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Ah, darn it!! Just kidding ;).

Great start, and some nice writing. I'm not overly familiar with the area, so I second the request for a map or two for reference. Looking forward to the next update.

Oh boy, Lord Durham reading my AAR. On a more serious note, thank you very much for the kind words. I have a couple of maps that I took in 875 which is about 3 or 4 years off from the story. So they should be up in at most two updates from now but if I remember right they can probably be put up after this coming update.
 
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The sound of the horse’s hooves pounding against the dirt path matched the pound of blood in Velnias’ ears. His deep red cape flew behind him as he took a glace back to see the three horsemen in brown cloaks rounded the corner he had passed moments ago. Refocusing on the path ahead of him he pushed his horse on harder trusting the beast to navigate the tangled roots that sometimes crossed the path. The men behind him were slowly falling back caution getting the better part of them as he vaulted over a large log that had fallen over the path. The sunlight blasted him as he burst out of the forest with a loud cry, thundering down the path through the fields toward Jurbarkas. He realized he was smiling broadly as the lowborn made way for him, nothing felt as good as feeling a horse gallop under one’s self.

He was brushing his horse down when the gates opened letting the three men in, they looked as tired as their horses did. One of them, Jovirdas, leaped off his horse and stormed toward him. “What were you thinking? You could have, should have, died during that mad dash through the forest. Or worse bandits could have come, you know there are always some even this close to Jurbarkas.” He shouted, his hood flying off his head as the man raged at his chief.

Velnias tried to fit his face to the seriousness of the situation, he successfully stifled a laugh but he failed with a broad grin. “Oh, you are just mad because your horses did not have a hope to keep up. We were going down paths that I know by heart and there are no bandits this close to the hall. Besides, the Veles are looking out for us most right now, entering our houses.”

“I don’t care. You can not keep doing this. That is it, I have had it.” He yelled, ripping off the patch on his cloak and storming out. Velnias looked at the patch for a moment, already mud had turned the stag brown instead of black and the red was muddled as well. He let Jovirdas go; the man was vassal and had to be at least listened to, if not followed.



“Neophytos, may you go into the afterlife and live without your illness. May you join my family’s Veles and advise them as you advised my father in life.” Bubilas ended his speech as the Greek was slowly lowered into the ground. The traditional fire alter was lit near his head as the other grievers started a traditional song. He slowly walked over to his father, “26 is such a young age to die. Why did he die?”

Velnias looked at his newly adult son, “Well for one he was from the south and not used to our cold north. For two, he was a eunuch. Eunuchs are frail of health. Look at it this way; he died when the world was being reborn making him a vele of rebirth. But enough of that, you did wonderfully. Your study under Jaunule was very successful. You know the ways of the faith better than almost everyone in my realm.”

“Yes, I suppose I did, and I do. Thank you for letting me lead this funeral. Neophytos was a good man. He even followed our faith.” Bublias smiled as he looked at his father, Velnias the Magnanimous they had started to call him.



“No. I will not fire her. Now that Neophytos is dead, there is no one left who is half as good at the shadowy arts as she.” Velnias raged at the woman a few feet away. This was asinine of her to even ask. Ragana may be his wife who had bore him three sons and a daughter, but she had no business stepping into the affairs of the realm. Not only that but she had loudly complained about his spymaster in the past so even if he did agree with her everyone would assume she had just pushed him into it.

“Why should you not? You don’t need anyone good at the ‘shadowy arts’ as you call them. You are just fine at them yourself. Or are you just doing this to spite me? Was I not good enough to only give you four children? Four children that have almost made it to adulthood I might add.” Ragana yelled back. She would stand her ground against her husband even though she knew she would lose this fight.

Their fight would last long into the night and the servants would, one by one, quietly leave the hall to let them continue. While Velnias was known for being kind to people he was not always such to his wife, but then again she was not known for always giving the best of requests.


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872 was a quiet year for Velnais. His heir would reach issue and days later a Eunuch he had been given from Greece would die of illness. According to Arelis the Prussian, 872 was when he became known as the Magnanimous. Though oddly right after Arelis mentions this for the first time he tells the story of a fight Velnias had with his wife over an unnamed woman who was Velnias’ spymaster. Arelis seems to attempt both to make Velnias larger than life while putting in reminders that he was just a man.

-Traidenis Liudason, A History of Medieval Lithuania
 

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I haven't really played The Old Gods yet, so I must ask - are Velnias and Ragana the Chief and his wife at the start, or did you find someone with this name to marry? I'm not sure if you know the meanings of the names - they are Devil and Witch - but they fit together perfectly :D
 
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I haven't really played The Old Gods yet, so I must ask - are Velnias and Ragana the Chief and his wife at the start, or did you find someone with this name to marry? I'm not sure if you know the meanings of the names - they are Devil and Witch - but they fit together perfectly :D
They were married at the start. I had known that Velnias meant Devil but I didn't know about Ragana.
 

