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A civil war on the horizon, and a potential early start to the Dance of the Dragons? Who knows? But it's clear the House of the Dragon is tittering on the edge of collapse. And that bit on looking to the east certainly doesn't bode well for the would be rebels, especially if it is indeed a certain dragon we had not seen since Vaekar's tour of Essos.
 
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Did the old pirate give Vhagar heartburn and is heartburn good for a dragon? To have about seven in faction and less than 80% gives an idea of the Queen's strength. Thank you for the updates and may the dragons soar.
 
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Finally all caught up again. Two excellent chapters. And things are about to get even more exc, it seems. If the plotters thought Laena was just going to sit back and wait for them to nurture their plot at their leisure, they don’t really know their sister at all!
 
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The Queen finally has grandchildren. Unfortunately, her first grandson Aenys is a bastard. Fortunately, this is unlikely to affect the succession since he is far down the line. The birth of Lianna's son Prince Jaerion shows that ASOIAF genetics are arbitrary and confusing. Jaerion may officially have the Targaryen name, but he is agnatically a Baratheon and in theory should have the Baratheon look according to the Baratheon strong seed rule, but he looks like his Targaryen mother and there doesn't seem to be a strong reason to think that Jaerion is a bastard or is there?
Yeah, Aenys isnt known to be a bastard by having the trait, but it will be easy to see by any with knowledge of his ''parents'' that he is a bastard...that black hair cant be explained. ASOIAF genetics def are weird...I think I saw somewhere that in this universe a child almost completely takes after one parent so Jareions appearance does make some sense, though his older brother who died stillborn did have the Baratheon child portrait. I did check and Jareion is not a bastard, but a little more context on Liannas marriage to Ronnel Baratheon and her opinion on him will be seen in the next chapter. I will say that having played a little over 100 years into the game...the charcteristics of some of the great houses have started to change...the Lannisters have brown hair and the Baratheons (and Targaryens) have started to add more genetic diversity to their bloodline and some of their appearances will begin to reflect that.

when Laena was only seven, Laena cited Lady Stark's rule in the North as a justification for the idea of a woman and herself more specifically sitting on the Iron Throne
Great catch.


That is plenty of time for Laena to strengthen her own side, for her daughters' cradle egg dragons to grow older as well
One thing to note is the tradition of ''cradle eggs'' has not yet been established, I do have a set point I want to introduce it and the first iteration of it will lead to the birth of a potentially very cool dragon.


Unfortunately, I see big holes in their plan
Yeah there are lots, sometimes hard to justify genius/quick characters planning on what at first glance seems like a hopeless enddevour...Vaekar is aware of these flaws, but he sees this as his only chance, and a little more of his mindset and reasoning for joining his sister will be seen in the next chapter.

I am not sure how useful striking at Vaekar would be. He is a tough man to kill but he does not have many men under his command. I would rather murder Boros II so Ronnal Baratheon, Lianna's husband, would be the new lord of Storm's End.
As of this point in the story, Laena is still hoping her daughter Daeoril can win her betrothed Boros to her side....one thing to note is that if Boros II was to die before siring an heir, House Baratheon would end with his uncle Ronnel as his children are Targaryens and there are no other Baratheons except them. If that happens I would likely have one of Lianna and Ronnels potential spare heirs (if they had any) take the Baratheon name to ensure the survival of that house (Im constantly shuffling around the map and using the house customizer trait/event to keep important houses alive since they have a death wish with female rulers marrying non-matrilineally)

The one thing I do regret actually is making Vaekar the first target, I think Cymella would have been the more realistic one as she and Laena are rivals and she would be furious at the betrayal, though at the time I ordered the hit the Cymella rivalry had not fired.

Who is Cymella's new husband and will he be relevant to the story
Another good catch., I actually was planning on having it mentioned in the previous chapter but forgot, he is just a common hedge knight with no noble house....something Alyssane would have def looked down upon, though as Cymellas affair with the blue bard shows, her taste in men is not just limited to noble circles. I doubt he will have any relevance however.

What is the reason that relations between Laena and her favorite daughter Vaella so poor numberwise and will it have any bearing in the story?
Yeah that is a prime reason I dont pay much attention at all to opinion numbers and instead rely on traits....perspective on events and common sense (+10 opinion for having a lute???)

I havent faced a lot of bugs/issues so far, gameplay wise at least, but the one consistent one I had dealt with whenever one of the commanders of the city gates/towns in Kings Landing dying would cause the Lord of Kings Landing/ Captain of the Gold Cloaks leaving for some far flung corner of the world and leaving me with all his titles...whenver I brought him back to the capitol by console and regave his titles....some family members (particularly Vaella) would be upset they werent given the title and lose opinion which stacked every time it happens (also led to stacked gave my kin a county which in part explains the Arryns high opinion of Laena)

I think I have finally fixed it at my current point in the game but we shall see. Story wise, Vaellas relationship with her mother is great and she is the only daughter Laena truly trusts in her plots which will be seen more in the next chapter.
 
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A civil war on the horizon, and a potential early start to the Dance of the Dragons? Who knows? But it's clear the House of the Dragon is tittering on the edge of collapse. And that bit on looking to the east certainly doesn't bode well for the would be rebels, especially if it is indeed a certain dragon we had not seen since Vaekar's tour of Essos.
I cant promise a dance of dragons yet, though as a writer I am looking forward for it whenever it rolls around. Meraxes certainly would be a huge and almost invincible advantage for the Queen against her siblings.......Meraxes will be seen again in this story, both in mention and physical presence, though whether or not she is the principle dragon focused on in the next chapter I will leave to be seen.

Did the old pirate give Vhagar heartburn and is heartburn good for a dragon? To have about seven in faction and less than 80% gives an idea of the Queen's strength. Thank you for the updates and may the dragons soar.
One of the reasons factions havent been able to gain so much traction is Laena has the feared modifier which iirc means vassals are like 70% less likely to join and create factions....a really big advantage that makes it feasable to play as an evil character in this mod. One person probably isnt enough to trouble a dragon with indegestion......but two people at once.... ;) .

Finally all caught up again. Two excellent chapters. And things are about to get even more exc, it seems. If the plotters thought Laena was just going to sit back and wait for them to nurture their plot at their leisure, they don’t really know their sister at all!
She will make her own plans to strengthen her position, and they will involve a fair bit of cruelty.


-To all: Thank you for the insightful comments...next chapter will be out this weekend and will be a fully narrative one, and relatively shorter in length than this one, the time covered will also be much less extensive then this prior chapter.
 
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Chapter 46: To Steal A Dragon (Vaekar, Lianna, Laena)
2nd Moon, 69 AC
Outside the Village of Blackbridge, Roseford


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Prince Vaekar spurred his horse through the small road, many parts of which were overgrown with weeds, the hot sun on his back and his mounted escort of 20 men close behind.

He had left Highgarden nearly two weeks ago after enjoying the hospitality of his sister and the protection of Highgarden before at last leaving to return to Dragonstone, his grim island seat.

