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@ Enewald: Of course it is a normal, would you have it any other way? :p

@ Erie_Patriot: Thank you for your kind words and hopefully I don't slip in my writing... ;)

@ Hardraade: Well, Smith has been around a while and knows the area and a few tricks up his sleeves. He also has a history surrounded with 'mystery.' (Which will eventually be dealt with later in the AAR) :eek:

@ TheEnlighted1: Thanks! Great to hear from you once again! :cool:

I hope I didn't waste your week with my story then... :p

To All: I'm caught in a little predicament here, I've given the Smith/Wilson's Creek updates as planned to keep you guys informed on the general war, not just the regional and to make sure you haven't forgotten about these characters.

But I planned and plan on doing another update with Tom, and I have the storyline with me, but I feel like where I left off is a tough spot to pick up on. So, it make take longer than expected to shell out this next or next few updates.

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Chapter Six

~ South of Clinch Mountain, Tennessee.

“NO! NO! Stay back! Stay away!”

“Stay calm, it’s just me!”

“I mean it! Not another step closer or I reckon, I reckon I’ll kill you!”

“Just stay calm Tom.”

“How do you know my name?”

“I can see everything.”

“I mean it! One more step and I’ll shoot.”

“Try, just go ahead and try.”

“Fine, I will,” Tom said as he rose his pistol and shot the shadowy figure through the chest. The character fell to the ground, holding his wound but was quick to get back to his feet. He smiled at Tom, he appeared through the light, at this point his face was totally recognizable. Tom dropped his gun on the ground and stumbled back, falling to the ground and having his back hit the back of the cabinet behind him. He placed his hands over his head; he began to cry, “Bill!”

Tom awoke, he was breathing hard. He looked over to his left where the sun was beaming into the room, nothing. He quickly turned to his right; his hair drenched in sweat, and saw a man standing next to him.

“Another bad night have we?” the man asked Tom.

Tom opened his eyes wide; he cleaned out any possible sand from his eyes and was clearly looking at a man he seemingly didn’t know. “Where am I? How are you? Wait… you’re the doctor from that town. Mallott!”

“Calm down there son,” Doc Johnson said to Tom, “he’s dead. Don’t you remember killing him? That was six days ago.”

“Six days?”

“Indeed,” answered the doctor. “You’ve been under my care for the past six days; I think your leg will be fine now. I did my best. By the way, the town looks at you as a God and hero now. Thanks,” finished the doctor as he was messing with a glass on the counter.

“I think I should be thanking you,” Tom said as he lifted himself off the table, remarkably he was able to walk for a change.

“Oh my God!” said the doctor, “You’re fine? I wasn’t expecting you to get up and walk for at least another week.”

“Doctor… doctor… Johnson isn’t it?”

“At your service my good man,” the kind doctor replied.

“Not that I think I need to be leaving, but I think I must be getting back to my home.”

The doctor peered down at the hard wooden floor, “Some people want you, well, I guess we can’t hold you here. Are you sure?”

“Yes I reckon, I should be getting home; before winter sets in,” Tom said as he stretched out and cleared his vision.

The next hour was one of heartbreak, especially in the town. The doctor had graciously been given a horse by the tailor so Tom could make his way home. The butcher and other farmers gathered at the very least, a week or more worth of food and water for him. By noon, the town had lined the streets as Tom walked out of the saloon for the first time since killing George Mallott all those days ago. The men brought him the horse, as he was walking towards the beautiful black horse, the many lasses walked out to him, flowers in their hands and giving him a small kiss on the cheeks in gratitude for what he’d done for the town. The older men and women graciously nodded as he walked by. Tom turned around to look at the town.

“Thank you,” the town said to him as he was looking at each and everyone of the townsfolk.

“No, thank you,” he said. “I’m not one for speeches, so I’ll keep it short. I won’t forget this place, nor the people who live in it. I couldn’t thank you all enough for helping me out these past six days without me knowing,” he said as he mounted his horse. He looked at the doctor who was holding the reins of the horse. “Especially you doc.”

“Is there any chance you will ever return?”

“Maybe,” Tom said as he kicked the horse and started to ride off into the distance. He turned the horse around and went through the townsfolk who were clapping for him as he moved towards the ridge. At the ridge, he wheeled back and took his hat off to the town and just as quickly disappeared from sight. He rode down the ridge back to the very spot that his brother was buried.