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Just an update, this is not dead or anything by anymeans, I just have a large case of writers block.

Writer's block. The author's creative bane. What I usually do is drink myself into a stupor...

Just kidding, though not a bad idea. If I suffer from the block I keep writing, no matter how bad it looks. You can always go back and fix it up. The longer you stay away from writing, the harder it is to start again.
 
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Writer's block. The author's creative bane. What I usually do is drink myself into a stupor...

Just kidding, though not a bad idea. If I suffer from the block I keep writing, no matter how bad it looks. You can always go back and fix it up. The longer you stay away from writing, the harder it is to start again.

I know all too well how hard it gets. Thank you for the support. Today is a free day for me so I have been trying in fits and starts all day to try to come up with something. Whats not helping is the waiting to hear back from my Uni so I can shore up my GPA and start looking for grad schools soon.
 

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You could try writing about something else. A different character, a different point of view, perhaps different style. A fresh take on things might help.
 
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You could try writing about something else. A different character, a different point of view, perhaps different style. A fresh take on things might help.

That is one of the reasons I started another AAR. Just to get the creative juices flowing as it were. I am back to working on this one and I am starting to make some headway.
 
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“Are they prepared?” Velnias asked as he saw the column of men stop and start setting up their tents near by. It was high summer and he was feeling restless. In his restlessness he had decided to extend his control of the south bank Neman River all the way to its mouth. He already controlled the entire north bank of the river and he controlled the upper part of the south bank. Pergrubrius, high chief of the Yatviags, controlled the rest of the south bank, and in the last war he had allowed the Curonian army march through his land possibly even feeding them.

Sarunas counted the banners he could see, “These almost three hundred are. The other eight hundred are still on their way. When they are all combined our forces will outnumber the enemy by almost two to one.”

Velnias nodded, “Yes I suppose you are right. I should wait, I will wait. That being said, I don’t want to wait. The air is too warm and still. Some have even said that they see the lightning of Perun flash across cloudless skies. There is something not right about this summer.” The thought of the reports that he had been hearing cause a slight shiver to go up his spine, despite the sweat that made his clothes stick to his skin never letting him forget how hot it was.


“He was right you know.” Lemmekinus said as they looked down at the enemy camp. Pergrubrius had laid siege to the hillfort commonly called Trakai and when the Zemaitijan army approached a few days before, Pergrubruis had retreated from the fort and was now encamped between Lake Akmena and Lake Galvė. Sarunas had retaken the fort and was now using it as a command center.

“Hm? What are you talking about? Who are you talking about?” Sarunas asked looking up from the camp in the distance to look at his second in command.

“Chief Velnias. Before we left he was talking about how the summer was not right. It was too hot, and dry, and still. There are far too many reports of lighting flashing in a clear sky, we even saw some of that while on the march. Not only that but some how Pergrubruis has managed to stay a step ahead of us. We were at the Neman River, ready to crush him, and what did we find? Nothing. We found nothing at all. His men had started their march the day before we arrived. Now we are here, back in area controlled by Velnias, the summer is ending and yet Pergrubruis still denies us battle.”

“Superstition. Now don’t you go trying to get Girdenis to agree with you, because I will not buy it. He is a priest for one, and for two he lost his position as head diviner to Jannule this summer. Forget that Girdenis is one of the most impious men I know and Jannule is damn good at his job. Now lets get down to it. If they keep the pattern they have had, they will send out a small foraging party to the south, I want you to take your troops and attack them. As you are doing that I will start marching toward their main camp in the south and I will hopefully have them think for just long enough that my men are the returning scout party. Then we will have Girdenis attack from the north.”


Sarunas thrust his spear forward warding off the horseman, his men were advancing in a shield wall and Pergrubruis had sent his horseman to harass them the entire march forward. At the start of the march, there had been several horsemen with the blue stripe on a field of white probing their defenses. Now he could only see a couple. The one directly in front of him was a skilled horseman though; he had managed several times to keep just outside of Sarunas’ reach. The man on Sarunas’ right thrust with his spear causing the horseman pull back to the left, as he was doing that the man on Sarunas’ other side’s spear quickly shot forward sticking the horse in the thigh. The horse stopped and whinnied, and the man’s face drained of color as he watched the spear shoot forward into his neck.

As the distance closed to a matter of feet between the two forces, the men facing Sarunas started moving in a very odd motion. They seemed to start undulating as if they were being pushed and jostled from behind. This odd behavior was quickly explained when Sarunas saw a few men break through the front rank covered in dirt and blood, mostly weaponless with terror in their eyes. Apparently Girdenis had caused them to route to the south and the men were beginning to realize that they were trapped.

