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GhostWriter - I think you'll have your answer, though I'm not sure it is as exciting as I wanted it to be. I've had so little time this week and unfortunately, I've developed bronchitis which has kept me down this weekend. But I was able to get a little out this morning, so I hope it works.

Update coming up directly. Thanks for reading and commenting, everyone. :)
 

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Chapter IX (cont.)

* * *​

The cool evening breeze felt good against Sonny’s sweaty skin. But that was really all he had to be thankful for as he lay on the sandy ground surrounded by the blackness of night. He looked down at his shackled hands attached to a lengthy chain of some weight. The chain passed from the right wrist, through a metal loop imbedded into the stone fountain and then back to his left wrist. He would not be going anywhere until his captors decided it was time.

How had it reached this point after what seemed a welcoming greeting? It was not that hard to figure out. That welcome had only come as Barnes and Montoya were pleased to have another contestant. When Sonny refused, it had angered Barnes and now he found himself chained and waiting. Waiting to live…or die.

As Barnes had marched him down the steps and towards the fountain, Sonny distinctly recalled the words Barnes used to convey his certainty, “You will fight, Sonny. If you do not, I will kill you myself.”

He had said it without thinking twice, though Sonny knew that Barnes far preferred watching Sonny die at someone else’s hands. It was the contest he wanted, not the cold reality of death on his hands. For Sonny, it was reversed. He still did not quite understand what the contest was, but he had no doubt in his mind that Barnes needed to die. At the moment, it would take something like a miracle to get his wish.

Sonny felt his stomach growl as he tried to reach his brow and wipe away some sweat. He was successful enough to push his hair away from his face, but the sweat would return, as would the hunger. He moved his body so that his back was against the fountain, and rested his head on the edge. Perhaps some sleep. But he knew it would not come.

The night would continue like that, with Sonny not allowing himself to think too much on what was ahead of him. When the time came, he would need to act. Until then, he would try to keep his mind focused on the task. That was all that mattered. And if somehow he were killed, then perhaps it was for the best. He had done his time on this Earth and frankly, it had not been the greatest success. He’d allowed his life to move into this direction and he saw very little that could change it. All that remained now was to complete this one last action and then he could be free. Free to disappear, or free to die. He almost hoped for the later. But not yet.

As the morning approached, he watched the various townspeople go about their business. He was struck by how completely the people seemed to take to their lives in this place. Montoya must act as some sort of Lord, not so very different from how Barnes had acted in Lago. As he thought on that, he saw more and more similarities between the two men. It almost seemed that Barnes had attempted to set up his own situation as Montoya had done before him. Perhaps he had failed in his mind and that was what drew him back here. Certainly the law on his heels played into that choice.

But Sonny knew that Barnes’ potential failure surely ate at him. This was an avenue of approach to gain his revenge. But how to play one off the other, especially now as he sat chained and awaiting death? He focused his mind on that and allowed all other thoughts to drift away. But he would not be allowed long to think on it as the slim and tall gentleman who had officiated the previous contest approached him.

“Good morning, sir.” The man was American. Sonny could hear trace elements of northern speech, perhaps New York. He’d heard little of it over the years, but he could pick out that extreme accent. “It is not long before you meet battle. Allow me to go over the rules so you are ready.”

Sonny did not respond, but listened to the man thinking the whole time what insanity must run heavy here. There would be a contest to the death. At the stroke of the large clock that Sonny could now see hovering over the square, each man would draw their weapon and shoot. The contest would not be over until one man lay dead. And the winner? Well, he got to do it again…and again…until there were no more challengers. If only Sonny could convince Barnes to try his hand at it, but he knew John Barnes would never place his own life at such risk. And Sonny knew that Barnes was aware of Sonny’s prowess with a gun. Barnes would be too sure of his own loss to attempt such.

As the man finished his speech, he turned to see the square fill up with people on the go in this small city and gestured for Sonny to see as well.

“These people enjoy a good contest, as does Senor Montoya. Do not fail them or you will surely die. But then, Mr. Barnes assures me that you are a fine fighter and thus we should have quite the test of talent this day. Good luck.”

“Luck?” Sonny asked before he realized what he was saying.

The thin man turned and smiled, “You will need it.”