He could of course have taken a ship, but Vaekar was an experienced sailor and the seas south of Dorne could be treacherous, and sailing past shipbreaker bay and Storms End was hardly an appealing option, any number of things could go wrong, and Vaekar had no wish of ending up like his grandfather the Conqueror, so he resolved to make the long trip by land, riding through the Reach and through the forests of the Kingswood to avoid Kings Landing, and finally to Stonedance where his friend Lord Massey would arrange him transport back to Dragonstone.

The Prince studied the road, which was more like a trail, small roads had existed for centuries near most of the major cities of Westeros, and the roads had been easy going near Highgarden, even cobbled in some places, but as he inched closer to Kings Landing they became less and less wide and their quality decreased rapidly, Kings Landing was a rather new city and before its founding there had been little trade in this direction.

A man of Vaekars intelligence understood the consequences this caused beyond just rough riding, the roads leading to King's Landing were wholly insufficient to support travel and trade to and from the capitol, improvements would have to be made.

Perhaps when I am Hand Vaekar thought to himself, he did not possess the skill to oversee such a large project on his own, even with his intelligence but when he became his sisters hand he would have no shortage of skilled engineers under his influence, beginning such a project would no doubt help to dispel some of the rumors about him.

For years Vaekars ambition had centered around the Iron Throne, to ascend the steps to that proud seat….for the Conqueror's crown to be placed upon his head….it had been no easy thing to envision the hands pin upon his chest in place of that dream, but recent events had necessitated a change of plans.

It is the best way The Prince reminded himself as he continued down the poor excuse of a road.

It had become clear that he would never gain enough support for his claim on his own, his sister Laena had seen to that with her spreading of foul rumors that had all but destroyed his reputation that he had worked so hard to gain from over a decade of fighting pirates in the Stepstones. Even if his reputation had been intact, he knew it would be hard to find support for his claim….he did not have an heir, a son…and the lords of the realm would never rebel against the throne without the security that they would not need to find another ruler in a few decades, and risk the good graces they would gain their house being made irrelevant in the eyes of a new ruler.

Vaekar had long been aware of the futility of his efforts, but he was a stubborn man and did not give up easily, but there had been a change in the Prince that had led to his decision to swear his loyalty to his older sister.

He had been hoping that the Raymont Baratheon and Aumary Tyrell would provide distraction to his sister with their ambitions, allowing him time to find a way out of his predicament, sire an heir and build the army he would use to depose her, he knew his sister would likely prevail over the upstart Lord Paramounts in time, but he had been counting on a few years at the very least to strengthen his position.

In light of his hopes, it had been most unwelcome news indeed that in the space of just months his sister had managed to remove her two greatest rivals from the board, leaving mere children in their place….he had no doubts as to who his sister would focus on next….she had already attempted to have him seized once after all.

The Prince had always been a bold man, ever since he was a young man fighting in the Stepstones, leading his men where the fighting was thickest, never shying from a fight, but the speed in which his sister had dispatched Raymont and his brother-by-law had perturbed him no small amount, if she could dispatch them with such ease, what chance did he have, disliked and distrusted by the realm. In the immediate aftermath of their killings he had isolated himself on Dragonstone, letting no ships enter the harbor for two weeks until he was convinced no immediate reprisal from his sister was imminent.

During this isolation he had come to a conclusion…..he could no longer stand alone against the full might of his sister as his younger self had, he needed allies, and powerful ones at that.

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Turning to his sisters claim had been the obvious choice, while the loyalty of the Reach lords was dubious, she had the power and chivalry of Highgarden behind her, as well as the support of many lords from the Crownlands, and a dragon of fighting size, though he knew she would never use it personally, it could prove of some use on its own.

Following the death of her husband, his sister had kept her claim rather close to the chest in fear of Laena, and it seemed that her husband's hard work might all be for naught, but Vaekar knew that his counsel and presence at her side had emboldened her and he had slowly convinced her to seek out more support, which had culminated in Lord Starks pledge.

In truth supporting her claim was not so bad, she was a good and godly woman, and they had always been close, even as children….she had even advocated for his release from his sisters dungeon at the beginning of her reign, and for that he would always be thankful.

If they were to prevail over their older sister she would be a good Queen, able to heal some of the wounds their older sister had caused, and he knew that as hand he could mold the realm to his ambition, his sister was smarter than most gave her credit for, but he knew the best way to manipulate her was to present an idea and make it seem like her idea, he would not lack for influence.

His sister was not in the best of health, however the Prince knew, she would give the realm a few good years of peace before she passed, leaving the throne to her young son Ellard. Vaekar had nothing against his nephew, but he would not sit idly by and watch his birthright slip away again…as Hand of the King it would be a simple enough thing to depose his sister's son and finally ascend his throne.

It is the best way The Prince repeated to himself, his only path to the throne was through his sister, a long path to be sure but his best and only option. The few years his sister would rule would give him time to both sire and heir and, through intelligent and just stewardship as Hand, earn him the respect of the realms nobility and dispel the foul rumors that assailed him, leading to little opposition when he took the throne from Ellard.

To be sure, a man of the Prince's intelligence was aware of the flaws with the plan of supporting his sister's claim. He had spent many sleepless nights thinking of how to defeat Vhagar, not to mention Oathwing and Narrah in the field, and all of the potential plans relied on luck, even if his dragon Andalax grew to fighting size, he did not know if he could defeat any of his sisters dragons in combat…Vhagar, while huge was rather ponderous and slow…but one false move…..

There were other flaws…..his sister Alyssane could pass before they had garnered sufficient support, leaving him right where he started, with nothing to show for his years of planning and there was always the possibility his nephew Boros would slip away from his sister Cymellas influence as well, the Prince was aware of well over a dozen events that could cripple or hinder his plans, but at the end of the day his only chance was to try….to move forward, if the Seven wished for him to take the throne, then they would cast their favor upon what was to come.

He was shaken from his thoughts as the village of Blackbridge came into view.

It was a rather small and quiet village, perhaps three to four hundred souls and situated near a small river. Despite its small size, it was clearly well to do, judging by the quality of the houses, many of which were freshly painted and roofed and the surrounding plots of farmland.

There was also a bridge leading across the river to the village, contrary to its name, it was a plain bridge of solid wood and not black in color. As he got closer he saw that there were some pillars of crumbling black stone in the water holding up the wood, clearly remnants of the old bridge before some harm had befallen it.

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The Prince made a mental note to keep his thoughts to himself, doubtless one word of question to any of the village folk about the bridge would lead to a long rambling tale spanning generations with no prospect of extracting himself in a timely manner.

At the end of the bridge was a three storied tavern, well made with a wooden sign hanging from chains by the door, depicting a stone black bridge., gently swaying in the breeze.

As he approached the bridge he paused for a moment as was his habit, bridges were good places for ambushes after all, with only two directions to escape.

The action saved his life.

As he abruptly paused, in a single instant he saw a flash of movement out of the corner of the eye, a rather out of place shine from one of the top floor windows of the tavern, this flash of movement was accompanied by a hissing sound.

A crossbow bolt came flying towards the bridge, embedding itself on one of the wooden sides of the bridge, right where the Prince would have been if he had not paused, hitting the post with a heavy thunk.

Suddenly more bolts began to fly from the open top floor windows, hissing their deadly song.

Vaekar tumbled from the saddle, all but throwing himself from his horse as the bolts flew by, he landed to the ground with a thud, but unhit, his horse and many of his men were not so lucky.