By the time Sarunas had met the enemy’s front rank, it was over. His force was three times the size of the force they had hemmed in and they were closing in ever so patiently. While the victor had already been chosen, the trapped Yatviags fought as only men facing certain death can fight. Four hundred of them died, but for every two that was killed they took one Zemaitijan with them. It was far more difficult than it should have been.
 
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Sarunas’ beard had grown long in the two years he had been fighting the Yatviags. The first year had been dedicated to nothing but pacifying the chiefdom, running down bands of soldiers that flew the blue stripe on a field of white. All the while the white stag of Zemaitija hunted them down. It was finally at Ragaine, a small fort on the southern bank of the Neman River where he captured Chief Pergrubrius. Pergrubrius had been very willing to give up his claims and name Velnias the rightful ruler of his land as long as he was able to go free. The last Sarunas had seen of him was a small cloud of dust as Pergrubruis and a small band of followers rode hard for Prussia.

The war was over and now it was time to head to Kurzeme. His fort was waiting for him. The army had disintegrated after Pergrubruis surrendered, the ferryman at Ragaine was quite a bit richer for it too. The night the surrender was made final the first men to leave had started across the Neman by ferry. The ferry had been backed up for almost a week before Sarunas and Lammekinus had been able to cross. Girdenis had stayed behind to rule in Velnias’ name until the future rulers were placed in charge.

“Are you ready to return to Selpils yet?” Sarunas asked his companion with a grin. This was the second time they had marched to war together and he doubted it would be the last. While Sarunas was the marshal he still valued Lemmekinus’ advice and wanted him present for all plan making.

Lammekinus nodded wearily. “I am more than ready. Hopefully we can have at least a season at home before Velnias needs us back in court. I am not sure how much more of this I can take. I still have times when all I can see or hear is the sack of Selpils.”

‘That must be hard. I can gladly say that I don’t have those flashes. I have only ever been on the side of the sackers. Plundering and burning these towns is not exactly fun but neither Kodore nor Pergrubruis would give up without us doing it.”

“I know, neither would the Chief of Zemgale, which is why Selpils had to be sacked in the first place. I am not questioning the necessity of it, just the brutality of it.”
Sarunas didn’t have an answer for that, so they rode on in silence. Days stretched out like that. Lammekinus’ remarks about sacking dampened the mood for Sarunas for that long ride. He thought of the events he had missed during his absence. Velnias’ third son, Velnias, had become betrothed at the age of six to Agita Draguns, the five year old daughter and heiress to the Chief of Daugava, vassal to High Chief Valikaila of the Lettigallians. Also Patelas, Velnais’ second son reached manhood, it was said he was a master of secrets already. A more disturbing thing he had heard was Mayor Arunas, who served as Velnais’ steward hired some thugs to force some peasants to pay their taxes. He was sure that Velnais the Magnanimous knew about this plan and supported it. He doubted that Arunas could have come up with the money to hire the thugs by himself.



About half way through their journey they stopped in the town of Raseiniai for a short while. As they rode up to the town Sarunas noticed something odd by the seafront of the town. Slowly he pushed his way through the small folk and the mud streets of the town. Raseiniai was not a pretty town at all, most of the houses were made of wood with thatched roofs. On a good day the roads were made of dirt, on all the other days they were made of mud. Finally he made it to the beach to find out what was going on. The sight that met his eyes was confusing. It seemed that the townsfolk had created a wall into the water and had cleared out a rather large area into which they were placing what appeared to be tree trunks. Finding a man who was clearly working on whatever this was, he commanded “You there. What is going on here?”

The man looked up at him. To say this man was dirty seemed to be an understatement, his shirt looked like it had been white at some point but now it was black with plastered mud, his pants and most of the rest of his body were in the same condition. He didn’t look very old, but he did look very poor. “It’s a port, sir. When our lord, Velnias, heard of the large amounts of trading ships that were passing along the coast he ordered us to make a port. A place where the ships will stop and trade and repair and things.”

“Yes I know what a port is you damned fool of a man.” Sarunas snapped back at the man before watching him scuttle off. Thoughtfully he watched the men work for awhile. A lot had changed while he was gone. Velnais must be willing to deal with the Norse and the Christians. It was not a bad idea either; this would surely be the first port on this side of the Baltic between Gdansk and the mouth of the Neva where Rurik held his court. It wouldn’t take some people in this town long to figure out they could launch their own trading ships and maybe this place would not be as retched the next time he came here.


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Author's Note: I will put up a couple maps of both this area and the world soon.