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Margravate of Brandenburg

This AAR is played in IGC 2.3. Polish and Russian unrest set as an historical option. Start year is 1520 and the nation choosen is Brandenburg. Some historical facts about Brandenburg will also be posted, thus letting the reader get a hunch of the real history of Brandenburg.


My goals are:

Brandenburg should be among the five top nations at the end 1792 .

Improve my AAR writing. ;)
 
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Joachim I, 1499-1535

(Note: Under Joachim I the Renaissance blossomed in Brandenburg. He encouraged and supported it financially, attracting many great lawyers, theologians, architects, smiths, and artisans from Meissen and Saxony. The designs and work of the great Italian masters could be seen in the cities of Brandenburg and in particular among the Bürgerhäuse, wealthy citizens homes).
 
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Figuring out figures...

Joachim I, Margrave of Brandenburg, sat in his chamber, long after that the sun had set. Candles spread a damp light as well as the smell of burned beeswax in the room. He was looking at some figures, stating the condition of his realm.

The Margravate of Brandenburg had, according to the latest calculation, a population of 510.000 souls. Most of them defyed the "Römische Christentum". Luther's teachings had grown rapidly and had both the commons as the nobles in a strong grip.

All the goods the Margravate had to offer went to Lubeck. Lubeck, positioned in Mecklenburg, was the center of trade in this part of the world. Controlled and ruled by the Hanseatic League who also had their seat there.

Joachim I could also see that the Margravate had 20.000 infantry, 5000 cavalry and a small artillery unit of 10 cannons. All of them under the command of Casimir, an excellent fieldmarshall. Without looking in the documents, Joachim, also knew that his cousin was married to the Duke of Prussia. The only royal marriage that Brandenburg had. The Duke of Prussia was also the only ruler in the world that had accepted the "Wittenbergische Christentum”.

The Duke of Prussia had many times pointed out the advantages of protestantism to him and even his advisors thought it would be best to convert. This issue had given him many sleepless nights. It was a delicated matter. If he would decide for such conversion, he and his Margravate would be hated for it by the other nations, the clergy would probably revolt, the holy father in Rome would have him banned and worst of it all, what would happen to his brother. His brother, Albert, where not only the Archbishop of Mainz but also a Cardinal. Would it be possible for him to hold his position when his brother converted? As usual, this tought was the most terrifying of them all. He loved his brother very much, but should the love for a brother dictate the politic for a nation? No, said his advisors and Joachim had begun to agree with them.

First thing next morning, Joachim summoned a meating with representatives from the clergy, the nobility and the cities of Brandenburg. In January 6, 1520, the Evangelical Church of Brandeburg was founded.
 
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Hi Morlac!

Always fun to write an AAR. Yes Im trying to take a more narrative tone, but as my english isnt the best Im afraid being stucked and write my AAR twice the time I play the game :(

But what the heck, as long I ( and possible others) get some pleasure out of it :D
 

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God and gold

As expected the decision of the creation of the Evangelic Church of Brandenburg meet resistance. The strongest opposition came from the clergy. Not even the right of marrige could weaken there minds.The decision was however final. The nobility and the burghers supported the idea of conversion.

Changing the state-religion into protestantism granted Joachim controll over the land holdings of the clergy. It was incorporated into the Margravates realm. The confiscated goods was estimated worth about 75.000 thaler. An enormous sum, that despite the Margravates already rather full treasury, contributed a lot to an even richer one.

“My lord, You have gained controll over the church and its treasury. The people maybe doesnt love you for this, but they will soon get used to this new order. Think on how much better they will understand the words of God, now when they can hear it in their own language.” Joachim listened to the sound of his chancelor Jurgen von Fritsches voice. “And think of all the gold you have gained. With all this gold you probably is as rich as the emperor himself” Jurgen continued. “I probably am” Joachim replied. “But gold in itself is useless. It is first when you spend it on usefull things that it can make a different.” “So what will you spend it on my lord?” his chancelors asked. “How strange this my sound, I will spend the gold to get even more gold” Joachim answered with a smile on his lips.

