"Actually, Per Recyznski," Tilly says coldly, "I believe Per Gonzov made many of the same comments I did -- in short, that your definitions are broad enough to drive a truck through. Yet his are input, and mine are not constructive?
"Fine. Here's constructive criticism for you. Your bill hasn't been seconded, and given the commentary so far, I don't see it happening. We've wasted too much time on it already. Let's move along.
"And for future reference, Per Recyznski, there's no reason you can't get MGA commentary on finished legislation, instead of submitting half-written bills and expecting more experienced legislators to finish them for you. In fact, maybe you'll even get something passed that way."
"Fine. Here's constructive criticism for you. Your bill hasn't been seconded, and given the commentary so far, I don't see it happening. We've wasted too much time on it already. Let's move along.
"And for future reference, Per Recyznski, there's no reason you can't get MGA commentary on finished legislation, instead of submitting half-written bills and expecting more experienced legislators to finish them for you. In fact, maybe you'll even get something passed that way."