around. Georg first risked his life and his army on a risky assault on Serbia while their army was away thrashing around Wallachia. His lightning assaults on fortresses and decisive engagements of small detachments subdued the entire kingdom in the space of six months. The king and royal family in tow, he dictated terms; the province of Kosovo to the stewardship of the werewolves, as well as 100,000 ducats in apology. And the not-minor proviso that the Serbians be the sworn vassals of Transylvania forevermore, and the Serbian king's life forfeit for attacking Transylvania. But, they had no choice.

With this new fund, he spent the next two years building up and occupied himself with various projects; one of these, I now learned, was getting word to me of the situation. Finally, six months ago, he struck. With a speedy advance into their capitol city, he split the army of Moldavia in two; then he goaded them into attacking separately, and devastated them piecemeal. I would learn that decisive battle happened the day after I fled Lupinstadt. Two days before I had reached, Guns, in fact, the Moldavian king and family had been captured along with their capitol. Their Bujak province had been taken two weeks prior, and Lupinstadt itself was on the verge of falling. The date was August 8, 1447, a lifetime from when I'd taken the office of advisor.

"But Ivan, I have already dictated my terms to the Moldovan king. We shall own Bujak. We shall receive another indemnity. We shall have the Moldovans as our vassals, and I shall have the life of the Moldovan king as my own to end when I wish."

I did not think about the practial difficulties of holding down two provinces not continuous with our own. I did not think of the political implications of killing two more kings of Christendom, nor of the Ottomans (who had taken Constantinople the month before). I did not even think of how this new king's drive for revenge could push us too far, too fast.

I shut my eyes and saw the execution of a countless parade of werewolves.

I said, "My king, I wish that I could help you kill the Moldovan king."

Georg stared me in the eyes, suprised- evidently Willem had told him that I was a phlegmatic intellectual, not at all bloodthirsty- but nodded, once. "Ivan, whatever your body, your soul is that of one of us."

I am not sure whether my agreement was a blessing or a curse.
 

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((OOC: Okay, after a day of drunken revelry with MrT, I'm returning home.

Here is, in the game, where everything turned wahooni-shaped in a large hurry. I was going to write about the actual seven years of war, but I realized I'd already broken 2000 words just describing the leadup, so I let that be a nice stopping place. You lot get devastating wars and battles tomorrow, if you're nice. :D))



Well, then, I have come in my story to the point I have dreaded talking about since starting this chronicle of my own life. What has caused so much controversy, so much acrimony, and even brought down an entire family whole.

The Madness of King Georg.

I know not what history will call Georg I, from this vantage point only a decade and some years removed from the chaotic, tumultuous period known as his reign. Born in war, raised in war, acceded to king in war- perhaps it should have been obvious that the king would die in war.

I have written about the bloody end to the second Balkan war. What remains to be written is how Georg's madness, paranoia, and stupidity caused the period after that war to be the lead up to a near-cataclysm for his entire people. To this day, I think of where we, where the kingdom would be had we not wasted thousands of our workers, our nobles, our villages, and an entire decade on the awful war.

On September 3rd, 1447, I was called at 2 am- a favorite joke of King Georg, oh he reckoned it high humor indeed to roust everyone from sound sleep- to consult with the king on some minor matter regarding the conversion of Christians in the Marosian forest to Lupinstadt's west. The king favored an aggressive spending policy to convert mass amounts of Christianas as rapidly as possible. Here, the king's innate reckless abandon served him well; making the people believe in the werewolf kings was the one true way we had to "mark" our own territory in Europe. No country would contemplate the assault of a city whose inhabitants were deathly opposed to their very way of life without trepidation- that was the plan, and even at the nadir of our fortunes, not one pagan city fell to the Christian hordes.

When I asked King Georg where the money from the conversion would come from, he spun around laughing in his brightly coloured clothing (not at all a respectable drab like his brother or father) and answered, gaily, "From the new pillaging and taxing of Serbia, of course!"

I started to mumble an affirmative sounding grunt, when something hit me like a bolt; Transylvania still had a treaty with Serbia from the ruinous Peace of Lupinstadt barely 3 years ago!

When I told the king this, he grew unwontedly somber. "Ivan... I thought I saw the heart of a predator in you. Empires are not built by defense and economic growth, Ivan! Empires are built through blood, and iron, and the harsh laws of conquest!"

King Georg always did tend to bombastic, rising speeches, even when there was no audience nearby. Perhaps it aided the troops; it just made me recoil a little from the smell of rot and death and blood on his breath.

"Sire, we swore, in a treaty signed by you in all somberness, to not attack them for five years and to accept them as our sworn liege vassals. To attack them before the expiry of that treaty would be the height of arrogance and a flaunting of all laws of decency." I had to force my voice to stay level, to avoid imitating Georg's bombastic style of speech.