He walked away and left Sonny to wait. And wait he did. Morning turned into afternoon without anything occurring. No food was brought to him, nor was he given drink. The people ignored him for the most part as they passed. Occasional looks and smirks were directed towards him, but no one confronted him directly. It was not until late afternoon that a man came to speak with him, and this man was Barnes.

“Well, my boy…it looks to be that time. Are you ready?”

Sonny saw the superior look on Barnes’ face and wanted to smash it with his fist. But he could barely reach while chained. And the various guards around the compound would have something to say in reaction. Instead he remained quiet and did not even acknowledge Barnes.

“You may ignore me all you like, Sonny. But that does not change what is ahead of you. You may choose not to fire your weapon, but Beast will surely kill you. Your only hope is to defend yourself. That is, if you wish to live. Perhaps you do not. If so, this will be quite the disappointment.”

Finally Sonny turned to face his nemesis, “You had best enjoy yerself, Barnes. I’ll fight today. But only so’s I can live long enough to kill you!”

Barnes allowed a hearty guffaw to answer Sonny’s threat. “All in good time, my boy. All in good time.”

He turned and moved towards the thin man who had appeared with a box. Barnes took it and walked back towards Sonny. He made gesture with his hand for the wispy man to unchain Sonny, but only the right arm was unshackled. His left remained fixed to the fountain, allowing him limited movement. And if that was detrimental to Sonny’s task, the next cruel joke was applied by Barnes.

He opened the box to reveal a revolver and pulling it from its resting place, held it out for Sonny to take. “To make things even more interesting, and perhaps to save some very good people their lives, I think it best to allow you just the one shot. What say you to that?”

His gleeful look was disgusting, but Sonny only nodded and received the gun offered. He checked the weapon for flaws and to ensure it was loaded as promised. Only one shot and if it failed, he would surely be dead soon after.

“Now…” Barnes began to walk away. “…Shall we begin?”

Sonny felt his legs under him. Weak but enough to provide support for the moment. He tucked the gun into the front of his pants as he moved to the side of the fountain and awaited his man. Beast walked out soon after, larger now that he was at eye level with Sonny. He only carried the one gun, but Sonny was sure it was fully loaded. That meant six shots to dodge if his one shot came up short. He would have to make sure that it did not come to that.

Barnes remained on the sidelines rather than walking back up to the house to watch with Montoya. But Sonny saw the old Mexican walk out his front door and take the familiar position on the porch overlooking the crowd. As he had done before, he stood and quieted the people and signaled for the contest to begin. The thin man walked to the center and said his usual words, looking at both contestants to make sure they understood. Neither nodded in return as both Sonny and Beast kept their gazes on each other.

Seconds turned into minutes and each minute seemed to take forever as they and everyone else waited for the clock to strike the hour. Sonny felt his fingers tingle slightly as they sat poised to pull and shoot and his eyes watched every movement of his opponent. Beast did not appear to have any fear, and he kept a slight smirk on his face. Sonny hoped to knock it off quickly.

Suddenly, the tick from above crashed into a chime and the moment was at hand. Sonny drew his weapon and fired with true aim as he watched his shot fly through the air almost in slow motion and landing square in Beast’s neck. To his astonishment, Beast only backed up a step when it hit. The shot fired in return had already sailed to the left as a result of being pushed back by Sonny’s blow, but there were five more soon to be on their way, as Beast did not drop.

The wound may have hurt the huge man, but it did not seem to faze him much as another shot was fired. Sonny had just enough time to duck and roll back towards the fountain for cover. The chain attached to his left arm yanked at him as it was pulled taut and he felt the pain in his shoulder. He pushed with his feet to get his back towards the fountain and quickly began thinking of what to do next.

He heard Beast shout over the crowd, “Beast cannot be killed! Come out of hiding you yellow bastard!”

Another gunshot ricochet off the stone of the fountain just over his head and Sonny felt the anger rise in him for being called yellow. But he would not fall for that trick. Instead, he waited. Three shots fired, and three left. His only hope was to draw Beast over to him. In fairly quick time, Sonny got his wish.

The crowd was now at a fever pitch as they cheered Beast on, and though Sonny could not see Barnes, he was sure that the bastard too was all smiles. He trained his ear to hear past the roar and listened for Beast’s approach. Soon enough, he heard it. The shuffle of feet grew louder and in short time, Sonny saw the gigantic man turn from beyond the fountain and face him, one hand covering the wound in his neck and the other holding a gun leveled at Sonny’s head.