His horse crumpled to the ground with a shrill noise, convulsing wildly as several of his men were also hit and knocked from their horses.

A bolt hit the bridge just inches from Vaekars face, but he forced himself to crawl towards his horse and undo the straps tying his shield to the dying horse's flank, quickly untying it as bolts flew around his head.

A few more moments The Prince thought to himself as the hissing of bolts, groaning of his wounded and shouting of alarmed townsfolk filled his ears as he held his shield up, feeling a heavy thud against it.

As any good commander would, Vaekar had posted a few of his escort as outriders, to screen his flanks, and it was them he heard thundering into the town from another entrance to the town, dismounting by the door and clambering up the tavern stairs, with swords drawn.

As the bolts ceased their deadly flight, Vaekar rose to his feet and surveyed the carnage, three of his men and as many horses were lying dead with a further two wounded, he looked up to the upper tavern windows where a few of his men could be seen, one of them giving a shake of his head….they had fled.

Suddenly he heard the sounds of horseshoes galloping over cobble streets, and saw a hooded rider urging his horse down the streets with a shout, the Prince was about to order his men to give chase when he heard another twang of a crossbow being fired.

The man tumbled from the saddle in an exaggerated fall, hitting the ground with a groan as he fell to the ground, one of his men from above nodded to the Prince, having picked up a crossbow from one of the escaped assassins.

Vaekar, Blackfyre in hand and his men forming a semi-circle around him advanced towards the groaning man.

He would not be long for the world, the bolt had pierced a lung, and he was coughing blood and spittle to the ground, the townsfolk of Blackbridge watching wearily from their homes and windows.

The Prince put a boot on the man's chest and aimed Blackfyre at the man's throat.

‘’Tell me who sent you and I will give you the gift of mercy.’’ The Prince commanded, in truth he already knew who had sent the assassin but he wanted the townsfolk and his own men to hear, the more witnesses the better.

The man coughed blood and groaned.

‘’Who.’’ The Prince commanded.

‘’The Princess Vaell…Vaella.’’ The man groaned.

‘’On whose orders…’’ He persisted, pushing his boot on the man's wound.

‘’AH….The Queen….The Queen o..ordered you to be killed.’’ He gasped.

Wordlessly Vaekar slashed the man's throat open with Blackfyre, his dark red crimson blood pouring onto the well to do streets of Blackbridge.

After entrusting the bodies of his fallen men to the local Silent Sisters, the Prince and his retinue made a hasty dash to the safety of the Kingswood, emerging some weeks later at Stonedance where the Prince sailed to Dragonstone, taking shelter in his grim island seat.

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3rd Moon, 69 AC
Red Mountains near Nightsong Castle, the Dornish Marches


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Lianna sat upon her horse, eyes trained to the sky as the falcon dove downwards towards its prey, a rather unsuspecting hare, sitting among the shrubland.

She pursed her lips in anticipation as the falcon made its flight downwards, swift as the wind….all seemed to be going well until inexplicably, seconds before the moment of impact, the hare casually retreated into a rocky burrow, causing the falcon to pull up at the last moment.

‘’Damn it!’’ Larissa exclaimed loudly, causing Lianna to lightly smile, she knew she would bluster and pout about the failure, but she knew her younger sister well enough to know she likely felt some relief as well….she never had a problem with hunting birds but even since she had been a child she had found rabbits to be adorable and never enjoyed seeing her falcon bringing back their mangled and bloody corpses…her sister was more of a social hunter, as was Jaehara…and herself for that matter.


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‘’These marcher hares…..they have eyes in the back of their head they do.’’ Nakados Tendryis, the royal family's master-of-the-hunt and her sister Jaeharas husband chuckled lightly before continuing ‘’Shall we attempt again?’’

Jaehara shook her head silently, Lianna had hoped the outing would lift her sisters spirits but she had remained sullen and quiet for much of the trip, though Lianna was glad to see her sisters complexion had improved somewhat from time spent outdoors.

‘’I believe we have had enough hunting for one day……I am sure there will be ample opportunity for more hunts….it is a long way to Sunspear, and I believe my sister would like to rest.’’ Lianna said, handing her falcon to the handler and undoing her hunting gloves.

‘’As my Princess commands.’’ He said, bowing his head before instructing his huntsman to ride ahead back to camp and deliver their game to the cooks.

Their company numbered over half a hundred, fifty mounted dragons cloaks from the Red Keep and a further 10 mounted gold cloaks, along with Ser Colin Fossoway of the Kingsguard. In addition to this number were 8 huntsmen, led by Nakados Tendryis, well over a dozen servants, handmaidens and cart masters and quartermasters carrying food stores, provisions and the three Princesses belongings, all bound for Sunspear, where the Princess Larrissa would wed her betrothed, Prince Blaise Martell. It might have included the Princess Vaella as well but her younger sister had left on a ‘’sensitive mission’’ as her mother put it shortly before Lianna and her sisters departed for Sunspear.

As one might expect progress was slow, especially traveling through the forest tracks of the Kingswood and the rainy woods of the Stormlands….they could have simply have taken a ship, but Lianna wanted all the time she could with her younger sister Larissa, whom she had grown very close after essentially raising her.

The meandering journey also served another purpose. Lianna had learned of the meeting at Highgarden between her aunts Alyssane and Cymella, her uncle Vaekar and Lord Stark, whom she had thought she could trust. Lianna had been confused as to what had transpired between her mother and Cymella, who had been close ever since she was a child, and she suggested inviting her aunt back to the Red Keep in an attempt to mediate between them, but her mother was tight lipped as to what had happened and refused any attempts to make peace with her sister saying some bridges could never be rebuilt and her sister had made her choice.

Her mother had, however, listened to one suggestion Lianna had made. The royal treasury was not receiving tax capable of spending extravagantly, though her mother had been frugal and prudent in that regard. Lianna knew things were entering dire straits with her aunt's claim however, and if war could not be prevented they were going to need allies.

While the treasury was not so great that they could afford to lavish gifts upon the great houses, Lianna felt confident she could win some smaller houses to their cause should it come to the worse. And so the trip to deliver her sister to Sunspear was punctuated with many small detours and visits to the small castles they came across, where Lianna would bestow small gifts of gold and silver to the lords, the largest such trip had come the previous week when Lianna had made the trip to Horn Hill, seat of House Tarly and had a productive visit to the point she believed if it came to war then the Tarlys would remain loyal, or at the very remain neutral to their Tyrell overlords and her aunts overtures for support.

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It didn't take them long to reach their camp, which was already heavy with the smell of cooking meat, a few hares and birds that had been contributed by the Princesses and more substantially a stag taken by one of Nakados’s huntsmen was being prepared.

Lianna took in the smells of the camp and bid her sisters farewell until supper, Larissa would no doubt wish to pray with her Septa at the local sept in the nearby village of Nightingale while Jaehara would no doubt wish to rest in her tent.

Not for the first time Lianna wondered if she had made a mistake in having her sister come along and separating her from her son Aenys, she had thought it would do her well to get away from the court for a while, but her sisters handmaidens had reported she went to bed crying most nights and Lianna wondered if it had been a mistake to bring her along, her sister had always been a rather fragile and volatile woman…even since their childhood together in Kings Landing with their grandparents.