"What care I for the laws that can only restrain?" Georg demanded, red-faced. "Leave me, you sad sack of an advisor. Run to your human home, and your disgraceful slut of a wife and a half-breed half-wit child!" Literally trembling with rage, King Georg backed away from me and sat on his throne, staring at me.

I had images of me jumping at the king, attacking him for his insults. Followed, unhappily, by images of the king changing into his wolf form and killing me slowly and painfully.

I turned my back on the king (ignoring his snarl) and left the throne room. But I did not head home. There was another I had to pay visit to.

The Lady Katerina was the third of Victor I's children. Two of his sons were kings; The third, a daughter, had instead married into another family of the migrated werewolves and settled down to a steady life raising her noble children and not worrying much about politics. I came to a grim realization that would have to destroy her naivete.

I was ushered in to confer with Katerina quickly, after arriving at their castle. Walking through the narrow, high hallways and the sweeping wide rooms bedecked with finery, there was still the scent of wolves thick around the entire castle, like a low spicy musk. Despite myself, I began to be afraid.

"Ahhh, the advisor Ivan Kapek! Sit, sit, my brother was truly fond of you!" The large form of Katerina bustled through the room I was in like a storm. "Would you like something to drink?"

"No, Lad-"

"Good, good, I'll call the servants." And, after an ear-splitting bellow, she swiveled her gaze to lock on to my eyes and smiled suddenly, like a stroke of lightning. "And to what do I owe this unexpected visit?"

Suddenly uncomfortable, I couldn't broach the subject directly. "Tell me, my lady... what recollections do you have of Georg, your brother, while he was growing up?"

She seemed to stagger without moving, and the cheerful look left her face in a rush. "Ah. I... see. My idiot brother is already trying to ruin the country, and you don't like all the damage it's doing to your carefully planned tables and columns of numbers, making this country work?"

Feeling absurdly like I needed to defend myself, I offered, "We will attack Serbia at dawn. We had a treaty with them, lady, we gave our oath. Our oath. How can we just throw that away?"

She nodded once. "The peasants will be upset at this breach of our sworn word. Our neighbors will become more wary of us, and more hostile. Thousands will die, and more will die maintaining the peace in Serbia until our missionaries can arrive in force. Is that roughly it?"

"Yes, my lady."

She sighed. "I'll try to talk sense into him tomorrow. But Ivan, remember this- he is my family. You are not even of my species. I serve my own family, and I will not hear a word spoken about him in public, and you will not- you WILL not- take action against him. It is not your place."

I deflated, beaten, and left. Sometimes, a wife who doesn't ask you why you're depressed is the best kind.

The war against Serbia was predictably short and vicious. King Georg seemed constitutionally incapable of honoring local truces, just as the concept of a "treaty" seemed to elude him. Thus, no prisoners were taken by the military in the six-month Serbian war, and it ended with the rump King we installed three years prior being earmarked for the king's private hunting ground. When I delicately asked him, a week later, about his plans for the future, he only beamed at a map and said;

"Ah Ivan, how much more prettier the map looks with all my parts connected!"

I left without another word, for fear of how far the King would go if he was kept talking.

It did not matter; I was woken from my bed by a servant with news; That King Georg had decided that it would be a simply wonderful idea to attack the Hungarians and Croatians without provocation. I groaned, and fell back to sleep. It would keep to morning, and besides; what was there to be done? The king's word was law.

The next morning, prepared to face the probably ebullient King, I walked through the castle only to be intercepted by a legion of courtiers. Attemping to steer me away, they said, "Advisor, the King is in ill humor."

I rounded on the popinjay that said this and bellowed into his ear, "THE KING SHALL SEE HIS ADVISOR IF THE KING WISHES TO DECLARE WAR WITHOUT SAID ADVISOR'S KNOWLEDGE!"

The courtier, werewolf blood though he had, wilted in the face of a righteously angry human.

I pushed into the throne room, and ducked suddenly, as some large object flew through the space previously occupied by my head and shattered on the far wall. The king was in ill-humor.

"Well? Don't just sprawl there on the floor, man, shut the doors before someone else gets in!" I wasn't sure I heard

King Georg properly, but I wasn't arguing. Leaning out the door, I shooed the courtiers with frantic hand gestures, then shut the door. I turned to see King Georg properly for the first time. The King was rumpled, as if he had not left the room for days. His blue eyes, normally calm and focused, now seemed crazed, roving around the room trying to find purchase on something familiar and solid. My bad luck that he decided I was appropriate to bear that full insane gaze.

"They're all traitors, Ivan." He said this in a low, quiet, dangerous rumble. "The Hungarians knew we were coming, and intercepted our army attacking from the Marosian forest. We took casualties, but-", and here his voice began rising in pitch, "-despite this unmatched perfidy, our forces triumphed, and even now besiege Eger!"

