This was a good AAR.
It was written with a good balance between indeph lore development and engaging pace, with excitement fueled by uncertainty. I appreciate that you stuck by it for as long as you did.
If I had one wish it would be that you'd written one additional chapter of the story, simply dedicated to wrapping up character development, summarizing the political powers of the world and just general historical and societal reflection of what the world has developed to.
Anyway, great writing and thanks for the adventure.
It was written with a good balance between indeph lore development and engaging pace, with excitement fueled by uncertainty. I appreciate that you stuck by it for as long as you did.
If I had one wish it would be that you'd written one additional chapter of the story, simply dedicated to wrapping up character development, summarizing the political powers of the world and just general historical and societal reflection of what the world has developed to.
Anyway, great writing and thanks for the adventure.