Lianna missed her son Jareion most fiercely as well, and was not pleased about having to leave him with a wet nurse but she had to admit the trip had refreshed and revitalized her from the stressors of court, motherhood and her selfish husband.

As she made her way to her tent, their traveling Maester was waiting for her outside its entrance.

‘’From Kings Landing Princess.’’ The man bowed, leaving her to open it.

She didn't open it immediately, leaving it on the bed while she changed out of her riding boots and clothes and washing the dust from herself and her hair before she returned to her bed and sat down to read it.

Her mood darkened almost immediately as she read it, standing up and pacing around the tent. It was from her sister Vaella, written in her small and neat handwriting….her sister never entrusted her words to a Maester and always wrote them herself.

Its contents were, in short, not good. Her sister reported that rumors were spreading across the realm that their mother had ordered the attempted assasination of their uncle Vaekar in the Reach, with rumors saying one of the killers had named their mother before he was killed….in sight and hearing of well over a hundred souls. Her sister made no mention of whether or not this was true….and she didn't need too, Lianna knew immediately. Her sister ended rather callously with the assurance that their uncle was not well liked among the realm and ‘’none will care’’.

She crumpled the scroll in her hands and collapsed to her bed, suddenly exhausted as she sat down.

It came without warning…great sobs racked her body and the tears flowed down her cheeks as she shook lightly, holding herself like a little girl.

She worked so hard….for years she had worked so hard, so many late nights and long journeys to repair her mothers reputation, to end the various wars her mother ignored….she had argued ceaselessly with her mother dozens of times to try and bring some semblance of justice and honesty to her role as Master of Laws.

And it was all for nothing.

Everything she had done…she had worked for, her mother would always destroy it, and when she did think she was doing something good…that she had won her mother over…she found herself an unwitting and unwilling pawn.

She never truly listens She thought to herself as she softly sobbed, her mother had never taken her counsel seriously, or cared that her actions could undo all of her hard work.

Suddenly she heard a noise outside her tent.

‘’Princess.’’ The voice of Nakados Tendryis called out hesitantly.

‘’Come in.’’ She said, quickly wiping her eyes, trying to steady her voice.

He walked in, hesitating when he saw her…her eyes clearly red.

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‘’It is a bad time….my pardon...’’ He began but Lianna shook her head.

‘’Stay.’’ She said, almost desperately.

‘’It is not my business…but I heard….well I heard…..I would be a poor brother-by-law if I did not check.’’ He said.

She told him everything, completely unprompted.

She told him of the war between the Ironborn and the Lannisters, the peace council between Tyrell and Baratheon and what had transpired and who was to blame, she told him of the trial, of the attempted killing of Vaekar……she talked for what seemed like hours, of her childhood, growing up in King's Landing with her grandfather and grandmother, away from her mother…how she felt she scarcely knew her…she talked about her sister Syaella and a great many other things.

The whole time Nakados said nothing, standing patiently.

He listened.

Noone had ever listened to her like that,certainly not her mother and not her husband Ronnel who it seemed barely cared what she was feeling or acknowledged her as a person at all, making everything about him, always requesting more gold, more men, more honors for his men, coming to her bed chamber as if he had not ignored her for much of the day, always complaining and never asking about her. He was not a bad man…but there was little love between them.

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When she had finished Lianna wiped her eyes once more, feeling a fool ‘’I am sorry…..I…you did not wish to hear my ramblings.’’

‘’May I sit?’’ He asked simply.

She nodded and he sat beside her on the bed, straightening his cloak, smelling of crushed mint which she knew he chewed regularly.

‘’When I was a young man I served in the City Guard of Mylenos for a time, a Pentoshi settlement.’’ He began before continuing.

‘’As most settlements across the Narrow Sea and in the Free City it was run by slavers, or at least slave owners…..as a man of Braavosi stock I found the practice abhorrent…but what could I do….I was but a simple guardsman with little power……no, I could do nothing but my duty, which was to follow orders from these men….these slavers.’’

Lianna listened intently, she knew little of the Free Cities except that slavery was a well established practice.

‘’I followed their orders….but I also followed my beliefs…..slaves accused of crimes would often be left for days at a time tied hand and foot to a post in the town square, in the sweltering heat….for days at a time as I said or even until death in some cases.’’

‘’I would watch as my comrades tied them up….I could do little to stop them…but whenever I had a chance I would offer my canteen to these men when I was sure none were looking….a small kindness in an ocean of evil.’’ He continued.

‘’In time I became an officer in the City Watch…and I used my influence to if not end, reduce the instances of leaving these men to die in the heat for minor offenses….I did what little I could….small kindnesses in an ocean of evil.’’

‘’What I mean to say Princess is that we cannot always choose who we serve…or stop the cruel practices of the powers we bend our knee too…but what we can do is to is make sure that some small amount of justice is done when we have the opportunity to do so…until we have the opportunity to do more….and your time is coming Princess.’’ He finished.

Lianna sat there in silence for a moment, wiping the last of the tears from her eyes.

‘’You speak wisely…..you must have many more stories…from across the Narrow Sea.’’ Lianna said.

‘’Some few Princess…’’ The man said humbly, standing, bowing his head and beginning to withdraw.

Lianna stood up without thinking ‘’’Wait.’’

He turned and faced her.

‘’I would very much like to hear more of them.’’ She said, looking into his eyes, wondering not for the first time how her sister could spurn him.

Surprising herself once again she took him by the arms, embracing him.

His lips tasted of mint.

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Some weeks later they would finally arrive at Sunspear, where Lianna would bid a tearful goodbye to her younger sister following the marriage feast at Sunspear. Unbeknownst to her however, she was not the only one involved in secrecy, and back in King's Landing, an important plan was transpiring.


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5th Moon, 69 AC
Queens Ballroom, Red Keep, Kings Landing


Laena looked at her guest with thinly veiled disgust as the woman held the wine cup with two hands, drinking from it as if she were an infant or an Ironborn sailor, with about as much success as either as much of it spilled on the dress she had been given.

The gods….if they are real….are well and truly mad Laena thought to herself, giving her daughter Vaella a look, ascertaining she felt the same.

The guest in question was named Rhaelle Turgon, an Essosi noblewoman from the hinterlands of Volantis….the rider of the dragon Chalfyre….and an utter imbecile.

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It's a wonder no one has slit her throat yet The Queen thought as she watched her struggling to use a fork and knife to cut the honeyed venison, almost drooling on the table.

The whole situation had began when Vaellas network of spies across the narrow sea had reported back the locations of the so called ‘’eastern dragons’’ at the Queens behest, who hoped to reclaim at least one of them to increase her power in the face of her siblings plotting.

There were three such dragons. By far the most significant revelation was that Meraxes, former dragon of Rhaenys, her grandfather Aegon the Conqueror's sister and the dragon her brother had attempted to claim almost 2 decades earlier had emerged from the Smoking Sea after years of isolation and had been claimed by the Lady Rebagyr, sovereign of Mantarys. Similarly, her spies reported that the white and gold dragon Aelesar, that had belonged to her uncle Matarys, flying away after his death had also been found in Mantarys, now almost 25 feet in length and bonded with a woman dragonrider who had been given a place in Lady Rebagyr’s court.

