Lets give you a little hand at where you could/should start improving.
Dwin is almost completely out of position in your setup. A tiny bit of your Dwin province is on the right side of the Araxes river (the Eastern side), but the rest is on the wrong side of the Araxes river (the Western side). All the Holdings in the Dwin province is on the Eastern side.
Goghtn is completely out of position in your setup. All the Goghtn holdings are on the other side of the Araxes river (the Eastern side), while your Goghtn province is on the Western side
Baghk is mostly out of position. In your setup it is mostly occupying the position that Goghtn should be in, it should be pushed a bit east.
You could easily move it east by making Arran a bit skinier. It's way skinier in our setup than in yours
Also Baghk and Haband has holdings on the northern bank on the Araxes river, but you've given the Northern bank to Tabriz and Oromieh, you could fix this by pushing Tabriz and Oromieh to the southern bank of the Araxes river and set the border between the provinces on the Araxes river.