The gold was spend on promoting tax collectors, thus giving the Margravate of Brandenburg a more efficant economy. Every city, every village, every man, women and child was carefully noted in the tax collectors books, so that no one could evade from paying taxes. It wasnt a popular reform, but it would higly increase the income of the Margravate.

During that summer, news reached the castle in Potsdam, that Sweden had broke its ties to Denmark and declared a state of war. This conflict seemed to drag more nations into it, when England, as an ally to Sweden, and Russia, as an ally to Denmark, joined in.

In April 1521 Joachim called for the Financial council. He wished to be briefed about the Margravates economy. “What the status of our economy?” The question seemed to be asked to no one special, but the chancelor was the one to answer. “ It havent been better my lord. The promotion of tax collectors have boost our economy. As for last month we collected taxes worth 3900 thaler, the production from your own lands along with other different fees granted you another 900 thaler. Unfortunaly we didnt recive any income from trade. As you are well aware of that damned Hanseatic league controll all the trade in our realm.” “And our expensives?” Once again it was the chancelor who answered. “Well, Your army under the command of Casimir cost us 1300 thaler each month to supply, then we spend another 3200 thaler to raise the spirit of the people. Giving you 300 each month to your treasury. If I would be frankly my lord. I can think of a million other things to do with thoose 3200 each month..” Joachim raised his hand, thus stoping his chancelor to give any suggestion about what he thought would be the right way of spending them. “The people of Brandenburg are my children and I am there father. Isnt the happines of your children closest to your heart, my dear chancelor” He asked. “Well, yes, of course my lord” the chancelor replied. “About the Hanseatic league. We cant let them control our trade for ever” Joachim stated quickly, not to embaress his chancelor any more in front of the others. The man in charge of commercial affairs answered “ If we would like to take control over the trade, we would be forced to send merchants to Lubeck. There is where all the commerce are.” “Well, let send some then” Joachim stated.

Right after the meeting the first merchant was send to Lubeck, soon followed by others. The investments in peoples happines payed off in July. The conversion was now forgotten and it seemed like it had never happened. Even the clergy seemed satisfyed with this new order.
 
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Where did u buy your game (what version, NA/Sweedish etc...) because I cant tell where you are from your writing (well i know brandenburg so I assume Lupek is Holstein)

You work fast. I wish I could atleast get a response to mine jeesh.
 

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Hi I.A!

Always a pleasure to chatt with you :D I have a swedish version, , born, raised and live in Sweden as the swede I am.

Lubeck is the capital/ cityname of the Hanseatic league, in the province of Mecklenburg. It has a COT. Holstein is just above Mecklenburg.

Starting in the year 1520 with IGC seems to be alot different from the regular IGC. :D
 

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Knowing our neighbours

In 1522 a messenger from Wurtemburg arrives. He declares that the people of the Duchy of Wurtemburg have seen the light and become protestants. Joachim welcome this new friend of faith and send the messenger back with an proposition that his niece and some noble man of Wurtemburg of an appropiate kind would unite in marrige. The proposition is accepted and the friendship between our two nations is so good that an alliance is created.

In Mars, Fieldmarshall Casimir asked for an audience with Joachim. He wished to discuss the situation of the Margravates defence and its armed forces. The result of this meeting was that Joachim granted funds for an upgrade of the capital fortress and for the construction of more cannons to increase the fire power of the army. As the war between Sweden and England on one hand and Denmark and Russia on the other raged on, Joachim also dispatched a message to the Czar of Russia. Joachim wished to improve the relations and therefore offered one of his cousins to marriage a russian noble man. The Czar did gratefully accept this offer.

In January 1523 the head of the ”Hofkammer” (the Treasury), Lutmar von Raabs, recived a letter from Lubeck, clerly indicating that our merchants there was winning marketshares. The Margravates merchants had the second strongest present in Lubeck, right after the Hanseatic Legue itself.