I opened and shut my mouth several times. "Sire... because there was an army guarding the Hungarian capitol... you have concluded that someone betrayed our plans?"

"Of course man! It's obvious!"

I rubbed my face slightly, cursing whatever cruel fate made Victor decide three children would be a simply wonderful idea, instead of two. "And why, although I fully realize I may regret asking this for the rest of my life, are you sure I didn't betray your beautiful plans to the Hungarians?"

King Georg ran the few steps over to me, grabbed me by the shoulders, and shook. "You're a coward, Ivan! You'd never do it! You're the only one I can trust, everyone else is out there, conspiring with the Pope and the Sultan, conspiring to lay me low..."

At this distance I could see something which shook me to the bone; Georg's eyes were changing color. Also, patches of his skin appeared to be growing hair and losing it at random intervals. Georg was, I think, so insane that he was losing control of his own shape. That's never a thing you want to see at close proximity.

I spent another hour handholding the mad king through his bout of paranoia. It took another two to get to the point where he would allow another werewolf into the room with him. I took my first chance and left, quickly. I had to pay another visit to the Lady Katerina.

She of course turned me away again, with a vague promise that she'd "talk" to her brother. I got the distinct feeling that she felt that this was all just another bit of juvenile silliness that would resolve itself.

At that time, in that place, perhaps her idea even had some merit. Hungary surrendered unconditionally in early 1451, surrendering all their territory except for a ragged patchwork of duchies around Eger itself, and a prince's ransom. The king, sensibly, had fled to Austria in exile before being captured for the horrid hunt. Croatia, too, crumpled, surrendering up Krain and 30,000 ducats for peace.

The Croatian king did not flee. He did not survive the hunt.

For six more months, I dared to hope, dared to dream that we had gotten away with our expansion. Even King Georg seemed suprised and somewhat disappointed, occasionally whispering to himself during state functions, "They'll betray me. They'll attack me. You'll all see."

Sometimes, being the king's right hand man also means having your left ear too close to the king's mouth.

On November 13th, 1451, the peace ended. Spectacularly. Austria, Bosnia, Venice, The Papal States, Croatia, Moldavia, Poland, Lithuania, Hungary, Bohemia, Wurtemburg, Wurzburg, and Bavaria all delivered their declarations of war as a synchronized phalanx of gaily bedecked ambassadors. They called themselves the Holy League, and committed to restoring the Balkans to Christendom.The darkest hour had arrived. Georg had got his way; there would be a cataclysmic showdown with the forces of Christendom in the Balkans.

I could only watch from my quarters in the royal castle, and pray that my king was as talented in war as he was hamhanded in peace.
 

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Yow! That's got to be a bit... interesting.

Fell off the badboy wagon, looks like. I, too, hope your king is talented in war!

OOC: did you give your kingdom a tech or morale boost for the werewolves in the army - or maybe something else?
 

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Yeah. My reputation, from the no-CB wars against Serbia and Hungary and the relevant spoils of war, tapped "Extremely Bad", which was more than enough to light a fire.

I erased the Pagan tech inhibition (which should make for some really cool NA results), and gave them a small bonus to morale.
 

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Poor Ivan. A coward now? Lets hope he somehow finds himself with a silver dagger in his hands, in the kings chambes as he's ranting about traitors. All it takes is one quick stab, just one. He doesnt even have to *mean* to do it...

Go Ivan!

As to removing the Pagan tech modifier - excellent! NA is going to be very interesting indeed - mabe the Aztecs *will* conquer the globe this time.
 

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I've been neglecting the work of far too many people over the past few months and today officially marks the beginning of my return. I thought I'd start with the work of people who were there to support yesterday's extravaganza and yours was the first I came to.

Wow. What an amazingly enjoyable read I've just had! This is so beautifully written that I'm not quite sure where to start in my praise of it. I love the way you're crafting the language to suit the mood of each scene - I have no doubt that you're carefully selecting the precise verbiage you need to keep this highly evocative and interesting. There are so many "little" things that go into it...things that tend to get overlooked in so many AARs but are all hitting home just perfectly here.

I can certainly say that I'm looking forwad to many future instalments...which, of course, presupposes that you're going to survive the mayhem and destruction that the Christian nations are about to try and deliver. Regardless, this is definitely one for my "subscribe" list. Bravo!
 

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((OOC: Aww... warm fuzzy MrT. I'm inspired to write up my post for the day early. :D))

I shall never, as long as I live, forget my final meeting with King Georg before he went off to the war.

He was smiling. At least, his teeth were showing and his lip was curled in an upwards direction. There was a light in his eyes that sparkled and danced as he talked. His skin was... well, not red, but he seemed to glow. I had the sense that this was a man whose entire life had been building to this purpose, and now that he had arrived he meant to enjoy it.