After several hours, he paused in the woods and walked towards Bill’s makeshift grave in the middle of nowhere. He knelt beside the makeshift grave marker with his name written on it, he paused to say a prayer, knowing that the rest of his family will never know where he’s buried, nor receive any news of his death. After some time, some tears in his eyes, Tom popped back up and walked back to his horse whipping off his face of tears. He mounted his horse and looked back one last time at his brother’s grave, muttering a word and riding off soon afterward.

A few days had passed; Tom was once again in the thick, dense, mountainous terrain of Clinch Mountain, making his way north towards Kentucky; though he didn’t know the exact path back to Wilson’s Creek. The trees blocked the sunlight from overhead; he was nothing but a mere dark shadow in the woods that surrounded him. Thunder could be heard from a distance, Tom was quick to look up and see if he could if a storm was rolling in.

Unable to see through the still dense tree cover in mid November, Tom made his way across the forest floor to try and find an opening; just to make sure he didn’t need to pitch camp and wait out the oncoming storm. The thunder was rolling in ever closer, the noises got louder and ever more numerous. From the sounds of it, thousands of small crackles of lightning were filling the air; the oncoming storm would be just as bad or even worse than the one that had flooded the battlefield at Clinch Mountain. Tom could finally see the end of the tree-line just ahead of him, a small ravine through the cress of the trees.

Tom made his way through the thick brush; he appeared out under a bright blue sky and with a few white clouds hovering overhead. He made his way to the ravine, he peered over the edge and the sight that he saw shook him to his corps. Around twenty artillery pieces were shelling out fire at an advancing line. Suddenly, the noise of screaming men filled the air; a shell from an artillery piece landed only a few yards away from Tom, knocking him off his horse and sending him flying to the ground; his hat falling down the ravine in the process.

Tom picked himself up, only to be surrounded by several other explosions. He swiftly moved his arms over his eyes to shield himself from the fire. He squinted through the smoke and saw the shattered Confederate flag making its way towards him in great haste. Hundreds of Confederate soldiers were fleeing from the battleground directly at Tom, when they reached him; he was knocked to the ground. Across the spaces, thousands of charging Union soldiers with their bayonets reflecting in the sunlight and their tall and proud Stars and Stripes were quickly making their way towards Tom.

A Confederate soldier helped Tom up, believing he was a Reb by his outfit that could pass as a Confederate uniform. Tom was now surrounded by a sea of gray, with a wall of blue rushing towards him; to save himself, he did the only logical thing, he fled with the Confederates, as the Union lines pressed forward.

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Wow, the dude is really lucky... Run Tom, Run! :rofl:

"Run Forrest, Run!" :cool: :p

You continue to not create amazing scenes in your writing! I particulary liked the beginning with the dream where Tom saw his brother again, and of course the ending. I would guess that this battle isn't on the same scale as Clinch Mountain though. ;)
 

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@ Hardraade: Tom certainly has luck now doesn't he?:p Bad and good! But, up to right now, mostly good. ;) Well, let's just say this isn't what he needed at the moment...

@ Enewald: Poor Tom, he's caught up in the greatest struggle that United States has ever gone through, and he seemingly can't get away from it. Man, that sucks, the country is so huge, he just happens to run into one of the few battles going on across the entire country. :p

@ Erie_Patriot: No, the battle isn't at the scale of Clinch Mountain, though, the battle is still a crucial one. More on it later. Btw, I love Forrest Gump! :cool:

@ TheHyphenated1: Great to hear from you again! I'm glad you've enjoyed it thus far. Hopefully you weren't fighting to read on! :p

To All: I hope to have an update rather soon. Currently, this is taking a back seat to some of the free-time I have as I'm currently working on a more important *project* at the moment. Anyway cheers! I hope you all are going enjoy the summer, especiall the kids out there... :cool:
 

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Chapter Six

“What the hell are you doing boy, run!” exclaimed a Confederate officer who was dragging Tom along with him as his men were fleeing from the oncoming Union forces.

Tom was running for his life, his legs in stride despite a slight limp still. The long grass all around him parted as his body maneuvered through the sea of grass. He was constantly looking behind him to see the glittering bayonets of the Union soldiers seemingly getting closer. He looked forward once more, he was breathing heavily. Several artillery pieces were rapidly being setup just in front of him. Tom glanced back one more time, just being able to catch a glimpse from the ridge; he saw several shinning lights to which he fell to the ground in response. Three Union artillery pieces placed shells right into the fleeing Confederate lines. After the explosions, Tom got up once more and dived into the small entrenchment where the rest of the Confederate soldiers were beginning to rally.