Joachim inspected the new walls of Berlin, by his side his fieldmarshall Casimir walked. “This higher walls will certainly increase Berlins capacity to defend her self in case of an siege” Casimir remarked, pointing with his whole hand at the walls. “Yes it certainly will” Joachim answered. “It is however a shame that we living in a world where such walls are needed. It would had pleased me more to spend our funds to, for example, build an university. Imagine what such a place would mean for Brandenburg” “Yes, I can imagine the greatness in that, but what is the meaning of building an university and then see it be burned down, because we arent capable to defend it?” Casimir answered. “Your right. I dont regret for listening to your advice and it was however my decision to raise these new walls. The war could be closer then we think. Reports talks about a great war between France and England raging in the west just as we speak” Joachim replied. “Apparently the french wish to get hold of the english province of Calais”. Casimir nodded. He was well aware of the french demands on Calais. Hopefully this, nor the northern war between Sweden and Denmark, would escalate so that Brandenburg would be mixed in, but if they where it was his job to see to that Brandenburg was victorius.
 
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Yoghurt

I have a very, very minor suggestion.

You have been using the term Margrave (an English translation of what in German would be Markgraf). In itself, that's fine and quite accurate, but you've used it both to refer to the head of state ("Joachim I, Margrave of Brandenburg") and to the state itself ("He wished to discuss the situation of the Margraves defence and its armed forces."). That's a bit jarring, at least for me.

I think the state would be referred to in English as a "margravate." I *think* that in German it would be called a markgrafschaft.

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Note, however, that this is only the English translation of the German title. The equivalent titles in Great Britain itself are "Marquess" for the office-holder and "Marquessate" for the political entity. Depending of course on circumstances of time and place. Before the modern era of standardized spelling, the French "Marquis" was often used instead of "Marquess", and some Scottish Marquesses prefer the French spelling in honor of their old alliance.

Personally, before I started researching the subject, I thought that "Marquis" was the correct usage in England. Little did I know! (And while I've done a bit of research, I'm no expert, so anyone who knows better should correct me...) ;)
 

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Thanx for info Morlac!

I´ll try to use the word "margravate" when refering to the state and the word "margrave" when refering to the big guy himself. I´ll edit my posts. Please feel free to come with more suggestions so that I my be a better AAR writer.

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Rumble at the borders

“My lord, King of Poland have declared a state of war against the Teutonic knights. It seems like the Duke of Prussia will support him, as he is a vassal to the King of Poland and that our neigbours Duchy of Pomerania and the Hanseatic league will support the knights.” Joachim listened to the words of his chancelor. It was a rather chilly August evening. “This was disturbing news” Joachim replied. “Dispatch a message to Casimir that he shall hold carefully watch at our borders, so that this war wont spill over into our territory”.

Casimir did what the Margrave requested. He send even riders into the territory of both Poland and Pommerania to collect information about the war. They soon returned and reported that Pommerania had an army of 10.000 men waiting in Eastern Pommerania, another 10.000 men was on the way from Mecklenburg to join them. Possibly the Duke of Pommerania and the Hanseatic league would unite there forces and then invade Poland. Some days later the riders, that was send into Poland, returned. “Sir, an army of 40.000 men led by Jercy Radziwill march upon Eastern Pommerania. They are followed by an army of 23.000 men led by Jan Tarnowski that, believe it or not, are followed by another army of 39.000 men led by Konstanty Ostrogski.” The seargent that reported the news, knew as well as Casimir, that this meant that Pommerania, and possibly even the Hanseatic league, would fall in matter of days in the hands of the King of Poland. No way they could defend them self from such an enormus force led by three great commanders. Casimir ordered his horse to be sadled and went, as fast as he could, to the castle in Potsdam.

In Potsdam, Casimir and Joachim hold a closed meeting. The men that guarded the doors, could hear them argue. Apparently, fieldmarshal Casimir wished for some intervinion of some kind. An intervinion that wasnt fully appriciated by the Margrave. Next day, Joachim summoned his council, the Hofrat. He wished to hear the oppinion of the others. Casimir had proposed to the Margrave that Brandenburg would declare war upon Pommerania. He meant that it was just a matter of time before the Duchy and maybe even the Hanseatic league would fall. Wouldnt it be better to deny the King of Poland such an conquest, and take a piece for them self. After debating the issue in several hours, the majority seemed to support Casimirs idea, Joachim listened to his advisors opinion and finally agreed in dispatching a war decleration to the Duke of Pommerania.