"Ivan... to you I entrust Lupinstadt. Keep it safe for me. I shall return." He clapped me on the shoulder affectionately. Peace is where your talents lie, and I was wrong to deny you that. But war? War is where I shine. Let me handle it."

I only grinned, hesitantly.

"The border reports some 150,000 Christian troops, all told, pouring across in various directions, from various countries. We have some 25,000 under arms. We're in trouble, Ivan, I won't deny you that." The king kept smiling, oddly.

"I do not care what you have to do to this grand old city, Ivan. Keep the reinforcements coming. Break up families, burn houses, threaten children if you must, but we must fight here. If you keep me supplied, I'll win this war."

I stared into this madman's eyes, and realized finally that my king had lost connection with reality. But I still said, "Yes, sire."

And thus, I became acting despot of Lupinstadt. It was, I must admit, a heady feeling to be in position to give unquestionable orders to all I saw. I only wished I had more control of the world outside the city walls. But there, I was limited to news despatches. Although countless histories will talk of the great Crusade, it probably is worthwhile to speak of what I learned from the despatches.

King Georg had an impeccable strategic and tactical mind, I must admit. He saw at once that the Crusaders were broken up into four factions. The Polish faction included themselves, Moldavia, and Lithuania. They fought to gain Ruthenia, Bujak, and a say in the fate of the Balkans. The Venetians led another, with the Pope and Bosnia licking their heels. They only got involved because of our expansion into Kosovo and Krain; they saw (correctly) that we were advancing to the Venetian homeland and the Adriatic coast, and fought for a buffer zone.

The third faction was Hungary's. The smallest and weakest, they signed onto the Crusade to, obviously, regain what was theirs. The last faction was also the biggest. The Austrian faction. They led themselves, the Bosnians, Bavaria, and the rest of the German principalities that joined. Theirs was perhaps the most morally pure motivation; I believe even now that they wanted to reclaim the land for Christendom and stamp us out.

Georg's genius, however, lay in realizing that the various factions were as often as not working at crosspurposes. The Hungarians and Venetians, for example, both desired Krain; the Poles, Bohemians, and Hungarians all wished to have the Carpathian foothills. And so forth. Georg decided at once to allow the border forts to try to hold back the tide of Christendom long enough on three fronts to decisively defeat them on a fourth. For his first foray, Georg targeted the Venetians, particularly their Bosnian allies. The Bosnians had been preparing this for a long time, I realized in retrospect; certainly several years. Their 30,000 man army contributed almost 1/5 of the strength of the Crusading armies. Georg took his entire 25,000 man army south into Serbia to meet them.

It seemed that the Bosnians had spent all their money on equipping a vast number of peasants with substandard armor and weaponry to cow towns into submission by sheer weight of numbers. When a professional army of peasants, tirelessly drilled by some German werewolves who had been drill instructors, charged at their center full bore, they disintegrated into full rout in a matter of hours. Only fifteen thousand Bosnians kept their head long enough to retreat into the disputed province of Kosovo, and besiege Nish. Obviously, the correct strategy would be to pursue the Bosnians until they broke entirely. But King Georg was rarely correct.

He fought his way through Hell and back with three simple words; Attack, attack, attack.

Instead of the defensive move; save Nish and destroy the Bosnian army, he went offensive and attacked Bosnia itself. The dispatches talked of Georg's bravery and talent at siegecraft- for all that, I think it was just dumb luck. Bosnia surrendered on July 2nd, 1452, giving up all claim to any sovereignty, their royal family, and so on. In what was for Georg a remarkable display of patience, he moved on the Bosnian army at Kosovo the next day. But what he did was so out of character, it amazes to this day. He, "persuaded", if I may, the Bosnian king to deliver a by all accounts stunning speech exhorting the Bosnian troops to defect to the werewolf army.

About two thirds of them did. The rest died tragically on the long, perilous, forested path back to Bosnia. Completely naturally, of course.

With his newfound strength, Georg moved on the 20,000 strong Venetian army that had been gathering in Dalmatia. Now fortified to 40,000 or so men, he placed his not reliable fresh Bosnian troops in the front. The slaughter was enormous, but in the end the Venetians were harried into a peninsula, trapped against the sheer cliffs leading down to the sea and the werewolf army.

Georg asked for surrender.

The Venetian commander replied, "Death first."

True to his word, Georg had to push the Venetians off that peninsula. No prisoners were taken. Thousands fell from the cliffs to break on the rocks below. The bloodletting had its desired effect though; the next day, the Venetians ended the war status quo ante bellum, taking the Pope with him. But Georg had not seen the end of war.