“Rally men, rally!” exclaimed an officer on horseback. Tom looked up; he could tell by his distinct feature that the gentleman on the horse was Major General Polk. “Give ‘em double canister colonel,” he said to the artillery colonel who had just recently deployed his five pieces onto the battlefield in much haste.

Tom looked forward once again; the Union lines were opening with gunfire as they advanced forward. Several men beside Tom were struck down by the bullets. Tom was now conflicted. He didn’t have a rifle with him at the moment, and he was, after all, a Union soldier. His face sank deep, he looked at the rifle. What was he going to do? Sit in the middle of a battle and refuse to fight? Tom picked up the rifle from the fallen Confederate soldier and began to reload as the rest of the Confederate soldiers were doing.

The Union infantry halted around 50 yards from the new Confederate positions. Tom could hear the officers shout orders out to his men.

“Ready men! Aim. Fire!”

In a flash, thousands of Union rifles exploded in a hailstorm of bullets. A massive line of smoke appeared from their positions, bullets flying in all directions, men falling all over the field.

“Charge!”

Tom became nervous. The Union soldiers were rushing forward, screaming at the top of their lungs, the Stars and Stripes fluttering in the wind. As the Union soldiers came within 25 yards, the artillery colonel unleashed his little gift upon the Union soldiers, but to little avail; they seemed like a giant blue steel wall, stopping at nothing. The Union soldiers leaped over the fence and into the Confederate Snake pit, hand to hand combat ensued with deadly consequences.

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A Union soldier leapt directly onto Tom, his fists were swinging away at Tom’s face. Tom caught the brunt of his first two or three punches. At this moment, a Confederate soldier came up from behind and shot the bastard right off from this chest with his rifle. In turn, this man was jumped by another Union soldier.

Tom was in deep shock, he’d never seen such fury in combat before. He crawled his way out from the front of the ‘Snake Pit,’ and ended up beside a wheel from an artillery piece, standing up he looked to his left and right; unable to determine what was really going on. Another Union explosion rocked the ground, sending Tom to the ground, dirt flying all over the place. Everywhere he looked he saw nothing but men stabbing, punching, using whatever they could get their hands on to try and kill their opponent. As Tom stumbled to his feet, a Union soldier rushed forward and attempted to stab him in the chest.

Tom reacted quickly; he pulled out his pistol and shot the soldier in the throat, killing him instantly. He couldn’t believe what he’d just done. Sure, it was for self-defense, but he’d just killed a man that he was formerly fighting for. Tom was taken from behind again; he was being struck in the back of the head by a tree-branch the soldier had picked up. He was flipped over to his front where the soldier continued to whale on him with the tree-branch. Then, the soldier suddenly stopped.

“Tom? Is that you?” the soldier said to him.

“Justin?” Tom asked in confusion.

“What the hell are you doing as a Reb?”

“I don’t know,” Tom responded, bloodied and beaten; his lips bleeding out and his left eye cut-up.

Tom crawled underneath the artillery piece to catch his breath. Justin followed him beneath the massive killing tool. “Are you okay?” his friend asked him with guilt and concern.

“Yeah, I’m fine,” he responded.

Noise from behind them caught their attention. Another Confederate unit was preparing to enter the fray around them. Tom looked back where the Union soldiers were coming from; two more regiments were rushing towards the conflict.

“Looks like we can’t get away from one another,” his friend laughed. “I’m sorry Tom, I have to get going,” Justin finished as he left Tom beneath the artillery piece, grabbing a rifle and rushing back into combat.

“Justin, wait!” Tom cried out, his head resting on the wheel of the cannon.

Tom saw several men fall right beside the cannon, their heads were beaten to a pulp; the once green fields were now stained with red. Overhead, the bright skies were slowly changing to a darker color. Thunder from cannons filled the air. Tom looked behind him to see the Confederates preparing to throw their reserves into combat. He sighed, he was lost in battle, and he had no will to fight anymore.

“Turn the cannons! Turn the cannons,” yelled a Union officer.

Smoke filled the battlefield; it was as if fog had suddenly rolled in. The Confederates behind him readied themselves for battle. Their bayonets were fixed, their officers in the lead.

“Charge!”

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i liked that update especially, with its themes of the enemy changing with the current situation. another lucky meeting with a friend. :D

for a moment i thought Tom was going to be really selfless and try to kill that confederate general.
 

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Very good, vivid battle scene as usual. Tom has killed a Union soldier. Sure, he had to i order to protect himself, but that is unlikely to be taken into account by Union authorities. I'm looking forward to seeing how Tom gets himself out of this one.
 