“Now you die,” escaped Beast’s lips as he began pulling his finger back to shoot, but he was surprised when Sonny’s legs swiped his own from underneath him. He crashed to the ground as Sonny jumped on top of him, an errant gunshot escaping his gun and flying into the crowd.

Sonny used what strength he had left to wrap his chains of captivity around the huge man’s neck and he began to pull with all of his might, using his legs as leverage. Beast started to struggle and his arms flailed. His gun came very close to pointing directly at Sonny, but he kept his head and upper body moving as much as he could as he pulled harder and harder.

The pain in his wrist and hands reached levels he had never felt before as he wrestled with the giant man’s strength, but he would not be bested this day. Beast began to go blue in the face and his movement slowed as he grasped for air. The crowd began to boo but Sonny heard Barnes yell above them, “It is a fight to the finish. Now finish him!”

It was not clear whom Barnes meant, but he thought perhaps Barnes was secretly rooting for Sonny. He hated to do it, but he would grant the son of a bitch his wish. Finding a second wind of sorts, he increased his pull and watched as Beast finally went limp. He did not let up right away, but eventually loosened his grip on the chain and sat back breathing heavily. Beast lay silent on the ground in front of him, one eye still open and staring into nothingness. The huge man was dead, and with two bullets left in his gun. Somehow, Sonny had won.

Barnes walked to him and stood over the body, smiling. “I must hand it to you, my boy. An ingenious plan. I would not have thought of such myself, I admit.”

Sonny remained silent.

“You are now champion. How does it feel?”

There was still no response.

“You should be pleased with yourself, Sonny. You now rule the roost, so to speak. You could be a hero to these people if you choose. I doubt Senor Montoya is entirely pleased, but I told him of your talents and he must now accept that you are the one to carry on as the standard bearer for his little game. Come now…surely you must have something you wish to say.”

Sonny felt almost ill, as if he had need to purge. He hated having given Barnes what he wanted and still knew he had little avenue of escape or a method to gain his revenge. He would surely be forced to do this again and again until he died, just as Beast must have done. This would not be the way to gain what he wanted himself. He looked up to his old mentor and flashed him a cold smile.

“Yeah…I do. Fuck you, Barnes!”

It wasn’t the answer Barnes wished to hear.

To be continued...
 

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There is too much fight in Sonny just to give up and die.

But I rather suspect that by this death Sonny might have given himself the avenue he needs, the beginnings of a wedge to drive those two apart.
 

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Hmm.... Well, perhaps there is much more to this story with Sonny and Barnes that you have yet to tell. But...

Barnes seems to have thought through things pretty well.

He was clever enough to think not to give Sonny more than one bullet -- a wise precaution.

But is Barnes clever enough to apprehend a fact that he couldn't have -- wouldn't have -- thought credible enough to consider...

That Beast's gun has two shots left -- which would normally be of no consequence, across the square -- and is now lying at Sonny's feet! :D

Interesting battle scene! Hope you feel better soon, Coz!

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coz1: ...Sonny did not respond, but listened to the man thinking the whole time what insanity must run heavy here...

indeed ! ! ! :rolleyes:

awesome update, coz1 ! !
:cool:

coz1: ...I've developed bronchitis...

that is nasty! ! get well, and soon! !
 

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With the Beast's gun right there near Sonny, Barnes is living on borrowed time....I really don't think Barnes will be breathing much longer. Sonny has killed the beast and that is something of a catharthis for him, plus it proves he has the strength to do what must be done. Ending Barnes. I think the next update will find Barnes' soul winging it's way to hell and wondering just where he went wrong....while Sonny ends up getting to walk away, free not only physically, but spiritually as well....
 

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It's all just a game, isn't it? :rolleyes:

I wonder if Montoya would think it grand... "Come see the man who killed Barnes!"

But maybe not. And if Sonny's capital goes up from such a coup, how then does he escape?

The suspense continues! :D

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Rensslaer: It's all just a game, isn't it? :rolleyes:

I wonder if Montoya would think it grand... "Come see the man who killed Barnes!"

But maybe not. And if Sonny's capital goes up from such a coup, how then does he escape?/Rensslaer


i agree. to Montoya and Barnes it is a game. :wacko:

that said, Sonny would have to kill Montoya as well as Barnes! ! after all, there are two bullets left... ;)

then, and only then, could the townspeople be free ! ! :D
 

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GhostWriter said:
that said, Sonny would have to kill Montoya as well as Barnes! ! after all, there are two bullets left... ;)
That's a good point! And he knows how to use them... :D

Clever Coz!

Renss
 

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I hate to burst everybody's bubble re: the two bullets left, but let's say Sonny uses them to kill Montoya and Barnes. What will he then do about the guards surrounding the place? ;)

Another update should appear tonight. Until then, I will allow the above to serve as fb-fb since everyone kind of keyed on that one point, more or less.

One other point, though - in terms of finding a wedge to drive in between them, that is a definite possibility.

Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

EDIT - Looks like the bronchitis has gotten worse throughout the day so I think I'll just get some rest tonight. Perhaps tomorrow. :(
 
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Well, since it seems so many of you are clamoring for an update ( ;) ), look for it hopefully this evening as the bronchitis has finally decided to back down. I will say the tête-à-tête has been a battle royal, but I am pleased to say I have been the victor...thus far.

It has come, however, at the expense of Mr. R.J. Reynolds and I am not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing at the moment. I do so love my little cancer sticks. But then, I happen to enjoy a full wallet and being able to breathe without issue, so...que sera, sera. We'll see how long that lasts. :rolleyes:

EDIT - Well, it's not much, but it's all I could get out tonight. Still not quite finished with the illness, and trying to write is just not in the cards, I am afraid. Hopefully in the morning I can finish it. But this scene is part one. Hopefully enough for now, especially as I promised it earlier. (I should know better by now. ;) )
 
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Chapter IX (cont.)

* * *​

Sonny tried to lift his head but the pain in his neck has so severe that he allowed it to drop back to the dirt floor with a thud. He spit the dust and grime from his mouth and contemplated how he had found himself so far down. One second, just a hair’s breath away from finally destroying John Barnes, and then…

…Only two shots left. One for Barnes and then one…for himself? No. He was not going to kill himself. He had thought about it, to be sure. But he knew that he could not. He hated himself and everything that had happened since that day at the farm. But he could not do that. So then…who? There were too many. He had gone for the gun, but it was only a matter of seconds before others were on top of him. Barnes was severe in his anger. He had not liked the response, nor had he cared for Montoya’s.

Beast had been Montoya’s man. Sonny had gathered that much during those moments of anguish as he lay on the ground, desperately trying to will away the pain of the beating he had received. It seemed that Barnes had talked a great deal of Sonny during his recent stay and had promised that Sonny could best any man Montoya threw at him. For his part, Montoya did not believe it. When it finally happened, he was shocked, to say the least. Furious was more like it.

Between Sonny’s impertinence and Montoya’s scold, Barnes could only find satisfaction in furthering Sonny’s torture. And now Sonny found himself in a dank and odorous basement, blinded by the darkness and two swollen eyes, unable to move more than a few inches at a time.

But somehow an angel had been delivered unto him and he found himself almost thanking God above for such favor. A cool hand brushed away his lengthy hair and wiped away the dirt from his face. He felt his body being rolled over and pulled towards the wall. Lifted so that his back was against it, he strained to see this kind soul and then almost burst into tears as he finally saw the face…

Pete.

“You are in pain.”

Yes, that was true…in so many ways. Pain to know that he had made this entire situation so. Pained to think of where Gus may be…if at all. In pain to think that he may never escape this hell that was his life. And the pain of his loss, his many losses…that word was too much and not enough all at the same time.

“Yes…” That was all he could answer.

“You eat.”

Pete had always been far too kind for what he had gone through. Never had any other man seen such misery and yet remained so calm in the face of it. And here he was, yet again trying to do for others, even though he himself was just as much prisoner.

“What is it?” Sonny spit the heavy gruel from his lips when the taste did not match what he had hoped.

“Food…what else?” In the darkness, Sonny could not see the man’s face, but his voice spoke of acceptance. Not hope, but awareness and understanding.

Sonny tried to speak again, but Pete brushed his speech away with a “pish” and continued trying to feed him the horrible concoction. His head throbbed from his beating and his body was no less angry at its situation. Every inch of his being rebelled at being moved and bothered, but he was grateful nonetheless, for here was Pete, and alive.

“How?” Sonny tried to get the answers.