All was not well in the north, however. A lightning Polish advance had taken Ruthenia, and the Lithuanians based in Jedisan had taken Bujak. Carpathia was under siege by Bohemia. The Austrians had taken the Hungarian territories of Presburg and Odenburg, while the Croats had almost taken Krain. In interim, several territories had mass peasant uprisings in support of the Christians. I dismissed them as an aberration at the time, but no... they were the harbingers of a far less pleasant future.

I had some 9,000 hastily conscripted infantry waiting for Georg in Lupinstadt. Not even I could call a horse regiment into being, though. It was enough; Georg blew through the area, picking his troops up, without so much as a thank you. I don't suppose I blame him.

The Polish campaign started with great promise. He captured and annexed Moldova in a few months. But when he went onwards into Poland, the errors accumulated. Poland was no Venice, to be subdued with a battle. Georg tried it, but again and again the bulk of the Poles slipped deeper into Poland, always beckoning Georg in deeper. And the daft bastard kept onward. Finally, he was caught in a trap by a Polish army five times his size, attacking from all sides in the desperately cold wastes north of Krakow.

Somehow, he escaped with his life and about 5,000 troops out of the 35,000 he started the Polish campaign with.

Retreating through Lupinstadt, he picked up another 4,000 troops I'd scrounged, and defeated a few ragtag peasant regiments in the center of the kingdom before moving west, to Austria. About this time I visited the lady Katerina again. I said outright that Georg would ruin the country, and that the people would support her now 8-year old son as king. She looked at me with mournful eyes and just told me to leave.

I will grant King Georg this; as mad and as idiotic as he was at politics, he fought like a man possessed. In the Austrian campaign he wheeled around the Austro-Transylvanian border, engaging and routing small units almost weekly, liberating villages. And, most noteworthily, drafting fresh troops from the liberated villages, which sometimes ceased to exist because of his conscription. After a year of this low-key struggle, something seemed to twist in Georg's mind. Some demonic little voice, whispering in his ear; "Go for the throat."

So Georg took his bedraggled army of 15,000 and besieged Vienna itself. Once there, he used the ten thousand infantry to seal off Vienna, while his five thousand cavalry roamed the rest of Austria, breaking up armies that were forming to attempt to relieve Vienna. Miraculously, Georg's mad plan worked, and in January of 1455, Vienna surrendered to King Georg. This was the height of Georg's prestige and military renown; I would hear, in later years, that the Austrian campaign had become required study in all the military training across Europe. Although the Holy Roman Emperor himself was not in Vienna (a fact which Georg went into a legendary frenzy of rage over), he dictated a peace to the entire Austrian block; the werewolves would recieve some 100,000 ducats in exchange for peace. Quickly, Hungary rushed to a white peace after learning of their patron's desertion.

After five years of warfare, the Christian crusade had all but foundered. All that remained in the field was the not inconsiderable might of the Poles and Lithuanians. Those two nations had gathered almost a hundred thousand troops between them for a final smashing blow into Transylvania to end the war. In front of Lupinstadt, King Georg dug in for the first defensive fight of his life with a paltry twenty thousand troops. All flags were furled in Lupinstadt. Nobody laughed, or cheered. Everyone went about their business grimly, as if already under siege.

Finally, the Poles came. For months waves of frenzied Polish troops hurled themselves against the fieldworks of Georg. But they never broke through. The Poles retreated to their forward base in Moldova to await reinforcements.

Unfortunately, we could not pursue. Now six years of warfare had gone by without respite, and the people were not happy with the taxes, the devastation, and the death. Every few weeks another area of the empire rose against King Georg, but we could not put them down for fear of abandoning Lupinstadt to the Poles. So they remained in revolt.

March 15, 1456. Another of those days I remember all too clearly. In the morning, disaster. The Turks had stabbed us in the back.

King Georg came back to the castle to hear the Ottoman ambassador speak, but seemed not to hear or believe. He didn't want it to be true, so for him, it couldn't be true. Simple. We recieved reports all through the midday of tens of thousands of Turks pouring over our completely undefended southern border.

In the afternoon, I went for my last visit to see the Lady Katerina. She'd been crying, I could tell, the entire morning. When I asked why, she showed me a letter; her husband had been commanding the garrison in Bucarest, and contact had been lost in the Turkish onrush.

"Your son, milady... he is twelve, now, isn't he?" I felt like a monster for asking this question at this time, at this place. But it had to be done.

She nodded.

"My lady... you have to agree, there's no more choice. The kingdom needs peace. Georg, however brilliant he is, can simply not countenance peace without victory. And, my lady, this is a war we cannot find victory in."

"Ivan... for the longest time, I could not understand you. You're human, but you serve a werewolf more fanatically than any." She rubbed her face, worn out emotionally. "But I think, now, that I realize what you're about, Ivan. You do not serve the king. You never have, and you never will. Don't interrupt."

