Feedback to Feedback Update I
Semi-Lobster--Yes, thank you so much. Yes, the mod is Molleby's Second Punic War Mod, which is still a work in progress and being worked on by many talented people. Check it out!
Ulyanov--thanks for the intrest. There will be plenty of screenshots, don't worry!
Coz1--Again, your feedback is most welcomed. I'm glad you're here, stay along for the ride. I'm pleased you think it worked well.
Mettermrck--You also, good sir. The weight of your name alone adds a little gravitas to this AAR
Stay tuned if you liked this. Its merely the beginning!
Stynlan--I'm glad you like it, stay around, Citizen. You'll see that you're right and the action will begin rather quickly.
VILenin--Thanks for replying. That prologue bit was tricky, I still feel it was a little week. But the primary sources on "Hannibal's Oath" are scant for detail. Polybius writes the most, but it still amounts to only a few lines. I tried to expand on that and make it a proper scene.
To all Lurkers, I hope you like this offering as well. Feel free to comment, as critique fuels my writing and makes me a better author, which is really why I do this in the first place.
How did everyone find the music? Fitting?
Second Update Soon...