For Pete’s part, he was amiable enough still. “My lot,” he answered with ease. And somehow, damn him for being so; he was that very thing…at ease with himself and his life. Or perhaps not at ease…but willing to see it through. It was enough to make Sonny angry on a normal day, but now, in his misery and desire to not yet die, he understood it…finally. Pete knew what and who he was, and why…why he was. This brought him comfort, even on the coldest day. And today was the coldest of them all.

To drive the point home, Sonny finally asked, “Gus?”

The answer he received marked it for the record books…

“Dead.”

To be continued...
 
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Pete accepts Sonny for who and what he is....Not really a surprise really, but somehow it is to Sonny. Which is NOT a surprise. Sonny has been so wrapped up in himself for so long that I think he forgets that he has his own 'posse' that follows him wherever he goes, regardless of what he does. This is again another part of Sonny finally coming out of his 'funk', which isn't really the word I would prefer to use....He is realizing that even though he will change who and what he is, Pete will still be there for him.

It is a revelation that will enable Sonny to finish his final task for his redemption. No matter what he does, Pete will be there for him. A friend like that is extremely rare and something I think Sonny is now really beginning to treasure.
 

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Of course...

Always a much more likely outcome than the one we'd expected, but still we had hoped!

But he's finally back with perhaps the only friend he has left in the world.

I wonder if Pete will finally be the one friend who doesn't die, as Sonny sees it, because of Sonny's actions or presence. Perhaps Pete will be the one who beaks the curse and through his surviving allows Sonny to become free from the cycle of violence.

Very good, Coz! Glad you're feeling a little better... hope it continues!

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Montoya appears to be a bad loser.

So he now has found out what he was in search for, to a great extent. He has found Barnes, Hollis (and killed him, of course), Pete, and learnt of Gus' fate.

It occurs to me that Pete is an angel in more way than one. I mean, obviously he is almost a sort of guardian angel, particularly here when he is helping Sonny with the most basic necessities. He is also a vision in many respects, a vision that until now perhaps Sonny has only half-believed, if not scorned entirely, and a different way of living, of a different approach to live. 'Angel' as well is derived from the Greek word 'angelos' which means 'messenger' - and here Pete is also a messenger. In many respects he has always been a messenger, trying to tell and demonstrate to Sonny something that he has been unable to hear. Perhaps now, in this place, Sonny is finally able to listen.
 

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Fb-fb:

Amric - True, Pete will forever be a friend. And his acceptance of Sonny will surely affect his eventual outcome. Good observation.

Renss - Yes, I couldn't have it end right there. Just a bit more action ahead. ;) As for Pete dying or not...stay tuned.

stnylan - Pete as angel is exactly what I was going for. I admit, I did not realize I spelled it out so literally in this post until I re-read it. But it fit and is the very thing he has always represented. And I did not know of the translation from Greek, but that too is his duty - to preach to Sonny that there is another way. He's done most of it already. What's left now is to show him the way - a guide, if you will.


The second half is now complete and follows directly. I considered leaving it open ended for a cliffhanger effect, but decided it really served no purpose at this point. Hopefully the shock will take effect in the post as it is read without need of trickery, allowing the resolution to push on through to the final post of the chapter.

Thanks for reading and all of your comments! :)
 

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Chapter IX (cont.)

* * *​

When Sonny opened his eyes, he hoped that he might be back in that small Mexican town, looking past the mission and wishing Juanita would come with another drink. But she was long gone now. Instead, he saw Pete messing around at the other end of the room.

There was a small light from a window above that allowed him to see. And the swelling around his eyes had gone down enough that he might make out the figure in front of him. Pete did not move with any speed, as it seemed that he too had seen the heavy-handed tactics used in this place. But he surely looked better than Sonny looked, or felt, at that moment. Sonny moved his legs and felt them to be strong enough, but his arms, especially his left, were sore.

He started an attempt to stand, but Pete quickly moved over and stopped him, “Do not tax yourself, my friend. You have seen the worst of it for now, but not all I am afraid.”

Sonny wasn’t quite sure what Pete meant, but he understood the first part. He recalled the beating far more clearly now and saw in his memory the evil grin in the eyes of the offenders. They had enjoyed it.

Pete moved away and then walked back with a bowl of something, perhaps more of the nasty gruel he had been fed before.

“How long have I…”

“It has been two days, Sonny.” Pete gently lifted a wooden spoon from the bowl and brought it carefully to Sonny’s lips. “Take this in. You will need strength.”