I shut my mouth.

"You have it in your head that werewolves are innately better than humans. But you look around you and you see werewolves being stupid, being petty, being all the things you think are wrong with humanity. How, then, can you reconcile your thought with your senses?" She laughed mirthlessly. "Ivan, you serve some mythical perfect werewolf. One that's brilliant, handsome, noble, and always acts for the benefit of his people. Willem was probably the closest we'll come to that ideal, and you loved him like a brother."

She dabbed some at her eyes. "And so I will concur to Georg's removal as king and the installation of my son, with one condition. Because you do serve that impossibly perfect werewolf, it's safe... Until his majority, you, Ivan, and no other will rule the country as regent and teacher and guardian of my son."

I was shocked, unable even to argue.

"You cannot murder Georg, I know. Leave that to we imperfect and ignoble, Ivan. Promise me."

"I... I promise, my lady" What was I saying? In a daze, I left the room.

That evening, I was fetched to the throne room to dispose of the body of the lamented King Georg I, who had been stabbed several times with a silver dagger. I immediately sent out ambassadors to all attacking nations, effectively surrendering. Perhaps wary of our renowned talent at recovering from defeats and winning wars, we got off lightly. To Lithuania, the province of Bujak; to Poland, the province of Moldavia; to the Turks, 50,000 ducats. And the rebel peasants were made pleased by the end of war.

It never occurred to me to ask the new young king's name until I heard, at the coronation, "King Victor II". I suppose it was natural, or symbolic, or something else. I was named regent of the kingdom, and for five years I would rule the werewolf kingdom as a human, and bring up a werewolf. Not just educate, mind you. The war hadn't finished taking its toll.

Lady Katerina was discovered dead by her own hand after learning of her husbands death in Bucaresti before the peace. Found near her was a scrap of parchment with the words, "You promised." on them. Not even addressed to me, but still I knew.

I had, after all, promised.
 

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Jeepers! Another? Good showing against the assembled masses and some good strategic decisions. You definitely want to make sure that your "rotation" leaves some room for recovery from war exhaustion.

I love the closing series of paragraphs in that instalment. Poignant indeed! Now make sure you keep your promise...
 

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Director- You get a screenie of the werewolves' empire, as well as a screenshot of the crap flag I made for them, as soon as I figure out a half-decent image hoster that allows remote links. Grompf...

Oh, and it was ridiculously touch and go. I've never, ever been so happy to see a peace offer accepted as I did with those two, frantic, final attempts to buy off the Turks and the Poles. Until the Turks entered, I thought I was going to do the incredible and win the war... as it was, I survived.

MrT- One update a day, every day that I can. Study for finals? Pssh. I could be writing!
 

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((OOC: Yes, it depressed me greatly to write this.))


I never wanted to rule, but rulership sought me out anyway. Isn't that the way it never, ever goes in real life? It's a myth. I lived in a myth. Still am, come to think of it. Me, a common refugee, becoming regent of one of the most powerful kingdoms in Europe on the strength of my brain. My regency was to last six years; 1458 to 1464, in the Christian recokning. Not so long ago from when I wrote this- my story will end, soon, as all stories must. I can only hope history judges me kindly.

A discerning reader already knows my temperment and strategy during the period I controlled Transylvania- a heavy emphasis on the defensive, and economic building, and the conversion of Christians to loving and accepting the werewolves as their rightful rulers.

More important to me, however, were my duties as parent and godparent. There was my own, young 12-year old son Willem Kapek, and his education. But now there was also the two orphan children of the Lady Katerina for me to care for, the only lineal descendants of the old King Victor I, who I met all those forty (could it really be so long?) years ago as a brash youngling. The future king, Victor, and a daughter, Anne. Being my own, peasant-bred, stubborn self I resolved to educate all three of the children myself, with the curriculum I thought it prudent for the children to know.

Certainly arithmetic, and reading, and rhetoric would be instructed. That was only natural and proper. But I hesitated long and hard over teaching them the full history of Transylvania, including the ancestors of the two royals. Some things, children should not know. But in the end, I decided that Victor had to know to rule effectively. So, I described Victor's and Willem's, and even Georg's campaigns in Hungary and Austria, and described what little I knew of the werewolves' history. I admit to having to ask for help from some nobles for that, at least.

The major part of their instruction, however, was practical. I insisted that they attend every state function, learn what I did as ruler, and understand why. When I promoted tax collectors, they knew it was because there was little risk of rebellion, and the money was needed. When I refused, they knew that I considered rebellion too costly. When I made treaties, they knew it was for security; when I refused, they knew it was to leave routes open. When I sent missionaries, I made sure they knew why I did, and why they had to as well; the converts, and the converts' children, were the future of Transylvania.