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@ Enewald: Oh but wait, this is just a little blemish on the face his face of luck! :p

@ BritishImperial: Thanks, and I must say I really enjoy how you look at things so differently/openingly. I guess that's something a good reader is able to do. ;)

@ Erie_Patriot: Tom is a cat with nine lives, he has to use them all up! Or perhaps God just doesn't like him. :p

@ Hardraade: Thank you! And yes, even if it was in self-defense his superiors wouldn't be happy, even though by now he's 'Missing in Action.'

Btw, great return to "Of Men Great and Small!" :cool:
 

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Chapter Six

The Confederate lines behind Tom rushed forward into combat, their bayonets drawn, their rifles and muskets leveled. The gray and brown dressed soldiers pushed forward with fury, seeing their comrades being beaten without remorse from their Northern enemies. At about twenty yards from the fray, they halted and fired off a single volley into the lines of blue and gray. Granted they were going to hit some of their own men, but they would hit some of the Union as well. Tom soon found himself engulfed in a sea of blue and gray. Explosions rocked the air, screams filled the air.

Tom was still safely tucked away beneath a cannon, but as men dropped all around, he came to realize that it was only going to be a matter of time. Without his distinct blue uniform, he couldn’t try to fight with the Union troops as many of the Confederates were wearing clothing too similar to his. At the same time he had no stomach to fight for the Confederates, nor did he have the will to surrender to either side.

Tom moved out from beneath the cannon, he was crawling on the crowd amongst the fallen: the dead and the wounded. As he looked across the field he could see another Union regiment moving forward to enter the thick of combat. He made his way to the sunken road just yards away; he placed his hands over his head to cover himself from the Union artillery fire that was now peppering the area with shells of all types. An explosion landed only yards sending several bodies flying towards him, arms and limbs missing from their bodies.

Tom had had enough; he popped up, grabbing a rifle that was on the ground. He leveled out and shot another Union soldier in the chest, dropping him to the red-stained battlefield. Overhead, the clouds were quickly shifting; a storm was brewing, quickly moving in from the west. Tom appeared in the sights of a Union soldier. He didn’t hesitate to lead poor old Tom in his sights, eventually pulling the trigger and watching his target hit the ground.

Tom was clutching the back of his leg; the bullet had lodged itself into his muscle. He was in agonizing pain, rolling back and forth screaming in the air. As minutes passed, Tom eventually regained his composure. Right beside him he saw two soldiers go at it. The Confederate leapt onto the Union soldier bringing him to the ground, there he let rip several hard punches to the Union soldier’s face. The man in blue responded by finding a pistol and using it as a club, striking the Confederate soldier in the head. With the Confederate off of him, he rushed forward, tackling his opponent to the ground. The Confederate soldier found himself on the defensive as several deafening cracks could be heard as he let a fury of punches against the man in gray. The Confederate soldier was only saved as one of his own comrades rushed to his aid, shooting the Union soldier dead before he could deliver the death blow.

Tom crawled away from the battlefield; he was headed toward a small barn on the other edge of the ridge. It must have taken him around thirty or more minutes, but he finally made his slow approach to the barn. At the top of the ridge he looked back, the field was still covered with smoke, the air was still filled with men dying and crying. The storm overhead had finally opened. Lightning and thunder was quickly filling the air, rain was quick to fall.

Inside the barn now, Tom rested himself against the edge of the old shack. He laid back, his head resting comfortably against a small pile of hay that was still inside. The sounds of war were still looming around him; he gave no attention to it until it grew louder. Tom peered through the cracks in the barn, he saw the Confederate soldiers falling backwards. Officers on horseback tried to organize a semi-organized retreat to new positions.

“For God’s sake men, rally on me!” officers shouted to their soldiers as they exchanged in gunfire with their Union counterparts.

The Stars and Stripes grew closer; the Union lines were advancing in an orderly fashion, company by company, regiment by regiment. They would pause on the order of their commanders; spray a volley into the retreating Confederate soldiers, than advance again pushing them back even further. Soon, Tom found the barn surrounded on all sides by Confederate and Union men.

“Come on boys, don’t stop now!”

“Fire!”

“Fall back boys, fall back!”

Tom shut his eyes, everything went black. As he did, a last great ‘hurrah’ was heard, footsteps grew louder. It was apparent that someone had made a gallant last charge to determine the outcome of the battle.

