Flower of Scotland- An Old Gods DLC
Ed: this game is playing TOG on Vanilla starting as Scotland from the beginning though the story itself commences some 180 years later. I am really enjoying CKII-1st time I've played it but not the 1st AAR that I have written: I have written many in many different genres-Space (Galactic Civilisations), Football Management (Football Manager) and for my Total War Games. I love it and generally people have liked my stories.
I have decided to launch it a couple of hundred years in as I now feel that I have the hang of the game. I am playing normal difficulty and will not reload from here on in. My dynasty: the Mac Ailpins have managed to see off the Viking threat and pretty much unified all 3 Celtic Kingdoms of Scotland, Ireland and Wales: there have been some twists and turns of late and so enjoy...
1 last thing-if you are enjoying this please let me know-there is nothing more lonely than writing for people and not receiving any feedback (good or bad)
Thanks
I. Stronghold of Forres, Ducal Seat of the Scottish Dukes of Moray
October 1063
There were few occasions when the old man, his grandfather, scared the twelve year old boy but his throwaway comment was just one of them.
‘You must never say that again in my presence boy!’ He thundered his wizened face growing a mottled shade of red- ‘NEVER! Do you hear?’
The boy cast his eyes downwards-a tactic that he had learned much benefited him whenever his father used to admonish him. He missed his Lord and master-dead these past few years…of his mother he had little memory-she had passed of a fever when he was still a babe.
‘Yes grandfather-I just thought-‘
‘Don’t think boy!’ Another outburst-his tactic was not working. The boy cast his eyes towards the massive oaken doors of the great hall, wishing that he were outside, maybe on the ramparts, marvelling at the fury of the seas in the October storm. Servants and scullions hastened about their business, not wishing to draw any unwelcome attention to themselves. The child may be the nominal Lord and Master but it was his Grandfather, Eadulf of Buckingham, widower of the old Duchess, Dervorgilla, who really reigned. The old man, once a fearsome Anglo Saxon warrior, was in his dotage now, but every so often his ire, or some passion, would remind all of his mettlesome past. His anger caused him to revert to his native Saxon tongue and a stream of expletives issued forth followed by a blow to the back of the lad’s head.
Richard, Duke of Moray, Earl of Caithness and Moray was, nevertheless, a child and as such he could be schooled by his elders and betters. It had been an innocuous comment about being pleased to hold two Earldoms and a Dukedom that had roused the wrath of his grandfather. He knew that his forebears had been mighty kings and queens and that somewhere in the past his particular branch of the Mac Ailpin clan had contrived to lose not one but three kingdoms, those of Scotland, Ireland and Wales.
The old man grabbed Richard by the chin-a vice-like iron grip of a man who used to easily handle a broadsword and spear, ‘your grandam, my beloved wife would cast you down lad to hear you speak thus-you hear?’
‘Yes Sire’ tears had come unbidden to his face now-he knew that to cry was woman’s work but he could not help it-it was as much as he could do to stop himself from breaking down altogether but he knew that such a reaction would earn him a beating so he tried as best he could to compose himself. Yes he knew that his grandmother-‘she who should have been Queen’ had strove all her life to restore the throne to her side of the family. She no doubt remembered greater splendour when she was a child, being the granddaughter of a great King, Kenneth III, deposed by his enemies at the height of his powers and who, at the time had been overlord of all Scotland, Wales and nearly all of Ireland. Earlier conquests of his sires had united the Celtic speaking peoples of those rugged countries under a common hegemony, principally that of Dervorgilla’s great great grandmother Bethoc ‘the Great’ who had finally seen off the threat of the Norsemen, subjugated the Welsh and begun the task of bringing the unruly Irish to heel.
‘As easily as you may rise boy so may you fall,’ Eadulf intoned, calmer now as if reading his thoughts. ‘Go! Leave me-I grow weary.’ Richard needed no second bidding and bolted for the dubious ‘safety’ of the gathering storm outside.
It was huddled on the rampart that he was found by Moray’s Steward, knees clutched to his chest, his pretty oval face wet with rain and tears. Prince David-his uncle and son of Scotland’s ruling monarch looked down at the ragged pile, at first with bemusement and then with growing understanding. He had arrived fresh from a mission to extract tithes from the gentry in Caithness-an unpleasant mission but a necessary one nonetheless. He was honoured to be a member of Moray's Council and took his duties seriously.
‘Fie lad-what furies have driven you to tarry here?’ The Prince should have been heir to the Kingdom of Scotland and Ireland but whose loyalties to his wife, Richard’s Aunt and to Moray had so angered his father that he had been disinherited of the succession in favour of his younger sister. Always he had shown Richard much kindness, whether it was helping school him in the brutal art of war, or telling tales of derring-do and valour he always had an encouraging word or a twinkle in his eye for his nephew.
