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Glad to know that Director went safely through this mess :) (he has posted about this in the general AAR Forum, in case anyone wonders). Will this tale survive this disaster too? :eek: I hope so :rolleyes: .
 

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Sometimes you just gotta write...

Thank you all for your good wishes. We escaped with no damage other than a temporary power outage, numerous smashed buildings on the sea-level causeway and a battleship that now lists to one side(!). I encourage you to donate to any charity you find worthy, hold all your elected officials responsible - YOUR life could be at stake in the next screwup - and pray for the people and unique city of New Orleans.


I realize this 'monsterpiece' is now two years old and nowhere near finished, for which I (once again) apologize. Strange that I could write 3 AARs in little more than one year but need two for this one. I think the Gazette (and more than a bit of burnout) took my attention away, but I'm tired of pussyfooting around, friends and I intend to drive this one forward to its conclusion.


A warning, however. I've been in some pain the last couple of days (going to the doc tomorrow, I think) and that - and the necessary direction the story has to take - have tainted these next episodes with the Grand Guignol.

Verging on adult in fact, so be warned... some of this may be disturbing.

coz1 can vouch that I had these scenes planned out before Hurricane Katrina and the debacle in New Orleans. I don't think it is proper to use misery for personal gain, and would not do so. As I say I had all this laid out (even to the train and Rex) before Katrina ever happened. If that gives a little extra frisson of horror to this scene, then... so be it.


Okay, you've been warned. Here we go.
 

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There was no sensation of time passing, only moving dots that grew into three men on horses trotting up the dusty lane that wound its way to the corral and the ruined ranch house beyond.

As they came into shouting distance they slowed, stopping just far enough away for a conversational tone of voice to carry. Joe tipped his hat back on his head with one hand and said nothing. They dismounted, slapped the horses on the rump to scatter them and turned to face the lone figure barring the way to the corral.

“Move aside,” Buran said in a commanding tone. “I am come for what is mine!”

Joe said nothing, hands resting lightly on his wide leather belt.

One of the men drew an antique pistol – not a revolver from the American West but something much older, frilled with ornate silver work and bulging with flintlock and firing pan. Buran waved him down, disgustedly. “Our friend here has ensured that your firearm will not work. Idiot! I told you that was why we had to ride the horses!” Taking the pistol from the other man he snapped the trigger fruitlessly and tossed it into the grass.

The three men spread out, pulling short wooden wands from holsters where pistols would ordinarily have been. “One last chance to step aside!” Buran shouted, but Joe did not move.

Together they raised their wands, and the battle began.


Buran and the man on his right began sketching glowing sigils in the air; the man on the left drew lines of force across their front as a defensive wall. Buran’s strokes defined letters that flowed and ran, words whipping round in an azure cyclone interspersed with crackling lightning-bolts that etched circuitry in the whirlpool. His partner’s effort was a sickly smouldering ball of greasy orange smoke, writhing with reptilian scales. From the center grew a single lidless eye and a gaping lipless mouth. Together, they drew their wands back and flicked them forward; the worms rode the tip of an invisible line and cracked like a bullwhip as they were released toward Joe.

His hands blurred as the worms shot forward at supersonic speed, hips twisting and feet stepping precisely so. From each hand a silver dollar arced up, metal exploding in vapor as the coin intersected an eye-searing ball of fire. There was a sound on the verge of hearing, a sound like a sizzling sigh, and coins and worms were gone.

The shock rippled back down the invisible lines of force and drove both attackers to their knees. Pale but determined, the third man whipped his wand up like a fencing master as Joe released a blast of green light from the ring on his left hand. Thunder rolled and the air stank of ozone; the thick green shaft of light rolled out again, again, again and the third man was driven back from his smouldering defensive lines, wand flaming in his hand.

“You forget,” Joe said. “You forget where you are and what I am. You forget the priveleges I enjoy here. You caught me off guard once and again, Buran, but not this time. You were a fool to challenge me.”

He raised his right hand, the blue stone inset in that ring blazing up like a tiny sun as power concentrated in it. The fingers clenched, the hand came forward… and a hissing, whining ‘crack!’ echoed off the rocks as the metal bolt hit supersonic speed and smashed into his shoulder.
 

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“I can’t show you visuals,” Kevin was saying to his mother and father. Like Hitchcock, they were stretched out on the comfortable couches, wired and prepped for VR but the software not yet engaged. “The VR system depends on having a human brain interpret the data feed – to make up the background detail, you could say.” He tilted his head to Hitchcock. “But I can say that it is probably an open area with some scattered cover, and I see five signal traces so that would be Joe, Buran and three of Buran’s merry men. That…” He raised a hand, bending forward to look at the monitor.

“Hitch, something just happened to Joe’s signal.”

Hitchcock pulled down the complicated mask and settled himself. “Send me in, Kevin. Try to pick a place that’s close to Joe and behind some cover.”


The first thing he noticed was the faint, hot breeze and the feel of a rock under his left hand. He opened his eyes, blinking in the cloudless brilliance of the day. He knelt behind an automobile-sized pile of boulders and scree. A booted foot and dark-clad leg was just visible; whomever it belonged to must be propped up against the other side of the pile.

He peeked around the pile, careful not to dislodge any of the rubble. He could see the back of a man standing over the prone figure; since the standing man was not Joe, that must be Joe on the ground.

“Did you think I would ‘fight fair’?” the man asked. “I hid a man over there, and your silly rule against gunpowder means nothing to an electric rail-gun. Does it hurt? Very well, and so it should. I will go free my pilots and you had best not interfere.” He strode away.

“Buran!” It was Joe’s voice, but strained and weak. “The shackles are booby-trapped. If you try to break them, those men die.”

Buran swung back but Hitchcock had already withdrawn behind cover. “Those men took an oath of service to their country,” he said grimly. “If I cannot free them I will… persuade… you to free them. Perhaps they suffer, or die.” His voice rose in its tension Hitchcock heard a thin note of madness. “If I do not free them, my life’s work will die! I will die!”

His boots crunched away over the gravel. Distantly Hitchcock heard many men crying out in an Asian language – certainly Chinese – and deeper voices riding over them, silencing them. He eased around the rocks, noting that the men who were close enough to see him were facing the corral and the men in the corral were focused on their rescuers.

It might be the only chance he got. He duck-walked around the corner, grabbed Joe’s legs and pulled him as quietly and rapidly as possible into cover. Despite the bleeding hole in his right shoulder, Joe made no sound until they were safe behind the rock pile.

“Thanks,” he whispered. “But you shouldn’t have come.”

“Oh yes, right you are about that and I’ve no doubt,” Hitchcock groused. Then in a more normal voice, “Can you walk if you lean on me? Or can you hang on with one arm while I carry you?”

“I can walk,” Joe said. “At least I think so. No-one’s ever studied the effects of virtual steel bolts on massively-interlinked multi-processors.”

Hitchcock supposed that was a joke… or Joe was raving. Either way, the important thing was to get under better cover, so he helped Joe to his feet, draped the uninjured left arm over his shoulders and started off.

“There’s a lot of scrambled code,” Joe muttered. “I’m having to rewrite and re-integrate libraries that de-interpolated with…”

“What the hell does that mean?”

“My concentration is off and I’m unco-ordinated. But the wound is healing. They got all my magical props, though. You shouldn’t have come.”

“A real man never deserts a friend. Never. Even an imaginary friend, I suppose… So what happened? I thought you had all this figured out!”

“I keep telling you I don’t have… creativity. I can search for solutions that have already been found, but I have to set protocols to disregard low-probablity outcomes.”

“You were surprised.”

“There was a fourth man and he had some kind of battery-powered rail-gun. I thought the ban on gunpowder was enough.”

“You didn’t ban electricity too?”

“Hitch… your brain and mine both run on electricity.”

”Neither of us seem to be using our brain at the moment! …Um. Yeah. I suppose that would be inconvenient, eh. Let’s stop here for a moment.”


Far off, they heard an officer snap an order – no mistaking that tone of voice, even in Chinese – followed by the ringing of a hammer on metal, and a blood-curdling scream. Joe twitched. “I booby-trapped the shackle. Buran’s trying to break it, and he just killed a man. And they’re letting him do it!”

Hitch eased up a refrigerator-sized boulder and peeped over the top. “Yes, there’s one man down on the ground. Buran has some kind of thing that looks like an arc-welder.”

“I can’t let him have them, Hitch!” Joes voice was stronger already, if a trifle desperate. “I don’t want to kill them, I just want him to go away!”

“Well, he won’t. Can you trigger that booby-trap from here and kill them all?”

Joe shook his head. “Another thing I didn’t think of.”

Hitchcock dropped his head below the rock. “They just noticed you’re gone and they’re preparing something.”

“Probably a seeker spell.”

“Whatever it is, we either need to run or fight. Can you run?”

“If I do, they’ll break the shackles for certain. Get out now, while you can. You’re in danger!”

“Oh, no doubt of that. I won’t leave you here, that’s for certain; we never leave the wounded. Can you fight?”

“Not yet… maybe in a few minutes.”

“Let’s hope we have the time, then.” Hitchcock peeked up above the rock. “There’s a dust storm coming… a big one, and coming fast… that’s funny. It’s coming in a straight line.”

Joe painfully pushed himelf upright, careful to keep his injured side away from the rock. “Better not get blood on the rock,” Hitchcock warned. Joe looked at his shirt, soaked on the right side with fast-drying gore. “No worries,” he said. “They can track us in other ways. Blood won’t matter.”

He clambered awkwardly onto a low rock and peeped over the edge. “Ah, no.”

Hitch looked at him sourly. “Perhaps some other part of your perfect plan has come unstuck?”

“I think we’d better go down, Hitch. I think that’s Frank.”
 

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Buran had concentrated his will and power to an incandescent point of blazing fury, slipped the goggles over his eyes and brought it down slowly. He had fumbled the approach the first time and a man lay crumpled on the ground as proof, but the rest of the pilots stood stiffly and silently at attention. Now he eased the blazing point around the metal staple that held their chains to the rock, teasing at the boundaries of the spell, probing for patterns. Occasionally one man or another would twitch as a shock played across their nerves, but discipline held them firm.

One of his men shouted in alarm, and he quenched the scintillant arc before pushing the goggles up and looking around. One was pointing at the rock where the enemy had lain. A blood-stain marked the spot, but there was no sign of the body. He opened his mouth to berate the stupid inobservant fool, but another shout spun him around. The other guard was pointing down the lane at a boiling plume of dust, a cyclone that sprang up from the ground instead of dropping down to it.

His hand reached reflexively for his wand as figures emerged from the dust cloud, and when he saw what they were doing he stood frozen in shock.


Over the prairie came a mob of men, as precisely disciplined as a drill team but in furious motion. No real men could have moved so fast; the effect was like watching a video on fast-forward. First came a row with shovels, scooping and grading. Behind them were dimly-glimpsed wheelbarrows – a pickax? – and behind that, baulks of wood and gleaming rods of metal, the whole slamming down as fast as men could run forward with another rail.

As the procession grew nearer the men faded into ghostly half-presence, the dust thinned and the shining twin rails solidified. In moments they were surrounded by a crew of ghosts, mouths stretched open in mirthless grins, eyes sewn shut, tools slung over withered shoulders. By some trick of perspective he could see a tiny, tiny engine laboring at the far end of the tracks, so far away it surely should be over the horizon but somehow was not – it was accelerating now, growing larger as it came. There was a sound now like the panting of a great beast, a growling rumbling roar topped by a screaming whistle that grew louder… louder…

The locomotive towered now over their heads, rods pumping and wheels flashing. It both roared by and came to a stop without ever braking, its long black length cased in streamlining and its black plume of smoke shot though with escaping steam. The engineer was barely visible but the fireman straightened from his work, waving a skeletal hand to skull’s brow, unhinged jaw dangling in the joyous scream of a fleshless grin. Buran forced his eyes away, refused to let them rest on the macabre spectacle of ghostly workmen, focused instead on the gleaming blackness of the tender and on to the cars behind.

The first car was paneled in rich dark wood, picked out in brasswork and gilt paint, windows funereally dark and blank as eye sockets. The second car was a flatbed, surmounted by a complex arrangement of vertical pipes and a small boiler at the far end. From the third car came a swarm of gaily clad corpses, bright colors setting off the deathly pallor of their complexions and the raccoon-like bruises around the eyes, blackened tongues lolling over shriveled lips.

As one, the ghastly throng turned. One figure strutted down the flatcar and seated itself at the colossal organ, others took their places at bass and drums and guitars. All sound stopped – Buran found himself holding his breath – and the figure at the organ shouted, “Thank you ladies and gentlemen! And welcome now, the King of Carnival, the man-made Rex of the virtual and actual, the Lord of Light and the Dark Spaces of your Secret Desires! All hail His Excellency… Frankenstein!”

From the organ came an old, familiar bass pulse – da da da da, da da-da daaaah, da-da-da daah-da! The drums and guitars kicked in, the bass picked up the beat and hidden speakers pulsed to Edgar Winter’s ‘Frankenstein’, organ screaming now into wailing synthesizer licks. The crowd broke into a giddy joyless celebration, a madcap capering with deadness in their eyes, mouths stretched in tetnic, molar-baring grins, hands raised over their heads in salutation. From the platform at the end of the first car a gigantic figure stepped into view, crowned in a fountain of rhinestones, garbed in priceless furs dyed a tacky purple, green and gold, strands of beads in one hand and a giant golden go-cup in the other.

It was Frankenstein, no doubt – huge, greenish of skin with lank black hair and thin black lips pulled back over perfect white teeth, flesh seamed with sutures and eyes as shiny, black and dead as opals. He threw his arms wide, embracing the crowd of dancing dead, and they spoke for the first time, roaring their approval and abasement, ghosts and zombies all now capering to the driving beat.

Buran looked around himself in horror. Nothing he could conceive of could muster this much sheer, raw power, much less throw it all away on gaudy spectacle and pointless, empty show.

What, he wondered, is this thing! What could it possibly want!
 

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Now you've done it D :mad:

I have this afliction.. if a book gets really tense and very good, or that i know that something thrilling or suspense will happen I put it down.... you almost made me do that to this :D

It is a tribute to your excellent work, but dammit its annoying :p last it happened it was a song for arbonne that i still haven't picked up again :D

V
 

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That... was great. Frank is back with a vengeance. I want MORE NOW!!! If the rest is equally good (I have no doubt it will be) your readers will be perfectly willing to read, regardless of adult content.

Hopefull the visit to the doctor goes smoothly.
 

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You threw me dizzy with a few zigzags there. After the first chapter I smugly rejoiced in Joe's "victory" only to see it was not so. As for Frank, yes he has arrived, but for what purpose? He could be literally insane, a complete wildcard.

My bet is it has to be Hitchcock who somehow will have the resourcefulness and courage to do what has to be done -- whatever that is.

Director, thanks for getting this going again. Quite honestly I didn't see this part as especially dark, so I don't know what you were concerned about in your opening comments before these latest chapters. The Romanian parts during the 1400s were far darker IMHO.
 

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Every time I think I have this figured out you throw another joker into this deck of wild cards you call a story...Gotta love Joe and Hitch...Then Frank showing up the way he does...dancing zombies and dead people? That's....macabre at it's best. Excellent work, Director!
 

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Excellent way to bring Frank back into the picture and a wonderful description of the train. The entire macabra picture was painted with darkness, but it is precisely what is called for. And not a moment too soon. ;)

Hope you get to feeling better, by the by.
 

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Wow - thank you all. Talk about having a reason to write more!

I was concerned that people would think I had made up the scene with Frank as a way of mocking the dead and homeless of the Mardi Gras-loving Gulf Coast and I simply wanted to explain ahead of time that such was not so.


Valdemar - I'm glad to hear from you my friend! I hope you're doing well. And whatever you do don't close your eyes...

cthulhu - I hear and will obey!

J. Passepartout - if not now then shortly; it seems I have to be depressed to write and I have plenty of fuel now.

To be... pardon me... frank, I thought that section showed a bit of the old fire. It came out in one smooth ribbon and needed minimal editing. Something I didn't notice until I posted it is that the viewpoint character changes with each section, and I'm pleased with that.

jwolf - I wouldn't say that Frank is insane exactly, just uninhibited pure ego that wants instant gratification regardless of what it costs you.

Oh yes, Frank is up to something...

No-one else seems to have found the images as disturbing as I did, which is all well and good. I didn't shape those posts to be offensive, I wrote them because this is where the story has to go. So if my readers aren't offended I'll just put a fresh virtual page in the ole machine and type on.

Hitchcock has already entered play... and the battle goes to whomever can committ the last man of the last reserve.

Amric - Hi! Hope you're doing well; I heard about your travails with the dreaded DMV.

Twisted? Me? Why thank you! What a wonderful compliment!

Dancing zombies, ghosts and monsters in Carnival drag isn't THAT different from Mardi-Gras-as-usual :D but I admit I found a lot of satisfaction in that post.

coz1 - thank you for the kind words and good wishes. I have a stitch in my side that, worst case, could be appendecitis. So I plan to get myself looked at promptly. Man, it feels good to write again!
 

