First the Good:
Excellent start, I liked your use of the juxtaposition of using both historical figures and yourself in the story. That gives it both a historical feel as well as a personal one.
And congrats on the First Diplomacy AAR on the forum!
The bad:
Non registered users can send comments to you by PM and ask game play related question in the Diplomacy general forum. However in general PM comments should not be reposted in the AAR thread. Let's not clutter this AAR with this discussion on that though. Further comments on this question can be posted by all at: http://forum.paradoxplaza.com/forum/showthread.php?t=215405
Excellent start, I liked your use of the juxtaposition of using both historical figures and yourself in the story. That gives it both a historical feel as well as a personal one.
And congrats on the First Diplomacy AAR on the forum!
The bad:
Non registered users can send comments to you by PM and ask game play related question in the Diplomacy general forum. However in general PM comments should not be reposted in the AAR thread. Let's not clutter this AAR with this discussion on that though. Further comments on this question can be posted by all at: http://forum.paradoxplaza.com/forum/showthread.php?t=215405