The boy lowered his head between his knees and just sobbed. Without a word the Prince stooped down and in one swift and fluid movement, picked Richard up and carried him inside. Majestic and terrible though the storm was to witness, it was no place for children, who were particularly susceptible to all manner of agues and ailments.
As they re-entered the Great Hall David commanded the main fire to be piled high and unceremoniously dumped the lad onto a pile of straw and rushes.
‘Bring me blankets and a cloak!’ he shouted to no one in particular. The called-for items appeared in a trice. ‘Strip lad! You must get warm-we would not want the mighty duke to catch his death of cold would we?’
When he was warmer and calmer Richard at last spoke, telling his kinsman of what had befallen earlier. He had noted the old man was no longer in the Hall when he had been carried in-mayhap he had taken early to his bed. Hopefully…
For his part the Prince listened quietly and then reminded the lad that his own father, the reigning King of Scots, sometimes called ‘Malmure The Unready’ in ironic reference to his presiding over the struggle to reunite Scotland and Ireland after the Kingdoms had split half a century earlier, was also Richard’s grandfather and that the young Duke was one of the strongest claimants to the throne-in fact he had a better claim to it, to be frank, than the King himself. David had no particular love for Eadulf-he saw him as a coarse foreigner who more often than not mangled his beloved Celtic tongue but in one thing he had been right: Richard should never stop striving to attain what was his by right: overlordship of all three Celtic Kingdoms.
‘And you had better move fast when you attain manhood my boy for the King of England casts covetous eyes both northwards and Westwards-particularly to Wales, which is no longer held by us Mac Ailpins.’ Aye Richard knew that when the Kingdoms had split in what his Irish brethren liked to call the siosma iontach, the Welsh had risen up under one of their petty Lords and cast off Scottish dominion. Giselbert 'The Good', King of populous England had long talked of bringing the Welsh to heel and had recently conquered Powys under some trumped up claim. David ruffled the boys hair and let out one of his customary brays of laughter, a trait which endeared him to both peasants and nobility alike, and had many in the Hall smiling as it echoed across the hall.
‘I know what will cheer you up son’ (oh how he wished that he was his father…) he said, eyes glittering with mischief, ‘but the hourglass says that it will soon be dark and time for your bed. I will go fetch your little brother.’
At this Richard’s eyes lit up for he doted on his brother Robert, his heir and truest friend, contrary to all the custom of the time. Because they were so close in age, just one year separated them, they were more like twins than brothers. Yes that would brighten his gloomy day that had taken on a hue much like the skies outside-there was one thing, though, that would remain with him: he would indeed do all he could to regain what was his by right-he, or his issue, would once more rule the three kingdoms…
Ed: this game is playing TOG on Vanilla starting as Scotland from the beginning though the story itself commences some 180 years later. I am really enjoying CKII-1st time I've played it but not the 1st AAR that I have written: I have written many in many different genres-Space (Galactic Civilisations), Football Management (Football Manager) and for my Total War Games. I love it and generally people have liked my stories.
I have decided to launch it a couple of hundred years in as I now feel that I have the hang of the game. I am playing normal difficulty and will not reload from here on in. My dynasty: the Mac Ailpins have managed to see off the Viking threat and pretty much unified all 3 Celtic Kingdoms of Scotland, Ireland and Wales: there have been some twists and turns of late and so enjoy...