In 1523, October 8, the messenger from Brandenburg reached the Duke of Pommerania. Brandenburg was now in a state of war.
 
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The heat is increasing

A letter arrived in Potsdam.

“My lord,
After our war decleration, news reached me that the polish troops had annhiliated both the Pommeranian as the Hanseatic troops. After that, the polish commander led an victorius assault upon the fortress of Eastern Pommerania and took control over that province. I divided our army. I myself marched with 13.000 men to Western Pommerania, Colonel Alberst took command over the other unit of 13.000 men and marsched to Mecklenburg. As you know, both the Teutonic knights and the Hanseatic league honored their alliance with the Duke of Pommerania and declared war upon us. So far we havent seen any of thoose knights and if God will, we wont.

written by his own hand at the walls of Stettin

Casimir, Fieldmarshal of Brandenburg”

After reading the letter, Joachim ordered that 4.000 new soldiers would be recruited. The new force was to be led by Colonel Becker. Becker was ordered to marsch to the province of Bremen. When Becker reached Bremen he took a quick look at the fortress walls and understod that his small force had no chance of taking it. For such a task he would need more men and above all he needed cannons. He decided to write a letter to the Margrave, asking for reinforcements. Just when he had sat down at his desk, out of the woods, a small unit of Hanseatic troops swarmed over the camp. Apparently the Hanseatic league had start recruiting just before Becker arrived to Bremen. Becker, thinking he was meating a much larger army then his own, quikly ordered a retreat. He retreated to Mecklenburg, where Colonel Alberst was sieging Lubeck. When Becker arrived to the camp of Colonel Alberst he was followed by the enemy. Colonel Alberst, listening to Beckers talk about the great enemy force that had forced him out of Bremen, ordered his army to lift the siege of Lubeck and retreat.

The confusion ended first when the army reached Magdeburg. Apparently the “great Hanseatic force” where nothing more then 4000 riders and a few cannons.Colonel Becker was dismissed and Colonel Alberst was told to march upon the enemy and drive them off. Colonel Alberst knew that if he, after his last blunder, would fail, the Margrave probably would have him dismissed for incompetens. Luckily for him he didnt. He was able to begin sieging Lubeck once again.
 

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“My lord, Poland and the Teutonic knights have signed a peace. Poland is given control over the province of Kurland.” Joachim listened to his chancelor. This could mean that the Teutonic knights could send their forces to help their allies. It also meant that the Duke of Pommerania was given Eastern Pommerania back under his jurisdiction, now when the polish garrison left that province.

The Teutonic knights never send any forces. On the other hand, the Duke of Pommerania recruited a new army of 7.000 men in Eastern Pommerania. They marched towards the province of Brandenburg. The Margrave, his family and his staff was evacuated from Potsdam. Potsdam was in the vicinity of Berlin and if the enemy was heading this way Potsdam wouldnt be safe place to be in. The Margrave took shelter in a castle in Magdeburg. From there he recruited more men to the war.

In Mars 1525 Colonel Albers was able to take the Hanseatic capital in Mecklenburg. He left a small unit to garrison the fortress and moved on to Bremen when a letter arrived to the Margrave.

“My lord,

We are starting to break the walls of the fortress. The enemy has a strong garrison though and diseases have decimated my army. I will need more men if I ever shall be able to take Western Pommerania.

signed

Casimir, Fieldmarshal of Brandenburg”

Joachim sended reinforcements immideatily to his fieldmarshall.

The investments on upgrading the fortress in the capital seemed to pay off. The Pommeranian unit that invaded the province of Brandenburg was unable to start a siege. It was not until another 7.000 men was send there by the Duke of Pommerania, that they where able to threat the capital for real. By then Colonel Albers had already captured Bremen and was on his way to Eastern Pommerania.

In January 1526 Hannover converted to protestantism. This delightfull moment was celebrated by initiating a royal marriage between our two nations. Casimirs siege of Western Pommerania ended in April. He was orderd to unite with Colonel Albers in Eastern Pommerania. Togheter they had an army of over 20.000 men sieging the Duke of Pommeranias capital. This rather huge assembling of men led to effects that no one had calculated with. Casimir and Albers soon found out that the province couldnt supply such an numerous army. When the year ended they had lost over 6000 men due to diseas.