While Laena found the prospect of the realm of Mantarys having two dragons under its influence somewhat disconcerting, and would have preferred to regain one of these two extremely powerful dragons, she had to admit the prospect was unlikely, the Lady of Mantarys would obviously not abandon her court nor would she allow the other dragonrider to leave, the plan would not work on them…Mantarys was too far, too shrouded in secrecy to accurately plan.

That left one single dragon left…..the dragon Chalfyre, much smaller than the other two, with her spies reporting it was just over a dozen feet, if that.

It was the only dragon to not have been hatched by a Targaryen, and unlike Meraxes and Aelesar had never had a Targaryen rider.

Her daughter's spies reported the story of the dragon's birth and taming with as much accuracy as they could, given that there were many countless variations of the tale.

The tale had been reported as such. Before the dragon Meraxes had flown further east to Mantarys…it had resided in Volantis for a time, bonded with a dragonrider under the employ of the most powerful of the three Triarchs of Volantis.

During its time there, a single pale green egg was hatched, and it was given to the Priests and Priestesses of R'hllor in the Temple of the Lord of Light in Volantis’s great plaza in an attempt to hatch.

All attempts to hatch the egg had failed, and eventually relations soured between the Red Priests and Triarch Donaro with the red priests preaching dangerous sermons to the slaves and increasing the size of their private slave army…the Fiery Hand. Meraxes and its rider were sent by the Triarch to burn down the great temple, which the massive dragon did with ease, burning nearly two thousand priests, slaves and slave warriors alive that day in a fiery inferno.

The dragon egg….which had been placed on a pillar of dragonglass in the heart of the temple was found unharmed, still on its intact pillar amongst the smoldering ruins and corpses around it, warm to the touch, and as a crowd approached the egg cracked and split open, and a small dragon was hatched.

The hatchling was quickly seized by the Triarch, and kept in a small pit, where for years he tried to find someone to bond with the creature, as Meraxes had flown off from Volantis after its riders death, likely at the cause of the Volantene triarch and the city wanted another, more trustworthy dragonrider.

The test was simple….any freeborn man or woman that could get the hatchling to eat out of their hand and perch upon their shoulder would be given ownership of the dragon, a fine manse near the palace, within the Black Walls of the city….given honors, titles, and a place in the Triarchs court…in exchange for their loyalty and the use of their dragon.

Hundreds of ambitious men and women tried to do the seemingly simple task….but the dragon was extremely erratic and wary….and in those first years there were no shortage of burned and scorched fingers as strong warriors, wealthy merchants, and wise priests and priestesses failed to bond with the dragon…and as it grew in size so to did the risk, and it was not uncommon for challengers to lose whole hands and in some cases even arms to burns and bites.

These challenges became a sort of entertainment, with tickets being sold for spectators to watch the maimings and see the dragon…the Triarchs had long since abandoned any hope of the dragon being claimed after hundreds of failures but the spectacle put coin in many a pocket.

One day a Summer Islander warrior visited the city, nearly 8 feet tall if the tale could be believed, and wearing a cloak of golden feathers, and armed with purchased valyrian glyph necklaces, rings and bracelets..a huge crowd attended, sure that this was the day the dragon would be claimed…..and they were right.

But it was not by the impressive foreigner….following an attempt to loudly recite a valyrian chant and to hold his hand out, offering meat charred with the legendary goldenwood of the Summer Isles…..he was sent squealing from the pit, holding his burnt and smoldering ruin of a hand.

If the tale could be believed, a simple minded Volantene girl…..the daughter of a former Triarch…. who had leaned over the railing to see what all the fuss was about, fell over the railing and into the pit.

The crowd both shouted and held their breath….sure they were about to see the idiot girl roasted alive and torn apart.

The dragon approached, its small but sharp fangs bared and flame welling at the back of its throat.

The simple minded girl said nothing….for she could barely speak Valyrian…much less understand the situation….instead holding out her hand, holding a stick of fried goat which was sold at the entrance.

The dragon lunged forward and a roar went through the crowd…..leaning forward to watch the entertaining maiming that was surely to come.

And quickly grew silent.

For it was the girl, not the dragon that struck first. Frightened, she lashed out towards the dragon with a shout, hitting it atop the head with several strikes with the stick of goat as an old woman might strike a child with a spoon.

The dragon, completely perplexed recoiled back in shock, shaking its head before at last readying itself for another lunge, once again an excited murmur ran through the crowd, and once again went quiet in shock.

For the dragon, instead of tearing her to pieces, scarfed down the goat, roared a torrent of fire into the air and coiled around the idiot girl, who began to giggle in delight and pet it. Following this, the somewhat bewildered Triarchy still made good on their promise, arranging the woman a marriage and giving her her own palace.

Whether or not the tale was true Laena could not say….one thing was certain however….the woman was an idiot….and she had a dragon.

When this story had reached her, Laena had sent her own daughter and spymaster Vaella to personally travel to Volantis on the back of her dragon Narrah with the fastest galley in Kings Landings small fleet to convince the dragonrider to return to King's Landing with her, subtly if possible as the Triarchy of Volantis would never consent to losing their dragon if they were aware of it.

The task proved easier than they could have hoped for. Vaella learned the triarchs permitted the girl to leave the city once a week and fly the dragon near the sandy islands that dotted the mouth of the river Rhoyne as they believed exercise and feeding from the holy river would cause the dragon to grow faster.

Aware of this knowledge, Vaella bided her time, waiting offshore before flying her dragon to the location. The young woman was extremely shocked when she came across Vaella and her much larger red dragon, as in her mind, her dragon must have been the only one in the world, the dragon Chalfyre was similarly interested in seeing another of its species. The girl's escort did nothing to intervene…having been paid off by the Princess Vaella.

From here it was a relatively easy task to coax the girl…or rather the dragon into following Narrah back to the ship and confine the woman and her small dragon below the deck…..all but abducting her and taking them back to King's Landing.

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When they at last returned to the city, the girl was coaxed into mounting Chalfyre and flying to the dragonpit where the small dragon was quickly confined. Laena had not yet made the trip to the Dragonpit to observe the creature…but her dragon keepers said the small pale green dragon with gray horns was incredibly wild and volatile…already severely burning and wounding three dragon keepers with its wild thrashing and random torrents of fire…and despite its size becoming one of the most difficult dragons to control. The Queen had not been surprised, the beast obviously had to be mad and abnormal to bond with such a woman. Following her dragons confinement, Rhaelle was subtly brought to the Red Keep and had been there for two days.

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Laena was grateful for the fact that Lianna was not present….it would have been hard to explain why a foreign dragonrider was in the Red Keep….she would have enough to speak to her daughter about after those incompetent fools botched Vaekars killing in Blackbridge…., but even so the Queen had made sure the woman stayed out of sight, keeping her in a small chamber and even now eating in the much smaller Queens Ballroom, a hall with beaten silver mirrors. She very much doubted Volantis would ever learn the woman was here, or have the resources to identify her dragon.

She was shaking from her thinking by a soft whimpering of the simple minded woman, who was holding herself while slowly rocking in her chair.