1 last thing-if you are enjoying this please let me know-there is nothing more lonely than writing for people and not receiving any feedback (good or bad)
Thanks
Table of Contents
Chapter 1: Forres, Scotland, October 1053: Reign of King Malmure The Unready
Chapter 2: Forres, Scotland, August 1064: Reign of King Malmure The Unready
Chapter 3: Wiki Entry: Malmure I King of Scots
Chapter 4: Scone, Scotland, January 1097: Reign of Queen Fenella I
Chapter 5: Friesland, Low Countries, April 1097: Reign of King Richard I
Chapter 6: Dumbarton, Scotland, February 1124: Reign of King Richard I
Chapter 7: Rhuddalt, Wales, October 1124: Reign of King Laurence I
Chapter 8: Roscommon, Connacht, Ireland, September 1126: Reign of King Laurence I
Chapter 9: Scone, Gowrie, November 1141: Reign of King Laurence I
Chapter 10: Glasgow, Strathclyde, March 2014: Lecture on the Reign of King Laurence the Blessed
Chapter 11: Scone, Gowrie, June 1161: Reign of King Ewan I
Chapter 12: Poznan, Poland, May 1162: Reign of King Ewan I
Chapter 13: Essay Treatise: King Ewan The Great 1117-1192
Chapter 14: Scone, Gowrie, January 1198: Reign of King Macbeth I
Chapter 15: Scone, Gowrie, September 1215: Reign of King Uhtred I
Chapter 16: 1. The Red Dragon and the White Lion rise (Gwynedd and Leinster’s uprisings) 1222-1225. Reign of King Uhtred I
Chapter 17: The Nephews Revolt (Munster and Macbeth of the Isles's uprisings) 1227-1234. Reign of King Uhtred I
Chapter 18: Bamburgh, Northumberland, January 1236: Reign of King Farquhar I
Chapter 19: Bath, England, January 1244: Reign of King Farquhar I
Chapter 20: Inverinan, Argyll, September 1269: Reign of King Farquhar I
State of the Nations February 1272: Reign of King Farquhar I
Chapter 21: Abingdon, Oxfordshire, September 1278: Reign of King Farquhar I
Chapter 22: Dunragit, Galloway, April 1280: Reign of King Donal II
Chapter 2: Forres, Scotland, August 1064: Reign of King Malmure The Unready
Chapter 3: Wiki Entry: Malmure I King of Scots
Chapter 4: Scone, Scotland, January 1097: Reign of Queen Fenella I
Chapter 5: Friesland, Low Countries, April 1097: Reign of King Richard I
Chapter 6: Dumbarton, Scotland, February 1124: Reign of King Richard I
Chapter 7: Rhuddalt, Wales, October 1124: Reign of King Laurence I
Chapter 8: Roscommon, Connacht, Ireland, September 1126: Reign of King Laurence I
Chapter 9: Scone, Gowrie, November 1141: Reign of King Laurence I
Chapter 10: Glasgow, Strathclyde, March 2014: Lecture on the Reign of King Laurence the Blessed
Chapter 11: Scone, Gowrie, June 1161: Reign of King Ewan I
Chapter 12: Poznan, Poland, May 1162: Reign of King Ewan I
Chapter 13: Essay Treatise: King Ewan The Great 1117-1192
Chapter 14: Scone, Gowrie, January 1198: Reign of King Macbeth I
Chapter 15: Scone, Gowrie, September 1215: Reign of King Uhtred I
Chapter 16: 1. The Red Dragon and the White Lion rise (Gwynedd and Leinster’s uprisings) 1222-1225. Reign of King Uhtred I
Chapter 17: The Nephews Revolt (Munster and Macbeth of the Isles's uprisings) 1227-1234. Reign of King Uhtred I
Chapter 18: Bamburgh, Northumberland, January 1236: Reign of King Farquhar I
Chapter 19: Bath, England, January 1244: Reign of King Farquhar I
Chapter 20: Inverinan, Argyll, September 1269: Reign of King Farquhar I
State of the Nations February 1272: Reign of King Farquhar I
Chapter 21: Abingdon, Oxfordshire, September 1278: Reign of King Farquhar I
Chapter 22: Dunragit, Galloway, April 1280: Reign of King Donal II
I. Stronghold of Forres, Ducal Seat of the Scottish Dukes of Moray
October 1063


There were few occasions when the old man, his grandfather, scared the twelve year old boy but his throwaway comment was just one of them.
‘You must never say that again in my presence boy!’ He thundered his wizened face growing a mottled shade of red- ‘NEVER! Do you hear?’
The boy cast his eyes downwards-a tactic that he had learned much benefited him whenever his father used to admonish him. He missed his Lord and master-dead these past few years…of his mother he had little memory-she had passed of a fever when he was still a babe.
‘Yes grandfather-I just thought-‘
‘Don’t think boy!’ Another outburst-his tactic was not working. The boy cast his eyes towards the massive oaken doors of the great hall, wishing that he were outside, maybe on the ramparts, marvelling at the fury of the seas in the October storm. Servants and scullions hastened about their business, not wishing to draw any unwelcome attention to themselves. The child may be the nominal Lord and Master but it was his Grandfather, Eadulf of Buckingham, widower of the old Duchess, Dervorgilla, who really reigned. The old man, once a fearsome Anglo Saxon warrior, was in his dotage now, but every so often his ire, or some passion, would remind all of his mettlesome past. His anger caused him to revert to his native Saxon tongue and a stream of expletives issued forth followed by a blow to the back of the lad’s head.
Richard, Duke of Moray, Earl of Caithness and Moray was, nevertheless, a child and as such he could be schooled by his elders and betters. It had been an innocuous comment about being pleased to hold two Earldoms and a Dukedom that had roused the wrath of his grandfather. He knew that his forebears had been mighty kings and queens and that somewhere in the past his particular branch of the Mac Ailpin clan had contrived to lose not one but three kingdoms, those of Scotland, Ireland and Wales.
The old man grabbed Richard by the chin-a vice-like iron grip of a man who used to easily handle a broadsword and spear, ‘your grandam, my beloved wife would cast you down lad to hear you speak thus-you hear?’
