Hello, this is my first AAR and hopefully will go very well.
This AAR will have many POV characters, including Renly himself as he tries a different way to take the Iron Throne.
Because I'm bad at most technical things, there will be no screenshots so hopefully the words I write and my interpretation of the characters the wonderful George R.R. Martin has created will be enough.
This AAR is inspired by both the books of George R.R. Martin (I'm on book 3) and the AAR 'An Arm of Iron.' by OConnor (which I highly recommend.)
Now without further delay, I give you 'The Ambitious Stag'
Loras, however, didn’t. He strutted over to the map-table and cleared his throat. “I now declare this war council meeting has begun.” Brienne sighed at how pompous he sounded and walked over to the table, as did Robar. Parmen merely raised an eyebrow at Loras before talking.
“Thank you for that, Lord Commander” He said, putting contempt into his voice as he said ‘Lord Commander’. “We are in command of over ten thousand men…”
“And one woman.” Robar muttered under his breath. Parmen ignored him and continued.
“…While, if the raven was correct, Stannis only commands six and a half thousand. But the Crownlander Lords Gilbert Farring, Clayton Follard, Jaremy Chyttering and Maric Massey have all declared their allegiance to Stannis. As has Lord Alester Florent, but he is in the Reach and so is of no concern of ours.”
“So what?” Robar asked. “We outnumber Farring, Follard, Chyttering and Massey as well.” Parmen Crane looked up at his Rainbow Guard brother and turned to face him.
“Right you are, Ser Robar, but if we allow them to join forces with Stannis then they will match our numbers.” He put authority in his tone and it was clear that he was belittling Robar.
‘Good thing too.’ Brienne thought. ‘This man has no place on the battlefield. He is more of a political machine than anything. Then again I don’t belong here. I belong at Renly’s side, guarding him. My beloved Renly…’ Brienne’s heart ached at the thought of Renly. Handsome Renly. Noble Renly. King Renly.
Her pain turned to anger as she thought of Renly’s wife. Margaery Tyrell, Loras’ sister and Renly’s Queen. She is said to be one of the most beautiful women in Westeros and one of the smartest. She had probably stolen Renly’s heart. Brienne’s attention returned to the war council as Loras spoke up.
“Thank you for your insights Parmen and Robar, but now is the time is to decided who will command what flanks. As the Lord Commander I think I should…” But before he could finish, Parmen interrupted him.
“I shall take the centre. There I can have a good overview of the battle and thus know where to position our troops. Loras you shall have the right flank. I trust you and I know you’re a good commander. Robar take the left. And Brienne, you shall command the van.”
Brienne was speechless. The vanguard was an important part of any army and commanders only gave it to important members of their command structure. She eventually found her voice “I would be honoured to command the vanguard, Ser Parmen.” She then saw the shocked look on Loras’ face and the outraged one on Robar’s.
“I am… I am the Lord Comman…Commander.” Loras stammered, shocked to have been commanded by his inferior.
“Give a woman the van! Are you out of your mind, Crane? This is insanity! Wait until Renly hears about this!” Robar shouted. “I should take the van, not some lady from Tarth!” Brienne walked over to the shouting man and glared down at him.
“Do you want to duel over the van, Lord Royce. Do you wish to find out why His Grace made me a Rainbow Guard?” Suddenly, Parmen slammed his fist on the table. The tent went deadly quiet.
“I have given my commands.” He said in an angry whisper “If you refuse to follow them, then the king shall be told. Now, we march tonight. I want to be at Storm’s End before Lord Massey or Lord Follard or any of the rest of them can reach Stannis. We’ll crush his army and we’ll kill the heretic. I’ll do it myself if I have to! Now all of you leave and get the men ready.” They turned to leave when Parmen spoke up again. “Brienne, stay.” Robar shot Brienne a look of venom before leaving, with Loras following.
Brienne walked back to the table while Parmen poured out two goblets of wine. He passed one to Brienne. “You wished to speak to me, Ser Parmen?” Brienne asked. Parmen took a drink before answering.