~ By morning, Tom awoke; he was stunned to even be alive after the hell-hole that he had gone through. The morning sun was bright, beaming through the many cracks in the barn. Tom made his way outside. He slowly opened the door, checking the area to see if it was clear of both sides, it was.

Tom stepped out, he was appalled at the sight he saw, bodies littered the ground. Most of the men were dead, but some of the men were still alive, left on the battlefield to die by their own comrades. There was no sign of either the Confederate or Union Army in the area; the only signs of life were the poor souls that were left to die and the fifty or so colored men that were tending the wounded.

Tom made his way out onto the ridge, in plain view of the men. A man on horseback quickly rode up to him.

“So what do we have here?” the man asked Tom.

Tom turned to him, “Nothing.”

“What are you trying to say?” the man asked in return. “Are you not a rebel or federalist?”

“I was just passing by, wrong place wrong time,” Tom was quick to answer.

“Hmm,” the man on the horse began. “Well, I suppose you’re one lucky man then,” he said. “You see, this was my farm, what’s left of it at least. This war has taken a heavy toll on the Tennessee if I could say that. My bad, I haven’t introduced myself yet, I’m Richard Thornberg, to whom to I make my acquaintance with?”

“Thomas Smith,” Tom answered. “I’m a postal rider, or used to be.”

“Is that so,” Richard Thornberg said. “Well, where were you headed?”

“Louisville, Kentucky,” Tom answered quickly. “Not that that matters anymore as I’ve lost my horse in this chaos.”

“There’s a lot of chaos going on here. These are my men,” Thornberg told him, “I’m holding a hospital in my home right now, both sides are welcome. I guess I’ve found myself living in the wrong place in the wrong country now. It’s the story of my life I think,” he said.

“So you’re a Northern supporter?” Tom asked.

“I never said that now did I? Anyway, if you wish to stay here, my house is just down yonder,” he said pointed at the road that disappeared below the ridge. “We could use every hand we can get,” Thornberg added.

Tom looked at the man…

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The Battle of Fraser’s Heights as it became known, was the final engagement of the disastrous Union 1861 campaign in Tennessee. Although they managed a few miles of occupation, the Confederate victories at Oneida and Clinch showed Washington that the war was going to be a fight to the very end. The Battle of Fraser’s Farm pitted elements of Nathaniel Prentice Banks rearguard against the pursuing units of Braxton Bragg and Leonidas Polk. On November 11, 1861, Brigadier General Franz Sigel’s corps engaged the Confederate forces under Polk; the ensuing skirmish became a full-scale battle. The Union forces totaled 9,700 while the Confederates numbered 7,700. The battle ended in a ‘draw,’ with both sides claiming victory. For his actions, Franz Sigel was promoted to Major General at the closure of 1861, and became the second in command of the Union Army of Tennessee. His gallant actions became legendary, especially under the German-American population which came to coin the phrase, “Fight mit Sigel.” The Union lost 2200 men to the Confederates 2100. The painting above details the heroism of the Citadel Cadets who rushed forward to stop the Union advance.
 

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i think the reason i read themes and stuff into what you write is because i have to do it for my exams - i'm studying english literature and we have to analyse war texts. well actually i just finished. so that was probably the last time you'll get something insightful from me - i'll return to just reading for pure pleasure.
 

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Tom's luck holds and he comes out alright once again, though he might want to get that leg looked at. It seems that Tom is fed up and done with the war and I doubt that he'll be going back to his unit. I'm looking forward to seeing where he goes next.
 

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@ jpj1421: Thanks! I'm glad you've enjoyed it thus far, though I don't think it's worthy of any IPod space. :p

Anyhow, I sometimes wish I would've done a history-book AAR, but the lack of screens and my want to write overdid that thought. ;)

@ Enewald: I wouldn't say he's immortal just yet! :p But, that means he must be the next closest thing to an immortal!

@ BritishImperial: I would assume someone like yourself enjoys or likes a class such as that. Well, at least I won't have to worry about you having stolen my outlines for the AAR, I swear, I sometimes think you've somehow gotten a hold of it! :p

@ Erie_Patriot: Yeah, the Yanks actually did. I minor blemish on a rather successful 1861 campaign for myself. I, btw, don't regard myself at any measure of being a good Vicky player, if anything I'm average or below average, but it's still so much fun to play! :D

@ Hardraade: Well, Tom is fed up and hopes to be finished with war, whether or not that's true, well, I guess that's up to me :p. Anyhow, Tom still has a major problem that he's never heard of... Evan Harris (if that gives you any idea of where he might try to go next.) :eek: