Just a few mistakes I found

[Sidith]

Hey guys!

Just a few text errors I found in game. "Suck to your options" I'm not even sure what that is supposed to be. XD

"spells can broken". Probably should be "Spells can be broken".

"Doesn't leaves the village" probably should be "leave" and honestly it would flow better if you just said "Make sure this lieutenant doesn't leave the village alive."

Anyway hope this helps! Also I've had a few crashes here and there when loading new areas. I posted one of the crashes in the files.

- Sidith

 

[AndreaColombo]

Few more:

• "good" should be "goods" Screenshot
• After "here and there" there should be a colon (if what follows is an explanation of what she means by "little things here and there") or a comma (if "little things here and there" is an item of her list) Screenshot
• "craftsman" should be "craftsmen" (sentence is in the plural) Screenshot
• "Siren" should be "Sirin" Screenshot
• "oldest-living" should be "oldest living" (doesn't super make sense with the hyphen) Screenshot
• "First things first" should be "First thing's first" Screenshot
• "If" shouldn't be capitalized since it comes after a comma Screenshot

 

[AndreaColombo]

MOAR:

• Underlined text is descriptive and should be grey, not white. Screenshot
• Missing comma to close the aside. Screenshot
• "His" should be "He" Screenshot
• "Jokes" should be "Joke's" Screenshot
• "years'" shouldn't be possessive; remove the apostrophe Screenshot
• Remove the comma that separates the subject from its verb in the underlined sentence Screenshot

(Obsidian: If you're reading this, note that I reported a number of new typos on page 1 of this thread too; be sure to check them out )

 

[AndreaColombo]

• "shitter" should be "shittier" Screenshot
• "keep an eye of" should be "keep an eye on" Screenshot

 

[Obsidian_Ian]

Greetings again!

After much bug filing I have sent these to the devs. Thank you very much for your time and support in the matter, and keep up the good work!

-Best,
Ian

 

[AndreaColombo]

Few more

• "as give in" should be "as you give in" Screenshot
• "as much as - or as little - as" should be "as much as - or as little as -" (with the last "as" coming before the hyphen that closes the aside) Screenshot
• "mention of isn't" should be "mention of it isn't" Screenshot
• "hesitated" should be "hesitates", since the whole sentence in the present tense; also not sure the "and" after the comma is good for the meter of the sentence Screenshot

 

[AndreaColombo]

MOAR!

• "This Tiersmen" should be "This Tierman" (singular) Screenshot
• Missing comma after "Disfavored" to close the aside Screenshot
• Missing "the" before "Chorus" (should be "spirit of the Chorus") Screenshot
• "soldiers" should be "soldier" (singular) Screenshot
• Missing comma after "Well" (there are other instances of this but I don't seem to have made a printscreen of them) Screenshot

 

[AndreaColombo]

Few more:

• Missing comma before "Helspar", which should be an aside Screenshot
• "has becoming" should be "is becoming" Screenshot
• Appreciate you don't normally use semicolons, but this sentence doesn't make too much sense with a comma; a semicolon is what it needs Screenshot

 

[AndreaColombo]

• "shaved head" and "stave wielding" should be hyphenated, as they are composite adjectives that precede the noun they refer to. Screenshot
• "appreciate you coming" should be "appreciate your coming." Screenshot
• missing comma after "Alagan" to close the aside. Screenshot

 

[Obsidian_Ian]

Hello again!

I've evaluated and filed the listed bugs! Also thanks for all your help, we really appreciate it.

-Best,
Ian

 

[AndreaColombo]

It is I who appreciate your taking time to fix typos; thank you!

 

[Obsidian_Ian]

But of course, it's our pleasure.

-Ian

 

[Hawke64]

"Bleden Marks says.." should be "Bleden Mark says".

 

[Hawke64]

"You find the bastards at killed Isod?" should be "You've found the bastards that killed Isod?"

 

[AndreaColombo]

• Missing space after the ellipsis (two different instances) Screenshot 1 - Screenshot 2
• "weapons shipment" should be either "weapon shipment" or "weapons' shipment", and I'd argue in favor of the former. Screenshot

 

[Obsidian_Ian]

Greetings again!

Just filed these bugs. Keep them coming as you find them! And thanks again for all your help!

-Best,
Ian

 

[ptsekov]

"in the hands my legion" shall be "in the hands of my legion"

 

[Obsidian_Ian]

Thanks again. If you happen to find anything else, feel free to let us know!

-Best,
Ian

 

[ptsekov]

Here is another one.

 

[Obsidian_Ian]

Thank you! This issue has been noted.

-Best,
Ian

 

[Hawke64]

Reply "Let's speak of other matters." shown twice (3, 6). Not sure, if it counts as a typo.