A nervous little bird Laena thought to herself, the woman was for all intents and purpose a mute….only knowing a few words of the Valyrian tongue…but she had not failed to make her discomfort felt…crying in the night, mumbling the Valyrian word for home and even banging her head against her bed post.

It will all be over soon She thought to herself.

Suddenly the woman spoke….a single word.

‘’C…Chalfyre.’’ She mumbled in a drawling and slow Valyrian accent, repeating herself.

‘’Would you like to see him….to see your dragon?’’ Laena responded in Valyrian.

Rhaelle nodded excitedly, slowly removing her crossed arms from her chest.

‘’Good….follow these men and they will take you to Chalfyre.’’ Laena responded..once again in Valyrian…., gesturing to two men….overseers of the Black Cells beneath the Red Keep.

The woman smiled and got up…approaching the two men, leaving her and Vaella alone at the table.

‘’She's pregnant.’’ Her daughter said rather nonchalantly…more to inform her mother than due to moral concerns.

Laena looked at the woman, still smiling and standing next to the guards….there was indeed a small bump…she had known of course but she and her daughter had never spoken of it.

‘’So she is.’’ Laena said, pausing for a moment to look her daughter in the eyes.

‘’A dragon will never take another rider so long as its master lives…..dispose of her.’’ Laena said…no trace of emotion in her voice.

Vaella nodded to the two men who led the woman out of the Queens Ballroom.

The Queen of Skulls returned to her seat, finishing the last of her porridge as the simple minded woman was led down a dark flight of stairs, a smile on her face as she marched downwards to her death.

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Man I really was fearing the worse for Vaekar there, but it seems the Old Gods and New aren't about to let him head to the afterlife just yet. And wow though, kidnapping a woman, a pregnant one like that simply because she had a dragon, Laena truly is living up to her reputation as a Queen of Daggers and Skulls.
 
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Vaekar lives due to luck. It must be frightening for him and his allies to know for sure that Laena no longer cares about the few rules that Westerosi nobles hold sacred and that the Queen will not spare them due to familial ties anymore. They had assumed that it was the case, but it is another thing to be sure about it. Now that Vaekar is an even harder target to kill, I wonder who will be next on Laena's list to break up this group of plotters.

I am sure that Vaekar would be furious if he could peak into alternate ASOIAF universes where unworthy men like Aegon II get huge amounts of support for their claim to the Iron Throne simply because they are male while he is stuck with little support in his quest against Laena and when Westeros' rules would normally send a crown onto Vaekar's lap. Vaekar's path to winning the Iron Throne at this point is very narrow at best and he knows it.

Crown Princess Lianna commits a serious sin and self-inflicted blow to her reputation by having an extramarital affair. This is in line with a reoccurring event in GRRM's histories. The more popular and well-regarded heir of a less popular or very unpopular monarch has an affair or affairs that seriously damages their standing before the people of the realm and undermines one of the main pillars of their unpopular parent's rule. The nobles and commoners of Westeros were willing to bear the rule of the unpopular monarch since they had high hopes for the heir's ascension but the heir's misbehavior now undermines the whole royal family's hold on power. Prince Rhaegar is the obvious example in the main canon, but he is not the only one. Lianna being a woman makes this behavior more even damaging considering the double standards on affairs women face.

If GRRM were writing this story, this incident would basically ensure that Laena would be overthrown, Lianna and her offspring would never sit on the Iron Throne and will meet brutal deaths instead, most of the rest of the royal family gets killed later and one of Laena's younger daughters might unexpectedly end up on the Iron Throne for a lack of alternative candidates if they are lucky and are not completely overthrown at best. But he isn't writing this story and Laena is more intelligent than most of the evil monarchs in the canon so thing could be different here.

Lianna would be foolish to think that she can hide her affair with Nakados Tendryis from her mother. Will a tragic accident or a simple arrest and execution be in Nakados Tendryis's future? Laena may want to limit the harm to her daughters' reputations based on her previous actions or will she force Lianna to watch her lover's execution to try to break her daughter to her will and vision like what Jaehaerys I unsuccessfully tried to do to Saera in the main canon or what Frederick William I of Prussia successfully did to his son Frederick (the future Frederick the Great) in real life? Or perhaps Nakados Tendryis's status as the Queen's son-in-law will be enough to shield him from the Queen's wrath?


The tragedy of Rhaelle Turgon. A brutal ASOIAF style take on the Boy and His X or A Girl and Her X trope. It is usually the creature that dies in these stories but not here. Rhaelle, being mentally disabled, stood even less of a chance of fighting off those who would exploit her creature than the average child or teenager in these stories. Queen Laena and Princess Vaella would certainly earn lots of fan hatred if this incident were depicted in one of the books or TV shows.

The last of Queen Nyel's prophetic dreams have been fulfilled in this update it seems.
 
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I am not sure how much Laena/Vaella cares about fan hatred. Is it really that much to go from 95% (I am being conservative for Laena) to 99% hated? Even the greatest villains have admirers, thus nobody gets to be 100% hated.
 
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Another great chapter, full of imaginative storytelling derived from the game events. Assassination attempt of a brother, a lover taken to cheat on a sister, kidnap and manslaughter of a simple, pregnant dragon rider for selfish purposes, plotting and counter plotting between siblings. The Game of Treachery goes on!
‘’A dragon will never take another rider so long as its master lives…..dispose of her.’’ Laena said…no trace of emotion in her voice.
Sums it up about Laena: she doesn’t even pretend about the niceties any more and in Vaella she has a kindred spirit.
 
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I am sure that Vaekar would be furious if he could peak into alternate ASOIAF universes where unworthy men like Aegon II get huge amounts of support for their claim to the Iron Throne simply because they are male while he is stuck with little support in his quest against Laena and when Westeros' rules would normally send a crown onto Vaekar's lap.
Yeah, I think the low amount of suppourt he has garnered for his claim is unrealistic in the context of the ASOIAF world, but that feared modifier that Laena has is a hard advantage to beat (vassals 70% less likely to join hostile factions), I have been trying to just explain it away due to Laenas slandering of his reputation and the fact that he doesnt have an heir, which to be fair is a legitimate knock against installing him as King.

Crown Princess Lianna commits a serious sin and self-inflicted blow to her reputation by having an extramarital affair.
It is not known at the moment, but the next chapter will go more into her affair and its consequences.

Lianna would be foolish to think that she can hide her affair with Nakados Tendryis from her mother.
Not much gets past the Queen of Skulls, Lianna has the paranoid trait so she will take efforts to try and keep it a secret, but in the end deception is not her strong suit and she does have the honest trait.

or will she force Lianna to watch her lover's execution to try to break her daughter to her will and vision
Laenas response will be in fitting with her cruel nature, but it may not be what you expect. ;) As for trying to break her daughter to her vision that is a very insightful comment, Lianna is under considerable stress trying to stay true to her morals and also serve her murderous mother....sooner or later something has to give.

The last of Queen Nyel's prophetic dreams have been fulfilled in this update it seems.
Correct.