They never knew why I didn't send missionaries, because I sent them at every opportunity.

The art of diplomacy deserves some special mention. After the payment of 50,000 ducats to the Turks, their ambassador began slowly moderating his language. He began talking about "Common enemies to us both", and other conciliatory overtures. I was more than willing to spin him out indefinitely- the more they talked, the less likely tens of thousands of janissaries were to pour over our border- but during one slow session, the fifteen year old Victor blurted in frustration, "If you like us so much, why aren't we allies yet?"

I froze, and had only just begun to compose a hasty apology when the color returned to the Turkish ambassador's face.

He looked pensive for a moment, and said, "Indeed... why not? If it is acceptable to the regent?"

I could only say yes.

On a less fortuitous note, bad things are said to come in threes. I believe that now to be true. Not because of my three students, but because of the three events which provided the close of my regency.

Firstly, a Doge came to power in Venice on the strength of persuading the merchant that we had "callowly and unjustly" butchered tens of thousands of their soldiers in the Battle of the Peninsula (strangely, I seem to remember the Venetian commander saying "Death First!" when asked for honorable surrender), and once in power, what could he do but attack? This time, however, Venice had no allies of note, and we were aided by the Ottomans. War? No. It was raw butchery. A dozen thousand or so Venetians moved over to the Nish valley, while a massive force commanded by the eminent Gedik Ahmed swept into the Ragusan area with a much larger force. Alone and unsupplied, the Venetians nevertheless fought like demons. Perhaps the government's propaganda had them convinced that they'd all be butchered slowly if they surrendered anyway, so what was the point of not resisting?

It did make for a bloody valley after they all died, I am told.

Uncomfortably aware of the poor example I had set for my young charges, I decided to counterbalance it with an act of leniency; I allowed the Venetians to pay a mere 21,000 ducats to be rid both of the Transylvanian and the Ottoman armies. Imagine my dismay when young Victor congratulated me on my foresight in "not letting the Ottomans get any more powerful than they already are." Children. How they do go on.

The second event came when after a lesson in the great leaders of history; I chose several of the Roman Emperors such as Hadrian, noted for their building; Victor wished to speak to me.

"Go on, sire, what is it?" I asked, my mind not entirely on the present, but on a conference with the chief of missionaries in Serbia.

"Teacher," (and that is how he referred to me always; not regent, not sir, not father, just teacher), "what is the... purpose... of Transylvania?"

"Well, Victor, I'd say it's to have a place where werewolves can rule humans and not have to fear for their lives, as is natural." I meant to dismiss him, but he hung on.

"But what about revenge, Teacher? I've been reading the diaries of King Victor, my grandfather, and his one ambition, his one driving goal, was to punish the Christians for making us leave our home in Hanover."

My suddenly numb fingers let a book slip through, landing on the desk with a loud clap. "You weren't intended to read those." Stupid. He was a teenager. "Your grandfather... I knew him, you know, before he died. He was a large man. Very big, very intimidating. And yes, above all he desired revenge, personally, against those who threw them out. They're dead now, Victor, as dead as your grandfather is. The world's... changed. You've got a beautiful kingdom here. Your people enjoy more freedom and power than they ever have, anywhere... why would you risk throwing all that aware on a suicidal drive for illusory revenge?"

Victor held my gaze with his own, matched me word for word. "Teacher, as much as I respect you, you are not a werewolf. You have no comprehension of our minds, our souls." I quickly flashed to Georg's assuring me that my soul was as that as a werewolf, and winced. "You did not make that long trek from Germany to Lupinstadt, nor did your parents, nor your grandparents. You can not understand the lure our father land has for us, deep inside, teacher."

And with that, he left me to sit in an empty classroom and contemplate my own numerous failings as an instructor and parent.

The third disaster, though, hit hardest and closest to home. One day, after a particularly vexing arithmetic lesson, young Anne stormed out of the classroom in tears. I, frankly, was bewildered- Anne had been such a steady young woman, not at all given to female flights of fancy. Nevertheless, I finished the lesson, and asked Victor to stay back, allowing my own son to return home.

"Victor, do you have any idea what troubles your sister?" I asked mildly.

"I do, teacher." He replied, stroking his chin.

I waited a decent interval, but grew perturbed at Victor's shadow of a smile. "Then tell me, if it wouldn't hurt your sense of joker's pride too much."

"Oh, not at all, teacher. I am duly shocked that you haven't realized the problem before now. You see, teacher... my sister Anne has fallen in love." And again he let that shadow of a smile play across his features.

I shut my eyes. This, then, was how it would happen. "I've warned you both against the excesses of inbreeding, haven't I? I've tried to be very definite about that. I even showed pictures."

Victor let go a light, rolling laugh. "We remember the pictures, father. Some of those old nobles were truly horrid. But no, father, she does not love me save as a brother. She loves another. And I believe you know who."