“Do you know why I gave you the van, Brienne?” The question took Brienne by surprise. She didn’t expect Parmen to get her to talk to him about their tactics. He had seemed pretty set on what he wanted to do with the army. She shook her head. He grinned at her. “Look at yourself. You’re Brienne of Tarth. Brienne the Blue. Brienne the Maid…”
“Brinne the Beauty.” Brinne added with a sad smile. She was ugly and tall. A woman no man could love. Not even one as kind as Renly. Parmen gave a short laugh and nodded.
“…Exactly. You’re tall, ugly and strong.” Brienne winced slightly when he said ‘ugly’. She could accept the truth but it still hurt to be heard, especially by one of her brothers-in-arms. Parmen was famous for his honesty. “You’re one of the finest fighters in Westeros. You could probably even give our pretty little Tyrell boy a nice scare. Imagine you’re a foot-soldier of Stannis Baratheon. You see you’re against an army near twice your size and the first wave of opponents you face is led by a massive, ugly beast of a woman. It would break any man.”
“Why are you telling me this?” Brienne asked. She was getting tired of Parmen insulting her. She would hit the man if she didn’t have a grudging respect for him
“So you know why I put you in command. Not ‘veteran’ warrior like Robar Royce or famous Loras Tyrell. I put you, the brutal, tough, deadly, ugly knight who inspires her men and who scares, and kills, the others.” He finishes his wine and puts it back beside the wine jug. “Now get out and get ready, we march in two hours.”
Brienne gives a curt nod and leaves. ‘So that’s all I’m good for. Killing men and inspiring other men to kill men.’ She sighed sadly. No wonder why Renly would never love her, even without his beautiful queen. She walked into her own tent and grabbed her blue helmet and placed in on and over her head. She pulled the visor down. ‘Time to do what I’m good at.’ She grabbed her sword belt, scabbard attached with sword sheathed. She left her tent and prepared herself for war.
This AAR will have many POV characters, including Renly himself as he tries a different way to take the Iron Throne.
Because I'm bad at most technical things, there will be no screenshots so hopefully the words I write and my interpretation of the characters the wonderful George R.R. Martin has created will be enough.
This AAR is inspired by both the books of George R.R. Martin (I'm on book 3) and the AAR 'An Arm of Iron.' by OConnor (which I highly recommend.)
Now without further delay, I give you 'The Ambitious Stag'
Chapter One
Brienne
Brienne strided into the command tent that had been set up and saw that all the other commanders were present. Loras Tyrell, armoured with his pretty face, stood there smirking; helmet under his right arm and his left hand casually gripping the top of his sword. Robar Royce stood near the back of the tent, near a brazier. He too was handsome, but in a more rugged way. He was glaring at Brienne and she knew why. She knew he didn’t approve of a woman being a knight and especially not on King Renly’s Rainbow Guard. Yet here she was, commanding the army of the rightful king. The last member of the group was looking intently over a map of the Stormlands and the Crownlands, where Stannis had gathered some support. He looked up and Brienne locked eyes with Parmen Crane. He wasn't handsome like the others and porbably the least capable fighter there but he held the authority over them. Even though Loras was Lord Commander of the Rainbow Guard, Brienne knew who was in charge.Brienne
Loras, however, didn’t. He strutted over to the map-table and cleared his throat. “I now declare this war council meeting has begun.” Brienne sighed at how pompous he sounded and walked over to the table, as did Robar. Parmen merely raised an eyebrow at Loras before talking.
“Thank you for that, Lord Commander” He said, putting contempt into his voice as he said ‘Lord Commander’. “We are in command of over ten thousand men…”
“And one woman.” Robar muttered under his breath. Parmen ignored him and continued.
“…While, if the raven was correct, Stannis only commands six and a half thousand. But the Crownlander Lords Gilbert Farring, Clayton Follard, Jaremy Chyttering and Maric Massey have all declared their allegiance to Stannis. As has Lord Alester Florent, but he is in the Reach and so is of no concern of ours.”
“So what?” Robar asked. “We outnumber Farring, Follard, Chyttering and Massey as well.” Parmen Crane looked up at his Rainbow Guard brother and turned to face him.
“Right you are, Ser Robar, but if we allow them to join forces with Stannis then they will match our numbers.” He put authority in his tone and it was clear that he was belittling Robar.