I am not sure how much Laena/Vaella cares about fan hatred. Is it really that much to go from 95% (I am being conservative for Laena) to 99% hated? Even the greatest villains have admirers, thus nobody gets to be 100% hated.
This event was in my opinion definatly her most cruel and coldhearted evil action, with all of her flaws being said however I do think she is a relatively capable ruler in her own way, I do appreciate this mods mechanics for making it feasible to rule through fear and not get instantly deposed.....Laena will give the realm even more reason to fear her in the future as well.

The Game of Treachery goes on!
And there are more secrets and twists to come, recently had another play session and without getting too much into it, just when I thought I knew the direction the story was heading in, CK2 did what CK2 always does.

Sums it up about Laena: she doesn’t even pretend about the niceties any more and in Vaella she has a kindred spirit.
Very true about Vaella, she will have an interesting story, including a very cool event in the distant future I am looking forward to writing. There is one other of Laenas daughters that will be involved in her plotting as well, as will be seen albeit briefly in the next chapter.
 
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Hopefully it wasnt too confusing, the faceless man Laena hired took the role of one of Lord Tyrells servants and poisoned the wine Ronnel drank as he poured it, as for Lord Tyrells murder Laena simply joined an already exisiting plot against him, not the last time she will employ that strategy.
Must have missed the Faceless Men bit due to image loading errors on my side ...
 
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World Map Update: Free City of Volantis
Free City of Volantis

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Volantis is the oldest of the free cities and the first colony of the Valyrian Freehold, for which it is often known as Old Volantis or the ‘’First Daughter’’.

Located on the coast of the Summer Sea and the mouth of the River Rhoyne, Volantis is a port city, and has one of the deepest harbors in the world, rivaling even Braavos. While ideally suited for trade, the cities proximity to water comes at a cost, as the city is extremely hot and humid, with even the nights being sweltering enough to drown a man in his own sweat, in addition to this the city has a stench to it, smelling of fish, elephant dung from the elephants that transport nobility throughout the streets, and sweat.

While one of the largest and most wealthy of the Free Cities, Volantis is a city of parallels, with this being best seen in the layout of the city, which is built on both sides of the mouth of the River Rhoyne. The nobility of the city, many of whom claim ancestry to old Valyria reside on the eastern bank of the city, which is protected by the Black Wall, two hundred feet in height and made of fused dragonstone, wide enough for six chariots to ride side by side at the top, which occurs every year to celebrate the founding of the city. Inside the walls are an innumerable amount of palaces, gardens, courtyards and temples, with the oldest districts of the city also being found on the eastern banks.

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The other half of the city is found on the western bank and is much more populous, with most of the city's slave population residing here, as most of the Free Cities, Volantis is a slave city and the slaves in the city outnumber freedmen five to one. Slaves are branded on the face according to their order, with a tear branding representing a prostitute, and a wheel being found on a slave driver of the elephant drawn Hathays which transport people across the city.

The western bank is filled with markets, temples, taverns, brothels and slums, with the streets being overrun with the dwarf white elephants that are bred in Volantis to transport persons of importance from place to place. The Temple of the Lord of Light is also found on the eastern side of the city, and while burned to the ground by the dragon Meraxes years prior to 69 AC, at the time of our story it has since been rebuilt and the Red Priests of Rhllor have refounded the Fiery Hand, an order of slave soldiers bound to the temple.

The two banks of the city are connected by the Long Bridge, the largest bridge in the known world. A wide stone cobbled bridge, buildings, taverns, cvasse parlors, market stalls and brothels have attached to each side of the road like barnacles to a ship, and it can take hours to get across on a busy day.

The government of Volantis is similarly divided, with rulership of the city falling to the governance of three Triarchs, elected every year, with all freeborn landholders receiving a vote, winners of the elections are considered so important that their feet may not touch the city ground for the entirety of their year of service, traversing the city on the backs of elephants or in carts, litters, and palanquins.

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Triarchs are elected from two political parties, the Elephants and the Tigers. Politicans from the Elephants are primarily traders and moneylenders, interested in commerce and mercantilism, while aristocrats from the Tigers are often members of old proud Valyrian families, and advocate for aggressive wars, conquest, and slave raids for the glory of Old Volantis.

While being the most powerful of the Free Cities, at the time of our story Old Volantis has entered a period of decline. A series of weak Triarchs and internal civil wars has led to many cities built along the banks of the River Rhoyne breaking away from Volantis and becoming independent city states, most notably Selhorys, Volon Therys and Valysar

The city has also lost its dragons at the time of our story, while Meraxes, largest dragon in the world was once under the influence of Volantis, the assasination of its rider by a jealous Triarch led to the dragon fleeing the city for the east, and the small dragon Chalfyre, hatched from an egg in the smoldering ruins of the Temple of the Lord of Light has gone missing along with its rider….
 
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In this timeline Maegor was never born and everything was fine... until it wasn't. If ever there was a Targaryen queen worthy of being called a Maegor with tits, it's definitely Laena.
 
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Laena stealing a dragon from Volantis is not the first time the Targaryens sabotaged the ambitions of Volantis. Aegon the Conqueror burned the fleets of Volantis to foil their ambitions of restoring the Valyrian Freehold before his conquests in Westeros in the backstory. The Targaryens love their status and power as normal fish in a tiny pond as the only dragonriding family after the Doom and seem to have no desire to see Valyria itself restored despite their belief in Valyrian superiority over others. It contrasts sharply with the numerous attempts by various self-proclaimed heirs to Rome to restore the Roman Empire in real life. This is probably because if the Valyrian Freehold was ever restored, the Targaryens would no longer be so special.

In this timeline Maegor was never born and everything was fine... until it wasn't. If ever there was a Targaryen queen worthy of being called a Maegor with tits, it's definitely Laena.
I would say that might be a little too harsh on Laena based on that we have seen so far. Maegor was a lot more overt and directly destructive in his rule than Laena. Perhaps Laena is more like a female King Louis XI the Universal Spider of France with being a monarch notorious for their unceasing schemes and intrigues to weaken and destroy the power of their own vassals for the benefit of the Crown.

However, Laena lacks the more positive aspects of Louis XI. Louis XI also was known for his reforms to French administration to better develop the prosperity of his kingdom, the network of postal relays that he made to collect information on his enemies would also serve as the precursor to the modern French postal service, and his efforts would ultimately strengthen the authority of the French Crown. Laena has no interest in increasing the prosperity of the realm and has deliberately worked to sabotage the trade networks in Oldtown in her trade war with the Summer Isles because she felt the prosperity from that trade served the Hightowers more than the Iron Throne. It seems unlikely that Laena's spy network will provide any long-term benefits to the Realm after her eventual death and her schemes to let vassals break the King's/Queen's Peace to weaken each other has undermined the Iron Throne's authority as we have seen in the Stark-Tully war.

As of this point in the story, Laena is still hoping her daughter Daeoril can win her betrothed Boros to her side....one thing to note is that if Boros II was to die before siring an heir, House Baratheon would end with his uncle Ronnel as his children are Targaryens and there are no other Baratheons except them. If that happens I would likely have one of Lianna and Ronnels potential spare heirs (if they had any) take the Baratheon name to ensure the survival of that house (Im constantly shuffling around the map and using the house customizer trait/event to keep important houses alive since they have a death wish with female rulers marrying non-matrilineally)
In base Crusader Kings, you are encouraged to spread your dynasty's influence through ruling more lands with your main player character or putting family members onto other seats and turnover of noble houses in certain seats is common. This gameplay for base Crusader Kings clashes with the ASOIAF lore where the same noble families rule over the same seats for millennia, people just demand that one family always hold that seat ("there must always be a Stark in Winterfell"), and matrilineal marriages and name changes are performed to maintain that family's rule if the male line dies out (until Tywin Lannister arises, the War of Five Kings happens and ancient noble houses start dying like flies).