This report clouded the Margraves mind but some other reports made him delighted. The Palatines and Hessen had converted to protestantism. January 1527 was also the time when the peace negotiations with the Hanseatic league ended. The province of Mecklenburg and Bremen was to be given to the Margrave of Brandenburg. Meaning that the Hanseatic league wouldnt exist any more and all its possesions would be the possesion of the Margrave.

Joachim I could now, to his old titles, add Duke of Mecklenburg and Bremen.
 

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Originally posted by Yoghurt
Thanx for info Morlac!

I´ll try to use the word "margravate" when refering to the state and the word "margrave" when refering to the big guy himself. I´ll edit my posts. Please feel free to come with more suggestions so that I my be a better AAR writer.

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Let us know what kind of suggestions you are looking for:

  • Spelling/Grammar:
    Since I think you said that you are Swedish, I'm assuming English is a 2nd (or 3rd) language for you. Therefore, I have refrained from making any type of spelling or grammar corrections. (Well, I almost always refrain, but it was harder in this case, because you said you were writing to improve your writing skills.)
  • General Literary Critique:
    A general catchall category, and what I think most people would mean when soliciting feedback. Ranges from basic ("I like how you handle X, Y, and Z, as shown here...") to advanced ("I see a tendency to stress A and B in your descriptions of people, to the possible loss of C. This leads to my seeing your characters in the following ways, which perhaps you don't intend..."). You might also want to specify whether you're looking for the basic or advanced type...
  • Accuracy:
    Another catch-all category. This covers all sorts of "fact-checking" issues (like my nitpick about the margrave and my subsequent digression about the difference between margrave, markgraf, marquess, and marquis.) It also covers things like anachronistic language (using modern words or expressions like "superpower" or old but not period language like "ramrod-straight" prior to the invention of the muzzle-loading guns that used ramrods)

I'm sure people can think of other kinds of feedback, but those are three broad areas that cover a big chunk of the terrain. (Sorry for getting preachy. I've been involved with a lot of discussions on the EU2 forum regarding feedback and AAR reviews, so a lot of this is very fresh in my mind...) ;)
 

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Originally posted by Yoghurt
Well guys, tell me. Is this starting to be a book or an AAR? So far I have only described 7 years of game play am I overdoing it?

Short answer:
You're not overdoing it if you are having fun writing it.

Long answer:
Depends on how ambitious you are and how you want to shape the storyline. So far, you seem to have moved well beyond the very straightforward "event log" style of AAR, towards something which I think of as the "hybrid" AAR. It's still clearly recognizable as a description of the events of a game, but those things begin to be subordinated to some kind of overall storyline. The AAR mentioned by J. Passeportout is yet another type, the totally narrative AAR. It focuses almost exclusively on character and story development. The underlying game play is deeply buried, and a casual reader might not be able to even determine that it's tied to a game.

(The hybrid, by the way, is the most common form of AAR in my opinion...)

If you are striving to write a hybrid, then you need to consider what your story development goals will be. Perhaps you will only go into this much detail at the beginning, and then become much more terse as time goes on and the author has established patterns for the reader (e.g. this is how I handle rebellions, it then happens periodically for the next thirty years...) This is very common for authors in this situation who decide they don't want to devote that kind of time to writing, but it is also a common device for authors who have a more limited story in mind, and don't want to push it further.

Or perhaps you will pick certain "pivotal events" or improtant historical figures to write about at this level of detail, and go with a more abbreviated style for long periods in between (that's what I've been doing in my AAR).

Or, and this is the least common, perhaps you have plenty of time and will write at this level of detail for the entire 300 years...
 

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Hi Morlac!

Spelling/Grammar:

Nah, then I would spend more time on the spelling and the grammar then writing a story and I am already spending more time writing the AAR then playing it. It would kill me :D


General Literary Critique:

Would be interresting (pointing at the advanced one).


Accuracy:

Love it and also love knowing more and discuss it, history fan as I am.