‘Yes Sire’ tears had come unbidden to his face now-he knew that to cry was woman’s work but he could not help it-it was as much as he could do to stop himself from breaking down altogether but he knew that such a reaction would earn him a beating so he tried as best he could to compose himself. Yes he knew that his grandmother-‘she who should have been Queen’ had strove all her life to restore the throne to her side of the family. She no doubt remembered greater splendour when she was a child, being the granddaughter of a great King, Kenneth III, deposed by his enemies at the height of his powers and who, at the time had been overlord of all Scotland, Wales and nearly all of Ireland. Earlier conquests of his sires had united the Celtic speaking peoples of those rugged countries under a common hegemony, principally that of Dervorgilla’s great great grandmother Bethoc ‘the Great’ who had finally seen off the threat of the Norsemen, subjugated the Welsh and begun the task of bringing the unruly Irish to heel.
‘As easily as you may rise boy so may you fall,’ Eadulf intoned, calmer now as if reading his thoughts. ‘Go! Leave me-I grow weary.’ Richard needed no second bidding and bolted for the dubious ‘safety’ of the gathering storm outside.
It was huddled on the rampart that he was found by Moray’s Steward, knees clutched to his chest, his pretty oval face wet with rain and tears. Prince David-his uncle and son of Scotland’s ruling monarch looked down at the ragged pile, at first with bemusement and then with growing understanding. He had arrived fresh from a mission to extract tithes from the gentry in Caithness-an unpleasant mission but a necessary one nonetheless. He was honoured to be a member of Moray's Council and took his duties seriously.

‘Fie lad-what furies have driven you to tarry here?’ The Prince should have been heir to the Kingdom of Scotland and Ireland but whose loyalties to his wife, Richard’s Aunt and to Moray had so angered his father that he had been disinherited of the succession in favour of his younger sister. Always he had shown Richard much kindness, whether it was helping school him in the brutal art of war, or telling tales of derring-do and valour he always had an encouraging word or a twinkle in his eye for his nephew.
The boy lowered his head between his knees and just sobbed. Without a word the Prince stooped down and in one swift and fluid movement, picked Richard up and carried him inside. Majestic and terrible though the storm was to witness, it was no place for children, who were particularly susceptible to all manner of agues and ailments.
As they re-entered the Great Hall David commanded the main fire to be piled high and unceremoniously dumped the lad onto a pile of straw and rushes.
‘Bring me blankets and a cloak!’ he shouted to no one in particular. The called-for items appeared in a trice. ‘Strip lad! You must get warm-we would not want the mighty duke to catch his death of cold would we?’
When he was warmer and calmer Richard at last spoke, telling his kinsman of what had befallen earlier. He had noted the old man was no longer in the Hall when he had been carried in-mayhap he had taken early to his bed. Hopefully…
For his part the Prince listened quietly and then reminded the lad that his own father, the reigning King of Scots, sometimes called ‘Malmure The Unready’ in ironic reference to his presiding over the struggle to reunite Scotland and Ireland after the Kingdoms had split half a century earlier, was also Richard’s grandfather and that the young Duke was one of the strongest claimants to the throne-in fact he had a better claim to it, to be frank, than the King himself. David had no particular love for Eadulf-he saw him as a coarse foreigner who more often than not mangled his beloved Celtic tongue but in one thing he had been right: Richard should never stop striving to attain what was his by right: overlordship of all three Celtic Kingdoms.
‘And you had better move fast when you attain manhood my boy for the King of England casts covetous eyes both northwards and Westwards-particularly to Wales, which is no longer held by us Mac Ailpins.’ Aye Richard knew that when the Kingdoms had split in what his Irish brethren liked to call the siosma iontach, the Welsh had risen up under one of their petty Lords and cast off Scottish dominion. Giselbert 'The Good', King of populous England had long talked of bringing the Welsh to heel and had recently conquered Powys under some trumped up claim. David ruffled the boys hair and let out one of his customary brays of laughter, a trait which endeared him to both peasants and nobility alike, and had many in the Hall smiling as it echoed across the hall.
‘I know what will cheer you up son’ (oh how he wished that he was his father…) he said, eyes glittering with mischief, ‘but the hourglass says that it will soon be dark and time for your bed. I will go fetch your little brother.’
At this Richard’s eyes lit up for he doted on his brother Robert, his heir and truest friend, contrary to all the custom of the time. Because they were so close in age, just one year separated them, they were more like twins than brothers. Yes that would brighten his gloomy day that had taken on a hue much like the skies outside-there was one thing, though, that would remain with him: he would indeed do all he could to regain what was his by right-he, or his issue, would once more rule the three kingdoms…

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