Additionally, ASOIAF noble families are also expected to always hand off newly acquired territories that are not part of the family's traditional domain to a younger brother or son who will often take on the name or coat of arms of the family that did traditionally rule that territory instead of incorporating the new territory into the family domain or crownlands in the case of royalty. From an in-universe prospective, this custom is a sacred tradition which is viewed as tyranny to break and preserves the balance of power between the houses. From a meta prospective, this custom helps ensure the Game of Thrones will go on forever since it prevents the royal family or any other family in Westeros from ever centralizing power or authority the same way the Capetians slowly centralized royal power by incorporating inherited lands or lands revoked from crushed rebellious vassals to grow the French crownlands from just the lands around Paris until the crownlands covered all of France.

Do you plan on continuing to try to ensure that the various noble houses will hold their traditional seats and refrain from taking kingdoms from traditional great houses either through marriages or by revoking titles after rebellions or will things change? You are planning to establish Targaryen cadet houses as the family grows. Would you ever consider granting a lord paramountcy to a Targaryen younger son to establish a cadet house in the style of King Edward III of England granting his younger sons duchy/dukedoms which eventually led to the War of the Roses or would you only grant small lordships to future Targaryen cadet houses? If an Eleanor of Aquitaine situation arises where a young unmarried girl inherits a lord paramountcy, would you consider marrying her to the heir to the Iron Throne in a patrilineal marriage?
 
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In this timeline Maegor was never born and everything was fine... until it wasn't. If ever there was a Targaryen queen worthy of being called a Maegor with tits, it's definitely Laena.
To think the canon "Maegor with tits" pissed everyone off merely by raising taxes, Laena is much more suitable for the title by comparison.
 
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In this timeline Maegor was never born and everything was fine... until it wasn't. If ever there was a Targaryen queen worthy of being called a Maegor with tits, it's definitely Laena.

To think the canon "Maegor with tits" pissed everyone off merely by raising taxes, Laena is much more suitable for the title by comparison.
Good points, and her claim to the title Queen of Skulls wont end with just the killing of Rhaelle the pregnant dragon rider, there will be more victims. Speaking of Maegor, in the somewhat distant future there will be the first problems with the faith potentially leading to an uprising, I cant promise something as long lasting or large scale as the poor fellows, but I found the event worked very well with other recent events and look forward to writing it.

Laena has no interest in increasing the prosperity of the realm and has deliberately worked to sabotage the trade networks in Oldtown in her trade war with the Summer Isles because she felt the prosperity from that trade served the Hightowers more than the Iron Throne.
Correct

Do you plan on continuing to try to ensure that the various noble houses will hold their traditional seats and refrain from taking kingdoms from traditional great houses either through marriages or by revoking titles after rebellions or will things change?
It all depends on the ruler, the only huge rebellion that would have warranted such an action so far was the Lions Rebellion with the Lannisters and Arryns, I did briefly consider making the Farmans the new Lord Paramounts of the West, but Vaemond had the charitable trait and I didnt think he would rob the younger Lannisters of their ancestral title/seat for Loren Lannisters crime after he had been sent to the nights watch. He became friends with Ronnel Arryn as well so taking the Vale was not going to happen either.

Revocation would be most likely if a ruler was greedy, wroth or arbitrary (not caring that establishing new LPS after thousands of years could upset the local ecosystem/power balance) or if the ruler truly hated that house (complicit in the murder of a family member etc).

I dont think I will be playing the marriage games to end great houses and replace them with Targaryen family members, I utilize marriages more for alliances, non agression pacts and rewarding vassals/friends of the ruler as opposed to expansion of the Targaryen dynasty.

turnover of noble houses in certain seats is common
Most of the instances I see the extinction of great houses is due to dumb decisions like female rulers not marrying matrillinily which leads to random houses being in different kingdoms where they shouldnt. I do fix this quite frequently if I can prove a connection between the current ruler and an ancestor of that previous house by having them take the name of the house that has ruled that seat for a long time, but in some cases I discover it too late. In terms of some houses that have gone extinct or lost their land just off the top of my head, House Harlaw and Boltley are extinct in the Iron Isles (constant turnover there) and House Florent and House Crakehall have lost their seats realistically, though they have quite a few members so they will likely linger on until some Lord grants them a seat or they recover their lands.

Would you ever consider granting a lord paramountcy to a Targaryen younger son to establish a cadet house in the style of King Edward III of England granting his younger sons duchy/dukedoms which eventually led to the War of the Roses or would you only grant small lordships to future Targaryen cadet houses?
It hasnt happened officially yet, but if things go well for my current ruler then we will see the first ''major'' cadet branch of the Targ dynasty formed following the first granting of a Lord Paramouncy to a Targaryen relative so I am not opposed to giving Targ family members major grants of land if it makes sense which in this situation I think will work perfectly.
(House Seafyre is a hint ;) )

A more minor cadet branch of the family (created by bastardry rather than coming into land) may also come into some power in the distant future.

If an Eleanor of Aquitaine situation arises where a young unmarried girl inherits a lord paramountcy, would you consider marrying her to the heir to the Iron Throne in a patrilineal marriage?
I dont think I would do that.


Additionally, ASOIAF noble families are also expected to always hand off newly acquired territories that are not part of the family's traditional domain to a younger brother or son who will often take on the name or coat of arms of the family that did traditionally rule that territory instead of incorporating the new territory into the family domain or crownlands in the case of royalty.
Very good point and one I pondered for this story as well. This is has no bearing on what will happen and is more based on my immediate thoughts at the time, but when I saw Alyssane created her faction to become Queen, I thought about what would happen if she won and her son Ellard (A Tyrell) inherited. I came to the conclusion that if that occured I would have Ellard take the Targaryen name of his mother and grandfather Vaemond to increase his legitimiacy and then grant the Reach to a younger sibling, ruling just the Red Keep and crownlands directly. I doubt there will be a situation where a ruler holds the Iron Throne and a Lord Paramouncy at the same time.

-To all, next chapter is coming along and a rough guess is it will be out sometime next week. Unlike this chapter it wont be a full narrative one and will have some more of the History Book Style telling, though there will be 2 POV scenes. I am definatly feeling the need to progress and ''catch up'' the story closer to my current point in the game before I play further and the History Book style definatly helps me to do so. There are some quiet years so I hope it doesnt feel to sparse, but there are some interesting and unexpected events for sure, especially in the coming future.
 
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Loving the series, novel quality storytelling all the way.
There is one thing doing me a confusion, tho. You keep mentioning how you make holders of traditional house lordships take their COA and house name to legitimize their rule, what confuses me is... that is already a base mechanic of CK2AGOT; so why are you having to manually do that? Is your mod version unupdated?
 
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