‘Good thing too.’ Brienne thought. ‘This man has no place on the battlefield. He is more of a political machine than anything. Then again I don’t belong here. I belong at Renly’s side, guarding him. My beloved Renly…’ Brienne’s heart ached at the thought of Renly. Handsome Renly. Noble Renly. King Renly.
Her pain turned to anger as she thought of Renly’s wife. Margaery Tyrell, Loras’ sister and Renly’s Queen. She is said to be one of the most beautiful women in Westeros and one of the smartest. She had probably stolen Renly’s heart. Brienne’s attention returned to the war council as Loras spoke up.
“Thank you for your insights Parmen and Robar, but now is the time is to decided who will command what flanks. As the Lord Commander I think I should…” But before he could finish, Parmen interrupted him.
“I shall take the centre. There I can have a good overview of the battle and thus know where to position our troops. Loras you shall have the right flank. I trust you and I know you’re a good commander. Robar take the left. And Brienne, you shall command the van.”
Brienne was speechless. The vanguard was an important part of any army and commanders only gave it to important members of their command structure. She eventually found her voice “I would be honoured to command the vanguard, Ser Parmen.” She then saw the shocked look on Loras’ face and the outraged one on Robar’s.
“I am… I am the Lord Comman…Commander.” Loras stammered, shocked to have been commanded by his inferior.
“Give a woman the van! Are you out of your mind, Crane? This is insanity! Wait until Renly hears about this!” Robar shouted. “I should take the van, not some lady from Tarth!” Brienne walked over to the shouting man and glared down at him.
“Do you want to duel over the van, Lord Royce. Do you wish to find out why His Grace made me a Rainbow Guard?” Suddenly, Parmen slammed his fist on the table. The tent went deadly quiet.
“I have given my commands.” He said in an angry whisper “If you refuse to follow them, then the king shall be told. Now, we march tonight. I want to be at Storm’s End before Lord Massey or Lord Follard or any of the rest of them can reach Stannis. We’ll crush his army and we’ll kill the heretic. I’ll do it myself if I have to! Now all of you leave and get the men ready.” They turned to leave when Parmen spoke up again. “Brienne, stay.” Robar shot Brienne a look of venom before leaving, with Loras following.
Brienne walked back to the table while Parmen poured out two goblets of wine. He passed one to Brienne. “You wished to speak to me, Ser Parmen?” Brienne asked. Parmen took a drink before answering.
“Do you know why I gave you the van, Brienne?” The question took Brienne by surprise. She didn’t expect Parmen to get her to talk to him about their tactics. He had seemed pretty set on what he wanted to do with the army. She shook her head. He grinned at her. “Look at yourself. You’re Brienne of Tarth. Brienne the Blue. Brienne the Maid…”
“Brinne the Beauty.” Brinne added with a sad smile. She was ugly and tall. A woman no man could love. Not even one as kind as Renly. Parmen gave a short laugh and nodded.
“…Exactly. You’re tall, ugly and strong.” Brienne winced slightly when he said ‘ugly’. She could accept the truth but it still hurt to be heard, especially by one of her brothers-in-arms. Parmen was famous for his honesty. “You’re one of the finest fighters in Westeros. You could probably even give our pretty little Tyrell boy a nice scare. Imagine you’re a foot-soldier of Stannis Baratheon. You see you’re against an army near twice your size and the first wave of opponents you face is led by a massive, ugly beast of a woman. It would break any man.”
“Why are you telling me this?” Brienne asked. She was getting tired of Parmen insulting her. She would hit the man if she didn’t have a grudging respect for him
“So you know why I put you in command. Not ‘veteran’ warrior like Robar Royce or famous Loras Tyrell. I put you, the brutal, tough, deadly, ugly knight who inspires her men and who scares, and kills, the others.” He finishes his wine and puts it back beside the wine jug. “Now get out and get ready, we march in two hours.”
Brienne gives a curt nod and leaves. ‘So that’s all I’m good for. Killing men and inspiring other men to kill men.’ She sighed sadly. No wonder why Renly would never love her, even without his beautiful queen. She walked into her own tent and grabbed her blue helmet and placed in on and over her head. She pulled the visor down. ‘Time to do what I’m good at.’ She grabbed her sword belt, scabbard attached with sword sheathed. She left her tent and prepared herself for war.