Sonny tasted the food and it was just as bad as his memory recalled. But he ate and did admit; he began to feel somewhat better. He and Pete remained quiet for a time as both ate. When they were finished, Pete walked towards a set of stairs and placed the bowl on the bottom step.

As he returned once more to Sonny’s side, Pete sat and Sonny turned his head with some trouble to look at his friend. “How…how did you end up here?”

“Does it matter?” Pete’s return question was said with some sadness, but he remained calm and resigned.

“Yeah…I need to know what the hell’s goin’ on. How did Gus die?”

Pete lowered his head and almost whispered the words, “The large one. He killed him.”

“In a fight?”

Pete nodded his head a few times and turned to look at the light coming from the window above. “He had hoped to trade his life for mine, I am afraid.”

Of course. Gus…always trying to help. Looking out for his friends. One would not have expected it of him if they did not know him. But Sonny had spent enough time to see his loyalty. And that loyalty had led him here to be killed as some plaything. From revenge to death with no glory in between…that was a lesson Sonny desperately needed to learn.

“So why did ya end up down here?” Sonny made movement with his arm to try and rest it on Pete’s shoulder but he had to admit defeat and let it fall back to the floor.

“I was…made to watch. And then when he died…I suppose Mr. Barnes have no more use for me.”

“He had a use, alright.” Sonny was sure he knew what, too. As a lure to get Sonny here. And it worked. “So now what?”

“That is just it, Sonny…” Pete allowed his speech to trail off as he thought about his next words. Sonny could sense the fear in him and did not prompt him to speak until Pete was ready. Finally the Russian said it, “We are to fight.”

“What?!?” The words seemed foreign all of the sudden, as if Pete were speaking his mother tongue.

“It is exactly as I say,” Pete responded with little hesitation.

“Ya mean Barnes wants you and me to go at it?”

“Da.”

Sonny shifted his weight, and even though it hurt, he pushed through the pain. “Well I won’t do it!”

“Then we both die.”

“We both gonna die anyways, Pete! Barnes’ll see to that!”

“Maybe…if he not made to release us.”

Sonny looked into Pete’s face and questioned. What was his friend saying?

“Sonny…I will not shoot at you. I cannot. You have been too good a friend to Pete.”

“What is this?” Sonny started to see where Pete was going and did not like the sound of it.

“You must kill me, my friend. And then you must kill the rest and escape with your life.”

With a strength Sonny did not realize he possessed at that moment, he stood in shock and bolted across the dank room.

“Hell no, Pete! No way!”

Pete stood and crossed as quickly, placing a hand on Sonny’s back. “You must. It is your only hope.”

“But…what about you?” Sonny could feel the tears that he had not shed in many years welling up in his eyes.

“Sonny…” Pete had a peaceful look on his face. “I have lived my life as much as I will ever do so. My family has gone and I can think of nothing further I could wish for than to be with my beloved Anouska once more. You…you are young still and have a life ahead of you. I know this. I wish for this. You must do this and be rid of this life forever after. This I can give to you, my friend. This is the gift I can give in return for you saving my life those years ago.”

It was all too much for Sonny to contemplate. How could he possibly raise a weapon against this incredible man next to him? He knew he could not. Even as a favor to Pete, he could not do it. He began to think of how it might happen. Barnes would surely allow him the one shot, yet again. But Pete might have a fully loaded revolver. Seven shots in total, and if he could get to another weapon…

“Look here, Pete…it ain’t gonna go down like you say. I can’t kill ya. Don’t ask that of me.”

Pete heard the plea and understood. “Then how?”

Sonny allowed his friend to help him back to the wall to sit. As they began to discuss what would occur, the sense of escape and freedom became more and more of a possibility. For once, Sonny would try and move forward with someone else’s well being in his mind. All that remained was mustering the strength to do what he had to do. He would not enjoy it as he assumed he would. But he would see this through and he would see Pete delivered to safety. If he owed his friend anything, it was that…his life. Too many others had died for Sonny’s mistakes. This one would live.

To be continued...
 

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Quite a resolution there at the end. This one will live. I wonder if Sonny will attempt to sacrifice himself in the coming fracas, to save Pete.

But there is a part of me that will be very surprised if Pete survives whatever happens next, regardless if what Sonny promises himself.
 

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coz1: ...Pete heard the plea and understood. “Then how?”

one shot. Montoya. ;)

masterpiece! !
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