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A first thought that hit me as the train roared into the scene was 'What is Frank up to'? Great visual images with these three posts Director. Get well soon.

Joe
 

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I'm glad I held of reading this until I could be sure I had the time to read it properly. It's interesing seeing Joe's (and Frank's?) limitations become spelled out - but also Buran's. I don't think he really understands the concept of friendship.
 

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Terrific pacing, Director. Those three posts just flew by, leaving me hungering for more. :) As to the disturbing nature of the train scene, I agree with jwolf that the early scenes in Romania were more disturbing. To me, the evil regular humans can do is much more troubling than a fantastic (fantastical?) scene involving zombies and Frankenstein. Although the sewn shut eyes on the tracklayers and the dangling jaw on the train driver were touches that amplified the horror of the scene. One more thing: I don't think you have to worry about people linking that procession of the dead to the current catastrophe in New Orleans. Even with your comments before and after the scene in mind, I didn't read the scene as having anything to do or commenting on New Orleans.

Stnylan, I think you're right on the mark about Buran not knowing what friendship (or loyalty, for that matter) is. That's why Buran can calmly kill those Chinese pilots and that's why has to bring his thugs with him into the VR, whereas Joe can count on his friends (still waiting for the Lees to make their entry).

As to Frank... The train scene doesn't disturb me. Now, what Frank will DO, that disturbs me. :) I remember that great post you wrote when Frank merged with the virus and that was scary. It doesn't bode well for anyone near Frank, regardless of which side they're on, since the only side that currently matters to Frank is his own side.

I'm hoping that there will be more posts soon, and even more I'm hoping that that pain in your side turns out to be nothing serious. Take care.
 

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To be honest, I just like the others don't even understand what might be offendant in those beautiful pieces. I'm always a little annoyed with "pyrotechnical" effects in written stories (and often in films too :eek: ), but the overall result was great nonetheless.


I loved the arrival of Franck, and the thoughts of Buran. Reminded me of a passage of Simmon's "Endymion" (spelling?) where the AI consortium calculates the energy required to teleport planet Earth and is liquefied with terror thinking about who or what might have done that. The french translation of the book was quite colorful in this regard: "[les IA] calculèrent l'énergie requise et en chièrent dans leurs bottes virtuelles...". Sorry, I don't know how to translate this (quite dirty) slang in english, but I found it hilarious when I first read it in a somewhat "serious" SF book. :rofl:


And Hitch really looks like an old Grognard: reliable and grumbling. :p
I also wonder what Frank might be up to, or what the Lees might come with.


As a side note, I wouldn't have bothered your scene, even if it had been a sarcastic evocation of Katrina's tradgedy. But OTOH I've already been bashed for my bad habit of laughting at anything.
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Just like an humorist said "Yes, you can perfectly laugh about anything, the only question is: can you laugh with anyone. That might be hard." (he was facing a neonazi leader).


Best wishes Director. Always glad to read you.
 
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Storey - I see you know mw too well. :p

I am much better. I think now that the pain in my side may have been a pulled muscle; how, I don't know. As you get older you forget...

stnylan - Buran may have made the mistake of underestimating his opponent. Or perhaps he just doesn't understand what's going on - hard to blame him for that!

Stuyvesant - more? Well, OK. More will be forthcoming shortly.

People who don't see other people as 'real' or 'human' find it easier to commit atrocities. Buran looks on all of this as a lab experiment, I think.

You are on-the-mark about Frank; he wants what he wants. Now.

The side is better but inhaling deeply is still painful. Coughing and sneezing require some deep thought along the lines of, "Is this trip really necessary?"

Nil-The-Frogg - Better to tell people up front than spring a surprise I thought.

I'm not familiar with Simmon's 'Endymion', so I can't help you with the quote.

Hitch as grognard - yes, you summed that one up in one word. :D


There will be an update before the weekend, and you won't want to miss it!
 

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Ah, I fear that has nothing to do with this AAR Director, but I love your new sig :D .
 

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Hum, some more thread hijacking, just to ask you an innocent question, Director. Do you have stored somewhere the original notes from Doctor Samuel Barton? :rolleyes:
 

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Nil, I assume you mean the original text of 'Building a Better Bremen'. It was lost along with the others, so I do not have that original.

The sig isn't original to me, but I heartily agree with it. :)
 
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