I stood mute for a full minute, not wanting to believe, always mocked by that shadow of smile on Victor's face. "Not... Willem... my son...?"

"Yes, teacher, your son. Really, it's been obvious. Don't you remember our first hunt?"

I did. Anne was the last of the children to change forms into a wolf on their first hunt together. I even remembered her looking, slightly frightened if I recall, back at the area where I and... my son... were sitting...

I opened and shut my mouth. Finally, I managed, "I thought she was having... difficulty... and looked back at her teacher for support..."

"No, teacher, no. If she truly had difficulty changing shape, why would she look back at you?" Victor fished a fig out of a sack and started tossing it up in the air. "She was looking back at Willem, out of regret. She was doing something he couldn't and it tore at her." On this throw, he swallowed the fig. "They're in love, teacher."

I hollowly said, "I forbid it." Why? Shock, I believe.

Victor smiled at me again. "As you have it... regent."

I went home to my wife and recounted the conversation. At the end, I am shamed to say, I almost went into a hysterical fit. "She is of pure royal blood, and Willem, love him as I do, is half common! How dare they fall in love and risk polluting the blood line!" I thought I'd gone too far when I saw my wife Helen staring at me in shock.

"What?"

"Ivan... dear Ivan. Do you realize what you just said makes you such a wonderful person?" She sighed. "Your first thought was for the integrity of the royal bloodline. I don't honestly think you have yet considered that Anne is a werewolf, and our son only half."

What could I do but nod?The last year of my regency passed uneventfully. As the time of Victor's 21st birthday and accession to the full throne grew near, I steadily became more glum. With good reason.

Immediately after the ceremony, Victor- King Victor II- called me back into his throne room and gently, but firmly, informed me that my services were no longer needed. The child I had lovingly educated now spurned me in my age as one who was not, as he put it, "...in touch with the true trouble and the soul of the land and of the people."For more than thirty years, I had helped guide, under two kings and myself, Transylvania through some of her most desperate hours, and I'd been thrown away like day-old scraps from a feast. I will not tell a lie; it hurt, badly. I had been so involved in the fate of the nation for so long, and so dependent on it, the nation felt like a vital part of me.

I can feel myself growing weaker. I do not think I will survive long without a nation to guide, a people to nurture. My son married, today, as I write this. I was invited to the ceremony, but begged off due to help. 1464, and Christmas. I've always enjoyed Christmas. I can feel my mind wandering. Where is my wife, I wonder? I truly do wish my son all the happiness and joy he can have in his new life. History, mark well the death of Ivan Kapek! He advised they who shook Europe to the core. Long Live the King.

(The manuscript was found thus incomplete. History records that Ivan Kapek died of natural causes at home on December 27, 1464.)
 

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"Gentlemen, let us raise a glass in farewell to a great statesman and a noble fellow.

To him who always thought first of King, of Country, and of Duty.

To him who has earned the undying gratitude of the Werewolf Nation -

I give you Ivan Kapek, Human of Body but in Spirit a Wolf!"

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Due to a ridiculous amount of photoshop crashes, no screenies until tomorrow, I'm afraid. Update is being typed.

Director- Aww... so sad... especially considering what happens next.

GaijinThanks. I just realized that I'm approaching novella length, I've told a single almost self contained complete story, and I'm less than a quarter done with the whole saga. You never really get a sense for how bloody BIG EU2 is until you try to write a detailed AAR about an entire game. It's very humbling.

Due to Lotus having his first good idea in months, I threw out my plans for a big long saga following Victor II's reign. That's been slashed to one, maybe two posts in favor of... well... you'll see, neh? :D

*gets back to typing*
 

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I just realized that I'm approaching novella length, I've told a single almost self contained complete story, and I'm less than a quarter done with the whole saga. You never really get a sense for how bloody BIG EU2 is until you try to write a detailed AAR about an entire game. It's very humbling.
THAT is a very true statement! The deeper and more detailed you go, the shorter the time span you should tackle. Trying to write a full GC-length game at this level of detail (unless you skip huge chunks of play) will result in a gigantic work.

Very much enjoyed that last instalment...
 

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Wow. What an amazingly enjoyable read I've just had! This is so beautifully written that I'm not quite sure where to start in my praise of it. I love the way you're crafting the language to suit the mood of each scene - I have no doubt that you're carefully selecting the precise verbiage you need to keep this highly evocative and interesting. There are so many "little" things that go into it...things that tend to get overlooked in so many AARs but are all hitting home just perfectly here.


Rocky, just returned to this one again, and I can only echo MrT's praise, especially since I seem to remeber you posting somewhere that you do every post in one take, without editing and only music to stimulate the mood you intend to capture?

This is truly amazing

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